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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Watarimono[APPROVED 3-4]   Tue Dec 16, 2014 10:44 pm



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» Name:Watarimono
» Titles: Wanderer
» Appearance Age:25
» True Age:327 (What is their true age?)
» Gender:Male
Affiliation/Rank: Vaizard Corps./Unassigned

» Appearance Description:
Watarimono stands at a fairly average height of five feet and 10 inches and weighs in at 170 pounds. His hair is an ivory white with a short and spiked hairstyle. He has heterochromia, one eye is green while the other is blue. He wears a black hooded cloak over a black shirt with long white sleeves. Underneath the shirt however, his body is well trained. His body well defined and cut, however its overshadowed by the amount of scars and burns etched into his body by the rigors of the third world war. The most notable scarring is the gigantic three pronged claw mark carved into his chest.


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» Personality:
Watarimono is a very unusual individual. His personality fits best the role of a wanderer. He seems very spacy, never focused, always looking off in the distance as if to spot an answer to a fleeting question. However, to those he truly deems worthy of his time, he is both analytical yet impulsive, as well as patient yet eager, and even quiet as well as rambunctious. His peers know him as someone who tests the waters of different extremes, hoping to find the needed balance in himself to find peace. He explores the nature of duality to find the perfect melding point of both extremes. Through these extremes he is a man shrouded in mystery. Especially on the battlefield, he is able to change his personality in an instant. A part of him almost enjoys having the ability to change personalities, yet he feels as though it isnt natural. He feels that his death caused his personality to split into two opposite driving forces, as if to prepare him for a new world he knew nothing about. One constant he has is his smirk that never leaves his face and his driving sarcasm, whether the sarcasm is in jest or directed as an insult. His personality ebbs and flows as a long stream ready to be still or rage like a rushing current at a moments notice. Duality has become his solace and peace.



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» Zanpakutō Name:Ikazuchi No Kaze

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:
Spirit Appearance- Kaze No Ikazuchi's appearance is that of a Built man in a hakama,One side worn out and tattered, the other side presteen and well kept. However, two heads rest upon this Zanpakutō's shoulders.

The first head is an older man with a shaved head and eyes shining like the color of emeralds. This man is quiet, reserved, calm, and speaks very softly. The other head is a very young man, eyes glowing a shimmering Azure, with long hair down to his shoulders. He has 4 piercings on each ear . Hes loud, outspoken, and Hot tempered.


» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:
The old mans name is Kaze the Wind Monk. He is an old man with a jovial demeanor and is jokingly sarcastic. But through that calm, happy demeanor lies an old man who is cunning, even tempered, always relaxed, and has no sense of urgency. As it stands, he is by no means an aggressive individual. He is more attune to partaking in "The Battle Outside the Battle". He is the type to use the power of words and persuasion rather than be in the heat of battle.
The young man goes by Ikazuchi the Lord of Lightning. He's an energetic, aggressive individual who loves being sarcastic, but insultingly so. He feels most at home as an aggressor or agitator whether it be in arguments or simply trying to hold a conversation with him. His rambunctious nature fits perfectly with the fact that he likes to do most of his talking with his knuckles.
This contrast between Kaze and Ikazuchi obviously cause them to but heads between one another. The only similarity they have is that they both have a positive demeanor and are both innately sarcastic, albeit for different reasons.

» Inner World:
Watarimono's inner world is set at a crossroads. Ikazuchi No Kaze stands at the center. The world around these crossroads are desolate to the opposite sides, but differently so. To the left of Kaze's side the path leads towards gale force winds. The winds howl and hiss in many directions. Ikazuchi's side is constantly flashing white and looking to the right you see a patchy field charred by constant lightning. However, at the center path behind Ikazuchi No Kaze is a path that is neither charred nor barren.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance:
Ikazuchi No Kaze's Zanpakutō in its sealed state is the size of a Wakizashi blade, the hilt fabric is colored green and blue while the scabbard is pitch black. The hilt is tear shaped. One side of the hilt being half of a diamond shape, and the other being in the shape of half a circle.


» Release Phrase:Unleash the storm of Duality... Ikazuchi No Kaze!!

» Shikai Appearance:
When Watarimono enters Shikai release, his body changes with his wardrobe. In shikai he wears a whit and black hooded one-sleeved robe. The hood is Half black and half white down the middle. The fabic after the hood covers stops at his shoulders.Watarimono's shirt its like a single sleeved monk's robe. The right side where the sleeve is is completely black with white trimming. The pants are completely black Gi pants. and lastly he has black Tabi on his feet.


» Shikai Abilities:
Once Released, it has two distinct forms, one of a scythe, and one of a double sided spear called a Naginata. The Scythe is a platinum colored scythe blade with a long black handle. The Scythe is a large blade with a much longer radius to slice around with, although it's a bit heavier and slower than the Naginata, using more of a flick mechanic allowing him to knock enemies around much easier than normal making them more prone to his Lightning based attacks. The Flick mechanic chanels also his inner energy allowing him to make the blade easily electrified on will. The Naginata is a green handled double bladed polearm with green jewels adoring the flat of each blade. The blades has a wind themed flat making the blade not only powerful looking, but swift. The double sided blades gives him a 360 degree around him as line of defense, since the blades are lighter than the scythe, the Naginata is much easier to spin to help create winds for defense on a pinch. The Naginata is generally a defensive weapon, but can use those same defensive winds offensively.
Passive traits:
::Elemental absorbtion:: When Watarimono has his Zanpakutō released, he is able to absorb both wind and lighting attacks to further strengthen his magic or offensive/defensive power depending on which Element he absorbs.(up to 25% of his normal power)

::Speed of Lightning:: When Charged with lightning magic, he can expend the bonus power to recieve a burst of speed, however using this speed he will lose the boost in power from absorbtion.

::Flow of the Wind:: Movent causes his flow charge to build up over time. When he has enough flow, he creates a shield of wind around himself to absorb the next incoming blow. When he absorbs wind magic he immediately gains this shield effect but the shield will also explode cause the opponent to be knocked back and possibly dazed.(For daze effect to occurr Watarimono must have a stronger willpower than his opponent)

Shikai Techniques:
*Scythe Techniques*

Shougekiha Renda(Shock wave Barrage): Watarimono Slashes his Scythe many times in the same direction. Using the Electrical properties Ikazuchi No Kaze bestows on him a ball of lightning emits from the scythe with each slash, all traveling to Watarimono's desired location.(For this to break guard, Watarimono's magic has to be higher than his opponent's guard)

Hiraishin(Lightning Rod): Watarimono lets out a bellowing cry as a bolt of lightning strikes him and whatever is near him at his location. After the impact of the bolt, Watarimono's body flows with electricity. He becomes supercharged and granted extra speed.(For this to break guard, Watarimono's magic must be higher than his opponents guard. This attack can be used in conjunction with speed of lightning, however the attack will only gain 10% instead of 25%.)
Suro-Arashi(Storm Throw): Watarimono charges his scythe with electrical energy and throws it at his opponent. The scythe can be controlled to move in the direction Watarimono desires. The longer the scythe moves the faster and more powerful the scythe becomes. The scythe can return to Watarimono at will (for this to break guard, Watarimono's must have a higher average of Magic and physical power than his opponent's magic and physical guard. When this attack gives a boost from speed of lightning, he will only get a total of an extra 15% from this attack)

Kaiko(Discharge): Watarimono Slams his scythe into the ground, as soon as the blade strikes the earth a Ring of Electricity emanates from Watarimono. It comes out like a pulse and dissipates after 100 yards in every direction. This attack isn't very damaging, but will stun the opponent if successful for some time.(Watarimono must have a higher willpower than his opponent for this to damage or stun them. If the opponent is successfully stunned, they are stunned for 1 post. Watarimono has to wait 2 posts before he is able to use this skill again.)
*Naginata Techniques*
Karyuu Arashi(Swirling Tempest): Watarimono focuses the wind energy in his naginata to emenate from the blade creating a dome of slicing wind around him. This skill has 2 uses, to keep everything outside from coming in, or to keep something inside from escaping. (The opponent must have a higher Projectile/Magical power than Watarimono's willpower and magical defense to break through the wind barrier)

Suraisu Gairu(Slicing Gale): Watarimono uses the Naginata both offensively and defensively. He makes a swift slash in a direction and begins charging forward. Using the wind magic of the naginata he creates a slipstream to increase his speed, cutting through projectiles to reach his target.(The opponents magical power must be greater than Watarimonos magic defense for this move to be stopped, and for this move to do damage Watarimonos power must be greater than his opponent's physical guard. When this ability is active, Watarimono is unable to absorb projectiles or use any spells relating to his Ikazuchi form.)

Tatsumaki Doriru(Tornado Drill): The naginata's best offensive technique. Watarimono darts forward and spins parallel to the ground at blinding speed. The naginata's wind magic activates as he begins to be engulfed in what looks like a tornado rushing at his target.(In order for this attack to break guard, his opponont's guard and magic power must average higher than Watarimono's Physical and Magic Power)

» Bankai Appearance:
N/A


» Bankai Abilities:
N/A


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» Inner Hollow Description:
Watarimono's hollow. The features of his face are that of a man in his early forties. His skin is pale and sickly. He has really long, unkempt hair, and bright Azure and Emerald eyes. Protruding from his temples are two horns, on the right its a black horn sticking straight upward. On the left its a White horn that curls around his ear and follows along his jaw line. He wears a completely white hakama. The hakama is worn and tattered.


» Inner Hollow Personality:
Watarimono loathes his inner hollow Muhyojona. He is a soulless, cold and calculative individual. He always speaks in a monotone voice, as if to purposefully anger Watarimono. He is a being of no emotion. He feels emotions and passions do nothing except hinder and blind a person of their goals. He doesnt respect Watarimono because givin the opportunity to be the same way but Watarimono chose to forsake that path.


» Inner Hollow Powers:
Afterimage Speed:
Even with the help of Ikazuchi No Kaze, Watarimono is no match for Muhyojona's blinding speed. Muhyojona can leave after images of himself to appear as if hes doing something, but while his after image faints he can come in from any direction for a real attack.
Relentless Strength:
Judging by Muhyojona's appearance would be a fatal mistake. His strength would be that between a high adjuchas class or a very low vasto lorde. His destructive power is over shadowed by the fact he makes it look completely effortless.

Advanced use of Ikazuchi No Kaze:
Muhyojonas control over Ikazuchi No Kaze is different than Watarimonos. Muhyojona has simultaneous control over Ikazuchi's Scythe and Kaze's Naginata at the same time. also being able to utilize both of their magic simultaneously.

Elemental Cero:

Muhyojona can form a standard Cero blast that would emanate from one or both of his eyes, however it will be imbued with the elemental properties of either Ikazuchi or Kaze depending on which eye he chooses.


» Hollow Mask Appearance:
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» Vizard Powers:
Improved Elemental Energy Management: Watarimono gains the ability to better control the energy he absorbs. While in his Vaizard form he is able to double his power upon gathering Lightning or Wind magic.
Afterimage speed:
Watarimono can leave after images of himself to appear as if hes doing something, but while his after image faints he can come in from any direction for a real attack. he can leave a max of 4 afterimages using an attack.

Elemental Cero:
Watarimono can form a standard Cero blast that would emanate from one of his eyes, however it will be imbued with the elemental properties of either Ikazuchi or Kaze depending on which eye he chooses.
Improved Strength:
Watartimono is granted great strength when in his Vaizard form. Albeit not as much as his Hollow counterpart Muhyojona, however he does have a noticeable increase in power.

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» Resurrección Appearance:
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» Resurrección Abilities:
N/A

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» Background:
Watarimono was born in Detroit in the year 2123. His parents, His father being Japanese immagrant and his mother being Chinese natural born citizen. His parents were not well off, his father trying to start a dojo in the city was hard on him and his mother. The dojo brought home just enough money for them to survive, but Watarimonos father cared more about helping others than the money he had brought in. Watarimono's paren Of course being the poor kid in school never faired well for Watarimono. Every day the kids would beat him and pick on him untill he was 14, then he asked his dad to train him.

When Watarimono asked his father beamed with excitement and only asked one question: "Are you ready for hardship, trails, and most of all, peace?". Watarimono trained hard for 3 years. He stayed at home and trained 14 hours a day in the martial arts of Bagua and Northern Shaolin. and did home schooling for the rest of the day until he slept. He did this all through highschool to improve himself. Now, at 18, he is at his pinnacle of physical perfection. And right after he finished his schooling, and his training, he decided to join the military.

Watarimono felt like he wanted to help those who were defenseless like the way he used to be when he was a child. When he was finished with his standard four year term, he was offered into a world taskforce because of his skillset in marksmanship and hand to hand combat and was sent to a mission in Africa in the year 2150. It was supposed to be a routine assassination mission and Watarimono was en route to the drop zone. and suddenly a loud explosion caused the helicopter to crash in to the jungle.

Watarimono wakes up in soul society soon after with almost no recollection of what happened. Other than the changed of climate, and the scenery change, he also realizes he is wearing clothes reminiscent to that of feudal Japan. After coming to, Watarimono was brought up to speed about him dying, and that he was in a life after death, living in a place called the soul society. Watarimono tried to remember his life after death, but everything was fragmented, it hurt him to try remembering and that which he could remember only came in bits and pieces.

As Watarimono grew a bearing on this new world he had become a part of. He saw the soldiers of soul society known as the shinigami. He felt a deep yearning to become one of these soldiers. One part of him wanted to help people, however another wanted revenge, for ending his life early in the human world and causing his unusual memory loss. He begged the gotei 13 for a chance to prove himself using hand to hand combat. After a good bit of convincing he finally got his chance to prove himself.

The day arose for him to prove himself, and for the first time Watarimono could remember, he felt truly excited. As he etered the training room he sees 5 shinigami at a ready stance. Watarimono readies in his Bagua stance and begins the fight. After 3 minutes of fighting 3 of the shinigami are unable to continue. Watarimono began to feel the adrenaline rushing through his veins. All of a sudden he changed his stance to Northern shaolin and charged his opponents, almost as he was a different person than just 5 minutes ago. This left the last 2 opponents completely off guard and he swiftly dispatched them.

Watarimono bowed in respect to his opponents and then bowed to the proctor and kneeled down to await his decision. All of a sudden Watarimono feels the proctor's Zanpakutō pierce right through his chest. Everything felt like it slowed down, and started to feel cold. Suddenly, he felt an odd energy surge through him unlike anything he ever felt before. As the proctor removed the sword and sheathed it Watarimono notinced a wakizashi sized Zanpakutō Over his left hand. And the clothes he was once wearing had turned into a hakama. He thanked his proctor for the opportunity and began to study at the academy.

After about 100 years in the gotei 13 he had gotten a special assignment to the outside world Karakura to investigate a disapearance of about 10 humans suffering the same grisly death. After Watarimono and the squadron of people arrived. They were ambushed by their target. A sickly looking hollow attacked all of them and left them for dead. Watarimono screamed at the hollow for its attention to try and save his squadmates. the hollow spared them, but infected Watrimono before the hollow dissipated from view.

Over the next year he felt as if something else was living inside of him, and he had been given another mission to investigate Karakura town again. This time he sees the same hollow that almost killed his squad. Watarimono had lost his temper and charged the hollow, and as the hollow took the beating and was slain, Watarimono felt something in front of his face, and it was the mask of the hollow he had just slain. Watarimono fled to find himself, and figure out what he had become. Watarimono had returned because he had caught wind of the Vaizard Corps. had been established and Watarimono decided now that he has caught a better grasp of his power. He felt it was time to use this mask that he thought was a curse, as a gift to continue his motive.
(Please post at least 5 paragraph's describing their human life, death, progression to shinigami and how they became a Vizard along with their inner battle and the resulting conclusion of it)


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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala/Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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»::RP Sample::
Watarimono senses a figure approach him as he is meditating, slowly as to not alert the person. He reached into his left sleeve to hold his Zanpakutō at the ready. Watarimono attempts to sense any negative reiatsu to see if the person is friendly or not, but it was to no avail. The figure was masking his reiatsu. Watarimono decides to wait and see if the person calls out to him in any way. After about another thirty minutes of waiting, Watarimono finally decides to call out to the figure. "What is your purpose for interrupting a simple wanderer in his meditation?". Another 5 minutes pass, each minute feeling longer and longer in his mind. Watarimono became overwhelmed with anticipation. His impatience finally welled up inside him and he began to charge the shadowy figure. Watarimono yelled "Prepare yourself!" and drew his Zanpakutō.




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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Watarimono[APPROVED 3-4]   Tue Dec 16, 2014 11:24 pm

Application Checklist
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  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Quote :
Hiraishin(Lightning Rod): Watarimono lets out a bellowing cry as a bolt of lightning strikes him and whatever is near him at his location. After the impact of the bolt, Watarimono's body flows with electricity. He becomes supercharged and granted extra speed and strength(For this to break guard, Watarimono's magic must be higher than his opponents guard.)

Can this be used in tandem with Speed of Lightning?

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Kaiko(Discharge): Watarimono Slams his scythe into the ground, as soon as the blade strikes the earth a Ring of Electricity emanates from Watarimono. It comes out like a pulse and dissapates after 100 yards in every direction. This attack isnt very damaging, but will stun the opponent if successfull for some time.(Watarimono must have a higher willpower than his opponent for this to damage or stun them.)

How long will this stun them for? 1 post?

Quote :
Suraisu Gairu(Slicing Gale): Watarimono uses the Naginata both offensively and defensively. He makes a swift slash in a direction and begins charging forward. Using the wind magic of the naginata he creates a slipstream to increase his speed, cutting through projectiles to reach his target.(The opponents magical power must be greater than Watarimonos magic defense for this move to be stopped, and for this move to do damage Watarimonos power must be greater than his opponent's physical guard)

Yeah these abilities can't be used in tandem. That'd be too ridiculous fast and would require a large source of energy to produce. If he did do such a thing, his attacks would need to be weaker. This needs to be noted in these abilities that add a speed attribute. These mixed in with a Shunpo would be too OP for someone of the caliber tier I am thinking him to be.

Just fix all these things and explain them a bit better and then I'll give you the tier and will skills. Also, I need to you to redo your RP example. It's rather short, needs to be a minimum of two paragraphs or ten sentences.


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Watarimono[APPROVED 3-4]   Wed Dec 17, 2014 3:44 pm

I edited the post and hopefully cleared up all of the confusion.
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Watarimono[APPROVED 3-4]   Wed Dec 17, 2014 4:23 pm

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  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advance
  • Focus: Adept


Tier: 3-4
Notes: Well, now that everyone on PH has told me your app has been fixed... I'll check it again. lol. Well done,.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Watarimono[APPROVED 3-4]   Thu Mar 19, 2015 1:18 pm

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