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 Elendril The Vizard (WIP) {Revamp}

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Elendril The Vizard (WIP) {Revamp}   Sun Dec 14, 2014 12:37 am


» Name:Elendril Hoshi
» Titles:N/A
» Appearance Age: Late teens, possibly 20 years old.
» True Age: 250 years old.
» Gender:Male

» Appearance Description: (Please Put 1-2 Paragraph's on your character appearance.)

» Appearance Picture:

» Personality: Original personality Elendril's creed in life is to "take the path with the least bloodshed. Despite this, he would follow a plan which will require the deaths of thousands of innocent people. He was also willing to attack and kill members of his own family. Elendril, has been identified by many people as being afraid of death. He say's he only fear's a pointless death. His own description of himself as a "great person. He show's great pride and is very arrogance at time's as well. But this is just the Surface of Elendril

Since Elendril is a very deep person. Willing to put his life on the line for those that deserve to live. He loves to be by himself for he fill's that he is very different then most people. He will some time's run off into the wood's when he wants to be by himself. He will help almost any who deserve's help. For he does not think any one should have to die a meaningless death. Or die by them self's. He also loves to talk and hang out with those who are close to him. He will sometimes talk to his brother's and sister's for hours without knowing.

Elendril does not care abut Any one but him self. He alway's look's out for him self before he does for anyone else. Elendril alway's say why love when every thing you love will just end up leaving you in the end. So Elendril keep's him self closed up from every one in the world. But truly Elendril is very outgoing and love's to be around other people as much as he can. thinking that family is the most important thing in the world and he also love's to play joke's on people.

But all that changed when Elendril became a Vizard and his brother's and sister's wanted nothing to do with him. And that hurt Elendril very bad since he was super close to his sibling's. Like his oldest brother Ry and Youngest sister Yuki. But even tho they where close they still wanted nothing to do with him. So Elendril started to close him self out from everybody. So that he would never have to feel the pain he felt when he lost his brother's and sister's.


» Zanpakutō Name: Schlifer

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: (What does your Zanpukto Spirit look like? A picture or two paragraph description will do.)

» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:Maei
» Inner World:[/b]

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: The Schlifer is a strong Fire Element type Zanpauktou, whose first sealed state is representative of a large, rectangular broadsword with two handles. One being the actual hilt of the blade, the second being a metal bar located in the square of the bottom of the blade. The weapon can be wielded with one hand, or both. But Schlifer actual has two sealed appearances. In the second form it s a double edge twin sword's ( there are 2 of them ). That look's like this.

» Release Phrase: Burn

» Shikai Appearance: It is the same as in the Sealed appearance.

» Shikai Abilities:First ability
Second Ability

» Bankai Appearance: (What does your character look like in Bankai?)

» Bankai Abilities: (What type of additional abilities does your character get in Bankai? Please describe them in 3 paragraph's; six sentences each)


» Inner Hollow Description:

» Inner Hollow Personality: Kyo is depicted as a sadistic character who loves to kill his enemies, delighting in their deaths. He also has a tendency to ridicule and crack insulting comments toward enemies and allies alike. When he is mad. Kyo is also quite perverted, groping women whenever he has the chance Despite not showing much outward care for anyone, Kyo became enraged when his friends are hurt. Showing that he has a caring side to all his blood thirst demon attitude.

» Inner Hollow Powers: Enhanced Speed: Vizard gain a great boost in their speed while Hollowfied. Kensei is able to throw a rapid amount of punches against a Gillian[46]
Enhanced Strength: The Vizard have shown great strength while using their masks. Love was able to rip a Gillian class Menos in half with his bare hands after the Vizard first arrived in the Fake Karakura Town[47]
Cero: Vizard gain access to certain Hollow abilities, such as the Cero blast; However, only Shinji[48], Hiyori[49] and Mashiro[50] have been seen using it.

Power Augmentation: With the acquisition of the mask through the subjugation of one's inner Hollow, Vizard gain access to an additional and separate source of power - aside from the Shinigami powers they already possess - Hollow powers. The accumulation of both powers greatly augments their powers beyond what a Shinigami and/or Hollow alone would be capable of.[43]

Mask Protection: Body damage can seemingly be ignored while wearing their masks, as demonstrated by Ichigo's Hollow during his unwilling transformations.[51]

Reiryoku Enhancement: Vizard have dual spiritual power of both Shinigami and Hollow, which enhances their abilities. While watching Ichigo fight with Grimmjow, Tier Harribel noted that the volume and nature of Ichigo's spirtual power made it seem like she was watching a fight between two Espada.[52]

Garganta: The power that Hollow's and Arrancar use to go to and from Hueco Mundo. Kurai has the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. It was taught to him by his Arrancar equivalent.

Sonído (響転 (ソニード), Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound" Japanese for "Transfer Effects") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps

Telekinesis: Vizard apparently hold varying degrees of telekinesis; For example, Ichigo, in his new Hollowfied form, has employed this ability to call forth his Zanpakutō with a mere flick of the wrist.[53]

» Hollow Mask Appearance: :[/b]


» Vizard Powers: (What benefits does your character get from transforming into their mask state?)


» Resurrección Appearance: (What does your character look like when they transform into their Resurrección state?

» Resurrección Abilities: (When a character ascends to this state, they at their peak power. As such, you will need to post at least 5 paragraph's describing their powers.)


» Background: Elendril was born into the poor part of the roukon distrect. He was the youngest of seven children. And all Elendril wanted was advenchure and to be able to start the soul academy to start becoming a Shinigami. But Elendrel's mother did not want any of her children to join the soul society like there father. Who had went missing on a mission when Elendril was five. And she was so heart broke that she would not give any of her children her blessing to join the Soul society. But thar did not stop her oldest son Ry. Ry left with out his mothers blessing saying thar there mother was being selfesh. By not giving them her blessing to join.

And that it was not there father's fault that he got lost on a mission. He was doing his job But there mom Ino never understood why her children wanted to join the Soul Society. But she started to see that she was wrong for not giving them her blessing. And after about two years when Ry came back to the house to ask his mom for forgivness. For Leaving with out her blessing. And that was when she gave all of her children her blessing to do what ever they wanted. So five of Elendril's brother's and sister's left all going to the soul Academy. To start there life's. And that left Elendril and Yuki at home with there mothere Ino since they where to young to start the Academy

. But that did not stop Elendril he started training for the day he would be old enought to starte the academy. So Elendril spent his time training with some of the sword master's around the district. And he started to get caught up with some of the local thugs and started to become a Bounty Hunter. And started to get introuble with the soul Society. But it really did not Bother Elendril until His mon and Yuki reminded him of his dream to become a Shinigami like his father. And that if he kep hanging with the people he was hanging with he was likely to never be able to become a Shinigami. So Elendril left the gang he was in and stoped doing thug work for some of the Thug Lord's.

And he Apllied for the the soul Academy and even thought Elendril had a record they let him apply because of his father and how great of a Shinigami he was. Hoping that he had half his father's skill's. Like his brother Ry who was well on his way to becoming a captain of the the Soul Society. And so As Elendril started the Academy he was at the top of his class in all thing's but he was best at Kidō and Sword fighting. But half way threw Elendril's first year of the Academy. He and his sister Yuki had to brop out because there mom went missing. And so Elendril and all 5 of his brother's and sister's started to look for there mom. But it was not susessful.

So Elendril and Yuki went back to the academy. The next year when it started back since they had missed to much time serching for there mom. And since both of thim had Allready been in the Academy allready and where both at the top of there class that graduated early. And Elendril went to the Kidō corp's while his sister went to the Stealth Force since she seemded to very good at Hand to hand combat. And while Elendril and all five of his Brother's and sister's where all on diffrent Squad's they all stil found time to spend time with each other.

But Ry Elendril's oldest brother never gave up on there mom. He thought he owed it to her for leaving and join the soul society with out her blessing. So he serched every where he could and found people to help him. Until one day he found out where the thug's had hid her. So he went and got Elendril and the rest of there sibling's and they went to save there mother. And when they got to the house Elendril new where they where.It was one of the thug's he use to work for. And As Elendril and his Sibling's went to save there mother Elendril was stuck. while he and his sibling's where in the middle of battle he was forced to have to fight his old best friend's.

And Elendril could not find it in him self to kill his friend. And in his hesitation his mother was killed right infront of his Eye's. And as Elendril Watched it. It changed him. Elendril started to get the wild burst of dark gloome fealing's and he could not figure what was going on to him. And after all of Elendril's hard work in the soul society he was up for the lutinet spot. But he would have to fight the current one in a spar. None killing. But in the middle of the spar. Some thing happen to him. He changed and lost control of him self in the match.

And came close to killing his squad member. It was so close that the captain had to pull him off. Elendril was then held prisoner in the soul society. But he did not want his Brother's and Sister's to she him like this. So he escaped and ran away from the Soul society and lived on his own for a while. Until he meet some vizard's of the Vizard Corp's he told him what was going on to him and help him with it. And with that He became a member of the Vizard Corp's.

But he still felt as tho he left and abandond his sibling's. So he tried to go and make contact with them at the soul society. But he was attacked for leaving. And was suppost to be killed so he ran away with out getting contact to his sibling's. But a couple of month's later his siter Yuki managed to get contact with him and told him about how Ry was in real bad shape and was close to dying. And that he need to stay away from the familly because it was dangerous. Elendril told his sister it was fine and hid the pain that he felt inside. Because he loved his familly and know he was causing them pain. And this really changed Elendril. It made Elendril start to shut People out and stay to him self. [/spoiler]


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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills
  • Power Augmentation Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mask Protection:: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hollow Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Elendril The Vizard (WIP) {Revamp}   Thu Jan 01, 2015 12:40 am

This app is over 2 weeks old. You can continue in Old W.I.P. If this post gets in the way, PM or inform me through xat and i'll remove it. Otherwise, have a nice day.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Elendril The Vizard (WIP) {Revamp}   Mon May 04, 2015 1:34 pm

Gonna move this to Archives until Rook is consistent again.


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