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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Shumasa Ringo (W.I.P)   Sat Jul 05, 2014 4:36 pm


» Name: Shumasa Ringo
» Titles:The Afro-Swordsmen, The God-Fro, Shiverstep, "Bouncy"
» Appearance Age: No more than 23
» True Age: 876
» Gender: Male
Affiliation/Rank: Gotei (will see later)

» Appearance Description: Calm and collected. Afro high and eyes stay sharp. Sly and expressive face. A face of a warrior. Furrowed eyebrows with deep curly hair. A baritone voice that is still smooth. Calm and strong. Dense Brown eyes can be seen differently. In light warm, but in the impeding darkness deep and dense. Long and toned legs. Agile yet stable in body and in mind. Well toned and lean muscles upon a deep brown skin. A sharp contrast can be found upon this.

His body type is of leanness. At an astounding 6'4", the man has a rather intimidating silhouette. Long,lengthy arms that are as thick as a sturdy tree branch. Wide and calloused hands. Heavy Knuckles that feel like sand paper when used to punch. His palms are bony yet soft and supple. His head rests upon broad and sturdy shoulders, with a tree trunk of a neck.

He weighs only 189 pounds and can use his weight to add further weight to his punches and swings. Like a samurai he holds his blade with the finesse of a ninja. Truly lethal.

» Appearance Picture: (If you have one, link a picture of your character.)


» Personality: Intelligence

Shrewd. That is the best word to describe Shumasa. A true example of a Renaissance Man. He has a wide array of knowledge, varying in Mathematics,Literature, Technology, Physics, Geography,Psychology, and his favorite being philosophy. He was rather studious as a child. Forcing his youth into bettering himself beyond the limits of others. Always over achieving and testing the waters.


A hard shell of a man that once was truly innocent. Now one that rarely shows the aforementioned genuinely. A constant facade of a man truly bitter. A man of the drums of a war village yet a boy with a dense love rooted in his past. Age and pain caused the change. The way of Shinigami, of being a man of duty and of proud of it. Artistic yet truly imprisoned in a mind frame meant for those of shadow. Death God.

Behind Closed Doors

For those even able to gain sight into Shumasa's personal life, they find it to be quite contrary to Shu's exterior. He collects toy Gundam models finding them to be a main influence to his jutsu ideas. He also has many balled up designs for weapons and abilities. He also has a boom box in his room that he uses to blast music. This ranges from K-pop, Rap, R&B, Pop, and Japanese Rock. He has a huge set of different poems and Haiku's on his walls. He also scatters Kanji for good luck around various fragile things in his room.


Snarky, sarcastic, calm, collected, judgmental yet full of insight. He has a calculating tone in his voice thus causing his voice to come off as a dick even though he doesn't mean to most of the time. That however doesn't mean he is above being harsh with words. Especially in those whom he doesn't know, views as inferior, or that have disrespected him. He has an eye for an eye mentality. Not lashing out at those unless he feels that he must. His position is that of a pacifist and an opportunist. Some may call this "strategy".


» Zanpakutō Name: Kōmyō Kakumei-Teki~:Meaning Ingenious Revolutionary (Prefers Kōmyō)

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: The Zanpakutō is actually a female in spirit. She has a rather smooth voice and chilled tone that actually complements her body type. She has the body of a goddess and the voice of a Black Panther of the 1960's. She has such power and forcefulness when she walks that she can come off as intimidating. A large breast set to be at least a modest D cup. Her hair being styled in a number of three ways depending on the mood of the situation.

A large perfectly circular Afro donned on her head. Her lips are thinner than most black females but she has at the least full lips. Her skin is of a lighter tone coming off as of caramel in the light and a concoction of milk chocolate and smooth caramel in darkness. Her eyes are rather alluring and contain a hint of purple in them. Her lips are indeed kept at a natural color. Her brow arched and medium in thickness, her nose soft as can be without any real need to be elaborated on. She has soft facial features and has the grace of a mother. She appears to be 20 years old.

» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: She is rather prideful in a sense of cockiness. She actually shares this sense with Muhammad Ali on which she pushes her wielder and herself to greater limits. She has high self-esteem and isn't one to be down in the dumps. She has an incredible sense of humor that keeps on keepin on as she continues to speak. She can seem rude at first but she honestly just loves to make situations bright for a change. She is sort of the feminine guidance for Shumasa in a sense. She is a woman who loves to smile and loves more friends than enemies.

» Inner World: Think about this....a calm and soft area. All starting from pure white and being drawn on like a canvas. The canvas soon adorned with what can be perceived as water colors. The sounds soft and bright. The sounds of calming rivers and supple streams hit the world inner to the man. This being such a sight as to bring tears to his eyes the first time he saw it.

The world seems to take shape as an ancient Edo period koi fish pond. A small rock garden to the far right. However the end to the small water lead-way to the pond is actually vertical, a rushing waterfall. Underneath the waterfall seems to be a slippery rock passage that tests the might inside the man. Behind the falls however is a sight of the Milky way. The passage in the back shows the waterfall and how it looks to be. A breathtaking picture am I right?

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: It appears as if the blade was forged in the the mind of a closet Otaku. It is a katana that is around 30 inches but is rather easy to wield. The hand guard is shaped like a box that has a vertical hollowness in it. The horizontal parts come up and hook slightly towards the blade like Sai but both sides on the guard cut. The horizontal guard can slice or snap Zanpakutō with slight effort. The straps contain a very soft cotton that has been dyed a deep indigo. The butt of the sword has a sapphire tassel on a red string. A memento from his past.

» Release Phrase: "SHINE! Kōmyō !"

» Shikai Appearance: In Shikai the blade expands in width to an astounding 3 feet. The length of the blade expands to about 5 feet and the hand guards shift slightly. The horizontal guards now connect to the hand grip. The guard now takes in a rectangular shape starting from the side of the guard, going up the blade by 7 inches, then takes a turn forming a right angle for about 3 inches. It does this again downwards for about 4 inches. Leaving 4 inches behind the guard. The Sword is to be held with the left inside the compass of the hand guard and if using two hands the right is supposed to be placed under the left.

The Sapphire tassel enlarges from about a centimeter to about two inches in size. The Red string forms into a rope that goes to about 1 foot in length. The rope is rather thick and sturdy as it looks like it can pull ships like a Tow horse. The sword can be swung by this rope and can actually be like a helicopter and fly however limited. It also has a circle near the beginning of the blade that can be used to decapitate and or break blunt weapons or limbs.

» Shikai Abilities: When swung this blade can cause a nauseating effect. At this state it can make those in the world of the living nearly puke on a whim. It does it via the tassel and the fact that it shines brightly, catching the foe's eye's because of it's allure. The Zanpakutō can snap other Zanpakutō of lesser tier without effort. Zanpakutō of the same tier can be snapped with effort depending on the thickness.

The Zanpakutō can also be flailed around by the rope also, creating a sort of air lock around the user. The strength of this slash can cause the ground to tare if struck on a downswing. The blade also can be used to block due to it's size when turned to the flat side. The Zanpakutō can also snap bones and decapitate via the circle in the blade.

» Bankai Appearance: In Bankai form, the wielder gains armor plating reminiscent of old school samurai. The wielder's hair also gets tied by a purple headband. The plating is purple and is on the Shoulders, thighs, forearms, and chest. The plates are on top of the man's White Garb. The man also gains an awesome set of geta that are metallic.

The Zanpakutō then undergoes a change, surprisingly it shrinks by a whole foot in length and width. The blade however now has bright lines running through it that can cause illusions to the eyes of the enemy. The guard also can now rotate like a drill causing even lesser effort to snap the blades of foes. The Circle on the blade now has a grip inside of it for the wielder to grab.

The rope gains a 3 feet in length and the sapphire tassel shifts to a size of about 4 inches. The blade can now be swung faster and in tandem like a nunchuku almost. The tassel can do blunt damage and the blade can further nauseate foes if swung around fast due to the light.

» Bankai Abilities:From this form, the Zanpakutō gains a lot more in terms of use. The blade itself is a lot easier to wield and has many different stances. The sword also can be swung like it did at a greater range. The tassel can actually damage and crack bones. The blade also can make foes sick due to the various lines. The lines being of yellow color allures eyes. The fast swings of the sword can promote different things from dizziness, fainting, throwing up, and even clumsiness.

The blade when swung by the rope can create an air lock that blocks any sort of gaseous element from that area. The rope does however need about a post to rev up as the speed to get the lock is hard. The sword can snap lower level Zanpakutō in the same post and takes much less effort to break equal level Zanpakutō. If used on a higher level Zanpakutō, it won't snap it. It will however strain the arms of the foe if he lets Shumasa keep the lock. The lock would possibly even throw the Zanpakutō from the hands of the foe.


» Inner Hollow Description: (What does your Inner Hollow look like? Please use a picture or 1 paragraph)

» Inner Hollow Personality: (What is your inner hollow's personality? Please use at least two paragraph's with 5 sentences)

» Inner Hollow Powers: (What powers does your inner hollow have?)

» Hollow Mask Appearance: (What does your characters mask look like? Please use either a picture or describe it in 5 sentences)


» Vizard Powers: (What benefits does your character get from transforming into their mask state?)


» Resurrección Appearance: (What does your character look like when they transform into their Resurrección state?

» Resurrección Abilities: (When a character ascends to this state, they at their peak power. As such, you will need to post at least 5 paragraph's describing their powers.)


» Background: (Please post at least 5 paragraph's describing their human life, death, progression to shinigami and how they became a Vizard along with their inner battle and the resulting conclusion of it)


» PhatomTech: (Does your character have a PhatomTech brain installed? If so, you'll be able to qualify for upgrade at the Cybermind or add other Cybernetic parts to your character to make them stronger. Click here for more information about Phantom Tech)

» Phantom Tech Abilities: (What can your character do with his or her's add-ons? This applies to any upgrades your character has gotten from places like The Cybermind as well.)

» Phantom Tech Powers: (This refers to things outside of Add-ons unlike Abilities. What Phantom Tech Powers are, in a sense, is basically what kind of power did your character gain from having a Cyberbrain? For example, Shadin Yuudeshi gained Imaginary Computation with his Cybernetic upgrades and has the ability to bring tangible things into existence with his computers Quantum Calculations.)


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala/Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


» Role Play Sample: ~You Dun Fucked Up!~

The boy stood in pure awe. His sister's corpse. The utterly disgusting man in front of him. The rage that he couldn't do anything about it. This burned the boy like catching a STD from a unprotected whore. He began to burn. Hate. Fear. Rage. His two tomoe mutated into it's third tomoe shape. This is a fully matured Sharingan. The crimson red. The reborn look. The crimson light from them caused the porcilain mask of a face to contort. He simply stared. His hands gripped hard. A single drop of blood dripped from them.

The drop was thick. Red. Drissiling down his gloves to their knuckles. The blood began to pool there. This was used by him to lure the man. As shown the man seems to be cannibalistic. A severe sence of dread crossed his person. His three tomoe spun fast. If this stare could kill, they would have been shooting lasers at the killer of his sister. He screamed on the top of his lungs. His natural purple aura corsing his body. This was malevolent. This was evil. This, was true wrath.


The voice of the boy....Quite desperate. His blood roar was rippled. The soft lavender voice the boy had was no more. His voice became of gravel. His mentality? To revenge.

~The Maturity of Dojutsu!~

The boy had a carzed stare. He stood. The blood dried. His eyes, glassed over. Something was going on inside of him. His Senju and Uchiha cells were at war. He spat a single clot of blood towards the ground. He seems lightly rejuvenated from the mutation of his eyes. With the chakra he regained from making his clones dissappear, the boy was hardened. He saw the world now at 25% speed. Making the world an almost drone. He could keep up with Raiton:Armour alone now. A great feat for a genin to do. He weaved his hands into the following seal sequence. Starting with a single normal clone seal. The clone stepped behind the real Riku.

Next, the real Riku performs the Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird seal sequence. This was Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu. A B-rank move. With his powered reserves from the mutation and the earlier clones additions, the boy made the jutsu perfectly. In the most balenced way possible. The seal sequence only took 3 seconds. This was made faster because of his Sharingan eyes already thinking the next seal. Plus his hands had natural dexterity. As the roaring rappid of the Dragon began it's route to the cannibalistic male, it opened the water pathways under the ground under it's path.

~Time to See a Death Tactic. "Great World Leveling."~

-The clone behind the boy smirked as he made a small visible patch to the underground water ways. He smirked as he placed the hip pouch on his side inside the hole while turning the water down. The pouch unraveled as the explosive notes and flare bombs were free to roam in just a second. The clone reversed the water's current as the 50 explosive tags and 3 flare bombs went around the whole area. If there was a way to dodge this, it would be to get off of the ground. If the male stays on the ground, the explosion will damage, but the ground will cave in. Causing the male's body to be obbliterated. The only way to dodge this was to get high in the air. And with the water dragon homing in on the man, this was going to be no easy task.

~Trap Game.~

Riku made his clone dissappear as he leapt into the air. He was high. The boy performed another sequence. The man should now be seeing the Water dragon. The Ram-->Tiger sequence was made in half a second do to their closeness in shape. This was Suiton: Mizuame Nabara. This next action, was bullet fast. The boy shot the sticky ball of liquid down towards the man as fast as a bullet. He then nodded to his friend. Attempting to tell him to jump. If the sticky ball were to hit, the initail impact would most likely floor a man his opponetnt's size. The stick ball would keep him there. On the ground. Ready to be detonated. If this dosen't hit however, the ball would have a harder impact on the ground. Shaking it. Causing the man to possibly trip. The notes and bombs would remain intact however.

~The Final Flash.~
The boy with or without his friend would perform the snake seal. Causing the ground to detonate. This was a tactic that was original to him. This tactic was called Great Earth Leveling. The collapse effect on the ground would instantly happen after the heay explosion. This had a eigth the potency of a Nuclear bomb. Counting the possible Earth crush damage. This, was a killing attack attempt. This attack was to finish this. The boy would smirk as the blast effect would send him higher into the air. This could be deadly to both the foe and his friend. If the other boy didn't get his hint to jump, then the boy should die then. Since he couldn't see the hint. The attack will cause the plains to turn into what looks like a meteor crash site.

~Now...The Final Flash.~

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Shumasa Ringo (W.I.P)   Mon Jul 21, 2014 4:26 am

For now, i am moving this to the Old W.I.P since its been 2 weeks old or so wihout much work on it, but no worries since you can still continue working on it, if you need it to be moved, checked or just about anything to deal with the app if needed, just post here or here to inform us to help ya' out with it.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Shumasa Ringo (W.I.P)   Mon Aug 25, 2014 9:39 pm

Archiving from Old WIP due to member inactivity.

I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.

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