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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Thu Jul 02, 2015 1:56 am

THE RAKSHASA DEMON TEMPLATE

BASIC INFORMATION
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» Name: Trinity Asthavon
» Full Rakshasa Name: Trinity Ciara Asthavon
» Titles: Alixana of Lust, Dark Crimson Priestess of the Deveta, Rashasa of Lust, Mad Goddess of Destruction, Devious Diva, Mistress T, Lady Vanity, Lady Blackheart the Queen of Vixens , Elaine Blanchett, Kimberly Ashasaki, Miyuki Sakuyamont
» Age: Severly Hundreds of Decades Old
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Former Lt./Servant to Asthavon Clan; Former Healer/Servant to Touketsu; Wife/Friend to Eric Zarathos, Mother of Kristen Hiroshima; Stepmother of Yuuta Rurosaki

» Human Form Appearance:
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» Mad Demon Form Appearance:
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» White Devil War Queen Form Appearance:
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» True Rakshasa Appearance Written: Trinity Asthavon is a demonic, and beautiful woman in her early/ate demon years. Her light white colored hair is kept short on the sides, a long strand hangs from the right side of her fringe down to her chest, and the hair at the back of her head is a bit thicker and reaches down to her shoulder blades. Her lips have been colored dark white, matching her hair color. Her eyes are demonic and she possesses quite an ample bosom.Her main clothing is a short, sleeveless, dark purple tunic with black edges. The front and back of the tunic are open which shows a hefty amount of her cleavage and fully exposes her back. The tunic is kept together by a red obi belt tied on the front of her waist. On her forearms, she wears dark brown leather bracers. Her right elbow and shoulder are bare, while her left arm is covered by a fishnet sleeve and a simple shoulder plate. Trinity's legs are almost bare, save for dark socks and Japanese-style tabi shoes. The most distinguished part of her is the war demon horns..
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PERSONALITY INFORMATION

» Personality: Trinity Asthavon can be serious when the situation calls for it, but she still maintains a fairly calm demeanor during such situations and is never without a taunt. Her greatest dislike is seeing people getting hurt by a stronger force something about doesn't seem right at all as she willing to help in a time of need. The hero princess can be trustworthy but really it a like a little thin line to her, she doesn't know if he can trust someone or despise them it always first impressions of that person. During her past life, Trinity was known to be a strong willed war princess with such a noble heart always the part of caring person and serious princess which sometimes feel a little boring. After her revival, Trinity began to obtain down to earth personality after escaping the cold embrace of death the woman finally is open herself up to others more easily. Now a Rakshasa Demon; She delights more and more in senseless slaughter, wiping out entire armies of helpless races for no better reason than the fact that she enjoys the sport of it. Trinity is completely merciless and kills without remorse. Trinity Asthavon even demonstrates an affinity for evil in general. She holds humans in little esteem and, like many demons, has little respect for half-demons. However, She has a keen respect for those who can match her on the battlefield, and as such grants a demon some recognition due to the latter's strength. With very good qualities, Trinity relishes in killing and, to her, there is nothing more important or honorable than battle. She is quite self-assured and confident in her own battle prowess.

Dark Hero
Because of her persona, Trinity feels some of the dark hero's mind rubbing off on her; She still to this day doesn't know why but truthfully. She isn't all evil the woman doesn't still believe in the code of honor among things. Trinity may sometimes break the law but after a while she'll take a chill pill and forget about whatever evil act she was about to commit. Yet Trinity will play the heroic part doing things for the needy and helping people something like a mercenary hero. Even though, Trinity stills hates his own clan she'll believe the word evil should take over her whole life. The woman somewhat has some morals that she does believe in. She does care about her family, the power of a demon, deception and making good choices really the highs and lows of a being a demon. Trinity does care about family and each member of his team like a there were a part of family. She believes that a demon has a special talent which they're good or an expert at which is good thing at times really that talent could help in a demon battle.

Ruthlessness
Trinity does have a ruthless side she showed her demonic anger when she's in a tough situation or whenever things get boring/bad for her the demon will go into a rage. In one of her rage moods, Trinity is a decidedly brooding and angry woman, almost totally consumed by hatred toward anything that come near to into contact with her. The berserker will joke around and will laugh with glee when she sees others in pain. Trinity will kill without hesitation, the true demon nature of a white war queen which is killing people and causing destruction the two things in a vampire demon's mind that he knows the most.
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BACKGROUND

» History: Known by everyone as Miyuki Sakuyamont the last legacy of demon warmongers among all demons. She was later killed by Cain Iramasha to hide a very terrible secret and ultimately piss off even tarnish the name of her husband which thanks to her former ties to the deveta she survived. But her memory came back, Miyuki remembered everything and hopefully one day she'll tell her husband that loved her so much everything about her family origins but she wanted to start anew. Miyuki Sakuyamont was born under the name Trinity Asthavon her family won't tell her but she is the dark sister of Mana Asthavon which has been kept secretly from the both of them. When she was born the clan ordered her to ruler of the war demons at such a young demon age which the young war demon took the responsible and follow through with her duties following the Asthavon code. She managed to takeover a compound run by The Kill-Devilocas, a violent demon family that were running drug operations, money profits and negotiated killings a famous clan of demons. It took many years to eliminate each member of the violent demon family but the war demon managed after gaining their territory. Touketsu was pleased with her efforts getting rid of major thorn of the demon god's side throughout time the war demon did many jobs and missions for the deveta. As long she saw a smile upon his face everything was fine following orders was the main purpose and nothing would go wrong. During one her missions, She was wounded dealing with a shinigami threat to the demon world luckily she took care of it however was job was done.

This was around the time for selection as Touketsu was choosing another Rakshasa for the demon world it was down to Cain Iramasha and Joseph Kourosaki but the deveta changed his mind after hearing the two bickering. As Trinity was coming back from a mission, Touketsu gave the special honor to her impressed by her work so far as the two wondered why she was chosen it was a major responsibility to be a rakshasa of hell. But things were about to spiral out of control when four of toher demon families waged war against each other which the Asthavon clan had no part in. Yet Touketsu had other ideas thinking long and hard about it the demon god saw a demon during those wars that had so much potential but one of the weaker demons. The demon's name was Kade Hiroshima, Touketsu had major & big plans for him which giving instructions to his champion which Trinity followed her orders but she actually fell in love with the legendary demon hero. Trinity took the name Miyuki Sakuyamont, she began something of an relationship everything was going like clockwork until the demon hero did something out of the ordinary. Signing a very special pact with Trinity which the demon was about to follow through with orders. But this peaceful demon was so nice showing a major sign of affection in which Trinity couldn't allow the demon hero to be killed which was her orders. In the end she rejected her family evil's plotting and the Deveta's will marrying Kade Hiroshima in the process.

Things actually worked well as Trinity worked a double life helping her husband with keeping the peace with the other races finally trusting some demons. But her dark side was helping members of the Asthavon race helping many higher rank members succeed and get promotions and finding ways to impress the demon god's will and respecting the family way. Cain Iramasha found a way by deception and power to make the demon god believed his champion with false evidence and that Trinity was planning on destroy Touketsu. The deveta was greatly sadden but giving Cain the order in which the iramasha planned to set up her husband for other crimes committed by iramasha's allies. Kade was away on business protecting some shinigami members from a major threat as his base of operations, Cain murdered Trinity telling her that the demon god sends his regards. Not only that her daughter Kristen was wounded too though her injuries were greater she survived but in a coma. Trinity couldn't believe this she was betrayed by the person she loved the most Touketsu and her body died but not her soul it was dragged down into hell into flaming lava. But she managed to survive....

Decades later, She heard of her husband Kade's death someone had killed him and his stepsister but the dark mad prophecy was fulfilled and in time....Kade was gone and the mad demon Eric Zarathos was born. The deveta was willing to give Trinity a second chance this time as demon of hell if she accepted or she would rot in the flames of hell for all eternity. Trinity had lost everything thinking both her husband and daughter were gone the demon accepted in which she had to defeat both a danava demon and a shinigami proving her loyalty. The long battle was fierce but during the handicap battle the war demon managed to go into a war rage attacking both danava demon and shingami. She nearly killed them both until the deveta told her to stop which the deveta saw enough and the new rakshasa was allowed to return back into in the Asthavon clan and maybe to the deveta's side.
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THE DAGI TVACA (Dāgī Tvacā)


» Dāgī Tvacā Name: Crimson Devil Flesh

» Dāgī Tvacā Appearance: This takes the form of her red tribal demon tattoos upon herdemonic body which appeared on much of the upper and lower body. It also appears on his some her arms and maybe on some maybe a little upon her legs. Various of symbolic symbols could be found in the design of tribal tattoos; Each symbol is rich in meanings. Trinity's Aztec inspired tattoos are also considered to be tribal style. Most of her tribal tattoos are featured in weaving or spiral patterns and portrayed in masculine style to represent her demonic pride and boldness. Her unique tribal tattoos are good ideas to help Trinity connect to a mysterious and ancient demon past and demon cultures.

» Dāgī Tvacā Release Appearance:
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» Dāgī Tvacā Powers: Black Devil Claws: Trinity has black female demon claws on her hands and feet which can be used for attacking people when she gets angry or kill something. Her claws aren't strong or invincible they're the same to human female nails enough force and slightest attack can cause them to break easily. She can extend them for longer claw slashes even retract them when friends are around. Stronger enemies may feel 60% of the claw attack if it blocked by barrier or strong defensives. Trinity can use her zoa power to empower her claws with energy to do certain energy claw attacks as well.
Claw Techniques
Claw Slash: A basic claw slash attack.
Dark Claw Slash: A claw slash attack. When her claws extend giving off an energy claw slash attack which weak but fast-like attack but it causes damage. It can be blocked by armor or strong-like defense. Trinity can use this claw attack instantly and has the same strength to bala.

Crimson Hellfire: Accepting her power, Trinity has been given a very unique ability from her crimson hellfire powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with burning crimson fire giving much more deadly effect.This was very uncontrollable, but after some enhancements/training by some fellow family members and well trained witches the demon started long training. Trinity can mostly control the crimson hellflame power creating attacks and defenses from her powers, creating weapons, attacks and defenses with her crimson red hellflame powers. When using dark flame power, Trinity can create using flame weapons, hell guns or crimson fire attacks which she can use one at a time. For crafting weapons, Trinity can make flame swords, daggers which can be 7-8 inches which can give a major burning sensation when used against enemies. Also Trinity's crimson red hellfire attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Trinity's defensive powers can be weaken if her burning crimson weapons are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength. Creation if weapons can take a large amounts of energy to she'll need a cooldown period to charge back up the hellfire power to create another weapon of hellfire

Spiritual Flame Buster: This being her adept punch attack; Because it will hurt as more than it hurts her. The attack starts with Trinity looking at her hand remembering the many friendships he had. Then his reiatsu will engulfed her hand as the flames will empower her hand. Trinity charged fast at her enemy punching her the gut hard first; then axe handling the enemy to the ground. Then unleashing her empowered flame fist delivering blockbuster punch to the enemy inflicting massive damage. With a blast radius of 7 feet.

Nova Spiritual Flame Buster: The true/deadly version of the Spiritual Flame Buster. The attack starts when Trinity raises her hand up in the air and then closes her eyes for a few seconds. The reiatsu from her starts to go through and empowerment state engulfing her right fist both flame and plasma energy. Finally, She gets into a fighting stance charging up the power of the fist. Suddenly, Trinity charges towards his opponent with a super energy charged punch, if it connects it will release a tremendous explosion with a blast radius on 24 yards. However if the first punch isn't successful then the attack is over with. Leaving, Trinity helpless, drained and paralyzed to any enemy attack coming her way.
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GENERAL AND NATURAL SKILLS

» Natural Abilities: Ravaging War Strength: The former war demon was well trained by her masters in learning demon powers and demon techniques. Trinity was ale to her demon war strength stronger because of this her physical strength is augmented capable of doing many things. She has proven herself time and time that she was a strong war demon really she used her strength to survive this long down in the demon world/hell. Trinity can upturn huge portions of rock floor with a single strike at the ground within mere minutes. In her different states, Trinity's strength is decrease well split in half to throw people off and then when the time unleash her true strength on an enemy. She is one of many strong demons within the demon world also an example of her strength. She could hurt even kill a vasto lorde with her bare hands or some hard strikes hand that how strong the demon is. Trinity able to do a number of things which a normal demon or a stronger demon wouldn't do.

Hellspawn War-Demon Speed: Trinity Asthavon's speed and reflexes have been greatly enhanced to the point where the female demon can move somewhat faster. Yet her agility and reflexes to dodge some/few oncoming attacks that have do her harm. Trinity is shown to used her quick speeds along with her reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. She can actually match with his enemy's speed power like vice captain's shunpo and arrancar's sonido abilities. In order of this, Trinity must be focus on that target thinking of nothing else but seek, control and destroy....her fast-like running speed to rush up to an enemy's speed catching up to it.

Strong Hand to Hand Combatant: Though she was well trained. Trinity Asthavon was trained to be a strong hand to hand fighter by her deveta master & Asthavon family members. Trinity Asthavon was taught the skills of a wrestler, boxer and kickboxer at very mid-demon age. She is deadly strong in using her punches and kicks being highly unpredictable in a fight using speed and reflexes to take on or kill, submit and seduce her opponents. She has an unique ability that also very trapeze artists and trained acrobats used in the circus. Her enhanced leaping, jumping and flipping abilities can dodge enemy's attacks or get away in the nick of time being more enemies come her way. After her revival, Trinity studied even learned various skills from the human race turning her more fierce and demonic combatant in battle. With her brute strength, Trinity has been to known as full contact demon assassin not only using strength but focus and perhaps some accuracy with her strikes.

Body Manipulation: This is a natural ability that all demon's possess if they wish to activate it or perform it. Most Demon's have full control over every aspect of his physical make-up, able to stretch themselves to obtain insane heights such as being thirty foot tall, being able to change their skin color, having the ability to shape-shift into different people that they are able to remember and, on much more powerful levels, being able to even detach, generate or fuse body parts together in order to increase odds of surviving. Though, this does not occur until at least one tier, and even then it's weak compared to the 0 tier version. Additionally, it can even be used for offensive or defensive purposes. For example, a demon can use Body Manipulation in order to generate a layer of steel-like skin around their body in order to increase their defense and block out outside sources from entering their body by clogging every pore on it.

Astitva Kī Baṛhata: Otherwise known as Edge of Existence, is the transportation method that Rakshasa use to travel between realms and/or layers of Hell. The Rakshasa’s body beings to illuminate in a dark red tone, before scrambling like a disrupted television, soon followed by their bodies disappear in a similar fashion. Like turning off a TV, their bodies collapse upwards from their feet and downwards from their head, meeting halfway in the middle and disappearing into an ‘external dimension’ which instantly allows them to pull the string on which dimension they wish to land in. This “Edge of Existence” is an instant teleportation, something that also works like a shinigami shunpo -- however considered to have twice the distance possible of being travelled. They can use this to cover great distances in milliseconds, or switch between Hell, Demon World, Soul Society or Earth Instantly. Their skill level in this determines how well they can succeed in this endeavour of travelling and how straining it is on their bodies.

Za Koa Skill: Za Koa skill is how much skill your character possess to manipulate the energy from the core. Typically, this should be your strongest asset when it comes to the skill sheet. The higher your mastery of this ability, the more techniques you are able to create, use and share. However, this has many more uses then that.

Kage Chōkyō-shi: Kage Chōkyō-shi is the ability for most demons with adept Za Koa users to travel through different dimensions, travel throughout the battlefield or even use it for defense. By channeling Za Koa's energy in addition to the various seals throughout their body in addition to their Shadow Movement, they are able to create many different holes in the area's around them that can range from small to extra large depending on their Za Koa skill. These can lead to other realms, can be used to shield against attacks if they are not more powerful then the demon and be used on the offensive by attempting to create these holes to slice someone's head off.

Akuma Kyodo: Thanks to the full body seal most demon's have on their bodies from birth, Akuma Kyodo gives most Demon's a layer of defensive skin that is similar to an Arrancar's Hierro. This will be general defense, though if have a high Za Koa Skill, you can temporarily double your defense. Masters can do it for ten post, Advanced for seven, adept for four and beginners for two. All come with a three post cooldown. But that's where the similarities end, and the differences begin. What makes a demon's Akuma Kyodo: so different? Well, for instance, this layer of skin is not just applied physically like Arrancar's are or any other races natural defense. What makes a demon's defense stands out is that it applies to magic, spiritual attacks, their environments, how resistant they are to poisons or toxins and even how much their mental state improves.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Shadow Movement: This is what some MIGHT call the Demon's Answer to flash step: Shadow Movement. It allows them to move at quick burst of speeds on most occasions to allow them to travel very far distances in short amount of times, that is for certain. Though, this is where some similarities come to an end. Unlike most other races, Demon's get many nifty benefits then just Super Speed. Take this for example: from the seals on a demon's legs and feet that generate insane amounts of energy from all of the sources of power they collect; it will be able to give yourself temporary boost of intense speed called [i]"Shadow Burst". Shadow Burst is a period of time where your demon will double their speed on average if they are at least adept. It will transition into how fast their attacks are created or launched, the demon's reaction time to increase the odds of evading, countering or noticing a person, object or anything else within a vicinity that has a pre-tense in order to do something about it, it increases their mental awareness to more alert levels and it even goes into their natural powers.

Demon Magic: Just as the natural race of Demons can use the in depth and powerful magics of Demonic energy, the Rakshasa also have access to the said sources of magic. In this regard they also have a very similar skill-sheet for Demon Magic and Za Koa. Rakshasa have said to be peaking with Za Koa and are mostly naturals in the aspect of Demon Magics. One of the differences in their magic use is the potency whilst in Hell. Just as the aspects of Demon’s grow stronger once in Demon World, Rakshasa’s magic is FAR more powerful when fighting on their home turf of Hell. As they have access to Demon Magic and are quite adept in it, these Rakshsa also are quite advanced in the area of Death Energy and can combat people even in the Asthavon family in terms of Death Energy battles.

Reality Warping: On most of the layers of Hell, 1 through 665, the worlds are capable of being morphed to the Rakshasa's will. Once a Rakshasa has been assigned their own layer of Hell to stand as a guardian, they also inherit the power known as "reality morphing". This means that at any point in time, they are capable of shifting their respective layers of Hell to take on whatever appearance they desire. Whether this be a fiery furnace where everyone on their level of Hell burns and continuously crumbles, or a field of never ending hills and planes, filled with darkness. In the end, this is purely up to the individual demon. They are given free-reign over their layer of Hell, so if someone decided they wanted to fight a Rakshasa in their layer of Hell, they could find themselves in a constantly shifting landscape and even attacked by this shifting land. This also means they are connected to their layer of Hell, constantly being capable of keeping tabs on the happenings in it.

Crimson Energy Manipulation: Trinity has been given crimson energy powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with red energy giving much more powerful & deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancing it by some training. She can mostly control this great raw energy power creating powerful attacks and powerful defenses from controlling the crimson energy. The demon can also teleport with this crimson power creating an energy portal and leave into another dimension/place when creating the portal. Trinity can create red energy wings for herself giving her the ability to fly but her red wings can be damaged quite easily from other energy and elemental attacks. This can be also used some healing magics which can be combined with other power for much of an greater healing effect that can heal faster then regular healing powers. When using the red energy power, Trinity can fire red energy weapons, half or 100% full power red energy blasts/energy beams firing at twice of normal speed of an demon technique. For defenses, She can create an energy shield or an energy blockade barrier from her power. Also She has controlled crimson energy attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Trinity's defensive powers can be weaken if her controlled crimson energy defenses are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks
Crimson Energy Damage
5-5 to 2-1 Tier/Damage: The power of the crimson energy can completely damage to an enemy even completely destroying body parts, weaken attacks, breaking things on impact. The power can be able to greatly hurt and enemy depending on the situation it can kill.
1-5 to 1-1 Tier/Damage: It can blocked but enemies will still feel 70% percent but they would feel nearly half of the damaging burning effects of the attack wounding/hurting some organs even some body parts maybe broken or disfunctional.
0-5 to 0-1 Tier/Damage: The attack can be blocked completely or an enemy can feel 50% percent of the attack wounding a organ or burned half a body part. Depending on a enemy's speed power the attack can dodged completely.

Shadow Genocider: This is formed when cupped hands are drawn to Trinity's side and the dark energy is concentrated into a single point between the cupped hands and the hands must be really close. The hands are then thrust forward to shoot out a streaming, powerful beam of red energy. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, with just one arm. Energy particles started forming a dark ball. Trinity started chanting the words "Shadow......GENOCIDER" and the ball unleashing a stronger blast of energy at the target. However the attack has a big flaw if the user too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble. Stronger enemies can block or dodge the attack completely. The attack is almost is somewhat the same to cero.
Hadō Blast Damage
5-5 to 2-1 Tier/Damage: The power of the blast can completely damage to an enemy even completely destroying body parts, weaken attacks, breaking things on impact. The power can be able to greatly hurt and enemy depending on the situation it can kill.
1-5 to 1-1 Tier/Damage: It can blocked but enemies will still feel 50% percent but they would feel nearly half of the damaging effects of the attack wounding/hurting some organs even some body parts maybe broken or disfunctional.
0-5 to 0-1 Tier/Damage: The attack can be blocked completely or an enemy can feel 30% percent of the attack wounding a organ or poisoned half a body part. Depending on a enemy's speed power the attack can dodged completely.
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SIN/DEVETA/UNIQUE ABILITIES

» Sin/Deveta/Unique Abilities: Sin of Lust(): A sinful based power based upon one of the seven deadly sins the very thing that deals the powers of unholy lust in her heart or lust powers into others. Lust is an intense power transforming it into a deadly power for defeating an enemy or desiring someone that she loves growing a lust of overwhelming want for them. The Lust Power acts as another zoa koa power more as a desire power and that combine with her own power and abilities creating unique power from the sin itself. From the deveta himself, Trinity was given this sin lust power as a sign of loyalty and servitude not only to the deveta and her Asthavon clan beng her family. The sin power works as a unbelievable demon lust power that activates itself embracing Trinity's personality taking over her very brain and mind. The lust power can create three different but unique personalities than the original. First personality of the Sin Power is [True Embrace]. The lust power activates turning Trinity into a very seductive person making her want or love an individual even caring/being kind for their family and friends. Showing unique forms of affection even love magic perhaps affection for that person loving them. Yet this personality has been known to activate around well known people. Second personality of the Sin Power is [Hell's Mistress]. This makes her into something a demon mistress acting almost like a human mistress but into a pure demonic sort this personality can be used at friends, beasts even enemies. But upon beasts, her mistress personality can dominate a beast in sinful way making that beast her servant and her the master that beast. This power actually intoxicates her rakshasa power making her more vicious, dominate and sexual in her actions at the same time. In her mind she is the mistress and her prey is that slave her property. Who knows what she might be capable of when this personality activates. But ultimate to make that person or prey her slave. Final personality of the Sin Power is [Sinful Lust Queen]. The want and need for blood doing anything sexual for that person to get it turning her something an true nymph or an killer vixen desiring a person nearly wanting the person. Embracing the power of lust working into a person's desires changing them to her will. However if the person's willpower then person's desires won't be changed and she'll need to work other way into seducing the person. Until the person's finally agrees to Trinity's desires allowing the lust power to enter the victim's mind. Then she has them......
Sin of Lust Powers & Lust Abilities Lust Sin Embrace: An unique way to embrace one desires and manipulating it to Trinity's will. The Lust only activates through touch when it affects the skin weakening the opponent's mind a little making them think of her. A person's willpower and focus are weaken for 1-2 posts. The sexual power makes the opponent think that want the rakshasa and nothing else matters. The lust embrace is heart shape blast can be effective when Trinity touches an opponent hitting their mind unseen and undetected. Or blowing a kiss and the heart shape blast hits them on the cheek.

Lust Blood Deception: The mind trick technique which give the enemy some measure of hope but it ensures the user's victory. This technique creates the illusion that Trinity has been killed, stabbed, burned alive, chop up, or blown apart by an enemy's attack. The trick illusion power actually creates the illusion that the demon is actually somewhere else making her invisible. How complex is lust blood deception? It makes a second Trinity at the state of near death thinking the enemy has own. The Illusion Trinity is bloody from the enemy's attack and about die. It turns the original invisible covering her whole body in a invisible like body suit in mere seconds. Body suit lasts for 2-4 posts. Giving her a chance to recover and disappear or attack the enemy head on without them noticing it. The problem of this attack is willpower must be higher for this to work. If will power isn't high then the original can be sensed and attack.
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NARAKA JANAVARA (Hell Beast)


» Naraka Jānavara name: Ashtar Sindragosa

» Naraka Jānavara Personality: At a time, Ashtar believed evil and damnation was a the way to go "the weak die and strong survive". Searching and exploring for ways of increasing his powers and abilities to make him a true demon beast, Sinn became battle-harden, rarely sadist-like and truly arrogant to people because of this. He was a demon who lived by demon code to serve the lord of darkness at those times. As the Hell Beast, everything had changed he's almost completely thrown away his human life almost something a rule breaker with an deceptive mind.

During his battles, Ashtar had a change of heart thinking he would give protecting the weak/saving the innocent another chance. He finally decided to fight against the forces of good or evil even though he's a hybrid demon beast. He likes it though it may be a weakness to some people the beast didn't how much respect it got being something of a superhero guardian. The demon doesn't believe evil has right to win anymore and he'll everything in his power to stop it. He maybe a hell beast but still at times of need the guy has a caring heart and we'll be there in times of crisis. He'll follow orders to the fullest extent gaining somewhat of soldier's basic knowledge if his family were in trouble. Ashtar would be the first on the scene hoping it isn't a life threatening problem and he'll be there.

» Naraka Jānavara Appearance: He's a unique breed combination of a human centaurian and dragonoid fused together actually the hellbeast actually many demons. Ashtar finally allowed two animal souls to live one of a dragon and a horse human which in the process turned the hell beast turned into a the superior breed dragon centaurian. He actually has a lot actually a whole lot of tribal and skull tattoos representing the demons and humans that he killed. He has four dragonoid heads upon his backside which help him with advice or killing him or perhaps both at the same time. His spiked dragonoid tail can be used to grab, attack even suffocate people when the hell beast allows it. Both his human claws and dragonoid claws are sharp...

» Naraka Jānavara Abilities: Unbelievable Strength: From the combined strength of his mutant-like transformations and the strengths of of different strong dragons. Ashtar's physical strength is really unbelievable of such a very high level that even his deadly actions cause greater damage. Much stronger attacks might hurt him but they wouldn't have power of defeating him but it might weaken him temporary depending on the enemy's strength. Ashtar can actually block attacks depending on their strength. He's able to greatly overpower/withstand an person's bankai or stronger attacks with his big hand or one punch yet it greatly hurts when does it causes bruises and little blisters. Ashtar can actually punch a larger hollow, vasto lorde or an espada hard in the face. With maximum force behind it, he's able to break through the walls to destroy buildings and structures. But his hands will bleed a little from stronger attacks.

Immense Speed: From his Dragonian state, Ashtar's speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented allowing him to move superiorly faster than any other normal/stronger dragon. Allowing him to move much quicker to super speedly dodge some high based and strong attacks and countering with one of his attacks with full force. Ashtar's fast running speed is used mostly for rushing up to an opponent or trying to counter attack when the opponent is too close. Ashtar can keep up with a shinigami's shunpo speed, iramasha's spped or arrancar's sonido speed yet the guy can appear to be 150% more faster in this state. He can actually match a captain's shunpo or espada's soinido speed, vizard's speed or ziamichi's speed depending on the enemy's speed.

Armored Strengthen Durability: He has very high resistant to damage due to the fact the form has both dragon armor and black dragon armor combined. Making him able to withstand attacks at a very high rate. Strong enemy attacks like bankai, powerful attacks or stronger shikai have been known to damage him even higher Kidō can hurt too. But the lower attacks, medium based attacks or strong stuff may cause scratches and medium bruises and weak bloody wounds to the dragon body. Too many attacks can greatly hurt even damage his dragon armor maybe even kill even wound him greatly if he isn't careful.

Dragon SwordMaster Mastery: Ashtar's mastery of the dragon sword has actually greatly improved in this form. He has almost like mind and soul of a deadly sword assassin really the dragon beast tries to act like one using different techniques unlike his original state. Ashtar greatly loves using the dragon sword weapon feeling more of a spiritual connection with it using the scythe weapon in battle with the maximum force. Going into a fight, Ashtar put his full strength and muscle into his dragon sword so his fast cuts and strong attacks can be quick and deadly. Creating powerful and unique techniques or attacks when using a dragon sword in battle.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

The Art Of Demon Magic: What exactly IS the Arts of Demon Magic? In a sense, you COULD call it the Demon's Kidō, but you'd be wrong as well. Why? Well, Demon Magic actually works like real MAGIC is suppose to. Of course, Kidō like spells, summons and barriers can be created with Demon Magic. That's a given. However, it can be taken MUCH further then that application. For instance, an advanced user in Demon Magic could use this in order to gain Telekinesis on a more light level. Even combat standards, if he were to look at an attack and see it coming, the Telekinesis would kick in and attempt to change it course if enough was generated from The Demon to negate it. Other example would be gaining Gyrokinesis in some cases in order to actual make it seem like they are toying with gravity itself; which in fact they are. Within a contained area, this demon could remove the gravity of some things, make it heavier in other places or even apply it to more focused objects like their attacks to cause more impact force. This may not seem like much, but it's actually an amazing feat as the laws of physic's clearly states energy can never be erased. However, in terms of combat, in order to do this they would need to overpower it. Another situation in which you could get a taste of Demon Magic would be them turning your energy attack into a batch of living snakes, them creating fields of anti-spiritual barriers around them or just making themselves plain invisible.

Dragon Devil sword: The Swords of Souls; An unique weapon which can be summoned and made disappear with a wave of his hand. The Dragon Devil Sword which is a dragon sword infused with souls of the dragons which was used to create it the end result was having the scythe embedded with countless skulls on the sword blade. The Dragon Devil Sword had it own abilities and powers within the sword blade making it into something like great big sword blade the weapon is capable of dealing with zanpakutos, sugiura weapons or iramasha blades without worrying about the sword blade breaking. However, Dragon Devil Sword can break depending on how strong and powerful attack is the sword can take damage but too much which can lead to big ass trouble. Meaning Ashtar won't have his weapon to protect him in battle against enemies.
Dragon Sword Attacks
Tri-Razor Slash: A slick three energy slash hit combo with any dragon sword weapon. Ashtar sheaths his scythe weapon after the combo is finished

Black Inferno Blast: Black Inferno is a massive burst of destructive energy a demon can unleash if they have Adept or higher on Za Koa. It starts by gathering energy from Za Koa along with the Demon's Blood and any type of darkness. From there, it will form into a ball of darkness that can be used to unleash serious damage upon anything it hits; resulting in a black explosion that is similar to a cero in destruction and can be broken down like a bala as well. Though, unlike a cero or bala, The Black Inferno Blast does alot more then just simply explode. When it explodes, if trapped within the blast, the opponent will begin to feel extreme amounts of heat generating from their skin; so hot, in fact, some believe they are actually on fire from the strain on a person's will. However, this does more then that. That's simply the sign of a dangerous demon parasite entering a person's body. If a direct contact is made or even partial contact, there will be a strong rush of parasites, demon magic and Za Koa's force entering a person's body. From that point, over the course of five post if there was a direct hit or three for a indirect, this will begin to heavily tax an opponent. It will force them to drain extreme amounts of energy until they are somewhat weakened, slowed or damaged if they are unable to extract it from there bodies.
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TUKARA SAITANA


» Tukaṛā Saitāna Name: Devil Lady Darkness

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Appearance:

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Powers: Devil Demon's Unbelievable Pure Strength: From her years, Trinity Asthavon has inherited much of her pure strong demon strength when unlocking the form. She actually focus a lot of the demon energies into the Tukara's well being making it stronger then her original form from all the people she killed. Trinity's physical strength is greatly augmented to a high vast level. It had something to from all her assassinations and missions she would do for her clan but she trained when she was a demon child also trained within the Asthavon clan base. Trinity Asthavon was able to block some powerful attacks from another stronger demon or stronger based attacks with her bare hands yet might cause them to bleed from the pain. To be perfectly honest, Trinity Asthavon doesn't really know how strong her Devil Lady Darkness form is using countless times in battle.

Perfected Demon Speed/Quicker Reflexes: Her quick speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented to the point where the female demon warrior can move faster. Yet her agility and reflexes to dodge many oncoming attacks that have do her harm. Trinity is shown to used her faster speeds along with her quick reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. She can actually match a captain's shunpo or espada's sonido speed by putting demon energy into her speed catching up to an enemy's speed power. This has one disadvantage, Trinity is a little weak against holy attacks if an enemy and fire an holy attack against the female demon and her speed will get weaker. Yet the female demon warrior isn't that fast against vizards and ziamichis this being her only disadvantage unless the girl uses her other speed powers along with her speed.

High-Strong Durability: Thanks to the many souls that she absorbed and incantations used to stabilize the war demon's final form and making it stronger to use. Not only that she stronger than her normal state. Trinity has obtained a high resistant to damage all due from the body which was used to create the demonic metals used to create armor skin for the war demon. Yet from too many attacks it can be break from focus and truly strong attacks the demon skin armor can break and the demon can be wide open for damage.

Hellish War Sensing: She can sense spiritual pressure like a normal captain shinigami, strong quincy or a strong espada. To mainly detect people or see how powerful the bastard or people are. The demon spirits within her act like a warning beacon within her mind alerting the danger of the enemy or large group coming her way. The demon spirits will give a radiating pulse which reacts to sources of Reiatsu within a certain proximity, allowing the practitioner to determine the location of any sensed individuals and gauge how powerful they actually are.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether

Curse Effect: Curses are a natural to a demon and work somewhat like a decaying system. For instance, when a demon uses their Curse ability they can inflict sickness on any type of living or spiritual being which in turn can bring about illnesses within them, gradually drain them of their power and ultimately make it very hard for fighting due to the fact that this Curse Effect can eventually begin to heavily weaken the persons Reiygoku, Reaitsu and Physical body to the point where it would be well advised to seek medical attention before too long. However, that is not the only use of Curses. It can also be inflicted on a mental level depending on the persons Will Power Skill Sheet and can eventually begin to inflict insanity, madness, distracting thoughts and some succubus class skills.

Demonic Flight: The demon has the wings of an darker demon which look angel but they give streams of energy making them looks fallen angelic like. These wings give him the ability to fly or glide at fast pace like shunpo or sonido. If the wings are destroyed then she can't fly which take 2 weeks to regenerate. When descending to the ground the wings go into an invisible setting and once landed on the ground they disappear. The fallen angel wings harder to break and may take a lot of attacks to do it.

Curse Effect: Curses are a natural to a demon and work somewhat like a decaying system. For instance, when a demon uses their Curse ability they can inflict sickness on any type of living or spiritual being which in turn can bring about illnesses within them, gradually drain them of their power and ultimately make it very hard for fighting due to the fact that this Curse Effect can eventually begin to heavily weaken the persons Reiygoku, Reaitsu and Physical body to the point where it would be well advised to seek medical attention before too long. However, that is not the only use of Curses. It can also be inflicted on a mental level depending on the persons Will Power Skill Sheet and can eventually begin to inflict insanity, madness, distracting thoughts and some succubus class skills. Not only that, but curses can also be applied to the area around them. This is usually done by using this curse to containment the flow of reaitsu within an area to make it very unstable to use for non-demon races; causing their bodies to react violently by spewing out blood, causing malfunctions in their powers or their bodies outright rejecting this flow of additional power and sometimes even canceling out attacks.

Sacrificing Incantation: Sacrifices are something that are very unique to demons as there are thousands upon thousands of them that have many different effects, methods and steps. For instance, a small scale Sacrifice would be something like a demon spilling human blood in order to get a slight increase in his power for a short time. While on the other hand, if a demon were able to slaughter a mass population center, they would be able to gain more power such as in KQM Mana's case. Though, Sacrifices are NOT just for power. They can be used to increase intelligence, increase will, unlock hidden talents, give untold riches to the demon and so on and so forth. (There will be a list of available sacrifices as a demon can do very soon to accommodate this new power.)

Crimson Energy Manipulation: Trinity has been given crimson energy powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with red energy giving much more powerful & deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancing it by some training. She can mostly control this great raw energy power creating powerful attacks and powerful defenses from controlling the crimson energy. The war demon can also teleport with this crimson power creating an energy portal and leave into another dimension/place when creating the portal. Trinity can create red energy wings for herself giving her the ability to fly but her red wings can be damaged quite easily from other energy and elemental attacks. This can be also used some healing magics which can be combined with other power for much of an greater healing effect that can heal faster then regular healing powers. When using the red energy power, Trinity can fire red energy weapons, half or 100% full power red energy blasts/energy beams firing at twice of normal speed of an demon technique. For defenses, She can create an energy shield or an energy blockade barrier from her power. Also She has controlled crimson energy attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Trinity's defensive powers can be weaken if her controlled crimson energy defenses are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks
Crimson Energy Damage
5-5 to 2-1 Tier/Damage: The power of the crimson energy can completely damage to an enemy even completely destroying body parts, weaken attacks, breaking things on impact. The power can be able to greatly hurt and enemy depending on the situation it can kill.
1-5 to 1-1 Tier/Damage: It can blocked but enemies will still feel 70% percent but they would feel nearly half of the damaging burning effects of the attack wounding/hurting some organs even some body parts maybe broken or disfunctional.
0-5 to 0-1 Tier/Damage: The attack can be blocked completely or an enemy can feel 50% percent of the attack wounding a organ or burned half a body part. Depending on a enemy's speed power the attack can dodged completely.

Super Shadow Genocider: This is formed when cupped hands are drawn to Trinity's side and the dark energy is concentrated into a single point between the cupped hands and the hands must be really close. The hands are then thrust forward to shoot out a streaming, super mega beam of blue/black energy. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, with just one arm. Lightning and Energy particles started forming a dark ball. Trinity started chanting the words "Shinkuu Shadow Genocider" and the ball unleashing a enhanced yet a mega powerful blast of concentrated stronger raw energy at the target. However the attack has a big flaw if the user too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble. Stronger enemies can block or dodge the attack completely. The attack is almost is somewhat the same to cero oscuras.
Super Genocide Blast Damage
5-5 to 2-1 Tier/Damage: The power of the blast can completely damage to an enemy even completely destroying body parts, weaken attacks, breaking things on impact. The power can be able to greatly hurt and enemy depending on the situation it can kill.
1-5 to 1-1 Tier/Damage: It can blocked but enemies will still feel 70% percent but they would feel nearly half of the damaging effects of the attack wounding/hurting some organs even some body parts maybe broken or disfunctional.
0-5 to 0-1 Tier/Damage: The attack can be blocked completely or an enemy can feel 50% percent of the attack wounding a organ or poisoned half a body part. Depending on a enemy's speed power the attack can dodged completely.
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Thu Jul 02, 2015 7:13 am

Don't mean to be an asshole Kade, but anything Vampire related needs remove. There are still over 4 dozen instances of Vampire in the application. x-x

-Kake Edit in: Also Kade The Picture of the girl licking the knife is a reserve of Circa Monstrua You also need to fix that too please.~

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Thu Jul 02, 2015 3:29 pm

I've remove all vampire out of Trinity and removed the picture too
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Sat Jul 04, 2015 12:25 am

The Claw Techniques

Alright, first thing first. What does 60% of the attack mean? Energy, force, pain? The way its written also shows that its something thats nearly impossible to "not feel" or "not withstand" in terms of strength of sheer will. That's a no no, try to be more descriptive or specific with the first bit.

True Claw Slash needs to be written to where it states that it doesnt simply damage people or tear their skin. Characters have specific things for defense sometimes, its gotta be fact that it isnt just a 100% attack.

With Crimson Hellfire only one type of weapon can be created at a time, and I want it specified that when she uses these creation abilities that she uses a large amount of energy if used for prolonged periods of time.

Spiritual Flame doesn't need to have a speed boost.

Nova needs to not say its an instant killer. People can survive things like that. Along with that it needs to talk about how it drains her using an attack like that. That's a strong attack, energy is expended.

Woah Woah Woah Woah. She devoured two different races and obtained their powers? No. I don't care who you are, that's absurd. Shinigami refrences in abilities and saying she was devoured needs removed. And with the Davana, is needs remove too or you need to talk to Frost about a way that could give her those abilities as well. It's crazy that she consumed all these powers.

Okay, this is a pet peeve of mine. Dont change it if you dont want to, but Hadouken Kamehameha could use a different name. Seriously.

Remove all instances of "Cant penetrate". Nothing is impossible, describe more in the hell beast area of how he can be beaten or wounded or he cant dodge someone. There aren't any characters on this site that cant be hurt. Whatsoever.

Super Razor Slash cannot be that strong. Simple as that.

Chidori, no. The lightning cannot be a hitter no matter what. Again. Nothing is impossible.

With the Tukara section, remove the fact she can completely nullify Bankai attacks or Ress attacks. That's a no no.

Telepathy needs to state that people can keep from getting controlled. We're iffy on illusions and character controlling powers. That's a no no Kade.

Eternal Partner? Like I said. You gotta remove any instances of consuming other races whole to take their abilities. ALSO. Atma Vatou needs removed. Like I said, no consuming. DE will be discussed once these problems have been altered and fixed.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:58 am

She's fixed Blade
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Mon Jul 06, 2015 2:17 am

Alright. First problem is that you need to remove instances of Vampire from the DE Portion.

First thing first, the first portion of her DE powers.

Akasha's Awakening, no. No drawbacks of notable degree. It's a doubling in power basically. Not even Azure or Koichi, those in the 2nd class of DE users below the strongest, can do something like that. It needs reworked or removed entirely.

Breakdown is broken. I don't need any character creating pure Reishi out of the air. Quincy can do it to a degree but its in order to create arrows. The way you do it is absurd. Remove it or rework it to a base level of breakdown. Get these two things fixed and I'll consider whether or not you can be trusted in general with DE.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Mon Jul 06, 2015 8:35 pm

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Mon Jul 06, 2015 8:56 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: I spoke of it with Staff, and with my own judgement with grading this app, Im gonna have to deny the use of DE in her. It needs removed before this character can be used. Remove Lust Blood Deception. Forms are locked out. You'll need to roleplay with the character in order to unlock them in the future.
Tier: 2-2

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Mon Jul 06, 2015 11:20 pm

Splitting the DE stuff into archives.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Trinity Asthavon [Approved, 2-2/2-2]   Tue Jul 07, 2015 4:47 pm

Removed the word Wrath in Titles. Sorry for the inconvenience

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