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 Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:58 pm

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Basic Information
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• Name: Tristan Ryker
• Titles: Kitsune
• Age: 21
• Gender: Male
• Affiliation/Rank: N/A

• Appearance Description:

Tristan Ryder looks much like your average run of the mill human being. As many human's he has perfections and imperfection though the latter is more obvious. Standing at five foot eight inches and at a weight of 58KG this tall and lean male has some unique colorings. Let's start with his face. Due to his Kitsune though he looks like your average mans body not being too muscly or to athletic looking while having no major flabby areas upon his person.

His forehead is flawless and has no bumps nor scar's or indentations within the skull. It is incredibly soft to touch though is slightly wider which is why soft and silky white strands of hair forming like spikey stalegmites to minimize the view of it. His msecondary fave feature upon his face is his cheek bones, They rise up slightly and help to shape his face better and are commented on by many women and men alike. Having a strong chin with his cheek bones make his face seem sculpted. Ears are hidden by paper white hair that believe it or not is one hundred percent natural. This is because of his spiritual nature being that of the Celestial or Heaven Kitsune. Now his most notable facial feature are his eyes. Being born with Heterochromia, Tristan was born with two different color of eyes. Tristans left eye is the traditional color of the Kitsune being amber and slightly glowing while within his right eye a glowing sapphire blue.. He has white fox ears and from behind him a fully functioning tail.

Now his dress sense is far different to his attitude, As a young child he was told stories about the Kitsune and its traditions. Due to this his family forced the male to dress in a completely traditional style. Kitsunes traditionally roamed in Japan but were free spirits and could be found everywere . But due to the myths origins his family had him dress in known as Hakama, His Hakama was white upon the top and black to cover his lower body. Upon growing older he remained true to tradition though eventually traded out the Hakama for a slightly more modern clothing which resembled Hakama minus the Kimono. Instead his white puffed up jumper which would show of his chest was combined with black Gi pants and sandals.


• Appearance Picture:


Personality

• Personality:

Though a rather comedic like character and rarely serious he does not seem to have that annoying or shut your mouth tendency, Having an incredibly optimistic out look on life Jake see's the brighter things in the usually dark world, Though this does not mean he is ignorant to the darkness, As all humans he is capable of having his incredibly dark moments or outbursts of rage or tears. Having a large scale of emotions is the thing that makes us human. Wisdom in the terms of street smarts allows Tristan to be ready for any situation. He is somewhat of a trickter which could be a trait gained due to his Kitsune heritage.

Tristan is slightly over dependent on those around him, Though in the world of mystery that no longer means simply human like contact, He finds it an almost impossible task to try to mask his true feelings, Sadly who would never be an actor nor a show business like man, Though due to this he is believed to be increadibly trust worthy and loveable. His urge and drive to become a top Coordinator coupled with his true nature makes his energy and talent seem infectious.

Tristan is an incredibly honorable and kind hearted man. With his love of life and determination pushing him on, his dedication to his dream knows no limits nor boundaries. Every thing he does that involves his ability to see the bright side revolves around his drive to push himself further. Though not to be misunderstood Tristian enjoys other activities through out the day, His persona allows him the good fortune to help push those around them to achieve their dreams, just like how Jake is trying to make his own come true. Being a Kitsune descendantm Protecting and becoming stronger had always been the only dream that this boy had ever dreamed. Having at an early age been taught baout his heritage and of course forced to study by his grandmother had given him knowledge of history. ,

Refusing to sit down when something major is going on, he does have a few detests. The abuse of animals boils his blood, he believes that anyone abusing animals should be abused by an animal in return, An eye for an eye in that case of attitude. Arrogance and obnoxious people are another peeve, he does not understand how someone if they are good at something can be that mean and hurtful they have to bring others down. Its one of those things that baffles this young male.

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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes:

  • Enhanced Sense of smell
  • Enhanced sense of sight
  • Enhanced sense of hearing
  • Enhanced running speed
  • Enhanced agility [reflexs]
  • Enhanced healing properties


• Powers:

  • [Fox Fire] - Do not let the name fool you, The Kitsunes abilities are known as Fox Fire. This itself does not mean fire. Fox fire can be one of 13 types. These 13 types correspong to the 13 different types of Kitsune. Heaven (or Celestial or Prime), Void (or Dark), Wind, Spirit, Fire, Earth, River, Ocean, Mountain, Forest, Thunder, Time and Sound. As the Kitsune of Heaven/Prime this man has the abilities of light.

  • [Shape Shifting] - A kitsune has a very unique ability, Being able to freely change any and all areas of their physical appearance. This can be done in minor areas like the color of the hair upon them or major like shifting their entire appearance to that of another gender for example?

  • [Healing] - As a Kitsune of Heaven, Tristan has the power to heal mental and phsyical wounds of others through the use of the Heaven Kitsune as wel las enhancing his own regenerative abilities.. Now how is this done? Ligth is believed to be a healing element as well as destructive. This combines the Kitsune spirit with the light element. When healing mental or physical wound's upon another the Kitsune/Tristian will touch the the intended target. Upon touching he will channel the positive properties of light and the Kitsune. When this is happening the target is unable to move otherwise the healing will not occur. When healing begins a Kitsune aura of light surrounds the target. This healing light will slowly heal wounds. Taking 1 post for minor wounds while anything more requires 4 posts. It is sadly unable to heal afflictions such as poisons or toxins but can heal burns at 4 posts. When aiming to heal mental wounds the kitsune aura is required to be stronger and takes 8 posts. This is done through the spirit of the Kitsune and the healing aura delves into the opponents mind bathing it in a soft glow. The "spirit" is then believed to be fighintg/warding of the mental anquish. This is a delicate healing procedure.

    When healing his own anilities. His spiritual energy presents itself in the shape of a golden kitsune aura that has a faint glow. This aura is filled with the healing property of heaven itself or so it is belived. it is much easier to heal his own wounds with this glow thus takes 1 post for minor wounds 2 posts for average and 3 for major. In no way shape or form can they heal lost limbs.

  • [Flight] - Tyler has the power of flight allowing him to glide softly and soar through the air. It is known by many Kitsune.

  • [Kitsune Communication] As a Kitsune a spirit fox. Tristan is capable of fully understanding and communicating with all members of the Canids family.


• Pure Abilities:


  • [Tails] - Tails differ from fox fire in the way that though a pure manifestation of the Kitsune Spirit in fact shows the power of the Kitsune. The more tails the stronger the Kitsune is. Enhancing physical abiltiies like the users senses and speed. Being capable of manipulating each tail individually it is known that the tails are powerful phyiscally and are able to deal blunt damage. The tails can be used to grab things etc. Tails are the physical manifestation of the Kitsunes power. The more tail a Kitsune has means the more control and the more stability of his physical and spiritual power he has. This is why when his ascended form and above, he is superior in strenght to his base due to the increase of tails. He can summon forth tails at will unleashing more power without the use of his forms. Each tail grants a small increase to all physical capabilities and helps strengthen the stabilty of his spirutal power though at a cost. He is only able to summon forth 5 extra tails. He is able to summon 2 extra tails for 8 posts without any drawbacks but if he were to go over this time limit he will be forced to exit after two posts due to his base form being unable to fully hold the increased abilities. When this happens he becomes much weaker in all aspects. He is capable of summoning the extra three tails ONLY when he has used the first two. This helps eliminate the drawback for a further 3 posts. Sadly due to this if he were to use all 5 for more than 3 posts even a single post over his body greatly weakens and the spiritual and physical strain upon his body will force him to faint.

    When using this ability in conjunction with the Sacred Release Powers which originally takes his total of tails to 4 [ gainign three while already having one]. He can also use this power to take the total to 9 fully. The count downs remain the same as does the effect..

  • [Photokynesis] - The ability to manipulate light into different forms. Capable of blinding or burning. The Kitsune of heavens light is slightly different as it is viewed as Holy . When compared to basic Light abilities Holy being the light of the heavens is far superior to that being far stronger. This also happens to be incredibly powerful against darkness based abilities as holy beats basic light and darkness. This means demonic and hell based abilities can of course stand up to the Heavens light.

    Weapon Creation - When creating weapons from light, Tristian is capable of creating either a sword [23 inches long] or duel daggers [12inches long each]. Capable of doing two degree burns to those whom they cut. When stabalizing light in this form the Kitsune/Tristian is unable to wield light in any other form. Remaining stabalized for as long as he holds spiritual energy.

    Light blasts - Another form of light manipoulation, Capable of forming balls of light with a circumfrance of 5 inches. These balls also have a burning ability of 3rd degree burns but are blunt and are incapable of piercing. When they make contact with something they burst scorching them. Yet a secondary form of this is a piercing ability that shows itself in a powerful beam which can pierce most metals with ease. It also retains the burning ability but the weakness of this stronger burst is the Kitsune must remain stationary. There is no cool down for the balls of light but the beam has a cool down of 4 posts.

    Heavens Flare. - Using the blinding ability of light, The Kitsune presents itself around Tristian in its Kitsune aura for an instant. This aura then releases an intense burst of light surrounding a ten meter area. The blinding light blinds any one within this area for 3 posts. Anyone outside the ten meters by five meters for 1 post. Anyone outside of this range is un-effected. Lasts for a single post and has a 2 post cooldown.


[*][SwordPlay] - Trystan is a skilled swordsman.
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance:


Upon releasing his power, The young man becomes much more of Kitsune [Half fox/human hybrid]. His Heterochromia eyes become a singular block yellow with slits. The clothing of the man remains the same yet he sprouts three extra tails to use in combat. The body becomes covered in black symbols. Upon each side of the face 3 black tattoo like symbols resemble thick whiskers while swirls of symbols cover him. His face doesn't become elongated but he does gain fangs and becomes somewhat more fox like.

Possibly the biggest change is the blade created from the pink petals that are emitted from the Kitsunes mouth. This blade takes the shake of a katana that has a blade of 28inches and a hilt of 6. The hilt is black as is the sheathe with orange swilrls that is basic fox color. The sheathe follows this color pattern.

Sword:
 


• Sacred Release Powers:

Gaining 3 extra tails [Taking his total to 4], The Kitsune shows itself more than in its base form. As a Kitsune gains more tai lthe strength of the physical abilities of the host is increased. The strongest ability gained in this form is the ability to form small pink petals of celestial magic. These petals look like genuine petals and have the ability to burn. Once the petals form they create a blade taking the shape form and appearance. The unique factor is when this blade strikes the petals phase into the skin of the opponent. After the user or the opponent travel for 4 meters the slash is then taking into effect. This essentially become a time delay. The wielder is also capable of releasing slashes for ranged attacks that are shaped like petals that also hold this unique ability.

Now these petals in this form only take the form of a sword only. They can't be used indepentantly and only in blade form. Now once the blade is formed and strikes it is as if it only does blunt damage and that the sword is not sharp at all. It is a blade incapable of stabbing but can caus major wounds. For the blades strength is increased each time it successfully allows the petals to phase through the body. Beginning with wounds that start at 1 inch deep and ending at top power with 11 inche deep wounds. This means the blade must touch the opponents skin 10 times to gain full power. It also only cuts were the blade has touched. When the petals insert into the body the blade instantly reforms new ones thus never losing its length.

Now in this stage the petals can by pass Hierro or skinbased defenses with a power/control of average or below.

[Example- This blade strikes an opponents rib, Blunt force damage insues. The opponent OR Tristian moves 5 meters away from each other. The area/areas struck will then at this point recieve the sword slash.]

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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance:

The final form of this Kitsune combination seems to allow the user to take the form of a Kitsune/Werewolf. Slightly thinner and less muscles are in that of his true transformation. Elongating the snout and transforming its entire body into that of an animal. A beautiful white fur completely covers its entire form and he has now sprouted a total of all 9 tails. Standing at 9 foot 9 in total now. The unique thing is that the blade no longer has petals but is made from pure Kitsune light energy. [TYhough the image above is black furd Tristan is white]. The blade is the same as before but has no sheathe and is pure red in color.

• Ascended Sacred State Powers:

Within this form, Tristan gains an increase in all areas strength hearing smell etc [Due to gainign all 9 tails]. He also retains the abilities from the previous form. Within this form the appearance isn't the only thing that changes. He gains the ability to manipulate the petals in a way much like Senbonzakura while also wielding his blade. The petals [15 petals in total] are controlled by the middle tail. They retain the same ability thus do not cut but phase through an opponent when they hit and only caus damage after the distance is met. The sword on the other hand which also retains the diatance abiility also gains a burn ability capable of causing 2nd degree burns due to the ability to control holy light.

[Blade petals]


Now these petals in this form only take the form of a sword only. They can't be used indepentantly and only in blade form. Now once the blade is formed and strikes it is as if it only does blunt damage and that the sword is not sharp at all. It is a blade incapable of stabbing but can caus major wounds. For the blades strength is increased each time it successfully allows the petals to phase through the body. Beginning with wounds that start at 11 inch deep and ending at top power with 23 inch deep wounds. This means the blade must touch the opponents skin 10 times to gain full power. It also only cuts were the blade has touched. When the petals insert itno the body the blade instantly reforms new ones thus never losing its length.

Freely controled petals.

Like the blade abilities. The petals retain very much the same form of attack except they are also capable of doing 3rd degree burns. Being controlled by the center tail. Now as for the petals themselves. they phase only one inch into the skin. Now it begins with one inch. as 15 petals are created it can reach up to 15 inches. Petals can be blown away and burned but can be re-created after 2 posts per 5 petals. Now when they touch they phase in slowly increasing in ditance they can sink into the skin. Again the 5 meter rule stays but the damage this time is not sword style but in fact is BURNING. only after 5 meters of movement of a petal inserting into the opponent does the effect come in. Eventually after the petal or petals going 15 inches deep they can caus massive internal damage. each petal is 2 inches in size thus this is the burn size also. The burning ability only happens against flesh thus anything can not be burned.

These petals are able to bypass Hierro/skinbased defenses with masterful like level. Now there is a condition anything under master can instantly be bypassed in this level. Though with master it needs to be weakened. This means that the sword or the petals need to connect 4 times before the phasing ability of the petals can be activated against Masterful Hierro or skinbased defenses.
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Background History

• Background:

Tristian Ryker was born to one of the most unique families possibkyt in the world. After the third world war the world would never be the same again. In the days of old Japan was a large crowded country with great exports and large industrires. Now many of the old cities had been moved either to the sky or underground. A small group of traditionalists remained upon the ground slowly but surely rebuilding the more traditional version of Japan. It was named Umarekawatta Japan which translated to to reborn Japan. It was small and only took up 10% of Kyoto never truely really expanding. They lived mostly of the land but life was good and they never went without anything.

His birthday was years after this being born on the 6th of june 2393. His family were to what he had believed completely normal Naturally this was due to the fact that he had been brought up with the traditional ways. it would be impressive to note that there would not be a single photograph of his family anywere within the house or in fact any photograph at all in existance of his immediate family all together. His father had photographs with him in while his mother did not hold a single one just like her mother before her. When this young boy was born they believed that he would have bypassed the curse for it seemed to never effect the males. This would be a day of miracles for Hana Ryker had given birth to the first Kitsune male in generations. [or so they believed]. What made this child even more special was the fact that he was the Kitsune of heaven itself.

Bringing up a Kitsune child was much harder than that of a normal child. Being born with ehnanced senses meant every little thing effected him more. Smells that other babys liked were to much for him as would tastes. His hearing was better and noises that no baby would hear could be felt by him. It was a struggle for the children would be unable to control these enhanced senses when they were younger. Eventually becoming attuned thanks to the wind Kitsune whom happened to be his mother. With wind at her beck and call she could silence noises that used the air to travel essentially soundproofing there home from the outside world. Her mother was the Kitsune of earth allowing for fresh fruit and vegetables to be on offer any time.

You may be wondering were the belief of the Kitsune heritage came from. To be truthful in reality Kitsune were rare and in fact humans whom had awoken the ability to use Spiritual energy which presented itself i nthe form of the Kitsune. Though during the time of the war after Ender and Aizen more and more awoke. During the war many of these Kitsune were killed off or relocated to protect others. Only his family remained in this area. Due to this he was not allowed to go to school at a young age and was home taught beginning at the age of five. his grandmother would teach him about the Kitsune and the heritage. The history of the war and the brave warriors of the Kitsune [All female btw] fighting for the world. It was taught that a male Kitsune was rare and that being the celestial Kitsune was a huge responsibility.

His classes which included maths communications etc were interchangeable with the Kitsune training class. Being taught by his mother how to train the energy residing within him. At the age of 6 he had gathered the ability to not be hindered by his enhanced senses. His mother would try hard to teach him how to efficently shape shift but it was believed that like the myths of the Kitsune males found it hard to hide the ears and tail. Eventually having to make due with clothing that would efficently hid eit. The traditional japanese clothing. would become his garments.

His family were not all about teaching and focus they knew how to have fun/ Visiting the holiday resorts that he would soon grow to love. Every summer they would leave the family home to go top a caravan park. They had little money but they loved the small weekly trip. Every year this trrip would happen but when he was 12 an arrogant teenager decided to try to bully the Kitsune. Events would unfold resulting in Tristians tail being revealed. His ears generally hidden by the hat he was forced to wear. The white tail would unfold. The boy would run off screaming.

It took sometime to get over being screamed at. Yet it also helped with his confidence and determination. He forced his parents to allow him to go to school. He loved the freedom which was a trait of the Kitsune. Loved being surrounded by other people whom would show him how to really act. His traditionalness in terms of his persona would slowly falter but he would continue to up[color=purple]itional dress code with a small twist of Gi pants. His third day at school was his best. For he found his true love. Daemon Salvatore a boy from school. It took him completely by surprise that his heart belonged to another male. He was petrified of how his family would take it. The unique child the unqiue Kitsune a poof, a queer. He loved his family and could not handle them being dissapointed or disgusted with him.

He never acted on his feelings for Daemon and refused to even be near him which was hard. Rarely speaking to the boy but everytime he was forced to his heart would beat faster. High school would finish after a certain amount of years he couldnt hide any more. At the age of eighteen after psyching himself up he would sit his family down. His mouth would open to talk yet the heat of the lump that caugth in his throat would halt him. Tears would stream down his face as he struggled to get the words out. His parents and grandmother would try to coax him to speak and after 5 minutes he would take a deep breatj. "Mum...dad...grandmother....iv tried so hard to ignore these feelings....so hard to be the best child. To be the best Kitsune and the best swordsman i can be...but 7 years ago i discovered something......Im sorry im gay" he burst out as he broke down. his mind throwing into action of what would happen. He would wait for the disgusted slurs.

Arms surrounded him as he sobbed. His mothers soothing voice would help him as he sobbed. his father joined in as did his grandmother. He was in shock as he was held by his parents whom would tell him that they loved him and that they always knew. They were waiting on him to open up to them. It was nice being told that he should never apologize for who he is or for being gay. It meant that when he began to start college. It was the real him no more hiding. Shockingly he was surprised to find that Daemon was in the same college. He hadn't properly seen him for years. Eventually he gained the nerves to speak to him.

Sitting Daemon down he would speak to him explaining everything about why he was an ass hole to Daemon..that for ever, ever since he layed eyes upon the beautiful dark haird male...and that those feelings had never left. Sitting staring into the blue eyed male Tristian could hold it in no more and he moved in..his lips touching the mans as they shared there first kiss. The kiss would last for minutes. his life owuld fall into place always continuing his studies to his heritage.

At the age of 20 he would have done so much with his life mastering most of his abilities and being truely happy in life. he moved in with Daemon whom he had been with for 2 years and the two would share an ideal life. Though for two years they had been unable to be intimiate due to his Kitsune secret. He had grown his hair out to hide the ears but a tail was somethign else. At the age of 21 he would once more sit down the love of his life and explain his story his legacy. He expected things to be over but much like the shock from telling his parents he was gay his love Daemon would simply kiss him. now the world was going to go to shit. He would be called in to duty one day but for now he simply wanted to be happy.
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Roleplay Sample

• Roleplay Sample: Darkness slowly turned to light, A process that would continue repeating itself until the light won out. What was this process. This process was a curse to many because after sleep your supposed to feel relaxed and energized. Sadly this never seemed to be true. When the blond hair'd female first allowed the light to creep into her vision the sensation of burning hit her eyes. Well not burning but everyone knows how it feels when you first open your eyes after what should have been a re-energizing sleep. Pulling the fluffly blankets off her body the female shinobi would slide her leg's from the bed and allow them to slowly touch the floor.

A yawn so loud you would think the T-rex's had come back from the dead would erupt around the small house like creation that her mother and herself currently lived in. It was a rather small house but it was livable, You see the place they lived in used to be an old compound for Kirigakure's military but sometime ago when Arisa was only a toddler a man had appeared to her and her mother. This man had informed them of the place that had come to be known as Jokigakure. It was a dangerous place to travel but the man had led them here and protected them. Sure life was hard but it was picking up slowly but surely. You could see the changes that had been made over the years. Another dinosaur noise was made as the female's mouth was opened in another yawn once more.

Today...today was a special day, Arisa had become a fully fledged shinobi, Sure the academy here was well...it was'nt really an academy at all. But Arisa had shown her potential and even though she had no official headbands, this female was ready to show everyone what this compound raised ninja is made off. Her hand's moved to the table to pick up the hair brush that would soon be forcing its way through the mess of hair that after twenty minutes of brushing would be sorted into two short pigtails that would hang behind the female's shoulder's.

Her fluffy night gown would flow behind her as she mustered up the strength to pull herself from the bed, her feet taking her sliggishly to the wardrobe which kept all her clothing. Keeping to true anime fashion she had hundreds of clothes yet only one outfit. All these skirts tops and coats gloves and shoes all ended up making her every day wear. What was this? Well Maka after removing her night gown and placing her bra and underwear on [no im not describing this part ya pervs] she would cover her pants with the short tartan skirt that was more red than anything, the white shirt would follow buttoning it up fully and tucking it into her skirt. I swear she's not a snob or anything ok. So her ensemble would be almost complete, what would follow next would be her shoes. Her white trainers would cover he feet yet not halt chakra flow allowing her to still stick to stuff. Now her favorite piece of clothing, her trench coat. This trench coat was so comfortable stylish and did'nt get in the way of fighting THE PERFECT GARMENT for any young kunoichi. This coat would flow and stop just inches from her ankles so that if she were to jump back she would not be caught on her garment, the white gloves would top of this beautiful clothing choice.

Appearance:
 


Now dressed Arisa's throat would catch. It did this all the time, Her memory sparking to the day that her father had been pronounced dead. Every morning was the same, she remembered. Most people would be over it by now but Arisa's father had been her life. She adored her mother but she was truly a daddies girl. Considering today she took a big step in following his footsteps it made it more emotional. Her hand's wrapped around the photo that she looks at every morning. A smile upon her face as her eyes began to tear up. Within the photo was Arisa as a child tiny within her dad's strong hands. Arisa was wearing her yellow t-shirt and her pink overall like pants with her pink beads holding her signature pony tail. Her father and his long red hair made him look so handsome while he was a rather muscular man his eyes crystal blue showed his gentleness.

daddy and me:
 


Her heart felt like it was breaking in two once more, Her body lurched forward slightly as she was forced to place the picture back onto the desk for fear of dropping it. Many would see this as stupidity still crying after your father had been murdered years ago. But it was'nt just the death. After his death Arisa's village had been destroyed and her mother had to take the child she so loved and run. This left her entire house defencless. Almost everything was destroyed. All that Arisa had was this picture to remind her of her fathers face. The tears had won her body had fought back there urges and failed.

Crying over daddy:
 


Her hand came up to wipe the snots coming from her nose. [classy lady] Before shaking her body herself giving her face a little slap knocking back her senses. She was a ninja now, her father would hate her tears for him. He would want her to be strong. So thats what she would do. You see the photo was the only thing she had off his with his picture. But not the only thing handed down to her. Arisa would open the case next to her wardrobe to reveal her friend Moon light. Moon light was her fathers first scythe and now it had been passed on to her. The clip on moonlight clipped on to the strap that she had been given allowing i to be strapped on her back. The strap also allowed the lower blade to be covered as to not damage anything when she moved with it.

Her shinobi weaponry had arrived today and she was going to pick up her basic items from the small store located near what she gathered was a Terumi strong hold thingymabopjigger. Then after getting her weaponry she would have to go to the thrift store. So her scythe upon her back her hair done and clothing on she was ready. Her tears wiped away and Arisa's smile wins again,thump thump thump you would hear this as she moved down the stairs. When she wanted to be she could be as silent as a mouse but here? she was like an elephant in a china shop. Yes an elephant not a bull caus an elephant would be bigger making more noise. Jumping down the last step a familiar voice would ring.

"Arisa darling i have your stuff" her mums voice would say before seeing the blond hair'd beauty herself. Her mum had Arisa's breakfast in her hand and Arisa not realising how hungry she actually was scoffed the bloody lot down. Still her mouth full she would speak. "My stuff?" Yeah i picked up your starter kit while i was at the shops" Arisa would lunge at her mother arms wrapped around at her thoughtful mum. Running through to the other room Arisa would be so happy and place all her weaponry in there allocated slots. Another hug and kiss for her mother and Arisa was out the door.

The girl still needed thread. Thankfully the thrift store was very close to her. This compound was her home, But it would have been so much nicer to not be the only ninja here. It took her so long to get recognized as a village and even longer to have someone come out and teach her from an academy. But she had done it. As she entered the thrift store Jacob the worker there would greet her with a smile. You see this compound was used by a few people who had been abandoned or lost. It was hard to find this place because the blizzard kept it hidden while inside was nice and warm. Not many people knew of its beauty. A smile and a blether between friends Jacob would smile as he knew what Arisa was in for. A large roll of elastic string like thread would be handed to her. 200 meter's worth of the stuff. Arisa would jingle in her pockets her 1500 ryo sitting nicely before Jacob the mute [he couldnt speak so there convo was all sign language] told her that it was on the house. Who wouldnt kiss the man for that quickly she would tie 20 meter's of this thread to 10 of her shuriken.

Leaving the thrift store Arisa would smile softly. Her smile wide Arisa would begin taking her daily walk around the vacinty. To be honest she did'nt want to go home yet but the thing about a remote place were no one can find is that its usually boring as hell. So Arisa would go to the place she loved most. Running as fast as she could her feet left the ground showing her nimble form off as she landed upon the rooftop for a second before zigzagging from roof to roof. Yes being a ninja was great.

OMG!! she thought. Arisa had taken her short cut and after pulling herself up from the side of the wall Arisa's eyes located the 5 people whom she was sure she had never seen before. On top of these five people there was also the puppet that one dude was floating on. Ninja....she would think to herself. Another had a dog. The dog would have gave her away she was sure if it were a ninken hell even if not it would give her away. So 5 ninja against one.......Well ninja were to protect what they believed in. The female's hand would reach behind her and her scythe would rapidly spin upwards above her hands before sliding across the ground causing sparks which would be a problem had these people probably already not know she was there. The scythe would bounce up and rest upon the lenght of her arm. The second blade at the end away from her body thus causing no damage to herself.

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This was her first time seeing proper ninja in this place. Sure her instructor had visited but that was it and he was well....lets just say he was'nt that promising. But she had to make sure.....she had to make sure that they wouldnt kill anyone or hurt her mum....she wouldnt let anyone hurt her mother. Her strength resolved yet her body continued to shake softly not to much but enough that those who paid attention would see the nerves trying to claim her. "Who....Who are you....and...and why have you come....WHY ARE YOU IN MY HOME" She would shout at the top of her voice her eyes jilting from body to body. What was going to happen.....was she going to die.



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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Sat Jul 05, 2014 7:47 am


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[Healing] - As a Kitsune of Heaven, Tristan has the power to heal mental and phsyical wounds of others through the use of the Heaven Kitsune as wel las enhancing his own regenerative abilities.
Rather than 'lolheal', how can he heal mental wounds? Is it by altering the perspective of their mentality or thought process? Or etc. For physical wounds, how many times can he do and how long does it take before it heals the wound completely so depending on the severity of the wound? Like 1 post for minor wounds, 2 posts for average and etc. About enhancing his regenerative abilities? Explain how did he do it, like focusing his spiritual energy in one area of the wound to further speeding up the healing process?

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[Tails] - Tails differ from fox fire in the way that though a pure manifestation of the Kitsune Spirit in fact shows the power of the Kitsune. The more tails the stronger the Kitsune is. Enhancing physical abiltiies like the users senses and speed. Being capable of manipulating each tail individually it is known that the tails are powerful phyiscally and are able to deal blunt damage. The tails can be used to grab things etc.
While i'm fine with the rest, but how does the number of his tails enhance his physical capabilities? What properties does these tails hold to allow that? Don't tell me 'just because he could' since it won't make any sense that the number affects his physical prowess. Explain something like the number of tails allows the stabilization of his energy and physical body, allowing a proper circulation and control over his own spiritual energy that allows him to boost his body's physical abilities which would allow each tail to store more spiritual power which results in a boost of his physical ability. Don't copy everything i describe, but if you want to, i wouldn't mind it. Just fix 'em and add details to make it more clear about how these tails works.

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[Photokynesis] - The ability to manipulate light into different forms. Capable of blinding or burning. The Kitsune of heavens light is slightly different as it is viewed as Holy and is far stronger than basic light abilities and darkness abilities. Capable of forming weapons out of light and enhancing physical abilities or creating illusions.
In general, is it stronger than basic light abilities OR darkness abilities? Because it confuses me whether he can manipulate light or darkness, or both.

Rather than saying he can just 'enhance his physical abilities, forming weapons out of light or creating illusions', i want you to put out a detail of how he can do these feats. If he were to form a weapon with light, does the size of the weapon affect the consumption of spiritual energy? How long does the weapon lasts after summoning? How can he enhance his physical abilities and can he enhance one of his physical capabilities or all of it at once, and how long can this enhancement lasts upon use, or can it be a constant use as it drains spiritual energy from him?

We are pretty strict with illusions, so i'd either recommend you to remove that and keep it for the further until he further advances his abilities to a newer level, or you are to make a detailed and reasonable explaination of how he can cause illusions from manipulating light, how long can it last, how many times can he do this, how many targets can he use illusions against and can it bypass enhanced perception of reality/sight, because if you were to bump into a character like Nozomi who has all-seeing omnidou eyes, can the character bypass that with his illusions abilities?


[quote="T.H.R. Strikes"]Gaining 3 extra tails [Taking his total to 4], The Kitsune shows itself more than in its base form. As a Kitsune gains more tai lthe strength of the physical abilities of the host is increased. The strongest ability gained in this form is the ability to form small pink petals of celestial magic. These petals look like genuine petals and have the ability to burn. Once the petals form they create a blade taking the shape form and appearance. The unique factor is when this blade strikes the petals phase into the skin of the opponent. After the user or the opponent travel for 4 meters the slash is then taking into effect. This essentially become a time delay. The wielder is also capable of releasing slashes for ranged attacks that are shaped like petals that also hold this unique ability.[/quote
Well, i find the enhancement of physical strength fine with the increase in tails as long as you fixed the one i said above about how the entirety of the tail itself works in boosting his physical capabilities. But not the petals ability.

So, since it works in both physical and ranged attacks, what i want to know is to explain how can the ability be countered? Can it be blown away with wind, water? When it burns or crashes against the enemy, can it burn or slice through someone with master hierro or master durability? What happens when it strikes itself or hits against a barrier? Does it get stopped or go right through it? Does it burn right through or etc? How many times can he use this ability per post and can he summon as many 'petals' as he could against his opponents? If so, please describe how a certain number of petals in a size of an orb, or etc. can damage its opponents?


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Within this form, Tristan gains an increase in all areas strength hearing smell etc. He also retains the abilities from the previous form. Within t his form the appearance isn't the only thing that changes. He gains the ability to manipulate the petals in a way much like Senbonzakura while also wielding his blade. The petals [80 petals in total] are controlled by the middle tail. They retain the same ability thus do not cut but phase through an opponent when they hit and only caus damage after the distance is met. The sword on the other hand which also retains the diatance abiility also gains a burn ability capable of causing 2nd degree burns due to the ability to control holy light.
Just a reminder, since you said that his physical capabilities increases according to the number of tails he has, so you should add that in, just suggesting it.

And how does it deal damage when it 'phases through' an opponent? Can you cut them from the inside? For the petals, just re-describe all the drawbacks, and stuff that i described above about the petals. So, with those fixed, you're good to go.


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Sat Jul 05, 2014 2:24 pm

^^ Thank you, I hope iv done everything you asked for ^^
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:06 am

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Mon Jul 07, 2014 8:36 am


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Now these petals in this form only take the form of a sword only. They can't be used indepentantly and only in blade form. Now once the blade is formed and strikes it is as if it only does blunt damage and that the sword is not sharp at all. It is a blade incapable of stabbing but can caus major wounds. For the blades strength is increased each time it successfully allows the petals to phase through the body. Beginning with wounds that start at 1 inch deep and ending at top power with 11 inche deep wounds. This means the blade must touch the opponents skin 10 times to gain full power. It also only cuts were the blade has touched. When the petals insert itno the body the blade instantly reforms new ones thus never losing its length.

[Example- This blade strikes an opponents rib, Blunt force damage insues. The opponent OR Tristian moves 5 meters away from each other. The area/areas struck will then at this point recieve the sword slash.]
Same goes from what i've said below. However, i expect this to be weaker than the one from his ascended sacred release since this comes from a weaker part of his power, but the decision goes to you. Just don't.. 'simply' phase through everything unless you have a reasonable explaination of how it phases through one's defenses and cut their flesh/insides.

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[Blade petals]

Now these petals in this form only take the form of a sword only. They can't be used indepentantly and only in blade form. Now once the blade is formed and strikes it is as if it only does blunt damage and that the sword is not sharp at all. It is a blade incapable of stabbing but can caus major wounds. For the blades strength is increased each time it successfully allows the petals to phase through the body. Beginning with wounds that start at 11 inch deep and ending at top power with 23 inch deep wounds. This means the blade must touch the opponents skin 10 times to gain full power. It also only cuts were the blade has touched. When the petals insert itno the body the blade instantly reforms new ones thus never losing its length.

Freely controled petals.

Like the blade abilities. The petals retain very much the same form of attack except they are also capable of doing 3rd degree burns. Being controlled by the center tail. Now as for the petals themselves. they phase only one inch into the skin. Now it begins with one inch. as 15 petals are created it can reach up to 15 inches. Petals can be blown away and burned but can be re-created after 2 posts per 5 petals. Now when they touch they phase in slowly increasing in ditance they can sink into the skin. Again the 5 meter rule stays but the damage this time is not sword style but in fact is BURNING. only after 5 meters of movement of a petal inserting into the opponent does the effect come in. Eventually after the petal or petals going 15 inches deep they can caus massive internal damage. each petal is 2 inches in size thus this is the burn size also. The burning ability only happens against flesh thus anything can not be burned.
I'm fine with everything except for one. The only issue is, that how is the enemies going to avoid from being in contact with the blade of the sword? Such as, if they have a high durability, is the sword's going to effect them both/either externally or internally from what i've read? Because i don't want it to simply bypass everything and being able to cut anything even if their hierro, barrier or so are at a Master level. It must have a reduced damage against them or not being able to cut through them at all, or something like that.

Otherwise, you're good to go once you're done fixing them, and sorry for the late re-check.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Wed Jul 09, 2014 8:45 am

^^ I think i think iv done this ^^
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Fri Jul 11, 2014 6:19 am

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Tristian Ryker [Kitsune][Approved 4-1++]   Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:57 am


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