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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Thu Jun 19, 2014 1:00 am





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» Name: Kristen Hiroshima
» Full Name: Kristen Vanessa Hiroshima
» Titles: The Demon Princess
» Age: 2,841 Years Old
» Gender: Female
» Family Members: Kade Hiroshima/Eric Zarathos(Father), Damien Zarathos(Stepfather), ???????(Mother), Alexis Kozono(Guardian), Haggis/Allyra Iramasha(Grandmother), Yuuta Rurosaki(Stepbrother), Xathis Zarathos(Uncle), Nicole Hiroshima (Family Relative)
» Affiliation/Rank: (What Group are they apart of or are they rouge?)

» True Appearance Written: Kristen has the rosy cheeked appearance of an average ordinary, teenage high school girl of age of an young demon with a height of above average 5'2" and weighing 89 lbs. She is black-haired with different hairstyles throughout time and brown eyes. Back in the demon world, she used to have long hair falling down her waist with the bangs tied behind. She had a pixie haircut by the time of the Demon/Shinigami Peace settlement. Within different dimensions, she likes to keep her bangs and hair again in a pixie cut. After her return, Kristen is slightly tanner from being out in the sun and has a different hairstyle and eye color and she wears either pink,nude or rose colored lipstick daily. Her brown eyes change to glowing crimson whenever she feeds on blood or fights with an opponent. The demon's trademark weapon is a special katana with a groove that branches out throughout the blade. Thus, when Kristen cuts her thumb on the top edge of the katana, while gripping it so as to draw blood, the specially designed grooves allow her blood to flow into the channel and become distributed throughout the katana.

» True Appearance Picture:
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» Personality: In the beginning, Kristen was a very kind/cheerful demon child always trying to make her family and friends happy. Because of he demonic past origins, She is and always will be a demon with a pure heart having no evil/vile feelings or thoughts. Kristen mostly acts like her father(Kade Hiroshima) did in the past throughout her father's actions and heroics; wanting to be that noble demon for peace. Having the Hiroshima bloodline flowing through her veins, She hates what happen to the clan and her family having some anger issues. After some events, Kristen believes that the soul reapers with the soul society are a bunch of hired killers that are both selfish and vicious in nature. She does have a little fear of spiders but it comes and goes but if there a few yucky spiders then it won't bother her much which she'll swipe them away. Like her father, Kristen sometimes enjoys finding opponents stronger or equal to her power and fighting them to see what her true potential is within battle. The self proclaimed demon princess tends to approach major situations rationally, often making crucial decisions on her own her choices and goals. Her most remarkable ability is her will to succeed, pushing herself beyond her limitations, and never giving up even when the odds are stacked against her.

Caring and Positive Family Member
Really family members are important to her, She shows the power of a demon and making good choices really the highs and lows of a being a demon. Kristen does care about family and each member of her team like a there were a part of family. She believes that a demon has a special talent which they're good or an expert at which is good thing at times really that talent could help in a battle or war. The main important reason why she cares about things is that her pure human heart is still beating. When is comes to love, Kristen sometimes is a caring and kind-hearted human. She is more down to earth helping other demons or humans in tough situation, she thinks she can understand humans more while acting like one of them in their own habitat. The demon princess does love animals and long walks in the park yet he doesn't know it must have been from hundreds of the human memories. She has both a carefree attitude with a neutral attitude about people just minding her own business and trying to be respectful.

She tries to maintain a positive outlook and often refers to gloomy or annoying people as "big meanies". Her cheerful outlook often makes a stark contrast, however, when she is sad or upset, and despite her outwardly happy exterior, she seems to carry some insecurities, particularly when it comes to her own future and what she wants to be.In short, Kristen is known to be quite clever and a skilled demon fighter but when it all over for some reason having well-manners and to be quite polite. Throughout time, She began getting fearless but at times really has a short-temper during deadly even bad situations with people she doesn't like.

» Likes: Her Family, Flowers, The Kuchiki Clan, Chinese food, Pizza, Zanpakutos, Jewelry, Diamonds + DIamond rings, Gems, Demon Artifacts that might help her cause or other demons

» Dislikes: Soul Society & The Gotei 13, Guns, Smart Alexs, Drugs
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» History: An ancient deal was made between demons and vampire demons the treaty was made with Hiroshima and the Sakuyamont family. Kade Hiroshima hated the idea but his brother Alex got him to go along with the plan an fixed marriage was created for the treaty to be permanent. Kade Hiroshima and Miyuki Sakuyamont were married as both families were united in peace within the demon world still the couple wanted the legacy between their families to grow. Kristen Hiroshima was born a year after the Hiroshima family won the demon wars within the demon world, Kade was leading the assault. Miyuki told him about the little bundle of joy still the noble demon couldn't believe it that he was going to be a father after winning one of the great demon wars still could he live life as a human being. Growing up, Kristen wanted to be so much like her dad an warrior of peace many of the demons thought this was a crazy idea but the demon child thought otherwise. She wanted the same ideals and goals like her father to live a dream where some demons could live normal lives within the demon world and the human world. It was something her father told her and has given her strength throughout her childhood "You'll have many challenges in your life you have to struggle or fight to achieve your dreams. Their is a spark of courage and determination that can ignite this power within you that can bring dreams and goals into fruition. It depends on you having both faith and hope to guide you". Those words were her fuel making the young child into a strong demon warrior one day even surpassing her father and becoming legendary.

First Impressions
She thought of her father was more of an superhero still she wanted something more like just being a hero her mother didn't believe she was ready. Kristen believed that but her father put through a series of trials to mold her into a true demon warrior it wasn't easy the trials themselves were very hard. Kristen had a some difficult times but her father helped her with her teachings in time she began surprising her family with her demon skills. But the greatest trait she had was swordsmenship it must have mentally born within the child, Kristen knew how to handle a sword leaving her father speechless. For months, Kade helped trained his daughter to become a strong fighter harness her strengths and breaking most of her weaknesses still trying to be a good demon warrior. Everything was going well and with a twist of fate, she managed to get through nine of trials now all that was left was the final trial to see how well she could actually fight. Her opponent was a demon bull, Tarvis was her final exam and he attacked the self proclaimed demon princess hard but every time the girl fell. She managed to get back up and attack it was something inside her which told her never to give up, Kristen managed to give the the demon bull a good fight. The girl managed to do a sneak attack hurting the demon bull and finally defeated the demon bull now it was the final part of the trial as the bull asked for mercy. Kristen was about to deal the final blow but she stopped saying "I will not hurt you...You show a good battle heck you might have defeated me there but the purity inside me. Told me to spare you what I believe in my heart is peace and that I strive to achieve in the world". Kade clapped his hands by his heroic standards, she passed the trials who knows this might be the new noble demon of the Hiroshima family. She didn't need to prove anything to him, Kade knew that one day she would become a true peacekeeper like her father to also honor the Hiroshima bloodline.

Throughout time, Kristen Hiroshima made a name for herself protecting innocents and stopping the forces of evil with their deadly plans helping people in need too. She carried on the tradition of what her father started hoping to become legendary.

Shadows and Organizations
Their was an uneasy truce between demon and vampire demons, Kade managed to keep the peace between both races it began as a hard process but finally the demon mad a compromise. To finally seal a truce deal, Kade made an organization dedicated in helping any races with certain and special problems through the demon world and the world of the living. Kade would become the leader of the group called the "Demon Honor Guards" but the noble demon thought their base of operations shouldn't be within the demon world. After making some deals, Kade managed to set his base of operations within the place outside of Karakura when the demon had witches so nobody to sense or track his base of operations. Kade's group thought this was needed so nobody would be smart and hurt the demons with the base. Kristen was scare at first she hated the idea living with humans and other races but after seeing what her father was dealing with the girl didn't have a choice those people seemed serious. Other races besides demons had a hard time believing that some demons were actually helping people with some problems & difficult situations, Kristen felt she could help more in her new home. Her father was leading a secret organization dedicated into doing secret and special missions for people. She and her mother tried living with the fact the special jobs was actually hurting Kade Hiroshima every time the demon completed a secret mission a demon would lose a member of his team. Kristen was really sadden because her father would come home badly beaten from special secret missions the soul society had for the noble demon nearly breaking his peaceful spirit. Kristen and her mother helped him get through some bad times within the noble demon's life helping the cause and always looking for the future. For decades, Kristen along her family were trying to show that some demons can be trusted to finally get respect from the other races to show that don't judge a book by it demon cover.

Kristen wanted to become strong like her father the idea of becoming a demon honor guard was something that was always on her mind. But her mother refused the idea, Miyuki didn't want to see her daughter get hurt at all her father at time wanted her daughter to be more independent to see if she was a true demon. However, Miyuki and Hiroshima family relatives begged Kade not to have her daughter become a demon honor guard after a bunch of nagging. Kade decided to have her daughter train to see power another way....

Dark Downfalls
The darkest day of Kade Hiroshima's life it all started when his group was becoming famous but somebody was sending a distress signal the shocking part. Kade's group was the first on the scene a bunch of people were murdered and then the soul survivor was a child as the kid told the demon what happen an unknown group known as the "Death-Dealers" cause these murders. The child then said they were hunting for piece of the Second Necronomicon; Kade didn't understand this the original book was lost in his memory. Before dying the child talked about hunting demon families. A member of the Death-Dealers was sent into the soul society to hunt down the members of the noble demon's family. The other members of Death-Dealers devised a plot against Kade Hiroshima framing the noble demon for many crimes of what the Death-Dealers committed. Kristen and her mother were returning from the Karakura town and then after they settled down back their home the assassin made his move attacking both demons they tried fighting the assailant. But the assassin pulled out a knife killing Miyuki and then the bastard attacked Kristen with the knife and nearly killed her until somebody saved her from the assassin. Kristen was wounded but someone managed to leave a false body making the demons believed both wife and daughter were killed. Kristen was unconscious and transported into a medical facility where she receive medical care but the doctors said she was in a long term coma.

But Kade Hiroshima's life was ruined but before leaving back into the demon world his army found information about the Death-Dealers and their leader. Kade had a name to the bastard who ordered the assassin who murdered his wife and daughter...Cain Iramasha the leader of the Death Dealers who was the father of Sid iramasha.

Return

Years later, A vizard doctor serving at Karakura Hospital, Lily Ancientos was helping another patient within the hospital at the time but someone was awakening. Kristen was coming out of her coma as one of her best friends within the demon world told the demon princess what happened with her father. She was devastated but deep down, Kristen knew her father wasn't truly gone maybe someway the girl could put her daddy out of the darkness. From her reports, Kristen found her Kade Hiroshima descended down into darkness taking a new name for himself after his return from death, Eric Zarathos was his name now. But she found out her father killed the person responsible for trying to ruin him also murdering her mother in one of the most heinous deaths in the known world. Kristen Hiroshima started living within Karakura town hoping to make a difference and to achieve two dreams to bring peace to the world and ultimately to save her father.
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» Natural Abilities:
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» Unique Abilities: Augmented High Spiritual Pressure: Her father had her a hard training regiment to make her control the spiritual pressure inside her body to make her powers stronger. The demon's powers diminish over time to the point of where she never knew his spiritual pressure was under lock and key. After her regeneration process, Kristen's spiritual pressure shot up like a burning volcano giving her a grand amount of spiritual power for fighting or helping others. From her mother teachings, She learned how control & restraint the spiritual energies inside her body giving enemies or rivals a fighting chance. She does love fighting at half or full power when fighting stronger enemies as she got older the woman managed to spare some spiritual energy when she's out of gas. In truth, Kade Hiroshima actually placed an ancient power with the demon child which her daughter has complete control of granting her spiritual pressure.

Enhanced Demon Strength: Through her mother training, Kristen was ale to her demon strength stronger because of this her physical strength is enhanced capable of doing many things. She has proven herself time and time that he was a strong demon warrior really she used her strength to survive this long down in the demon world. Kristen can upturn huge portions of rock floor with a single strike at the ground within mere minutes. In her shifter state, her strength is decrease well split in half to throw people off and then when the time unleash her true strength on an enemy. She is on of many strong demons within the demon world also an example of her strength. She could hurt even kill a hollow with her bare hands or some hard strikes hand that how strong the demon is. Kristen able to do a number of things which a normal demon wouldn't do. She always believes "the only thing to defeat power is more power." Like her father...

Enhanced Demon Speed: Kristen's speed and reflexes have been greatly enhanced to the point where the female demon princess can move somewhat faster. Yet her agility and reflexes to dodge some/few oncoming attacks that have do her harm. Kristen is shown to used her quick speeds along with her reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. She can actually match with his enemy's speed power like vice captain's shunpo and arrancar's sonido abilities. In order of this, Kristen must be focus on that target thinking of nothing else but seek and destroy....her fast-like running speed to rush up to an enemy's speed catching up to it.

Trained Demon Fighter: Even though, Kristen possesses a whole lot of sword skills in swordsmanship but from her years within the demon world. Kristen has much of demonic brawler style from the fights and killings within the demon world. After her revival, Kristen studied even learned various skills from the human race turning her more fierce and demonic combatant in battle. With her brute strength, Kristen has been to known as full contact demon assassin not only using strength but focus and perhaps some accuracy with her strikes.

Demon Swordsmen Specialist: She was actually born with the knowledge of using any kind of sword weapons handling them in battle. Kristen gained knowledge of shinigami and basic skills and mastered skills of how shinigami used their zanpakutos. This was all due Kristen passing the ten trials, her overall skill has been shown to be a same as a shinigami's captain of perhaps a vizard skills of swordsmenship. Kristen is master swordsmen but still looking to an be an expert at this ability. Skill a stronger person can defeat her at battle which can be troublesome for her. In her transformed states, Kristen learned many techniques of a swordsmen which can be used in a fight which can be useful using any sword weapons during a fight. Kristen is right handed fighter when using blade but have difficulty using her left hand while holding a sword if the right hand is damage. She hopes of fighting or become great like some grand masters like Ichigo Kurosaki, Tia Harribel or Byakuya Kuchiki someday.

Demon-Katana Weapon Creation
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Kristen's original sword was a regular katana she wanted a better weapon something that could handle like a shinigami's Zanpakutō. Through blacksmithing, and her magic, She made a complete weapon fused different sort of metals together to form the unique blade. Her parents took her some lava pits to remake the weapon to give a new kind of sword shape for a stronger slash attack. It is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single edged blade, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. The sword can use the affinity of hell to make the weapon stronger for deadlier cuts and powerful slashes. Also the weapon can use another ability the art of magic as the blade will glow a different color for elemental slashes/blasts from the blade itself. However, it has the same strengths and weaknesses like a sealed Zanpakutō the weapon can take a lot of punishment from weapons and attacks from enemies.

Crimson Red Lightning Claw: A red claw slash attack. When her claws started glowing from her fingers they'll extend giving off an lightning red energy slash attack which weak but fast-like attack but it causing damage. It can be blocked by armor or strong-like defense. Kristen can use this every 2 posts and has the similiar strength to bala but doubled.

Dark Fire Manipulation Powers: From accepting her new powers, Kristen has been given unique ability from her burning dark fire class powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with burning dark fire energy giving much more deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancement by some witches and other demons. Kristen can mostly control this dark flame power creating attacks and defenses from her powers, creating weapons, attacks and defenses with her burning dark flame powers. When using dark flame power, Kristen's arms can transform taking on a different characteristic when using dark flame weapons or dark fire attacks which she can use 8 times. For crafting weapons, Kristen can make flame swords, daggers which can be 7-8 inches which can give a burning sensation when used against enemies. Also Kristen's burning dark fire attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Kristen's defensive powers can be weaken if her burning dark flame weapons are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength. When firing projectiles the girl can fire only 7 seven projectiles
[She can this power only about 8 times and she must what she wants because it can drain little of her spiritual pressure but she'll feel it]

Punisher Spiral Beam: The technique is a strong spiral laser beam to hurt her enemies.The move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the demon energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, the attacker shouts the name of the attack and two thin energy beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight beam. The resulting beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked to dodge easy enough if the enemy had faster speed or great defense.
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»Full Power State Appearance:
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» Full Power State Benefits: Augmented Demon Strength: Kristen's physical strength has been augmented due to dark flame powers feeding upon the hot fire to make her strong. Many strong attacks can hurt her but they wouldn't have power of defeating her, Kristen can actually block some attacks depending on the enemy attack's strength. She can actually block attacks depending on their strength. Kristen able to greatly overpower/withstand an person's bankai with her hand or one/two punches yet it hurts when does but thanks to new superb strength it doesn't hurt as long. Other attacks can prove to be a problem which the female demon princess will have to full contact with her raw demonic strength perhaps hurting/weakening attacks or techniques. Even with her demonic's strength, Kristen can actually punch a vasto or an espada hard in the face. With maximum force behind it, she's able to break through the walls to destroy buildings and structures.

Augmented Demon Speed: Kristen's speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented to the point where the female demon princess can move somewhat faster. Yet her agility and reflexes to dodge many oncoming attacks that have do her harm. Kristen is shown to used her quick speeds along with her fast reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. She can actually match with his enemy's speed power like vice captain's shunpo and arrancar's sonido abilities. In order of this, Kristen must be focus on that target thinking of nothing else but seek and destroy....her fast-like running speed to rush up to an enemy's speed catching up to it quickly as she can.

Augmented Endurance: Because of the demon's willpower, The new noble demon has an augmented high resistance to damage and damaging techniques. Kristen can take an onslaught of vicious attacks and still get back to her feet mostly because of the Death Energy's spirit that brews inside of her. The will of no surrender engulfs her empowering the female demon hearing whispers within her mind "Stand up and Fight". The demonic princess can burned, chilled, poisoned, paralyzed or blown apart or whatever but the will to keep going will still push her to continue. Even through her endurance strength is very strong the female demon known to have some battle scars, injuries, harsh wounds and missing limbs so it isn't that invincible.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Demon-Katana Weapon Creation
Spoiler:
 
Kristen's original sword was a regular katana she wanted a better weapon something that could handle like a shinigami's Zanpakutō. Through blacksmithing, and her magic, She made a complete weapon fused different sort of metals together to form the unique blade. Her parents took her some lava pits to remake the weapon to give a new kind of sword shape for a stronger slash attack. It is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single edged blade, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. The sword can use the affinity of hell to make the weapon stronger for deadlier cuts and powerful slashes. Also the weapon can use another ability the art of magic as the blade will glow a different color for elemental slashes/blasts from the blade itself. However, it has the same strengths and weaknesses like a shikai Zanpakutō the weapon can take a lot of punishment from weapons and attacks from enemies.

Augmented Crimson Red Lightning Claw: An augmented version to Crimson Red Lightning Claw which her hand will actually grow as with her claws. The female demon's claws will start turning dark grey unleashing energy from each claw tip. When delivered darker and augmented supreme energy slash faster and stronger then the original. Stronger enemies will feel the pain of the attack while weaker opponents will have their skin rip off from the demonic claws of the demon princess.

Dark Fire Manipulation Powers: From accepting her new powers, Kristen has been given unique ability from her burning dark fire class powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with burning dark fire energy giving much more deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancement by some witches and other demons. Kristen can mostly control this dark flame power creating attacks and defenses from her powers, creating weapons, attacks and defenses with her burning dark flame powers. When using dark flame power, Kristen's arms can transform taking on a different characteristic when using dark flame weapons or dark fire attacks which she can use 8 times. For crafting weapons, Kristen can make flame swords, daggers which can be 7-8 inches which can give a burning sensation when used against enemies. Also Kristen's burning dark fire attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Kristen's defensive powers can be weaken if her burning dark flame weapons are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength. When using the dark fire for defensive purposes when creating shield or barriers they would only last for about 3-4 posts because they drain small amounts of spiritual pressure. To stabilize the barrier it draws energy from to make to strength of the barrier stronger the more energy she places into the stronger the barrier. For weapons, Kristen can only create two weapons at a time because she only has two hands the other reason is make to weapon chosen. Also it take a lot of energy to make the flame weapon strong enough to handle other weapons. When firing projectiles the girl can fire only 6 seven projectiles. [She can this power only about 6 times and she must what she wants because it can drain little of her spiritual pressure but she'll feel it]

Death Energy

DE Class: Unknown

DE Powers: Lilith's Dark Hero Persona: The awakening of dark hero; This only happens when Kristen Hiroshima is at near death or having the complete desire of defeating her enemy. Kristen's mind will split in half as a darker being will emerge helping her defeat her enemies or any other problem. Kristen's DE Field will emit an a large amount demonic energy as her new persona will emerge all of her dark hero desires and mad rage of darkness will rise. In short, Kristen's personality will change from Pure Hearted to Chaos Neutral. While in this state, Lilith Waldgrave which is Kristen's darker hero side will take over also enhancing Kristen's powers and abilities by 70% percent making them stronger. Lilith will unleash a violent war-cry which the black power bulking up the demon princess muscles making the demon stronger. When Lilith takes over, Kristen's eyes will be completely dark red meaning the demon princess becomes the darker vigilante. However, This has a drawback if the person can 100% really convince Lilith about something; Kristen's dark energy will disappear. Returning, Kristen back to normal...

Breakdown:

Semi Immortal:

DE Merge Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

DE Merge Powers:

Berserk State Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

Berserk Enhancements:

Berserk Details:

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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


DE Control
  • Semi-Immortal Capacity: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Breakdown Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Necromancy Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • DE Barrier: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



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» History: The thought to be dead daughter of Kade Hiroshima and Miyuki Asthavon it was said through the reports that she died along her mother. Somehow, Kristen survived the massacre even though the demon princess lost a lot of blood after being slashed by an iramasha assassin. It said at near death a person's life flash before their very eyes, Kristen Hiroshima started remembering everything about her past thinking it was the end. She was born in secret nobody knows what happen but an Hiroshima and an Asthavon made an agreement and then two members of that family made love an had a baby. Kristen was born after that really her father wanted to raise her within the demon world but her mother didn't want her daughter to become a fighter like her father. Miyuki thought this was too early to train the young demon yet she wanted to raise her like a human daughter yet her father agreed to this decision. Throughout her father's success of becoming a noble demon, Kristen wanted to become completely like her father a noble demon of purity and peace fighting for a worthy cause. After hearing stories of her father's success, Kristen started training on her own she wanted to become a stronger demon with an important goal the will to succeed. Some of the other demons thought Kade was a bad example for a role model but the girl had something she wanted to prove to herself to make it on her own.
FOR NOW, i am not sure if this is allowed yet or not, but for now, i would deny and ask you to redo the history, for it being the child a Hiroshima and an Asthavon, you may have to discuss about this fact with Frost about a member of an Asthavon mating with Kade Hiroshima wihout any evidence provided nor was there any thread, or any proof that such Asthavon existed, additionally, because it is a royal and a big family that has a huge influence in the Demon World, you may need someone like Frost to approve about it. And that goes the same for the 'agreement'. Otherwise, because of the reasons that the Royal Asthavon family is a major family, until you are given an approval from Frost about such things for Kristen of being a child of both an Asthavon and Hiroshima, the history will be temporarily DENIED as of now.

Deal about the history first or get a permission from Frost, then i'll go further into checking it.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Fri Jun 20, 2014 12:03 pm

The history been re-changed she isn't of the Asthavon family.
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:02 pm


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With the history fixed, its time to get your powers sorted out.

@Kade wrote:
Demon-Katana Weapon Creation: Kristen actually had to sacrifice her original unholy weapon creation power of 200,000 weapons in order to make one powerful weapon. With one hand of her wave of her hand the demon can create a katana weapon. The weapon stands as a unique katana The blade won't rust because of 2,000 souls used to create it. The cast metal dragon accent is expertly placed at the throat of the shaft and is the heart of the dark allure of the katana. The weapon itself had it own zoa koa which fire energy attacks with same strength as cero or grand rey cero. The weapon signature attack is called Final Breath which eight ball of magic form circle around producing condensed energy from each ball. The ball combined at the tip of blade unleashing and fire energy beam which can hurt or damage an opponent. Yet the weapon can be destroyed from too many fucking strong attacks.
Yeahnah. Having its own Za Koa and firing energy blasts that is the same as a Cero or a Gran Rey, a huge hint of telling me that you can spam these blasts indefinitely and not even using Kristen's Za Koa at all. I am going to throughoutly tell you to fix this entire thing. Sure, for it to store its own Za Koa, how much Za Koa can it store and how many times can she fire them until it runs out? Please, don't give it something like 'It has so much Za Koa energy inside of it that it would take forever to run out' cliche'. Give something relevant, make its attacks limited, make it something that is stoppable.

Final Breath, how powerful is it? Does it have a charging time? Is it an instanteneous attack? Is there any counter against it such as if a character is a tough durability in Advanced, can the beam itself scratch him or leave a burn, or if a character has a Master strength, can he or she cut through it with sheer force? Make relevant because the firepower of this weapon is overpowered with how you describe it.

How tough is it? What ye' mean by 'strong attacks'? A strike from Kenpachi's sword or a cero? Get those fixed and i'll re-check it and see if there is more to this since it has too much flaws into it, additionally that i am checking this app in the middle of night in 2 am.


@Kade wrote:
Dark Fire Manipulation Powers: From accepting her new powers, Kristen has been given unique ability from her burning dark fire class powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with burning dark fire energy giving much more deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancement by some witches and other demons. Kristen can mostly control this dark flame power creating attacks and defenses from her powers, creating weapons, attacks and defenses with her burning dark flame powers. When using dark flame power, Kristen's arms can transform taking on a different characteristic when using dark flame weapons or dark fire attacks. Also Kristen's burning dark fire attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Kristen's defensive powers can be weaken if her burning dark flame weapons are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength.
Giving that it can manifest her dark flames into weapons and defenses, how big can she make a weapon with her dark flames? A size of a dagger? A size of a katana? How many times can she do such transformation? Can it be ANY weapon, from swords to projectiles, cannons and etc. Does the size, the firepower or the amount of dark fire she uses can affect how much of her spiritual energy used?

[quote"Kade"]Ultimate Blast: The trump card attack where Kristen lights a spark of energy on her index finger. Once enough energy is gathered, this spark may grow to the size of a small moon and is thrown towards the target. Typically, this attack is used to destroy many buildings or a small city or as a last-ditch effort to severely wound an opponent. When it hits something it almost like an big and massive explosion but it can be destroyed if it blasted in right in the center depending enemy's attack power or by a much stronger energy attack. However this can be charged into a much stronger attack which is called 100% Ultimate Blast which takes 3 posts to charge and the user must completely still when gathering energy for the attack. If Kristen is attacked the attack is no more which she have to do it all over again. The 100% Ultimate Blast is made when she places her hands forward as she forms a sphere of deep black energy that has another gray sphere inside it that turns black in the center and has blue electricity flowing around it. If she charges the attack for a few seconds, it seems to take on a decagon shape, but most commonly looks like a circle. Once she fires it, it leaves a shot black trail of energy behind before it hits the target, very easily causing a medium nuke-sized explosion. [Kristen needs to a far distance perhaps 1/4 mile perhaps up in the air when using this yet the move can backfired if not done properly.][/quote]
Sounds like NOBODY can stop it if it is successfuly fired and i won't accept this, considering it be medium-nuke sized plus it is almost the size of a small moon, HUGE explosive prowess, and yes, i am talking about every percentages it goes through. It doesn't seem to have a flaw where if an enemy can have a way to dodge them or a method to destroy it if they aren't 'Touma'. Should describe how the victims can use their abilities or strength to rip through it and a specific method of doing so, or can someone to rip through it as long as they have the sufficient strength or survive the ordeal if they have sufficient defenses at Master or Grand Master. Make it clear, yo'.

I'll check until here and do the rest tomorrow. Since its late in the night, i decided to use my free time to get your app check before bed. Fix these and i'll continue tomorrow.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Fri Jun 20, 2014 10:48 pm

Okay the Ultimate Blast been removed
Also refixed the moves
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 7:00 am


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After rechecking the app again, i found out a few extra flaws about the history that i'd wish for you to fix. Otherwise, the powers are just a few to fix with.

@Kade wrote:
Shadows and Soul Reapers
Kade Hiroshima was the first demon ever to make a peace deal with the captain commander and members within the soul society leading to the first Demon/Shinigami agreement. Because of some demon deals, Kade was allowed to have his own barracks and make a home within the soul society after a few missions his family left the demon world coming into seireitei grounds. Kristen was scare at first she hated the idea living with the soul reapers but after seeing what her father was dealing with the girl didn't have a choice those people seemed serious. People around the Gotei 13 had a hard time believing some demons were actually helping members with some difficult situations, Kristen felt she could help more in her new home. Her father was leading a secret organization dedicated into doing secret and special missions within the Soul society while the demon princess was helping the medical division with healing the injured. However, Kristen made some new friends among members of the ranked divisions enjoy this new life of hers even was assigned on different missions proving time and again of being a noble demon. She and her mother tried living with the fact the soul society was actually hurting Kade Hiroshima every time the demon completed a secret mission a demon would lose a member of his team. Kristen was really sadden because her father would come home badly beaten from special secret missions the soul society had for the noble demon nearly breaking his peaceful spirit. Kristen and her mother helped him get through some bad times within the noble demon's life helping the cause and always looking for the future. For decades, Kristen along her family helped members within the Soul Society with some demons and the soul reapers helping in defeating the forces of evil.

Downfall of A Demon's Dream
Some people from the Iramasha clan didn't like the help the Soul society was receiving from the demons of Kade's squad they wanted it to end the treaty. Cain Iramasha was the one who ordered the heinous assault upon Kade's family as an iramasha assassin was sent into the soul society to huntdown the member of the noble demon's family. The other members of Cain's group devised a plot against Kade Hiroshima framing the noble demon for many crimes of what the iramasha members committed. Kristen and her mother were returning from the Rukongai district and then after they settled down back their home the assassin made his move attacking both demons they tried fighting the assailant. But the assassin pulled out a knife killing Miyuki and then the bastard attacked Kristen with the knife and nearly killed her until somebody saved her from the assassin. Kristen was wounded but someone managed to leave a gigai body making the soul reapers believed both wife and daughter were killed. Kristen was unconscious and teleported into a medical facility where she receive medical care but the doctors said she was in a long term coma.

Kristen's father was framed for unheard of murders and crimes which the demon had no choice but depart from the Soul society ending the peace agreement. Kade Hiroshima lost two things that day his family and friendship of others. The dark seeds of madness started to brew within the noble demon's mind...
Woah there, m8. You're involving 'Captain Commander' here, not to mention having deals and living in Gotei 13. I'll give you a bag of NOPE there. Redo the history, because we ain't allowing this. Not to mention about Iramashas. I've never heard anyone telling this to me nor was it discussed about. So, you're going through a real fix there, because i doubted that Demons can have 'agreements' and 'live in SS'. That's a no-no.

@Kade wrote:
Demon Telepathy Powers: The demon princess gained the power of telepathy and telekinesis together. The female demon can use power of telepathy to talk within people's minds as another way of her voice is her voice box is damaged. However when using her telepathy powers the enemy would have to be far away not close to him or it won't work. The other power is telekinesis. Kristen's telekinetic powers to moving objects from one place to another without using physical contact. When using her telekinesis power, the item, people or attack is encased in white energy allowing the telekinesis to take effect. Which means she could stop some Kidō attacks and send them off to another direction or back to the enemy. Kristen can perhaps stop an shikai attack using her willpower and focus of her telekinesis on that attack. But bankai takes a lot of mind control to stop it can blow up in her face if not careful. When using it on stronger attacks and large weapons, Kristen can get injured too if the attack is powerful then expected. Kristen can only his telekinetic powers only about eight times because to large drain of powers it does to her spiritual power and her mind.
How many people can she use her telepath to? How far does the telepathy reach in order to communicate with a specific person?

For telekinesis, what type of attack can she use it against? Energy? Physical attacks? Projectiles? Please describe this 'shikai attack' and 'bankai attack' more, since i don't understand what do you mean by that. Can she use her telekinesis against incoming attacks or can she only manipulate things around her excluding attacks? How far can her telekinesis work since i don't expect her to manipulate something from thousands of miles away with telekinesis. How many objects can she manipulate at best?


@Kade wrote:
Dark Fire Manipulation Powers: From accepting her new powers, Kristen has been given unique ability from her burning dark fire class powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with burning dark fire energy giving much more deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancement by some witches and other demons. Kristen can mostly control this dark flame power creating attacks and defenses from her powers, creating weapons, attacks and defenses with her burning dark flame powers. When using dark flame power, Kristen's arms can transform taking on a different characteristic when using dark flame weapons or dark fire attacks which she can use 8 times. For crafting weapons, Kristen can make flame swords, daggers which can be 7-8 inches which can give a burning sensation when used against enemies. Also Kristen's burning dark fire attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Kristen's defensive powers can be weaken if her burning dark flame weapons are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength. When firing projectiles the girl can fire only 6 seven projectiles
[She can this power only about 6 times and she must what she wants because it can drain little of her spiritual pressure but she'll feel it]
While most of the description is accepted, i would want you to describe how long these defenses and/or weapons last when she creates them and if she were to make a multiple of these defenses or weapons, how many of them can she create at max and would it take more energy from her depending on the size of the defense or weapon that she creates?

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 3:32 pm

Alright Fixed
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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:09 pm


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Comments/Notes: After checking it a couple of times, all is good and approved, unless i missed out anything or made a mistake in this check, other staffs can intervene and re-check this app if necessary. They also have the right to change her tier or move it to denied if it were to be abused. Now, have fun with your char.
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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Kristen Hiroshima [APPROVED, 3-1++]   Sun Jan 15, 2017 7:11 pm

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