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Sat Aug 29, 2015 2:31 pm
  • Name Of Character: Desmond Hayden
  • Link To Character Profile: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13845-desmond-hayden-accepted-4-5
  • Reasons For Upgrading:

    Hayden was forced into his inner world by Ikari to forcibly unlock his shikai or die in the process, none the less he survived and managed to surpass his limits to hear his Zanpakutō name and unlock it's release.

    https://www.platinumhearts.net/t14118-daily-patrol-kakeru-morpheus

    -Almost died
    -Managed to put up a fight againt his shikai self in base form for a bit
    -Didn't give up in the face of defeat
    -Met his Zanpakutō spirit
    -Learned he has a potential hollow inside of him.
    What Are You Upgrading:

    Non-Shikai


    Body Supremacy- After so much time of having to control his body, having to delve deep into his inner being Hayden has gained the ability to control every aspect of his body. This ranges from being able to stop bleeding in one area to determining the exact amount of effort his muscles put forth. This ability was unlocked after gaining his shikai an offshoot of 100% usage. While in his shikai he can’t control his body supremacy.

    His brain has gained the knowledge of how to understand and temporarily alter his body by focusing on what he wishes to do. There isn't much more to it than that, telling his body to do something through thought process. It would be like moving a finger, it's a collection of items working together with his brain telling it what he wants to do. Some examples of this would be stopping the blood flow to a area but a draw back of this would be that area is not getting blood along with that being impractical, but if he had a wound on his arm that was bleeding profusely he could force the skin to keep it's self tense to try to close the wound till it can heal normally something stitches would normally do. This ability simply gives his mastery over his body, controlling it with ease. Another usage would be willing his body to forcibly use all his muscles or to barely use any percentage of this, the natural drawbacks to this is it would be easy to injury his body along with tiring him mentally which can make him lose control of the ability and even break his focus in combat. Typically for any ability after two posts begins to tire him mentally and after four posts he'd lose control of the altercation all together.

    Shikai and Abilities:

    Naneel- This ability gives Des and his Zanpakutō the ability to increase their speed and strength for a short duration for a quick and powerful strike, usually used when he feels he needs to create a opening in a enemy guard or break entirely. This is the follow up to his second ability. This ability and his inexperience has cause him to only use it as a support for his main attack but with enough training he could increase the duration. As of currently he could hold this for about three post before being gassed. The increase of currently within their power is 1.2x but as he is still mastering it there is room for improvement. Being at such a high level now achieving it mixed with his automatic activation go absolute slicing can prove to be a deadly mix, meaning he will likely be the type of fighter to initially go all out so prolonged fighting can and might be his undoing using these.

    Qo Nos- This means ‘Lightning strike’ fairly self explanatory. The Zanpakutō harnesses Desmonds Reiryoku to cause a large wave of lighting that intends to slice through whatever stands in it’s way. When used in unison with Naneel can cause some damage to their enemy which is why he is learning to use both in harmony. This attack is performed in one or more posts to indicate how much power he is embedding into his attack, when fused with his Death Matter this attack in a one post charge and fire has the destructive capabilities of vaporizing whole buildings in it's path on its path due to the plasma level of heat and energy coming off the attack. This is ranging in the tens of thousands of degrees naturally. When used with death matter there is a three post cool down.

    100 % Body usage- Self explanatory Hayden’s armor and mind dull the pain he recieves and cuts natural mental limitations to have his body to allow him to fully harness his power and strength at it’s full potential of course this could prove negative for long term use of his Shikai despite his regenerative abilities, even taking two-fold damage in prolong used. In this form Hayden cannot control the effort his body puts forth rather it giving all he’s got. Actually any damage he causes to himself in this form from using his powers (I.e over exerting his muscles) will not heal himself due to his body simply recognizing it as a natural change, but if he cuts his arm off that will heal it's self due to it being not from his powers. If he removed his armor or loses it in battle of course he loses this but gains his complete regen back. Yet due to how he gives his all these are the following drawbacks; His regen is cut, his strength brings harm to himself with each attack he performs after four posts, and this is tied directly to his armor.

    Absolute Slicing- Hayden shikai grants him with so much natural and empowered strength that his blade gains the ability to carve through usually things he wouldn't be able to carve to but is limited to zanpakutos or things normally most people outside of zero tier couldn't cut. These means down to the molecular level he is slicing things to separate them be them reishi leaving wounds that cannot naturally be healed, unless someone was to use super natural healing abilities dedicated to healing and provided he can't cut it. This ability only however lasts for three posts after activating his shikai as it works off his super natural power. This ability cannot be activated anymore for the duration of this battle unless he receives another power boost of some kind that brings him to full power or past it.

    Temporary invulnerability aka Resolve Armor- I do not use this likely when dealing with most of the powers on this site, Hayden Shikai armor is a pure manifestation of his intent to willpower, focus, and his Death Matter. This armor allows Hayden to compete with people much higher than his tiers for a short duration of time. It's willing to be argued that he can do battle with zero tiers in a few posts and be with able to withstand the heat and power exerted from that of a nuclear blast at point black range although only once with moderate to high damage to himself (burns and internal trauma but survivable.). The literal damage his body takes is absorbed and converted into to death matter but this slowly thin the armor and after enough time and force it will shatter- it won't remove his shikai but drastically reduce his power and effectiveness. The armor lasts however long his resolve to battles last along with how much damage he has taken, the exact amount to destroy all his armor at once would take roughly the normal amount of force to kill him. In an attempt to save the users life the armor will Literally de-manifest from the host to take an attack full on so the host takes moderate damage but it is completely destroyed for the duration of at least ten posts and takes him out of shikai.

    However seeing as this is of a trio of his death matter, focus, and willpower of you can break or disrupt either of these you can forcibly de manifest this armor. Any the slightest falter in his resolve, willpower, or mentality to kill/defeat them.

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Sun Aug 30, 2015 1:38 am
Alright here we go.

I won't be approving the tier upgrade, sorry. You've had enough of them recently and I want more effort to be put towards other threads from here on out to qualify you for an upgrade.

Body Supremacy

I don't like this ability as it is now. The way the second half of it is described doesn't sit too well with me. Where is the description to it? The drawbacks to it being used? The type of ways it can be used. One or two isn't too descriptive, I'd like the specific way described as to how these effects can occur otherwise it just seems too overpowered.

Naneel

1.2 times for now. Three post limit with being gassed for a post. (Tired)

Lightning Strike

I want somewhere in there stating that it can be blocked, its a whole lot of "Mostly anything" going on and that doesn't sit too well with me. I also want it to say it cant be used for three posts after using Death Matter infusion. He just gained Shikai, it isn't going to be very strong for now.

100% Body Usage

I don't want him shutting off his receptors yet. He dulls his pain, regen is pulled back and prolonged use can cause him to take damage two fold. There has to be some type of drawback other than how his body recognizes damage.

Absolute Slicing

" his blade gains the ability to carve through anything including Zanpakutos with ease" No. There's no way we'd approve this. Nothing is unstoppable when it comes to the site, not written like that. He can't cut through Zanpakutos or weapons yet. Things can withstand the slicing and he isn't able to just lolslicethings right now. State this in description throughout the paragraph.

The Armor

I want it stated that this armor can only be upheld if he doesn't falter. Even the slightest falter in resolve, mentality or willpower will completely shut it down. Along with that, it can't take the attack of a Supernova or Blackhole. Ill allow it to take a single attack in order to protect him but he still takes moderate damage. Along with that, when it breaks he is taken out of Shikai. With just gaining Shikai and at his current tier, such a pain would cause his body to shift entirely. Give me some edits and Ill check it again



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Sun Aug 30, 2015 2:25 am
All the proper edits have been made!
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Sun Aug 30, 2015 4:16 pm
Approved. Don't fuck it up.



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