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• Name: Anise Am Vilde
• True Age: (14 spent as a mortal, 332 as a Hollow and 202 years as an Arrancar).
• Appearance Age: 14
• Gender: Female
• Orientation: White

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• Appearance:
Among the most noticeable of the traits one can find on the doll-like creature's body are her eyes. Wide, but also tainted by a dark past, they detail the physical tiredness her body has felt during the centuries. Yet, they also contain some of the eagerness akin to the bright eyes of a child; mustering up very mixed feelings in those who review the young woman's appearance. Heavily, the eyelids almost, but only almost, cover about half of the eyes; rendering them somewhat droopy-looking. And yet her lengthy lashes, pitch-black in color, amplify the edges around her eyes, which results in a clear contrast between eyes and eyelids. Blinking can be said to be quite slow compared to average individuals, though this is a result of the commands her subconscious mind give her. Lacking the spark in the eyes one can find in other living beings, it is fairly easy to confuse her with a doll if she stands still. As her breathing patterns are quite irregular; often causing others distress through making them think that she is in trouble. Even then, this is merely an oddity she inherited from her human incarnation; seeing as Anise was a very sickly child. Dying as a result of tuberculosis, it would appear as if certain symptoms have carried over to the afterlife.

As for her actual physical appearance, the trait that obviously stands most out is her ivory skin contrasting with the lively colors of her clothing, eyes and even her hair. 'Sallow' is a word that neatly describes the color; it can even be described as somewhat translucent as the pale red veins can be viewed through it when her body is cold. Which is in fact, most of the time, seeing as she also suffered from low blood pressure and is thus also chilly and uncomfortable to touch. Few are the things that can actually warm her body up properly; one of them being hot water. Even in life her skin was of such a pale pigment, as it was a result of an isolated life and the torment of various diseases. Perpetually dark and ghastly, Hueco Mundo offers no sun to tan this milky and even otherworldly suit of tissue. Blissfully unaware of the human world's existence, or more specifically, how to get there, Anise cannot really fix her tiny pigment issue either. Not that it is much of an issue though. If ever touched by the rays of the sun, it is not unlikely that her type of skin would produce several freckles; notably around her nasal area and beneath her eyes. This happened a fair few times in her life, as she spent some of the most sunny mornings outside; often contracting minor diseases in the process. Although her skin is extremely pale, rosy upper parts of her cheeks highlight her face. 'Dichromatic' is a word that perfectly fits the two dominant features of her face: red and white.

The face itself is much like a child's. In fact, dying at a young age, her reincarnated self possesses many traits akin to her human body, with some slight modifications. A word that would describe the overall theme of her face is 'transient'. Dying as not quite an adolescent, but not quite a child either, the facial features of Anise are perpetually locked in time. Her rosy cheeks, neither plump nor hollow, are splendid examples of this. The chin is not too noticeable and quite short as well; only protruding a bit from her face. This apparent shortness causes a minor asymmetry when compared to her lips. Full, quite large and dyed crimson with lipstick, they contrast the somewhat stubby chin. Alas, as one trails the face upwards, one notices the ever present philtrum running from her upper lip to underneath her nose. Signifying the change from full lips to nose, the philtrum is often only noticed when someone scans her face systemically. As for her nose; describing it was a 'button nose' is fairly common. It does not point nearly as much upwards as most button noses do, as it possesses a very smooth nasal bridge that suddenly points upwards when it reaches the tip. Further moving upwards, one can clearly see the brows above her eyes. Being a shade darker than her ashen hair and possessing hardly any curve, they may strike one as quite peculiar at first. Far above the eyes as well, as a matter of fact. Combined with the constant, tired look on her eyes, it often seem as if Anise is disappointed. In tandem with her heavy breathing, it may seem as if she sighs in disappointment as well.

But alas, her face is not the only part of her body that one notices, even if it is the first people analyze. Her brittle, but lengthy body demands some attention too. It too can be described as trapped in time, though it leans slightly more towards the adolescent side, compared to her face. Indubitably, if it hadn't been for her body, she'd seem far more like a child. The main attribute to this is without a trace of doubt her height. Descending from a long line of Scandinavians, it was not exactly unexpected that she would grow up to be tall. Upon dying, she was not fully grown either; even though she most likely had reached it at the ripe age of fourteen. Though, there is another testament of her adolescence: the lack of body fat. She has the physique of an early teen; slim, but not yet old enough to be lean of muscle. Not yet possessing a mature body, her hips and breasts never reached full femininity. Her breasts have developed some, though, as one they are visible through her layers of clothing. They are estimated to be B-cups, but some would say that they are bordering to C-cups. One could also look at her limbs and state that she is indeed locked in the most awkward phase of puberty. Elongated, but also slender without any muscle, they can be described as somewhat inelegant. However, the long, pampered nails on the tips of her fingers amplify the little grace she naturally possesses.

Underneath all her clothing, however, not many of her physical features are visible. This is not conscious; her escape beneath doll-like clothing is not exactly an action she does because of shame. Merely because she is not aware of 'shame', since she is a husk with a blank persona. Clothing does not really fit the dichromatic Arrancar theme of black and white; the doll belonging to no particular faction at the moment. No, Anise could be described as being a little bit more patriotic than so. Anyone with decent memory and knowledge would be aware of the fact that her garments specifically match the French tricolour. Not in the manner one would initially envision, no. The themes apply to different clothing; dress, scarf and shawl. The main piece is obviously the dress, which is dyed navy clue in color. The dress has one one thick strap over each shoulder to keep it in place; reaching the middle of her crus. Calling it completely blue would be rather inappropriate, since the ending of the skirt consisting of a ruffled white material. Cotton is the material used for the main part of the dress, whereas linen is used for the ruffled part. Thanks to the layer above the dress, the straps that attach it are not visible; this layer being her shawl. This shawl is colored snowy white and long enough to cover the upper parts of her chest, therefore also covering the straps. The ends of the shawl meet on the middle of her chest; leaving a slight opening. Keeping together the ends with a golden brooch, Anise would seem much more naked without it. Finally, there is her red silk scarf. One of the first things one notice about it, is that it is quite long; it is wrapped twice around the slender neck and yet, both ends are still fairly long. In fact, this piece is not really a scarf at all and is more akin to a silk sash with white lace on both ends.

Then there are certain miscellaneous items that deserve tiny mentions. Among those are Anise's shoes, aka generic black shoes # 1. They can be described as nothing if not unremarkable. She wears a pair of small socks underneath the shoes in order to prevent sand from ending up under her feet. Then there are the most common traits of the Hollow Breed; Hollow Hole and Mask Fragment. The former of these is difficult to notice, seeing as the doll's body is almost always concealed by a garment. If she were to take them off, it would be visible to the naked eye with ease though. It is above her sternum; at the base of her throat. It is placed here instead of on the chest as Anise died as a result of a disease and in her case, tuberculosis. Although it was also a result of her breathing difficulties in her mortal life, which caused her to develop a brittle body. Compared to her Hollow Hole, Anise's Mask Fragment is far more visible; although also minuscule when taking her race into consideration. Taking on the appearance of a pair of droplet-shaped earrings of bone, they are seldom seen except for when it is windy. These remnants used to be a part of a larger decoration on her Hollow Mask when she was a Hollow, but currently only these two remain.

• Bone Appearance: Bone earrings

• Hollow Hole: Chest

• Reiatsu Colour: Cobalt Blue

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• History: (Life, death, and and progression to the Arrancar state .)

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• Sealed Zanpakutô: As for the blade that is Tabula Rasa, it takes on the simple appearance of a rapier dyed silver in terms of coloration. Belonging to this design because it was the most commonly observed sword during Anise's time as a Hollow in the human world, it stands a bit out compared to stereotypical Arrancar katana. Being a bit on the lengthy side, the rapier's blade is a bit over 1 meter (39 inches) in length; longer than most rapiers thus. It, like virtually all rapiers, has a complex handle designed to protect the user's hand when wielding it. Having a cup hilt that extends upwards with intricate, cobweb-like patterns, it virtually covers her entire hand when the doll holds around the hilt. A rather plump pommel secures the hilt's length, making gripping it easier. One can also see a crosspiece protecting the hilt, right above the cup hilt. The hilt itself is lilac in color, though the cobweb-like cup hilt is silver, like the blade. As she just recently erased her memories, only the hilt remains and it cannot be sheathed thus. Perpetually carrying it in her left hand, she looks like a child that has found some trash that she will not let go.

• Racial Abilities: Cera
Bala
Sonido
Descorrer
Hierro
High-Speed Regeneration
Pesquisa(High Level)

• Unique Abilities: Tabula Rasa (タブラ・ラーサ (空虚の体), Latin for "Blank Slate", Japanese for "Body of Vacancy") is the name of her unique Hollow Power, as well as her Zanpakutō. An ability that manifested from her desire to forget about her miserable mortal life plagued with diseases, Anise is now capable of doing two things with it. The first is a far more basic variation than the second; making people forget about her presence. Passively, Tabula Rasa causes Anise's body to be surrounded by a reiryoku field that is invisible to the naked eye. Whenever anything sentient enters this field, the ability will activate and start to probe their mind. Difficult to detect once inside, the power will most likely erase the target's memories of Anise while inside the field, rendering her virtually invisible to them. When leaving the proximity of Tabula Rasa, they will be able to remember and notice her. Instinctively controlled, the range of Tabula Rasa changes depending on Anise's whim. In addition, the maximum size her ability depends on how masterful Anise is with her ability. The second aspect of the ability is a far more interesting one. By touching the blade of her Zanpakutō, the doll may focus her ability into it and cause it to shatter. Although perceived as a strange process, it has a function. Splitting into multiple pieces, the various fragments of the Zanpakutō represent different aspects of her memories. Flying away in different directions, they must be retrieved by Anise in order for her to restore her memories. There are exactly seven fragments, representing various aspects of her mind; the previous personality, the vocabulary, the human life, the physical mannerisms, location memories, memories about others and the knowledge accumulated by all incarnations. Occasionally, some incarnations retain certain skills, abilities and quirks. For instance, in her current Ego incarnation's case, she possesses a love for music and a dislike for crowds, while in her second incarnation, which also was Ego, she retained the ability to read. It isn't as simple as merely gathering them, though, as the fragments transform into Hollows that Anise has eaten; they are memories of a hellish lifetime. By defeating the Hollow beings, she regains a part of her blade alongside the memories associated with the part. The Hollow that differs the most from the rest is the Hollow possessing the previous incarnation's personality, as it takes on Anise's appearance, but with black skin and yellow eyes. While the blade is incomplete, the doll is incapable of releasing her Zanpakutō. The field starts out ranging 35 feet around the user and increases 15 feet for each tier up the get. Essenstially the technique works on anyone stronger targets simply take longer, Equal rank tier it happens at the same time one enters the field. for every sub tier above the user the target must stay within the field for one post before the ability takes affect the count restarts upon one exiting the field meaning if someone is three tiers above Anise they must stay within the field three post before the ability takes affect.

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• Resereccion Name: Memoria Flexibus(メモリ操作, Latin for "Memory Manipulation")
Memori sōsa

• Resereccion Release Phrase: Aliquam tempus(Project Time in english, プロジェクト時間-Purojekuto jikan in Japanese

• Release Actions: Anise scatters Tabula Rasa as if too separate her memory but instead of moving in different directions, they shoot into her skull becoming a part of her brain.

• Resereccion Appearance: The user's Ressereccion has no external way of seeing the change other than the eyes white, however the user's brain fuses with there Zanpaktou giving them the ability's.

• Resereccion Abilities:
Rápido Bala (虚弾 (バラ), Bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet"): A technique that fires hardened spiritual pressure. Less powerful than a Cero, but can be successively fired at 20 times the rate. In this form Anise can successfully fire here Bala at 60 times the rate.

Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキサ), Pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry," Japanese for "Probe Circuit"): An Arrancar's ability to measure and locate Reiatsu, Anie Persquisa is increased almost double in power.

External Memory(Memoria externa Latin version, Japanese version 外部メモリ
Gaibu memori) A secondary memory storage system within her brain which is able to catalog memories collected from others and is completely separate from the Doll's own memory so as to not add extra stress to their brain. These memories are stored within the zanpaktou.

Visualización de la memoria(Memory Viewing in English, 表示メモリ
Hyōji memori in Japanese) The ability to project her memories or memories collected from others through this ability in the form of a hologram projection allowing others to view the memories alongside them. However when used with another sentient being these memories can be viewed in the same way the user does, who is broadcasting this memory in their mind as long as contact is maintained.

Memorīsukyanメモリースキャン(English for Memory Scan, Latin for Memoria scan )This ability is triggered through contact with an opponent allowing the user to access memories for a short period of time before duplicating memories up to 5 posts (total) of the target's memory. Once stored the memories still remain in the targets memory banks but are also added to the Doll's as well as within their External Memory Banks inside their Zanpaktou.

Memoria edición(Latin for Memory edit, Japanese for メモリの編集
Memori no henshū) This Ability is triggered through when Anise makes contact with her intended target be it through her zanpaktou or her own body. When triggered with physical contact the user is able to alter an opponents existing memories up to 10 posts (total), when utilized with a touch of the Zanpaktou the user may alter 5 existing memories.

Memory Amnesia(Japanese-メモリー記憶喪失
Memorī kioku sōshitsu)This is the most powerful ability in the dolls arsenal and revolves around the hyper compression of the user's memories before expelling the reishi used to compress it in a wave. The initial shock from the ability actually causes the user to instantly faint causing them to fall to the ground and lie their for a couple of hours 40-80 posts (total) to even a day (1 topic). While they lie unconscious anything within a 40 foot radius of the user while the wave is expelled will forget everything they knew about the Doll. It would be as if they never even existed and while the Doll is laying there it turns into a mist of pure reishi after the initial burst if anyone comes within 20 feet of them they will likewise forget everything about the user and be unable to remember why they entered the mist in the first place.


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General Skills

  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus:Advanced


Racial Skills

  • Perquisa: Advanced
  • Sonido: Adept
  • Cero/Bala: Advanced
  • Hierro: Adept


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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Focus: N/A


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Tabula Rasa (タブラ・ラーサ (空虚の体), Latin for "Blank Slate", Japanese for "Body of Vacancy") is the name of her unique Hollow Power, as well as her Zanpakutō. An ability that manifested from her desire to forget about her miserable mortal life plagued with diseases, Anise is now capable of doing two things with it. The first is a far more basic variation than the second; making people forget about her presence. Passively, Tabula Rasa causes Anise's body to be surrounded by a reiryoku field that is invisible to the naked eye. Whenever anything sentient enters this field, the ability will activate and start to probe their mind. Difficult to detect once inside, the power will most likely erase the target's memories of Anise while inside the field, rendering her virtually invisible to them. When leaving the proximity of Tabula Rasa, they will be able to remember and notice her. Instinctively controlled, the range of Tabula Rasa changes depending on Anise's whim. In addition, the maximum size her ability depends on how masterful Anise is with her ability. The second aspect of the ability is a far more interesting one. By touching the blade of her Zanpakutō, the doll may focus her ability into it and cause it to shatter. Although perceived as a strange process, it has a function. Splitting into multiple pieces, the various fragments of the Zanpakutō represent different aspects of her memories. Flying away in different directions, they must be retrieved by Anise in order for her to restore her memories. There are exactly seven fragments, representing various aspects of her mind; the previous personality, the vocabulary, the human life, the physical mannerisms, location memories, memories about others and the knowledge accumulated by all incarnations. Occasionally, some incarnations retain certain skills, abilities and quirks. For instance, in her current Ego incarnation's case, she possesses a love for music and a dislike for crowds, while in her second incarnation, which also was Ego, she retained the ability to read. It isn't as simple as merely gathering them, though, as the fragments transform into Hollows that Anise has eaten; they are memories of a hellish lifetime. By defeating the Hollow beings, she regains a part of her blade alongside the memories associated with the part. The Hollow that differs the most from the rest is the Hollow possessing the previous incarnation's personality, as it takes on Anise's appearance, but with black skin and yellow eyes. While the blade is incomplete, the doll is incapable of releasing her Zanpakutō.

This ability is fine but can you state how big the field is that you state? Also how strongly does this affect those of higher tier then her and higher will stats? you can state the field's size at different tiers and will skills/general skills if desired just so you have them down so when you tier up you dont need to change anything.

This is a message for the rest of your abilities their do not seem to be any major issues with them at all but please incorporate at least how it affects others of the same, lower, and higher tiers. Also please state what you can do with the memories a bit even if it isnt the full thing you can do with them listing examples would be nice to help us better understand what these memories would be used for and which memories they would obtain and what knowledge it would provide. This is to reduce any possible chance of god modding, since you could say oh hey they touched me i will just say i looked into their memory and saw their weaknesses and now know how to beat them with no problem.

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For the field stuff added this in the app
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The memories are used for many things, learning secrets one is looking too find out, they also can be used too prepare a perfect memory alter(Meaning over look the actual memory and when altered one can make them hard too tell the difference). Won't be used for anything like finding out one's weaknesses but the user could pull out memory's of allies in order too observe things from a first point of view and likewise i forgot a ability a simple one.

likewise i forgot a very important ability
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Advanced


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