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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Naito, Tsuito [Chi Human 2-2+]   Sun Jan 25, 2015 2:07 pm

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• Name: Tsuito Naito
• Titles: The Human of Wind
• Age: 15
• Gender: Female
• Affiliation/Rank: Neutral Good

• Appearance Description: Tsuito's appearance is that of long, almost shaggy, waist-length light brown hair, which she fastens into two high twin pigtails with deep purple ribbons and bangs that reaches her chin and cover many places on her face, making her face seem almost hidden purposely. She has sharp, piercing, bright green eyes with cinnamon colored skin, and is rather tall, standing a proud 5'9". Tsuito has a small soft, feminine heart shaped face with slightly chubby cheeks and small caramel colored lips. One could see the deep dimples she has when she actually smiles, making her face momentarily seem childish. She has a slim profile, with a long body structure and long legs. She has small, barely there bosoms and a pancake flat stomach with a slightly curvy body. Her eyebrows are what she wasght brown and arched. Tsuito has four piercings. On her left arched eyebrow is a small powdery blue stud piercing, and a small crimson red loop piercing on her bottom lip, the right side. On her ears are two, on each ear, lime green small loop piercing rings. She also has two large scars on her upper body; one located down the right side of her back, and another going down from her left shoulder to her hips. These scars are covered by white bandage wrappings.

Tsuito usual outfit consists of a black long-sleeved trench coat with a dark purple tank top underneath, with black short shorts and a red little corset on her stomach. The trench coat is a slim fit, until it reaches her hips then flares out around her thighs. The trench coat itself teaches her ankles and has a collar that flares out around her neck, revealing most of her neck and some of her shoulder. The tank top has bits of lace around the bottom with white orbs and is made of strong materials that stretch, but doesn't rip easily. The black short shorts are made of leather, have a small white leather belt, and cling to her skin, and the little red corset has black strings closing it on the back. On her hands, she wears a pair of dirtied white fingerless gloves. The gloves are also leather. Tsuito also wears above thigh-high black stockings, of which disappears within her leather short shorts, and a pair of grey lace-up two inch heeled combat boots that reaches her knees. She wears a small, silvery green necklace with an small fox kit in its center. The silvery green fox necklace is connected to a black leather choker.

Her second, more comfy and simple outfit, consists of a long-sleeved light green shirt with deep green lining. The shirt splits off at her hips and goes down to Herr thighs in flaps. Underneath the long shirt is a wrinkled white skirt that barely reaches midthigh. Around her neck, she still wears her fox necklace and choker but her piercings are off. Tsuito's hair is also out from her usual pigtails. Under slirt, she wears a pair of skin-tight black leggings that reaches the bottom of her knees. Surrounding her feet in warmth are a comfy, simple pair of forest green and white flats. On her hands are a pair of fingerless gloves, but instead of a dirtied white, they are a slightly dirt stained black leather.

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Personality

• Personality: Tsuito has a colorful personality, ranging from playful and sweet to sadistic and secretive. She does, however, always behave in a mature manner, despite her seemingly rebellious attitude. She can be extremely affectionate, cherishing her family above all else. She has a child-like need to be entertained at all times. She maintains a deep fondness for her older brother as he is the only family she has.

Tsuito is kind and caring to her friends. Her willingness to help is not limited to her friends, as she will stop to help out strangers or even encourage strangers that she finds having a hard time. She will not hesitate to do anything to help her friends, although she also will not hesitate to put them in line if they do something inappropriate. Tsuito values her friends safety deeply, often putting their safety above her own. Furthermore, Tsuito is even willing to show help towards her enemies, as long as they haven't crossed the line and hurt her personally or someone she loves. Tsuito is generally mature and focused.

Although Tsuito is usually confident in herself, she can be extremely sensitive and emotional when someone scorns her abilities. Tsuito is very brave, and willing to throw herself at any enemy no matter how strong they are. She is very determined in battle, never giving up fighting even if chances of her victory look grim, causing her to seem very bullheaded and foolish.

She likes to climb to high places to escape from society. Tsuito likes everything fox-themed. She becomes quite sensitive when someone insults her obsession with foxes. She has a small hobby of cooking; which are only sweets. People often have difficulty understanding her drawing, which are typically fox-like, and doesn't like it when people complain about their quality.

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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes: Tsuito has an unnaturally large amount of agility, almost catlike in a sense. Because of this agility, she is naturally skilled in acrobatics with no training needed. Along with this super agility is flexibility, Tsuito can stretch her body to its limits and bend at almost unthinkable lengths. With this super agility, she is a bigger threat if gone toe-to-toe against with Judo, Jujutsu, Aikido, and Kendo, when using the Windblade. This agility is like a boost to help with battles

• Powers:
Power of Wind - Control and manipulation of windspeed and temperature.

Windspeed- Manipulation of wind speed and rate. She could use the wind to make multiple, up to 4 at a time, small tornadoes around a 10 mile radius. These tornadoes don't cause much damage, as their maximum speed is 35 mph, but the debris that is moved around inside the tornado is what causes the actual damage to opponents, littering around cuts on their body. With the windspeed she could manipulate it to push her body out of impending attacks and force wind at an opponent at pointblank. However, the wind would reach only 15 feet away from her body.

Temperature- With control over the wind's temperature, she could make the air drop drastically to a cold 0°C, for an almost numbing sensation, or suddenly make the air a hot and humid 40°C. With these degrees of temperature, they would cause a slowed sensation and fatigue to opponents when using attacks. She could limit to where the wind's temperature reaches, so it could only surround her opponent while leaving other places or bystanders untouched with the changing weather. It isn't meant to cause real damage, but almost a defense mechanism to make it harder for opponents to reach and attack her.

• Pure Abilities: She has the ability to endure harsh climates, as needed for dealing with changing wind temperatures and has boosted speed. She can endure temperatures as low as -10°C and and high as 55°C. However, her endurance is only limited to weather and the speed boost only comes out in one minute bursts with a speed reaching 50 mph.
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance: In Tsuito's sacred release state, her bright green eyes have a slight blue tint and begin to look foggy, as though in a haze and her pupils dilate. The purple ribbons in her hair are cut off and her hair around her, like a curtain. Her hair now has highlights of pale blue and begins to have a small glow, that's almost a pale blue in color. This color is barely seeable, but it slightly resonates around her body in a small circle.

• Sacred Release Powers: Chi bends and manipulates the wind to form a sword made of wind. The sword is shaped in the form of a Tachi, a Japanese long sword. With this sword, Tsuito can forcibly throw the wind in sharp slices or gusts of wind at her opponents with enough strength to throw them back 1/2 a mile and cast serious damage. However, this attack would drain a lot of her Chi and cause her to be exhausted for two posts, forcing to have to revert to basic defenses. Because she cannot control it fully yet, if she held this form for too long, the surrounding wind would begin to attack her too. So, she has worked on a time limit of holding the form for 5 minutes, 5 posts, when using the attacks with a minimum of Chi. However, if she were to use this as a full scale attack, it would decrease the amount of posts to 1-3, and when on he third post, the deceased amount of Chi wood revert her back to her original form. Along with the Windblade is the ability to clap gusts of wind at her opponents, reaching at 20 get away, and blow small tornados from her lips, tornadoes that spin 45 mph and could only blow 2 unstsble medium tornadoes. The tornadoes are bigger, but because of her lack of control, they are unstable and could disperse at any moment or she could loose control of them.
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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Bankai.)

• Ascended Sacred State Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
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Background History

• Background: Tsuito was born into a loving family of martial artists, daughter of Shintaro and Akiko Naito, her mother and father respectively, and younger sister of Daichi Naito. Mister and Misses Naito co-owned a small dojo that was passed down for three generations from her great-great grandparents. The dojo had more than one main program; Jujutsu, Judo, Aikido, and Kendo. From an early age, her parents vigorously tried to pursue the girl into becoming a martial artist, determined to make her join the small family business. They did not bother with their elder son, as he was viciously determined to just laze about and play video games.

However, the young girl didn't focus too much on it. Tsuito thought it was "bothersome", much like Daichi, and wanted none of it. She instead focused on trying to play games and live a fun, love-filled life. She liked reading, playing with friends, doing tomboyish activities, the whole deal, never taking her parents pleads to become a martial artist very seriously.

Due to this, when Tsuito was forcefully enrolled into the family academy, Naito Dojo, her academy career wasn't much to be proud of, as her skills were very average, never raising above that, not an inch. However, the Naito's did not push her about it, seeing as they were trying to force it on her, and the force applied, the more she denied. Tsuito was only four, what more could they expect?

Everything changed, for the worst, when tragedy struck her family. Her father was killed when she was 13 and was out at a sleepover with friends and her older brother was at home, playing video games. They were out late at night closing the dojo. While walking home, a mugger jumped out at them from the shadows welding a gun demanding their money. Shintaro and Akiko Naito were shocked momentarily before Shintaro slowly reached into his pocket and pulled out money for the mugger. As he was handing over the money, Mr. Naito suddenly grabbed the mugger and began to grapple with him to the ground. In the dark blanket of the night, the gun had slid away from the wrestling pair and laid next to Mrs. Naito's feet. She picked up the weapon and, shakily, attempted to aim the gun at the duo. By this time, Mr. Naito had pinned the attacker to the ground. However, because she never wielded a gun before and due to the fact the night was a dark one, she was mistaken. She assumed the man pinned to the ground was her husband and aimed at the "mugger". She took the shot. There was a thud, the sound of scrambling feet, and then a scream. The funeral happened in a week after Shintaro Naito's death. Tsuito and Daichi didn't blame their mother for their father's death, but Akiko did. She was never the same. She lost her mind after his death and was sent to a mental asylum in America.

That large source of happiness that Tsuito had come to love became a small, barely glimmer of light, as she now had her older brother to depend on. No mother, no father, only her 19 year old brother. Their grandparents tried to persuade them to live with them, but they wanted to stay in their house, the home their parents raised them in. The once cheerful child had now become a large hole of sadness, just like that. She hated herself for not being strong enough or being there to protect them, not that she could do anything, for never taking her martial arts training serious, for denying them multiple times on their only wish for her. In a way to say "sorry" she immediately became immensely focused on training alone, never forgiving herself for their death and determined to become stronger, just for them. She wanted to grant them their only wish, to become a strong martial artist, just like them and their parents before them.

When Tsuito was 14, a traumatic event happened to her. The young girl was attacked by a rogue hollow. She was walking home from the grocery store during one hot summer night when the air suddenly dropped to a cold chill. She was momentarily confused on this but decided to shrug it off. Everything was eerily calm until she was halfway home and then she felt like she was choking. It was like someone was pushing down on her very spirit from every angle. Tsuito dropped the groceries and fell to her knees. She was gasping in short breathes and felt close to passing out when abruptly, a distant roaring sound could be heard then what sounded like fifty elephants stamping down the street all at once, coming to her direction. A cold shiver ran down her back, that did not sound like a dog.

Tsuito tried to get up and run, not caring for the groceries, but she couldn't get her body to listen to her commands, no matter how desperately she pleaded. "C'mon, move damnit! I need you to move, please…". So, instead she began to slowly crawl away from the rapidly approaching roars. The moment she made it on her knees, there was a large crash in front of her and something smacked into a nearby tree. Tsuito could not see the attacker, but she could feel a strong hostile presence. Whimpering, she tried to crawl away again, only to be once again smacked into a wall with a deafening roar. By now there were two large claw marks on her body, one that tore through the front of her shirt on her stomach, and another that tore the back of her shirt and ran down her back, inches from touching her spine.

She coughed up splatters of blood onto the ground and groaned. The invisible thing ran towards her and now she could see a grotesque white mask on a giant black body. She sat frozen as it got closer, and closer, and closer. Tsuito could feel her impending death, and felt hopelessness. "I don't want to die. I want to live..." she murmured this to herself repeatedly. As she was murmuring, a sudden, new voice spoke to her, "If you want to live, fight for it, fight for the right to live.". The voice was light, almost barely there, almost like a whisper. She didn't look for the owner of the voice, what was there to look for? It was all around her, like the wind. The beast was closer now, only a few feet away. Tsuito could feel something building up inside of her, a sudden pressure waiting to be released. She grabbed onto that energy for dear life. Just as the beast was about to take one last swipe at her with its horrid claws, she screamed at it as a strong gust of wind blew it to bits.

She couldn't remember what happened next, but when she came to, she sitting in a hospital with her brother leaning over and staring at her with concerned brown eyes. He seemed relieved to see her awake and began to gush over her. Tsuito couldn't hear exactly what he was saying but she caught some words like "mugger", "knife", and "near death". She decided not to tell her brother what really happened, for concern of causing him worry or seeming to lose her mind, like their mother. However, hours after Daichi left, the events of the previous night played in her like a mantra, along with the last thing she remembered; herself screaming at the beast before passing out. The words swirled in her head, imprinting itself into her mind, and vowed to never forget them.

"I WILL LIVE!"

Unfortunately, she brought shame to her parents memory when she repeatedly missed days of school to help at the dojo and look for a job to help with the bills. Things aren't easy for Tsuito and her brother. Daichi has two jobs and is barely home, while she spends most of her time at the dojo.
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Skill Sets

General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Human Reiatsu Sheet
  • Power Control: Advanced
  • Energy Usage/Regeneration: Beginner
  • Energy Resistance/Endurance: Adept
  • Physical Augmentation: Adept


Chi Skills
  • Geppo: Beginner
  • Vindeca: Adept
  • Tekkai: Advanced
  • Yang Surge: Adept

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• Roleplay Sample: Nagi woke up with a start. Her morning routine was normal; she cleaned the house from top to bottom, woke up her brother, and cooked a mediocre breakfast for said brother and herself. The morning breakfast was the usual, Sora would try to take most of her rice, and Nagi tried to take his eye out for taking her food. Before she left the house she made a small lunch, and then started her way out to do some training. So when a tall, dark ninja had suddenly cut her walk short by appearing before her and silently gave her a letter, she was more than surprised. She stared at the note, as a dumbfounded expression found it's way on the usually calm kunoichi's face. While brown eyes read the message, the young girl's heart began to pound slightly in her ears, and a steady smile began to make it's way to her face. She was sure she look like some type of fool with that idiotic smile and plain goofy look on her face.

The note had simply stated that she was being placed in a team, Team 19 to be exact, and listed the members names. The sensei was Natsuki, Takeo. Nagi cocked her head to the side, eyes curious. I'd hoped to get a sensei who was apart of a powerful clan, but I can deal with this, I guess, she thought, slightly disappointed but she recovered quickly and proceeded to read the names of her new teammates. Awai, Minoru and Hyuga, Makato. She smiled widely at this at their names, despite her conflicted feelings. With a teammate as a Hyuga, she crinkled her nose at this, she knew it was going to be interesting but the girl had heard on numerous occasions that Hyuga were uptight and snobby. Nagi was NOT up for that kind of adventure. The Awai boy seemed good enough, she hadn't heard much about that clan though. She let out a small huff, but smiled slightly, happy to finally actually have something to do. Abandoning the thought of training, she ran after the shinobi before he could get too far and asked politely asked if he knew the current location of Natsuki, Takeo. The man merely grunted and directed Nagi in the direction of the training grounds she was previously heading towards. She blushed slightly, embarrassed for not thinking of that. Of course he'd be training, he was a Jounin for a reason. Stay focused Nagi!, she mentally berated herself as she made her way toward the training grounds.

On her way there, Nagi began to imagine what would her new team personality would be. She imagined the Hyuga as arrogant and self-centered, and the Awai as bright and confident. She imagined their sensei as headstrong, intelligent and, hopefully, an expert in Ninjutsu. Brown eyes glazed and starry, she barely registered the numerous people she had bumped into accidentally. They glared but otherwise said nothing and continued on their way. Before she knew it she was at the training grounds. Nagi blinked owlishly at the people there and suddenly, like a tide, she began to feel shy. What if they didn't like her? What if they they shunned her because she was weak? She nibbled her bottom lip slightly at the thoughts. Unconsciously she began to play with a long strand of her brown hair and shifted her feet repeatedly.

But then she remembered who she was and what she was and began to feel embarrassed. The young kunoichi frowned slightly and stopped nibbling her lip. Stomping her foot with a huff, she pushed aside the negative emotions. "What am I getting so worked up for? It's not like their they could be that cruel. Stop doubting yourself, Mizuno!" muttering to herself, Nagi walked further into the training grounds briskly, her confidence growing with each step. A bright and cheery smile crawled up her face again, the late afternoon sun casting a shadow behind her, copying her movements perfectly. Heart pounding once again, excitement flowing endlessly, Nagi walked to the first people she saw. They seemed to be training but that didn't stop her. Nagi was way too determined. Bright smile still in place, she waved to the two males, Hello, excuse me!.


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Naito, Tsuito [Chi Human 2-2+]   Sat Jan 31, 2015 10:15 am

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Windspeed- Manipulation of wind speed and rate. Tsuito could make the wind swirl in circles around her rapidly to form a small tornado, causing minor destruction to a 50 mile radius. The tornado would form small, excessive but nonthreatening cuts to the opponent.

This needs to be explained a bit more to fit where her current limitations are. How many tornadoes are made? I don't see a small tornado being able to cause minor destruction to a 50 mile radius without her having to manipulate it for a very long period of time. Which, I don't believe this character will be able to do, as that'd take a few hours to do, I believe. I see this being more fit if she was able to create a few tornadoes within a 10 mile radius, still causing minor destruction and cuts to the opponent if debris is caught in the tornado. Otherwise, it needs to be stated that the wind is blade-like due to its speed. Might also want to put what the max speed of the winds would be.

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Temperature- She has control over the wind's temperature, she could make the air drop drastically to a cold 45°C, or suddenly make the air a hot and humid 75°F. The temperatures don't drop low or burst high enough to cause real damage, but enough to slow an opponent.

45 degrees Celsius is pretty fucking hot. Being that 0 degrees Celsius is 32 degrees Fahrenheit, so I'm fine with your character being able to change the temperature to 0 degrees Celsius. Which would be a bit numbing and perhaps cause a little bit of a slow, but truthfully, it would take a lot to slow an opponent in the PHverse with just cold air. Using this with temperature speed seems to be most effect for this character. As far as making things hotter goes, I'd allow 40 degrees Celsius to be her max. This would cause faster exhaustion to her opponent, making their attacks fatigue them faster than once before. A rather good control ability, imo.


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Strength- Control and manipulation of the wind's strength, making the wind burst at her opponent in minor sharp slices or using the force to hit the opponent bluntly at pointblank. The wind can only reach 20 feet away from Tsuito's body. She can also use the wind to push her body out of the way at impending threats.

I feel like wind speed and strength are the same thing. Velocity is what powers a winds strength. Density of the air, due to temperature, could be used in tandem with windspeed for more damage and to block break, I suppose. However, I feel like if you go further in detail about the windspeed and air temperature then you don't need to talk about the wind strength.


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Chi bends and manipulates the wind to form a sword made of wind. The sword is shaped in the form of a Tachi, a Japanese long sword. With this sword, Tsuito can forcibly throw the wind in sharp slices or gusts of wind at her opponents with enough strength to throw them back a couple miles and cast serious damage. Because she cannot control it fully yet, if she held this form for too long, the surrounding wind would begin to attack her too. So, she has worked on a time limit of holding the form for ten minutes. Along with the Windblade is the ability to clap gusts of wind at her opponents and blow small tornados from her lips.

A couple of miles? Nahhh... Not gonna happen. I'd say at full strength she could use the sword to knock someone back maybe 1 mile. Such an attack would likely cause her to be fatigued for a few seconds. I like the draw backs on this, however 10 minutes is a long time. That's like having a masked state for 10 minutes. That'd be insane. A post is generally spanned out over probably 1 minute while in combat, depending on how you post. I'd prefer you say that she is able to use this for 10 posts rather than ten minutes. However, if she uses a full scale attack it will reduce the duration by 1-3 posts based on the strength of the attack.



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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Naito, Tsuito [Chi Human 2-2+]   Sat Jan 31, 2015 12:50 pm

OK, thanks. Any better?
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Naito, Tsuito [Chi Human 2-2+]   Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:26 am


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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Naito, Tsuito [Chi Human 2-2+]   Mon Apr 03, 2017 10:38 pm

[mod]Moving to WIP on Author's request.[/mod]

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Naito, Tsuito [Chi Human 2-2+]   Thu Aug 31, 2017 7:59 pm

[mod]Archiving upon user's request[/mod]
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