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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Shepard Jager [wip]   Mon Apr 13, 2015 9:16 am

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Basic Information
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• Name: Shepard Jager
• Titles: None
• Age: 16
• Gender: Male)
• Affiliation/Rank: He is rouge.

• Appearance Description: Shepard Jager has got black hair. Shepard`s skin color is white. Some people think an albino, but hes not. Other people think that hes has white skin because Shepard does not go out of the house. That`s also not true. Jagers aye color is dark brown a lot of people think it`s black.
Shepard is one meter and sixty centimeters long. Jager has got some kind of scary atmosphere around that makes other people avoid him. He has perfectly white teeth. Shepard`s body is very muscular because he trains a lot in his free time. Nobody can`t tell if he`s happy, sad or angry because Jagers face doesn`t show any emotions. Even if somebody would do something really stupid or try too annoy him. Nothing would change his zero emotional face would stay zero emotional.

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Appearance:
 



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Personality

• Personality: Shepard does not enjoy other people. He thinks that other people are annoying creatures that spend the most of there time doing complete nonsense. Jagers really talkative if he want`s to talk with other people (what does not happen very often) he can talk to them for hours. He enjoys sitting on a bench in a sunny day and letting the sun shine on him for hours.
Shepard`s a really hard worker. If he has to study for a test he can study for it until the morning. Jager enjoys sleeping, he can sleep everywhere (at home, at a park and even at school). He does not show his emotions because of frightening atmosphere. Every time he shows some kind of emotion his power makes it look scary. But when Jager doesn`t show any emotion, he`s less scarier. Shepard says that he hates humans but if somebody is in trouble Jager helps that person ewen if it is a human.

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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes: The power to keep calm even in the most horrible situations (like an hollow attack).

• Powers:
Metu concussa: what means shaken by fear is a power that creates an atmosphere of fear around him, the atmosphere makes an illusion that Shepard is a frightening person. Looks like black smoke that comes out of his body.
Notitia copy: that means information copy is the power that allows Shepard to copy information by scanning book pages. While he uses this power his ayes start shining in a weird green light. Jager can use the scanned information (example if he scans information how too make a cero) after two posts.

• Pure Abilities:
Riflessi più veloci: the power that makes his reflexes two times keener than a dogs.
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Shikai.)

• Sacred Release Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)

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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: Jagers ayes start`s too shine in a weird green light.

• Ascended Sacred State Powers:
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Background History

• Background: Shepard was born in year 2399, July 8. He was a little baby, who did not look different from the other fifty little screaming demons that were in the hospital. Although young Jager didn`t look different from the other kids when he was born, but when started to grow his unique factors started too appear. At the age of three Shepard`s skin was slowly becoming whiter. When Jager became four, he started too unless a strange atmosphere that made other people afraid of him. Kids didn`t want too play with him. Grownups didn`t want too look at him.
Slowly Shepard became more and more lonelier. In his eleventh birthday Jager made a promise to think of other people nothing else than as his enemies. At middle school Shepard didn`t show any emotion`s like something that was in charge of making him show his emotions, has stopped working. Jager didn`t make friends anybody. He hated humans for abandoning him. Shepard continued to exist alone, without anybody who would talk to him or making him feel better in his sad existence.
At high school Shepard realized that his life has become weirder than ewer. When he reed books he literally scanned the information from them. After a short period of time the data appeared in his head. And Jager never forgot it. Studying was newer so easy as now. Shepard got the best grades in the whole school. A month after his new power showed up Jager started to learn a new kind of information like how properly use a gun or how too make clock out of wood. Shepard was astonished. Finally he got a power that can make him the greatest person on earth. He was obsessed with his new power. Shepard tried to learn everything that he got his hands on. Jager slept lesser and lesser. His skin color became more like gray than white. Sadly Shepard wasn`t even dreaming about taking a brake. He wanted too now everything this world had to offer.
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General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Human Reiatsu Sheet

  • Power Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Energy Usage/Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Energy Resistance/Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Physical Augmentation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Roleplay Sample

• Roleplay Sample:
It was a sunny afternoon. Shepard was sitting on a bench and scanning some information about airplanes. Or right! He was trying too scan some information. Jager ayes were as heavy as led. Shepard felt that he is gonna fell asleep any minute now. Staying awake all night has it`s consequence. It was a beautiful spring day. And all the people were trying too enjoy it. Sadly there was one person who made this task quite hard. That person was this scary looking demon named Shepard Jager. Every time some people went pass Shepard, there faces went from satisfied with the wetter to horrified from Jager. Some of the bravest people even tried too look at him.
-I`m gonna pule the eyes out from the next moron who will stare at me like some kind of abomination.
Shepard quietly said too himself. The next moron was a little girl. She was holding her mothers hand and looked more like curios than afraid. Shepard gave her the most terrifying look he could come op with. The girl started too cry. Her mother picked the girl up and gave Shepard a really angry look. He ignored the women. Jager was looking at a police warning poster. On the poster there was written that because of the wast increase of hollows the people of this town should be in there houses before night fall. It was weird. Way in the hell hollows are appearing in a dump like this. The most spiritual person in this town is Shepard himself, but he`s not so important to be a target for a giant hollow pack. Suddenly his seances reacted. In the sky there was a small white thing. It didn`t look bigger than a basketball ball. The object became longer than a another object appeared it looked like the first one, but this one was a bit shorter. Three other object`s appeared. Jager realized it`s a gigantic palm. Another palm appeared. Without a warning they ripped a huge hole in the sky. Something went out of the hole. It was a menos! It looked at everybody white horrifying red ayes. Shepard`s scary faces were more like baby expressions compared to this demon. Somebody screamed. Everybody started to run. There was only one person who didn't run. Shepard. He know that nobody is going to survive this. If somebody will try to leave the town by car the menos will incinerate that person with a cero. There are only four policemen in the whole town. Even if they have the right equipment, all of them are just fat slackers who only occupy the line to the donut shop.
Wait a minute! If they can`t do anything it dosen`t mean he can`t. Shepard has studied everything about weapons that can kill a menos. He just needs to think a smart plan. Jager looked at the creature. It was there isn`t even a chance that he will be able to hit it`s mask.



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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Shepard Jager [wip]   Mon Apr 13, 2015 12:05 pm



•YOU PUT THIS IN THE WRONG PLACE•


Woah, buddy, I'm glad you have joined the site and what not, but it seems you placed this character in the wrong section. For the time being, since you are working on the character, this belongs in our WIP section. You will have two weeks to finish it before it is placed in WIP. When you have finished it, be sure to make a reminder post or put [FINISHED] in the tag so we know to check it. Good luck, friend.



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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Shepard Jager [wip]   Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:38 pm

CHECKING WIP CHARACTERS NOW

STATUS CHECK

INFORM ME OF WHAT IS GOING ON

Okay, I'm going through and checking the tags on WIP characters now. I've noticed that yours lacks any tag. Therefore, I am going to ask that you put some sort of tag on it. The reason for this is because WIP's aren't checked unless there is a [FINISHED] tag in them somewhere. Otherwise, we won't know what you are planning on doing with it and I don't want to assume things. Especially given the former checks on this character. So leave an update post when you've gotten to it, please.




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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Shepard Jager [wip]   Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:36 pm


SORRY, BUT IT LOOKS LIKE YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN THIS POUR GUY!!!

So buddy, looks like you had abandoned this creature over here and that saddens me And, as it is my duty, I need to move him to Old WIP. But don't worry, you can just continue on this dude and when done, post here and someone will go over it ^,^


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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Shepard Jager [wip]   Sun May 03, 2015 6:25 am


✖| Woah~~ |✚
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Is this App Ready for Check?
I don't see any WIP in the app title so I can only assume that it is ready for check, if not may you reply to be within this month to tell if it is or isn't.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Shepard Jager [wip]   Tue Jul 28, 2015 3:21 pm

We've gotten no reply. Sorry but I need to archive it now.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Shepard Jager [wip]   Sat Oct 31, 2015 9:11 am

MOVING





Well, seeing how this was in inactive characters, I'm going to go ahead and move it into archive. @Zeo you can go ahead and request it be move if you ever come back, so I hope to see this character finished one day if you ever return to Platinum Hearts.




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