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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Verzerte Schatz   Tue Oct 07, 2014 7:03 am

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» Name: Verzerte Schatz
» Titles: Queen of Schism
» Race: Arrancar
» Age: 33(looks ) 2402(age)
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Yayjuu,undetermined

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» History:Verzerte was born in "Germania" in the year 12 A.D. to a blacksmith and an apothecary. Verzerte's father was at first a good man, with love and respect for his wife and daughter, and he provided for them well. But with increased hostilities between the Romans and Germanians, Demand for weapons and armor in the region in which they lived caused her father to become somewhat of a drunk, as the village they lived in was a border village between the defined lines of the two groups. The conflicts between the two forces were sometimes no more than a few hundred meters from their village, and sometimes the screams could be heard at all times in the day and night.

Due to the weight and such of her father's smithy, they could not easily leave the area and still be able to make a living. Verzerte's mother supplied medicine to local tribes and the Romans, and tended to women who were pregnant and the wounded on both sides when she could. Her father supplied weapons to both sides as well, but usually not in bulk, and only as one or two soldiers needed. But this was enough for them to survive on. However, When Augustus Caesar died, (roughly two years after Verzerte's birth) The region erupted into more heated conflict, and the battles became closer and closer to their home. They were forced to move from their home, and go to Poetovio, the nearest town to them.

After this, Verzerte's father become somewhat of a drunkard, and his true colors came to light, He was a tyrant and abusive to both Verzerte and her mother. Many times had they ran to other villagers for help, but being "the outside" of that village's inner circle for their religious practices, she and her mother were always turned away and found by her father, and dragged home, then accosted and beaten, sometimes severely, and then forced to stay at home until the wounds healed.

It was during this time that Verzerte's natural ability Taidetta Mielen (psionics) finally activated. It came to life, one night, as her father was beating her mother into a bloody mess, for trying to beg for coin to leave him. Verzerte had tried to stop him, by grabbing and holding and kicking him. It was fruitless effort, as he then turned from her mother, to her, and began beating her with his walking stick. As she screamed and cried and wailed for his mercy, she felt an energy well up inside her, and she with her mind, grabbed onto it and willed to push him away. and with great effort, she used telekinetics to throw him across the room and into the wall, which killed him. he had slammed into the wall just hard enough and at the right angle for his neck to break, which killed him. At the sight of her dying mother's body, Verzerte became even more emotionally unstable, and with her powers, began to bring the house down around her, destroying it with pure psionic force of will. As she brought it down, some of the villagers heard her screaming and came to see what was happening. when they came in, they thought her some form of monster, and attacked her.

Their folly cost them their lives, as when they tried to approach, her powers overwhelmed them and she crushed their skulls. as this was happening, she kept only saying "i want to go away! i want to go away!! " And in that instant, she did go away. She blinked (teleported herself) away from her house, and into the wilderness, outside the home where she had been born. But she was exhausted, weakened by the extreme trauma of her powers activating in such a strenuous situation and the experience of watching her family die.

So there, outside the house, she passed out on the threshold, and the cold night overtook her. When she awoke, it was dark. Darker than she could have ever imagined. All things were still, except a set of glowing eyes moving in the distance, moving towards her. she was shaking. Not from fear, but from the cold. It was the start of winter,and had begun to snow. A cold wind blew and chilled her. Then the eyes started moving faster, and faster towards her.

Now, she could hear the sounds of heavy panting, growling, and then a howl. There was only one. in fact there would only be one of them. The creature coming for her, was no normal wolf. It was a Dire Wolf. A creature, that had surpassed its physical body. This creature was now a beast of intelligence, though it was starved, and its intelligence was diminished by the burning hunger within it's stomach. Otherwise, it would have sensed the power within it's supposed victim,and known to not attack without thought. Verzerte felt the creature's wild instincts, its brutal mind, from afar. Her powers were acting in self preservation mode. The dire wolf lunged, and verzerte held her hands faced outward from her face. as the creature neared, long spikes of psionic energy formed into solid spikes,and impaled the creature. Opening her eyes, the child looked up and saw the spikes over her hands and the wolf slowly sliding down to meet her, dying with each breath. when she put her hands to her side, she did not realize the spikes would move with her hands, and she parted the wolf and its corpse fell to the ground.

She vomited at the smell and sight of the dead creature and cried. opening the door and going inside and closing it behind her, verzerte collapsed into the floor of the place that once been her home, and her birthplace and again passed out, her powers weakening her further.when she again awoke, it was midday, and the birds were singing. Her sleepy eyes observed her surroundings and at first the panicked and ran out the door, only to see the split corpse of the dire wolf before her. she grew sick in the stomach and vomited again. She wandered away, and shivering like a leaf in the cold, wandered until she found a small pond, clear and clean, and drank some water. Her stomach growled, and she felt pangs of hunger wrack her small body.

The usage of so much energy from her powers had made her insanely hungry. But what was a small girl in the wild to eat? she had always been fed food that was cooked, and bought from market. What did she have now to eat? She fell to her knees. and she remembered something her mother had once told her. "The Goddess provides for her children, always my child...sometimes, you just have to ask". This memory was in reference to her mother's passing on the belief of a being called the Goddess, also known as Raunina, the Goddess of All and the Void. Verzerte cried. Her mother was gone now. she cried hard, and sobbed and shivered. But she also, brokenly albeit, prayed.

She prayed for her mother's soul to make it to the summerlands, to be safe from hurts and pains. and then she prayed for food, and water, and warmth. Then, something strange happened to her. A strange consciousness brushed against her own. It enveloped her, almost consumed her. Within this single consciousness was a feeling of wholeness and completion. She felt within herself expand knowledge, energy, power, wisdom, and truth. Then her mind and body began to quake, in physicality and spirituality. The weight and pressure of this other being just brushing against her, was seemingly driving her body to the edge of collapse, and her mind into the brink of insanity. as she grabbed her head and screamed in agony a single voice; Feminine, calm, gentle and loving, yet dark and foreboding spoke not to her, but within her to the very core of her soul.

“I have heard your voice, among the multitudes and beatitudes of others. I have touched you, little child, for i have felt your pain, your agony, and most of all, your faith. In this hard time, you have not forsaken your faith, and have still cried out to me. and so, little child, i grant you a gift. I shall bind myself to you, and be with you always...in exchange for a chance to be human, and know how my children live.”

Verzerte acted then out of self preservation. She wanted the pain and suffering to end. The hunger to go away. So with all her might she merely said

“Yes!”
And it was then, that the Goddess Raunina, through her power and the power of Verzerte herself, latched her own consciousness to the small child, and the two merged into a single being, having two souls and two minds, but yet one body. After this, Verzerte herself passed out, and Raunina, The Goddess, took over. It was an unusual experience for her. She had been used to the realms of the Void and the Spiritual, and for the first time felt on her spirit the weight of gravity, upon a body the push of a gentle wind and the chill of cold, and the pangs of hunger.

She knew she had to eat, and that she had to drink. Water, she knew, she had help design to sate thirst. But as for food, she knew not what this body needed. And how would she? She had created or help create so many different life forms and beings and briefly brushed their minds and bodies that she had no idea what was to be eaten specifically by humans. It was then that she had to wake verzerte’s sleeping mind and share the body with her. The two conversed shortly and then Verzerte took back control and with the energy of Raunina driving her, found food and ate and restored her strength, and the two spirits within one body managed to survive the winter. As they became more acquainted with one another, there came an understanding between deity and child, and they became close friends. From one another they learned things and shared things, and became as close as mother and daughter, Raunina being the mother and Verzerte the child. They lived there, in that isolated home as a single being, surviving and living off the forest and the land, for a few weeks during the winter and the beginning of spring.

Years later verzerte found a new home with a group of wandering nomads,and through her powers became their "seer". She provided them with protection against "evil spirits" (hollows) that until then hadn't seemed to been around much until after verzerte arrived in their lives. Verzerte knew the truth of why they had come. She ahd at once nearly died, and her spirit had entered the realm of the spirits, and she was now a beacon that was drawing them in. But yet every time she and Rau were enough to drive them off.It was during this time that Verzerte felt stirrings within herself. a desire to no longer be alone.It was int his time that Verzerte fell for a young man in the camp of the wanderers, named Crow. With Rau's and the nomadic group's blessings, they unified as one, and months later, Verzerte was with child. The nomads finally settled within the northeastern coastal area of what is now Germany and Verzerte and Crow prepared for the coming of their child.

When the time came for the birthing, it was a night of stormy weather. Verzerte had went into labor an hour before sunset, and it had been 8 hours since that time. As she was giving birth, Rau was ensuring her survival. Her husband was doing anything he could to help, but the chieftess had made him leave as he was a distraction. it was another 2 hours until Verzerte bore a daughter, whom she called Kara. Afterwards, both verzerte and rau were weakened considerably by all the effort, and while verzerte, kara, and crow slept, and rau kept the vigil and tried to rebuild her stores of energy, is when it happened.

A hollow, unlike any other that Verzerte and Rau had encountered, a hollow with intellignece and the size of a man, an Adjuchas, attacked. Rau had sensed it and begun keeping it at bay, but in her weakened state, she could not kill it. Verzerte awoke adn with rau, helped to keep it at bay. However, the creature managed to kill Crow, and verzerte was injured, as was her daughter. Enraged, Rau was finally able to kill the beast. But it was not in time. Kara died, and soon after, her mother followed, the soul of Rau still bound to her own. Kara rose up into the heavens, for she had committed no deeds, and was found bya wandering shinigami, a Red Dragon, and was Konsod and sent into the soul society.

Verzerte however, was not as lucky. She had been corrupted byt he touch of the hollow, and though Rau was able to slow the process, she eventually had to preserve herself, for a time when she would not be corrupted herself, and created an area within Verzerte's own body where she fed off of the energy verzerte generated and consumed and made her progression slower.

For Decades, then Centuries and then Millenia, Verzerte existed as a hollow, feeding and growing in power, with the occasional assist from rau to ensure her survival. It was the time of the first great war of man, the Crusades, that Verzerte advanced froma base hollow to a Menos Grande. From there, it wouldnt be until the first World War, another time of great death and chaos, that Verzerte again increased in power and became an Adjuchas.

In this state, is when Rau came forth in full, as she could now reason with her. Raunina told verzerte of everything that ahd transpired in her time of mindlessness. Of wars and peace, of changes in the world. and most importantly, of the hollow that had killed her family. The hollow had been the soul of her father. Once before while a MG, they had encountered him, and rau had driven verzerte away from him. Rau then told her a terrifying fact; he had become something greater than what she was. But this mattered to Verzerte little, for she was now resolved to kill him and become greater than him. And so the quest for the blood of her father began. And eventually they found him.

The battle fought was fierce and dangerous, and nearly twice verzerte was nearly bitten by her father, but thanks to Rau, she was safe guarded. It was ina fit of fury of his failure that Verzerte was able to strike the killing blow,a nd consume a piece of her father, and she herself became a Vasto Lorde. And it was until the year 2201, that Verzerte would once again change. She had confronted a foe unlike she had ever encountered, a Red Dragoness, Named Neyavaenya, that wiekded a strange weapon. As they did battle, Neya chipped verzerte's mask. The crack was causing pieces to fal into her eye, and so to prevent further damage, grabbed her mask and tore it off. And she then became an Arrancar. Seeing that her foe had become greater than herself, Neya retreated. But that would not be the last time they would interact. Many more times, they would do battle and exchange blows, and eacht ime they became more acquainted with one another, and through a twist of fate, fell in love. They soon began to meet each other for nights together and spend time, and Verzerte began to dwell n earth away from other Arrancar and hollow. But she was always fighting off other threats. Demons had become a nusiance where she lived, and she often had conflict with them. As always, with Rau inside, providing aid, and occasionaly when she could, neya protected her. IT was once when neya was sent away on a long mission and she was captured by unknown forces to Verzertye, that a Demon, a Danava of organics called Braschael, attacked, overpowered, and kidnapped Verzerte and Rau, and the demon began his work. He tortured verzerte and rau, and kept them drugged with a poison he had devised for arrancar, and that stopped the flow of energy through them, and experimented. It was months, and months until the sadistic monster achieved his goal; the creation of a demon and hollow hybrid, in his mind a perfect killing machine he wished to unleash on the upper echelons of the demonic world,so he could assume a place of power, with his perfect weapon in tow, a master of demons in his own right.and a king among kings. But his victory would not last long, for rau the whole time had been leaking the energy familar to Neya., and she found thema dn was able to free Verzerte and Rau, and rushed them to a safe place, the headquarters of the yajuu. There, Neya left verzerte and her unborn child, and begant o search for the demon. But he had escaped and gone into hiding.

This was seven years ago. And now, Neya and verzerte and the child name Saviyasa, the Visera Demonio child, created froma mixture of Braschael's blood and verzerte's body, and some extreme genetic manipuation, was now a youngster living with her mother in Karakura city.
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The Host's Powers

• Sealed Zanpakutô: A Viking sword.

• Racial Abilities:
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• Unique Abilities:

Vibora Abilities
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Resereccion
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Taidettamielen
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Phantom Tech
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The Spirit's Basic Information

» The Spirit's Name: Raunina Meili
» The Spirit's Race: N/a
» The Spirit's Gender: Female
» The Spirit's Age: 1414
» The Spirit's Written Appearance: Her style of clothing, is either Gothic Victorian, Victorian, modern Gothic or modern emo clothing.. the emo victorian, are more color vibrant, but still dark and foreboding. She often wears leather armlets, to match her clothes. chains often adorn her clothes, along with skulls. The chains are of many different materials, and she uses them for both decoration, and as weapons. Her eyes are white throughout, except for her pupils, which are slit like a rattle snakes. She often wears chokers, with neck pieces. Some are German crosses. Others are skulls of various creatures and animals. Stands at 6 feet, 8 inches tall. like a demon, she has small horns on her head that curve downward towards her face. She has leathery dragon wings. She has long black wild hair.

The Spirit's Personality Section

» The Spirit's Personality: Raunina is a protective mother figure to Verzerte, and has been for many millenia. She sees Verzerte as a partner and a daughter,and cares for her very much. She is calm, caring, and gentle, and will go out of her way to protect verzerte no matter what the cost. She is also, in her own right dark and terrible. Being a spirit that is a piece of the goddess, Raunina has some of her qualities, and some of those include wrathful and scorning, and somewhat destructive.

All in all though, Rau is gentle and endearing. She wishes only to protect Verzerte and now Saviyasa and Neya. They are her family and her charges. Anyone who threatens them or tries to harm them, will face her full wrath. There will be no mercy, or any forgiveness. All who sek to harm her dear ones, shall perish.



The Spirit's Background Section

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The Spirit's Powers

Shard of the Goddess: As a "shard" of a being called the goddess, Raunina has a part of her powers. Raunina is a shard of void, darkness energy. She commands powers fueled by these energies. She can refill her reserve of power by draining the energies from the environment and other beings.This is usually harmless, however Rau and can use this against those that are of darkness and shadow as a means of weakening their reserves and strengthens her own.

Writhing Darkness: Rau is able to create constructs such as blades, tentacles, wings, and such from her darkness. She can release bursts of dark energy and cloak herself in complete darkness, and disappear. She can cause darkness to be as a liquid, solid, gas or plasma, and manipulate it fully. Another effect is that when in total darkness Raunina is able to move from place to place.

Void: This allows Raunina to use the energy of the void. this energy allows for rau t o do incredible things, even destroy the spirits of other beings. Such is the power of the void, the energy created when anti matter and matter meet. This energy is very volatile and destructive. Rau channels most often as weapons, or through her claws or hands or fingers or other striking surfaces. However, she also uses it to shape items and imbue them properties of random assortments. she can make tendrils and weapons and bursts, archs, waves, whips, etc of this energy and use it as both a shield and weapon.
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Ziamichi Powers
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Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Host
[list][*]Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*]Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*]Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*]Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills
  • Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


The Spirit's Skills
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General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Thu Oct 23, 2014 9:13 pm



This ones been sitting round for over 2 weeks so off to old WIP you shalt go. You can still make your edits and all and when ya finish just post HERE and well get someone to look over it

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Thu Feb 05, 2015 6:17 pm




Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [O]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [O]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes:

Powers:

Taidettamielen: When Verzerte was born, she was born as a human with the powers of psionics. When she died, and became a hollow, This ability was sealed away in her soul, unable to use it because of the vast amounts of negative energy and her insanity. The power was always there, resting in her soul and mind, awaiting a time when she would recall her humanity and her personality and energies would level out and return to a stable nature. After her transformation into an arrancar, and the regaining of a human like body, Verzerte's memory came back in full of her past life. She was still emotionally and energetically imbalanced however. It was not until her capture, rape,and captivity b the demon named Braschael that her energies had balanced out, although her mind was even more shattered than before. After her escape and the birthing of her daughter, Verzerte's mind finally calmed, and the union of mind soul and body was finally completed and her once lost power was rediscovered.

NOTE

This ability set can only be used outside of her ressereccion, and cannot be used during that state. it also cannot be used when her ziamichi spirit is using its powers.This ability set uses a secondary pool of energy that stems from her mental energy mixed with her spiritual energies.however she can channel this set through her nanites.

Taidettamielen Abilities: , Psychic Constructs, Telekinesis, Teleportation, Telepathy, Enhanced Awareness.

Taidettamielen Powers:

Armory of the Snake: Verzerte can form constructs with the power of her psionics. These constructs can be anything from golems that move and attack, to walls, to swords, to cars, anything she can imagine and knows the basic concept of and how it works, she can generate. These constructs are as durable as the amount o energy she puts into them, and last until either her psionic energy reserve runs out or until the construct breaks or until she releases it.She also must have time to form a construct. a basic and simplistic construct takes only one post. A semi advanced (like say a train) takes two, and an advanced and complicated construct (like a gundam like construct, something really technologically advanced) takes three posts.

Snake's Power: Verzerte uses the power of her mind to push, pull, expand and crush her targets with sheer mental force. She can lift and move only as much weight and objects as she uses energy for. the more heavy the object or the more numerous, the more energy it requires. 10 small knives would be easy. a 6000 pound train with 1000 pound train cars, would be hard. stopping a meteor, would be the highest possible difficulty.

Snake's Blink: Verzerte is capable of using a blink like teleportation, where she moves her being by sheer psychic might. this ability is relatively draining and though it can be used on the fly, doing so teleports her randomly. if she wishes to go where she wills, she must have an idea of the general location and place, and enough time to form a full thought of the place's name.

Snake's Conneciton: Verzerte can contact the mind of any being at any time so long as she has knowledge or memory of them, and can communicate and share memories and sensory experiences with them. this is the least draining of any of her psionic abilities and can be used 24/7 with almost no ill effects until she begins to use it on multiple people at one time.

Alright, lets get this clear powers do not follow you..When you become a hollow those powers that you had previously take the place of your powers as a hollow, this is a 10 pound bag of nope in a nine pound bag.

PhatomTech: Verzerte has a cybermind that has been changed and somehow mutated by her Ziamichi Spirit's Nature and powers. It is no longer an average cyberbrain. The cyber brain itself has returned to an organic like state, and is integrated and yet separated from Verzerte's nervous system. It is integrated int he way that a normal cyber brain would be, but separated by a layer of void energy that prevents outside interference and absorbs large amounts of energy to protect it. The cyberbrain itself has unlocked a hidden potential within Verzerte, and has granted her enhancements to her powers This is the primary use of her cyber brain, although it also allows for her to create nanites by generating them from her reiryoku and reiatsu.

Phantom Tech Abilities:Nanite Abilites

Phantom Tech Powers:
through her Cyber Brain, Verzerte is capable of many things with her nanites. By utilizing them as a form of scouting unit, she can spread them out up to 200 meters away from herself in every direction and use them to gather data and information on the environment and the inhabitants and conditions within that environment. These are within the numbers of the billions, when spread out this far. She has them spread in a way that allows them to gather maximum data but not be effective as a combat unit as they are so spread out. within 100 meters, the grouping is tighter and they are actually minimally effective for use in combat. how they attack is by lathcing onto their target and literally attacking them furiously. Also, they can use base energy beams and bursts against their targets, attacking from everywhere. Verzerte can channel ceros, bala, and other hollwo abilities through them as well, and use them as focuses to attack with her ress abilities, as well as her psionics.

The nanites can also be used to form constructs of sorts, and to help others. They can for example, be used ot repair the damage tissues of a target to help them heal, and by gathering and assimilating organic material, they can even rebuild entire organ systems and limbs, if given enough sufficient time. The nanites can form any construct that comes into verzerte's mind, and be given commands to attack independently as constructs.

the nanites Also carry some hidden traits. Verzerte has found a way to allow them to carry her venom inside them and inject it into her foes. Since they come from an Arrancar, it may be possible for their attacks to infect other beings with hollow energy, and cause such things as hollowification of shinigami and the death of quincy, through enough doses of this energy. The nanites themselves though are not invincible. if someone can over charge their little bodies with enough energy, they will be disabled and dissipate into raw materials and energy, that is absorbed back into Verzerte. Howeverm one must disable all nanites within an area to complete stopp all of them in said area. a better plot or plan would be to cause them to work harder to complete their goals and use up their own energy, which is a set amount given by verzerte. Even though she can make them from her own energy pools, It does tire her out eventually to continually make them in such alrge quantities. Due to her void energy though, no one can take control of them as her void energy is somehow attached to their cores and operating systems, and any one who tries will simply be blasted with void energy as a failsafe and the annites will either deactiveate all commands and return to verzerte, thus restoring her energy pools by 1/4 of what she put into the respective groups, hives or swarms. (a group is in the thousands, a hive is in the millions and a swarm in the billions.)

As of this current moment in time verzertte's limit on the amount of nanites she can create AND control OPTIMALLY is 9,999,999,999. anything past this, is unknown what happens. they could go rouge, or verzerte could have partial control over them, just as the maximum range is 200 meters. anything past this currently would be pushing it.



Ok let me clear this up, no creature on PH God or otherwise could have that many nano's in them.Your body cannot contain that many, for another notice the person who runs hollows on our site the majority of the time doesn't think you can even have Phantom Tech, now depending on the truth behind all this I will be willing to help you remake it and structure it.

• Resereccion Name: totuus (truth)

• Resereccion Release Phrase: ne katso (make them see)

• Release Actions: Verzerte merely has to touch the blade, and it shatters.

• Resereccion Appearance: When she goes into Resereccion, Verzerte's legs are replaced with the coils of a large snake. The mask pieces in her hair form into the three pieces of her mask. she gets a 10 inch long spike on her tail's tip and her claws elongate.

• Resereccion Abilities:

Name: Reign of Terror: Unleashed Chaos
Type:manipulation
Range:short-long
Description:can create and manipulate a black substance that is likened onto water. this substance has a built in side effect of causing 2nd degree acid burns on contact with a target.. She can create anything out of this substance within imagination: barriers, waves, arcs, torrents, bursts,and it can even be manipulated into an ice like form. she can manipulate the density and molecular structure of this substance, alongside it's state of matter (gas, solid, liquid, or plasma) as well. Anything not used with the material will remain if she wishes or fade away. Though if it remains it becomes corrupted and acid colored snow/ice liquid.this ability can also be used like all others, aerially. and cannot harm her or those perceived as allies.


Name:Reign of Terror: Crawling Chaos
Type:supplementary
Description:her substance covers the area, and in such a way that it is transparent completely. she can cause the material to creep across the ground at bala speed in any direction to a radius of 65 meters. anyone who comes into contact with this is held in place. as they are held, the substance constantly burns their trapped parts for 2nd degree burns that are more painful than damaging. she can cause the substance to constrict her victims, causing crushing damage, or she can have the substance become like hardened spikes and impale the target.this ability can also be used like all others, aerially. and cannot harm her or those perceived as allies . to avoid injury, just avoid her attacks, and try not to get captured.

Name:Reign of Terror: Place of Chaos
Type:passive
Range:any
Description:as she is immune to her substance,is capable of sinking into it and disappearing. this however is not the case. when inside her substance, she is within her own dark pocket dimensional region. while inside this personal region, she can move between any location that her substance is at, as long as there is enough to fit the tip of her nose or tail through. none can enter this area without OC AND IC permission, as it is her own personal region and is where she primarily dwells in this form.to anyone not perceived as an ally, it is a normal pool of her substance that causes the previously stated second degree burn that is not so much combat damage as it is an affliction of minimal effect, and is only as deep as the material or surface it is on allows. to someone perceived as an ally or has oc/ic permission, it does not harm them, and allows for them to pass into the personal region unharmed. however, if her perception of them would be to change, the black substance would wrap around them and reject them from the area, pushing them out and back into the world outside her area.

Name:Reign of Terror: Exploding Chaos
Type:triggered passive
Range:short-long
Description:by causing an atomic imbalance in her substance, the user is able to cause it to either A)detonate and explode or B) be infused with reiatsu/ reiryoku/reishi w/e and cause it to shock the target. the shock is more relate-able to a sudden jolt of electricity, however can be held constantly the explosion expands and detonates all her material in a region of up to 100m. The more concentrated the material is in relation to the distance to her is proportionate to the damage dealt. SO, if there is a large amount at 100 m from her concentrated in a large pool, the explosion will be quite large (proportional to the amount of material present) but it will not deal as much damage, as compared if it were right next to her. avoid contact with the material, and keep your distance when she triggers the explosions, and you will survive.


Last and certainly not least, the ress powers they need limits and they need them badly. Your range is way to far without any limitations, I request you lower the range or make it a once per thread..And take away all control of them, now I see no exact reason why your person can change the state of matter to these, you need to find a direction with your powers.. Right now they are very confused and aimless..Alright that covers your powers.

Appearance: You have no picture on your app, this description isn't enough to paint a picture of your character..Right now your person is literally a floating head, that's it...You need to write this out more..

History: Way to old, you are way to old in this app. You cannot be a Vasto Lorde without admin approval, since no admin has told me of such that needs to go.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Thu Feb 05, 2015 11:28 pm

To address the age, I asked and asked and asked and asked on age and was given no answer. Therefore I went with the basis on which I built her. And if she is too old then go ahead and pull my shinigami that was APPROVED for and age ten years older than verzerte. And as far as the description, I'll work on that. And as far as the nanites, they are not stored in her body. They are generated from her reiatsu. She dies not stire them physically. When she wants the infirmatikn she reabsorbs them as reiatsu. And so much for this sites policy of going a little stretchier on powers and such @ tediametlien. I'd really like to have that as its something very important to her chara ter. If there is anyway to keep it a d change up my history a bit then I'd love to do that.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Thu Feb 05, 2015 11:34 pm

And on the vasto thing I was GOING to ask an admin to look at this app, I just happened to have to go to work. So yeah. I'd really love it if an ADMIN would view this for my claim on vasto, as I feel I've covered enough ground and area in history and such. I'll contest the age thing to the end though. You guys approved my shinigami born year 2 ad and deceased year 22. So I don't see why a hollow could not be that age.in context there are probably hollow OLDER than verzerte in theory as how I think bits stated the SS is not very old in terms of millennia or maybe they are. But before they would have the numbers to govern the spiritual world is think that hollows would exist then as well.
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Thu Feb 05, 2015 11:41 pm

And I'm sorry to sound like an ass, cus I'm really not, but there were things I asked and bothered about and was given no answers on several occasions and asked questions about certain things in this app and no one ever answered me or gave me ANY confirmation. And then I feel as if there is no sense of you guys ever being on the same page, because one approves a character with X and then another denies something very similar that has Y but is yet different. To be honest I feel jerked around and it has kinda pissed me off.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Fri Feb 06, 2015 1:50 am

Oh dear lord...we'll focus on the YVHV half of this for now.

First off, Yvhv, there is an edit button, please use it, thank you kindly. Don't repost over and over again, makes ya look like a tool.

Second, I've never seen any of these questions asked...so either A.) You threw them randomly in to the Xat instead of PMing a staff member or using one of the communication threads(the former tends to be more effective here for quick answers from anyone but Frost) or B.) You completely imagined these questions.

I'll settle some of the contradictory things here, we don't have any real restrictions on ages, but 2000+ years is very, very old. Consequently, the history should reflect that. There are...maybe three major plot points in this history...and they're all underwhelming and really filler-ish. That is a lot...lot lot lot lot lot of life that's undocumented and thrown to the way side in favor of a little fight scene. Hollows aren't dormant and a hollow that old would have lived through MANY things in the site's canon(which includes a lot of Bleach canon) and you don't pay mention to any of this. This would be denied by me before we even got to "Vasto Lorde" because this doesn't even sort of do justice to the age this creature is supposed to possess. Also, if you're looking for a higher tier, you NEED to fix the spelling and grammatical mistakes that litter this app. Whenever I see enough that I need to start keeping a written count to keep track of them all, there's an issue...it needs to be fixed. This looks horrible and for that reason, I'd deny the age. So you're going to have to try harder here.

As far as the mechanical things that need fixing, you don't get to request who checks your app. We sorta don't take requests for that sort of thing. It's sort of like getting to request which judge is presiding over your arraignment. You need an admin to sign off on the Vasto Lordeyness but the rest of this you'll need to work through with Crow or whoever continues to check this app.



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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Fri Feb 06, 2015 8:13 am

Mr./Mrs YVHV

In terms of Vasto Lorde, they are a rare kind of hollow so I'm going to say no on it because I don't think that A, the Age would give you enough B. The nature of the app wouldn't say Vasto Lorde, and C. When a Vasto Lorde becomes an Arrancar they would of been naturally powerful. The fact this is a ziamichi makes this even more rare, because Ziamichi's are rare breed of mixes, but when you add something that's recessive as a Vasto Lorde, you need a bit more than what you've given to make sure that you can have the proper thing. So no you cannot have Vasto Lorde, please remove it upon the edits you have to do, thank you and I hope your app comes smoothly.

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Fri Feb 06, 2015 8:16 am

Alright, I'm going to let someone else grade this app, I feel it may need someone who can better work with the app maker and help them make their character reasonable, I left what I thought needed fixed for it to work..If that's incorrect please make sure I'm aware of what else needed fixed, may as well learn from it. I'm sorry if this caused any trouble or issues, my wording is hard to handle at times as most don't understand what I mean. Anyways I wish luck to whoever checks the app in the future and to the app maker.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Verzerte Schatz   Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:56 am

first off, im not a tool. i was on my phone when i posted those replies, and i had to seperate my replies up in order to be able to send them. it would have been single message. but i digress, it seems the mobile version of the site is inadequate when a certain character count is reached. if im going to be called a tool, and just otherwise insulted, and condescended, i dont think i wish to remain a member here. so thannks for calling me a liar and a tool imakuran. love being accused and named called by staff. thanks. i see how this place really works now.

and im working on these edits, away from this place from now on. ill copy the app and work elsewhere offline from here, and just...you get the damned idea. i dont see why id bother though. i dont feel as if i should stay.

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