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WOOOH! That post was hectic. Kururai was put through unimaginable pain while gaining an entirely new body, and as a result, he's likely to be stronger than ever before. It was a long post, even larger than the one proceeding it. That thread is pretty epic so far, as it had consistently taken out not only constant 1000+ posts from me, but two consecutive c.2k post. So far, things are progressing well in Surrounded and Unwavering.
Okay! So, I got the third post out there, and I must say I'm digging the flow I've got going so far. In the last Mini-Burst, I was intent on changing my posts to fit what I was comfortable with--at least, in terms of length. And based on this post being over 1000 words? I feel as though I've grown a bit, in both my RP style as well as ability to explain my character's thoughts and actions. In fact, I've taken away a bit from the actions, embellishing what's going on a bit less and instead focusing what I've written more on narration and my character's thoughts. I feel as though this post was much better than the two previous Mini-Burst 3 posts I've made so far. A bit of muse came from [THEFROST]'s style of writing, in fact. Though, I doubt much resemblance in his posting and this one would be found, but how he writes affected how I wrote in this one, nonetheless. Overall, I'm pretty satisfied with what I've got so far, and I feel as though I can start taking my posts to the next level in their detail and fashioned writing. Hopefully this carries on into my applications as well, and basic writing skill as well.
Kk~. I got the fourth post out yesterday, on the 2.5th day of my Mini-Burst Challenge! It's actually the shortest among all my posts, but that's okay! It's not as action-y as some of the others either, and it doesn't actually cover much--then again, there wasn't too much to be covered.
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Hardy har har. It's my Fifth post for the Mini-Burst Challenge, made for the lieutenant of the Fourth Division, done on the Third day. HAHAHAHAhaaaa... It was a pretty good post I'd say. Had a hint of emotion, but only enough for one line of dialogue. It ended rather abruptly, but only to react to Shinryu's placement of Onmitsukido members around the perimetre--for za safety reasons. Overall, I'm pretty satisfied with it, and it keeps up to my large-post standard that's been maintained throughout the coarse of this challenge. Hazaah!
Alrighty then~; I got my sixth post up with Yukari! It was a pretty darn short post, but it was for a casual thread--what can ya' expect? Either way, it's a nice way to have herself introduced to the new Vice Captain, Shinryu of the Onmitsukido--it'd help if they met in an informal meeting rather than the battlefield over in Somalia. Anyways, a satisfactory post that got the job done, even though it was nothing overly impressive or anything.
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Subject Post 7Subject: Re: S_E's MINI-BURST 3 Post Tracker. Fri Oct 03, 2014 10:55 pm
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