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Subject Post 1PostSubject: White Eye [APPROVED, 1-2]   Thu Feb 12, 2015 5:51 am




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» Name: White Eye
» Titles: Blind Rat
» Age: 18
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Shadowfall

» True Appearance Written: If needed to describe, then it should be eyes from which to start. White is blind and it can be well seen. His eyes are covered with white, milky layer, that almost looks as thick, as paper. Made from spirit energy, a small blood red dots can be seen in the middle of his eyes. With them the boy had learned how to see the surrounding world.

His hair are in the color of red flames, but skin can match with purest of mountain snow. Numerous summer spots can be seen under his eyes. The boys lips are small and look frail, while the nose is pointy and faced a bit up. Ears are hidden in his messy, wild hair, but if showed, could be seen, that instead of them, there are two horns and small holes under them.

His clothing is made of a black leather collar around the Visera Demonio neck and a black outfit, much like Espadas uniform, was put on him. Always with him, the male carries a crude hand made stuffed teddy toy.

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» Personality:
From first glance one could call him a weak, shy boy, with bags under his eyes and always confused face expression. From one point it is true. Often, if not always, he feels scarred and confused by colors and noises, that ruled around him. They made his already endlessly painful head even more disturbed, making thinking just impossible.

But when the need demands, White can push this chaos to whispers, but so becoming nothing more, then a cold robot. The child hates this state, where his senses are nullified to nothing. Not talking about the pain in which his mind is then. If usually it is like a nail would be forced in brains, then at this state it is like a small needle would have appeared in the middle, moving back and forth all the time.

But the most dangerous he is, when his mind goes and clings to one of his actual thoughts. From the mix of Demon and Arrancar origin, the boys original mind is a mass of insanity. His thoughts, while there exist logical ones, are mostly sick and grotesque. Killing the inhuman way, that is his style and actually, that is the only thing, that keeps White Eyes mind usable.

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» History There isn't much to tell about White. Created artificially, he is one of experiments in the process to create Visera Demonio. Fear was first, what he learned, when released from his container. The darkness...sounds...the boy acted as a wild beast, bursting with great amount energy on all sides, just to...to overcome the fear, you can say. Of course, he was soon put in place. Then he learned what to fear. A womans voice, if even polite, seemed cold for him and repulsive. White didn't like, that she was touching him. Poking his body with needles, cutting pieces of flesh off his body and watching as new one came in almost the same moment.

Then came the training. Until that moment he already knew what was the best for his health. The boy trained physically and mentally, discovering more and more about his powers and how to use them. And more he buried with in himself, the more he started to see visions, things that didn't happen...Things, that couldn't exist...things, that shouldn't exist.

With time he grew more and more depressed. This didn't effect Whites performance. In short period of time he grew stronger and stronger, mastering his talents further and further. But as he progressed in power, so his depression grew stronger and stronger. In that moment it even started to effect his abilities. He started to become a threat to those around him. Death was a name, used to describe the male. White didn't want that to be!

So, it was decided. For his well being and hope, that White will turn better, he was sent out to the Shadowfall base, located in Hueco Mundo. There he was, tasked to learn a bit about the outside world and how to work with people. Will this help him? Who knows!

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» Shometsu-Ken Name: Azototh

» Shometsu-Ken Appearance: Wild, blood red energy starts to merge from his back and slowly wrap around his left arm. In his palm the energy forms a katana like blade.

» Shometsu-Ken Release:
Blood is raining from the sky.
Newborns are nailed to walls.
Plague has spread to the land.
Even Dead is crying in their graves.
Now bring forth the mercy of slaughter, Azototh
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» Natural Abilities:

  • Cuerpo Reparación (Body Adaptability): This is a rather bizarre phenom that occurs within Visera Demonio. By taking the Demon's Body Manipulation trait and the Arrancar's Regeneration, they've essentially created state of being where they are able to adjust themselves to the environment that they are in. To give an example of this, if one was proficient enough in this skill, if they were trapped within a burning building, then they could essentially activate this trait by sacrificing small bits of their energy, rather it be physical or spiritual, in order to morph their body and obtain thermal resistant skin for a short duration of time. Depending on how skilled you are in this, some can hold this shift for one to two post, while others can maintain it for extended lengths of time. To give another example of the capacities of Cuerpo Reparación, if a Visera Demonio were up against someone who surpassed them in raw physical strength, then their body could very well activate a shift within it's internal core in order to become more dense and withstand more devastating blows.

    Therefore, with all of that said, the higher you are in this skill, the larger and more lengthy your adaptation skills will grow in nature. Those on the higher-end of this also generally have some form of regeneration. This is because the Arrancar blood within them grows stronger as this trait becomes stronger, and in order to ensure their bodily revisions are top notch, they'll generally stumble upon this reformation attribute. This transpires when one is able to at least reach an adept in the form of recovering from scrapes, burns, bruises and other minor wounds; but truly ripens around advanced level to reforming limbs and eventually more complex regeneration at some point around Master and Grand Master. Though, each time they make a morph, it will become more tiresome because it takes some form of energy or stamina to ensure that it is a full capable limb. If not, it will simply fail to regrow until they have time to rest.

  • Cero Rastro (Zero Trail): This an astounding new trait that is only found within Visera Demonio. By taking elements from the Arrancar's Cero, The Demon's Black Inferno Blast and Reiatsu Drain; they have forged a truly frightening racial capacity. Much like their parent species, they can easily enough produce strong energy attacks capable of great destruction. However, what is different for Cero Rastro first emerged in it's appearance. Typically, when one is fully formed, it will have the regular cero blast color the users preference in the center, but sets of different colored rings will appear around the blast to represent the combined signatures of Hollow and Demonic blood coursing through the users veins. From there, if enough energy is gathered, a Cero Rastro's effects, if allowed to hit, can overwhelming devastating. For, depending on how potent the Cero Rastro is from a Visera Demonio, they may be able to blitz entirely through barriers.

    An example of this is if an advanced level Cero Rastro user were to try and break a shield. Once their Cero Rastro had made impact, they can attempt to infuse the effects of the reiatsu drain from the demon's in order to siphon trace amounts of energy from the barrier in order to increase the amount of energy for the Cero Rastro, while weakening the barrier. From there, thanks to the taxing effects of the Black Inferno Trait, a Cero Rastro is capable of even forcing them to drain extreme amounts of energy from the limited amounts of fuel it has left until the object in question is somewhat weakened, slowed or damaged if they are unable to extract it from there bodies or negate it. Making most Cero Rastro's very overwhelming to deal with. And unlike an Arrancar's Cero, it can appear at speeds that can overwhelm even users of Chaos Warp or Shunpo if is fired in a nocturnal or dark setting and their target is clear. For, it will tap into the demon's traits of gathering strength from the night and dramatically increase the speed of the Cero Rastro along with it's endurance, strength and potency. Even being able to mend down into the shadow's, and if the user is skilled enough around advanced or MASTER, have the Cero Rastro emerge from behind the targets own shadow.

    On top of that, once a user becomes advanced in Cero Rastro, it becomes rather easy for them to infuse different elements of their powers and they have no need to make multiple customized cero's like their Arrancar brethren. To give an example of this, if there was a Visera Demonio who had a fire trait, then they could transfer these traits swiftly into the Cero in order to make it's flames more potent, increase the overall endurance of the blast and possibly even melt everything in it's path. If the user could manipulate speed? Then they could dramatically boost the impact force of the Cero Rastro and be able to produce multiple Cero Rastro's at amazing speeds. Some Visera Demonio can even transfer racial skills into their Cero Rastro; such as adding their Cuerpo Reparación to adapt to a varied amount of fighters; such as if there was someone who had adapted themselves to a regular cero by having armored skin, they could then in turn produce a more dense cero to attempt to create a more overwhelming explosion to overpower their defense. Making this a truly evolved Cero.

  • Tānāgati (Warp Step): Tanagati, standing for Warp Step in Hindi, combines the demon's Shadow Movement with the Arrancar's Soindo and Garganta. By expanding the compass of their Garganta to a multi-dimensional level, they can now cover a much broader spectrum when it comes to where Visera Demonio can emerge. Previously, most Arrancar could only travel FROM Hueco Mundo to the Human World or Soul Society. Whereas with Tanagati, they are connected to the Sugiura Realm and Demon World as well at this point; and can emerge in between these dimensions as they see fit if they are adept enough.

    However, that isn't all there is to this trait. With Tanagati, wherever there are Shadow's, most Visera Demonio will see a dramatic increase in speed. If they are skilled enough at advanced, they can even temporarily blend into the shadow's to cover large distances in order to catch up to opponents at speeds nearly on par with teleporation from how augmented i n speed they get by being in a dark setting. Additionally, even without those nocturnal surroundings, they are still capable of strong boost of speed from their Arrancar nature and Soindo. The primary difference with this boost in momentum is that it becomes much more intense within shaded areas.

    Even more than that, with Tanagati, those who are advanced or higher are even capable of producing spatial distortions within an area similar to a Garganta. However, what is different about these distortions is the fact that they can be used to transport objects in mid-fight. So, if an advanced level Visera Demonio found themselves conquered, they could attempt to suck up the attack within a contorting hole in the area and devour the attack to avoid getting up. Beginner can create these as well, but they are generally much slower and only produce one at a time.

    This means that the higher your skill is in this area, the more quickly and the amount of Garganta's you can produce at a time goes up. Masters are even capable of making these command mentally at break neck speeds on par with an Iramasha's Chaos Warp nearly. The primary drawback to this is that if they strain themselves too much, in regards to creating too many in one setting, this ability will eventually waver because to repeatedly use this requires some form of concentration to summon and release these portals. So they are advertised to not spam this multiple times within a post. Otherwise, it will eventually put them out of the fight altogether from the pressure put on their body.

    What's even more frightening is that Masters of this ability are even capable of distorting the senses of a target in order to swiftly confuse them. This means that within a given area, they have the capacity to cause disruption to the awareness of others in order to catch them by surprise, their surrounding to further straddle the opponent, their actions to imprint false moves and even themselves. An example of this trait being used is that the user could call upon the shadow's to have a false image of themselves emerge, charge at the opponent pretend to attack them with a sword based movement. Then, from behind, the real user could emerge from the target's shadow and blast them with a Cero Rastro. This could be especially well used to devise security cameras and detection based systems as well.


  • Ksetra Pari: Meaning Area Shift in Hindi, this takes a stronger turn towards the Demon's nature as they use more of the Hindi tongue. By combining the elements of the Arrancar's Pesquisa and the Demon's Magic in addition to their Knowledge Of Environment, they have devised a form of environmental control and knowledge. This works by first creating a radiating pulse sent outwards from the user which reacts in an unusual way. Varying from how skilled they are in this trait, this pulsation can reach anywhere from a few hundred feet at beginner, to an entire small city at Grand Master. At any rate, once the area they have in mind is selected, they'll then begin receiving information about the materials in the air, what can they can use from this information about their surroundings to create alterations and even learn more about attacks that they may encounter on higher levels. To give an example of the knowledge side of Ksetra Pari, if one were to shoot out a fire blast towards a Visera Demonio, they could activate this skill in order to analyze the contents of it if they were Advanced in this area and attempt to decipher information in it.

    This works best with those who have higher mental deduction as well, as this ability is known to work much faster by those who are more intellectually gifted. The reason for this being is that once an attack is caught within the pulsation, which usually emits some sort of faint light or sensation in the area if there is no light, it requires some sort of processing to record the contents that are caught within it. Therefore, the more keen your brain, the more potent this ability will become as well and how swiftly you can scan things in your environment. Ultimately, for Masters and Grandmasters, they become immense artist of counter measuring techniques.

    As once an attack enters within their field of area, they are generally able to device shift ways to attempt to counter it or block it out from the knowledge they possess of it. Of course, the more this ability is used, the more mental strain can occur on the user no matter the skill level and eventually exhaust them to the point where it's rendered useless. And, if they reach the breaking point of the knowledge part of this attribute, they WILL lose any information they retained and will have to re-learn it. If they abuse it too much, some have even been noted to have brain damage and lowered effectiveness of their Ksetra Pari. So most who are gifted within this are recommended to scan areas within small spaces, a certain number of objects and to not push themselves too far.

    Meanwhile, and more easily manageable, on the offensive side this allows them to influence the environment them rather easily. Once they have a general idea of the area's layout on a spiritual and physical level, Visera Demonio can then use the energy which is produced from within their body to gain influence over the area. From there, with the elements in the area, they can try to devise more otherworldly methods of attack. Such as if they were fighting in the Soul Society, they'd have an abundant amount of resources to manipulate spiritual energy. Therefore, with this knowledge in mind, they can then manipulate an area which they tagged and go on to produce something like a wave of energy that, if it makes contact with a target, is able to turn it a wave of lightning by the reishi they were able to influence morphing them into a electrified state; essentially turning it into a form of magic form them that is still running strong from the demon blood in their veins.

    Another instance of this being used in a more defensive manner is that they can condense a large amount of reishi around them and then use it as a makeshift form of armor in order to endure more harsh attacks. Or, if they needed an escape, they could contort the reishi within an area in order to devise a makeshift portal to escape. The higher your Ksetra Pari, the more possibilities there are. Of course, with every action it generally wears down the opponent; much like with Shinigami's Kidō, it requires some form of energy and if used too much will eventually leave 'em high and dry.

  • Acidic Touch: A rather passive and simple ability for all Hollows. In essence, this is the first form of defense for a normal Hollow, that if someone were to touch their skin they would be singed and their hands would be eroded and burnt as if acid was poured onto it. It is said this is extremely painful, and actually capable of letting the Hollow's Reiatsu into the victim's body.

  • High-Speed regeneration: Generally self explanatory, some Hollows are capable of having the ability to regenerate their bodies at their own will. However this is usually quite limited to the cutting off of limbs. This is usually more commonly found in Arrancar, however some Hollow's have learned to reform their bodies from damage. It is said that if they have taken drastic damage to organs and vitals, however, they cannot regenerate these easily (or not at all, depending on the Hollow), which allows them still very vulnerable. This is shown by Ulquiorra whom sacrificed even more raw power for the ability to regenerate his body.

  • Bala (虚弾 (バラ), Bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") a technique of firing his hardened spiritual pressure against his enemies. Less powerful than a Cero, but it can be successively fired at 20 times the rate.

  • Cero (虚閃 (セロ), Sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) a powerful spiritual light fired by Menos Grandes and Arrancar.

  • Gran Rey Cero (王虚の閃光 (グラン・レイ・セロ), Guran Rei Sero; Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash") The ultimate Cero that can only be used by Espadas. It is so powerful, it distorts the surrounding space.

  • Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ), Iero; Spanish for "Iron," Japanese for "Steel Skin") An Arrancar's outer skin with high spiritual hardness that serves as armor.



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» Unique Abilities:

Hunger of Knowledge: If the male touches any sort of information, starting from a book, ending with a living being, he can send a Ksetra Pari wave into that information source, with a task to gather any possible information and store it into his brain. From then starts to work his three part brain. The first part is responsible just for the storing. Information in there isn't meant to be used and isn't accessible for White himself. Slowly, little by little, information goes to his second part of the brain. This part is even smaller and serves something as a "research center". Here information is taken and worked through to figure out how to make it useable for White. For stuff, like, information about local plants, this step usually is skipped and goes directly to third part of the boys brain. There the information is all ready to be used and understood by him. The process can take from 1 post to somewhere in near or far future. Usually to understand ability, it takes longer, then understanding just the information it self. This power of his Mana used to make the Visera Demonio understand huge amount of information, that usually would need centuries to learn. This is also the reason, why Whites mental state is..."damaged", because the process, if done too often, causes huge pain.

Interminable Boca(Endless Mouth): Far from garganta, this technique can be thought to any hollow or arrancar. The user opens a perfect square portal. Its frame is in the color of users reishi and can vary in size, depending on how much reishi the user is ready to sacrifice.

This portal can lead to any place in the same or different dimension, if the user knows the place. No one without the user permeation can enter this portal and the user always feels, what had entered it.

Other way how this portal can be used is to wander and look for new dimensions and even places in the same realm. Of course, it takes time, like actually walking, but after finding a new place, he can open a portal instantly to that place. The portals size also determines the corridors size inside it, if wandering. So, if you are making a portal in the size rat hole, don't try to fit a army through it.

The interesting fact about this portal is how it brakes the laws of time and space. If the user would be given a drawing of a place he had never been and he would try to open a portal to the place, mostly it would open not to the place in the picture, but a portal to the actual picture. Also, this portal, if wanted by user, can open in a empty dimensional space. If the user is skilled, he can isolate that space from rest of the emptiness and make something of a personal pocket dimension, that he can visit any time wanted.

White personally can open a portal to his own mind, where he is the God and master. It can look as whatever he wants and anyone in it mostly is under his mercy. The only person, that had been in it, is Mana.

Visión Ciegos(Blind Vision): From moment of his birth, White had been blind as a bat. If not for his massive, destructive spirit energy, White would never last a day.

But he survived and that is, what counts. So, in time the male developed a technique to see. By concentrating a little amount of his reishi into his eyes and connecting them with his nerves, the boy can see what everyone see and even more. With these eyes, White can zoom in and out, can see beings, that otherwise would be invisible and actually see the inner organs, bones and everything else, that hides in the belly of teddy.

The Side Of Heartless: With work done with his abilities, White gained access to Hollow and Arrancar racial abilities. He still needs to practice in them to advance.

Sword proficiency-Master: As his Shometsu-Ken is a sword, it is only logical he was trained to use exactly this weapon. His skill is about a master swordsman, but he wouldn't be as powerful only because White lacks experience, what he didn't got, fighting in a lab all the time.

The Prophecies Of Seer: One of Whites most terrifying powers is the one he can control the least. Time from time tends to speak prophecies, spells, lines of weird words. And they always happen. Sometimes he controls this power, sometimes it controls him. If done by White intentionally, this ability will always want to keep balance. For example, if he would destroy Vizard Corps base in the name of Shadowfall, The Vizard Corps maybe would gain a new, powerful weapon or so, to pay back Shadowfall. This is one example of how this ability works. The point is, it is always unpredictable and, what is strange, takes the users energy only sometimes.

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» Arma Revolución Appearance: A giant hole in the heart space opens, dripping red blood all the time. His hair flickers and moves as actual flames, reveling now two long horns, that starts in the place, where there should be ears and are 2 feet long. All his face is covered in small, white eyes, his two original eyes now being completely red. Set of wings, made out of blood, rises from his back. Two more pairs of arms also brakes his rib cage and comes out, made out of bones and blood. In every arm a Shometsu-Ken is held. The males mouth and jaw is covered in white bone mass.

» Arma Revolución Abilities:
White keeps all abilities mentioned before. His strength, speed, durability and reishi poll is drastically increased. All injuries also are healed and reishi reserves filled.

Mar de Sangre(Sea of Blood): This ability activates automatically with entering in the state. When White enters this state, a scream of pain escapes his mouth. Then, with a blow, a hole in his chest appears. From his mouth, the hole, face and almost every pour of his body, blood drips, flows fills more and more land. With another small explosion blood and pieces of bones goes upwards. The bones takes place, forming a dome in 2 kilometer radius and kilometer high. The blood stays connected with his body and forms huge, red wings, made out of blood. In the end, when White had reached his full states appearance, 2 km radius is filled with wine red blood and reaches around 2 feet in depth.

This liquid serves for many reasons and one is to trap the enemy. Anyone, except White, in the liquid is trapped in it, unable to jump and only with walk with some difficulties. If the enemy is tier 4-2 or lower, then he would be made motionless, unable to dodge or walk at all. From tier 2-4 the person could start do some swift movements, but if wanted to jump or so, the liquid would turn really strong and pull him back. Tier 1-2 could start jumping, but the liquid still would remain on his feet and pull the person back after leaving the surface for 2 seconds. Only starting from tier 0-5 someone can try to escape this liquid and jump out of this field.

The other aspect of this field, is that it creates red liquid soldiers, that attack everyone in the field. Each soldier is in the strength, that would match a shinigami with shikai and is as durable as one. In one moment there can be up to ten soldiers and it takes one post to generate a new one, if one is destroyed.

The drawback for this ability is that it can be used only, when entering the state and the field stays all fight in the one spot. It can't be moved or relocated by almost any means. Also, thanks to this ability, White after entering this state is immobile for one post. He can still mentally control Mar de Sangre soldiers.

El Pecado, La Sangre y Rosas(Sin, Blood and Roses): This ability starts by White releasing red dust from his wings. The land and everything else touched by this red dust starts to cover with red roses. From then these flowers start to spread the same spores in rapid speed, covering larger and larger space. Persons, who get exposed to these spores, first start to remember every, event the most smallest, wrong doing in their life. These memories will be bright, colorful and so real, that they could even take away the sense of reality.

Later, by being exposed to these dusts for a longer period of time, the target would feel, that his body becomes more and more like a humans, with flesh, blood and bones. The complete transformation is done after being exposed to the spores for 4 posts. These bodies can't be left, like gigai or so, but after 3 posts outside of spores, this body starts to crumble itself and after 2 more posts the target is free.

The drawback for this ability is that White is also effected by the body creation ability and that after releasing the spores, they are no longer in his control and spreads on their own, feeding from reishi around them.

Hollows strength, Demons blood: This actually doesn't take any spiritual energy, but more physical stamina. All Whites strikes are made with a massive, destructive force. To make it clearer, if he would just strike his sword into the ground, the surrounding land would crumble and a crater should appear around 200 meters in radius.
This strength of his is very brute, so when the sword is swung, he can't stop it.

Pétalos de Hueso(Bone Petals): White shoots at his enemy small bone spikes. These flakes merge with the targets skin, when taking contact and fuses with the body part. From that moment, the next 4 posts he can control that body part, which the bone piece struck. The enemy can resist this ability, if bursting a huge wave of energy out of his body to burn the parasite. The Visera Demonio can control one body part at the time.

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Racial Skills
  • Cuerpo Reparación: Adept
  • Cero Rastro: Adept
  • Tānāgati: Advanced
  • Ksetra Pari: Master


Racial Skills(Arrancar)

  • Perquisa: Adept
  • Sonido: Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Adept
  • Hierro: Advanced


Racial Skills(Hollow)
  • Acid Skill: Advanced
  • Garganta : Adept
  • Regeneration: Advanced


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


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  • Comments/Notes: Sufficient enough. The only two things I had a problem with are outlined below:

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    Hunger of Knowledge: If the male touches any sort of information, starting from a book, ending with a living being, he can send a Ksetra Pari wave into that information source, with a task to gather any possible information and store it into his brain. From then starts to work his three part brain. The first part is responsible just for the storing. Information in there isn't meant to be used and isn't accessible for White himself. Slowly, little by little, information goes to his second part of the brain. This part is even smaller and serves something as a "research center". Here information is taken and worked through to figure out how to make it useable for White. For stuff, like, information about local plants, this step usually is skipped and goes directly to third part of the boys brain. There the information is all ready to be used and understood by him. The process can take from 1 post to somewhere in near or far future. Usually to understand ability, it takes longer, then understanding just the information it self. This power of his Mana used to make the Visera Demonio understand huge amount of information, that usually would need centuries to learn. This is also the reason, why Whites mental state is..."damaged", because the process, if done too often, causes huge pain.

    Are you saying that he is able to touch something and is able to slowly start understanding it? As in he will touch a rock and begin to gradually understand its contents? As long as it isn't instant, I don't mind. Since it sounds like the process if sufficient enough for my taste and has its drawbacks. I just wanted to clarify I understood how this worked.


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    El Pecado, La Sangre y Rosas(Sin, Blood and Roses): This ability starts by White releasing red dust from his wings. The land and everything else touched by this red dust starts to cover with red roses. From then these flowers start to spread the same spores in rapid speed, covering larger and larger space. Persons, who get exposed to these spores, first start to remember every, event the most smallest, wrong doing in their life. These memories will be bright, colorful and so real, that they could even take away the sense of reality.

    Later, by being exposed to these dusts for a longer period of time, the target would feel, that his body becomes more and more like a humans, with flesh, blood and bones. The complete transformation is done after being exposed to the spores for 4 posts. These bodies can't be left, like gigai or so, but after 3 posts outside of spores, this body starts to crumble itself and after 2 more posts the target is free.

    The drawback for this ability is that White is also effected by the body creation ability and that after releasing the spores, they are no longer in his control and spreads on their own, feeding from reishi around them.

    The bit about the gigai, is this guy transforming someones race? If so, I'd say it would just be an attempt. Or, if I read that right, is he like decaying their body or something? As in, the more they exposed, the more their body gets crippled? If so, I'm fine with that.

  • Tier: 2-3 when clarified

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: White Eye [APPROVED, 1-2]   Fri Feb 27, 2015 4:24 pm

For the first power, it works as, if he touches the source of information, it is copied in matter of seconds in his brain, but to understand and use the information, that takes time. So, he doesn't need to hold a book for days and days long, but to actually use the information, that takes time. The calmer he is and the least things he thinks about, the faster the information is understood.

The second power is meant like, if arrancar would be exposed, everything, including his bone mask, would become material, like human bodies are.
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: White Eye [APPROVED, 1-2]   Fri Feb 27, 2015 8:46 pm


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  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


  • Comments/Notes: So it takes more time to process the data he gathered? As long as it isn't instant, still, I'm fine with it.

    As for the second power? I suppose I'm fine with it.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: White Eye [APPROVED, 1-2]   Sat Jul 11, 2015 10:10 pm



✧MOVING THIS THREAD RIGHT NOW✦


Alright, a new version of White Eye is being made. Therefore, I'm going to archive this based on the owner wanting it moved. Good luck with the revamp.



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