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Mon Nov 10, 2014 2:38 pm

«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


  • Comments/Notes: N/A

  • Tier: 3-1++ (Low Level Shikai Allowed)


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Tue Nov 25, 2014 5:15 pm
Hold up a minute good sir, you have an extreme disparity with your stats.

General Skills

Durability: Master
General Speed: Advanced
Strength: Master
Weapon Skill: Master




Racial Skills

Hoho: Master
Cero/Bala/Kidō: Advanced
Zanjutsu: Master
Hakuda: Master

These are a bit high can you bring them down to normal levels which would be.

General Skills

Durability: Adept.
General Speed: Beginner.
Strength: Advanced.
Weapon Skill: Adept.

Racial Skills

Hoho: Adept.
Cero/Bala/Kidō: Beginner.
Zanjutsu: Adept.
Hakuda: Adept.


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Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:03 pm
Yeah, I back that up as he should have something like this:

Tier 3: Tier 3's are allowed up to two to three adept for each section. But, just like the others, if the person works hard enough or depending on the case, they may have one advance if they work hard enough.

Source: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t148-major-updates-skill-sheet-system-put-this-in-your-application-when-your-finished-and-accepted

So please make the adjustments.


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Fri Nov 28, 2014 10:21 pm
i count only 4 sentences for personality please expand this to 10 at least as that is the minimum that is required. thank your for you time
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Mon Dec 01, 2014 10:47 am
due to changes that have been made to this app i shall be rechecking this app later today. what appears to have been added. Sealed Zanpakutō abilities and personaility.

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Tue Dec 02, 2014 1:09 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: same as current
  • Mental Deduction: same as current
  • Pain Endurance: same as current
  • Focus: same as current


Comments/Notes: your personality is still lacking one sentence and make sure to add in the vizard skill sheet to the app as as the hollow skill sheet.
Tier: same as current
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Tue Dec 09, 2014 3:02 pm
As a result of this thread https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13011-the-rough-and-tumble-kanaku-romulus#82781 .you will have to rework on your powers and limit them as you can not be trusted with them. We will allow you to use your character but you are unable to use your powers. If needed we my decide to change your tier. How everything else turns out ends up on you and staff's final decsion. Thank you and have a nice day.


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Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:51 pm
Since the forces of evil have coerced me in to re-checking this, we'll layout some ground rules. You are more than welcome to argue with any of the decisions made in this check and I will listen to polite arguments and keep an open mind, but if you are able to convince me against what I post here, please just do what I ask. With that out of the way, let's get started.

Solenoid Function: Romulus' physiology has him in a constant state of Absorbing, Massing and Converting matter. This incoming matter can be in varying states, Solid, Energy, ect. Traditionally Romulus feeds constantly on Free Flowing Spiritual Energy, and can either chose to Localize it, in the form of an electromagnetic aura (Center it around him externally, trickling it into his own personal reserves) or Add it directly to his own.] With in inactive Shikai, his body naturally stockpiles converted matter, a trickle feed like the current will continue upping his prominence by a factor x5 (5 Times his base)per turn active.

Bold 1: Please leave an addendum that, presently, he is unable to convert organic, specifically living/whatever shinigami, et al, are made of, tissue, matter. With how this is presently worded, his mere presence can break down other PCs.

Bold 2: Please lower the threshold to 3x. At tier 1 it will up to 4x and then 5x at 0 tier. Also, elaborate as to what "prominence" means. Is it strictly the prominence of his energy pool being raised or is this increasing his physical attributes as well?

Saturation Point: Despite having a gargantuan capacity for the amount of energy he can store within himself, and an even greater capacity for what he can isolate around himself externally. Romulus' true limitation comes in the form of a Saturation Point===A point where he can no longer store converted matter as energy. This would be the effective HARD CAP, and his saturation point is based soley on current tier. At this point, literally brimming with power, he would be at his statistical maximum, and remains UNABLE to convert any other matter for any reason, unless first exhausting his reserves. Naturally, elevated states of being will improve raise his saturation point appreciably, particularly in his Bankai state, even more so when donning his Hallow mask. In each respective instance his Saturation point is raised by 100% in his Bankai State (due to the fusion of he and his sword, and overall significantly greater physiological density), and an additional 75% when donning his Hallow mask (Limited by how many turns he can maintain the mask, where as any energy gained during this state will be immediately exhausted once he comes out of it).

Bold 1: For clarity's sake, are these numbers based on the restrictions imposed in the unsealed ability? In addition, are these numbers applied in additive or multiplicative form? Additive I'm alright with, multiplicative you better have a damn good argument for it.


» Bankai Appearance: The Appearance of the sword does not change much, save for the base of the blade nearest the hilt now featuring 3-Large Spheres engraved into it.


» Bankai Abilities:In it's Bankai state the sword's Absorption Rate spikes exponentionally and it's in a constant state of Electromagnetic Dynamism. This is represented by the 1st-Red Sphere which glows at a constant. Furthermore, Romulus' body undergoes a change as well. His skin, Skeleton and muscles all become extremly dense, and metallic, in truth---he takes BECOMES his Zanpaktou. With his entire body now boasting extreme musculature, while harnessing the increasing energy created by converting ambient matter, his Attributes spike significantly. His speed, strength, endurance, durability and powers all incline as a result.

The Second Sphere represents the Bankai'-States limited control over gravity. It's Yellow In coloration, and when active, represents Romulus' current influence over the fundamental force be it to increase it, or lessen it in his immediate area. More specifically, Romulus will increase or decrease the Gravitational prominence within his area to HASTEN or SLOW the approach of objects on his being, OR, hasten or slow his own movements as needed. He can also utilize these abilities in direction. He can pull objects toward him, or send objects away from him at pace. HE can also drastically increase the force of his blows by increasing the gravitational pull on his weapon while swinging it. By Touching an object he can also increase the gravitational pull on an object or person making it hard to move if not outright immovable.

The Third and Final Sphere represents "Force". This sphere represents the Bankai State to exert immense shock-waves. Be it by swinging his sword or physical attacks, Romulus can exert immense shockwaves of pure force, the likes of which having substantial power and intensity behind them. By touching the ground he can exert enough force to create a localized Seismic event (On part with a 9.0 Earthquake or greater, In the World of the Living, Romulus has seperated entire tectonic plates with this power.), or by punching the air in front of him, create an outstanding pressure wave sufficient enough to topple buildings or mountains even at it's greatest effect. By placing his hands ON a person he can impart enough raw force to break every bone in their body and send them flying for miles on end.

Please place a strike through this Bankai to indicate that he has not yet achieved this. The tier this was approved at initially was not in Bankai range and Bankai is not automatically gained upon achieving the tier and needs to be attained In Character and requires the appropriate power upgrade thread, which I was unable to find. If I'm merely blind and you can supply me with said power upgrade thread I will happily rescind this request.
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