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 Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]   Thu Jul 31, 2014 6:07 am

I was REALLY tired when I made this, mind you. Apologies for anything sorta outta place and/or outlandish. If I used the word right.



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» Name: Kururai Osamerkami
» Titles:
» Race: Human/Hollow
» Age: 19
» Gender: N/A (male pronouns)
» Affiliation/Rank: N/A

» Height: 5'9ft
» Weight: 112lbs
» Appearance Picture:

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» Personality:
Kururai shares many traits with the conscience which raised him, the Nether. Having spent his whole life up to this point in the dimension, he hasn't been exposed to much. Though, he does seem to display an interest in the martial arts, frequently watching others perform it in the 'outside world'. His currently primary defining trait is impulsiveness. Since living rather isolated up to this point, his decisions are made without too much reserve. While he does take caution and common sense into consideration, for the most part he makes decisions on impulse.

Though he doesn't know it yet, Kururai can actually be rather sarcastic and condescending at times, often talking in a polite manner, but quite clearly establishing just how much sentiment lies behind those words. A bit harsh, rude and lacking tact sometimes, often freely speaking his mind as he chooses to. Same rule applies to his mouth as his general actions, however; some actual thought is put into what he says, and before he says it. Either way, the words he uses aren't spoken thoughtlessly, even if it may seem that way.

Overall, any substantial personality traits have yet to develop, as he's had very few opportunities to present them and gain them.

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» History:
Somewhere in Nevada Hueco Mundo, within a Shadowfall lab, one of many experiments took place. One particular experiment yielded results unknown to even those of direct participation. For a motive unknown to the subject, a modified hollow was constructed, similarly to the artificial souls the Gotei had developed oh so many years ago. The body chosen to be granted to the constructed soul was that of a young human teen, male--yet, seemingly female. Not necessarily neither, but not entirely either. A confusing statement surely, but it simply didn't seem... 'gendered'. Nevertheless, the chosen host had been a young human, still alive at the time, and no doubt fearful for their life.

The process had begun, and after only an hour of horrid shouts--a surprisingly strong will this human had possessed--the screams had ceased; oddly enough, the body didn't seem to have been transformed into a hollow, as the usual logic would dictate. No doubt, the human in that body had been entirely suppressed, but there was no physical differences to reflect that. In the end, the experiment was deemed a failure.

It would seem that, despite being a ridiculously simpleton mistake, the developers of the artificial soul forgot to account for a lack of spiritual power, which would result in a failure to transform the body itself, keeping physical form. While they hollow had successfully resided in the body, there was no expectation for it to be sustained--the lack of spiritual energy would eventually sever the connection between the body and soul.

The product of a failed experiment was dealt with accordingly. Swiftly and without much though, the body was dumped off somewhere in the dunes of Hueco Mundo, the hollow left to eventually lose its presence. Something else the developers hadn't seemed to account for--and understandably so--was an outside variable. Out of nowhere, a menacing presence had shadowed over the lifeless human body harbouring the artificial hollow.

Moments passed before the hollow within the body had gained consciousness--or rather, had developed a conscience. Awareness had manifested, and against the lack of expectations, the hollow was, so to speak, 'alive'. But for what reason? With a lack of constant energy to keep the bond intact, it was clear that the hollowed-human would succumb to, in someway, nature.

The looming presence from before had been the cause. The hollow had risen, seemingly in complete control of the humanoid physical body. Everything seemed to be functioning properly, including its eyes. What it saw was not the sands of Hueco Mundo; instead, an endless sky of hazy purple shades, coalescing with a multitude of other hues, meshing together in a headache inducing flow. And what seemed to be generated from that horrid mass of colours was a voice. A voice seemingly shrouded in the heavy tone of multiple--hundreds, thousands of voices, all speaking as one.

"You live."

Naturally, somehow already knowing how to do so, the hollow replied.

"Who would 'you' be?"

A slight pause coated the setting before a reply was sent back.

"No one. 'You', currently, are no-one."

Another pause ensued, a quickly adapting hollow already managing facial expression, proven by a confused look.

"How should I.. 'become', someone."

An instant reply this time, almost anticipating the spoken words.

"A name would be a start."

"And what do you suggest?"

Another brief moment of silence, before the patterned break.

"Kururai. Kururai Osamerukami. That is you. And now, you are someone."

The conversation had continued on, and before long, the hollow, "Kururai", would seem to have been given an identity. The only thing missing was 'purpose'. As the voice, the 'Nether', being the term it referred to itself as, had proclaimed, a being has purpose, and a loss of purpose is a loss of being. As such, the Nether had imparted upon Kururai a purpose--something which would stick, and for a very long time.

"Let your purpose be ours. Grow, take ahold of us, and give us purpose. That is yours."

A series of confusing and cryptic conversations continued, before a basic grasp of who they were was established. As the Nether would proclaim, it was a dimension, which over time had gained self-awareness, one way or another. And the voices and plural pronouns were in reference to the thousands of consciences that resided in the Nether, spawned from its awareness of its own existence. And for a supposed long time, the Nether had looked for that without purpose, without identity--that which lacked what the dimension itself had lacked as well. In that, the Nether would task the being with the purpose of giving itself purpose. Kururai, not knowing a thing besides what the Nether had told 'him', had naturally accepted such a purpose. But something seemed to stick to Kururai in relation to what the Nether had said. "Grow".

It would seem that the state of Kururai had lacked strength--a sufficient power to accomplish such a purpose. Had it not been for the Nether supplying him with its dimensional energy, he would be nothing more than a lifeless human doll. First, the bonds between the body, soul and dimension, would first need to grow. This was what the Nether had meant by "take ahold of us". To be able to manually sustain himself, Kururai would first require the skill to draw energy from the Nether, to keep himself intact and act as his Spiritual Energy. This would entail the grasp of the dimension, mastery over it, the ability to have it heed his call. And that he did.

Some 19 years would pass, as Kururai would grow in both mind and body. Able to watch the outside world from within the Nether, Kururai had also gained knowledge of the world in which he would soon enter, after his control of the Nether would grow. These 19 years would be filled with the growth of 'self'; new emotions had been discovered, a definite personality had manifested, and in the end, Kururai would be ready. Equipped to visit the world he was born in for nearly two decades.



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While barely qualified as a hollow, especially with the two defining traits of one being absent in Kururai (a hollow appearance and hollow energy), Kururai still follows the forms of a hollow. As such:

- Hollow type: Lesser Familiar (although lacking a Lesser Familiar's body, the soul has been created as such, and will also evolve as a hollow (through consumption of other beings).

- Hollow Power:

Power Consumption: As it is widely known, hollows draw power (and potentially evolve) by consuming other beings--namely, spiritual beings such as Shinigami, Pluses, and even other hollows. To evolve, this would need to be done in the masses (only for when he evolves into Menos, Adjuchas, Vasto. No actual noticeable power-gains if he eats people in threads.)

Acidic Touch: Still fundamentally being a hollow, Kururai retains much of hollow's characteristics and racial traits, including the acidic touch. While not too potent as he has rarely used them, Kururai is capable of being able to melt through some sorta-dense substances, including stone, and with extended exposure, overtime even metal. Furthermore, he has control over this ability, and can use it as well as deactivate it at will. The rarity of this ability being used so far makes it difficult to determine his growth-rate. A slight difference in this ability is the lack of hollow-reiatsu seeping into the object in contact--especially considering Kururai possesses no Hollow Reiatsu to begin with.

Soul-Body Separation: Something yet to be used by Kururai, thus possessing unknown potency. The Nether has indeed informed Kururai that as a hollow, he is still capable of performing this ability.

Highly Adaptive: Although his definite growth-rate isn't made apparent, it's easily assumed that Kururai has an amazing capacity to learn, managing to, for the most part, gain control of an entire dimension within 20 years. Granted, those 20 years were constantly spent in the dimension in question nonstop, and time may potentially(unknown) accelerate slower in the dimension, it proves to be an amazing feat nonetheless. The Nether would sometimes teach Kururai methods of controlling some aspects of the dimension, which Kururai was capable of picking up on the first try, including even some of the more advanced techniques. Furthermore, through watching the outside world from within the Nether, Kururai has been able to replicate movements nearly perfectly with just a single look. It could be said that his comprehensive talents have no near limits, so far.
(Only allows for accelerated learning of racial skills. Physical movements are easier to replicate, but still have noticeable flaws. He might be able to pull off uniquer techniques (especially energy-generated) but only perhaps around 50-60% capacity, so a few more looks are necessary to actually get something completely down).

Enhanced Strength: As a hollow, Kururai has a strength which goes beyond the limits of average beings. Despite his frail weight, his strikes pack some serious heat. While not necessarily being tested on anything yet, the Nether claims Kururai to generate enough force to easily break through a substance known as "reinforced concrete" with relative ease, consecutively.

Frail Body: Yes, Kururai possesses above average strength, however, it doesn't denounce the fact that his body is still that of a humans. As such, his durability suffers majorly, and combined with his weight, it'd be easy to deal blows to his fragile fleshy body.

Speed and Reflexes: The most potent of Kururai's physical stats. Having lived in a separate dimension for 19 years, seemingly endless, Kururai's had plenty of space to test his limits of speed, which have actually been broken several times. Just as his highly adaptive trait would dictate, Kururai's speeds would constantly improve, and being that a lonely dimension doesn't have much to do besides walk around, practice one's control over it and absorb knowledge from the its conscience, it's clear why and how this aspect of his came to be so much farther up than his others. Furthermore, combined with his comprehensive talents and fast enough processing-rate, letting Kururai intake the surrounding information faster and easier than most as if time was moving slower for him than others, no doubt his reflexes would be impeccable.

High Energy Sensitivity: Due to lacking his own spiritual energy, Kururai has been trained to channel dimensional energy into himself from the Nether. A byproduct of such an ability would be an innate capacity to sense energy--in Kururai's case, being able to have possession over an entire dimension, his acute sensing skills to energies being so overwhelming, he's even capable of visualising an entire area solely through the reishi in the air. In more energy-dense locations, the accuracy is only heighetened; on Earth, he would be capable of sensing minor reishi displacements to the extent of slight contractions and expansion in muscle movement. Capable of accurately visualising everything within even a mile radius, theoretically, Kururai could even use this talent to see and hear (vibrations through the air can be detected through slight reishi displacements) instead of using his eyes and ears.

Pain Toleration: Surprisingly somewhat developed--trying to gain control of an entire dimension can often end up with adverse consequences if executed poorly. As a result, some practices have resulted in a backfire, often ripping his flesh right open in most all areas. Combined with his adaptive prowess, Kururai has become relatively 'used' to the pain. While not perfect, with quite some room to improve this trait, the amount of abuse Kururai could withstand is surprisingly high.

- Weapons: For the most part, Kururai would simply form the desired weapon out of condensed dimensional energy. Surprisingly, Kururai seems to retain a plethora of skills by watching others from within the Nether. Attributed by his adaptive rates, he withholds a substantial amount of capacity to perform many high-precision movements, including with weapons. Weapons, being his preferred choice in a battle--a weapon of any kind, but a sword is preferred--tend to work well with Kururai; sometimes, even with first touch, he would display remarkable skill in adeptly handling the weapon, performing beautiful strikes and swings despite little experience. It simply seems to be a forte of his.
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» The Spirit's Name: The Nether
» The Spirit's Race: N/A
» The Spirit's Gender: N/A
» The Spirit's Age: Unknown. Presumably, a long fuckin' time.

» The Spirit's Written Appearance: N/A

» The Spirit's Pictured Appearance: N/A

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» The Spirit's Personality: The Nether lacks substance, in terms of a personality. For the most part, it's rather passive, not frequently making 'conversation', and simply being there unless called upon. For the most part, it lacks a well developed personality so far. One of the very few definite traits it does possesses is a 'nuturing side', so to speak. Having given Kururai knowledge and information, essentially raising the being to who he is now for 19 years, it's understandable that he withholds somewhat of a caring side.

For the most part, the Nether can seem rather philosophical and poetic, especially considering its awareness is infatuated with having a purpose, to the point of pushing it on to someone else to find, or grant him, purpose, as is the connection between the Nether and Kururai. At times, the Nether can say some rather thought-provoking words, but for the most part, he simply lacks much emotion at all, thus lacking a bit of personality.


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» The Spirit's History: N/A


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» Ziamichi Spirit Powers: The Nether is a dimension, and therefore doesn't have powers.
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» Unique Traits: Dimensional Control

As required to give the Nether 'purpose' and sustain himself, Kururai has grasped control over the Nether, and the entire dimension. Of course, the transition of living in said dimension for nearly two decades to entering the 'world', the translation of his dimensional powers aren't necessarily accurate. His attributes are significantly lessened, and he has little influence on the actual world around him. To contradict that is actually several plausible influences on the world. Using his body as a medium, Kururai may channel dimensional energy from the Nether into the current realm, even being capable of distorting space in several ways. As he had only recently come to the other realms, he is unexperienced in its applications. For the most part, Kururai only has dimensional energy to use, which could be thought as his spiritual energy, therefore being able to accomplish many other feats that other energies are capable of.

Given that his energy is an entire dimension, technically speaking, he has an unlimited source of energy. Of course, coming to other realms, Kururai cannot simply use dimensional energy willy-nilly, and has to steadily flow it throughout his body; therefore, for the most part, he still possesses something of a cap of dimensional energy he can utilise. Furthermore, until he can strengthen his body to transferring energy from the dimension into him in the current realm better, there will be a certain capping point in his energy-usage. While there will usually always be a slight flow of energy (which will only serve to keep him alive, since that's essentially his life line), he would be incapable of using any techniques or anything.

The dimensional energy is transferred through one simple concept; Kururai's body acts as a gateway of sorts, essentially connecting the Nether to the dimension he would be in. A skilled being may work their way into using Kururai as a catalyst to enter the Nether. Since his body itself is constantly connected to the Nether while existing in the space of another dimension, though not entirely easy, transporting things from one side into the other--namely dimensional energy--is a very possible feat.

Regenerative Factor: The dimensional energy which coarses throughout Kururai, although has a limit on the constant flow it can produce, is still being backed by essentially endless amounts. As such, many, mostly all of Kururai's injuries will heal at an accelerated rate, the dimensional energy passively healing his wounds. Though he has yet to sustain any, its clear that his ability to heal far surpasses the norm, even for beings of his caliber.

The nature of his regenerative factor is like few other beings, in which he instantly heals from inflicted injuries. While this, for the most part, includes almost everything besides the completely mortal (such as decapitation or the sort), such as organs, limbs and flesh, this is highly limited by the Dimensional Energy capacity he possesses. The regeneration is triggered by the energy passively healing him. With a low and insufficient amount of dimensional energy, the wounds won't be healed. Unfortunately, this entails a sort of "on/off" type of ability. Either he heals instantly, or he doesn't heal. At all. Even little scratches.

Intensive Calculation Skills: Kururai is in constant contact with the conscience of an entire dimension. A dimension would have its own laws of physics and the like, and if something like that has grown self-aware, no doubt they would be able to take account for virtually all possibilities and variables instantly, as something it simply 'knows'. Being linked to Kururai's own mind, its easy enough to say that few things are out of their 'field of vision', so to speak. Every mathematical formula which can be made would be known to the Nether, and as a result, Kururai.

Unfortunately, Kururai is still just one artificial mind, while the Nether is the conscience of a dimension. As such, even if the Nether made known to Kururai every mathematical formula in existence, he would first need to explain what it is, how it works and what it entails. Simply giving him the information will be pointless until he knows how to use it. As such, for the most part he'd only be capable of acting on given variables, formulas and equations instantly in simpler form. Something such as calculating object velocity or trajectory. More mass-scale or long equations are of course increasingly difficult.

Dimensional Travel: Kururai has access to another dimension, which can be opened both ways into other realms. As such, it wouldn't be such a hard concept for Kururai to be able to travel inter-dimensionally by going from the Nether to another realm, or go from, for example, Earth, to the Nether, and then to the desired realm of choice. It's not something very hard for Kururai to accomplish either.

Theoretically, it's possible to transport objects, including himself, from the current dimension into the Nether, and transport them back in a different location, so in a way, this may serve as a sort of teleportation.

» Forms: N/A at the moment

» Drawbacks: Considering the lack of experience, none to document so far.

» Control: 9.5 | Before coming to the 'real' world, as asked by the Nether itself, Kururai has come to completely take control of the dimension, and though he has yet to be able to test or use its full potential, at the moment perhaps even being incapable of doing so, the conscience that is the dimension still obeys Kururai. The 9.5 instead of 10 is for reluctance. While the Nether does obey Kururai, pretty much having to do so, the conscience can still be reluctant to obey, although considering the circumstances between the two, it's highly unlikely.

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NOTE: Ziamichi's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

Click here for skill sheet
Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

Racial Skills
  • Acid Skill: Adept
  • Garganta : Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Beginner
  • Regeneration: Advanced

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced

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General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: N/A
  • General Speed: N/A
  • Strength: N/A
  • Weapon Skill: N/A


Ziamichi Skills For Spirit
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]   Fri Aug 01, 2014 3:44 am


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Tier: 3-4 when fixed.
Comments/Notes: You're going to go through some fixing, but no worries, i'm here.


LatinDoge wrote:
Power Consumption: As it is widely known, hollows draw power (and potentially evolve) by consuming other beings--namely, spiritual beings such as Shinigami, Pluses, and even other hollows. While this also applies to Kururai, due to his spiritual energy being of a different nature, he is capable of drawing strength through eating beings besides only these, including actual humans (as he retains a physical form), demons, and even Iramasha.
After talking this out, i'll just straight out denying this. First, after talking this with lio, he'll just lolgain power/draw a ton of strength by eating NPCs all he wants wihout even caring. Two, i'm going to refer this to a rule that Frost made:
Spoiler:
 
So, cut that out if you can, thanks.

LatinDoge wrote:
Highly Adaptive: Although his definite growth-rate isn't made apparent, it's easily assumed that Kururai has an amazing capacity to learn, managing to, for the most part, gain control of an entire dimension within 20 years. Granted, those 20 years were constantly spent in the dimension in question nonstop, and time may potentially(unknown) accelerate slower in the dimension, it proves to be an amazing feat nonetheless. The Nether would sometimes teach Kururai methods of controlling some aspects of the dimension, which Kururai was capable of picking up on the first try, including even some of the more advanced techniques. Furthermore, through watching the outside world from within the Nether, Kururai has been able to replicate movements nearly perfectly with just a single look. It could be said that his comprehensive talents have no near limits, so far.
I would just stamp this out of my way. I won't allow her to replicate movements/techniques/anything in its near-perfect state with JUST a single look. Just no, after going through a few apps that i've checked, i won't allow instant-learning with just one glance, that for example, if she were to see a technique from someone that made personally for themselves and its imperfect, she can't just lollearn the technique and use it in its near-perfect state when the original creator have not even flinched it at all. I'll just either ask you to fix this where she could only learn basic techniques/abilities that are only related to her race/hollow's, instead of just learning every single thing in earth with one glance, especially fighting techniques and its style, OR just simply delete this out, and most likely that you're going to fix other abilities that i did not go through that may be related to this trait which makes Kururai's progression so damn fast and near-perfect in a sense, and also not to mention, no near limits? Well, i might just stamp a deny on this ability if i had to.

LatinDoge wrote:
Dimensional Control: As required to give the Nether 'purpose' and sustain himself, Kururai has grasped control over the Nether, and the entire dimension. Of course, the transition of living in said dimension for nearly two decades to entering the 'world', the translation of his dimensional powers aren't necessarily accurate. His attributes are significantly lessened, and he has little influence on the actual world around him. To contradict that is actually several plausible influences on the world. Using his body as a medium, Kururai may channel dimensional energy from the Nether into the current realm, even being capable of distorting space in several ways. As he had only recently come to the other realms, he is unexperienced in its applications. For the most part, Kururai only has dimensional energy to use, which could be thought as his spiritual energy, therefore being able to accomplish many other feats that other energies are capable of.

Given that his energy is an entire dimension, technically speaking, he has an unlimited source of energy. Of course, coming to other realms, Kururai cannot simply use dimensional energy willy-nilly, and has to steadily flow it throughout his body; therefore, for the most part, he still possesses something of a cap of dimensional energy he can utilise.
Well, most of them do not have any problem, but i want you to fully state it of how Kururai transfer or even move this 'dimensional energy' considering that it comes from another dimension, not directly from his body, so it should've give him a little tax of trying to warp and manipulate it from a dimension to another, because doing that is not an easy task, even for an expert to even 'lolmove' an energy coming from another dimension and not from itself wihout breaking any sweat, and how, in actuality instead of just telling about its 'flow', is limited can he use this ability considering it is 'another dimension'.

While another thing is this entire 'unlimited source of energy' thingy. I simply.. cannot approve of this. Everything has its limit, indeed you did describe how limited that Kururai can draw out from the dimension itself and use it under a limited capacity, but this does not really give away the fact that he can use it an unlimited amount of times no matter how limited he can store himself to bring into the reality, which means even if he use it for years and get exhausted, take a little rest and reuse it again, he will never run out of it. Give the dimensional energy some actual limits where he would draw from it until it becomes exhausted of energy, and requires time to replenish its power back. Limited uses? Sure. Unlimited energy? Nope. Fix those and i'll get to it.


LatinDoge wrote:
Regenerative Factor: The dimensional energy which coarses throughout Kururai, although has a limit on the constant flow it can produce, is still being backed by essentially endless amounts. As such, many, mostly all of Kururai's injuries will heal at an accelerated rate, the dimensional energy passively healing his wounds. Though he has yet to sustain any, its clear that his ability to heal far surpasses the norm, even for beings of his caliber.
So.. Can Kururai heal himself from internally inflicted wounds like organs? If so, i'd ask you to describe how long it takes to complete heal a certain wound, like limbs and organs, unless you're aiming for instant-regeneration, then you'll have to put down some drawbacks for it since he can't just 'lolheal' all the damn time when someone cuts him.

LatinDoge wrote:
Intensive Calculation Skills: Kururai is in constant contact with the conscience of an entire dimension. A dimension would have its own laws of physics and the like, and if something like that has grown self-aware, no doubt they would be able to take account for virtually all possibilities and variables instantly, as something it simply 'knows'. Being linked to Kururai's own mind, its easy enough to say that few things are out of their 'field of vision', so to speak. Every mathematical formula which can be made would be known to the Nether, and as a result, Kururai.
I'd say 'no' to instantly calculate and take account of EVERY SINGLE POSSIBILITIES AND VARIABLES WIHOUTBREAKING A DAMN SWEAT. Nonononono, i am not allowing this. His brain is not some cybermachine like Shadin, Beetle, Kakine or whoever around. It still takes some time to fully analyze something to an extent before fully comprehending it, and Kururai, can do these things wihout even flinching at all. I don't care if he can take in unlimited information, but he should have some issues dealing with things that are extremely complex in nature, as if i were to throw at him with something that is not from any dimension and he can just 'lolcalculate' and smack it away with appropriate methods, then i doubt i can allow that to pass by. Otherwise, find a way to fix this, you can weaken the potential of it to an extent where he can only calculate in an intense from basic to adept things that are simple, while more advanced and complex calculations takes up more time for him to build up the exact calculation of it, something like that.

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Dimensional Travel: Kururai has access to another dimension, which can be opened both ways into other realms. As such, it wouldn't be such a hard concept for Kururai to be able to travel inter-dimensionally by going from the Nether to another realm, or go from, for example, Earth, to the Nether, and then to the desired realm of choice. It's not something very hard for Kururai to accomplish either.
Mostly, i don't have issues with this with the dimensional travel between earth and nether. The only thing i wanted to ask this, can this be used as a transportation to cover huge distances or when he goes and returns from the nether, he will end up on the same place of where he has entered previously? It'll confuse me to whether know if this can be used for transportation as well or just to move from dimension to dimension.

Anyways, get them fixed and i'll re-grade it to give its rightful tier once i find everything being alright.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]   Fri Aug 01, 2014 9:14 am

There, I think I fixed everything. Sorry for the trouble =P

For the Hollow Consumption, I state that it's only for when he evolves into a higher hollow-state (Menos essentially).

In terms of his High Adaptivity, I explain that he can most easily replicate racial skills, and physical skills are pretty easy to do. Uniquer techniques are harder to accomplish, but with adequate studying, are capable of being done as well.

For Dimensional Control, I explain that his body is a gateway, sort of a connecting point between the Nether and whatever dimension he's in, as well as putting a capping point of dimensional energy he can exhaust.

In Regenerative Factor, I add that its instant healing, and that its either he has instant healing or doesn't heal at all, since its dependent on his energy reserves, and once those are out he's completely done.

I explain in Calculative Skills that the ability to take into account all the variables and every formula is something the Nether has, and that it can only relay that information to Kururai. He himself must first learn what to do with the information or how to understand it, which is generally explained to him by the Nether--logically, the more complex something is, the more time its going to take to explain; therefore, while small calculations are easily taken into account, larger more complex formulas and variables are harder to do.

Dimensional Travel: Yes, he can use it for long-distance travel.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]   Fri Aug 01, 2014 10:52 am


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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced


[u]Will Skills For Spirit/u]
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes: Had some issues giving tiers but you're good to go with an approval.
Tier: Host tier is 3-4, which is Class E.
Spirit's tier is 5-5 [ Considering that it is aware of spiritual beings ], which is E- for its class.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]   Sat Aug 02, 2014 1:59 pm

Kururai will gain some new techniques in one of his threads, as this upgrade specifies.
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Kururai Osamerukami [ APPROVED HOST 3-4, SPIRIT 5-5 ]   Fri Oct 03, 2014 10:52 pm

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