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Sat May 10, 2014 12:43 pm
The Spiritual Human Template


Basic Information
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• Name: Hizazel Simmons
• Titles: Fire Monkey, flash Burn
• Age:18
• Gender: Male
• Affiliation/Rank: Freelance

• Appearance Description:
Tall mixed male that stands at 6 foot. He has bright hazel eyes with the pupil in the shape of a cats. His hoodie is a dark gray and his sweater is a bright green. The W on the left of him is this same green, as well as the leather part of the belt on his pants. His pants are black as well as his shoes. He also has a tail that resembles a monkey tail which he can manipulate freely.

He has long black hair pulled back by a head band with one chunk hanging in the front of him sepereated by a band in his hair just under his ear. The hoodie he has on over his green sweat shirt is very loos at the top and stops at the bottom of his rib cage. His nails are abnormally long and his eyes and canine teeth resemble a snakes fang and eyes. His belt shows the symbol for the brand of clothes he's wearing known to the public as wasteland.

• Appearance Picture:
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Personality

• Personality:
He's a very flirtation with people. He doesn't take kindly to beind underestimated either. Because of one of his moves and the nickname given to him by some people he happens to be underestimated a lot. He also tries not to show any extreme emotions since they can trigger adverse affects caused by his power. He is also a very social person and will talk to anybody about anything.
Except for when he was younger, he still has a slight fear of hollows from when he was younger and anything that resembles them is likely to be treated as a threat to the highest degree. He strongly dislikes hollows and he also dislikes being made fun of. He does like being flattered by people though he tries to hide it. He's very social as well and can blend in with almost any crowd. He is also known to speak rudely to people with large egos

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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes:
Reflexes-
His reflexes are like a snake. This allows him to bend at odd angles as he dodges attacks as well as strike quickly.

Durability-
His body is naturally strong against blunt attacks and sharp objects barely scratch the surface of his body. This is due to the fact beneath his skin is a layer of muscle that is heated to temperatures greater than 3,000 degrees Celsius.

immunity-
His body can resist extreme temperatures and normal fire doesn't seem to harm him. This is because his temperature inside his body is extremely higher than humans. This only applies to fire that is at his tier level or below.
ex: if someone hits him with a fireball at his tier strength or below he would feel it touch him, but it wouldn't harm him as bad as someone above his tier.

Thermal vision-
Hizazel has the uncanny ability to sense peoples body heats when they get near him. This is because of his odd affinity for fire and heat This makes him very sensitive to the varying heat around him. He can only sense up to 4 meters away from his body.

• Powers:
Flash burn-
This is the name of the fire he manifests and manipulates. The fire glows a bright red with a black hue that glows off of it. Unlike most fires this fire burns at 2x the temperature of the average fire. He can manifest four silhouettes of fire that cover his hands and feet. It can also cover the ground 4 meters from him.

Chi expulsion-
Unconciously Hizazel can expel immense amounts of chi. This chi serves to influence what his enemies do next. Over the years Hizazel has learned of his abilitiy and has learned how to manipulate it to cause his opponent to question his own abilities and possibly quit. He's also learned how to use it as a sheild and increase his durability for 3 minutes at a time. This power naturally grew with his ability and he was even able to morph his chi after he reaches a certain level.

• Pure Abilities:
Terror burst-
By allowing his body to expel corrupted spiritual pressure anyone that is within his spirirtual reach will begin to fell terror. This terror gets worse as you move closer and/or stay within the range of Hizazel's sphere of influence. This move is activated when Hizazel gains a murderous intent. This intent can be on command as he decides to kill you, or it can be pulled out of him while he is feeling intense negative emotions like anger and sadness.
Range reaches out 100 meters and lasts 4 posts. *As this move is still active it gets stronger with time.*
Also while using this move Hizazel is focused strictly on the people(s) who initialy caused him to activate the move.
Cooldown- 3 posts


Will-O-Wisp-
This ability allows Hizazel to disperse himself into several plumes of smoke to avoid taking damage from incoming attacks. He can do this a total of 3 times but after his third he has to wait for 5 posts. He can hold this ability for 2 posts. Wind can cause him to fuse together faster.


Lasts 4 posts.
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance:
He looks the same except for the fact that the end of his tail is now in flames. His hair is also snow white while in this form.

• Sacred Release Powers:
Fire Monkey-
This is what releases his sacred state. This abiity allows him to run on air by creating a road of flames that appear just in front of him and leave a trail behind him. With this ability active his speed is also increased as well while he runs on the road of fire. This fire may appear on any surface.

Abbarant tail-
The flames that are flowing out of his tail are able to morph into molten like weapons and attack. The flames can also extend, giving the weapons it creates a longer and wider range of attack.

Max Distance-45 meters
Duration-2 posts(The weapon made)
Cool down- 1 post

Full Burst-
This is an attack that he has formed by channeling and erupting all of his energy at once. The end result is red flames surrounding him. With this he all of his physical abilities are increased 3x more of what they were when he activated this move, however, as a result of maintaining this move he goes completley blind.The fire itself is also dangerous as when he is in this form the heat of the fire reaches that of the core of the earth though he can step on the ground as if the fire wasn't there. This move is the bridge between Ascended sacred and sacred state and as of yet Hizazel hasn't been able to exceed the form.
Duration-9 posts(If lasted any longer Hizazel will pass out)
Cooldown- 4 posts

Negative mode-
In this mode the fire he uses turns black

Tendril phase-
20 black chi tendrils seep out of Hizazel and rush towards the enemy. If the tendrils hit the enemy they pass through them and begin to drain their spirit energy and also cause terror to seep into the mind of the victim by secreting a hallucinogen into their body.

breathe of the damned-
A large black wave of fire erupts from the hands of Hizazel. This fire morphs into a wave of chi filled spirits that cause a person to feel the pain they felt as they died when they pass through their bodies.

Vulcan chains-
Rusted black chains rush towards Hizazels enemy from plumes of smoke that are around him like the silhouette of the sun. When they touch an object they immedeatly reach the heat of the sun and vaporize what they touch.
Only reach 20 meters in front of hizazel
15 Chains can appear at once
The chains only last 6 posts
While being protected hizazel is wrapped himself and used as the generator for the fire this causes him to loose the ability to move.
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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance:
Hizazel burns off all of his clothes and tribal swirls crawl across his entire body as the latin word for fire sits on his stomach. His eyes are blood red and his skin is a pale white. He forms a pair of shinny red shorts to serve as some sort of undergarment. Large burning orange wings appear behind him and he grows 6 tails that are completely inflamed.

• Ascended Sacred State Powers:

His body itself has reached a temperature 3x hotter than the sun.
The feathers of his wings are also projectiles that form small fireballs when they are severed from the wing for more than 3 seconds. These fire balls explode on contact and have the destructive power of a bala.
Hizazel's tails serve the same purpose as the abbarant tail, but they can't form various weapons.

Terebro Flammarum-
Two spirals of Extrememly compressed fire appear in front of hizazel and spin wildly across the ground, wripping it apart like wet paper, as they surge towards their target. This fire is ment to hit then push the person back. Each spiral is the size of one side of a road, and contain the raw power of a cero.

Vanish-
This is terror burst on a much larger scale. This can cause someone to loose all site of reallity if they stay in this for too long and the effects happen much quicker. Lasts 7 posts and takes 5 before it can be used again.

Solar beam-
Hizazel harnesses a large portion of energy from the air around him and the sun that shines over head. After he reaches his set amount he shoots the beam out with the power of a full power Cero.
Requires 3 posts to charge and is a one time attack. Once this attack is done he revertes to his human form for 17 posts and can't go past his first release for the rest of the thread.
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Background History
Both the mother and father of hizazel were attacked by hollows when they were younger. By a stroke of luck they were both saved by a tall man with spikey black hair. They passed out at that point form the attack they were suffering from when the hollows attack earlier. When they awoke they were laying in there beds as if they just woke up from a bad dream, and that's how they treated their experience. Years passed after there experience and they met one another and eventually got married. Afterwards they had a child and felt that the whole ordeal would stop haunting them.

There was a lingering peace in the family until Hizazel turned 15 That's when things began to get "Unnatural". Hizazel had begun to show extremely sensitive emotional problems especially when it came to anger. People aslo began to fear him slightly during this age as his Chi ability had began to manifest itself. When he threw these fits things tended to catch fire around him. As he got older the fires the erupted grew larger and larger. At one point in time he was embarrassed at school by someone dear to him, and this triggered one of the largest fires he made yet. In seconds his entire school was in flames and in minutes it burned to the ground. Nobody was killed and a very few were harmed but everyone who was there was scared for life. From that point on he was known to the student body as flash burn.

His parents couldn't decide on what to do with him, let alone comprehend what was happening to him. They were about to decide on what they were going to do when things got worse. They were getting ready to tell Hizazel that he was being sent to his grandmothers house till they could figure out what was wrong when they were attacked by hollows. Out of fear of the gigantic beasts that approached him he erupted in flames. Instantaneously the house was eaten by red flames and the hollows were instantly vaporized. he turned in happiness as he saw the good he did, forgetting the destruction he just caused. "Ma...pa I beat them!" He yelled happily but when he turned he saw his parents waist down under rubble.

They looked up at him and smiled before passing out. Just as they collapsed the firemen came in and people began to help put out the fire. "Come with me...if you want to prevent this from occurring again." Said a man in Hizazel's ear. The man had appeared from thin air and was now standing next to the charred stairway. Hizazel looked out the doorway to the shining lights form the ambulance truck and then back at the man. "Okay."

He spent the next year with the man as he trained his skills. The training he went through was severe and relentless. Everyday he fought the guy who took him from his home to train. He had to continuously fight until he landed at least one hit. This lasted the few months and was meant to teach him control so he didn't use all of his energy at once while he was fighting. After that he had to knock down the guy. This was to teach him determination which he would need when fighting. This lasted only a few weeks. From that point on he had to actually beat his teacher. This was to teach him various subjects both mental and physical as well as increase his powers. In between the fights he was taught about the origin of his powers and what he could possibly accomplish.

With the help of his teacher Hizazel was able to unlock his Sacred form and also unlock a stage just before Ascended sacred form. It took practice but now he is able to hold sacred form as if it was nothing and he can stay in his pre ascended form for a decent amount of time before he reaches his limit. During his trainging with his teacher he also released his Ascended Sacred form after a near death encounter with his teacher. The whole encounter was an all out fight as Hizazel was determined to show his teacher that he was able to take all he had. After all of the training he went back home and tried to find his family. They had moved from America to japan and settled down in some town apparently. Hizazel eventually found them and reunited with his family. He was expecting cries and scolding for leaving his family, but that's not what he received.

When his parents opened the door his dad punched him dead in the face. HIs mom came afterwards and slapped him with equal force. They stared at him for a few minutes then pulled him inside. "The trash needs to be taken out." They said in unison then they walked out. Hizazel was confused at first but when he was leaving with the trash he saw his mother and father in the hallway smiling and crying. He smirked and continued to take the trash out. From that point on they acted as if he never left, and as if he didn't have any powers.

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See Skill Sheet for More Information

General Skills
•Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



Will Skills
•Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



Human Reiatsu Sheet
•Power Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Energy Usage/Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Energy Resistance/Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•Physical Augmentation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Sun May 11, 2014 5:52 am
Your character's personality is too short, please add an extra two sentences or more. Ten sentences in the minimum for Platinum Hearts, I only counted eight. You can include things such as likes, dislikes, aspiration -- whatever makes the character unique. I'd suggest expanding much more, but it's up to you.

Reflexes-
His reflexes are quick like a snake and his agility is increased to that of a monkey.
Durability-
His body is naturally strong against blunt attacks and sharp objects barely scratch the surface of his body.
Speed-
He's not immensely fast but he is faster than most normal humans
immunity-
His body can resist extreme temperatures and normal fire doesn't seem to harm him.
Thermal vision-
Hizazel has the uncanny ability to sense peoples body heats when they get near him.

Reflexes: Quick like a snake, agility of a monkey... Can you give examples? such as if he were to be in a fight, what would he be able to do, what can he do with this quick, agile body of his?

Durability: Why? Is there a reason as to why he's more resistant to broken bottles and sharp objects such as swords? If so, how strong? Can it stop a slash from a sword? A piercing stab? Details on things such as this, please.

Speed: How faster than normal humans? Can he use shunpo? Is he capable of outrunning athlete level humans? Details, please.

Immunity: Is there a reason for this immunity? where did he get it? Is a natural power for him as among his spiritual powers? To what extent can he be immune to normal flame, can he be bathed in it and walk out unscathed?

Thermal Vision: Again, how? Is this a spiritual power, natural or what? What distance can it read up to? does it have any other effects?

• Powers:
Flash burn- This is the name of the fire he manifests and manipulates. The fire glows a bright red with a black hue that glows off of it. Unlike most fires this fire burns at 2x the temperature of the average fire.
• Pure Abilities:
Will-O-Wisp-
This ability allows Hizazel to disperse himself into several plumes of smoke to avoid taking damage from incoming attacks.

Flash burn: how much can he summon? Is it possibly for one to extinguish this fire? Is it natural fire? spiritually enhanced? completely spiritual? Examples of what it can incinerate. Also, given that fire burns at different temperatures given the conditions/location of the test, can you give an estimate as to how hot it can burn? In degrees or words, doesn't matter.

Will-O-Wisp How many times can he does this? If he can just constantly do it, he's untouchable and constantly puff into smoke. Also, how long can he maintain his smoke form? Is it possible to harm him in this form? Details, my friend.

Same goes for his Release State, I'd expand on it overall as the detail is a little bit lacking.

I'd also consider using the templates provided on site, copying the coding, as it will look much neater and cleaner, easier to read.





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Fri May 16, 2014 8:34 am
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Excuse me, you've been WIP'D which means you have time to work on your profile without a gorilla running you down. When you want it checked post in the WIP checking thread please and thank you.

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Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:27 pm

«MOVING OUT THIS CHARACTER APP»

Sorry for this, but I'm gonna have to move this into Old WIP. This is due to the fact it's well over two weeks old since the last post was made and we don't know if work is actively being done on this app. Therefore, into the bin it goes!


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Mon Aug 25, 2014 9:34 pm
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I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Sat Sep 13, 2014 2:02 pm
Unarchving vy za powa of waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa




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Sat Sep 13, 2014 11:30 pm
checked this in xat with sijel, informed him of changes needed, will post the the checklist after he makes his changes
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Sat Sep 27, 2014 10:18 am
Its been another 2 weeks. THis is going back into Old WIP for now.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination:Adept
  • Mental Deduction:Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


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