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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Fri Mar 20, 2015 10:46 pm



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» Name: Kenta Yamada
» Titles: Old Disciple
» Appearance Age: 24
» True Age: 536
» Gender: Male
Affiliation/Rank: N/A

» Appearance Description: Kenta has long black hair that spikes down his face. His eye's are a light shade of red. He has a average height with a lean muscle appearance with broad shoulders.
» Appearance Picture:https://www.pinterest.com/pin/428686458253760088/

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» Personality: Friendly- Kenta is a very friendly individual, he is willing to help out others even at the cost of his own life. Kenta doesn't let his friendliness get to him though, he is willing to end the person's misery.

Calm- Kenta always has a calm look on his face, except for when he's battling. Being calm gives him an advantage, because he has a bit more time to observe his allies and enemies.

Intelligent- Kenta has a nice head on his shoulders. He can quickly plan what he needs to do and how to do it, but their are times when he gets stumped.
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» Zanpakutō Name:Eregantou~idōmēkā (Elegant Widow maker)

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Click here for image
» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Since Eregantou embodies a Noble of sorts, she acts very dainty at times. She also acts more like Kenta, but a bit more dark at times. Eregantou has a great sense of humor, and on their down time she jokes with Kenta to lighten the mode, or just for fun.
» Inner World: Kenta's Inner World is what looks like the inside of a castle, residing in the Throne Room, with very intricate and amazing jewelry and paintings covering the walls.
His Inner World changes depending on what is happening on the outside, if he is sad, it will start to rain outside, if he is angry, then everything will become dry and wilt, when he is happy, everything returns to normal, and when he is near death, his Inner World looks like the castle was just sieged.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Eregantou~idōmēkā takes the form of a Japanese Wakizashi with ornate gold designs on the sheath and hilt.

» Release Phrase: Release your Fragrance

» Shikai Appearance: Eregantou~idōmēkā in Shikai state takes the form of a long Hachiwara, almost as long as a regular Wakizashi.

» Shikai Abilities: Knight's Presence- Kenta activates Kishi no purezensu by slashing into the ground and waiting for him opponent to cross that line. When they do, a giant arm of a knight hits them back with devastating force.

The Guard- Gādo is activated when Kenta stabs Eregantou into the air, causing four clones of himself to appear, and attack simultaneously. The downside of this ability is that the clones are not as strong as the original.

» Bankai Appearance: Eregantou~idōmēkā becomes Roiyaru mibōjin (Royal Widow). She becomes a long Nodachi with a big blade in a shape similar to a Scimitar.

» Bankai Abilities: The Queen's Knight- Joō no kishi is an upgraded version of Kishi no purezensu (Knight's Presence) instead of just a limb coming out of the ground, the whole knight comes out, donning ancient European armor and weapons. The Knight stands tall at 11ft.

The Queen's Guard- Kin'eihei is an upgraded version of Gādo (The Guard). When Kenta uses Kin'eihei, nine clones appear, make ten total Kenta's to fight in battle.

The Widow's Grief- Mibōjin no kanashimi empowers Roiyuaru mibōjin with a sickly white color, bleeding off the blade with great power. Kenta can launch this attack from a distance, or he can go close range and slash his enemy.
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» Inner Hollow Description: http://wershe.deviantart.com/art/Bleach-531-Black-hollow-372808514
» Inner Hollow Personality: Kenta's Inner Hollow is mostly quiet, only expressing its opinions when necessary, and when he does start talking, he will belittle Kenta when he is losing in a fight, or tease him if he is around a attractive girl. When Kenta's Inner Hollow tries to take control of Kenta, he becomes sadistic and bloodthirsty, not caring what happens to himself, or anyone.

» Inner Hollow Powers: Black Grand Ray Cero- The Grand Ray Cero used by the Espada is devastating enough, but the Black Cero is just as deadly, but when they are mixed together, there is no way to describe it in a single word.

Near Instant Regeneration- The Inner Hollow can heal from wounds that would deem fatal to most Menos class Hollows.

» Hollow Mask Appearance:http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/225/f/6/Hollow_mask_by_WilliamLionheart.jpg

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» Vizard Powers: Strength- Kenta's strength is increased drastically when he dons his hollow mask.

Speed- Kenta's speed is greatly increased when he wears his mask

Regeneration- Kenta gets some of his Inner Hollow's Near Instant Regeneration, but it is much slower then his Inner Hollow's.

Inhuman Precision- Kenta's Precision is increased to the point that he can stab through the tinniest of chinks in armors, cutting off small bits of the top of people's hair without them noticing, and can cut off the patella of a humanoid.
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» Background: Kenta lived in the early years of the 21st Century where he worked in a cubicle for six hours a day. One day while driving his car, he was involved in a car crash that killed him instantly, when he woke up, he found his body in what was left of his car, and a chain connected to his chest. After a few weeks, a Shinigami found him and sent him to the Soul Society via Konso. Kenta woke up in Rukon District 55 and lived their for a few hundred years until realizing he had some Spirit Energy, he enrolled in the Spiritual Arts Academy, taking every class very seriously. After graduating from the Academy, Kenta joined Squad 2, over the years being within the 2nd Squad, his Flash-Step greatly improved as well as his Hakudo skills before transferring to Squad 8 as the 5th Seat for a few hundred years. Kenta was later infected, causing a Hollow to form within his soul. Determined, Kenta delved within his own Inner World to fight this Hollow inhabiting his soul. After what felt like forever, even with the help of his Zanpakutō, the Hollow was defeated, and begrudgingly followed Kenta throughout his life. To make sure that no one ever found out about his Hollowfication, Kenta deserted the 13 Court Guard Squads, hiding in the World of the Living to train his against his Inner Hollow.

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General Skills
  • Durability:Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength:Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Power AugmentationMaster/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mask Protection::Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hollow Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:25 pm

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INFORM ME OF WHAT IS GOING ON

Alright, I'm coming through WIP Applications and I'm asking some questions about applications that have been here for over two weeks. When it comes to Kenta, what are you intending to do with this character? Are you still actively working on it? If not, I can keep it here. Or, are you abandoning this project? In which case, I can move it to archives. Inform me in three days or I will move it to old wip.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Wed Apr 15, 2015 3:49 pm


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« Application Checklist »

• LET'S GET DOWN TO BUSINESS•

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus: N/A


  • Comments/Notes: Well, for starters, you should have an RP Sample. You can take any RP you've done on any forum or write up an RP sample related to your character. We ask that new member do this because we want to see where you at with your understanding of role play. So, please, add that in.

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    Friendly- Kenta is a very friendly individual, he is willing to help out others even at the cost of his own life. Kenta doesn't let his friendliness get to him though, he is willing to end the person's misery

    You can go into detail about how he is more friendly. You can talk about things related to charitable nature, how social he can be with other characters and how caring he can be at times. As, from what I read there, it seems he may go from one extreme to the next fairly easily. Which, is fine for a personality to, but I'm not sure if that is what you are going for. So I'd probably expand that in more detail with a paragraph of information and describe your character in different sitautions.

    "Friendly: Kenta is a very sociable and kind person. Often times, he will be the first one to strike up a conversation in a room filled with people. He has a natural attraction towards other people because he has a desire to get to know everyone he can. Therefore, he has a strong sense of connection to his fellow man and wishes to be as kind as he can be. He'd even give the last dollar out of his wallet if it meant helping someone else out.

    However, there are limits to this gracious aspect of his attitude. Much like a farmer would shoot a dying dog, if he saw someone suffering, and they had no other way out of their agony, Kenta would offer his hand to kill them in order to take them out of their misery. This is often described as a darker aspect of his attentive nature because of how far he is willing to go for the other person in his mind."

    See how much you can work with if you decide to add in more detail? Explore that more with other aspects of his personality.

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    Calm- Kenta always has a calm look on his face, except for when he's battling. Being calm gives him an advantage, because he has a bit more time to observe his allies and enemies.

    So, once more, more detail here. How did this personality flourish in him? What are examples of his calmness? What happens to his calmness when he is battling? And how can he have an advantage in combat if you stated that he lost that calmness when fighting?

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    Intelligent- Kenta has a nice head on his shoulders. He can quickly plan what he needs to do and how to do it, but their are times when he gets stumped.

    Detail, detail, detail. I say that because intelligence is a trait that commands specific details. In what way is he intelligent? I ask that because there are many different forms of intelligence that one can cover for a character. You have logical intelligence, abstract thought, understanding, self-awareness, communication, learning, emotional knowledge, memory, planning, creativity and problem solving to choose from.

    So, to give an example, If you picked emotional knowledge, you could describe him as the type of person capable of having a strong understanding of others feelings and he'd be able to greatly comprehend what a person may be experience through his empathy. Or, if you decided to go the route of memory, you could describe him as being the type of person able to retain large amounts of information with good recollection. Thus, that would translate to him being able to become quite the knowledgeable person when it comes to learning new skills, facts, names and anything else that requires having a good memory.

    Therefore, from what you described, you may want to go with problem solving. I say this due to the fact that you refer to his intelligence as being able to quickly adapt to a problematic situation with relative ease. Thus, it can be inferred that this guy is a really good problem solver and you'll want to describe how he became such a good problem solver, the situations that he is good with and where he gets stumps to balance it out.

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    : Since Eregantou embodies a Noble of sorts, she acts very dainty at times. She also acts more like Kenta, but a bit more dark at times. Eregantou has a great sense of humor, and on their down time she jokes with Kenta to lighten the mode, or just for fun.

    Again, more detail. You say she embodies nobility, how do you show that? Is she kind? Is she gracious? Does she give mercy? Does she evoke hope in others? I ask you these questions because nobility isn't always the kind of snobby attitude that I see you moving towards with that first sentence. Nobility can have an air of peace, compassion and warmth to the person that makes others attracted to them and ready to follow under their lead.

    Furthermore, going into the dainty bit, how is she dainty? Is she difficult to please? Picky? Discriminating? Finicky? Go into more detail and expand on that if you want to bring that aspect of her persona out more.

    So, if she acts more like Kenta, but a bit darker at times, how is she dark? You have the topic sentence, but you don't have the follow-up information to back up what you are saying. Which, up until this point, is a common thing.

    Therefore, I will give you a piece of advice: get your topic sentence and then use the next two to three paragraph's giving structure to back up what you stated.

    "Dogs are very fun and loving animals. For instance, you can take a dog on a run in the park and have a great evening because of their energetic personality. And, since canines are rather loyal creatures, if you bond with one they are capable of being your best friend. A loyal hound can protect its owner to the death if they invest the proper time into their pet. Therefore, dogs are exciting and affectionate pets to own."

    The first sentence I used pretty much gave you an overview of what the whole paragraph from that. The next few then described WHY that was true. And then, the last paragraph restated what I said now that the information had been made clear. Make sure you have that sort of formula going on with your passages.

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    » Shikai Appearance: Eregantou~idōmēkā in Shikai state takes the form of a long Hachiwara, almost as long as a regular Wakizashi.

    That doesn't describe how long it is. How long is it in feet? Is there any transformation process to it? You know, after he activates his shikai, is there some kind of light that engulfs the blade and when it fades the user will see their blade transformed?

    Quote :
    » Shikai Abilities: Knight's Presence- Kenta activates Kishi no purezensu by slashing into the ground and waiting for him opponent to cross that line. When they do, a giant arm of a knight hits them back with devastating force.

    Does this technique take any energy from your character? How big is the arm? How extensive is the force? You can use more detail with this if you want to bring the potential of it out. If it was me, I'd do it like this:

    "Knight Presence is one of Kenta's first special abilities he uses while his Shikai is released. This move is activated by Kenta infusing his spiritual energy into his Zanpukto and slamming it into the ground. Once that has taken place, a predetermined line that expands for teen feet in a horizontal direction will emerge on the field. After an opponent crosses that line? Then a colossal, metallic arm will emerge out of the line and grow to be the size of a small sedan.

    When fully summoned, this appendage will then hit them back with enough force to obliterate an entire city block with a single blow before fading back into the line. This move does not have a cooldown, but it can tax Kenta if repeated too much because it always takes a small volume of his energy away when it is called upon. It is also more difficult to use when his health dips because his energy will have a hard time being directed under pressure."

    Quote :
    The Guard- Gādo is activated when Kenta stabs Eregantou into the air, causing four clones of himself to appear, and attack simultaneously. The downside of this ability is that the clones are not as strong as the original.

    So, once more, add in proper detail. How much energy does this take out of him? How long do the clones last in post form? (I.E. do they last three post?) Is there a cool down period for this attack? Just HOW much weaker are they from the original? These are important.

    Quote :
    The Queen's Knight- Joō no kishi is an upgraded version of Kishi no purezensu (Knight's Presence) instead of just a limb coming out of the ground, the whole knight comes out, donning ancient European armor and weapons. The Knight stands tall at 11ft.

    Since I do not want to write another extensive ability, I will say that you should take the hints I gave from the degraded version of this ability from its shikai form and apply it to his bankai.

    Quote :
    The Queen's Guard- Kin'eihei is an upgraded version of Gādo (The Guard). When Kenta uses Kin'eihei, nine clones appear, make ten total Kenta's to fight in battle.

    See what I said about The Guard in Shikai.

    Quote :
    The Widow's Grief- Mibōjin no kanashimi empowers Roiyuaru mibōjin with a sickly white color, bleeding off the blade with great power. Kenta can launch this attack from a distance, or he can go close range and slash his enemy.

    So what does this attack do? I'd rewrite it to something like:

    "The Widows Grief is an ability that empowers Roiyuaru mibōjin with a sickly white color. It pulsates with great power and oozes a sense of danger from the blade. Once he slashes his blade, waves of light will extend from his Zanpukto and he is able to attack from a long distance with an energy projectile attack. These attacks are capable of expanding upwards of one hundred meters in every direction and taking out large chunks of the environment equivalent to numerous city blocks. However, due to how destructive it is, he is capable of suppressing it and directing it into smaller burst equal to a vertical slash that is roughly ten feet tall to send at his opponent from a close range.

    Baring that in mind, each slash that is generated from this ability takes trace amounts of energy away from Kenta. He is able to perform upwards of ten slashes per post before falling signs of fatigue. Symptoms such as sweating, heavy breathing, sluggish movement and increased heartbeat are some of the early signs. Where, if he goes over twenty, he may begin to have blurry vision, bleeding from the mouth and strained muscles. Therefore, he needs to take caution on how he uses this power to properly take advantage of it while in combat."

    This a proper power because it gives sufficient detail, describes the ranges of the attack, explains the limitations and gives the reader a better understanding of what they are dealing with.

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    » Inner Hollow Powers: Black Grand Ray Cero- The Grand Ray Cero used by the Espada is devastating enough, but the Black Cero is just as deadly, but when they are mixed together, there is no way to describe it in a single word.

    Uh, chances are, you aren't going to get this character up to that level just yet. A Grand Ray Cero is fairly strong and I'd like to ask that you refrain from doing that just now. Especially since a powerful attack like that is going to need way more detail. Instead, do something like this

    "Black Cero: The Black Cero is a powerful abiltiy that is used by Kenta's Inner Hollow. It takes a large volume of his spiritual energy and he channels it into different points of his body such as his feet, palms, nose and fingertips. Once he has an idea of where to send this current of power to it, he will stand in position and charge up the attack. Once ready, a colossal wave of black energy will explode and target his opponent. It will expand to a massive sphere that is roughly ten feet in every direction and lock on to his foes spiritual energy like a heat seeking missile.

    If they are hit by this attack? Then chances are they will have to cope with an explosion that is capable of annihilating two city blocks with relative ease. Therefore, due to this extensive damage, he is only capable of firing two of these per post and he has a cool down period of one to two post depending on how many of these he used. So, if he used one, the cool down would be one post. Whereas if he used two, then the cool down period would be two post."

    Quote :
    Regeneration- Kenta gets some of his Inner Hollow's Near Instant Regeneration, but it is much slower then his Inner Hollow's.

    You are going to need way more detail for this. I don't think I'll allow near instant regeneration until this character becomes stronger. Therefore, you can say he has quick regeneration, but it will most likely take place over a post or two. Along with that, you'll need to describe what this regeneration entails. Does it heal superficial blows like cuts and bruises? Can it repair broken bones and organs? And how much energy does it take from his spiritual energy reserves to perform? Or does this regeneration restore his health, but at the cost of making him physically exhausted? Describe, describe, describe.

    Quote :
    » Vizard Powers: Strength- Kenta's strength is increased drastically when he dons his hollow mask.

    Speed- Kenta's speed is greatly increased when he wears his mask

    Regeneration- Kenta gets some of his Inner Hollow's Near Instant Regeneration, but it is much slower then his Inner Hollow's.

    Describe, describe, describe. What kind of strength are we dealing with when it comes to Kenta's physical might? Is he able to punch through walls? How good is his stamina? Why does he have this strength? How much is his strength increased from his base?

    These same things can be applied to his speed. And you already understand what I expect from regeneration.


    Quote :
    » Background: Kenta lived in the early years of the 21st Century where he worked in a cubicle for six hours a day. One day while driving his car, he was involved in a car crash that killed him instantly, when he woke up, he found his body in what was left of his car, and a chain connected to his chest. After a few weeks, a Shinigami found him and sent him to the Soul Society via Konso.

    Kenta woke up in Rukon District 55 and lived their for a few hundred years until realizing he had some Spirit Energy, he enrolled in the Spiritual Arts Academy, taking every class very seriously. After graduating from the Academy, Kenta joined Squad 2, over the years being within the 2nd Squad, his Flash-Step greatly improved as well as his Hakudo skills before transferring to Squad 8 as the 5th Seat for a few hundred years. Kenta was later infected, causing a Hollow to form within his soul.

    Determined, Kenta delved within his own Inner World to fight this Hollow inhabiting his soul. After what felt like forever, even with the help of his Zanpakutō, the Hollow was defeated, and begrudgingly followed Kenta throughout his life. To make sure that no one ever found out about his Hollowfication, Kenta deserted the 13 Court Guard Squads, hiding in the World of the Living to train his against his Inner Hollow.

    You see those spaces I made in your history? Make those in your app. These spaces are important because it is wise to double space your paragraph's each time you move on to a new topic sentence. This is so you don't get stuck with one massive paragraph that is a headache for people to read.

    Additionally, you may also want to go a bit deeper into your history and tie it into your characters personality. As, in my opinion, personality is formed from experiences you've had in the pst and this is the perfect chance to reflect what made him into the character he is today.


    That's about all I got for now. Tell me when you've made an update with your character by PM'ing me, posting in this thread or getting back to me in my communication thread:

    http://www.platinumhearts.net/t7253-thefrost-s-communication-thread

    Good luck.
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Tue Apr 21, 2015 8:06 pm

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» Name: Kenta Yamada
» Titles: Old Disciple
» Appearance Age: 24
» True Age: 424
» Gender: Male
Affiliation/Rank: Former Squad 8 Lieutenant

» Appearance Description: Kenta has long black hair that falls into his face. His eyes are a light shade of red. Kenta is average in height and has a lean muscle build

» Appearance Picture: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/428686458253760088/

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» Personality: Friendly & Helpful- Kenta his a very sociable individual. Before he left the Thirteen Court Guard Squads, he had many friends in almost every squad. The other Soul Reapers that were his friends say that Kenta was very charismatic guy, as well as a good listener, evident when his female friends came to him with their problems. Kenta would always stop what he was doing and listened to his friends complaints and confusion over a problem, then he either told how to fix the problem on their own, or he would go with them to the source of the problem, whether it be a crush they had, late paperwork, a sparring match, Jinzen, or Zanpakutō training, Kenta was always there.

His friends would also say that Kenta could make friends literally anywhere, ranging from the shy Squad 4 members, to the battle-crazed Squad 11 members, Kenta always had a few friends here and there. Kenta had an aura about him that just attracted people around him, and they weren't disappointed, they usually leave with a good friend, unless they were a bit too drunk to remember the encounter or they made an enemy of Kenta, which wasn't uncommon in most cases.

But, everyone has their limits of graciousness, Kenta is no exception. Kenta can't stand someone in pain, not only does it bring a cringe to his face, but he also gets a weird sensation in his head, like he is trying to remember something but can't, so Kenta just chucks that feeling into something that happened in his past life. When someone is in pain and there is no way that they could survive what was happening, Kenta will go out of his way to put them out of their misery, which some of his friends would say is the darker side of Kenta, because-again-Kenta will go out of his way to put them out of their misery.


Calm- Kenta usually has a calm look on his face, the only reasons why he wouldn't is if he's hanging out with his friends, or if he is fighting an enemy. Kenta's calm nature is infectious, his friends can vouch that whenever they were in his presence when they weren't doing anything active (i.e. reading, drawing, Jinzen, resting) they always became relax and calm. Friends that were distressed about something or someone usually went to him to help them with their problems, his calm nature helped them relax while he gave them a few pointers on things that they were having a problem with.

When Kenta is battling, his calm demeanor allows him to be able to observe his opponents movements and attacks, and act accordingly. But, like all warriors, he will soon drop his calm behavior when the battle starts dragging on for a longer period of time (5 posts), Kenta will then sport an aggressive posture and stance, and attacking without remorse. The upside is that he will know most of his opponents moves, but the downside is that he will soon start making rash decisions (attacking instead of blocking or dodging), or letting his guard down when he starts gaining the upper hand in the battle.


Intelligent- Kenta is a very smart individual. During his time at the Spiritual Arts Academy, Kenta graduated in the top 5 in his class, he was ranked 3 out of the 5. Kenta has an excellent memory, able to remember things that most Soul Reapers forget, their past life, well, some of it at the least. The only few things he can remember is his former apartment's address, his girlfriend Chizuru, and a tune to a song, but he can't remember the title. Kenta's memory doesn't just aid him in a passive way, but also in combat. Kenta is able to analyze the most smallest of details in an enemy’s form while they fight (ex: slight shifting of the eyes or feet, indicating faking one way and going another).

Kenta can process information faster than most Soul Reapers in combat. When fighting a rival Shinigami in a sparring match, Kenta could immediately see many flaws in his rival's style of fighting, stance, & footwork. Kenta does have his limitation like any other Shinigami in combat though. When encountering a enemy that either shows him no weaknesses in the way they fight & defend, making him think that he had the upper hand before striking him down, not giving him any time to analyze them, or changing the way they fought & defended against him (i.e. fighting style, stance, aggressive to defensive & vice versa).

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» Zanpakutō Name: Eregantou~idōmēkā (Elegant Widowmaker)

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:

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» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Eregantou has some characteristics of a Noble, and some characteristics of Kenta. Like a Noble, Eregantou loves discussing many different subjects for a lengthy periods of time, especially about relationships, where she will start to fantasize about the whole plan, turning it into a cheesy romantic situation in her head, which is soon shot down by Kenta. Like Kenta, she is very war-oriented, catching details that Kenta didn’t and pointing it out to Kenta, but she will also become increasingly saddened and blinded by grief the more wounded he gets in battle.


Eregantou absolutely loves art, expensive jewelry & clothes, which is why she is usually gazing wondrously at the art on the walls & trying on the jewelry and clothes in Kenta’s Inner World. She loves all the art that is in her castle, but her top priority is always Kenta. The only time she doesn’t pay attention to all her art is when she wants to either teach Kenta a lesson, or when she wants to knock some sense into Kenta. For example, when Kenta wanted to learn Bankai, or when Kenta is being annoying in her opinion (i.e. being sulky or depressed).


» Inner World: Kenta’s Inner World is a giant castle, but mostly resides in the throne room. The throne room has very intricate and tasteful art on the walls, and shiny, amazing jewelry in display cases.


Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Eregantou~idōmēkā takes the form of a Japanese Wakizashi with ornate gold designs on the sheath and hilt.


» Release Phrase: Release your Fragrance


» Shikai Appearance: When Kenta wants to activate Shikai, he places his left hand along the blade, slowly moving it along the blade until he reaches the tip of the blade where he snaps his hand forward, then puts it back to his side. While he dragged his hand along Eregantou Idōmēkā, a sweet fragrance comes from her, this fragrance doesn’t have any effect on the battle in the slightest though, upon being asked by Kenta why she release a fragrance, she simply stated that it smelled nice.


Eregantou Idōmēkā takes the shape of a longer Hachiwara, a normal Hachiwara’s length is around 350mm long. Eregantou Idōmēkā’s length is 60 cm, fitting the length of a Wakizashi.


» Shikai Abilities: Knight’s Presence- Kenta activates Kishi no Purezensu by infusing his Spiritual Energy into his Zanpakutō, then slashing the ground in front or around him, or stabbing into the ground and waiting for his opponent to cross the line/hole. When they do, a giant arm of a knight, looking to that of a European knight’s arm and gauntlet, reaching from 2 to 6 meters hits the unexpected enemy with enough force to destroy 2 whole city blocks with one shot before rusting and then turning into dust.


This ability can be done multiply times, but it will start taxing Kenta’s Spiritual Energy, because it will start taking more energy to maintain than to actually execute it, especially when he is near death, or is having trouble keeping his emotions in check.


The Guard- Gādo is activated when Kenta stabs his Zanpakutō into the air, instead of hitting just air, it looks like he stabbed something visible (portion of blade that was used to stab seems to disappear), Kenta then sends pulses of his Spiritual Pressure into this “stab wound” before taking out his Zanpakutō. When Kenta takes his Zanpakutō out of the hole, the hole begins to glow white (the color of his Spiritual Pressure), then the hole shoots out 4 pieces of his Spiritual Pressure behind him, they then slowly take Kenta’s shape, growing and forming out his physical body.


After that process, Kenta will have 4 identical clones of himself fighting with him until they are defeated, or their time runs out (3 posts). The upside to these clones is that they act just like him in every way, but they are not as strong as the original, to put it in perspective, Kenta’s clones would have the Spiritual Energy & Pressure of a 3rd seat, while Kenta has the Spiritual Energy & Pressure of a Lieutenant.


» Bankai Appearance: In order to release Bankai, Kenta has to hold his arm out in front of himself, blade tip facing the sky, then he flips his Zanpakutō in his fingers to a reverse-grip, then places his left hand on top of his of his Zanpakutō’s hilt before saying, “Bankai!” Kenta’s White Spiritual Pressure explodes out into a 10 foot radius, before clearing out to reveal Roiyaru Mibōjin.
Eregantou Idōmēkā changes into Roiyaru Mibōjin. Roiyaru Mibōjin takes the form of a Katana mixed with a Scimitar, the hilt and cross guard being of Japanese design, and the black blade long and curved, reaching an approximate length of 76 cm long.


Kenta’s Zanpakutō Spirit also changes significantly, going from her cheery appearance, to a woman who has a deep sadness within her, hence her name. The art all in the castle also changes when in Bankai, going from Italian Renaissance artwork to Northern European Renaissance artwork, colorful to dark. Roiyaru’s mood changes to one of deep grief, like she lost someone important, donning much more darker clothing, she is also much more serious in her Bankai state, so she is more likely to criticize Kenta while he fights, no matter what he did.


» Bankai Abilities: The Queen’s Knight- Joō no Kishi is the upgraded version of Kishi no Purezensu with a lot of similarities. The only difference is that the ability takes more Spiritual Energy than in Shikai, and instead of just an arm appearing to help Kenta, a full knight-complete with ancient European knight armor & weapons-comes out of the earth. Joō no Kishi has twice the destructive power in Bankai then in Shikai, able to destroy half a giant office building. This ability is very useful in a battle, but the knight get progressively weaker when used again and again, it also takes a chunk of Kenta’s Spiritual Energy when used. (last 3 posts)


The Queen’s Guard- Kin’eihei is the upgraded version of Gādo. Activating Kin’eihei is the same as activating Gādo, only instead of 4 clones of Kenta, out comes 9 clones of Kenta, making 10 total Kenta’s.


The downside to this ability is that it takes more Spiritual Energy from Kenta than in Shikai, and the power differential is the same as in Shikai.


The Widow’s Grief- Mibōjin no Kanashimi takes the sorrow and sadness from Roiyaru herself, making it become solidified in the blade, making Kenta’s Zanpakutō glow a sickly white color. Kenta is able to utilize this move like the great Ichigo Kurosaki with a Getsuga Tensho, launching it at his enemy from a distance.


From a distance, this ability can destroy 2 houses and make a small crater. Kenta can also keep the energy within his blade, amplifying his attack power significantly. Its destructive power is able to topple an apartment building with one strike. This ability can be used repeatedly, but it can take some time to concentrate the attack to its full capacity, as well as taking considerable Spiritual Energy in order to use it.
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» Inner Hollow Description: http://wershe.deviantart.com/art/Bleach-531-Black-hollow-372808514
» Inner Hollow Personality: Kenta’s Inner Hollow is mostly quiet, only expressing its opinions when it wants to. The only other time he talks is when Kenta is losing in a fight, belittling him, or teasing him when he is around an attractive girl. When Kenta’s Inner Hollow tries to take control of Kenta, his entire personality changes, he becomes sadistic and bloodthirsty, not caring what happens to himself or anyone.


If Kenta beats his Inner Hollow, he will appear within the castle dungeons, vice versa if the hollow beats Kenta.

» Inner Hollow Powers: Black Cero- The Black Cero is what Kenta’s Inner Hollow utilizes in battle with relative ease. It takes a huge amount of Spiritual Energy to produce this devastating attack, and he can shoot the Cero out of many points of his body such as his hands, feet, eyes, mouth, horns, and hollow hole. In order to charge this attack, he must plant himself firmly into a solid state, because this attack has a very hard kickback.


Once the charge is complete, the Hollow releases a torrent of black energy at his enemies with enough destructive energy to annihilate 3 city blocks easily. Due to this moves destructive power, it can only be used twice, trying to use it a third or fourth time will damage the Hollow extensively, such as the Cero-literally-backfiring, destroying the appendage that the Hollow was concentrating the Cero on. (i.e. arm gets incinerated, leg explodes, front of face gets burned off, chest implodes.)
Quick Regeneration- Kenta shares in his Inner Hollow’s Regeneration. Like the name suggests, the regeneration is quick, but not as fast as other hollows, it is able to heal superficial cuts and bruises with ease and it can repair broken bones and ruptured organs, albeit at a slower rate.


How much Kenta has to spend his Spiritual Energy to fix a wound depends on the wound itself, if it’s a small cut or bruise, he won’t have to spend much, just a little bit. If the wound is significantly greater, such as a broken arm, or internal bleeding, Kenta has to spend a large quantity of Spiritual Energy in order to repair these bigger wounds.


This ability does become harder to use the more Spiritual Energy Kenta uses up in a battle, it will soon heal wounds at a slower rate, or it will cut off the pain receptors in the area of the injury so that Kenta won’t have to worry about it during fighting. For example, if one of Kenta’s arms were broken in 2 places, the regeneration would activate, realigning the bones, but instead of healing the bones, it will cut off all feeling in that area, effectively numbing it, then it will put some of the material that makes up the white part of a hollow’s body into the cracks of the bone to hold it in place so that Kenta could fight on. The superficial brace in the bone is stronger than normal bone, but it will still break, causing more injury.


» Hollow Mask Appearance: http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/225/f/6/Hollow_mask_by_WilliamLionheart.jpg

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» Vizard Powers: Strength- Kenta’s strength is increased to the point that he can punch through thick metal walls with little difficultly. Kenta’s stamina increases tenfold, with his hollow mask on, he can fight long after many Soul Reapers would call quits, estimating to be as long as 3-7 hours.


Speed- Kenta’s speed is increased to the point that he can clear 64m in 2 minutes. His physical speed isn’t the only thing increased, Kenta’s reflexes are a lot quicker, able to react to a Captain-class Shunpo, with little difficulty as well as multiple bala’s in quick succession.


Regeneration (See Inner Hollow & Mask)
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» Background: Kenta was born in the year of 1991, his father was a lawyer and his mother was a painter. Kenta was exposed to his mother’s art at a young age and loved every single one of them, he always loved to look at them in her painting room. His father always made sure Kenta went to the best schools and got the best tutors for his education. Kenta and his father’s relationship lessened, because his father always made his life choices for him, Kenta’s father wanted Kenta to go into Law and become a lawyer, Kenta wanted to become an artist like his mother.


Kenta wouldn’t admit it to his Dad, but what he did make Kenta a lot smarter than most of his peers at school, so that’s one thing Kenta could thank his father for. At the age of 17, Kenta was accepted into Karakura University, majoring in art and business. While attending, Kenta was regarded as a very bright student, surpassing his peers and become #1 in his classes grade wise and he got into the top #5 for his GPA, ranking #3. During his time in college, he met his girlfriend Chizuru, they dated for a year before…doing the deed. When Chizuru told Kenta that she was with child, it made the 20 year old want to become greater than he already was to provide for her and his unborn child, his first order of business was for Chizuru and himself the move in together in a middle-class apartment where they lived during college, and after they graduated as the “Class of 2011.”


Kenta went on to become a famous artist, constantly on the move from gallery to gallery in different cities and countries. Chizuru was going to become a retail agent after her pregnancy, so for now she stayed at home. When Kenta was 21, Chizuru went into labor and was sent to Karakura Hospital and her contractions lasted over 8 hours, Kenta could only sit there by her side, unable to relieve her pain, it broke him. After many painful hours for the both of them, their daughter was born, she was named Naomi. Life progressed as it used to for Kenta, with the exception that he was a family man now, his relationship with his father had improved after he graduated, his mother was very proud of him, Chizuru was waiting for Kenta to propose, and Naomi had turned 3 years old.


In the year of 2015, Kenta was driving along the highway to get home for his daughter’s 3rd birthday, when a drunk driver smashed into his car, breaking multiple bones, and stabbing many organs with those bones in Kenta’s body on impact, but unfortunately, Kenta stayed alive for 10 minutes before dying. Kenta later woke up on the street, at first he thought that he survived until he faced the scene that showed his mangled body in his car, and the car that crashed into him, Kenta also found a long, broken chain connected to his chest, upon pulling it gave him great pain.


After a few days, Kenta came to his own funeral and saw just about everyone he knew, his mom, his dad, Chizuru, and his daughter, Naomi. He watched them all sobbing about his death when he heard a bone chilling roar, afraid, Kenta soon started running away from what he would soon find out being a Hollow. A few years after his funeral, Kenta’s chain went from the middle of his thighs, to above his bellybutton, he was again running away from a group of Hollows when 2 figures, cloaked in black take out Japanese designed swords and eliminate the Hollows. One of the black cloaked figures then performs a Konsō and sends him to the Soul Society.


Kenta woke up in Rukon District 55 in the Soul Society with no recollection of his past life but a few things his former apartment's address, his girlfriend Chizuru, and a tune to a song, but he can't remember the title. For many years Kenta endured the hardships of being in one of the fiftieth districts, wearing ripped and dirty clothes day in day out, trying to find a decent place to stay, not getting mugged, etc. The one thing that Kenta had that others didn’t was Spiritual Pressure, and Kenta had a lot of it, he was able to make an energy ball the size of a baseball. Following the advice of many other Rukon inhabitants, Kenta ventured to the Shinigami Academy to enroll and become a Shinigami.


Like when he was alive, Kenta excelled in all his classes, quickly rising up to an early graduation, granting him his Zanpakutō, and a place within the Stealth Force as an 8th seat. Over the course of the his time within Squad 2 Kenta made a lot of friends and had a few intimate relationships, all of them ending on good terms, Kenta’s Shunpo and Hakudo skills increased greatly thanks to friendly sparring and training, and Kenta rose up to become the 3rd seat of Squad 2 for a time, by now Kenta learned his Zanpakutō’s name. Soon Kenta got a request to join Squad 8 as the 2nd seated officer, after some discussion with the Squad 2 Captain about his decision, Kenta joined Squad 8 as the Lieutenant, quickly making friends in Squad 8. Few years after becoming a Lieutenant, a member of Squad 12 accidently released a disease that made Soul Reapers into Vizards, many Soul Reapers were infected in the process, and Kenta was one of them.


Many of the Soul Reapers that became Vizards lost control and became full-blown hollows, they were later destroyed, but there were a few Soul Reapers did actually become Vizards, and to avoid any more casualties, the newly made Vizards were exiled from the Soul Society, and Kenta was among them.


Now Kenta is on his own.
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General Skills
  • Durability: Advanced
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Power Augmentation Adept
  • Cero: Beginner
  • Mask Protection:: Adept
  • Hollow Control: Adept


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» Role Play Sample: Kenta looked up at the angry gray sky dropping cats & dogs everywhere, “Another stormy day, hey, Eregantou?” Kenta said to his Noble Zanpakutō, “I really don’t like the rain,” Eregantou commented, “Makes everything depressing, and mucky,” Kenta smiled at his Zanpakutō’s remark, “Well, this is our life now, we have to make the most of it,” Kenta finished, flashing away from his original postion.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Wed Apr 22, 2015 5:19 pm

I will be taking over for Frost here, as he is a very busy man.

First things first, you are able to edit your application. On the upper right corner of your posts are a set of buttons. You will want to replace everything in your original post with what you have written in your second post, as it is the first one that matters. Once you get that out of the way, we can move on.

I do have to congratulate you for heeding Frost's in depth words and fixing the many issues you started out with, so I will be taking that into account. Because of it, you will be recieving a higher tier than you might have had before. That being said, I am going to make the judgment call that you will not be starting out with Bankai. Any sectoons in your application regarding it will have to be crossed out and saved for a later date. After being approved, you can train your characyer and apply for a Bankai when your tier is higher, but not for now.

Besides that, I have only a few nitpicks: For the Knight's Presence, lower it to only being able to destroy one city block. For The Guard, just clarify that only the four clones can exist at once, and no more than that can be created until at least one dies.

Last thing. Your roleplay example is lackluster right now. What you're trying to display for us is what an average post from you might look like. It's not necessary, but it will impact your beginning tier. You should try to expand greatly onto it and basically 'show off' your roleplaying skill. The better it looks, the more incentivized I am to give you a better tier. And after this application, you won't have to do it for any other character.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Wed Apr 22, 2015 5:27 pm

Alright, thank you Dexterity for the tips, I'll be sure to fix them. One thing I want to ask though is how to cross out words, so that I can cross out my Bankai section. I'll be sure to spice up my RP sample, what are you guys looking for in the sample? More destricption? More expression? If you can give me a example, that'd be great, but I'll still work on it.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:32 pm

Expression, description, all good things. The key is to show us your style of roleplaying, what you will strive to write in every post you make. Give me an example of that, and the quality of it will help your tier.

Also, the code for strikethrough is:
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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Sun May 03, 2015 7:18 am



「 MOVING THIS THREAD」
Based on the fact that this thread has been sitting here since the 22th, and there has been no modification to it since, or word of notice from the player, I'm going to go ahead and move it to WIP.

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Fri May 15, 2015 8:36 am

CHECKING WIP CHARACTERS NOW

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INFORM ME OF WHAT IS GOING ON

Alright, I'm coming through WIP Applications and I'm asking some questions about applications that have been here for over two weeks. When it comes to Kenta, what are you intending to do with this character? Are you still actively working on it from what Trim asked to fix? If not, I can keep it here. Or, are you abandoning this project? In which case, I can move it to archives. Inform me in three days or I will move it to old wip.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Kenta Yamada [wip]   Tue Jul 28, 2015 3:06 pm

Yo. What's up with the character? Lemme know in about a week. If not Ill be archiving it.

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