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• Name: Momoka Yomiko
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• Gender: Female
• Appearance Age: 23
• Age: 326
• Affiliation/Rank: None

• Appearance Description: Momoka stands around 5'4 tall with chestnut brown hair and purple eyes. Her hair often goes to her waist and may sometimes be seen in a pony tail when training. For being a bit small she seems rather agile and lady like with very graceful movements. She has an hourglass figure that compliment her curves and large D Cup bust and nicely shaped rear. Her skin is a bit pale despite spending so much time in the sun when she can. She has no piercings or tattoos on her body however she has a large scar on her back going from her left shoulder to her right side. Her skin is smooth to the touch and there's always the smell of peaches cherry blossoms in the air around her.

She always maintains good posture anyway she can and is often seen wearing a pair of purple sunglasses when she's not doing anything and randomly relaxing under the sun. She also has a pair of regular reading glasses which she often wears for the hell of it. Momoka tends to always have some cleavage showing and no one knows why, though some people think she does it to mock perverts. She also has the tendency to try to make her uniform 'better' by sewing floral designs on her sleeves or having a piece of cloth wrapped around her arm (usually flower designs as well).

Unlike most shinigami she has a set of Pajamas's that seem to be a size or two too small. She made them herself and on the back is a Sakura tree with the word Oyasumi (good night) sewn into the tree in red. If one were to go through her belongings they'd find a black and purple fancy looking dress. What it's for is something people can only guess. With that she has a bunch of clothes for blending in with civilians in the Rukongai and one can only dread the amount of money she'd spend on clothes if she were to be posted somewhere on Earth.

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• Personality: (How does your character act? Think of the different types of traits that make your character who they are and write 1-2 paragraph's at least in this section for it.)
Momoka is often very kind and caring to those she meets, always wearing a smile for those she speaks to. She's always willing to support those close to her in anyway she can while encouraging them to aim higher with their goals if she believes they can do such. She also tends to try and meet new people whenever she can, be it simply by walking up to them and saying hi or even challenging them to a sparring match. She doesn't discriminate because of the way one looks but will judge the way they act.

She can be very flirty to those she likes and has a history of having a boyfriend one day and a different one the next. When it comes to her love life she seems to be searching for someone in particular. She however tells people she never wants to break a heart and thus she will always consider her ex's as dear friends. Momoka will always keep peoples secrets safe out of respect for them but if it's too serious she may tell someone about potential betray or treason.

She has a strong hatred towards back stabbers for some unknown reason, this is due to her death as a human but she doesn't remember it so it's possibly a trait that will remain for many incarnations. She also can't stand bounts, hollows and other soul eating monsters due to loosing many friends to them and she aims to exterminate the ones that show up in Soul Society. When in danger she will always be willing to sacrifice herself to save everyone else, this has had her scolded by superiors many times.

Her love for kidou also extends to science as she wants to combine the two in anyway she can. Her excitement when making discoveries can drive people insane as she doesn't brag about them but constantly tries to share her joy with others. She also has a very large collection of books at her house in the rukongai and various alchemist and scientific tools.

• Likes: Peaches, any other fruit, decent meals, Kido, people who practice kidou, people who take interest in kidou, books, flowers

• Dislikes: Brutes, Hollows, Bounts, people who misuse kido, schemers, back stabbers
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• History: Momoka was born into a small and wealthy family in a small town in Japan, she was born aware of spiritual beings and grew up as a bit of an outcast. She always tried not to tell people about how she could see spirits but in the end she could never tell the difference, her mother became worried about her and soon called a doctor who was aware as well, he assured Momoka that she was special and that she needn't worry about how things are. The doctor soon departed after he managed to help her tell the difference between spirits and living beings and she soon resumed school after a few weeks.

She excelled in her studies as she went through school and the few friends she made had been enough for her. When she was starting High School she was attacked by a small hollow that had been prowling the town for several weeks. As she cried out her attacker was soon turned to dust as one of her friends appeared from nowhere slamming his fist into the monsters mask causing it to shatter and then the rest of the hollows body to break apart. She soon blacked out and woke up in her home with the boy sitting against her bed fast asleep from exhaustion of fighting the hollow and then needing to carry her home.

As her High school years passed she grew closer to the boy while her other friends seemed happy for the two. Everyone except a boy that Momoka had befriended when she started school, he was often lonely and they drifted apart but he always had strong feelings for her. He grew angry as he saw the woman he loved in the arms of someone else. The boy disappeared, Momoka looked for him everywhere but couldn't find him, she returned home and finished her days of high school a few months later, it was then she started to harness her powers as an aware human.

She had an affinity for energy attacks that developed into elemental attacks soon enough. When she was 20 the boy she had grown so close to and had been dating for a few years now proposed and she nearly fainted. She gladly accepted and in a few months she was married and had a nice paying job as an Engineer and Scientist. While her husband worked for a growing business she was trying to work on the next big discovery. Because of this she grew a bit paranoid about taking her work home with her as she had begun to feel as if someone was watching her as she walked home each evening.

Soon her stalker would become more bold as one night there was a knock on the door. As Momoka opened the door he saw her friend that had vanished right in front of her. He begged her to be with him and Momoka tried to tell him that she couldn't, she didn't want to but he wouldn't listen. When her husband arrived home the man pulled a Katana from behind his back and barged in, drawing the blade and the two men fought. While Momoka's husband was strong the other was simply stronger as she saw her love cut down in front of her she grew enraged and attacked the man she once called a friend but was forced back, she tried to get away but the man slashed along her back, the cut travelling deep and from her left shoulder to her right side.

Momoka fell to the ground lifeless and woke up later, she didn't know where she was. She couldn't remember anything, her entire life had been taken from her in a single moment and she couldn't recall any of it. Only her name and a feeling as if she had been betrayed as well as the pain in her back where a large scar had formed. Standing and regaining her vision she found she was in an old run down building, an old woman had taken her in and told her that she was in Soul Society when Momoka asked where she was. After some time with the old woman she eventually left to become a shinigami specializing in kidou of all kinds, she focused primarily in Hadō and bakudo with some healing practice when she could get it. At the time she was in the academy she was said to be the third fastest trainee but potentially the strongest kido specialist.

When finally becoming a fully fledged shinigami she didn't join a squad straight away and continued to practice and learn kido and spar various opponents that were known for their speed or strength so she would be adapt her strategies during fights. She has yet to actually find a place in soul society that might need her.

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• Reiatsu Color: Deep Sakura pink

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Gaia o aishimasu (Loving Gaia)

• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Bōryoku-tekina yūwaku appears as a pale skinned woman with odd demon like horns sticking out of her fore head. She stands tall at 6'5 and has light pink hair with blue highlights that goes down to her waist as it is usually freely spread out. Her skin is an odd ash grey color and she seems to have a large bust, approximately large D cup. The woman has an hourglass shape that compliments her curves.

She wears wears an odd red robe that seems a bit revealing but not too revealing. The spirit always has a giant fan with her at all times.

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• Inner World: Put very simply, Momka's inner world is extremely large. It consists of elemental regions that must be found by Momoka and her Zanpakutō Spirit. Currently Momoka has access to the regions of wind, water, fire, earth, ice, light, darkness and electricity.
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• Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : While sealed Momoka's Zanpakutō appears as an ordinary folding paper fan. While odd for a shinigami to have a weapon that appears completely harmless it's actually more than one fan in one, while those who seem to be allowed to pick it up see just an ordinary fold out paper fan, Momoka can unfold it into countless other designs and colors. the wood of the fan can change it's color and texture at will as well.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: Depending on the main color of the fan Momka is able to enhance elemental kidou and even generate the element that the fan represents at that moment. Momoka can use any element as long as she knows of it and has access to that plane in her inner world. She is able to have 2 elements active at once but the power is halved unless the elements are components for the element a kidou uses (example: fire and water will only boost fire and water kidou by half as much but will fully boost steam kidou) and often has Ice and Wind active on a hot day and wind and fire during a cold one. She can change the element/s by closing the fan and re-opening it.

Momoka's skill with elements is enough to manifest the element to enhance weaponry for a few hours at most. She's also able to make small manifestations of elements using her reiatsu.

Along with strengthening elements, her Hadō are more deadly and her bakudo are capable of making stronger binds and barriers less than likely to be broken but anyone stronger than her can easily break them. She may only enhance kido up to #45. All Kidou cast are done so as if she was a tier higher than she is. Eg. If Momoka is tier 3-2 she would cast as if she was tier 3-1.

For an odd reason the fan gives off a rather alluring scent to those near her, it's different for everyone, it's there possibly to attract people to her or even ensure people don't loose her.

• Release: "By the fury of mother nature, Loving Gaia, I need you"

• Shikai Description: A large metal bladed tessen that seems to depict a Sakura tree in a lush garden with blossoms that will change color depending on the element of the kidou Momoka is using. When unfolded fully there appears to be a lake under that tree. The design on the tessen always seems to move as if it were an actual garden and tree. A dragon seems to be flying over the garden while holding 4 orbs in its claws, these begin to glow when certain conditions are met. In the water there are four fish which also glow when conditions are met.

• Shikai Abilities: The power of this Zanpakutō's Shikai form seems to be connected to the orbs and fish on the tessen. As time goes by and she casts kido the symbols will begin to glow. The stronger the kido the more power the tessen stores and when 2,4,6 or all 8 of the symbols are glowing Momoka may channel the power stored into a blast, Bind or barrier. The Power required is usually generated by Kidou of #20 and up, the stronger the kidou the more power generated and absorbed. As the Symbols light up the strength of all kidou is also enhanced for every 2 symbols lit.
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By using the energy stored in the symbols Momoka may unleash one of three attacks, Elemental Rage, Natures shield and Gaia's Embrace. Elemental Fury gathers the powers of the elements into a powerful beam of energy that has the power of a #55 Hadō. Natures Shield creates a barrier of #50 strength and has resistance against elemental attacks against it. Gaias Embrace encases up to 4 targets in an elemental bind that relies on the rules of Momoka's Sealed ability (She may only use one element, but any element as long as she understands it) and has the power of a #45. Each abilities power varies depending on the amount of symbols used to power the ability (refer to Symbol to Kidou strength) for every 2 symbols use 3 posts are needed to cool down before she can use the symbols again (eg. use 6, 18 posts are needed to recharge).

On top of Kidou enhancement her Shikai also gives her accelerated healing as she is struck she begins to heal damage to her but it's not instantaneous. She can heal minor to moderate wounds but not regrow lost limbs (Eg. a wound that hits the bone but doesn't damage it will heal over a few hours. Her energy is also self replenishing so she's able to cast low and mid kido near endlessly. Momoka can throw the tessen like a disk where it coats itself in reiatsu and able to cut through steel, when thrown the Tessen automatically unfolds into a full circle.

Perhaps the weakest trait of her shikai is her speed, while it is enhanced she only moves a tiny bit faster than normal however her reflexes are sharper to the point she can react more quickly, she can dodge a bullet shot from a few meters away from her.

• Bankai Description: (You may fill out your Bankai Description, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)

• Bankai Abilities: (You may fill out your Bankai Powers, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)

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General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidō: Adept
  • Zanjutsu: Beginner
  • Hakuda: Beginner


Will Skills[/b]
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


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• Roleplay Sample: Kazerou couldn't help but laugh at the comment about the chandelier, he didn't care if they stared at him or not! Screw them it was funny. He then looked to the heads again as she mentioned them and nodded. Cordelia made him feel...odd, he felt confident around her and comfortable. That was rather rare with women and Kazerou mainly because he was scared of embarrassing himself but always seemed to do so anyway. This was a nice night, he was enjoying himself and he hoped it'd continue like this for a while but sadly it wouldn't. "Well, I'd rather not have people stare at you, I mean you're very pretty and they must be staring at you because of that?"

As he smiled to the girl he then saw something shine at the corner of his eye, he looked over and saw it..the blue armored monster with an odd sort of cannon forming on it's hand and it pointed it at his direction, but when he looked closer he saw the beam it was charging wasn't aimed at him but at Cordelia.

He shouted at himself in his mind as he looked to Cordelia and seemed frozen at first 'What are you doing Kazerou? DON'T JUST SIT THERE!'. And soon he had lunged from his chair to try and get Cordelia out of the way as the monster fired it's weapon. The beam shattering the glass of the front doors, some how missing everyone but only just and if Kazerou managed to get the girl out of the way it'd shoot past them and hit the wall blasting a hole in the wall. Regardless of whether it's attack hit or not the monster stepped across the road and into the restaurant as someone was trying to get away from the monster they had to go past it and as they tried it back handed the man and tossed him out of the way. It spoke and odd language as it approached Kazerou aiming at him this time.

The boy stood and grunted a bit before checking on Cordelia, if she was ok he'd sigh with relief if not he would only blame himself for being too slow. Kazerou stood and stared at the monster as he pulled out his SpiriDriver and placed it on his waist, the belt forming around his waist and locking in place. The monster stopped and nodded to Kazerou and seemed to challenge him. Pressing all four buttons on the driver and holding them down as the driver began to power up an odd sort of chime played then a tune began playing from the driver as it waited for Kazerou to complete the transformation. Kazerou was not happy at all, not only did this monster attack Cordelia, it was challenging him and it was a challenge that would end with Kazerou showing whatever this thing was that you don't fight someone who's already died once already.

"Not only did you barge in uninvited you decided to attack Delia-san...someone important to me, I will destroy you and the darkness you come from...". He took his hands off the driver and took a deep breath, exhaling as he spoke again, "Henshin...".

The driver's male and ethereal voice called out -Spiritus! Miles!- the translation being Spirit Warrior. He then took a sort of pose, holding right arm up as two orbs of light appeared above him, one green and one blue, the Blue one circled him causing a suit to appear around him then soon the blue spirit slammed into Kazerou's chest forming armor and the glass like material that formed the pattern on his rider form. It remained colorless for a while before the green spirit flew around kazerou and slammed into his back making the small booster pack appear on his back and the glass on his armor given the light green color. Then as his helmet became active it's eyes flashed as the transformation finished.


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Comments/Notes: I won't get too strict on this one, so i'll just point the simple changes that need to be done.

@Kazerou wrote:
Depending on the main color of the fan Momka is able to enhance elemental kidou and even generate the element that the fan represents at that moment. She is able to have 2 elements active at once and often has Ice and Wind active on a hot day and wind and fire during a cold one. Along with strengthening elements her Hadō are more deadly and her bakudo are stronger making binds and barriers less than likely to be broken but anyone stronger than her can easily break her bakudo as an approximate percentage of effectiveness of Momoka's Bakudo is 10% more sturdy than an average bakudo and her Hadō are only a mere 12% stronger.

For an odd reason the fan gives off a rather alluring scent to those near her, it's different for everyone, it's there possibly to attract people to her or even ensure people don't loose her.
First, you are not going to start off with a high tier, so explain what elements can she currently manipulate at the moment.
Secondly, how skilled and powerful is she in manipulating elements? Could she create basic weapons like swords? Create blasts? Explain where her skill currently stands in elemental manipulation.
Third, the element of her Zanpakutō is accordance to the weather. Its confusing, since you would need to determine and 'set' a weather for her Zanpakutō to use the specified element. I recommend that she should be able to switch elements at her own will, if not, you should give a more thorough explanation since she would possess a huge variety of elements via different weathers and of course, i'm not going to allow that until i see how this character develops.
Forth, enhancing elemental kido yet you said, 'strengthening her elements'. Wat? Kido or just her elemental kidos? Just explain what is going on in this one.
Lastly, she could enhance elemental kido yet you wrote that her Hadō is 12% stronger and Bakudo is 10% sturdier. Does it apply to all Hadō and Bakudo or just the elemental types. Please choose between the two.


@Kazerou wrote:
As time goes by and she casts kido the symbols will begin to glow. The stronger the kido the more power the tessen stores and when 2,4,6 or all 8 of the symbols are glowing Momoka may channel the power stored into a blast, Bind or barrier.
First, how powerful would the blast/bind/barrier depending how many symbols are glowing? Does it reset back to its original state once she released the symbol's power. Explain.
Second, we have kido up to #99 or even past that number. From what # kido to what # kido would she need to cast for one symbol to glow. For example, she would need to cast #1 to #30 kido for 20 times to glow, and etc.
Lastly, could she use this symbol indefinitely? Does it need to cool down after use? Would it have side effects or drain her energy after usage? Explain.


@Kazerou wrote:
When unfolded into a full circle there appears to be a lack under that tree. The design on the tessen always seems to move as if it were an actual garden and tree. A dragon seems to be flying over the garden while holding 4 orbs in its claws, these begin to glow when certain conditions are met. In the water there are four fish which also glow when conditions are met.
First, wat is this full circle? Please explain.

@Kazerou wrote:
As the Symbols light up the strength is also enhanced for every 2 symbols lit up to 5/10/15/25% however if they stop glowing the overall power of her kido goes back to normal.
First, this is confusing. Strength of the Zanpakutō's attacks or is it the strength of her kido?
Second, the 5/10/15/25% is, sometimes, hard for some to understand. Give an example of how these enhancements would take effect in an actual battle. For example, a #20 Bakudo barrier would usually able to take only one hit from a cero before it shatters. But with the #% of the enhancements, it could take # hits before it shatters, something like that. Give some sort of actual representation so everyone would understand how these enhancements would take effect.
Finally, after the symbol resets back, would it still retain its original power/enhancements or would it be reduced the more she uses the power of the symbols?


@Kazerou wrote:
Ontop of Kidou enhancement her Shikai also gives her accelerated healing as she is stuck she begins to heal damage to her but it's not instantaneous. Her energy is also self replenishing so she's able to cast low and mid kido near endlessly. When in a full circle Momoka can throw the tessen like a disk where it coats itself in reiatsu and able to cut through steel if enough force is used.
First, during healing, what wound can she heal or cannot heal? Would she only able to heal minor wounds like scratches and wounds like a sword slash and etc. Depending on the severity of the wound, how long would it require before it completely heals?
Secondly, i'm fine with self-replenishing energy, however, with her tier that i'm giving, she can't simply cast nearly endless amount of low to mid-level kido. She could simply spam kido and not have any underlying effects since even mid-level kido is still powerful. You need to give some limits to the self-replenishing energy, since i can't allow some 'lolregenerateenergy&spamshit' thing going around.
Thirdly, 'when in full circle'? Wat? Its so suddenly mentioned without prior knowing what this 'full circle' even do in the first place. Just wat dafuq?
Finally, when she throws tessen, it is coated in reiatsu, right? Considering that it can cut through solid steel if enough force is used, then how much energy would she use to empower tessen to such a point?


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however her reflexes are sharper to the point she can react to many situations quickly.
First, i need a clear example of her reflexes to the 'many situations'. Why? So people would know exactly where her reflexes would stand. We wouldn't want to be firing a blast moving 3 times the speed of sound and she could just avoid it just because her reflexes are 'sharp to the point where she could react to many situations quickly'.

I apologize if i seemed too strict, but i've already went loose on this check. If you want to know why you have so many things to fix, hit me up on skype since you know me. Otherwise, get to fixing.

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Symbols lit Power of Kidou
2 1 tier higher
4 2 tiers higher
5 3 tiers higher
8 4 tiers higher

Ok, for my own understanding, is this tiers as in Kido numbers? Like 25 becomes 26/27/28/29 or is it your Kido rating going up from Beginner to Mast or something at eight points? Or is the character going from a hypothetical 1-5 to 1-1 at 8 points?
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Symbols lit Power of Kidou
2 1 tier higher
4 2 tiers higher
5 3 tiers higher
8 4 tiers higher

Ok, for my own understanding, is this tiers as in Kido numbers? Like 25 becomes 26/27/28/29 or is it your Kido rating going up from Beginner to Mast or something at eight points? Or is the character going from a hypothetical 1-5 to 1-1 at 8 points?

Cast as if she were that many tiers higher

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Edited it, hopefully it's ok now

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