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 Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Fri May 09, 2014 2:56 am

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SUGIURAN

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I. Basic Information


» Name: Chikara Seigyoki.
» Titles: The Drakeknight, the Bulwark.
» Age: 754.
» Gender/Sex: Male.
» Origin: The Sugiura of Energy.
» Kingdom: The Eastern Kingdom.
» Affiliation/Rank: Vanguard Initiate.

» True Appearance Description:

» True Appearance Picture:
Spoiler:
 


II. Personality Traits


» Personality:[i] Chikara is the best ally anybody could hope for. He is loyal and dedicated, supporting his allies in all they do and never abandons or betrays them. Perhaps he doesn't lead, but he offers advice and support. Even in the worst situations, he is the eye at the center of the storm, he is the reason and rationality that keeps his friends alive despite the chaos raging around them. He speaks in calm and measured tones while others shout and argue.

He prefers tried and true methods over new ideas. If an old tactic worked before, he'd rather try it again than work on a new plan that might or might not be effective. He's slow and deliberate, and believes that rash thought and quick actions are a great way to get himself in trouble. He hangs back and waits for his foes to tip their hands; rather than charge, he'd prefer to move forward slowly and ready an attack.

To keep to this dogma, Chikara is rigorous and structured in his personal endeavours. He constantly does weapon drills, he meditates, and he monitors the food he eats, the liquids he drinks. He feels uneasy when his routine is interrupted. In his mind, his body is as much a tool as his sword and armor. It requires rest and proper care, and he expects others to meet his standards.

III. Character Background


» History From the earliest age he can remember, Chikara was a servant in the army of his lord. He drilled to march, drilled to fight, drilled to bathe and eat. Every moment was utilized to its maximum potential, and he kept moving with one purpose or another as long as daylight lasted. Learning to fight, cleaning weapons and armor, and taking care of the cavalry's steeds were only a few of the tasks that greeted him each day. No task assigned to him was meaningless or trivial, and all of them could be completed with a sense of pride in knowing that he served an organization whose purpose was much larger than him.

As a child, he spent his days cleaning. Everything was cleaned twice a day, from pots and pans to the horses' bridles, to his quarters and sleeping mat. Everything was checked and rechecked to make sure it was tended properly. As he grew older, his responsibilities also grew. He was set to repair practice dummies, patch uniforms, and when fortune favored him, he exercised horses. As he grew older and taller, he began training with various weapons, becoming skilled in their use through almost constant repetition and practice.

The prospect of another year of taking orders, cleaning stables, marching in formation, obeying his officers, it grew tiresome. He left, to do what he wanted, when he wanted. He felt a strong sense of wanderlust. He wanted to know what lay over the mountains, the outside world seemed so much more interesting than his humdrum existence, especially when he heard stories of great cities that stood beyond the horizon. An old warrior who returned with treasure and renown, stoked his imagination with tales of the outside world. He hired on with a passing caravan as a guard, and ventured out in the world.
IV. Abilities & Equipment


» Natural Abilities Yes. He has a near-perfect control over his own spiritual energy. The aura he exerts is extremely adaptable, allowing him to bolster someone else's power using his own, essentially hooking himself up as a battery to them. He does this by matching his spiritual energy with someone else's, allowing them to draw energy from him for their own use.

The efficiency of this effect is variable depending on the focus Chikara is allowed to put into it. With Beginner Focus, he is barely able to maintain the ability for any substantial amount of time. He cannot manage the ability well, and it is very unstable.

At Adept, he retains more control over the ability, not having to dedicate most of his concentration to simply trying to establish the connection. Obviously, the less concentration he has to devote to the ability, the more he has to spend on the battle.

At Advanced, he becomes able to achieve a sort of inner calm while focusing on the ability, entering a sort of zen state where he may transfer spiritual energy from his environment around him into power that he may use himself, or transfer again to others. Much like a Quincy can use the environment to create their spiritual weapon and ammunition for it, he becomes able to

» Sacred Weapon A sword. He can focus spiritual pressure through it, manifesting different elements within the sword. He may light the weapon on fire, freeze it entirely, or even sheath it in lightning. As he begins to understand more about the elements, the world around him, and himself, he may even extend these effects to other things. For example, he could manifest plasma as an extension of fire and electricity. After that, to prevent the blade from falling apart without containment, he may be able to continually manifest auras of frost around the blade, the blade dripping like lava but never-the-less retaining a form. Or perhaps he could lend forms to elements that are not entirely defined, he might be able to use gravity as a weapon, warping levels around the blade in unpredictable ways.

»Personal Mystic Eyes: (When/if a Sugiuran achieves a Master skill in Mystic Eyes, they are capable of developing their own personal mystic eye with a unique power unto themselves. If you will not have a Master level mystic eye, strike this section.)

» Equipment (Does your Sugiuran have weapons or other type of equipment in which aids them in battle? Do they have any extra items that your Sugiuran keep on them?)


V. Joushou (上昇, Ascending)


» Joushou Appearance
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» Joushou Abilities The Dragon's Fury.

Enhanced Strength: When Chikara enters Joushou, he takes the limitations of his body and intensely stresses against them. He becomes stronger, his muscles becoming filled with explosive might. The sheer amount of power he can exert at a moment's notice is staggering--his already well-defined body gains bulging biceps, a broad chest, and wide shoulders. In addition, he becomes very healthy, resisting supernatural diseases and other hardships while enduring punishment all the while.

Enhanced Durability: Normally, he boasts an incredible resistance to pain. His strength of body and will is unmatched, and he begins, rather simply, to ignore pain entirely. His body becomes more energy than form, and he can roll with blows that would incapacitate normal warriors, before striking back with the same ferocity he was shown. He is so determined to endure, that he powers through enemies despite greivous injury or exhaustion.

Radiant Bolt: While in Joushou, Chikara can create form for his spiritual energy. He does this by manufacturing bolts of white light that he can send at his enemies. These bolts are intensely hot--merely coming into contact with one of them is enough to cause severe burns, melting through skin and muscle in mere moments. He sends off one, then in a flash, two more follow suit. They arc through the air towards their target, undying in their determination to send Chikara's foes to meet their maker.

Searing Arc: As he attacks with his weapon, Chikara can send waves of scorching energy through the air. He burns off additional spiritual pressure, sending sheets of flame shooting forth from his weapon and armor. The fire burns the landscape around it, catching fire on any flammable objects that being protected. Due to the flame being comprised of spiritual energy, water won't quench it, and lack of oxygen won't put it out. It will continue to consume anything it touches until Chikara takes the energy back.

Flame Shield: Chikara can also set his soul alight; he becomes wreathed in a luminous flame, shedding intense and blinding light around him. The light is as though you stared into the sun, while the sun stared back. He essentially channels energy into the shield, causing it to be come volatile, exploding around him when struck. He takes this energy and uses it again, trading blows efficiently with any enemy.

VI. Zenou (前王, Before the King)


» Zenou Appearance
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» Zenou Abilities The Ascension.

Chikara shatters his armor, letting it fall to pieces. He returns the armor to energy, which immediately slams into his body again, melting over his skin and bones, forming a massive suit, burning with red smoke. Lightning snaps and cracks around it, and as he stands, he shatters the ground around him. He gains a new weapon, a spear, enhanced by crackling electricity. The reflection of his inner self, this is Chikara's greatest power.

The armor itself is a set of plate comprised entirely of spiritual particles. It is hardened against most attacks, being a strong representation of Chikara's body, and more to the point, his soul. It is a physical manifestation of his desire to protect others, to be the bastion they can fall back on when the day is dark.

Supernatural Strength, Durability, and Enhanced Speed: In Joushou, the limitations of his body and soul have been completely ignored. They were left at the wayside long ago, and it doesn't look like they'll be picked up any time soon. In Joushou, his body had large muscles, and they continue to grow here. He becomes filled with even more energy, the lightning crackling through his form while enhancing his already impressive physical prowess. Now, however, circumstances have changed: his armor is practically weightless, and his body is not as heavy as it was before, becoming comprised partially of pure energy. He cannot truly become a mountain of muscle and mass, so Zenou does him the favor of compressing his body, turning the Sugiuran knight into a lean and dextrous opponent. His reflexes, and indeed, overall agility become improved several times over.

Additionally, his new armor has become a serious threat to those who would wish harm upon him. He shines like a star, letting his allies know that help is on the way, and his enemies know that their reckoning is nigh. It is intensely bright, blowing away zones of darkness in the area, leaving the battlefield illuminated like the scene in his dreams. While he sheds this light, he becomes able to perform acts of retribution when struck. He sends sacred motes of light back at his foes, comprised of the same energy that was used to attack him. This ability is strikingly similar to the radiant bolts he is able to send off in Joushou, sharing the same appearance, and the same effects.

Angelic Flight: While in Joushou, Chikara was mostly limited to the ground. This limitation is removed in Zenou: he gains the ability to fly. Pure white wings sprout from his armor, granting him the ability to maneuver within three dimensions. This ability is always active, enabling him to maneuver just as quickly in the air as he could move on the ground, if not faster. If he gains other ways to increase his speed, they carry over here.

Sacred Crusader: While in Zenou, Chikara is able to channel energy into his weapon. He becomes able to channel spells through it, casting the desired effect and manifesting it within the spear. He can only channel spells into one weapon at a time, however. Additionally, even if the spell normally affects an area, it will only affect the target. When he makes a successful hit on his enemy with a spell prepared, Chikara discharges the spell, affecting the target as though he had prepared and cast it normally. He can also sacrifice energy as a reaction to damage, in order to resist the damage dealt to him. It depends entirely on the level of the spell Chikara is sacrificing, however, and depending on the level of energy expended, there may be a massive change, or none at all.

VII. Kyuu Kyou (仇供; lit. Pledged Revenge)

(You must have at least have Advance in your Release Skill before gaining this release state. If not leave this striked out or remove this section all together)

» Kyuu Kyou Appearance (What does your Sugiuran look like during Kyuu Kyou Release?)

» Kyuu Kyou Abilities (What abilities does your Sugiuran gain, or approve in during this release?)



VIII. Skill Sheets


Soldier Skill Sheet
  • Sugiura Magic: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Mystic Eyes: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Martial Arts: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Release Control: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



IX. Roleplay Sample


» Role Play Sample:

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Thu Oct 15, 2015 7:46 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus: N/A


Comments/Notes: Before I continue checking this character I want to make something very clear. Sugiurans do not have chi, Chi is found within Chi humans, if you by chance checked out the most recent sugiurans you would be looking at Aceldama and Sagumi's child which are half breeds between Sugiurans and Chi humans. I cannot approve this app until this is changed.

Also there was no reason to bump the thread it's rather rude and is against our rules.
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Thu Oct 15, 2015 7:47 pm

I meant something more along the lines of reiatsu, but I'll get on that right away. Also, the bump was made since it was on second page, but I apologize. I'll remove it. I cannot remove it.
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Fri Oct 16, 2015 7:31 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus: N/A


Comments/Notes: Okie Dokie, Here are a few things I noticed while reading.
Astrodeath wrote:
Origin: Chikara's Origin is Force. It defines who he his. Anything that doesn't surrender on the first blow, he hits even harder on the second, then again on the third, and fourth, and fifth. This ability will continue to stack up, until eventually he could lay a finger on a building, then shatter it completely.

Origins aren't meant to be powers at all, they are just a statement of what represents your character. If you were to move this power elsewhere you'd need to put limits on this. This is way too undescribed and a bit over powered if all it takes is for him to hit something again and get stronger. Right now my main concern with this is that Origins aren't powers, they represent your character.

Astrodeath wrote:
Guardian Beast: Chikara's Guardian Beast, Kyoryu, is depicted as a jet-black being. Descriptions of him include claws as large as buildings, and blue veins that are visible from deep within his skin.

The creature itself is massive. It easily dwarfs a castle standing at its full height, but can lower itself to the ground and crawl like a worm would. Dragging its nails along the earth leaves deep indentations, and is more than enough to upset the balance of nature in a small area.

The back of Kyoryu is lined with black spines, razor sharp to the touch. It's said pricking your finger on his spine will grant you great power, but at the cost of your soul. It is also said that the number of spines on Kyoryu's back is the amount of people that have pricked their finger on him.

This is fine and all, but will you be using your guardian beast to fight in battles with you? as a physical thing? or is it only spiritual with your character?

Astrodeath wrote:
Enhanced Strength: Enhanced strength is the first of Chikara's enhancements in Joushou, of there being three. In this form, his strength increased by a extraordinary amount, becoming able to pick up something like standard size cars and throw them with great accuracy. His muscles ripple underneath his armor, although a good part of Chikara's strength is devoted to carrying his massive armor. Should it be removed, however, he could easily be seen to be at the pinnacle of brawn and able to out-lift several people with one hand. In Joushou, he can be seen carrying up to 2700 pounds with relative ease, which is his limit. By using extreme effort, he can lift around 5400 pounds, dramatically reducing his speed, and can drag about 13,500 pounds, which cuts his speed in half. Thanks to this level of strength, Chikara can jump about thirteen feet into the air, provided he gets a running start.

Enhanced Speed: Enhanced speed is the second of Chikara's passive increases, and he becomes able to dead run at around 300 miles per hour for a long duration. He reserves this maximum speed (in Joushou, at least) for when the situation desperately calls for it, since that level of speed increases considerably the amount of strain put on Chikara's body.

Enhanced Durability: If Strength and Speed were increased, it only makes sense for Durability to be upgrades as well. While in Joushou, Chikara has dampened pain receptors. This is because of his natural Force manipulation essentially pressuring those chemicals in his brain, not allowing them to return to the brain and report.

In addition to this, his armor deflects much of the damage that he would take. He can easily take multiple Cero-level attacks head-on or even a tank shell, and come out otherwise unaffected. Underneath the armor, he possesses skin which is hard as stone, and this serves as a secondary line of defense for attacks that penetrate his armor. In Joushou, Chikara becomes something of a berserk fighter, and can easily shrug off attacks that lesser men would fail to absorb.

This would a perfectly fine ability if you didn't get buffed on both your durability and your speed at the same time, especially since Joushou is supposed to be 25% percent of her character's power, like with most abilities are. If anything I'd stick with one of two of your buffs for the first release, so it's up to you which ones you'd want to keep.

Also for most cases when people buff their speed they will normally say that it will buff their skill up one extra tier stopping at master. The speed in which you threw in right away is a 1 tier for reference.

As for your durability, it's the same problem with what I had with the strength you literality took everything and said he is overall buffed. something we don't really do on site, nor do we do with the first release. In your description you are also confusing durability with pain endurance, which having strong muscles doesn't mean dulled nerves, but tomato tomahto. With stating that you are also trying to attempt to raise you pain endurance as well, meaning that we are at four different skills you want to raise with this one release.

With your armor you do have some.. very loose draw backs, and I say this nicely as I can. You literally said you can take ceros and tanks without damage on a first release, which there are many types of ceros and you didn't specify at all. Does your armor get damaged? how many hits can it take? you mention what you skin is like underneath it so I expect you thought of when you take it off. With the skin hard as stone, what kind of stone? can blades still chip it? These are the sort of things we need to know especially when powers start interacting with each other, and seeing how you are writing this like you want a higher tier, these details are incredibly important.

So to clarify so far with your first release you wanted to get speed buff, strength buff, pain endurance buff, super strong armor, and durability buff; this with only the first three abilities.

Astrodeath wrote:
Zōfuku, Amplification: A secondary ability of Chikara's Joushou is the ability to channel his reiatsu through his attacks, increasing the damage amplification of his Force ability. This is passive, requiring little enough energy on Chikara's part that the only way it's deactivated is by completely and utterly draining him of spiritual energy. This, however, is only active in his Joushou, Zenou, or Kyuu Kyou forms.

Okay, I'm assuming for this one the "force ability" is the one you used for your origin? which isn't supposed to be where abilities go. If that is the case then this shouldn't really be allowed until that is fixed, personally you are taking a poorly described ability which can be abused and with barely any limitation and giving it a second boost to continue what it does. with the one limitation of Energy in which I read the ability afterwards, can help deal with that.

Astrodeath wrote:
Idō, Transference: However, that is not the primary use of this form. It allows him to tap into Kyoryu's Reishi, which is a vast reserve compared to his own. He can't use it all at once, it's more along the lines of a faucet opened wide, but it allows him to give control of a limb that has no Reishi in it, thanks to the technique that allows him to redirect the flow of Reishi in his body, over to Kyoryu. Its main use is to surprise an attentive opponent, who would notice that when his right arm gains the power of his other three limbs, they are unable to move. Kyoryu would be able to move Chikara's limbs for him, potentially dodging a deadly attack that he wouldn't be able to avoid without his Guardian Beast's help.

It is an ability that works to its utmost potential when Kyoryu and Chikara are working in absolute tandem, with one mind and purpose. Despite their differences, this happens more often than one would think.

This one I had to read it over a couple times to understand it especially since if you have reiatsu you have reishi in your body, so the whole part of controlling a limb WITHOUT reishi makes no sense at all. I can only assumed you are talking about with your GB's reishi in it. K cool. Cool that this ability allows your GB to move your character but it has to be within the limitation of your own character's physical abilities. You can't suddenly get super speed because your GB is controlling you that's not how it works. Also how much more reishi does he have compared to you. Twice as much? three times as much? With the ability before hand it's one limitation is completely ignored because of this one. Keep that in mind.

I'll leave it at just the first release and see how things go. If you disagree with anything I said you can reply to me, or ask someone else to step in.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Sat Oct 24, 2015 6:25 am

[mod]I will be taking over this check from this point, there are a few questions towards the revision of this app that are unclear that i will be messaging you about shortly so please bare with us as we try to figure all this out here[/mod]

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Tue Oct 27, 2015 6:08 am



Application Checklist

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes:
alright though the text is hard to read i see no real problems with this and it has waited around long enough ill go ahead and give the approval on this one if peeps have problems with it feel free to hit us up if needed.
Tier: 2-5

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UPGRADED TO TIER 2-3 DUE TO AP TRANSACTION, PENDING A TRAINING THREAD

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Tue Mar 01, 2016 2:12 am

[adm]A massive PM was sent to everyone about the huge Sugiuran update and within that PM stated that they needed to be updated within a month. It has been most likely a couple months passing that to a few meaning that I will not start to move them. They should stay in inactive until they are updated to the new Sugiuran standards. If you have yet to read their upgrade you can read it here. If you'd like a link to their templates then just proceed to here. If you wished to apply for your origin reserves/claims(after hey are approved and updated) than move onto here. If you wished to join the ranks of their hierarchy, meaning civilian as well, it can be found here.[/adm]

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Chikara Seigyoki [APPROVED, 2-5] {REVAMPED FOR SUGIURA UPDATE}   Sat Jul 30, 2016 12:03 am

Moving to Unchecked for rechecking now that the member has returned.

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