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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Wolf [NPC][Approved 1-3]   Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:33 am

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Name: N"Golth Wolf
Codename: Wolf
Age: 45,800 Years Old
Gender: Male
Height: 7'4"
Hair: Black

Personality: In the past, Wolf was an extremely ruthless demon who has little regard for the lives of others. Having very few redeemable qualities, Wolf relishes in killing and, to him, there is nothing more important or honorable than battle. He is quite self-assured and confident in his own battle prowess. When a demon punches Wolf during their fight, He is furious, since it is the first time he has been hit in the face before. This seems to be very insulting for him, and he claims that it will never happen again. Despite his formidable skill, Wolf still desires more power so that he can become the most formidable demon on the battlefield, which motivates him to collect trophies. Wolf even demonstrates an affinity for evil in general. Wolf holds humans in little esteem and, like many demons, has little respect for half-demons. However, he has a keen respect for those who can match him on the battlefield, and as such grants a demon some recognition due to the latter's strength. Besides fighting, Wolf has also demonstrated a healthy appetite for other pursuits, namely women. Wolf also has casual relationships with demon women. Despite his barbaric nature, Wolf has shown a softer side. One of the few things the Yautja demon values other than power and battle is family.

Wolf is well darker- mannered and cunning alien who takes an serious mind while hunting. He doesn't let anything of his yautja demon past distract him while on the hunt. He has shown an emotionless attitude and has rarely shown any sympathy for those humans. He does have some bad habits like seeing a Beautiful woman or creature meaning his hunt will stop lowering his guard.

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N'Golth Wolf is distinguished by a missing mandible, an acid-scarred face, briefly in fighting and kills within the demon world, Wolf is shown to have a white eye. He is shown to have been in many battles and being a participant in many evil hunts. This is evident by the many signs, or rune type markings upon his mask, and also by the damaged mandible tusk/tooth of his upper-left jaw. Wolf has also been equipped with weapons not seen in other realm demonic weaponry, such as the Slasher Whip he used close to his great battle where he fought the great serpent. . These, and many other aspects, show that he was a formidable warrior and fearsome hunter. Moreover, The Wolf was firm enough to overpower two Espada Warriors at once and to hold his ground against a far more powerful adversary such as demon prince. Wolf's body may seem humanoid in general, this cannot be said for its face - having been described as a "mutated crab" in appearance, the Predator possess very distinct facial features. The most prominent of these are four mandibles which protrude from, and surround, a smallish mouth filled with sharp teeth. These mandibles are used for communicating, much like a cat uses its tail to communicate its mood - although Predator also have a verbal language (consisting of growls, clicks and chirps), and are capable of mimicking other verbal languages to a degree.

Tier: 1-3
If Applicable, Position: ???
What Race: What Race are they? Demon


Brief History: A member of the demon species known as the Yautja, the Predator culture revolves around the hunting and stalking of dangerous lifeforms. Usually, their hunts are not for sustenance or elimination of threats, but for entertainment, as the Yautja will only attack life forms that have the ability to provide them with a challenge. A member of the Dark Blade clan, the Predator is heavily trained in the ways of combat and hunting, and is an experienced warrior among his comrades. N'Golth Scar's demon clone. N'Golth Wolf believes that only one of them can exist because of his disillusioned memory; this drives Wolf to become more concerned with defeating his twin brother than with the invasion of North America and this gradually becomes an obsession. As Wold becomes more powerful, he receives a power increase from Dark Warlocks.

The truth is that the source of Wolf's grudge against a human warrior in particular even before the North America invasion was because he was shown to be resented or looked down on by his creator. Not only was he 'helped' during survival training which made him think he only got help because he was inferior. But also the fact that he was an perfect demon clone...

N'Golth Wolf has developed an inferiority/perfection complex long before he was taken control of by the Dark Warlock Council, which only amplified his feelings into direct hatred towards those he held responsible. Wolf seeks to destroy Blaine Iramasha on an equal footing to prove that he can beat him, and in the final battle, when Blaine Iramasha is overcome by his dark pain emotions, Wolf allows him to recover before resuming battle. In the battle that ensues Blaine eventually impales Wolf, holding him in his arms as he dies.Wolf is revived by Sid's magical cyber powers and nanotechnology to serve only him and perhaps learn a few things from him. Wolf at first didn't want to join but he owes his brother a rematch so the demon decides to join Sid Iramasha.

Associated Character: Sid


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Unique Abilities: Yautja Hunting & Military Skills: They are much stronger than humans, having been portrayed as being easily capable of outmatching a conditioned adult human male and shattering solid concrete with their bare hands. They are also skilled climbers, and will readily move through trees or across rooftops in pursuit of prey. Though capable of surviving exposure in Antarctic temperatures for an extended period of time, it is implied that Predators have a preference for hot equatorial climates. Predator culture revolves around the hunting and stalking of dangerous lifeforms. After making a kill, Predators typically skin or decapitate the carcass, converting it into a trophy. Failure in a hunt results in the Predator involved committing an honorable suicide. It is often alluded to that the reason Predators hunt is not for sustenance or elimination of threats, but as entertainment, as they will only attack life forms that have the ability to provide them with a challenge. Predators feature prominently in the folklore of certain cultures; some Latin American people refer to the species as, "El Demonio que hace trofeos de los hombres" (Spanish for "The Demon who makes trophies of men"), while Jamaican superstition identifies Predators as demons from the spirit world. A human who has managed to kill a Predator in single combat or has fought alongside one is usually spared by the deceased hunter's comrades and given a gift (often a rare or exotic weapon) as a sign of respect.

Enhanced Demon Spiritual Pressure: Wolf was trained to be to the fierce-some warrior as his body was put through punishment. Through his trials, Wolf began learning about his spiritual pressure about what it was and how it was to be used within battle. Wolf now has a high level of spiritual pressure when engaging enemies, hunting or training with his powers to become a true hunter to his prey. The Yautja hunter figured out a way yo condense the spiritual to remake it and allow it grow every-time the guy within a situation whenever he wins or loses a fight this energy within him get stronger allowing him to create better powers in his next fight. He commonly uses spiritual energy to enhance the strength of his attacks

Augmented Demon Strength: He has the original raw strength of an demonic fighter and perhaps a demon general. Fighting against stronger enemies and testing his limits every time on the battlefield hoping to grow to be an a great demon. Wolf had trained constantly to keep his deadly strength to an unbelievable level the only thing that he thinks about while training is getting revenge. The demon can break bones one three or four hard punches . He's capable of lifting a gigantic boulder in mere minutes. He able to do a number of things which a normal demon wouldn't do. He always believes "the only thing to defeat power is more power."

Augmented Demonic Speed/Reflexes: Wolf's speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented to the point where the demon knight can move faster. Yet his agility and reflexes to dodge oncoming attacks that have do him harm. Wolf is shown to used his quick speeds along with his reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. Wolf has become fast enough to outrun his own energy attacks, allowing him to strike and enhance them or launch simultaneous attacks. Wolf can keep up with a shinigami's shunpo speed, iramasha's spped or arrancar's sonido speed yet the mad one gets a quadruple increase in speed within this state. He can actually match a captain's shunpo or espada's soindo speed, vizard's speed or ziamichi's speed depending on the enemy's speed.

Improved Demon Claws: Wolf's black claws are known to be a certain type of dragon claws which can be used on the battlefield. Wolf has these black claws on his hands and his feet which can be used for slashing and gutting people when the monster gets angry or wanting to kill something. Wolf can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around. Wolf can use the affinity of hell to make his claw stronger for stronger slashing abilities. Against barriers, Wolf could only do 35% damage to barriers and blocking leaving the enemy blooded or scratched from the claws. Barriers: Wolf claws would be able to penetrate some of barrier but now enough to destroy it completely depending on the enemy's power of strength. Blocking: It would take a number of slashes(8-15) for the enemy to feel some pain for these claws while blocking.

Demonic Weaponry
The clan are forbidden from learning any other new demon attacks and defenses. The dark clan had gotten their hands on different sorts of technology. Predators are extremely protective of their technology, and will go to great lengths in order to prevent humans from obtaining it, even to the point of self-destruction. Predator weaponry varies from hunter to hunter. Older warriors tend to disdain the use of firearms, preferring to use melee weapons in order to increase the challenge. Technology is distinctive in many respects, not least of which is its ornate, tribal appearance masking deadly, sophisticated weaponry.

Bio Demon Mask
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MediComp
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Combi-Stick
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Sharp Wrist-Blades
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Plasma Caster
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Wolf [NPC][Approved 1-3]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 8:03 am


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Comments/Notes: On a second thought, i am going to check this entire app and see how it goes.


@Kade wrote:
Immense Demon Spiritual Pressure: He doesn't even know his full deadly power just yet after his mind lock away. The demon's powers diminish over time to the point of where he never knew his spiritual pressure was under lock and key. After his release, Wolf's spiritual pressure shot up like thousands of rockets. Being of former clan member, Wolf has an grand amount of spiritual pressure. From the long training sessions, Wolf learned how control & restraints giving his opponents a fighting chance. When he shifts to different then his power will decrease rapidly. But when he unleashes it his enemy will known why he called the Demon who makes the trophies of men.
While i originally don't accept this, but with its given tier of 1-3, describing his spiritual pressure being so grand makes no sense and are quite far from what his tier is. So tune that down and i'll give it a go.

@Kade wrote:
Improved Demon Claws: Wolf has drgaon-like claws on his hands and his feets which can be used for slashing and gutting people when he gets angry or wanting to kill something. Wolf can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around, Stronger enemies may feel 35% of the attack if it blocked by barrier or strong defenses. Wolf can use her zoa koa power to empower her claws with energy to do certain energy slashing attacks as well.
How many times can he execute this ability per post? If the barrier is an indirect defense like Danku, can it pierce through its defenses and only deal 35% of its actual damage to the enemy? Can one defend himself or herself if sufficient force is applied to counterattack his claws? Is it easy to move away from his claws or is it hard? And please refix the gender to 'him' instead of 'her'.

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The Bio Mask are various mask designs used by the Predators. These masks contain a variety of functions which the Predators may require during a hunt. As well as protecting the Predator's head, the mask has a sound amplifier, multiple vision modes, a zoom function, some diagnostic capabilities and a recording system. Housed within the helmet is a targeting and tracking system for shoulder based plasma casters. Additional vision modes are available to determine the health status of the targets.Incorporated to finalize the shot is a lock-on system. As the quarry is decided upon, the designator will zoom a triangle in on the prey from the , which will flash and turn solid red, then fires. On top of these abilities, the targeting system can be used to heat up metals like wrist blades. Another feature of the Predator's mask is its voice translator/recorder. This device can both record and play strips of audio, which a Predator may use to express meaning or catch prey off guard, or to simply listen to the voices of their prey, as if to study their language.]
The entirety is accepted but i want to know how tough can this be? Since the Bio Mask is worn on the head, how tough can it be to protect the user of this mask/helmet if one tries to break it with force?

@Kade wrote:
This medical kit has surgical blades, a shrapnel extractor, wound clamps, a spatula, a burner for melting medicine, a needle full of medicine, two reloads for the needle, a container full of a blue solvent, and an emergency breathing mask. When the Predator uses the burner, he crushed pieces of plaster and the mirror, and then he adds the blue solvent, formed a gel, and cauterized the wound.
Since it is a medical kit, if it is used to heal the user, depending on the severity of the wound, how long does it take for it to heal the wound? Can it regenerate lost limbs or/and repair damaged organs? Can it only heal a specific area or does it heal the entire body? If so, how many times can he use this medical kit before it runs out of medicine to use for healing?

@Kade wrote:
The Combi-stick, Combi-spear, "Combat-Staff", (sometimes identified with the naginata weapon used by samurai warriors), is an exceedingly sharp and resilient weapon used by the Predator species. The Combi-stick is telescopic, extended to its full length when used in combat. It is made of incredible material, light but sharp, thin but strong. The Combi-Stick is a self-powered telescoping spear that is merely one meter at its shortest length, but extends by two meters at each end. It is primarily used as a close-quarters hand-to-hand weapon, although it can also be thrown like a spear. Yautja have been known to decorate their Combi-Stick through time with skulls and memories of different Hunts and moments in their long life, making the staff its prized possession.
Not much but if it is thrown and hit its enemy, can tough of a defense can it pierce or an armor can it pierce through? Do they carry one or multiple of spears with them? Can it be broken with sheer force?

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The plasma caster is a long range energy projector capable of guiding armor-penetrating plasma bolts at distant targets. Morever, the weapon's bolts explode in a burst of plasma shrapnel that damages other enemies near the point of impact. The plasma caster can be charged by the user to fire more powerful shots that are even more damaging to prey. The Plasma Caster is a mounted and lightweight weapon capable of firing multiple long-range energy burst of charged plasma. The power of the plasma burst can be adjusted manually, ranging from a minor setting to a blast powerful enough to breach interstellar craft. The plasma caster is controlled via a targeting system in the helmet, and tracks with the head movement of the firer. It can be used with a Laser Sight to increase targeting capacity, and is fired either by a mandible-controlled trigger in the helmet or by the forearm-mounted control panel. [Wolf wears two plasma casters]
How many times can he fire these plasmas before it runs out of power? Does it use a source of battery or does it use the user's spiritual energy to do so? Can plasma pierce through all types of defenses or can it pierce on specific types of defenses?

@Kade wrote:
Thus also known as the Wrist Bracer or Wrist Computer, is possibly the Yautja's most valuable tool. The compact wrist-mounted console houses several technologically advanced features, including a Sat-Com and a powerful Self-Destruct Device, as well as controls for a Predator's Cloaking Device and, in some cases, their Plasma Caster. Some Wrist Gauntlets have also been seen to include Gauntlet Plasma Bolts or Power Punch Gloves. It is possibly the most prized piece of Predator technology and its loss is often met with severe punishment. The Wrist Gauntlet is a small computer device worn, as its name implies, on the wrist, and features numerous controls for various items of Predator technology, as well as a digitized, apparently numerical display.
Gauntlet Powers
Power Punch Glove: The Power Punch glove was a Yautja device consisting of a metal bridge that extended on command from a Predator's Wrist Gauntlet to connect with "brass knuckles" worn on the hand. It was used to preform a Power Punch, a punch powerful enough to punch right through solid concrete. The Power Punch feature was going to involve the Predator's entire left arm. His existing armor would transform and expand, including flanges that flared out to shield him from splattering acid blood. [Same strength as Bala]
Self Destruct: The Self-Destruct Device is a powerful Yautja explosive device built into a Predator's Wrist Gauntlet. This weapon of last resort is used by Yautja both as a means by which to commit honourable suicide, and also to remove any evidence of their existence and prevent their technology from falling into the hands of another species. As such, it is an indispensable piece of their equipment, and a Yautja would never venture on a hunt without it. When a Yautja is on the verge of death or defeat, he will activate the self-destruct device built into his Wrist Gauntlet. When activated, the Self-Destruct Device takes several seconds time to charge, and it begins a relatively short countdown, indicated on the digitized display. It is not clear whether the process is irreversible once started, although destroying the device while it is counting down has been known to prevent detonation. The detonation of the bomb results in an explosion of unclear composition and chemistry — while the blast often creates a sizeable mushroom cloud, the explosion itself is not thought to be nuclear in nature.
Sat-Com/Cloaking Device: This has two abilities. The Sat-Com is a Yautja holographic map projector which shows a complete 3D scan of an area and is part of a Yautja's Wrist Gauntlet. Yautja use this device in their Hunts to locate enemies or other targets. The second power is the cloaking device. The Cloaking Device, also known as the Invisibility System and Active Camouflage, This is an advanced piece of Yautja technology that is able to render the user invisible, or nearly invisible, to the naked eye, as well as many forms of electronic scanning. The Cloaking Device warps light around the user's body in such a fashion that surfaces behind the creature are visible through the Predator's body. The effect is not perfect, often leaving a visible silhouette similar to heat haze, but in certain environments (and when the Predator remains motionless) it can effectively help a Predator to hide in plain sight. [Water & Electromagnetic Pulse can defeat it]
For Power punch, how many times can he use it? If it is the same strength as bala, for it to punch through a solid concrete is not defined. Can it punch through a thick concrete or small concretes like bricks?

[b]Self-destruct.. If it were to self-destruct, how powerful can it be? How big can the explosion expand?

For sat-com, how does it locate its enemies? Is it through the detection of their spiritual energy or etc? Can one escape from being detected by the radar? If so, explain how.

For cloaking, please describe how long can he cloak himself before it runs out of effect or is it permanent?


@Kade wrote:
The smart disc (also known simply as the "disc") is an extremely sharp circular weapon that is thrown like a discus and returns to the user like a boomerang. This weapon is extremely powerful, shown to cut through half a dozen cattle carcasses and a man in quick succession without any effort. It also has a hand grip for use as a slashing melee weapon as well. This device is capable of cutting through most substances with its devastating razor edges, and is powerful enough to cut through multiple targets with one throw.
Computer-controlled gyros guarantee that the disc returns to its wielder
Not much, but i want to know how fast does it move? Since if this is thrown at fast moving targets, describe how fast can it move and can its speed be adjusted through the 'smart device' inputted in this disc?

This may be an NPC, but i don't expect it to be abused either, especially these equipments.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Wolf [NPC][Approved 1-3]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 5:39 pm

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Wolf [NPC][Approved 1-3]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:02 pm


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This medical kit has surgical blades, a shrapnel extractor, wound clamps, a spatula, a burner for melting medicine, a needle full of medicine, two reloads for the needle, a container full of a blue solvent, and an emergency breathing mask. When the Predator uses the burner, he crushed pieces of plaster and the mirror, and then he adds the blue solvent, formed a gel, and cauterized the wound. (The medkit can't replace limbs or organs though it can heal parts of the body which are damaged or completely damaged. That is what the gel does it a healing agent which repairs. {I REPEAT CAN NOT REPLACE LIMBS OR ORGANS}. It would take a one/two posts to heal whatever wound completely and for the hunt place the med-kit back in it holder.)
The healing. I prefer that he doesn't 'lolheal' from every wound he takes, as if i made a giant slash right across his body and he simply heals from it using the medikit in a single or two posts, it would utterly be an overpowered healing over there. And again, please describe whether it heals the entire body at once or a specific area of the wounded place?

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Wolf [NPC][Approved 1-3]   Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:48 pm

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