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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Dai
Dai
'Dat Bishie
Joined : 2010-11-07
Posts : 1550
Age : 30
Location : New Zealand

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Left_bar_bleue10/100Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Empty_bar_bleue  (10/100)
Tiers:

Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Empty Re: Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3]

Wed Apr 10, 2013 6:05 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: Changes have been made, and certain things have been confirmed.
Tier: 0-4

Dragon Eyes: There are specific attributes and abilities that are connected to the highly esteemed Crow Clan, and this happens to be one of them. While many members in the Clan are able to, and usually do, unlock a low-level and basic form of these eyes, Shiro, due to both harsh training as well as possessing a natural affinity for power, and thus these eyes, has not only pushed them farther than the vast majority of Crow Clan members, but has also unlocked a derived ability for them. The primary use, as all Clan members are eventually capable of using, is to give the user a much, much more precise level of vision that allows one to pinpoint specific things, and enhance their vision so much to the point where they can actually see what average people cannot. Shiro's Dragon Eyes have advanced to such a level that he can actually see molecules and even individual atoms, as well as focus his body to move in such a way that he can even cut through a person's molecular bonds, thus destroying them on an atomic and microscopic level. These eyes also allow Shiro to mimic the physical movements of an opponent at an exact speed, thus making it seem as though he is mimicking the intended target instantly, giving him a major advantage in combat. Physical moves can then be copied completely, allowing Shiro to use them some time in the future as well, making them essentially 'copy eyes'. However, despite their strength, these are just the normal Crow Clan eye abilities, and as stated before, Shiro has unlocked a new form of them.

This new form is always active, and is essentially just a list of new abilities for the eyes. The first ability gives Shiro a perfect, three hundred and sixty degree field of vision, even while his eyes are closed, thus making it nearly impossible to sneak up on him. This field of vision is also extremely large; normally it has a diameter of fifty meters, however he can manually extend it to up to two hundred meters, thus giving him a vast range of eyesight. The second ability of these eyes allows Shiro to see through essentially all barriers, including high-level Kidō barriers, and it also let's him see invisible people and objects as well. This allows him to tell the difference between clones and the real target as well, giving him an advantage many people don't usually have against clone-type fighters. These eyes also give Shiro the ability to see the energy within an opponent, and can thus accurately gauge the level of power each individual has, even if they try and suppress their reitsu or power.

I'm not entirely sure about this. I can't see any weaknesses in them--and even the Byakugan (which these are so obviously based upon) have a blind-spot. I'd like to see at least one weakness, along with the strain discussed in-skype.

Also remember to remove unused sections of the app--aka Roleplay Sample, History and PhantomTech. I can also easily split off the extra posts if you can't.
Dai
Dai
'Dat Bishie
Joined : 2010-11-07
Posts : 1550
Age : 30
Location : New Zealand

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Left_bar_bleue10/100Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Empty_bar_bleue  (10/100)
Tiers:

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 8:18 pm
Edits have been made, and approved. See above.

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Teitoku
Teitoku
Blackblood
Joined : 2011-02-25
Posts : 2112
Age : 28
Location : Nowhere

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Left_bar_bleue0/0Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Tiers:

Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Empty Re: Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3]

Fri Dec 13, 2013 11:00 pm
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This is going into archives
All right, you haven't been active for some time so I'm going to move you into archived character apps. If you want it back, post HERE




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Posts : 19171
Age : 31
Location : Purgatory

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Platinum Points:
Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Shiro Kigakunai [APPROVED, 0-3] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
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I'm un-archiving this character upon request. It will be moved back into the approved character section.




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