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Subject Post 1PostSubject: [THEFROST]'s Miniburst Challenge Tracker #4   Fri Sep 05, 2014 12:07 am


MY MINIBURST CHALLENGE


Keeping Track Of My Threads

1st Post: Iriko and Neveta Begin Their Journery Into Hell
2nd Post: Cirno Is Pressed Against The Mad Moonie
3rd Post: Neoveta And Iriko Meet An Impasse
4th Post: Deveta Makes His Entrance
5th Post: N/A
6th Post: N/A
7th Post: N/A


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: [THEFROST]'s Miniburst Challenge Tracker #4   Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:23 pm


«1ST Post Of The Challenge Done»


I feel this was the start of something wonderful. At the moment, I'm pretty invested i n the whole plot between Iriko/Asthavon family for the most part. This is because there have been many threads centered and base around the whole ordeal from Demonic Incursion and it feels like a lot of built up to me.

And, with Neoveta in general, I seem to be experimenting more with my writing and it has started to influence my other post. I'm attempting to give her more of a voice, some attachments and overall give JJ a good experience with this whole plot going on between them. As, for the most part, Iriko has been through the ringer.

I also felt that the scene where she was curled up in his lap was just -- hnngh. Too adorable. The little poem/song that was written at the start of that post was also very fitting. The first describes her state of mind when she was under her brainwashing prior to Iriko breaking through to her. The second verse deals with the whole conversion he gave her embodiment.

The third verse shows her trying to open her heart and reach others. The fourth deals with how she experianced Iriko's sorrow and the whole bit with her losing her arm and former deitc-self -- just to feel him. So even though he desires an absolute god from his words, Khala can only give him what she is

'Twas a trip to additionally try RPing as three personas at once when Neoveta was possessed by her parents as well. Crazy stuff. But, it is also very fun to explore the 666th Layer of Hell. So kudos to Iriko for being the 1st Shinigami to foot there.

Really, I am having a grand time with this whole ordeal. I feel I have the best threads and plots going on whenever it is with JJ. I love it very much and hope to keep these burst going on as the thread progresses.
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