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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Renata(wip)   Mon Oct 20, 2014 9:28 pm

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Name: Renata
True Age: 400,000
Age after Rebirth: 40
Gender: Female
Personality: (Two paragraphs or 10 sentences)
Sugiura Class: Knight Sugiura

General Appearance

Animalistic Traits: Bird feathers, appearing underneath her clothing. Retractable wings. Feathers are the color of her hair.
Appearance Age: 20
Height: Five foot Five inches
Weight: One-Hundred pounds

Natural Abilities

Pyromancy(granted by Nimbus): Explanation will be found in Magic.
Rebirth(granted by Nimbus): Explanation will be found in Magic.

Dance of Fire: This is Renata's sword style. Much like the dancing flame, Renata dances around her opponents kicking up particles of dust and igniting them to blind the opponent or opponents. She moves like a powerful flame in the wind, using her katana for quick strikes at nerve bundles to damage them through steel and flame, so the opponent does not know they're being attacked.

She primarily aims at the joints at the shoulders and at the base of the spine so the opponent or opponents cannot move once the nerves are cut and burned. Due to her covering her sword in flames she cauterizes the wounds of her opponents so they do not bleed out and die from blood lost. She wants her fights to last as long as possible while slowly disabling her opponents. This style switches between extreme close range and offense via her katana and her Joushou's broadsword, and extreme long range and defense via her Joushou's whip.

Pyromancy(granted by Nimbus): Renata is able to summon and control the awesome power of fire. She concentrates this magic into her swordsmanship to increase the deadliness of her swings. Renata will never strike at her opponents from far away. She prefers to draw near her opponents, which is evident within her magic. Her flame will never go more than five feet from her body, aside from upon the length of her Sacred Weapon, and while in her released forms. Upon her sacred weapon, the flames will never go more than four feet from it. She is able to cloak her body in flame to protect herself from physical and spiritual attacks. If the attacks are more powerful than her Sugiura magic, willpower, and focus abilities the attacks will go through.

By using her flames she is able to create a air lens around her to negate electrical-based abilities by super heating the air, this is not absolute however. The power of her air lens depends on both her Focus and Sugiura Magic skills. If the power behind the attack is greater than both, the air lens with be shred through. However if the power is greater than one and not the other the power behind the attack is halved. If the power is below both in strength the attack will not go through. As her focus wanes the power of the lens goes down, and vice versa for the power as she loses her power.

The flames are orange in her base form. The flames are yellow in her Joushou. The flames are blue in her Zenou. The flames are white in her Kyuu Kyou. The flames she can summon, are stronger the higher in forms she goes.

Rebirth(granted by Nimbus): Renata has the magic of rebirth. Whenever she dies from any and all means she explodes in flames, be it drowning, stab to the heart, decapitation. Any and all forms of death will cause her body to explode in flames and turn to ash. She will be reborn five years after her death, with no memory of her past lives. Burying her ashes, will delay her rebirth by a hundred years. Collecting her ashes into a iron urn, and sealing the urn will delay her rebirth by three hundred years. Collecting her ashes into a iron urn and sealing it, before throwing the urn into a lake within the Soul Society will completely prevent her rebirth forever, permanently killing her. All of her ashes must be present in burying them, sealing them into a iron urn, or throwing it into a lake or she will be reborn.

Sacred Weapon: Her sacred weapon is the katana that manifests itself each time Renata is reborn into the world. This katana is exactly twenty inches long from base to tip with an additional five inches of the hilt. The blade of this weapon is crimson red.

Other Weapons: Renata owns a plain steel katana the same length and weight as her sacred weapon.

Guardian Beast

Origin: Rebirth

Guardian Beast: A Phoenix

Guardian Beast's name: Nimbus

Guardian Beast's World: The world of Nimbus is a seemingly endless desert. The sky is completely clear of clouds. Not a drop of water can be found anywhere within the desert aside from where Nimbus makes her home. Sandstorms constantly and randomly buffer the desert, appearing constantly. The harsh winds, heat, and sands, can and will strip away a person to nothing unless one makes it to Nimbus' nest. One must travel through the desert to find Nimbus before they are able to harness Nimbus' abilities.

The dunes of the desert can reach as high as half a mile high due to the constant buffering of the wind, kicking up sand into high mountains. Shade is impossible within the desert due to the sun is always moving staying directly above the person making it extremely hard for anyone to find their way. In order to find the next of Nimbus one must accept everything about themselves, and strive to better themselves. Every hundred or so meters awaits a new challenge to the person to learn more about themselves. Upon failing the test, the person is stripped away to nothing.


Joushou Appearance: Renata's Joushou causes her Sacred Weapon to transform into a broadsword. The blade lengthens by twenty inches, making a blade of forty inches. The broadsword has indentations every two inches, across the entire blade's width. These indentations signals parts of her sword that can separate to turn into a whip. The whip can extend to a hundred feet. The 'joints' of the whip are heavily reinforced, only a highly significant force(a tier or more higher than Renata's durability) can break the whip at the joints.

Joushou: While released her ability to summon and control flames become easier, allowing her to extend the amount of flames she can generate to her blade's entire length. If Renata uses her Joushou, she primarily uses the broadsword version, switching to the whip only when she needs the defensive properties.


Zenou Appearance:
Zenou Abilities: This form is their version of Bankai. This takes many years to learn, and then many many more to perfect. This is only tapping into 50% of their power. Their speed, strength, stamina, and durability increases quite a bit.

Kyuu Kyou

Kyuu Kyou Appearance:
Mystic Eyes: Something that only those that have achieved Kyuu Kyou can have. Mystic Eyes are something special about the user's eyes. They are usable in any form, but the realization of 100% of the user's power allowed for the user to gain a special ability that involves the eyes. See here for a temporary Mystic Eyes list.
Kyuu Kyou Abilities: The final stage of a Sugiura's power. This is 100% of their power, and their soul. Their abilities are increased substantially, and most of the time Kyuu Kyou is forbidden to be released. Few have mastered it, for it is so taxing to release it. It is manifested as the true form of one's soul.

Alter Form

Alter Appearance: (What your Alter Form looks like. It has to have some resemblance to the original. You only get an Alter Form when you have Kyuu Kyou)

Alter Personality: (How your Alter Form acts.)

Alter Powers: (What kind of powers does your Alter Form have that your original form doesn't have?)

Past & Roleplay Sample

Character Background: (Three paragraphs or 15 sentences minimum)
Roleplay Sample: (Two paragraphs or 10 sentences minimum)

General Skills
Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills
Sugiura Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Animal Instincts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Martial Arts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Alter Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Renata(wip)   Thu Nov 13, 2014 10:24 am


Due to the fact that this WIP is over two weeks old, I am going to go ahead and move this character into Old WIP. You can finish up this character there if you want, or request it moved back to WIP if you so desire.


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Renata(wip)   Mon Mar 23, 2015 4:42 pm

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