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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Vandal Lannister   Fri Nov 29, 2013 2:43 pm






• Name: Vandal Lannister
• Titles: Ser,The Golden Lion
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age:26
• Age: 1743
• Affiliation/Rank: House Lannister.

• Appearance Description:
Good looking, Tall and Dangerous. These are all words to describe Vandal.
His height is around 6'5 with a weight of 210 pounds of Muscle. His hair golden like all Lannisters.Piercing blue eyes stare out unflinching. Disregarding the normal dress standards of the Gotei 13. He opts for a set of Silver plate and scale armor with golden inlays, A pure white cap flowing from the shoulders. His Casual clothing consist of a white leather Tunic and Black Denim Jeans as well as High Collar black boots.

• Appearance Picture:
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-Prqp-5wcgTc/UVSLCdgpsaI/AAAAAAAAGoA/LSPv26jcigA/s1600/Jaime+Lannister.jpg
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• Personality:As a Lannister. Vandal is not immune to a rather natural arrogance. He disregards the Gotei 13 as sloppy. His skills rivaling a captain's he is often looked down upon by most for not serving the realm. He often wanders around the Soul Society completing odd jobs and missions for no payment.As he is of Highborn status he often finds himself in the Seedier reaches of the SS. Oftening visiting the many brothels in the poorer districts. He spends most of his days, Drinking, Fucking and fighting. He is a man of many pleasures and he enjoys all of them.

• Likes: Good Wine, Good Women, And a good fight.

• Dislikes: Gotei 13,Large Canines,And Fried Foods.
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• History: Vandal Lannister was born to Jaime and Cersei Lannister, Following the death of King Joffery, Vandal was concieved by the two of His Older Brother's corpses. Living a simply life in King's Landing. He first learned a sword at age 5. Becoming a expert swordsman by age 10. He rose to the rank of Squire to Tywin Lannister his Grandfather. By the age of 16 He was a member of the kingsguard. And by age 20. He was the lord Commander. During the great war with the white walkers. Vandal lost his life after a hoard cut off him from his men. He was killed when a white walker tore his throat out. Leaving him to bleed to death in the snow. Following his death he was transported to the soul society. After wandering for a few months in the deepest holes and pits of vangrancy. His eyes set forth on a familiar sigil. The golden lion on the red banner. He had found his house. His people. He rejoined house Lannister and quickly fell into his old habits.

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• Reiatsu Color:Gold

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Castamere
• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:A Large Golden maned Lion. The lions Mane flows like flames coming forth from a campfire. It's eyes a bright blue. It's voice deep and heavy like the booming thunder.

• Inner World:A Old Castle forever burning in flames. The castle would be set on a bluff overlooking the sea. The flames burn forever but have no heat. A continuous rain pours over the world but does douse the flames.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : A simply Silver Bastard sword with White clothe wrapping the hilt. The Scabbard would be a white leather with gold inlay.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: The blade seems to hit with the force of a much larger sword.

[strike]• Release: Pay what you owe. Castamere.

• Shikai Description:The Sword shifts into the form of a silver bladed Greatsword. The hilt and strike plate resembling a wide cross, The handle wrapped in Gold Silk the pommel bearing a Ivory lions head.

• Shikai Abilities:The Shikai gives the user the ability to pay back 1 fold any damage applied to the user. A broken arm gives the foe a broken arm when the blade makes contact. The Blade itself does no physical damage to the opponent only going through the body of the foe like a phantom. Only a inch of the blade needs to touch the Foe for it's effect to work.

[strike]• Bankai Description:It remains the same, Only a bright Golden light seems to come of the blade.

[strike]• Bankai Abilities:Much of it's abilities remain the same only the payback is upper to 5 fold. A single broken bone makes 5 for the foe. A cut makes five. While in bankai form the blade can inflict physical damage with it's edge. As well as emit a energy wave with a slash.
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General Skills
  • Durability: Master
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidō: None
  • Zanjutsu: Master
  • Hakuda: Adept


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• Roleplay Sample: Just gunna take a screen of one of my old rps.
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Vandal Lannister   Fri Nov 29, 2013 3:25 pm


I will be your lovely checker so here we go
My first and foremost major concern is the fact that this app seems more or less a Game of Thrones character, but sorta rewritten. I don't know if this was intentional, but I'd suggest fixing some stuff and toning it down, because of plagiarism concerns and such. As a secondary note, it also looks like a poorly made OC for a Game of Thrones universe.. which will not really fit without some heavy rewrites. Other then that here are some things you can do:

Personality: Your personality is short three sentences; we require a minimum of 10 for a personality. So expanding that would be well worthwhile! (As a note, As a Lannister. doesn't count as a sentence. Mighta been a punctuation mistake though!)

History: Your history is much too short; I'd say at least two paragraphs, one of life before death and one of life after death. The rest is mentioned a bit earlier in my check so that would be really nice to do too. You might want to rewrite it m'dear.


Shikai/Bankai: I'm not sure if you've read the rules, but shinigami are not allowed to start with Shikai without staff permission, and Bankai requires admin permission. But, if you meant to cross those out and just forgot to finish the code, it would be [*/strike] without the *. But if you want permission for Shikai, feel free to direct the request at me via pm.

Skill Sheets: You don't fill out your skills sheets until you're approved; we have a topic with instructions for filling them out once approved Here. Staff does your will skill sheet for you though.


RP Sample: I'm afraid that unless you can source the site/post where the sample takes place, we can't really accept it. Because for all we know, you took a screenshot of some random person; so if you can provide a source, it will be completely fine then. ^^

Well If you have issues, problems or concerns, feel free to reply or to pm me!

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Vandal Lannister   Fri Nov 29, 2013 3:48 pm



Aivee Clean-Up Time!
Member was banned, this didn't happen goodbye.

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