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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Saaishu Shudan   Sat Aug 03, 2013 3:10 pm





Name: Saaishū Shudan
Titles: Misfortunate Harbinger; The Harbinger of Misfortune
Gender: Female
Appearance Age: 16
Age: 205
Affiliation/Rank: 3rd division

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Personality:

Saaishu has a sadistic nature. She expresses her care for others through ways that cause difficulties for the ones she cares for, and yet those ways still seems to help somehow. This shows her ability to plan things with delicate precision, also demonstrating her vast intellect. Furthermore, Saaishu tends to have childish fits that would fit the demeanor of a spoiled rich kid, which makes sense, considering her past life was that of a rich kid. Saaishu is a quick thinker, showing so on several occassions, and despite her small stature and childish attitude, is quite wise, being able to give advice to her friends, although giving such advice in unconventional ways.

Saaishu teases pretty much anyone who can take it on a daily basis, spending most of her time causing misfortune. She is rather adept at causing others misfortune, tormenting others with unwanted nicknames most often. Saaishu prefers men, but is still bi-sexual, and her taste in men tends to be more about durability, a person who can take what she deals, but also enjoys the emotional relationship. Not only would she approve of men who are durable, but those who can talk her down; ones who can not only deal with the damage she dishes out, but can talk her down and convince her to stop: a person who's just as clever as her.

Likes: Men and women Spicy foods, kitties and other cute things in general, cussing

Dislikes: Weak people, both in terms of physique and emotional wellbeing. carrots, most children, sassy people, most people
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History:

During her human life, Saaishu was born into a rich family in Japan. She could have anything she ever wanted and lived a pretty happy life. During her toddler years, she often moved from house to house, due to her parents being divorced, and both being extremely wealthy. Despite all the moves, she had many friends that were just as spoiled as her, and could ask their parents to buy a house and allow them to temporarily live at the house (the house being close by to Saaishu). She had an extremely good life as a kid, with loyal friends and parents whom loved her, despite the divorce.

Towards her ascendance into her adolscent years, Saaishu became more rebellious and distant from her family but still retained a close relationship with her parents; just not as close as they used to be, which they had expected. Saaishu had eventually been able to convince her parents to allow her to stay at her aunt's place (who is also rich. Holy shit, the girl's family's ballin'.) With that, Saaishu was able to go with her friends to a common high school, which her aunt lived nearby. She had made several friends there, and had boasted superior intellect and had passively been arrogant about it, in ways where her friends wouldn't realise. Her teacher's, however, caught that, and had been amused as well.

In her 2nd year of high school, Saaishu had suddenly been kidnapped, and despite being the cliche, had been held for ransom. She had barely been kept alive for about 2 months, with her parents constantly paying the kidnappers a hefty price weekly. Eventually, her parents stopped paying, thinking that the kidnappers had already killed her, and that they had still constantly asked for money, regardless of Saaishu's well being. With that, the kidnappers killed her. And so, Saaishu, having gone through such an experience, and hadn't done anything wrong during her life, had ascended to Soul Society.

In Soul Society, Saaishu had decided to attend the academy. During her time in Soul Society, she had realised that it was a whole knew, yet interesting place. Saaishu had been adopted into a noble family, still accustomed to the rich like life. She had graduated from the Academy as one of the top students in her class, being extremely proficient with Kidō, and being extremely good with hand to hand combat. Saaishu had eventually decided to join the 3rd division, purely out of whim, as she chooses to lead her life most of the time. Currently, she's just a member of the 3rd division without holding any special rankings or titles and such(which is out of choice. She'd rather not have such a high rank, and is content with her status as a part of a noble family), but she is however known for her pranks and emotionally tortorous acts.

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Reiatsu Color: Red

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Satachi Usagi

Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
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Inner World:
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Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
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Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:

Hoho: Saaishu's Flash Steps are sublime. She can use Flash steps in odd ways, applying it to certain parts of her body. For example, a variation of Flash Step Saaishu had made was the "Flash Skip". She uses the flash step ability with one leg, as if skipping, which would allow her to maneuver in jagged steps, making her rather prominent at dodging attacks. Or, she could apply Hoho to her arms, allowing her to punch with extreme speed. Even without Flash Steps, Saaishu already has extremely fast speed, but she use hoho nearly all the time. The speed of her hoho is pretty standard, but the amount of times she can use it is incredibly high (you decide, but I most definitely want it to be much higher than the standard. MUCH higher.)

Kidō: Saaishu is also extremely proficient with Kidō, having the capability of probably having a seat in the 5th division.

Zanjutsu: Zanjutsu is one of the few things that Saaishu isn't quite good at. She knows how to properly use her sword, and is able to slice up a person, but she's just not that good with it. Heaving around a giant sword should make it more understandable. Naturally, the giant Zanpakutō reflects her massive reiryoku.

Hakuda: Hakuda is one of the many things Saaishu is good at. In fact, when combined with her ability to apply hoho to certain parts of her body, she's a master hand-to-hand combatant. okay, maybe not master, but she's pretty darn good at it, being able to preform a oni dekopin (she actually tries pretty hard to do it, but tries to act like it doesn't take anything. She gets sorta exhausted and her fingers usually feel sore after flicking). Thus, her strength is rather high as well, which is one of the reasons she's able to fling around her giant sword.

Release: Come the fuck out, Bunny Rabbit.

Shikai Description:
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Shikai Abilities: Saaishu's shikai ability isn't exactly the grandest of shikai abilities. Simply, all her abilities are pretty much doubled, allowing her to use Hoho twice as much as usual, with the same reprocussions and cool downs as it would be if she didn't have Shikai activated. Her strength, general speed, etc. is doubled as well. A nifty trick is that the effectiveness of her Kidō and others, except for Zanjutsu, is doubled as well. Basically, all her powers are pretty much doubled, without doubling the repercussions.


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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Saaishu Shudan   Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:39 pm

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To start your FC for your Spirit is missing so fix those things first.

Hoho: Saaishu's Flash Steps are sublime. She can use Flash steps in odd ways, applying it to certain parts of her body. For example, a variation of Flash Step Saaishu had made was the "Flash Skip". She uses the flash step ability with one leg, as if skipping, which would allow her to maneuver in jagged steps, making her rather prominent at dodging attacks. Or, she could apply Hoho to her arms, allowing her to punch with extreme speed. Even without Flash Steps, Saaishu already has extremely fast speed, but she use hoho nearly all the time. The speed of her hoho is pretty standard, but the amount of times she can use it is incredibly high (you decide, but I most definitely want it to be much higher than the standard. MUCH higher.)

Kidō: Saaishu is also extremely proficient with Kidō, having the capability of probably having a seat in the 5th division.

Zanjutsu: Zanjutsu is one of the few things that Saaishu isn't quite good at. She knows how to properly use her sword, and is able to slice up a nigga, but she's just not that good with it. Heaving around a giant sword should make it more understandable. Naturally, the giant Zanpakutō reflects her massive reiryoku.

No offense, but No one I've seen has used nigga as a description, so can you change that to person or some other pronoun.

Hakuda: Hakuda is one of the many things Saaishu is good at. In fact, when combined with her ability to apply hoho to certain parts of her body, she's a master hand-to-hand combatant. okay, maybe not master, but she's pretty darn good at it, being able to preform a oni dekopin (she actually tries pretty hard to do it, but tries to act like it doesn't take anything. She gets sorta exhausted and her fingers usually feel sore after flicking). Thus, her strength is rather high as well, which is one of the reasons she's able to fling around her giant sword.

Uhm Just going to Say this now you can't be a master Hand to hand combatant, if you aren't trained properly.

Tier: N/A until fixes to be made.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Saaishu Shudan   Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:13 pm

Changed the picture to a link, changed my wording for Zanjutsu, and for the Hakuda, I stated that she wasn't master, just really good at it.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Saaishu Shudan   Tue Aug 06, 2013 8:23 am

A description should not have contradictions in it, fix those contradictions and make this a serious character work on. I mean honestly if I were to tier her and such You wouldn't be leaving the lowest tier for people with spiritual power with those descriptions. If you're going to mention them, explain without contradictions how she's good in it, why is she good in it, how does her unreleased truly help her out in terms of those stats. Do you see why I had to point these out Kururai.

in short... Redo all of your descriptions because honestly it looks like a five year old is trying to look like they are hardcore.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Saaishu Shudan   Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:52 am


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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Saaishu Shudan   Tue Sep 10, 2013 1:23 pm

Moving this app to Old WIP since it has been 2 weeks. if finished please refer to This thread or ask staff to move it.
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