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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Aluk'suul [APPROVED 4-2+]   Thu Jun 12, 2014 4:07 pm




- Name: Aluk'suul
- Titles: The Seeker of all Knowledge.
- Gender: Male
- Age Of Death: 15
- Appearance Age: 30
- Age: 200
- Affiliation/Rank: Rouge

- Appearance Description:
Aluk'suul is basically a giant eyeball that has been animated. His hollow mask takes up most of his body. he has two smaller eyes above his large cat-like purple eye. Each of his smaller eyes are 2 feet in diameter, are purple, and cat-like as well. The smaller eyes are on the upper-left and right sides of his larger eye which is 10 feet in diameter. His mask, is tan-white in color, and extends to each of his three tentacles, like plated armor. Each of his tentacles are 15 feet in length. Each of his tentacles are purple in color and are covered by a purple bone armor, signalling that his entire body is covered in a exoskeleton, with his mask being the main part of it.

His hollow hole is behind his larger eye extending from the posterior side of his body to the inferior side. Each of his tentacles are extremely flexible and can extend and retract at his complete will. Often times, purple electricity can be seen shooting out of the tips of his tentacles, but the electricity is being used to levitate himself off the ground.

- Appearance Picture:
http://www.incgamers.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/league-of-legends-velkoz.jpg
http://ddragon.leagueoflegends.com/cdn/img/champion/splash/Velkoz_0.jpg
(Note: they are not perfect pictures, lose the middle eye for a general appearance)

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- Personality:

Aluk’suul is a very private hollow. He is rarely seen talking to anyone. He prefers to be completely alone, unless he is hunting for the knowledge of others. Some people might consider, Aluk’suul as completely mute due to the fact that he rarely speaks. The only time he speaks is to force people to surrender to him, so he may rape their minds and collect knowledge from them. He does not have any sense of humor of any sort. He does not laugh. Most people call him emotionless for a reason. He does not show emotions unless someone pisses him off greatly. Anger and pleasure are the only two emotions he truly shows. Anger when someone pisses him off by pressing his buttons, which are being complete buffoons, insulting his quest for knowledge, calling him a bookwormish freak, are among some of his buttons. He only shows the emotion of pleasure is when he is absorbing knowledge from people.

He rarely moves fast, preferring to simply glide along while he searches for his next prey. He is constantly on the move, not liking to be in one place for too long. He likes to feel the wind on his face while he roams the desert of Hueco Mundo. He enjoys the thrills of the hunt for knowledge. He will do anything for knowledge’s sake even burn down a library if it had wrong information in its books. He will never tolerate buffoonery or idiots who only like to fight. He sees them below his time and energy to deal with. If he finds a buffoon that just wants to fight him for nothing in return, Aluk’suul will simply annihilate the buffoon with everything he has so he does not prolong the fight. Aluk’suul rarely fights for his own pleasure, unless it was a fight to gain knowledge of some sort.

Aluk’suul does not understand most of the intricacies of social interactions; he rarely if ever would want to simply talk to someone simply just to talk. He rather explores ancient ruins or read an old dusty book, than talk to someone. He is a loner in the extreme; he rarely will ever team up with someone unless there was a benefit for him aside from simply surviving the fight against the powerful person. Aluk’suul does not like fighting all that much, but he will if the person he wants to copy knowledge from does not allow him to rape their mind, for the aforementioned knowledge. Aluk’suul if he needs to speak, speaks only large words unless talking to an extremely stupid buffoon, where he will talk slowly and in simple one syllable words, simply to insult them.


- Likes: Gaining Knowledge, Submissive People, Smart People, Forbidden Knowledge, Division 12 of the Shinigami Forces, Deserts, Oceans, Plains

- Dislikes: Stupid People, Fighting, Stubborn People, those who try and stop him, ignorance, terrain that is cluttered, Division 11 of the Shinigami Forces

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- Hollow type: Adjuchas

- Hollow Power:

Cero: Aluk'suul, fires purple beams directly in front of himself, collecting energy into a purple ball in front of himself, from each of his three tentacles. Once he has enough energy gathered he fires a beam from his large eye into the ball and firing a larger beam of purple energy at his target.

Garganta: Aluk'suul raises his posterior tentacle, before firing a small purple beam into the sky opening up the familiar rift in space and time to the human realm. He would than fly into the hole to traverse the dimensions to and back from the human realm.

Trampa: Aluk'suul must physically and spiritually weaken a foe before using this technique. Aluk'suul points his two anterior tentacles at the intended target before firing purple energy at the target to ensnare them. Once the purple energy has touched the target, the energy morphs into a slimy substance that wraps around and sticks to the target's arms and legs effectively ensnaring them on the spot. As the target struggles the restraints tighten around them slowly, causing pain and constricting blood vessels, limiting the circulation of blood through the target and limiting blood-flow to the brain, potentially knocking them unconscious. This makes the target easy pickings, for Aluk'suul's Absorcion technique. Once finished with them, Aluk'suul will fire a small beam to release the target from their bindings, before heading off on his merry way. This ability was designed to last no more than 5 posts. The person can break out of this ability if they have a higher willpower than Aluk'suul and a equal or higher strength than Aluk'suul's willpower/determination. They can use stepping techniques while Trampa is upon them, but they would not get far.

Absorcion: This technique cannot be used until Trampa is in effect upon the target. This technique can only be used once in a thread. This technique can only absorb the knowledge of a single technique. If the technique is not hollow related, or cannot be adapted to be used in his power-set, he will not be able to use it. He will however have the knowledge of how it is used, and possibly would be able to negate it. He will only be able to adapt, weaker racial techniques for his use(Kido spells under number 10, and others of equal strength). Aluk'suul uses this technique, by putting his posterior tentacle behind the target's head, his anterior tentacles on the right and left sides of the target's head, before firing into the head, harmless beams into the target's head. By doing so, Aluk'suul is transforming all of the person's knowledge into energy. Once the knowledge is energy, he will use his single large eye to draw the energy into his eye. Once the energy is within the eye, he transforms the energy once more back into data where he processes the data. The target will still retain the knowledge absorbed due to Aluk'suul, copying the data.

Levitación: Aluk'suul's passive ability. Aluk'suul is able to levitate easily, and for prolonged periods of time. For the most part, he cannot levitate more than 5 meters unless he uses his tentacles to fire beams into the ground to propel him higher, as such the case of his usage of the Garganta. Once the beams of energy dissipate he will fall back to the ground striking it with a lot of force and will be unable to levitate again for three posts. Other than that, he would be able to levitate forever since that is his main mode of transportation. He however at his current level, will not be able to use any sort of stepping technique to move to a different location instantaneously. He uses the purple electricity that is expelled by his tentacles regularly and at random intervals to levitate and propel himself across the landscape.

Muerte Altanero: The Muerte Altanero are simply balls of energy that Aluk'suul fire from his two smaller eyes, at what ever he is looking at. These balls have three times the power of Bala. They cannot be used constantly however because that would exhaust Aluk'suul extremely quickly. The Pelota Muerte move half the speed of Bala due to how much power they have. Once one of the Pelota Muerte hit something, they go into the object that they hit. After 2 posts the Pelota Muerte inside the object explodes, unless Aluk'suul is defeated, or the person is able to expel the energy contained within the area, by hitting Aluk'suul to return the energy to him.

Rebanadora: The Rebanadora, is simply a beam of energy that Aluk'suul uses to cut into something. The beams are made for piercing and cutting through extremely tough materials. The beams are fired out of Aluk'suul's tentacles, in a straight line. The most they can extend from the tentacles are 15 meters. Once they reach that point, they do not extend any longer. Aluk'suul must keep up a constant stream of his reiryoku to keep the purple beam of energy from dissipating before he can use it to do what he wants. This ability is extremely tiring for him, especially if he forms three Rebanadora at the same time, one for each of his three tentacles. The shorter the beams the longer he can use them. He preferably likes to use the beams at a mere meter instead of the 15 meters maximum limit for them. If he were to use three of the 15 meter ones he would be completely exhausted after a single post. But using only one of the meter length ones could last for no more than 9 posts if he only uses that meter length Rebanadora.

Rastreador: The Rastreador, is a ability that Aluk'suul uses to scan his opponents with his singular large eye. He accomplishes this by focusing the eye on the opponent, before shooting a beam at them. This beam is completely harmless to the opponent. When the beam hits them, it slowly spreads over their entire body, before focusing back to the site where it connected. It is than shot back to Aluk'suul's singular large eye. Once the beam connects to the eye, it goes straight to Aluk'suul's brain to be analyzed. This beam of energy tells Aluk'suul the opponent's physical abilities, like based off their muscles he would know how strong they are, how much agility they have, and how durable they are. This ability does not however measure the opponent's reishi level, their control over their reishi, or how skilled they are in their abilities.

- Weapons: None

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- Background:

Aluk’suul while he was a human would be what was known as a complete and utter know-it-all nerdy geek. While he was alive his name was, known as Robert McKinley, he lived in London, England one hundred and eighty-five years ago, before his death. He was a lonely teenager, never fitting in with anyone due to him knowing more than most of his classmates. He was usually seen walking around the city, with huge books, or down the halls of the private academy, with a single huge book which he would read after he had completed his school and homework during class. His two goals in life were to become a world renowned physicist, and to gain as much knowledge as he could during his lifetime.

But, sadly tragedy struck him, on his 15th birthday. He received a gift certificate to one of the many bookstores in London. He never carried pocket money around so he decided to walk to the bookstore, after his birthday party ended. While he was walking towards the far side of town, they struck. It was an initiation to a regular human gang. Robert was dragged into an alley-way by the wannabe thugs, who cut an extremely long strip of his flesh off of his right forearm to prove that they did in fact kill someone. They skinned his forearm while he was still alive. No one came to help, Robert. No one bothered to lift a single finger to help the poor lad. The leader of the wannabes pulled out a pistol and placed it at Robert’s head. He fired it while the barrel was against Robert’s temporal plate, splattering his brain all over the pavement.

They then tied the body with thick rope, before dragging the body across the street. They tied the ropes to cinder-blocks before tossing the lifeless lad into the Thames River, never to be seen again in the murky depths of the muddy and polluted river. His family searched, and searched but they never found him. His funeral was held 5 years later, without a body. They gave up on Robert. Soon enough Robert was forgotten by everyone of the living. Robert McKinley was no more.

Robert became a plus immediately after his death. He looked around and saw the wannabes drop his still warm corpse into the river. He walked towards his domicile and tried to get someone’s attention that he was dead. Sadly, however none of his family were spiritually attuned enough to see the dead. Robert soon gave into despair when he saw them try to look for him, but they never found anything for 5 years. At his own funeral, Robert gave up hope that his family would be happy once more. His chain of fate completely devoured himself and turned him into the hollow that would soon be known as Aluk’suul.

When he became a hollow, Robert was like most hollows. He was feral and wanted nothing more than to sink his teeth into the flesh of humans. Whenever he came across a plus, he would slowly devour it. He still had an instinct, a strange one, an instinct to gain knowledge. He started to be overcome by the instinct to gain knowledge, so he started to only eat the heads of the pluses he found. Slowly adapting his hollow form to absorb the knowledge of those he ate.

As the years passed, he became hungrier and hungrier for knowledge, which brought him to a horde of Menos devouring each other. The hunger was too great to deny and he started to devour the Menos. Aluk’suul had become a Menos and was drawn to the horde. The entire horde soon after 100 years, fused together to become a Gillian-class Menos Grande. But something went wrong with the Gillian. It had a mask with three eyes, one way bigger than the other two. It appeared that through the feeding frenzy, Aluk’suul absorbed all of the knowledge and brain power of all of the Menos and became the dominate personality. He started to immediately devour the other Gillians in the area, never staying in a single place for long.

Aluk’suul devoured everything he came across in his hunt for knowledge. He had an instinct that told him that if he devoured enough Gillians and gained their knowledge he would, be able to evolve further, that he would be able to gain even more knowledge than before. Aluk’suul surrendered himself to the instinct and completely devoured every single Gillian that he had come across leaving behind a mass of lifeless corpses with no heads. The corpses vanished as he walked away from them.

Something started happening exactly 85 years after he had become a Gillian. He started to shrink. His body started to transform into an Adjuchas. He was not shocked at the transformation. When he had completely transformed he dubbed himself Aluk’suul, before rocketing himself through the ceiling of the Menos Forest to the desert above. When Aluk’suul erupted from the sands of the vast desert, he came across 3 Adjuchas, who proceeded to taunt the round one with the 3 tentacles. Aluk’suul followed his instincts and fired a beam of energy at the Adjuchas to weaken them, before trapping them in a strange and slimy substance before absorbing their knowledge into himself.

Once Aluk’suul had finished absorbing their knowledge, he felt a instinct that if he continued to absorb the knowledge of everything he came across he would not devolve back into a Gillian and lose himself. He knew he would never turn back. He released the Adjuchas before propelling himself across the landscape towards the nearest hollow village where his quest for all knowledge would begin…
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General Skills
  • Durability:Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Acid Skill: Beginner
  • Garganta : Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Adept
  • Regeneration: Beginner


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Aluk'suul [APPROVED 4-2+]   Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:25 am


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There's not much to fix than a few, really. Now, let's get this started, shall we?
@Nirx wrote:
Trampa: Aluk'suul must physically and spiritually weaken a foe before using this technique. Aluk'suul points his two anterior tentacles at the intended target before firing purple energy at the target to ensnare them. Once the purple energy has touched the target, the energy morphs into a slimy substance that wraps around and sticks to the target's arms and legs effectively ensnaring them on the spot. As the target struggles the restraints tighten around them slowly, causing pain and constricting blood vessels, limiting the circulation of blood through the target and limiting blood-flow to the brain, potentially knocking them unconcious. This makes the target easy pickings, for Aluk'suul's Absorcion technique. Once finished with them, Aluk'suul will fire a small beam to release the target from their bindings, before heading off on his merry way.
How long does this ability lasts after weakening its enemy both physically and spiritually? Can they fight back with willpower? Is there any method to escape or any way to fight back when they are in their weakened state?

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Rebanadora: The Rebanadora, is simply a beam of energy that Aluk'suul uses to cut into something. The beams are made for piercing and cutting through extremely tough materials. The beams are fired out of Aluk'suul's tentacles, in a straight line. The most they can extend from the tentacles are 15 meters. Once they reach that point, they do not extend any longer. Aluk'suul must keep up a constant stream of his reiryoku to keep the purple beam of energy from dissipating before he can use it to do what he wants. This ability is extremely tiring for him, especially if he forms three Rebanadora at the same time, one for each of his three tentacles. The shorter the beams the longer he can use them. He preferably likes to use the beams at a mere meter instead of the 15 meters maximum limit for them. If he were to use three of the 15 meter ones he would be completely exhausted after a single post. But using only one of the meter length ones could last for more than 40 posts if he only uses that meter length Rebanadora.
Everything else's fine except for 'Meter length ones could last for more than 40 posts' part. That's just too much. Cut it down to like.. 7 to 9 posts at the least.

Fix 'em and you're good to go.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Aluk'suul [APPROVED 4-2+]   Sun Jun 22, 2014 1:37 am


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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Aluk'suul [APPROVED 4-2+]   Sat Sep 06, 2014 2:31 am

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