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 Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Wed Jul 31, 2013 4:37 am




||SUZU || ZUMIZIMU ||






{Character Name}: Suzu Zumizimu = Little Bell, Drying Water
{Character True Age}: 812 Years Old
{Character Appearance Age}: Six, however, she can change her appearance age at will.
{Character Gender}: Female
{Orientation}: Freelancer
{Race }: transcended arrancar.




Personality



•Favorite Color: Crimson red, this is because it brings back happy memories of her consuming people.

•Favorite food: Adjuchas and Shinigami... She may be an Arrancar now, but she still likes to feed on them.

•Favorite flower: Pink and red camellia blossom though the scent is light she still loves them and their beauty.

• Habits: Experimenting on people she thinks of this as fun. In her own words, "Nothing is better than when I have a living thing cut open, and its heart in my hands still beating."

•Likes: She enjoys walking in the dead of night while most other life makes itself scarce. She also has a fondness for water and enjoys swimming.

•Dislikes: She dislikes sunlight with a passion. In her Familiar days it caused her a lot of pain.

•Fears: Suzu speaks for herself, "People fear what they don't understand. As someone who seeks out knowledge, fear is only a hindrance.”

•Loyalty: She is Loyal to her research... not so much to people

•Flaws: She is reckless at times and puts her own life or those of others in danger for what she believes to be the greater good.

•Friendly: She can act friendly and likes talking to people.

•Flirt: She is a flirt, if she is drinking. Both with blood or alcohol both from a man or woman, it doesn't really matter.

•Sexuality: Bi-curious: She has not met the right person in her life and though she is a flirt she has not done *that* with anyone.

• Ethnicity: She doesn't talk about this, but it is clear she is not Japanese, no matter how mush she wishes she were.

• Occupation: Some will call her a mad scientist, but she does not see what she does the same way as them.

•Elegance: She can act elegant if there is a need for it. After all, people like to get a good feeling off someone... who may be cutting in to them later. By acting elegant she can give a good first impression

•Hates: She really hates being called a hollow. She is alright with arroncar.

•Snapping Point: It takes some button pushing.. but when she snaps ... run, just RUN.

•Confident: She has a lot of self-confidence. If something looks hopeless to her, she will try her best not to show it and overcome the hopelessness.

•Zodiac: Traditional cancer Traits .Emotional and loving. Intuitive and imaginative. Shrewd and cautious. Protective and sympathetic /On the dark side....Changeable and moody. Overemotional and touchy. Clinging and unable to let go.

• General Personality: She is outgoing and hyperactive. She loves to joke and act like a kid. She thinks there is no point stressing over small things, so she is a pretty laid back kind of girl, but can be serious if it's needed. She likes to live a care-free lifestyle. She walks the world looking to see all she can. Her curiosity gets the best of her a lot. She loves to play with people as well.






History



Life

Her mother gave her the name of Iolya-Báthory. She was born into a Hungarian noble family. Her mother was Elizabeth Báthory. Father unknown. She was not fathered by Elizabeth's husband Ferencz Nádasdy. This is sure due to the fact that he was dead at the time of conception. So the pregnancy and birth was kept secret from most. If Elizabeth had another baby so soon it would have looked bad on her. Iolya's dad was a married man that cheated on his wife with Elizabeth as well. Iolya's father was another noble but she doesn't know who. Elizabeth divested herself of her children born from Ferencz , who were sent to relatives. They don’t even know of Iolya's


berth.

Iolya was razed differently than her half-blood siblings. She was properly educated like a noble. But she was to act like a servant when people where around. She had to learn things a servant would do like cleaning and household chores. as well she had more freedom such as she could play all she wanted to and going to the village as much as she liked. as long as she did not tell people her last name.

Iolya's mother did love her a lot. She was kind and a good protective mother. But to the young servant girls she was more like a monster. Elizabeth would torture the other servant girls and even let Iolya watch and take part in some. Iolya did enjoy it but unlike her mother it was not a sexual thing for Iolya. Iolya was fascinated by the human body and she loved it when her mother let her "play" whit one of the girls. Iolya would try and see how much pain and how long she can keep a girl alive before she dies. Testing the human bodies’ resiliency. As well she had a taste for blood and was known to drink it.

The truth of the matter was both Elizabeth and Iolya were Sueki. Elizabeth was turned into a sueki by a man that was comforting her after her husband's passing. He gave her an offer of immortality in return for a night in her bed and her blood. Being fear full of death after Ferencz Nádasdy’s death she accepted the man's offer. Without knowing how to control her Sueki body yet she got pregnant with Iolya shortly after. Elizabeth told Iolya of this man once. She told Iolya." when I looked into his eye’s it was as if I lost control and could not turn him away." The history books say that Elizabeth had sex and killed these girls to bathe in their blood because she thought it would keep her young. The books don’t tell it all. This act of blood and sex did in fact keep her young. Iolya not being of age had not awaken to her Sueki lust for sex. It is uncertain if her lust for blood was from being a sueki or not.


Death.

On December 30, 1612 Count György raided the castle. He was horrified by what he found in it. One dead girl in the main room drained of blood and another alive whose body had been pierced with holes. In the dungeon they discovered several living girls, some of whose bodies had been pierced several times. Below the castle, they exhumed the bodies of some 50 girls. Most of the girls were tortured for weeks or even months. They were cut with scissors, pricked with pins, even prodded with burning irons onto short spikes in a cage hung from the ceiling to provide Bathory with a "blood shower" Iolya who was not recognize as nobility was found to have taken part in the killings. As such she was sentence to death by beheading and cremated after. She was only 12 when she died.


hollowfication:

Even as a ghost she kept torturing other souls she would come across. These dark thoughts and feelings made her turn into a hollow. Unlike most her body did not break apart and reform. But the mask started to form on her.

Lesser Familiar: she lost her mind becoming like a beast. She killed indiscriminately. souls, living people, hollows. Any things she found she would try and devour it. She would jump from Hueco Mundo to the living world a lot and never staying in the same town for more than 2 days. So not many soul reapers found her. The ones that did fell prey to her.

Gillian:
As a Gillian she spent most her time in the forest of menos eating others. Day in and day out she was different from all the other Gillian she was bigger and looks a lot more monstrous than they did.


Adjuchas:

By the 1800s she was an Adjuchas. She was a humanoid. She also gained a sense of right and wrong. She thinks she absorbed it from someone she had eaten. This is when she got into science as well. No longer acting like an animal. Instead she would study her pray and learning how it moves and what powers it had. She would try and learn how their power worked as well dissecting if needed. With hollow you must keep them alive as you dissect them but no one really cares in Hueco Mundo if someone is screaming.

ARRANCAR:


She encased herself in a cocoon like shell deep in a small cave in the forest of menos. After months of meditation and undergoing metamorphosis. the shell breaks away. She became an arrancar. She had regained her human appearance for the most part.

It was thru her experiments she was able to minimize her hollow hole and move it to her rights hand and as well make her mask tack the form of a fullfinger ring on the right hands model finger

IN year 2405 suzu murders two humans in the forest near karakura city. These humans had a small baby that not even a year old. Suzu decide to spare the child's life and raze it as her own naming the little girl Ivy.

Aug 15, 2412. Suzu was honored to meet the hollow queen Ashlei Clixx for the first time. seeing a only a small sample of her power was completely astonishing to Suzu. How easy she could put someone in a hopeless trap along with her overwhelming power.

four days later Suzu would go to the Forest of Menos and seal murmurs menos inside a steel sword infusing them with the blade itself. tacking this blade back to her lab she forced all the menos to become one effectively making the soul in side it an Adjuchas. But Suzu was not done there by utilizing her hasten chamber and using her own Reiryoku suzu forced the Adjuchas be some a arrancar. But this was no Pseudo-Arrancar O no Suzu had successfully created a full Arrancar even with out the Hogyoku being a 1-5 at birth. This is how the Hollow sword witch she named Eien akumu come to be.

On Sep 03,2412 Suzu wile in school meats a very interesting boy by the name of Zero. Interrupting gym class for the older boys she won’t as far as to try and provoke them. In the end she was able to get this boy zero to agree to show her the town.

Transcending past the Arrancar: Suzu life work has finally come to be a reality. Through her hard work and dedication she has completely removed her hole and mask. Restoring herself to a fully humanoid form. By the use of the Accursed salvation she now walks in virgin territory. A new kind of hollow if you can even call her a hollow any more. Only time will show what this being is really capable of as suzu her self does not even know.










APPEARANCE


Reiatsu Colour: A mix of purpal and black. or some time blue

Reiatsu details: its feel is more like a vizard than anything yet apparently different from them as well.

SEALED STATE

Sealed Zanpakutô:
( a sword with a double edged blade. the hand guard is a forked like emblem. the hand guard and hilt are one solid piece. her spiritual pressure determines the strength of the blade same as any other Arrancar/ Shinigami.

Zanpakutô.


Altered Zanpakutô
(Suzu has developed a way to make her Zanpakutô change not unlike shikai. the blade is like a chain sword. its does not get stronger. and at full extent is only 6 meter's long . she can control if the chain links are lose stiff the links as to make them unmoving . how ever she can only do 2 or 3 chain whip attacks before it must return to gather. but attacks done will the blade is stiff don't count. )





{Race Abilities}

[*]Flight: is capable of flying supernaturally

[*]Enhanced Cero: As a energy blast, it consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target. Suzu's being able to easily remove a city block from the face of the planet if she puts enough energy in to it.

[*]Enhanced Bala: As all Arrancar already have the ability to fire consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy Suzu also possesses this ability. But Suzu’s is the full strength of a normal cero from a 3-1. This is because all Bala are normally weaker than the user’s cero and Suzu being so strong putting this must energy out is child’s play.

[*] Broadcasted: Sight: ability to broadcast information of whatever she is currently seeing or things she experienced to other Arrancar, she does this by creating a visual broadcast, similar to a television screen, using individual Garganta portals. She uses this technique to show past events and things she has seen as well as things happening in real time.
Limits: TBD

[*]Descorrer: a technique used by Espada-level Arrancar and sometimes others, to open a Garganta between the living world and Hueco Mundo

[*] Enhanced Flesh Hierro: Suzu's Hierro is extremely durable though it appears and feels just as soft as normal skin. Suzu has developed this form of Hierro to keep its strength but unlike some other Hierro that are harden like armor hers allows for maximum mobility. The way of explaining how this Hierro works is it reacts based off of elasticity.If anything comes in contact with her body rather it physical or energy it puts a force on the Hierro. Such as the explosive force of a cero or the force of something hitting against it. The Hierro than hardens to keep its form from changing or braking. The actual strength of the Hierro is determined by her tier class and Hierro skill level.

{ key guide for Enhanced Flesh Hierro} Seeing how she is already in the Elite Class that will be the lowers baice for tire level i will also take in to a count her old skill level. Likewise I am going to use normal earthly materials as the overall strength.

Elite Class+Advanced=steel
Elite Class+Master= stainless steel
Elite Class+GM=Titanium
Master Class+Advanced=Titanium
Master Class+Master=Inconel 625
Master Class+GM=Graphene


[*]Pesquisa : An Arrancar ability to measure and locate spiritual pressure Pesquisa functions similarly to sonar, through a radiating pulse sent outwards from the user which reacts to sources of reiatsu within a certain proximity, allowing them to determine the location of any sensed individuals and granting them an indication of how powerful they actually are.

[*]Sonído : The Arrancar equivalent to a Shinigami's Shunpo. While somewhat similar to Hohō in regards to function and speed, Sonído appears to be more instinctual, seemingly requiring no previous knowledge to perform. Suzu has learned away of performing a silent Sonído. she has done this by studying the Shinigami's Shunpo and using what she learned to perfect and tweaked her own Sonído.

[*]Soul-Body Separation: This technique allows Suzu to forcibly extract a living spirit from his/her body. The soul is still attached by the Chain of Fate and can be saved but if it is broken then the soul can prevent the Encroachment so long as he/she is placed inside a soulless body or animal.

[*]Grand ray cero: Is a Cero that only Espada are capable of using. It is performed by mixing an Espada's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space, it also seems to spin like a razor upon release as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. It is stated by Ulquiorra that using a Gran Rey Cero is one of two things that are forbidden while inside Las Noches, as it is so overwhelming that it could destroy the fortress.

{Unique Abilities}

[*] Vampirism: this is her favorite ability. This ability works on ether living thing or nonliving. This is when she bites in to someone and drinks their blood/Reitsu" from some one’s body. This ability heals her. She is immune to all natural blood diseases and natural pathogens. If the other person skills however is blood related it steal does affect her. If blood is their weapon she can’t drink the blood there using.
{Side note} Healing limits: can only heal/regenerate 1 limb or ¼ of her Energy per fight by using this skill. This is limited to onetime use skill per fight.

[*]Kidō caster. With the knowledge of Kidō and how it was utilized she has opened up the world of Kidō to herself. The best way to say how she does this is Suzu has learned to manipulate her own Reiryoku in the same way that the shinigami do to perform the spell’s. This is greatly made possible by her time in the shino academy in the soul society as she would have become well-versed in the arts of Kidō. therefore making it easy for her to use even as a arrancar. As every spiritual being has reiryoku "even arrancar" any one with the knowledge and training to use it could use Kidō.



[*] Form sword: Suzu no longer needing a sword to hold her powers does not have one set sword any more, but she can from reiatsu in to a sword to use in a fight. Suzu can make this swords fire cero’s from it or slashes of energy. The sword mainly takes on the appearance of her old sword or its altered form but it is not limited to that. She can just as easily make the sword take on any number of physical forms with her imagination being its limit. But she can only have one sword at a time. Also the swords physical form does not really change its strength or power at all. The only exception to this is if she makes a chain sword and then it gets the added ability of her altered swords form listed above. In the event that she no longer wants the sword she has made it will dematerialize.

Hysterical strength: to put it simply there are three kinds of muscles. Red muscles, pink muscles, and white muscles each have their use. But through genetic modification Suzu has made it so her body only has altered pink muscles. What was the point in her doing this? Strength. By building her muscles to have a lot of small capillaries and mitochondria she has made a muscle that not only can last a long time in continual use but can put out a great amount of force. This all results in her being able to break a 3 inch seki seki stone with her physical Strength. Note is is only a explanation on how she can be so strong and yet have a small body. Her strength will and is still determined by the general skill.

[*]Highly Perceptive : Suzu has demonstrated an ability to be very detail oriented when it comes to fighting. She notices her opponent's mannerisms and discerns with ease the reasons behind those actions and the weaknesses and strengths of her opponents. She is also able to look at unfamiliar attacks and figure out the way they work just by viewing at least once.

[*]Rapid mind: This is an Ability made possible by her Highly Perceptive ability and her well skills. By speeding up her brains rate of thinking time looks to be moving slower allowing her to see incoming attacks easily and react to them without mercy. This Ability combined with her General Speed and Sonido can allow her body to move at the same speed that she thinks and by doing this she can avoid attacks easily and find openings to attack her opponent

[*]Expert Swordsmanship. Suzu does not like to use a sword. But that being said she knows how really well. This has come from a life time on training with one,

•Vast Spiritual Power: Her power is so much that even some one at a captain's level ( a 1-4) would have trouble moving in her presence if they did not focus their energy. Her reiryoku is so great it can disrupt energy attacks from enemies and make them so week that it’s not even worth trying to avoid.

•Vast Spiritual Power Energy Disruption and Movement limitations details .

3 tire classics or lower 100%
2 tire classics lower 70%
1 tire classics lower 40%
with in same tire class 20%
higher class Tier 0%

{Scientific Abilities}

Hasten chamber. The ability to make time move faster with in the area she cast it in. Hasten chamber has no effect on the weather in side of it. As weather is an External variable. This ability is not used in battle much as it is an AOE and will affect any one with in the area it is casted in the same way friend or foe. The area once casted is unmoving this to limits how far one can move and keep the Hasten chamber’s effect in battle and can prove to be quite fatal as to stay within it means to have limited area to move and dodg. The max area it can be casted is 150 meters. Smallest is 20 meters. The more energy she puts in it controls how fast time go’s for the ones inside of it. That all being said the main use of this is to speed along her experiments. Things that normally take months and months of preparation and cultivation can be

Time Gauge:
1 week to a 1 month: with little effort. 1 of her own post it rest ( By rest it means she can’t use the skill again for that number of her own post)
2 months to 4: this is abit more taxing on her 3 of her post it rest.
1 to 3 years: this is really hard on her: 7 of her post it rest.

[*] Genetic enhancement: This ability is tweaking what they are for better or worse. She will only do this for others if they are willing and they MUST accept the outcome no matter what it is. This has a side effect in the next thread they are in they will be recovering and only at 75% to25% overall strength and speed depending on how the operation go's. Side note: they will be told of the risk before the operation and full well know what may happen and may not go as they like.

Genetic enhancement and infusion experiment outcomes are determined this way. I did want a fair and unbiased way of doing this but doing so is impossible with a human medium the best thing I could come up with to determine an outcome that is not completely under my control is to ask a staff member to pick a number 1-10 both I and the other person well make 1 guess at the number. If my guess is closer I win the same goes for them. I think this will only be necessary if the experiment required a death waiver as a life would be on the line I think its best no one has full-control over it. Without a death waver nothing it really is at risk so I will pick the outcome at my own whim to not bug the staff too much with the matter.

But death... death is a possible outcome but only for extremely dangerous experiments with a death waiver signed beforehand. This counts as an experiment. The death waiver allows her to try extremely dangerous experiments mixing the ways she experiments on people. Example like the infusion experiment and genetic enhancement: disregarding the tire limitation she normally would use with infusion experiments as well as pushing the body to its absolute limits and sometime past the point of braking.
~death waiver code:
Code:


Death Waiver
By posting this I full well know my character may die as an outcome of this experiment and Suzu is in no way at fault if this happens
Your name [b]
[b] Your character name[b]
[b] Your character app [b]
[*] soul forging: this is the act of what she would call playing god. The placing or removing a soul from something or someone, she uses this in her experiment. When doing research she comes across a file on Muramasa who she sees as the father of the Ziamichi's. She has found a way to forge souls in to things as well as other people, but if they can control the spirit or not is up to them. She prefers to use this on other hollow to make them stronger. Seeing how all hollow from Gillian up are a cluster of souls it’s easier on them than other races, usable on soul reapers too. She can put a hollow inside them to make a stronger Vizard if they win the inflight after this happens. But this is not suggested because the hollow will become your inner hollow have its Unique Abilities and skill's and gain all yours too. This makes it harder to beat in a fight in the inner world. but if you win its Unique Abilities are yours as well as the normal Abilities of a Vizard, but there is a safer way she can do this. she will put a weak hollow that lives off the Reiatsu in Hueco Mundo with no skills of it own into you. this makes it be come your iner hollow just like a normal one only having the same powers as you. if you win the Vizard ability you get to make like normal.

(Vizard ability must be approved by a site official and proper things added to your app after its all said, ok'ed and done.)

She can forge souls in to things to make them in to weapons and such so they can be use in a fight. its best to only have one soul in one thing or the souls may fight.

She can give any race a Ziamichi's using this. The spirit may fight the host or not. if not it will submit to you. or than it will fight to take over the host aka "you" all of them are experiments

Soul forge: the outcome is determined in a thread in a fight in most cases with the exception of putting a soul in an empty item this is 100% success rate. but the ability that carries over in to it is not however. Empty item must be ordered from a shop. all threads with this being used must be 10 post long at lest or 10K letter count. If using to get a Ziamichi after the thread you must make a proper Ziamichi app. and use the info from the thread as how you got your Ziamichi. App must be approved by a site official as normal.

Important note !!
( the is less of a skill and more of a service. giving people a way to polymerize your characters in a way. I will make some things like hollow etc. to use as material for other people though this will cost yen).


[*] Analyze: based off of Pesquisa and must have the implant of the Reitsu Scanner before the skill can be used. She has modified her own Reitsu Scanner working with her Pesquisa ability to make a new ability to analyze things further. By Analyzing someone physical movements as well as flow and utilization of Reitsu and even biological makeup. To learn how it works and copies it.

{Conditions of use}
If in battle to copy a skill its owner must use it first. It takes 8 post to learn the skill and she can only work on learning 1 skill at a time. and after the 8 post are done there is a 4 post cool down before she can try to learn another. As well she can only recall 3 skill's in a fight. Meaning she can only use 3 skills she got from other people in one fight.

if not fighting or the person is willing only #4 post are needed to copy and #2 for cool down.

(This skill is also used in her experiments to tell what flaws someone has and to try to fix it in the pursuit of perfection.)

~sub-skill~ infusion experiment : As well she can try to sew skills she knows in to others however this is hard to do cause their body and mind don't understand the skill. This makes the body reject the skill some times. She cannot give someone a skill she copied from someone more than 3 tire steps above them. As well she can only preform a skill fusion experiment on an individual person #2 times a month "real days" and both times must be at least 1 week apart.) This counts as an experiment.


Internal stability: Suzu having full control of her body all the way down to the genetic level mixed with her will skills allows her to be immune to various things as listed.

1. Control: Suzu cannot be taken control over or have her body manipulated against her will. She can let someone think they are controlling her but in the end she can brake there hold at any time with her will power.

2. Psychic abilities: This only means psychic abilities that involve her own mind or body and has no effect on the outside world. Having a child with psychic abilities and coming across more than 2 others with this mental powers Suzu has made some thing she calls the mind mirror. If someone tries to read her mind all they will read is their own thoughts. As well if anyone tries to harm her mind by using these kinds of powers the mind mirror will reflect it back. This will not harm the user of the ability but will give them a headache






Resereccion
Resereccion Name:
(Shi no yoroi) Armor of death

Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions: {N/A} by placing her powers back in to her own body she does not need to use any release phrase/release actions she can do it by will alone. To on lookers her release looks as if blue light has covered her body. This flash of blue light will than fade away showing her release form.

Resereccion Appearance:


Resereccion Abilities:
[*]Wormholes: she can create wormholes to redirect ranged attacks, both physical and energy based, after using this skill she can’t use again for 2 of her own post.
The best way i can think to explain it is its two portals to another spot near them a max of 20 meters away from her body. The ranged attack inters the one she makes in front of herself and comes out somewhere else this skill can only be used 3 times in a fight at max. Only useable on ranged attacks. Living things cannot inter the Wormhole.

Bilocation: Suzu can break herself apart. Her energy is then divided up between the bodies. This allows her to be in multiple places at the same time. Or more so to fight multiple at the same time if needed.
{Guide for Bilocation} For each time she splits all the bodies’ power will be dropped by 2 tier steps. As well all will receive a - unless her normal tire has a +. The max number of bodies is 4.
Example: let’s say she was a 1-2 tier. If she splits in too two beings she will drop 2 tier steps and receive a - for that tier.( but if her normal tire is a + it will negate the -) the drop by 2 would make her a 1-4- making her weaker than a normal 1-4 seeing how there was no +.

Form control: Advanced off her age control Suzu has the choice to take the natural release appearance or keep the form she was in prior. This does not work with unnatural release like the Dues Ex. This ability does not add any power to her nor does it weaken her. It merely lets her look like her normal self or the release appearance and uses her powers. (Side note she will still have the blue light cover her body and break away as stated in “Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions”. Just her form will not change while doing this action.)

synesthesia: this is a curse mark that Suzu has developed witch can be considered strong or weak and can have negative or positive effects depending on its use and who it's used on. This mark can switch any two skill levels with any other two skill levels the person has on their app. the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it. If she does not dispel it the mark last throughout the thread. But it’s also limited to being casted one time per thread. Suzu also must have physical contact in order to cast it. The effect of synesthesia will where off after 5 post and the skills that have been switched well go back to normal.

{Example} if someone had a master in strength and an advanced in another skill. She can make the other skill a master and the strength go down to advanced. Why would she do this? It can completely make her opponent rethink their strategy and throw off their normal way of fighting. Seeing how they would not have that strength they normally do. Or she could use it too switch some ones pain endurance level with a lower skills level. Making the person less able to take the pain of battle.

How can it help someone? If one of her allies was completely strength based and had no speed she could switch their lesser speed skill with another one of their skills that is of a higher level. This is always risky as it will make someone stronger in one area and weaker in another. Another example is if she could switch someone’s Durability with a higher skills level. So to better defend them self.






Dues Ex

• Dues Ex Name: Luna Senka
• Dues Ex Release Phrase: Dark desires will manufest you..!
• Dues Ex Release Actions: her reiatsu will spiral up her body like a tornado
• Dues Ex Appearance:

• Dues Ex Abilities:

•Razor disk: Suzu can make her reiryoku form a saw blade like metal ring. she can control only 2 at a time using her hands or fingers to guide it. She can make 5 of the blades. A Razor disk is a max of 2foot long and a minimum of 1foot. Max spin speed of 550,000 rpms. That means it spins around more than 10,000 times each second!

•High Speed: While in this state, her speed also increases greatly.

Enhanced Bala machine gun: her ability to fire Rapid consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy with high energy concentration. susu is capable of firing 300 bala's per second.

•Rapid Cero: she can fire a normal cero without warning.

•Absorption: by placing her hands on some thing she can break it down to a Particle state and absorb it in to her body. by absorbing she makes a complete copy of its ability's and full atomic structure. This applies to NONE living things only. As well the ability's she gets in this method can only be used for reproduction in weapons not living beings. with the exception of Xeno Hollows as they are weapons. This ability well helps her in her position in the Third circle.

•Cero-body: she can fire cero's from many of her body parts.the body parts are as listed. feet, hands/fingers, elbow, knees,


Matter Manipulation: this is an advanced form of her "Form sword" Suzu can now control matter and subsequently manipulating any form of matter at will. Controlling both the shape and density of it making her able to use any number of weapons. This may include her own body. suzu can easley form matter seemingly out of nothing. But this is not true its quite sinpley the formula e=mc2. by the use of nonliving matter around her she can break it down to the potential energy that it holds and make said potential energy reform in to new matter. This new matter being a forged item of some kind. the item can be made to disappear after she is done using it.

Limitations: this cannot be used for energy or a bomb of any kind as the matter is converted to energy and back into matter instantly. So she cannot use the potential energy of the matter in any other way than reforming it to another form of matter. More complex items it will take planning for and time. So she can't just make a deeply intricate gun right off the top of her head. Basic weapons can be made at a whim such as plane swords and things. A list of the complex items she has thought up will be made. As well it takes a lot of mental ability to make a weapon right so if she is ever under any form of mental stress the item could have flaws in its forging making it easily breakable or not function right. Complex items will also have their own limitations and need staff approval before use,


High speed flight and movements: suzu has made it so her body where it can move at the top speed of 400mph a little over half the speed of sound. Moving this fast takes a lot of energy and stress on her body. This is in part due to utilizing the modern day technology like that in the Xeon Hover Car propulsion system and reengineering it for her Dues Ex. Seeing how she cannot go the full 100,000mph it can be assumed that she was not able to fully engineer it properly in to her body. But that would be wrong. Suzu has it set up to only go a max of 400mph because anything more would be far to stressful on her body and could lead to death quickly.









SKILLs


Racial Skills

Perquisa: Advanced
Sonido: Master
Cero/Bala:Advanced
Hierro: Master
Regeneration: Beginner

General Skills

• Durability: Advanced
• General Speed: Master
• Strength: Master
• Weapon Skill: Advanced


Will Skills

• Willpower/Determination: Advanced
• Mental Deduction: Master
• Pain Endurance: Advanced
• Focus: Master
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»Role Play Sample:

In the dark cold damp lab of los noches suzu was all alone with nothing but her own mine to keep her occupied. But for suzu being lost in thought was a normality. She was always thinking, all ways planning, always looking for something more. But the time for planning had past. Now there was only the experiment at hand. One that she hopes down to the very quintessence of her being would work. It was time to try and use the Accursed salvation. She had gotten all the information she currently needed from the soul society in her short time as captain. All the records on Vizard and Arrancar exparaments including the detals she could get of sosuke aizen's and past captains of 12 along with all other reports regarding hollowfication of a Shinigami and arrancarfication of a hollow.

Suzu was not one to fear her own creations but this one was far from normal. This one could change her being completely. In truth she was scared that who she was would disappear granted something else would take her place, but would it really be her? Or would it be someone else entirely? Either way she had done too much and gone too far to turn back now. She had used Gotei 13, Shadow Fall, and even the city of Karakura and its school all in order to gather data on hollows, soul reapers, humans, and especially vizards. Taking the time to learn the factors of their beings. Now it was time to apply that knowledge.

Suzu placed the small almost rune like item on the desk. Her eyes glaring at it intently. Putting her right hand over it as a small stream of her reiatsu started to flow in to the Accursed salvation. Suddenly black tentacles almost like a rose vine forming from it as the item lunged forward inserting it’s self in to her hollow hole. These black tentacles would star piercing her body throughout her arms. If someone was to see her arm they could clearly see them moving just under her skin, wriggling squirming, moving closer to the core of her being. Suzu was in an enormous amount of pain to the point that she fell to her knees in tears unable to even scream out from the paralyzing feeling.

The ring on her finger would start to lose its form becoming like liquid bone showing what it really was, the remnants of her mask.. The liquid would grow in size as it started to poor out of her eyes as well. If one did not know batter they would thing she was undergoing hollowfication. The pure white liquid would then turn black. The liquid from her eyes would flow onto her face as the rest of it covered her body. Suzu felt like she was being ripped apart from the inside. The black liquid fully covering suzu's body cutting her off from the world there by taking away most of her basic senses and intensifying the pain. The black liquid over suzu would start to harden and compress as it turned in to what seemed to be nothing more than a black stone on the lab floor.

Each moment felt like an eternity with her mind barely able to pull its attention away from the pain as it started to fade away. The stone that had been kicked around aimlessly had somehow managed to find its way in to the halls of los noches near the rooms of the Espada. Over a month had passed in the time she spent in the stone but with a loud bang it exploded releasing a purple and black vortex that would send a shock wave through the walls and crack them. After the dust and black/purple jots of energy dissipated Suzu would be lying on the floor unconscious in her child state. With no hole in her hand or ring on her finger. The experiment had worked and she has now fully removed her mask and hole at long last.



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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Wed Jul 31, 2013 4:43 am



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This is added as a extra post so that i may move her things over from her old app like her analyzed ability's as well ill be making placeing a item lest for her here so that people can see all that she has tight her.





{Experimental limitation and drawbacks}

{The addition of any element power/ability’s: }When working with elemental powers there is always a chance of losing control of it and the element becoming unpredictable. It’s at this time if Suzu is unable to take back control that the element will discharge. How it discharges is based off the element. Fire go’s boom, Electric Shock, impaling ice spikes etc. The strength of the discharge is relative to the strength of the original power holders tier. The damage suzu takes in this experiment will last 1 to 2 threads depending on the severity. Meaning in any thread she starts after the experiments is done she will be hurt. This can be countered by Healing as all damage can, but suzu can’t start healing in the same thread as the experiments meaning she must start the other threads hurt.

{Physiology altering:} when altering what someone “is” rather it be simple as enhancing what they already have or adding something completely new to their body there is all ways risk. When altering the brain the patient can become enraged. As well suzu normally gives her patient something to block pain receptors. This can result in the now enraged person not being able to feel pain and temporarily become like a juggernaut.

{Physiology based power/ability’s.} The greatest risk with this is really rejection if it’s only altering what they normally have or the power going berserk if it’s something newly added. The power goes berserk when it's successfully placed in to the body and all is said and done. But its new holder lacked control over it. A good example of this would be like if she gave a dumb person pyrokinesis. This person would not have the mental ability to control the power witch would make a blazing wield fire break out.

{Limitations:} Suzu can only perform 5 experiments per month max. The experiments will re-set back to 0 on the first of every month. As well this number only shows how many experiments she has completed. So if she was doing one last month and did not get finished tell the current month it will count as 1 for the past month and the current month.





(Item list.)

For convenience sake i have put list of my items here. it be easier than looking thru my equipment thread to see all i got.


  • Item Name: The Container 1000
    Item Type: Is it commonly available
    Used For: storage
    Item Description:Info: Need somewhere to store all your shit? Buy The Container! Why you ask? The Container is a small circular device that breaks down the atoms of any object you have, stores it inside of the device and keeps all your junk organized by showing you pictures of every object you have in your inventory. Simply press whatever object you have in The Container and it will be rematerialized. And to store items, simply point The Container at the object and it will be broken down.
    Obtained From: The Cybermin
    Notes: (Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add)



  • Item Name: : Fire Bottle x7
    Item Type: Is it commonly available
    Used For: maks a firey exploshions
    Item Description: Info: It looks just like any ol' bottle of water, but it's actually very deadly. If you were to unseal the bottle and wait five seconds, a massive explosion of fire will expand for 200 Meters. This fire can be very difficult to put out and the explosion can be damaging.
    Obtained From: The Cybermin
    Notes: (Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add)

  • Item Name: Reitsu Scanner
    Item Type: Is it commonly available
    Used For: is used in her eye to make one of her powers
    Item Description:Info: The reitsu scanner is a small implant placed inside of your eye that is the size of a gain of rice. However, it will usually give you the ability to actively gauge how much reitsu a person has. Typically, black means they either have none or it's extremely damaged; Blue means they have low reitsu, green means they have moderate, red means they have high, white or black means it is extremely high. It can also gauge how much reitsu you have by displaying these colors in your vision and referring to your body structure. It can also tell you how much damage you have taken on this body structure as well.
    Obtained From: The Cybermin
    Notes: (Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add)

  • Item Name: Light Grenades
    Item Type: commonly available
    UsedFor: Offensive Attacks', Defensive attack's
    Item Description: Info: Light Grenades use chemical reactions to produce an extremely bright flash of light and a very loud concussion blast whendeployed, stunning targets, but doing very little physical damage to them. The primary purpose of a stun grenade is to temporarily blind and deafen the enemy for one post. If the victim directly observes the flash, a still frame of what is observed by the victim will be seen for up to ten seconds, at which point their eyes will have returned to their
    unstimulated state.
    Yen Price: 3,000

  • Item Name: Stun Grenade
    Item Type: commonly available
    UsedFor: Offensive Attacks', Defensive attack's
    Item Description: Info: The stun grenade is about the size of a can of soda-pop, but packs a serious punch. After These green spheres are activated by pressing a black button on top, they analyse the spiritual signature coming from the person who throws it and releases a white cloud of smoke that can disable all types of reitsu based attack's for one post.
    Yen Price: 35,000 Yen

  • Item Name: Invisibility Cloak
    Item Type: commonly available to anyone,
    UsedFor: support itam
    Item Description: You can easily hide yourself in the cover of darkness with the invisibility cloak installed in your body. It will be put in the middle part of your stomach and you can activate it in your Cyberbrain to project a barrier that blends in with the color of your environment and even reflects the images to match without being seen. However, if you happen to take too much damage the Cloak will
    de-activate itself.
    Yen Price: 60,000

  • Item Name: Burning Grenade x2
    Item Type: commonly available to anyone
    UsedFor: Offensive Attacks', Defensive attack's
    Item Description: Info: It is a multi-purposed infantry explosives munition, and can be thrown up to 32 feet by the average person. Upon impact with a hard surface, the casing converts to liquid form, burning at around 2992 °F (1644 °C) , and causing significant damage to weapons, people and attack's alike, destroying everything near a 20 foot radius.The gel-like filler substance also escapes from the burning casing, splashing over nearby objects and causing significant damage as it burns for 4.5 seconds.
    Price: 20,000

  • Name Of Item:Fortification x2
    Item Type: Is it commonly available
    Used For: defensive
    Item Description: :A bracelet with a spike on the inside. By wearing this and pushing the spike through the wielders skin, they are given a minor hierro-like skin but less potent as the normal Hierro. An arrancar using this will boost their hierro power slightly.
    Obtained From: The Hallowed End
    Notes: (Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add)

  • Item Name: Dues Ex Implant
    Item Type: Is it commonly available
    Used For: lots of things
    Item Description Info:Allows the host of this implant to activate their Dues Ex form and surpass resserecion. This is not stronger than a Segunda Etapa and the implant itself is a oval shaped machine that is built into the skin of the user. Upon use, the machine's screen glows the colour of their reitsu and they can transform.
    Obtained From: The Hallowed End
    Notes: (Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add)

  • Item Name: blood sphere.
    Item Type: commonly available
    Used For: Supplementary
    Item Description:he blood sphere contains about 7liters of compressed blood of a special blood type Z that is universal to all aces. The blood type Z only takes on the blood traits and type of the one who was holding the sphere.

  • Item Name: Hollow presence ring
    Item Type: hollow/arrancar only
    Used For: Supplementary
    Item Description: The Hollow presence ring alters the way a hollows energy and presence feels. The ring has 3 skulls on it to control what the user wants to
    feel like. The 1 on the right being hollow the middle being soulreaper and the left a human. The ring is invisible to others ones you put it on.

  • Item: Mark of the Hollow
    pries: 80,000
    Info:A simple pill shaped item that when crushed, will release an aroma that causes Hollows of all types to converge to the area in a huge number. The stronger the user, the more likely bigger hollows will appear.

  • Name Of Item: Shiro Shugā
    Date: 10/2/2012
    Purchased:Shiro Shugā is a drug that can be used to accelerate an any person powers. It is shown to be in a form of a fine powder that is ingested by the user, simply licking a small amount causes significant effect. For 5 tiers it will boost it up to 4-1 tier, for 4 tiers it will boost it to 3-1, for 2 tiers it will boost their power to 1-3, for 1 tiers it will boost it to 0-5 at the max and for most 0 tier users it will only go up one level with enhanced skill sets. The effects can last for ten post until the user's high is worn down. After that, they cannot ingest it for another twenty post unless they risk over dosing and dying. Abusing this drug too much has also been linked to mental disorders, hallucination, weakening of the body when not using the drug and terrible relapse after becoming addicted to it.
    Price:100,000

  • Name Of Item: Sokudo Terepōto
    Date:10/2/2012
    Purchased:
    Sokudo Terepōto is a blue liquid substance contained within a small vile. When thrown on the ground, a large plum of smoke will cover a 1 mile area and will automatically transport all Kokuryuteshi members and
    it's allies to destinations of their choosing. All you have to do is think of a place you have been and you will be transported there provided there isn't some type of barrier blocking you. Before you are given the option of teleporting, you will typically be given a telepathic heads up from the Sokudo Terepoto.
    Price:30,000

  • Name Of Item: Shadow Bait
    Date: 10/2/2012
    Purchased:
    Info: Shadow Bait if a small red sphere that is the size of a tennis ball. Once it is crushed with enough force, a massive explosion of genetically altered scents and reitsu will be unleashed across a mile wide area. At that point, some of it will be released into other realms such as The Kokuryuteshi's realm, Demon World, Hueco Mundo and other crowded area's on earth. This will attract multiple Hollow's, Demon's and even some soliders or experiments from the The Kokuryuteshi itself. Though, be warned, when you use this item you will automatically be back traced to Kin and the use of this bait will be monitored.
    Price: 50,000 Yen









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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:21 am

Let's rip into it!

  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: TBA
  • Mental Deduction: TBA
  • Pain Endurance: TBA
  • Focus: TBA


Check list Notes: Powers to be described more reasonably.
Tier: Not yet.

The area for fixes

Quote :
Broadcasted: Sight: ability to broadcast information of whatever she is currently seeing or experiencing to other Arrancar

Whilst I don't have any problems with this, I do need to know if this is the Garganta broadcasting system that some arrancar have been shown to use, or a completely new one? If it's a new one, or the Garganta one, please explain how it is done or the limitations of it, say a time duration or a maximum distance.

Quote :
[*]Hasten chamber. The ability to make time move faster with in the area she cast it in. this ability is not used in battle much but for her research. To speed thing along. The more energy she puts in it controls how fast time go’s for the one in side it.

I would also like this to be changed to include what it effects within the zone. For example, complete slowing down of the character before you is classified as God Mod. Does it stop/speed up NPC's, environmental change, weather? Can she speed up the movement of other characters? You said it's not used in battle MUCH. So you will need to explain into more depth on that, Zets.

Quote :
This is the act of what she would call playing god. The placing or removing a soul from something or someone, she uses this in her experiment. When doing research she comes across a file on Muramasa who she sees as the father of the Ziamichi's. She has found a way to forge souls in to things as well as other people, but if they can control the spirit or not is up to them. She prefers to use this on other hollow to make them stronger. Seeing how all hollow from Gillian up are a cluster of souls it’s easier on them than other races, usable on soul reapers too. She can put a hollow inside them to make a stronger Vizard if they win the inflight after this happens. But this is not suggested because the hollow will become your inner hollow have its Unique Abilities and skill's and gain all yours too. This makes it harder to beat in a fight in the inner world. but if you win its Unique Abilities are yours as well as the normal Abilities of a Vizard, but there is a safer way she can do this. she will put a weak hollow that lives off the Reiatsu in Hueco Mundo with no skills of it own into you. this makes it be come your iner hollow just like a normal one only having the same powers as you. if you win the Vizard ability you get to make like normal.

This will need to have a persons permission to do so, you cannot forcibly insert it into their character against their will.

Quote :
synesthesia: this is a curse mark that Suzu has developed witch can be considered strong or weak and can have negative or positive effects depending on its use and who it's used on. This mark can switch any two skill levels with any other two skill levels the person has on their app. the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it. If she does not dispel it the mark last throughout the thread. But it’s also limited to being casted one time per thread. Suzu also must have physical contact in order to cast it. The effect of synesthesia will where off after 5 post and the skills that have been switched well go back to normal.

Is there any way to get rid of it, or is a person forced to suffer once they get hit? Can there be a way to combat it? Anyway to dispel it yourself or stop some of it's effects from reaching you? All of these things need to be addressed before actually being approved for that ability. I have a problem with this because you say you cannot dispel it without Suzu doing it herself or waiting that long. I want a way to be able to shift the effects or get rid of it.

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Enhanced Bala machine gun: her ability to fire Rapid consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy with high energy concentration.

No real problem here, just give us an approximate number of bala she can shoot off in a second. Eg, 1,000 bala shoot out every second.


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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Thu Aug 08, 2013 10:05 pm

{1} Broadcasted Sight
No it’s not anything new. It’s just the same old one. I only gave her this ability so that she can show things she knows to others of her kind.
[New wording]
[*] Broadcasted: Sight: ability to broadcast information of whatever she is currently seeing or things she experienced to other Arrancar, she does this by creating a visual broadcast, similar to a television screen, using individual Garganta portals. She uses this technique to show past events and things she has seen as well as things happening in real time.
[Limitations] well I don’t think it would have a maximum distance as it uses Gargantas. How does a 2 post use with a 5 post cool down sound? But I’d also like to ask that you let it be limitless in Casual Threads when showing past things she has seen or done only. As this would most likely only happen when she is reporting to her leaders on the things she has done/ seen. And with the back and forth it would quickly run out be for she shows them all she needs to.

{2} Hasten chamber.

[New wording]
The ability to make time move faster with in the area she cast it in. Hasten chamber has no effect on the weather in side of it. As weather is an External variable. This ability is not used in battle much as it is an AOE and will affect any one with in the area it is casted in the same way friend or foe. The area once casted is unmoving this to limits how far one can move and keep the Hasten chamber’s effect in battle and can prove to be quite fatal as to stay within it means to have limited area to move and dodg. The max area it can be casted is 150 meters. Smallest is 20 meters. The more energy she puts in it controls how fast time go’s for the ones inside of it. That all being said the main use of this is to speed along her experiments. Things that normally take months and months of preparation and cultivation can be done in what seems to be no time at all to the outside world. Valuable talents for a scientist like suzu.

I think I addressed it all. If it needs something else please tell me and I will re-try.

{3} (Playing god.) Yes as this is only forced on NPC like when suzu made her daughter. Never on other people. And is why there is an important note stating it is a service to others.
Important note
( the is less of a skill and more of a service. giving people a way to polymerize your characters in a way. I will make some things like hollow etc. to use as material for other people though this will cost yen).

{4} synesthesia:
Well as it is a spell. All spells can be over powered by energy’s that overwhelm them. And given how strong Suzu’s energy is I’d say only that of a 0-2 would even have a hope of doing this. BUT there are people that specialize in magick. These people that have a true understanding of magick would have a huge advantage over those who just try to overpower it. By knowing how to manipulate their energies effectively with spells they can make it easier to dispel it. I’d say a 1-1 could if that was the case. But in the end that is all reliant on the other person. It is more up to someone knowing how to use their own skill not the details of this ability. But without the other person using their own skill and energy practically and on their own volition the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it or its time runs out.

{5}machine gun: BTH 1,000 is a… lot. So if its ok with you I’d like to only put 300.

[New wording]
•Enhanced Bala machine gun: her ability to fire Rapid consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy with high energy concentration. susu is capable of firing 300 bala's per second.
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Fri Aug 09, 2013 7:59 am

{1} Broadcasted Sight
No it’s not anything new. It’s just the same old one. I only gave her this ability so that she can show things she knows to others of her kind.
[New wording]
[*] Broadcasted: Sight: ability to broadcast information of whatever she is currently seeing or things she experienced to other Arrancar, she does this by creating a visual broadcast, similar to a television screen, using individual Garganta portals. She uses this technique to show past events and things she has seen as well as things happening in real time.
[Limitations] well I don’t think it would have a maximum distance as it uses Gargantas. How does a 2 post use with a 5 post cool down sound? But I’d also like to ask that you let it be limitless in Casual Threads when showing past things she has seen or done only. As this would most likely only happen when she is reporting to her leaders on the things she has done/ seen. And with the back and forth it would quickly run out be for she shows them all she needs to.

I'm still thinking on this one.

{2} Hasten chamber.

[New wording]
The ability to make time move faster with in the area she cast it in. Hasten chamber has no effect on the weather in side of it. As weather is an External variable. This ability is not used in battle much as it is an AOE and will affect any one with in the area it is casted in the same way friend or foe. The area once casted is unmoving this to limits how far one can move and keep the Hasten chamber’s effect in battle and can prove to be quite fatal as to stay within it means to have limited area to move and dodg. The max area it can be casted is 150 meters. Smallest is 20 meters. The more energy she puts in it controls how fast time go’s for the ones inside of it. That all being said the main use of this is to speed along her experiments. Things that normally take months and months of preparation and cultivation can be done in what seems to be no time at all to the outside world. Valuable talents for a scientist like suzu.

I think I addressed it all. If it needs something else please tell me and I will re-try.

Uhm this seems better so I think I can approve this as long as it's limited to Experiments and not in battle.

{3} (Playing god.) Yes as this is only forced on NPC like when suzu made her daughter. Never on other people. And is why there is an important note stating it is a service to others.
Important note
( the is less of a skill and more of a service. giving people a way to polymerize your characters in a way. I will make some things like hollow etc. to use as material for other people though this will cost yen).

This seems okay now.

{4} synesthesia:
Well as it is a spell. All spells can be over powered by energy’s that overwhelm them. And given how strong Suzu’s energy is I’d say only that of a 0-2 would even have a hope of doing this. BUT there are people that specialize in magick. These people that have a true understanding of magick would have a huge advantage over those who just try to overpower it. By knowing how to manipulate their energies effectively with spells they can make it easier to dispel it. I’d say a 1-1 could if that was the case. But in the end that is all reliant on the other person. It is more up to someone knowing how to use their own skill not the details of this ability. But without the other person using their own skill and energy practically and on their own volition the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it or its time runs out.

Can you reexplain this?

{5}machine gun: BTH 1,000 is a… lot. So if its ok with you I’d like to only put 300.

[New wording]
•Enhanced Bala machine gun: her ability to fire Rapid consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy with high energy concentration. susu is capable of firing 300 bala's per second.

This is fine.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:57 am

{1}synesthesia dispelling: Well what I was trying to say is that there is no set way to dispel synesthesia other than suzu doing it herself. So anyone who would try the normal means of removing it would only be met with failure. Abilities would not really work either as it is made to not be removable by others.

But that does not mean it can’t be forcefully removed by someone. But this would need that person to use his/her own energy to overpower it and remove it. But trying to just straight out overpower it really is not enough as the spell was made to only be removable by suzu. Thus you’re not only fighting her energy she puts in to it, but the spells vary nature. For someone immensely stronger than her that would be possible on energy alone. But for the people who are well-versed in using magick. They would be used to such things and by controlling their own energy they could make it to react with the spell and remove it. But this is all defying her spell’s ability and its details. The person will need to use their own head to do this. They must rely on their own skill/mind to do it.
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Sat Aug 10, 2013 3:59 pm

That's the information I needed to know, because it made it seem like that you couldn't break the seal whatsoever, but now that you can it makes sense one last question then I can continue with my check.

Now on to my check.

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced.
  • Mental Deduction: Master.
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced.
  • Focus: Master.


Comments/Notes: Your char is usable, now for Isae, she'll have to be edited a bit because we're dealing with your creation of her, but I'm sure we'll get to a good compromise and checks, therefore Suzu is fully usable, good luck and have fun Rping.~
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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Suzu Zumizimu. [Approved, 0-4]   Wed Sep 11, 2013 5:11 pm

As part of my little clean up of of the approved applications section i will be moving this. Due to this member leaving i will be archiving this as well.
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