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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Fri Nov 22, 2013 2:26 am




- Name: Shoaku Nishida
- Titles: /b/tard (beetard); The Obsidian Wall of Anonymous; #SEALpin
- Gender: Female
- Age Of Death: 9
- Appearance Age: adolescence
- Age: Around 200
- Affiliation/Rank: Initiator of Anonymous

- Appearance Picture: http://www.fightersgeneration.com/np2/char1/xtra/bb-taokaka.jpg

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- Personality: Shoaku not only has an immature attitude, but in all honesty, is a little retarded. She's slow to get things and often times must be told things using literals for her to understand. Because of this stupidity, it has resulted in absolute loyalty to the current Anonymous's Strategist, who happens to teach her as well. Though mentally challenged, she is very optimistic (more ignorant than optimistic) and keeps an uppity attitude almost all the time.

Shoaku rarely gets angry, and only gets sad when it comes to her mentor, The Anonymous Strategist, whom she also calls ¨Master¨, and food. Shoaku's actions are tied directly to her emotions, and often grows in strength when her emotions get more intense. Shoaku is very strong headed and relentlessly stubborn, keeping true to her desires. When challenged, she will stop at nothing to receive the challenge and topple whoever challenged her, even her own master, whether she breaks limbs, organs, anything. The last thing that breaks is her will.

Shoaku is rarely shaken up, and she's somewhat arrogant and confident in herself, and for some reason, still doesn't understand how stupid she is after so many years. Though, some may see that to be one of the good points of her- especially when trying to deceive Shoaku, which generally requires minimal effort.

- Likes: Topkek cupcakes, her master, ramen

- Dislikes: Those who ridicule her (though she rarely notices it), those who oppose her master

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- Hollow type: Adjuchas

- Hollow Power: Similar to heirro skin, Shoaku has several layers of condensed reiatsu around her. Instead of her reiryoku spreading out and emitting from her body with a wide radius, her reiatsu is naturally limited to a certain distance, and compresses itself, resulting in several layers of spiritual energy dense enough to stop most attacks on her. The layers continuously build up so long as she has a spiritual pressure, and as it naturally compresses, over the years, the build up has become potent enough for her to have mountains thrown at her and be absent of physical damage. Of course, with spammage, the potency of her reiatsu layers will diminish, but she is able to receive single blasts without much trouble. If Shoaku takes on about 10 mountains in a row, she will be open to receive physical damage from attacks even as potent as a normal cero. After about 3 or so posts, if she hasn't received too much damage in the meantime, Shoaku would be able to replenish most of her strength (without taking too much actual damage, instead of just the defensive layers just taking damage). Although she is capable of withstanding 10 mountains thrown at her, her defensive layers are less resistant to spammage, or multiple attacks at the same time. As such, it's far easier to damage her with attacks from all over the place than to overpower her defense. Of course, it would take quite a while, and is generally easier to attack her with multiple people at the same time to get rid of her defense.

Though her most admirable ability is her incredible defense, she still has other usable abilities. Another one of her mainly used abilties is high-speed regeneration. Shoaku can heal pretty much any body part of hers within seconds, so long as her lungs, a kidney, liver, pancreas, brain or heart isn't taken out. She can regenerate a lost kidney, but not within the same thread. She is able to regenerate any other organ in 6 posts. With each body part regenerated, her energy decreases, and after losing limbs and regrowing them 15 times, she loses the strength to fight. Not to say she'll give up, but she'll be incapable. It's possible for her to continue on to use them up to 16 times from sheer willpower, but by that time she'll be incapable of sustaining consciousness, and be free to be feasted upon by her enemies.

Shoaku is extremely fast as well, though this is the worst of her stronger abilities. An ability she subconsciously developed after repeated times of dodging, and what other's call ¨Neko Soko¨, is something she can use that utilises her layers of reiatsu. Shoaku takes the innermost layer and essentially wraps it tightly around her body, and controls the movements of the layer rather than her own body, which has also slowly advanced her ability to concentrate. Though stupid, Shoaku has proved to be talented. Shoaku can use the Neko Soko indefinitely in a thread, until she loses consciousness, but the intervals between usages is 5 per post, with a single post cooldown in between. Shoaku uses even her basic movements through a variation of the neko soko, where she simply focuses a single part of her body which she wants to move, and the corresponding joint(s), and only moves those, allowing for fluid movement that often appear to be very unnatural. Because of this, Shoaku also lacks strength, as she rarely uses any. However, these movements through the reiatsu layer have become second nature to her, and inherently have become her natural body movements. With standard movements, Shoaku may move a ridiculous speed of up to approximately 350 mph or so (sprint, kind of. that is, if you can sprint with spiritual energy...), and with neko soko, Shoaku can move up to roughly 700+ mph.

Shoaku's acidic touch only comes into effect with her claws, and against pretty much any kind of bare skin, aside from those who have extremely high defense, it'll decompose the epidermis over time. For those who have a lower level of power (tier), depending on how strong their individual defense is, the acidic touch will decompose the skin within a matter of minutes. Naturally, the acidic touch could be countered with concentrated spiritual energy in the affected area, or healing techniques, but overall the acidic touch can do major damage- especially under favorable circumstances. (For decomposing the skin, tier 5 it takes 4 posts, tier 4 it takes 5 posts, tier 3 it takes 7 posts, tier 2 it takes 10 posts, tier 1 it takes 14 posts, tier 0 it takes 18 posts. The acidic touch is ineffective to those her tier and higher, so if she was tier 3-#, those tier 2-# and up would be unaffected. The easiest way to get rid of the acid is to over charge the effected area with energy (chaotic, spiritual, chi, etc.).) (extremely high defense= her skill level for defensive skills (heirro, durability, etc.) or higher.)

Shoaku has the ability to use portals. Shoaku often uses this as an escape tactic, and also as a form of communication. Within a thread, though there is no cooldown for it, and she can use the portals approximately 10 times at full size, with any distance between the two portals, and an unlimited amount of times for a smaller version (for communication purposes). She can only use the portals once per post of either size (can't use full size and small size in same post. 1 portal usage per post, period.). The speed in which her portals open generally take within a second, but she can slow down the opening speed for dramatic effect, in accordance with how immature she has acted in the specified thread, as she may have brief moments of seeming mature (generally not, though). These portals also have the ability to open inter-dimensionally. The portal uses spiritual energy to temporarily connect to points in time and space, and opens a gateway between these two points (which are the portals). Each portal can be sustained for at most, a post. Generally, a portal may be opened at the beginning of a post, and should close at the end of it. Shoaku may withhold a portal whilst doing other actions, but a portion of her focus will be directed towards the stasis of the portal, so her actions become slightly more sloppy, and her reactions might slow a bit.

As the entirety of her powers depend on her reiryoku and reishi output, Shoaku clearly has extremely high levels of spiritual power, and much of it in reserve, which may also explain how she is uncontrollably jumpy, as there is so much potential power within her. As such, her usage of Cero is quite high, and the intensity and power of her ceros are extremely high as well, being able to preform even a cero at the potency of a Cero Oscuras. Though, energetic as she may be, Shoaku is still extremely... ¨challenged¨, and instead generally uses a cero form of her own, as she has a hard time of grasping concept and how to use usual ceros.

Custom Cero

  • Name: Retarded Cero
  • Type: Offensive/Defensive
  • Effects: The potency of the ¨retarded cero¨ is somewhat comparable to a standard Grand Rey Cero, however, it's extremely close range, and essentially blows up and bursts out of control within 20 metres of her. Similar to a claymore, the blast of the cero blowing up, which usually happens, blows outward and away from her, which she somehow manages to instinctively pull off. Since the range is short, maintaining the potency of the cero blast isn't as necessary, and thereby has a higher usage rate.
  • Notes:Only mentally challenged people can use this type of Cero (because people who aren't retarded overlook how to actually perform this technique, since how it works is really dumb, and even those who know how to use this cero don't know how it works, since they only use it instinctively), and the amount of times Shoaku can use this cero is in accordance to the standard Grand Rey Cero Usage Scale, however, due to it not needing to maintain potency for a longer time (as it has shorter range), add three more uses (so, e.g. grand master skill, one can use this 13 times). Also, while firing this, a small opening in the layers of defensive reiryoku around occurs, allowing the cero to pass through (which is only fired from her mouth). As a result, should one be fast enough and strong enough to momentarily over power the cero, a clear shot for Shoaku without defenses is possible.


- Weapons: The only weapon Shoaku utilises are the three claws that come out of her large paws. Since Shoaku lacks in actually physical strength, she relies on the incredibly sharp claws of hers, which is fortified with a dense reiatsu coating which furthers it's keenness. The claws can easily cut through a foot thick block of reinforced steel, but as the slashing damage comes from the dense reiatsu around it, to pull of slashes consecutively at extremely fast speeds for too long may decrease it's efficiency.

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- Background: Shoaku was living a relatively normal life in the middle east. Born in a poorer family, she didn't have much, but because she was stupid and unspoiled, she was grateful for what she had and was content with it. Shoaku had a pretty normal death, being caught up in the middle of a traffic accident, in which, while riding in the basket of her older brother's bike and crossing the street, a drunk driver had hit them, instantly killing them both.

Being confused and alone, Shoaku wandered, trying to find her brother, who had already gone to Soul Society without her, for which reasons are still indiscernible. After wandering for so long, she eventually transformed into a hollow as her chain began to diminish. Becoming a hollow, Shoaku hadn't remembered the majority of time as a normal hollow, but she still has flashbacks of what she has done in her gillian form, after eating so many plus souls and other hollows.

At some point, Shoaku had evolved, turning into an adjuchas hollow. Being stupid as she was, Shoaku didn't fully grasp the situation she was in and had lost most of her memories prior to becoming a hollow, occasionally receiving glimpses of it. Forgetting most everything, she simply saw other hollows as a type of food, constantly eating them. While wandering Hueco Mundo, a being had confronted her. She assumed it to be more food, and for the first time, she had failed to eat. For some reason or another, the being had decided to take the unconscious Shoaku, who had been defeated, out of Hueco Mundo and to another location, somewhere on Earth.

Upon waking, she was greeted by the faces of 3 other people. The people had shown her food (made from hollows… somehow..), and naturally, she took it without consideration. The constant supply of food, as well as place to take cat naps, lured Shoaku, giving her trust to them. Soon enough, in exchange for food and service, she began running errands for them, often fighting them over her food. Little did she know, she was getting gradually stronger in the process. In the end, the person who always fed her, and basically trained her, was granted the most trust by her, and as a result, without much of her knowledge, she was implemented as the next Initiator of Anonymous. Though, for reasons unbeknownst to her, she was specifically chosen….

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Thu Nov 28, 2013 9:37 am

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
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  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Thu Nov 28, 2013 8:49 pm


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Shoaku has retained the ability to use a Garganta, and can use it to travel not just inter-dimensionally, but also to different locations within the same realm. Shoaku often uses this as an escape tactic, and also as a form of communication. Within a thread, though there is no cooldown for it, and she can use the garganta approximately 4 times at full size, with any distance between the two portals, and an unlimited amount of times for a smaller version (for communication purposes). She can only use 1 garganta per post of either size (can't use full size and small size in same post. 1 garganta per post, period.). The speed in which her gargantas open generally take within a second, but she can slow down the opening speed for dramatic effect, in accordance with how immature she has acted in the specified thread, as she may have brief moments of seeming mature (generally not, though).

As the entirety of her powers depend on her reiryoku and reishi output, Shoaku clearly has extremely high levels of spiritual power, and much of it in reserve, which may also explain how she is uncontrollably jumpy, as there is so much potential power within her. As such, her usage of Cero is quite high, and the intensity and power of her ceros are extremely high as well, being able to preform even a Cero Oscuras. Though, energetic as she may be, Shoaku is still extremely... ¨challenged¨, and instead generally uses a cero form of her own, as she has a hard time of grasping concept and how to use usual ceros.
Due to looking at this app and gaining new information:

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Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), Garuganta; Spanish for "Throat", Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Hollows are able to move in and out from Hueco Mundo. It is a spiritual pathway connecting the Arrancar's world, Hueco Mundo, to other worlds. Besides the World of the Living and the Soul Society, it can also open the gates of the Dangai and K-World. A turbulence of Reishi blows within Garganta. To move through it, travellers must create footholds using the Reishi.
Garganta can not be used to transport you somewhere else specific that you use and only high level strong hollows and arrancar can use it can use it.

Also Cero Oscuras can only be used by Arrancar that are high in ranking in the espada.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Sat Nov 30, 2013 8:21 pm

Redone desu!~

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Wed Dec 25, 2013 7:53 pm

Moving this to WIP due to lack of progress or any indication of progress.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Fri Jan 17, 2014 9:16 pm

moving to pending. i will get to this tomarrow.
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Mon Jan 20, 2014 9:51 pm

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:48 pm



「MOVING OUT THIS THREAD」
I'm going to go ahead and move this back into unchecked applications to be reviewed upon request from S_E for wanting this character moved out of archives. If there is no check, then I will do it myself in a little while. So let the judgement begin.

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:10 pm



Nononononooo


I'm not done with Shoaku D: although I appreciate you willing to check it soon, I still needa get on a revamp for her. Sorry about that;can you move this to WIP please?


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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Shoaku Nishida [Pending Hollow]   Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:28 pm



「MOVING THIS THREAD」
Fair enough. I'll be moving it back into the work in progress section. You'll have within the two week range to get some updates on him, or we'll end up moving him to old WIP and eventually back into archives. So get to work on it.

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