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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Dexterity
Dexterity
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Joined : 2012-11-04
Posts : 1177
Age : 31

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Crazy Arrancar Upgrades Empty Re: Crazy Arrancar Upgrades

Tue Jul 21, 2015 2:01 am
Here is the issue with your training threads and upgrades, not just this one, but all of them in general. They usually involve metagaming—your characters conveniently discovering knowledge out of nowhere, and creating plot devices based off of characters you haven't asked permission to borrow from, and usually winding up with a huge power spike with little to no effort because you found some kind of book or artifact to skimp out on the major training.

The two threads you listed here have very little as far as actual training/experience go. You fought Naomi, but the battle was short and you did not really strive for a great battle. Your training thread involved mostly filler paragraphs that had nothing to do with the Segunda Etapa, and truly lacking in character development.

I'm sorry, but before I can even consider allowing you the Segunda Etapa, you'll need to achieve much more than this. Try to focus less on the silliness of Anastasia this time and more on the achievement and training of a new form. And no shortcuts; don't just 'discover' some secret object that does the work for you.

Sorry, but this is denied for the time being. You can use the topics in another upgrade if you want, but they don't count for much.


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