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 [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Mon Feb 16, 2015 3:00 pm

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Kaida's Background   Sun Mar 29, 2015 6:06 pm

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Sun Mar 29, 2015 8:57 pm


«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Master
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced


  • Comments/Notes: The only thing I have to say is this:

    Quote :
    When she strikes, the reishi circulating her palms connects to that of the opponent and cancels. It deteriorates the reishi at a speed of 1/64 a portion of the users reishi every 80 seconds.

    Convert that into post because we can't determine seconds too well in post format. So rewrite that to how long it would take with each post.

    Outside of that, I've taken the time to review this app and it seems fairly solid to me. With the lack of Vizards, and need for people in the corps, I'll go ahead and also give this character a pretty high ranking tier. This is because I can tell a lot of work was put into the app and I like the overall theme of it.

    If there is a problem with this decision, staff can also let me know and post their comments. Otherwise, I feel it works well enough and I'll expect some activity out of this character for the next month or so.

    Oh, and, also, I removed the archiving post from Circa in here so you didn't have your two post split up. So enjoy that as well.

    And be sure to post in this app when you made that slight correction.

  • Tier: 1-1+ [0-5+ in Release]

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Sun Mar 29, 2015 10:02 pm

I made that slight correction. Like, unf, babe.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Mon Mar 30, 2015 5:15 am



Everything looks good to me.
I'll give ya the clear, miss.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Sat Aug 08, 2015 2:33 pm

[mod]Moving to Inactive Characters because of.. Inactivity.[/mod]

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Sat Oct 31, 2015 9:20 am

MOVING





I hate to see ya go, but it's been many many months since we've last heard of Rowbutt. Therefore, I'll be moving this into archived characters. Hopefully life will allow you to come back to us as you can unarchive this character whenever you are ready.




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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Sun Jan 10, 2016 8:34 pm



✧EVERYTHING LOOKS GOOD TO ME✦


Everything looks pretty legit to me. I'll go ahead and unarchive it for you. Glad to see mah hookah is back ;D



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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Mon Feb 22, 2016 11:35 am

[adm]Since there is nothing in this app I'll be moving it to WIP. o-o[/adm]

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: [WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]   Thu Mar 31, 2016 4:09 am

I'll be archiving this app until Row makes it clear she is active on site again. The blank posts explain themselves for now.

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