Bleach Platinum Hearts RP [Active Since June 3rd, 2010]
Welcome to Bleach Platinum Hearts RP! This is a Bleach Role Playing Forum set in the year 2416, over 400 years away from the Original Bleach's timeline. It has elements of both canon and custom for a unique mixture of role playing never seen before on Bleach. To get started, please sign up and read our starter guide:

And again, welcome to our Bleach RP.

Bleach Platinum Hearts RP [Active Since June 3rd, 2010]

This is a Bleach Role Playing Forum set in the year 2417, over 400 years after the original Bleach Storyline. Join our Bleach RP today
HomeCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in
'Yo, Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find an assortment of Site News. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member Of The Year: Henrex --- Character Of The Year: Arianda Vael & Mana Asthavon & Niflheim P.--- Fight Thread Of The Year: Sector J [OPERATION MOON MASSACRE] & Divine Punishment [OPERATION MOON MASSACRE] --- Most Inventive Character Of The Year: Liu Xinshen & Kamui Cruor --- Most Helpful Character Of The Year: Cirno Iramasha & Azure Iramasha --- Most Proactive Member Of The Year: Morph --- Most Influential Character Of The Year: Mana Asthavon --- Most Creative Power Of The Year: Liu Xinshen [App Powers] --- Most Improved Character Of The Year: Ibiki Suika/Kenpachi & Desmond Hayden & Henrex Astillon --- Most Pivotal Thread Of The Year: Divine Punishment [OPERATION MOON MASSACRE] & Formation Of The Iron Banner & An End To The Madness




The Rules

Help Center


Race Specs



Latest topics
Top posters
Forsaken Crow
Sᵃ ᶥ ᶦ ˣ ♚
We have 2501 registered users
The newest registered user is Mythos

Our users have posted a total of 117458 messages in 17878 subjects
Top posting users this week
Mirja Eeola
Discord App
Share | 

 Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
Go to page : Previous  1, 2
Ye Olde Guarde

Joined : 2010-07-09
¥ Yen : 349446282
Posts : 3223
Karma : 29
Age : 23
Location : Soup

Member Info
Awesome Bar:
3080/100  (3080/100)

Subject Post 11PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Sun Aug 20, 2017 11:42 pm

Quote :
Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: The Zanpakto focuses on augmenting the user's kidou ability through the power of the sun and moon.
This needs a LOT more definition if this is its own ability. However, it reads as if it's describing what the Zanpakutou does overall, in which case there is no need for that. The Sealed Zanpakutou Abilities section is for abilities your Zanpakutou has when it is not in Shikai or Bankai only.

Quote :
Exusia has a simple first ability at shikai, the weapon begins too act as a magnet for solar energy replenishing the users systems with enough energy too supply low level kidou. The ratio is 2:1 every two post in sunlight. In partial darkness the ratio is 3:1 and in darkness the ratio is 2:1
There needs to be some clarification. Is the Zanpakutou replenishing the user's energy to power kidou at a 2:1 ratio as in 2 from the Zanpakutou for every 1 natural replenishment or is it 1 from the Zanpakutou for every 2 natural?

Quote :
The second ability focuses more on applying the latent power being built up by the blade, allowing the user too direct solar waves in a offensive or even defensive fashion. How it works is the user uses the blade to direct solar waves and assualt and scorch (sun burn) the target within their radius 15 to start and adding five for 1k word trainings approved by a mod . The speed and power of this technique equals the users weapon skill.
There is no real description of what this does besides a single mention of "sunburn," which is not actually describing what happens. Is it burning them like what happens when you put something under a magnifying glass on a hot day? Or is it just raising the temperature? Either way, there needs to be an actual description of what is going on with the ability. Also, when it comes to the radius, there needs to be a unit of measurement—it be anything between 15 millimeters to 15 kilometers (or 15 miles for those that use Imperial).
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Head Admin
Head Admin


Joined : 2010-06-03
¥ Yen : 2148302347
Posts : 15993
Karma : 192
Age : 24
Location : Purgatory

Member Info
Awesome Bar:
999999/999999  (999999/999999)

Subject Post 12PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Sun Sep 24, 2017 8:13 pm

[adm]Moving this to WIP as there have been no updates.[/adm]


Back to top Go down
View user profile
Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 2 of 2Go to page : Previous  1, 2
 Similar topics
» Mikaboshi, Mujin
» [APPROVED]Kana Ishii's Magic
» Ookami Clan
» Zan Valexii-Approved!!
» Inu Inu no Mi Model: Hyena (APPROVED)

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Bleach Platinum Hearts RP [Active Since June 3rd, 2010] :: Getting Started :: The Character Creation Center :: The Application :: WIP Applications-
Jump to: