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Sora Mamoru
Sora Mamoru
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Joined : 2017-07-15
Posts : 4

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Sat Jul 15, 2017 2:23 pm
Race Spec Here:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t10328-the-official-ph-shinigami-racial-specs

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THE SHINIGAMI TEMPLATE

Enter The Shinigami
非再生可能


I. Basic Information


» Name: Sora Mamoru
» Alias:
» Age: 247
» Gender: [Male

» Association: Soul Society, Shinigami

» Appearance Written: Sora is a short guy about 5'10 tall with a skinny posture. His muscles aren't really defined with it. His face is also pretty skinny with a sharp chin. His black hair falls until his shoulder and curls up a bit halfway the end. the tips of his hair are coloured red starting to fade to black the moment the start to curl. His eyes are special though since they have 2 colours. THe upper half is purple while the lower half is yellow. His face expression mostly looks pretty tired or bored.



» Appearance Image:
Sora Mamoru [Approved; 4-5] Pic_0008

I. Personality


» Personality: Sora would come over as a lazy ass most of the time. He has this tired look in his eyes when you look at him and mostly walking around with his hands in his pocket. It always feels like he isn't in the mood for anything. Sora prefers to stay quiet most of the time because he thinks actions speak louder than words.

On the other hand, Sora has passion burning in to conquer every fear he has. Because he likes a good adrenaline rush. He wouldn't be the one making the last move but sure as hell he tries to be the one who makes the last one. He is always ready for actions although not looking like it. He just wants to do things his own way without too many questions asked or too many people looking over his shoulder to see if he does it right.

In battle, Sora is a strategist. He doesn't move until he has too. He studies his opponent carefully before making a move. He also tries to make his opponent tired first although he knows that can be hard against stronger opponents. That doesn't stop him from trying though. He is the one that just looks at you with one hand in his pocket and one hand on the hilt of his Zan.

I. History


» History: Sora Mamoru is born in the Netherlands a small country between Germany and Belgium that is covered by wide grass plain on the east and shipping docks on the south. A peaceful country that lives in harmony with the rest of Europe. A nice simple place where Sora was raised calmly by his loving parents and his sister.

When he got 4 years old he went his parents for the first time on winter sport in a small country called Austria that is hidden in the Alps between Germany and Italy. The country is covered with snow. It was the first time for Sora that he saw snow and he felt like he was a kid in Disneyland. He wouldn't stop smiling and playing in it. While he was playing in the snow Sora got a choice to make a choice between 2 sticks and 2 planks (skis) or only one board that is attached to his feet (snowboard). Sora didn't hesitate a second and went straight for the one board since that one looked cooler. Every winter he went on winter sport and got better and better. He even went more on winter sport after a while then Sora became that good he got invited to do snowboard competitions all over Europe at the age of 8 through his hard work and effort he went through it.

But at an age of 5 snowboarding wasn't enough for him he wanted to do more get more adrenaline know what he all is capable off since so from his parents he got a skateboard which he practised daily with. He tried to get as good as possible no matter what. He even trained in the rain and in the heating sun until his dad found a solution for the heat so he wouldn't get crazy from the sun if he stayed in too long. He needed something that could cool him off when he falls. So he his dad and mum bought a small summer house near a sea so Sora could learn the sport of wakeboarding so he could do almost every extreme board sport in every season of the year.


Sora lived happily as a daredevil and even got a collage ship in Japan for his sports at the age of 20 although when he got in Japan he died in a tragic traffic accident when he was sightseeing in Japan killing him.

Sora ended up in North Rukongai 40 together with friends he made there. Living peacefully with his friends Until most of his friends were killed by someone one by one. Although Sora saw it and ran towards the guy who was slaughtering his friends but he got knocked out fast with only a few punches. When he woke up he saw his friends dead laying on the ground. Sora tried to live further but he got called weak after and after again until he made a promise to himself to be stronger than anyone ever thought he could be and he signed himself up for the Shino Academy.


I. Equipment


» Equipment:

I. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


» Racial Abilities:

I. Sealed Powers


» Zanpakutô Name: tsuyujimo issui (frozen dew drop)

» Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
Tsuyujimo is a 25-year-old looking woman with blue long hair and big blue eyes. she stands about 5'7 tall and has a slender yet athletic figure. When appearing normally she is mostly found in her white military uniform although she may appear different ones in a while when she feels like teasing Sora. Sometimes she appears in front of Sora in only a half buttoned white shirt exposing most of her body to him. just buttoning up far enough it barely covers her boobs.

» Inner World: The inner world is a massive room inside of an ice cave. The floor is made of black ice so clear you can see the sharks swimming below you. It feels like you are walking on glass. THe walls of the room are made out of rocks since it is in a cave and in the middle of the room is an old half fallen through the ice pirate ship. where The spirit lives in. Sora mostly appears close to the ship and when he looks down there is always at least one shark swimming below him. Like they are tracking him in every movement.

» Zanpakutô Appearance: The Zan is a simple White katana with blue decoration going over the sheath and hilt of the katana. It a pretty short blade coming close to a wakizashi but just long enough to be called katana. On the end of the hilt is a small glow in the dark skeleton hanging.


I. Shikai


» Shikai Release Phrase: let's ride

» Shikai Appearance: The appearance doesn't really change compared to it's sealed version. The blade of the katana turns into ice but keeps the same length and strength as the sealed version and the glow in the dark skeleton starts to click his teeth from the cold

» Shikai Abilities:

guuzou(statue) : This move creates a nice statue in the place Sora was. It looks exactly like him. He can use this as a distracting for his opponents to make a quick escape. He can make it appear right in front or right behind him. There is no difference between the statue in Sora the only difference is that the statue is a bit shinier than Sora himself and the statue doesn't move. He can create 1 statue at the time and can't make a new one tell the other one is destroyed or removed by himself


hoku(pike): Sora can create a pick out of the ground when he touches the ground with the tip of his blade. The pike appears only where the tip touches the ground and can grow to 1 meter high. It can grow diagonal if wanted. He can only create two spikes at the same time. If he makes a third spike the first one would disappear. The pikes are easily destroyable with the swing of a blade but can pierce through walls if needed

hyouketsu(freeze): Sora can freeze objects with sharp edge and tip of his blade when he cuts through something or when he stabs through something. When he creates a wound on his opponent the wound could be covered with ice making the bleeding stop. He can use this for torture or every time he touches the ice with the back of his hit the ice grows deeper into the body and ripping the wound further open by 1/10 every time he touches it with the backside of the hilt. he can make 1 freeze one cut in one post. He can also expand 1 frozen cut in one post. He can't make one and expand one in the same post



I. Bankai


» Bankai Appearance: Bankai at this moment the blade turns into black ice. It is almost invisible only the glow can be seen when it shines in the sun. The skeleton turns into an ice demon. The floor below Sora turns into black ice with 50 feet radius around him. Making the floor slippery while Sora can stand normally on it

» Bankai Abilities:

Kuron(clone) Sora can now create a clone of himself with ice. Knowing all the moves he can do too. The only thing is the clone can't attack it can only defend. It mostly Defends Sora while he goes in for the kill. He can create 2 clones

hyouga (glacier) The moment Sora cuts someone the wound gets completely covered with black ice. Every time Sora touches his opponent now with his blade making another cut or just even parrying the sword. The ice grows spikes slowly digging into the body deeper and deeper for 1 inch with every touch. The spikes are every 4 inches of the ice going in every direction. He can make 3 cuts in every post. After the cuts are made he can make 2 ice covered cuts expand with touching them. He can't do it on the same cut in one post

I. Shikokai


[NOTE: This form is restricted until 0-3, and is not usually granted upon approval. This is ONLY for pureblood Shinigami! Refer to the racial specs for more information]

» Shikokai Appearance: [What does your Shinigami look like when released in their Shikokai?]

» Shikokai Abilities: [What abilities does your Shinigami attain in Shikokai?]


I. Skill Sheet


To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not feel your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. We will also do your will sheet for you upon grading your application.

Skill Sheet

General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Beginner
  • Kidō: Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Beginner
  • Hakuda: Adept


Will Skills
  • Willpower: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


I. Role Play Sample


» Roleplay Sample:

The great hall a place where everyone got sorted into a house one by one by putting a magical hat on your head that screams the name of the house some took a second while others took minutes depending on how hard the choice was for the sorting hat. The new students slowly came to an end making the line smaller and smaller only a few kids were left and one of does kids wore a blue with white cap reversed on his sand coloured hair making sure his green eyes were still visible.

Alex was slowly getting tired of waiting “Of Course I have to be one of the last to get sorted” He said softly to himself with a small sigh. He suddenly heard his name being called and he looked up towards the chair in the middle of the stage in front of the table where all the teachers were sitting. He looked a bit around himself seeing everybody looking at him “Well here goes nothing”He said calmly before walking towards the chair.

The moment he sat down on the chair his cap got taken off by one of the teachers and replaced by the sorting hat. “Hmmm, a Ryder. They skipped a generation it seems. Where shall I place you? Hmm.” The hat starting thinking for a couple of seconds “You are as brave and daring as a Gryffindor but you do that only for your ambitions and not else. Maybe I must place you in Gryffindor because you are daring and brave like your grandfather or maybe in Slytherin because you are ambitious, cunning and clever like your grandmother.” Alex looked at both tables while he was sitting in the chair wondering which table would fit him the best until the hat suddenly screamed out “Slytherin!” Alex laughed a bit before the hat got taken off his head and Alex took his cap back from the teacher before placing it back reversed on his head while he calmly walked towards the Slytherin table


END OF THE POST


Last edited by Sora Mamoru on Sat Jul 15, 2017 3:37 pm; edited 2 times in total
Tsubine
Tsubine
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Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3607
Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

Member Info
Platinum Points:
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[O]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes:

Alright, so there are a few things that need to be fixed before this application can be approved. I'll start at the top and work down. First, you need at least one more sentence for your character's personality.

guuzou: How many of these statues can he have out at one time? How many can he make per post?

hyouketsu: Alright, this power needs a freezing-per-post limitation. This is how many cuts you can do in single post.

hyouga: Same as above.

Finally, you are not to fill in your skill sheets until after approval. This is said above the skill sheet.

Post a message in here when you have made the changes, and if you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask either here or in the Staffhelp channel in our Discord.
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Sora Mamoru
Sora Mamoru
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Tsubine
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Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3607
Age : 30
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Sora Mamoru [Approved; 4-5] Empty Re: Sora Mamoru [Approved; 4-5]

Sat Jul 15, 2017 3:31 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes: Alright, it all checks out! Shikai and Bankai are both locked out for the time being. Eventually you can train for both of them.
Tier: 4-5
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