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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Brink the forgotten soul... [WIP]   Sat Nov 30, 2013 6:11 pm


» Name: Anthony Kratesu
» Titles: "Brink" or "Fallen King"
» Race: Human, shinigami
» Age: 420
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: yuudeshi clan
» Appearance Written:
Anthony Kratesu is a well-built male standing at six foot four inches and weighing in at about one hundred and eighty seven pounds. This is mostly muscle seeing, as this man is a former star basketball player from his high school and middle school carrier. He has a build about him that just screams for that of someone who belongs on a basketball court or at least playing anytime he can. It is well toned and slender so that not to weigh him down no matter what he is doing whether it be fighting or simply playing basketball.

His skin is a milk chocolate shade that makes woman weak in their knees, as they would scan this man over. He complements his ebony splendor with a unique natural dark blue hair, which no one ever believes to be true even when he shows people his baby pictures. It being short and parted to the left side captures everyone’s eyes at first glance and usually is stuck in their head never to be forgotten even after many years seeing as not many people have this natural beauty. His dark blue eyes that seem to pierce into the soul of the people he talks to though he has a slight natural squint they still only further compliment his hair and skin.

Another thing that pops out to people is outstanding health though some might say this isn’t a part of your appearance he proves it his by keeping his hair perfectly cut his skin flawless and clear from dirt, crow’s feet, and even pimples. His nails always trimmed though this is more over for they can through off his shoot while he plays ball. All this ties together the appearance that so many grow to either hate or love but all for the same reason. Whether it is jealously that they do not look like him or love for they love the way he looks but in his opinion haters are going to hate might as well have a perfect white smile to greet their snarling and menacing faces.

» Appearance Picture:


» Personality:

. Anthony is a very mellow person never truly seeking to fight or cause unneeded chaos for truly he hates doing anything other than enjoying his life and at war you he feels you can never truly enjoy yourself unless you seek to bring this world to a spiral of chaos and destruction. However, this is simply his thought on it he truly just seeks to relax and enjoy life, which for him is playing basketball, looking at the sky, and talking to his friends when time permits.

. Anthony has a instinctive loyalty trait that he doesn’t seem to know where it came from however it helps him keep his nose out of things he wishes not to get involved in and as well keep his head from rolling on the floor for being in simple terms not being loyal. Whether it be a basketball team or his clan he treat any team or group he is in with the same loyalty as if he was serving his clan or country simply because that how he believes it should be.

Showing his talent
. Anthony loves to show off his talents and his abilities which sometimes contradicts his mellow life style he tries to uphold but this part of him always seems to overcome his mellow nature in the heat of a moment. Whether it is his combat skills or his basketball skills, he always gives any opponent or enemy one hundred percent of his attention and ability. He never slacks in battle, spars, or friendly completion. It could be a simple foot race and Anthony gives it his all focusing only on what is ahead of him and trying to beat his own person best and standards.

Hot headed
. Even though he tries to stay mellow, ignorant people or those who chose to make dumb decisions that can end up affecting everyone is something he will not tolerate and his punishments are those that seem to be off the edge of sanity. For simply talking out of turn in front of him can have your mouth sliced further open to have a scar remind you that you should never talk out of turn in front of him for it is simply disrespectful.

. Seeing as he is a Ziamichi and his spirit as a demon his personality went from a peaceful, happy, mellow person to a demonic force that is still mellow but his actions are highly demonic. In addition, he no longer feels any pain or emotion toward anyone other than people he enjoys playing basketball with or that are a part of his family and clan. This trait is one that will never disappear even if somehow someone would take the demon spirit out of the man.

. Anthony is still carefree, hates doing any responsibility, and really does not like to do much other then play his childhood fun past time playing basketball. He feels this is the only time he feels like his old self and can truly talk to anyway otherwise he will simply ignore you or attack you. This is how is life has changed in what seems the small amount of time he has been alive. The only other thing that keeps him carefree and sane is his A-T which he rides ever where and only takes off when he is sleeping or playing basketball.

. There is one thing about Anthony that will never change and that is his undying love for music but to be specific he is in love with trap music putting it in his ears whenever he truly need to focus or when he finds something that he is going to give his full attention to. He always has his headphones in and depending on his mood will depend on the song this obsession however sometimes gets in the way during battle because he blast it so loud in his ears that he barely can hear his surroundings at times while it is playing.


» History: (Three paragraph minimum of your characters history. And, if you can, include when and how they became a Ziamichi.)



» The Spirit's Name: Sora Takeuchi
» The Spirit's Race: Demon
» The Spirit's Gender: Male
» The Spirit's Age: 520

» The Spirit's Written Appearance:
Sora is a twin demon that Anthony accidently summoned one day in his childhood that gave him his incredible speed and power when he was only in middle school so that he could dominate the world of basketball. This demon has long black flowing hair that looks like a toxic river silky yet dangerous. Along with his long flowing hair, he has a very muscular build as if all he does is work out and train for day in to day out never taking any time to relax and enjoy life. His body truly is most closely resembled by that of a professional body builder who is just gaining their start but he could easily out lift those people.

Another notable trait that Sora has is distinct marking on his body that Anthony has yet to find a meaning for yet Sora says in due time that he would figure out what they mean. They are all over his body and are not very large. However, as you start to look him over you notice the red small lines on his body seemingly come together to try and form some ancient text or maybe it truly is just a random pattern on the demons body but it is yet unknown as to why they are truly there.
Along with this, there is one more notable thing on this man’s body and that is the tattoo on the right side of his body that tells him apart from his twin brother that has yet to be unleashed but Sora has hinted that they may come as a par. However, Anthony simply is not strong enough to unleash his other half quite yet. The tattoo is a very complex design that is hard to put into words but it is said when the tattoo is paired with his twins it makes a pair of wings that in legend lift the host bodies level of potential in speed, power, dexterity, stamina, and will power to their max. In addition even seems to give them the innate ability to fly or levitate depending on their passion to be ‘free.’

So with those all combined he is an extremely fit looking male in his early youth that has yet to fully meet his potential and looks as though to be someone you could only imagine to see in your nightmares on the worst of nights to the most extreme measures of fear you can possibly feel or understand. The only thing that adds to this is his sharp teeth that seem to be another factor to bring the whole package together as a fear killing piss in your pants creating monster. [spoiler][spoiler]

» The Spirit's Pictured Appearance:


» The Spirit's Personality:
Sora often shows himself as a carefree and charismatic person albeit arrogant about his abilities as a demon. For truly he has yet to meet anyone other than his twin that was a demon and he was far greater in skill than he would have thought he would seeing as they were twins so with his his ego would shoot through the roof and his new façade would come up for truly he was neither carefree nor charismatic however, he truly was an arrogant man which would lead to brink being able to control him rather easily with the correct wording or technique.

He shows a rather huge lack of remorse for anyone really even brink who which he has come to have a somewhat deep connection with. He however simply views brink as mere tools. Viewing himself as "defective good”, he empathizes with humans and their constant struggles through everyday life as he also sees humanity as "defective goods". It is this inferiority-complex that caused him to adopt a cold personality over time, as he is willing to kill anyone who stands in his way, and gain the power he needs to accomplish his goal.

Sora believes that the worth of people's souls are determined by the weight of their actions/inactions. He greatly despises those who don't act or those who choose to sit idly. His motivations lie in the fact that he wishes to bring true suffering to the world in order to witness what he perceives to be the true worth of humanity as a species; whether or not it will bring chaos or ruin due to humanity's flaws is something that he's not concerned about.


» The Spirit's History: (Is there a history to your spirit? If so, at least write 2-3 paragraph's about it. Including how it got attached, created or sealed to your Ziamichi.)



» Ziamichi Spirit Powers: (Put their powers here)

» Unique Traits: (What kind of special ability's does your host get from you're Ziamichi's powers? For example, if your spirit had a fire ability, it's possible your character's body can pick up on that! Or if the spirit was an animal, they could possibly gain better natural senses.)

» Forms: (How many forms, if any, does it take until the host reaches it's limit, full power and a risk of having the demon, dark side or other entity gain control of their body? If you have a good understanding with your spirit, though, this is typically a good thing)

» Drawbacks: (Is there any side effects to the usage of these combined powers? If so, put them here.)

» Control: (What kind of control does your character have over your Ziamichi? Ranging from zero to ten. When at Zero, you're character has no control over your Ziamichi. When at ten, you're character has perfect control over it's Ziamichi.)


NOTE: Ziamichi's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

Click here for skill sheet
Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Ziamichi Skills For Spirit
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


» Role Play Sample:
Anthony was born on September 22 and lived a very short life being killed by a run off the road vehicle while hanging out with his girlfriend. That day he managed to save her from the drunk driver but the driver and he died in that accident. He was pinned under the car and once they removed it, Anthony would parish and would go off to whatever realm that he deserved to be in.

However, the woman he was dating at the time asked them not to move the car just yet so that she could get one last thing from the man before he died and that was a dying kiss. Then she would run away crying and as the tears fell one by one, the car would rise slowly at nearly the same pace and Anthony would die not even five seconds after she had gone.
He would walk the land as a soul chain always wondering what his girlfriend was doing and how she truly was handling his death. When he came to find out that she was cheating on him for the past few years and truly had no care for the man at all he just was a piece of arm candy is what she was after and once he perished she would swiftly move on to the next. This enraged the man which lead to him starting to hollowfy however, the process was cut short for after he developed the mask a shinigami purified his soul and sent him to the soul society instead of the protocol of killing the changing man.

When he would arrive now in nothing but rags of clothing he could feel the mask still on his face when suddenly he looked down to see parts of it simply fall and shatter on the floor. As if it never truly happened and Anthony thought as such too while he was in the soul society but this was a grave mistake and would come back to haunt him later in his life. For a while Anthony did nothing but mop under a tree and wonder why he every dated that foolish woman and let himself up to being hurt. He was heartbroken and destroyed his will was weak and he was at a time thinking of just ending his rebirth. When suddenly a young woman fell on his head one day rambling about mastering some technique that the academy had tried teaching her.

However, as soon as she landed she was gone. He wondered for awhile what she was talking about this land seemed not to be any larger than a simple city when finally he looked behind the tree he always say at and saw the wonderful gates utopia behind him. Simply because he ignored life because one simple female he almost lost his chance at rebirth not only for the chance of happiness but as well strength. He would swiftly start running however, only to be stopped by what people called the gatekeeper of the inner soul society. Anthony wondered how he was going to be in when suddenly that chick flew by him in an instant headed for the door and without thinking, he grabbed her leg and was shooting into the inner wall faster than anything he could have imagined. She quickly let out a scream and kicked him down into the depths of the place and Anthony thought for sure he was a goner. However, when he hit the building below it did not kill him it simply hurt like a son of a bitch to get back up.

He took this gift of a chance and after wondering around in the underground paths to not be seen and thrown out of the inner gates for a while, he found the academy she was mumbling about that one faithful day and joined immediately. He would show great promise in the arts of the shunpo technique and hakudo. While failing to use the even most basic kido however this did not diminish his chances of being in the squads it did the other actually, for he wasted no time trying to even get somewhat skilled in it from an early standpoint. Anthony mastered hakudo and shunpo only focusing on hand-to-hand combat and he was top of his class for it. However, it was not an easy battle climbing up the ranks and keeping his grades at top tier condition. He was constantly working out after hours and putting in way more time than most of the other students in the academy. He would not rest until he had finished his exercise of one thousand sit-ups, push-ups, and then working on his shunpo and hakudo on a wooden doll so that he could get a better grasp of it not only in practice but as well as when they were taken on inner jobs to test what they have learned.

Anthony would soon after making this crazy and somewhat farcical journey gain access to a zanpakto. This was one of the greatest honors in the academy for it meant you where on your way to become a Shinigami. However, this dream came to a screeching halt when they could not give him one that fit him; they all refused to respond even though he was more the capability of using theme. It was a crushing factor, which almost lead to Anthony being kicked out of the academy. However, just before the day he was going to be released if he failed his zanpakto test once more one of the research members had given him a new zanpakto one that he had never seen nor did he understand why it was shaped the way it was. Rather the than the classical sword or knife shape his zanpaktuo where shaped as raps for your hands which he would have to apply just like if you where rapping them to train. It was an odd-looking zanpakto and really grasped the judge’s attention seeing as they would see how this “weapon” could truly even be considered a Zanpakutō.

However, when they let loose the hollow for him to try to destroy it was quickly proven that this was the perfect match for him and that no other sword or knife could take the place for what this man received. He would show an outstanding amount of skill and finesse when meet with this foe and his newfound partner. There was not a misstep in synchronizing together it was as if this Zanpakutō was created for him and they did fit perfectly. As Anthony started to fight with a charge wasting no time covering the distance so that he could use his hakudo fully he would hear a whisper come from what seemed like know where. It caused him to take one nasty blow from the hollow leaving a two-inch gash on his right side. He looked around swiftly side to side wondering who was talking to him when suddenly he heard the voice again this time much louder to where he could make out what it was saying… “I am Son Goku… Can you hear me…” It seemed the voice was close as Anthony franticly looked around wondering if he was going insane when he would finally realize this was the voice he was warned about… the voice of his zanpaktuos soul…

“Are you…. My zanpakto…” Anthony looked down puzzled at his hand which were now covered still with the rap but it was now black steel covered, yet still lighter than any sword.

“Yes I just told you my name mortal why does no one ever understand the simple things…” This time he talked with a more relaxed and calm tone it was easy to tell he had not had many partners for long… It was as if this truly was Anthony stuck inside a zanpakto…

“Well no point in arguing because I am here for the fight and it seems you where handpicked to be my partner so something must be clicking with us…” Anthony would smirk and use his shunpo to get above his target and without a second thought he would say a phrase that before now had no meaning to him what so ever but today it truly unlocked a great power.

“Rebirth is the salvation in which I survive!” With a flash of light it seemed power went surging through Anthony’s body and when he made contact with the hollow it was over he would swiftly vanish after being hit with the burst of power. With that Anthony would pass his exam and would soon be going to graduation still trying to better learn to use and understand what he had learned that faithful day.

He would graduate from the academy top of his class and be put as the third seat in 6th division. He would soon rise swiftly through the two ranks standing between him and the beautiful white coat that he wanted seeing as he would basically out class the captain in power and speed. This was unheard of for an academy graduate to do in the short few years it took him to complete this task even with being top tier from the class. He would be inductied as the new captain of the 6th division four years after being put into the third seat under the captain. He would have spent two of those years as the vice-captain after the other died in a hollow accident… However, as his power increased so did his mask power level and one faithful mission it over came him and his power was increased to a point where no one working with him other than a man named brago could withstand it who was his Vice-Captain at the time. He would instantly crush his other members with his spiritual pressure and would cry out in a hollow voice attracting the attention of everyone in the society.

Without even a second thought Anthony began to run toward the gate so that he could escape with his life never truly understanding what happened that faithful day. However, he could not simply go back and try apologizing he would have to earn their respect back one way or another and it was going to be a challenge even getting his foot back in that door. When he would arrive at night in the human world, he would swiftly shunpo down into a abandon factory and simply stand looking at his hand and wondering why this was happening. While he was doing, so there was a shard of glass on the floor he could see his reflection and the mask he felt the first time he went to the soul society was now the reason he had to leave and return to this human world once again. So this is where the history of Anthony Stops and his true story begins he would began trying to train and control the masks true power only doing this until it was nearly perfect so that he could try living a normal life once more.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Brink the forgotten soul... [WIP]   Wed Dec 18, 2013 9:41 pm

Moving this app to Old WIP since it has been 2 weeks. if finished please refer to This thread or ask staff to move it.
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Brink the forgotten soul... [WIP]   Fri May 16, 2014 3:06 pm

Well, looks like you're never coming back so I'm going to remove this from Old WIP and put this into the Archives. If you wish to have it put back into WIP then please just post here.

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