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 Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:01 am

The Spiritual Human Template

Basic Information
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• Name: Temvriel Mnerolth
• Titles:
• Age: six months
• Gender: Female
• Affiliation/Rank: none

• Appearance Picture:

(the dragon, not the girl)

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Personality

• Personality:
Curious: Temvriel is an incredibly curious creature, always trying to figure out how things work and what they do. She is likely to poke and prod at anything new she discovers, wondering what it does or what its purpose is.

Proud: As with all draconic creatures, Temvriel is a very proud individual. Insulting her will likely result in her attempting to kill the one who insulted her. Her proud nature would usually lead her to think others are below her, but as she is just a hatchling she will show some respect to those who are far older then her.

Instincts: Despite having human levels of intelligence, Temvriel is still an animal. She will almost always act on her instincts, which could cause some issues should people act in a threatening way around her. Her instincts cause her to be very protective of things she considers her own, attack back if threatened, among other things. Her actions tend to be somewhere between human and animalistic due to the combination of her high intelligence and animal instincts.

Social Animal: Despite what anyone might tell you, dragons are social creatures. They usually create small pack like social structures based on the strength of the individual, and a threat to one of the pack is a threat to all. Since Temvriel has been alone in his short life, she will likely be an extremely social individual at first due to the need for social interaction of such animals.

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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes:
Draconic physiology: Due to Temvriel's make up, his needs and form are quite different then any other being out there. While Temvriel is an omnivore, she seems to crave meats and seems to gain more needed nutrients from meat then from plant based products. So while Temvriel is capable of eating plant products, she will not be able to survive on them for too long and they give her far less nutritional benefit then meat. Meat should make up about ninety percent of her diet, the rest being mostly leafy plants if possible. As far as her body goes, her scales are quite hard, though still soft due to her young age. Anything less then an object meant to be used as a weapon should be unable to pierce her scales. As she grows older, her scales will harden, causing them to be able to block steel blades and quite possibly bullets. Her small body makes her quite vulnerable to blunt forces though. Her wings are still quite fragile, having not fully toughened and being one of the few areas on her body not covered with scales. Her wings should be completely toughened by the time she is one year old in human terms, her scales not being completely hardened until she is five years of age, at which point she would be considered an adult of her species.

Temvriel can breath fire, though it is quite a natural process and thus a natural flame. During digestion, bacteria in Temvriel's stomach break down food and produce methane and hydrogen gases. These gases are then sucked in to gas sacs situated on either side of the throat. When a dragon breaths fire, it releases these gases in to its throat and forces them upwards as swiftly as possible. As these gases pass in to the mouth, a ring of flesh at the back of the mouth is suddenly charged with electricity, much in the same manner as an electric eel would produce electricity. Due to this sudden electric field, an electric spark is formed right as the gases from the gas sacs pour in to the maw, igniting the mixture of flammable gases. Due to the fact that the throat constricts greatly as the gases pour out of it and in to the maw, the gases ignite in a thin, directed stream as it leaves the maw, which should be opened wide enough to make sure that a burn would not be left in the maw. The temperature of these flames range from 1,000 to 1500 degrees celsius, creating a combination of orange and white colored flames. The temperature depends on how much of the gas mixture is released from the gas sacs, meaning that Temvriel can create on really hot breath of fire at 1,500 degrees celsius or up to three at 1,000 degrees celsius per thread (any usage of more then 1,000 degrees celsius and less then 1,300 degrees celsius is to considered to take up two of the 3 uses, while anything more then 1,300 degrees celsius uses up all 3).

Temvriel will often not use her ability to breath fire except as a last resort in any form of confrontation. Instead, she will usually attempt to claw at one with her quite long frontal claws. While the tip of these claws are extremely sharp, making them perfect for piercing through skin and other defenses, their sides and completely rounded, preventing them from slicing in to things she perches on. These claws double as both a way to enhance her grip on objects as well as a means of deterring would be attackers. If it appears that her claws will do her no good, Temvriel will bite the being, injecting a very large dosage of her poison from her fangs. This poison is identical to that of a black mamba, as it is a result of being born from the egg of a black mamba. However, she injects a much larger dose then that of a normal black mamba, making it act much quicker then normal. This poison works by shutting down the person's nervous system (causing paralysis), as well as the lungs and heart, causing death due to lack of oxygen and and their heart stopping. As it is identical to the venom of a black mamba, it can be treated using an antitoxin meant to be used to treat the bite of said snake. The paralysis will take effect two round after the bite, and five rounds later both the lungs and heart will shut down if not treated. When biting entities that are not human though, her poison is not nearly as effective. These entities will instead be paralyzed after 3 posts, lasting for 2 posting rounds.

Temvriel is approximately 3 feet long from her snout to the tip of her tail, a little over half her length being solely her tail. With her wings fully extended, it is five feet from one wing tip to the other. Her legs are fairly short, and she can barely stand to 1 and a half feet in height. Her body is about three quarters of a foot from belly to back side, and about one foot from side to side. Her upper and lower legs are about a quarter of a foot long each, combining for slightly over half a foot in length at the tallest. As an adult dragon, Temvriel will grow to between 3 and 4 times her current size. Since dragons do not stop growing once they reach adulthood, it is quite likely that in her lifetime, Temvriel will reach over ten times her current size, so long as she doesn't meet an untimely demise.

• Powers:
Arcane Sorcery: Dragons have always had a gift for magic and spellcrafting. For Tessa Morrowend this manifested as an ease at learning kido, allowing her to easily specialize in that area. For Temvriel though, the gift of magic is quite different. In Temvriel, it manifested as the power of Arcane Sorcery. Arcane Sorcery is very much the ability to force a change upon the reality around her using a combination of her will, focus, and spiritual energy. However, it is not all powerful. If she attempts to affect another being with her Arcane Sorcery, their own energy will fight against hers, slowly draining her of energy if she attempts to force her spell upon them. In addition, the larger the effect upon reality she is trying to make, the more energy it takes her. For instance, trying to create a tiny sphere of force? Doesn't take much energy. Trying to teleport though, that's gonna result in some serious drain upon her energy. At the current moment, Temvriel does not have any real control over her powers, mostly setting them off at random times of great emotional stress and/or desire. Thus, for all purposes, she may only have one instance of accidental power use per thread.

• Pure Abilities: (Feel free to put any abilities they might have from their powers. Such as if they had the power to generate, control and tame electricity? They would have abilities that could allow them endure harsh climates, boosted speed and things such as that.)
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Shikai.)

• Sacred Release Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)

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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Bankai.)

• Ascended Sacred State Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
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Background History

• Background:
In a strange experiment, Doctor Kabuto Hebi took snake eggs and fertilized them with the dna of Tessa Morrowend, the half dragon. He hoped that the reptilian dna would pull out the latent draconic genetics in Tessa, allowing him to recreate the powerful and majestic dragons of old. The result of this experiment was quite strange though. The creature was tiny, with a very long body. However, it was clearly draconic in origin, looking to have inherited the body of a dragon, albeit a much smaller version. It was far more intelligent than most dragons as well, having maintained a human level of intelligence from Tessa’s human side. Despite this, the creature had deeply rooted animalistic instincts, most of which relate to its draconic ancestry.

However, Temvriel did not like being around the man who has created her, and is looking to escape the lab where she currently lives. She has several times tried to teleport away from the lab, but so far she has not been able to escape to anywhere she would want to call home.

(Note: being a six month old being, there really isn't that much I can put in to her history, I hope this is enough.)

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General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


Human Reiatsu Sheet
  • Power Control: Beginner
  • Energy Usage/Regeneration: Beginner
  • Energy Resistance/Endurance: Beginner
  • Physical Augmentation: Beginner


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Roleplay Sample

• Roleplay Sample: (Please create a sample of how you role play in this section by either creating a RP sample with this character OR pasting something you have written in the past. If you have already made an accepted character, you need not go through this)

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Mon Jul 21, 2014 4:48 am

Moving it to the unchecked applications considering that it is finished.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Wed Jul 23, 2014 7:12 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Mental Deduction:
  • Pain Endurance:
  • Focus:


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i was confused by sections of the apps but was able to understand what you were trying to get at. i do recommend clarifying the scales better as how strong will they get as she grows?

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As it is identical to the venom of a black mamba, it can be treated using an antitoxin meant to be used to treat the bite of said snake. The paralysis will take effect one round after the bite, and three rounds later both the lungs and heart will shut down if not treated.

are their any other ways to treat this? and how bad does the paralysis get? also 3 turns for a heart and lung shutdown will this kill them on the spot? what about other races other then other humans?

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Wed Jul 23, 2014 11:17 pm

Well, I did edit the toxin's effect, increasing the paralysis to take effect after two rounds, and the heart and lung shut down happens five rounds after the paralysis. If the character has a supernatural ability to purge the toxin from themselves, then yes, it would work as a treatment for the toxin. The toxin is completely natural, and therefore I only stated ways to get rid of it that were not supernatural, the antitoxin. Any supernatural ability that affects toxins or poisons would affect the toxin from her bite. As for how it would affect other races? It would probably fail to shut down their heart and lungs, but still induce a single round paralysis. I'll edit the app in a moment to clarify this. For a human, unless they have some ability that allows them to live without oxygen or blood pumping through them, they would die.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Sat Aug 02, 2014 2:30 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Mental Deduction:Beginner
  • Pain Endurance:Adept
  • Focus:Beginner


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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Fri Apr 03, 2015 2:04 pm


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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Temvriel Mnerolth [Dragon thingy, using spiritual human template, finished]   Sat Oct 31, 2015 9:50 am

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Alright, for this character, I'm sending in a gentle love tap. I have a simple question for you @Tina, are you planning to get active with this character anytime soon? Or, better yet, what are your intentions? I'm just doing friendly check-ups and I'd like to know. So reply soon~





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