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|Subject Post 1Subject: Waizu-fu Senshi [Approved 4-4] Sun Aug 17, 2014 12:54 am|| |
The Spiritual Human Template
• Name: Waizu-fu Senshi
• Titles: Human Wind
• Age: 25
• Gender: Male
• Affiliation/Rank: Rogue
• Appearance Description: Waizu's hair length is to tip of shoulders, color of hair is brown, has a short hair not in spikes, but straight. His eye color is brown, and his eyes not so Asian like. Senshi's skin is yellow, and body is skinny. Waizu is wearing a red jacket with no sleeves , and a gold wrist accessory. Under his red jacket is a black long sleeve shirt. The bottom of shirt is in his pants. He is wearing a sorta golden big thing around his hips, and this kinda side armor on side of top of leg's that are red.
• Appearance Picture:
• Personality: Senshi as a little kid was very playful, but was always calm, and very quiet. He would act like a monkey, but with no noise. When he got older, he would not be so serious about things, and act like a true monkey, he was always carefree, but as he gotten older, he started break laws and rules.
Senshi at this age would always be happy, and calm, and anyone around him would feel like they were dealing with the wind. He was like the wind, he was nice, and always came to people, and gave people around him a nice feeling. Exactly like the wind it can be nice, but if you make it mad the wind can go crazy. Senshi got his title the human wind because of his personality, and also some other things, but his personality went well for his title.
Senshi never got caught by police at all, and stayed the way he was until he turned 18. At 18 Senshi became serious, and gained a liking for many things. At a younger age, Senshi liked everything, and never disliked, but at 18 he gained a liking for many things, but he gained a disliking for some things. As he got to age 20 he became laid-back.
Likes: Wind, Rain, Grass, Night, Day, Combat, Monkey's, Food, Sleep, Thunder, and Ancient Chinese Clothing.
Dislikes: All types of vehicles, Most modern things, Nature Killers, all evil spiritual beings, and death.
Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers
• Natural Attributes:
Wind-Like Movement: Senshi not only has a personality based on wind, but he also is like wind himself. Senshi is like a ninja, he is very light, and quick on his feet. He actually moves with wind, sometimes it may look like he is being foolish, or acting drunk when fighting a opponent, but really he is just using his Wind Movement. Not only does he just use his legs, but his whole body moves like it. His flexibility, and agility is also a reason for such movement. To enemy's Senshi seems like a blur, and his sword art seems like he is dancing with swords, but really it is really slow at times, but in that unfocused moment, enemy could be cut down. Without this, Senshi would be just a weakling. Sometimes Senshi tends to abandon logic and play with pure instinct, generally making illogical but successful moves.
Monkey Gentle Blade Style: Senshi created this style in order to go with his Wind-Like Movement. The style focuses on Flexibility, Agility, Speed, and Gentleness. Senshi would always make first move, and that move is first part of his style, called Forest Trap, if not successful, then he would wait for the enemy to make move, which is called Banana call.
In this style the sword is not just focused on, but every single part of body. In this style, Senshi does not take a stance, but unsheathes his weapon and put's it to his front held out. This is so that his move cannot be predicated. Now, this style has a missing piece, and that is Wind-Like Movement. Wind-Like Movement is the base of this style. Although very complex to enemy, Senshi uses a lot of energy for this style, and this is why he avoids fighting seriously,because he knows not of how long he can fight. In a battle, the only thing Senshi lacks is durability, stamina, and strength of course.
• Powers: Wind Manipulation: Senshi can generate wind, and manipulate it to a extent. Senshi is new to this power, and could only flow the wind to his sword, and other various simple things like Wind Blast.
Senshi most used technique in battle helps him a lot. It is called Air Step, he uses his wind to push all the air molecules near their feet together for a very quick moment.
He can use this to find footing in mid-air. The technique does, however, have its limits. He can cannot create permanent footing, he can only create footing for only a second or two to allow jumping, and dodging in mid-air. Another move he uses similar to this called, Air Burst which is a quick burst of wind to send him forwards.
• Pure Abilities:
Enhanced Speed by reducing air resistance and utilizing pressurized air for propulsion.
Enhanced touch by reading the airwaves and feel any disturbances.
Enhanced Hearing by amplifying air molecule vibrations.
• Sacred Release Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Shikai.) • Sacred Release Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
Ascended Sacred State
•Ascended Sacred State Appearance:(Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Bankai.) • Ascended Sacred State Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
• Background: Senshi parent's died when he was three, and no one else could take care of Senshi. Waizu lived on the Streets of China somewhere, and watched as he people ignored him. Senshi was 5 when this happened, but a year later a old man with a long white beard walked up to him, and snatched him up.
The man brought him to this big mansion, and in their was a bunch of kids in uniforms. They were all Martial Artist, and these 8 guys without uniform were watching on the stair case. The old man brought Senshi in, and sat him down on this chair by door. The old man left the house, and the one of the 8 guys on the stair case told the kid's in uniforms to stop training, and greet Senshi.
Waizu was scared, but greeted the kids anyway, but the kid's could tell Waizu was scared. He was shaking, and looked like he was about to cry. One of the 8 man leaped over from the stair case by the chair Waizu was sitting on. Senshi and the kids looked in awe.
The man greeted Waizu, and tried to make him laugh. It worked and Waizu was not so scared. After that day, Waizu became a student there, and started Martial Arts. He didn't like it, and asked one of the 8 man if he could do something else. One of the man, who looked Japanese considered Sword Arts for Senshi, and Senshi liked the idea. After that, he was trained only by that Japanese guy, in private, and became a great student. It came down to creating a style, and it took a years. In his teen ages, at 15 years old, Senshi became good in sword arts, and created his own style, but was great with his sword.
The Japanese man suddenly disappeared, and now the 7 guys, immediately got Waizu, and told him a lot of things, but he couldn't believe it, and that's when the guys showed him rei. The 7 guys knew Waizu had the ability, or potential. The 7 guys later on shut down the home, and personally trained Waizu in rei. After the training, the 7 guys all disappeared, and Waizu was scared. He got some money, and left China to go to Japan. He went to the home of the most Spiritual Beings were at, which is the Kurakawa city.
Waziu got to the place, and went to the central. He wanted to learn more about these things.
See Skill Sheet for More Information
- Durability: Beginner
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
Human Reiatsu Sheet
- Power Control: Beginner
- Energy Usage/Regeneration: Beginner
- Energy Resistance/Endurance: Beginner
- Physical Augmentation: Adept
• Roleplay Sample:
Waizu sat down by this brown thick tree with pink leaves, and thin branches. He started to look around him, and saw many animals. The ground was covered with small watery grass. It was very windy, and it drizzled a little. The clouds covered the whole sky, and blocked the sun. The clouds looked dark and huge. The grass was green and being eaten by few animals. One of the animals were a small white rabbit, and another a Panda. The area was a open field, but only had one tree that wasn't so big. The tree which Waizu was sitting beside. Everything was lightly dark, but still peaceful and lovely. Waizu fell asleep beside the tree, and a storm became.
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Waizu-fu Senshi [Approved 4-4] Sun Aug 17, 2014 1:04 am|| |
A couple cosmetic things that need changing. At the very top of the app is a broken code, please fix that, makes the app look much prettier. Second, please put a "strike" through the Sacred and Ascended Sacred Releases, just to indicate that he does not yet possess them (and again to make the app look like there's less empty space). Outside of that though, you're good to go.
[*]Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible
[*]Appearance is Not Claimed
[*]10 sentences for personality
[*]History is of appropriate length
[*]Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered
[*]Powers are described reasonably enough
[*]Application/RP Sample is not in First Person
[*]Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)
[*]RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character)
[*]RP Sample is 10 sentences
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
Once you fix the cosmetic issues stated above, you make edit your initial post and insert the will skills listed above and whatever distribution you desire for your other skills based upon your tier. Welcome to Platinum Hearts.