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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Thu Jan 07, 2016 2:26 pm




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» Name: Zamiel Bloodriver
» Original Name: Engra Deathsword
» Titles: The Lord of Darkness, The Innovator of Death & Carnage, Nephilim Mad Demon, Last of the Nephilim Demons, Abaddon the Ruthless, The First Mad One, Deveta of Madness
» Moniker: Kyōbōna hito
» Age: Unknown (Several Billions of Years Old)
» Gender: Berserk Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Leader of the Mad Demons(Berserker Lord), Former Member of Dark Trinity, Dark Servant of Demon God Touketsu, First Demon Knight of Demon God Touketsu, Former Grand Duke of Shadowfall
» Position: Leader of the Mad Demon Society, The Head of the Mad Clan
» Color: Blood Red
» Blood: AB Demon Negative{Poisonous Acid}
» Mad Demonic Quotes: "Enough of your petty concerns! Lost memories and family laments have no place here!"
"You have no control over who lives, and who dies. That right is mine."
"If you still draw breath, stand and face me again!"
"To be the strongest warrior means to be the last one standing!"
Demonic Family
{*}Creator/Former Master: Deveta Touketsu
{*}Only Friend/Partner: Eric Zarathos
{*}Necro Partner: Hermaeus Mora{Daedric King}
{*}Eternal Servant: The Izayoi
{*}New Mad Blood: Christopher Seiger
{*}New Descendant: Akasha Yuudeshi

» 50% Berserk Shifter Appearance Written: The appearance the mad demon taken is that to what full fledge demon called "half breed" or half demons. The Shifter form represents what happen when the mad demon chooses to be that of what a human looks like. However, Zaine can't look like a human completely the berserker mad demon and madness within him won't allow him to become a pure human. So, Zamiel killed an MDS(Most Dangerous Soldier) and took his very skin using body manipulation to make an exact duplicate but things when horribly wrong with it. The Berserker power tore very little of the skin. The form; He has thick blonde looking hair which the mad demon combs everyday to look good and fresh. One eyes like blue and the other looks demonic the most berserker beast form covers only about mostly 1/3 his body. The half demon looks well build and medium muscular even though 2/3 looks about human and 1/3 looks demonic. The parts of demonic beast cover his right leg, right arm and the right side of his face. His right arm is something of berserker beast arm; But it's large mutated four finger claw. Unlike his Berserker state; The Claw is almost that of dragon hand used for bashing and clawing. The clothing is that of demon knight his other hand is cover a demon gauntlet/glove and his lower clothing. The demonic armor is that of demon knight wearing black jeans and black boots with white metal shielding cover it from top to bottom.

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» Pure Berserker Shifter Appearance Written: The Appearance of the Berserker; Zamiel looks like a hybrid of both demonoid dragon and snake combined with complete green effects of pure poison. The hybrid berserker looks well build and super brute stronger and purely green poisonous almost like a brute warmonger. The demon's teeth of strong and pure white because the demon loves brushing his teeth keeping them clean and strong. He had demon horns something of a demon bull which could be used ramming the fuck out of enemy something of a bull charge. The demon's knuckles and claws and are green metal looking and sharp used for punching and slashing whenever.

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» True Nephilim Appearance Written: Zamiel Bloodriver was created by as the first Nephilim(First Mad Demon). He had something of dragonian red appearance which is kinda unique with some yellow tattoos on his chest/shoulders. The mad demon looks well-built has something of an muscular body looking strong and athletic. Zamiel has a demonic height of (6'2) and a weight of (239.lbs/pounds) of that of mid-size bodybuilder having an dark complexion. Having a number of scars on his body to fight opponents; One of the reasons of his extreme trainings to keep his strong body the way that it is. The Mad Demon's armored body cover most of his body, shoulders and cover for his demonic back for protection. His face of that of dragon hybrid the unique thing about it is that the mad demon has about four eyeballs and no known nose. The demon ears of that of demon wings upon the sides of forehead. His mouth is that of a beast having about 256 dragonoid small teeth for chomping and devouring. Upon his hands, Zamiel's wrist and claws are cover with an dragonoid armor each of the claws are sharp of an daedric style. With his wrists, Zamiel look something like small blade. On his back the demon's wings and kinda burned and give off some energy allowing the wings to fly, soar even glide when needed. The demon wings are that of burn dragonoid wings they made look burned and broken but they can be used for flying. Sometimes the demon wings can be used as a method of protection against enemy's attacks and weapons.

» Nephilim Clothing: The demon may hate human but the demon appreciates their styles of unique clothing and accessories. Zamiel always wears black underwear or boxers which is something on hide his mentionables. He wears unique warrior pants which are red-white/zipper based pants something of rockstar pants which cover some or all his legs. The demon can wears any boots/shoes of any kinds because of something his dragonoid feet making it impossible to wear shoes. So the demon must be barefooted. As for shirt or upper clothing nothing with long sleeves because it would be torn instantly the only thing that would work. Muscle Shirts would be the only thing the mad demon would be wearing in this dragonoid body.

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» Personality: Mad Demons are one of the unique demons with a berserker personality fueled with rage this never stops. One unique motto follows itself upon each mad demon including the original mad demon "Crush your enemies and See them driven before you". Zamiel's well being is that of an hellbent demon with revenge and destruction always being on his mind and power base. In truth, He's a chaos rule-breaker always finding new ways and new levels of the destruction and chaos for his mad passions to grow and thrive. Causing an unholy anarchy and making his enemies bleed or die is the mad demon's way of life to some. Zamiel being the first and original mad demon this is something of an mandate which the mad one take very seriously. In battle, He takes his opponents and their fighting styles seriously because the mad demon wants to win and achieve victory. He calmly thinks and studies what his opponent's weaknesses are before destroying the enemy body and soul. If he loses a battle it doesn't end there the mad one will retreat but he'll plot revenge and figure out what went wrong. Every battle is like another opportunity to test his strength and hone in on his abilities and what he needs to do to succeed. About 5 of the seven sins would be the best examples of the mad demon's new dark nature. Greed would follow the mad demon's desires for genocide and power the total end of something or someone getting in his way. Zamiel would truly go to great lengths to cause raw bloodshed and horror upon those who stand in his way. The demon doesn't feel pity, remorse not even fear and a mad demon like him will not stop even death wouldn't be a factor. Until his enemy or problem are dead gone; Greed is something of destruction, utter chaos and power to grow even to push themselves to be better. Wrath follows under the category of what vengeance is being a power-hungry warmonger with the cravings of death upon his mind. This never stops within a mad causing carnage, genocide and utter destruction with raining with the blood of his enemies sin itself would be become a mad demon's soul if it could. Gluttony won't be just food at the power of everything would best describe to have it all the power of life and death. The very same power his friend Eric Zarathos had in the beginning; Zamiel wants that the power of creation and death itself. Power of an Mad God. To reach that very power that is impossible to others the legendary title and power of that to a Mad Deveta someone of an god of madness upon this world. To reach power that no one can.....Again, Gluttony to him is power really food is a commodity to him which comes and goes to make humans even yuudeshis fat and obese. A Mad Demon would choose the rip apart that very sin and choose to obtain power, new abilities and perhaps an mad empire.....the sin is a stepping stone to his dark goals.

Loyalty and Servitude
This would be the only thing the mad demon like him would consider when the stakes are high or master's dark influence takes him over completely. Which can happen if the right power is used upon him then the mad demon will be nothing more than a complete servant to someone's wants. Zamiel Bloodriver can be completely loyal to someone's cause without question their motives or ideals what more important to him is getting the job done. As soldier's mind, Zamiel follows only two things which are the mission objectives and protecting the person's family or friends the only things that matter. As a Protector, He may hate it but his master or mistress wishes will be followed; He'll risk putting his life to ensure safety and security. Nothing else matters to him except that mission or job and following it to the letter whatever rewards come with it and not complain or disagree. If he fails, then the demon will take full responsibility for the failed mission cursing the losses, pure choice selection and hopes nothing bad happens. If he succeeds, Zamiel will briefly smirk knowing the mission is complete that the demon did 100% good job. Hoping his master or employer is pleased what the berserker demon did and moving on the next. As a Mad Leader, Zamiel expects nothing but the best for his warriors and soldiers acting much more of a drill sgt ensuring no screwups, accidents and failures from his men and women soldiers

Lonely
The path of nothingness is what it's called to some warriors; Touketsu had imprisoned him into a Black Nexus for Ten Long Decades. Enough to drive craziness and madness into one's mind it killed a human in mere seconds; Zamiel survived it all. The first part is dealing with fear for months long and finally disconnecting it from your body is impossible. This allowing madness to seek into one's brain the final part is realizing nobody is going to help you. Accepting the path to nothingness learning no one will help you with one's goals. He's the first mad demon knowing to be dark nomadic in nature for being locked away for so fucking long. Some like a human hitchhiker traveling to demonic place to place finding enemies to defeat or butcher but no place to call home. His madness took him to whole new level once a fight was over and his enemy defeated the demon will disappear into a dark dimension. To be one with shadows and quiet as a mad demon could be to be purely isolated from everyone allowing pure madness to grow once more.

Family and Friendships
The heart of the madness never changes this mad demon had never care about anything besides family and friends mean nothing to him. In his mind, Zamiel believes such things to demons shouldn't even exist and that such things like relationships will ruin your dreams and goals. Really Friends....Really Garbage only good for consuming resources the demon doesn't want someone that can stab you in the back later. That would be a inconvenience to him and his goals someone that would hold him down for the rest of his life without the hint of help. A mad demon doesn't call for help unless desperate for power; Eric Zarathos his former partner would be a good example to this. Zamiel would rather use every mad option to his advantage first before even considering that fucked up method of human and shinigami error. But friends are like a chess game if you don't protect completely a person a hurt you even control your lifestyle if you're not careful. In short Friends are unpredictable trash to him. Family is something of honor tradition to a mad demon if your can't respect where you come from. Then you as a mad demon will fail; A person's family is something you cherish and take with you in a the long run a mad demon understands it. Family is something taken to his heart they created him giving him the knowledge and tools. It's his mission to see it through till the very end. Something you can't forget because it what defines you and your origin. Personally, Zamiel wishes to have a family again but to his ruthlessness that can never be a possibility to him. This would be just a soft memory to look back find whatever mistakes we're made and move on.

Vengeance and Dark Hearted
He has always been a ruthless demon killing enemies without a mere thought really attack now and ask questions later. Slaughter those before they kill a mad demon; Zamiel's search and destroy attitude had been his lifetime achievement. At his very core the demon's vicious side will take over showing no mercy to an enemy until death approaches. He doesn't care if the enemy is sick or dying the mad demon wants war and he'll never stop attacking until the person is unconscious or dead. Sometimes; Zamiel will methods of dark humor ONLY when the demon is sure of winning a battle or finding a unique way of destroying his target. Methods of chaotic brutality are always on his mind the fuel and brain food for a mad demon it what keeps people like them going. Respect to them is earned when you do something for a mad demon then that mad demon will honorbound that and do something for you. However; Zamiel calls this fate the demon may respect that person but if should some mutiny or betrayal happens all bets are off and the killing starts. Mad Demons like him don't have to follow this to the letter the weak die and strong survive you respect him the demon leaves you alone. If you harm/betray him then goodbye respect and hello death. The chaos within a mad demon will take over and all other things will be cast aside until the person that betray him gets what's coming. As for hatred the mad demon hates a lot of stuff even beings calling themselves "Death Gods.' These Soul reapers which the mad demon thinks that an utter disgrace which the demon has a deep seeded hatred for them. Because mostly of the title and their weaponry which the demon believes to be something of fucking accident of Touketsu's part giving these creatures such power. Offspring of death's design that need to be destroyed along with and quincys and the iramasha clan. Just embarassing creatures that made him sick to his stomach

» Likes: Winning, Violence, Women, The dark will to succeed, pushing himself beyond his limitations, and never giving up even when the odds are stacked against him, Fighting to be the destructive fighter, Brawls, Finding new ways of increasing his powers and striking powers, Bloodshed when it not his own blood

» Dislikes: Death; Friends turning their backs on him, Betrayal, Somebody or some people who think their better when they know they aren't.




» History: Zamiel Bloodriver was the unique demon that the demon god ever created his creation was from the idea of something new. In truth, Touketsu was pissed with one of his soldiers being defeated by his long time enemy and really at his wits end with the demon soldier. Enough to destroy the weakling which the demon god did but came with an idea the creation of another. But this new creation will have madness and it's very power into the creation's core and he'll see what will blossom. The demon god created the demon from the pits of hell the monster was spawned from the fire as a demon was born. The creation drew breath as he was the 2,281st demon that the demon god created from his raw power. However, Touketsu quickly chained and imprisoned the demon with a black vortex known to very few as the "Black Nexus". A place of extreme darkness where a demon could see or hear anything a dark evil place where madness can blossom. The demon lost everything it meant to be a demon within that place as the madness power started to rise to lose one's sense of place and desire. Allowing such madness to take shape for twenty long decades the demon was imprisoned in that place not allowed eat, breath or even talk. However, Touketsu's plan was working a new form of zoa koa was forming corrupting the demon's mind. Anything like Humanity know to demons was gone at the point losing everything upon creation was being burned and erased. It was like demons were eating his brain and replacing it with something as his blood began bleeding from everywhere. The demon's personality was the first thing that was changed then his body forming into a berserker monster. What it meant to have friends and family it was all being erased from the demon's mind. In it place madness the living power rage and personality of a demonic brute. He wanted to scream from the internal and external pain this new power but the demon could only cry until their was nothing left. During the 3rd Decade the crazed structure started nourishing his brain producing rage, wrath and destruction those three evil products kept him going. During the 6th Decade; Creation was producing dreams on chaos and bloodshed as his mind kept repeating this over and over to no end. His mad power was stabilizing itself into his heart even within the bloodstream keeping it madness fresh and limitless to the point of no return. The 15th Decade, Enemies would meant nothing to cause one's destruction and ridding them from existence began becoming his desires.....Family and friends were meaningless. In his mind the thought of friends was "Garbage only good for consuming resources" The Black Nexus was changing him into something worse from demon with something more that a brute but madness power was overflowing with him and progressing. Finally, Creation accepted the fate given to him on the 20th decade as the demon was ascended to madness everlasting become the first and relentless mad demon. He emerged from the Black Nexus with the demon god looking at him wanting to know his creation's name "Zamiel Bloodriver" is what the mad demon answered.

Dark Reign
With hard trainings, Zamiel prove himself upon the battlefield attacking the demon god's enemies without the slightest hint of regret or doubts becoming a killer machine. Every war or battle was another chance for the mad demon to prove his madness was superior to all demons and demon soldiers. However, Zamiel didn't really care about his goals or ideals only the demon's god will was what matter to him and completing his mission. Other demons wondered why this special demon nerve converse or even talk to the others, Zamiel never thought of it only his mission matters. Once Touketsu's objectives were met and enemy was dead the mad demon would just disappear without a word being said. Back to his only home which was darkness itself waiting for the next mission hoping his master would bring a stronger enemy and he'll enjoy watching his enemy die. One of his greatest battles was once against a unique human within the demon world that surprising killed demons upon his path. A warrior named M.D. Geist a super bio-human created to become a tool of war that was killed many years ago however the human was proving his worth. Touketsu didn't like it one bit thus the ruthless kill order was given and the mad demon was summoned from his seclusion place hoping for blood and death. With his known victories, Touketsu granted Zamiel a personal demon army however they were only told to keep watch nothing more. Their general was given direct orders to takedown and destroy the human abomination and leave nothing in the wake. He fought against this M.D. Geist surprisingly enough prove to be the most difficult and extreme battle the mad demon ever face. This Geist was a monster a well known urban legend when the human was alive "A God of Death" known to a select few so the stories were true. The super soldier to this battle to the extreme which peak the mad demon's interest as the two fought they discovered much about themselves. Each attack and every wound they realized they were both alike almost like brothers seeing themselves. Zamiel enjoyed it the ruthlessness from the human was unbelievable the madness and pure rage this human brought. He wanted to devour this legendary human with the intense rage and the desire for pure battle was breakfast, lunch and dinner to a mad demon. Geist attacked ferocious and with developed rage; Zamiel loved every moment of it this person must be devoured and consumed body and soul.

This war battle lasted for days until finally the mad demon used his relentless power to destroy the human's bones into a thick paste. The berserker took the human's flesh making it his own which the demon started his own research take something of a human form with demonic features. Something that he could use later but the mission was complete

Mad Uprisings
Among victories, Zamiel started the creation of a mad legacy which led to the creation of an unique virus that would transform anyone into a mad demon in mere months. Through experimenting on demons the virus started proving some good results the corrupting virus would grow to become the "Mad Alice" strain. It doesn't attack the mind completely at first but it works with the person's rage making it grow into more rage effect. In time the crimson virus affect both the body and the mind replacing everything what that person was then the change begins into a mad demon of madness. However, He made the crimson virus special for his armies in wouldn't change in just months but in mere little seconds making his mad army finally complete. At long last, Zamiel had created his mad clan from his own design people of pure madness following the orders of the mad leader which legion took many places within the demon world as their own. Many other demonic clans didn't like the takeover and challenged the mad demon race with full unrelenting force. The other clans didn't these berserkers loved war and battle being something of a way of life to them; Mad Army destroyed leaving nothing in their wake. About fourteen demon clans died in berserker army assault they pillage their town and destroyed what the demon clans held dear. Until nothing was left; Zamiel destroyed many demons the mad uprising had begun the mad demons were superior to the demon race. It was something the mad leader could his society the only thing missing was something of a mad religion. Touketsu was pleased with this at least but something about it made him angry the mad demon was growing in power too quickly. What the demon god didn't understand why Zamiel's power was growing to unknown demon levels of zoa koa energy. The madness zoa koa power was ruthless in nature then the original demon zoa koa which questions began surfacing about this mad uprising. Something needed to be done....

Demonic Downfall
Unknown things started happening with the disappearance with the demon god; Zamiel couldn't find the creator anywhere in the demon world or any dimensional place. This was something of a mystery until a month passed it seemed the deveta fought against forces and lost badly. Someone said people from this "Soul Society" we're the people responsible this led to the Bloodwars between the demons and shinigami. Zamiel and his mad demon army led the first assault many of his many demons died during some surprise bankai attacks but the mad leader waited. He wanted to see the shinigami and while they were distracted attacking the first squad then him and the second squad attack with full force. Members of the Gotei 13 were sent and then some idiots went for a charge and then Zamiel's troops attack. The second squad managed to destroy Squad 2, 5 and 10 during the sneak attack as the mad leader was about to go after the captains and murder the captain commander. But the order was given to stand down the thing it wasn't Touketsu it was someone else who would be stupid enough to give that order after they made some results here. The unknown person telepathically told the mad leader to stand down and return the demon world immediately, Zamiel thought this bullshit. But the demon followed orders and the order to retreat was given as the mad demon returned to demon world to wonder who the fuck gave him that order. Touketsu that was certain but someone else was on his throne in the form of a girl but her power was strange it was that to the deveta himself what was going on. This Asthavon family who had a grand connection to the demon god were somewhat the new demon family within the demon world. One of their strongest members approached Zamiel claiming to be this Heart of the Deveta; Zamiel didn't believed one word. This Khala Asthavon the new Deveta; Zamiel wanted answers what stupid fool gave this child power and mad demon was about to attack the two demons fought a battle. Some fucking this brat was stronger and powerful than him this was impossible even though the mad demon fought with brute force. Khala was unknown creature and managed to gain the upper hand upon the mad demon to the point where the mad one was beaten.

Another Asthavon stopped him and did something to his body the man was fading away and his madness power we're absorbed. Zamiel Bloodriver was presumed dead at that point

Decades later, Someone managed to revive him through a power called death energy which the demon took the name "Engra Deathsword". He bonded with a newer mad demon named Eric Zarathos; The two form something of a union together which lasted for a long while many victories and defeats the two share. Which, Engra found out that his partner was the darkside of the forbidden iramasha the power of the shadows as the mad demon's disposal. That was something that caught his attention; Joshua Iramasha shared many secrets with the berserker. But the shadow iramasha revealed the person responsible for training his shadow powers, Zamiel found out this Hermaeus Mora the daedric king taught the iramasha. Which Joshua arranged a meeting with the shadow master; But that meeting came to an halt when the mad demon challenge a suguiran knight and was defeated completely. Zamiel thought the worse was going to happen but the berserker wanted to see this through to the end. However, Eric thought death was coming so as a failsafe the mad demon allowed the berserker to take the necro people within him. Zamiel was sad a little bit because a friend was going to be lost to him worse like before. Eric Zarathos refused give on and this Power of the Order and the mad demon was destroyed body, power and soul.

However, Zamiel's life didn't end the meeting was made with the daedric king; Hermaeus Mora appeared in the broken berserker. This unique master was something of an entity the thing didn't seem to have a body at all but was a powerful being which seemed something important. It was onto business; Zamiel wanted his body and raw mad power back and Hermaeus Mora was willing to grant him that for a price. The entity wanted to bond completely with to become his new partner and things will flourish between them. Zamiel accepted Mora's terms and the entity began training him to unique demon powers and making the demon stronger.

Then something happen unexpectedly being revived by another mad demon and the raw power from two enemies. The Satanic Pentagram was flowing with many souls and then the first mad demon was being restored and his memories were back. His power base was coming back to him but the mad demon didn't forget his deal as the entity decided to unite with him. Hermaeus Mora was complete combined to the berserker body sleeping inside the demon's ribcage. Zamiel's body was restored all due to a mad demon named Christopher Seiger and his evil plans. Being restored Zamiel will take major steps and trials to ensure his revenge.
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Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Beginner


DE Control
  • Semi-Immortal Capacity: Beginner
  • Breakdown Skill: Beginner
  • Necromancy Strength: Beginner
  • DE Barrier: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Warp: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Fighting Style: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Gem Creation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:05 pm




» History: Zamiel Bloodriver was the unique demon that the demon god ever created his creation was from the idea of something new. In truth, Touketsu was pissed with one of his soldiers being defeated by his long time enemy and really at his wits end with the demon soldier. Enough to destroy the weakling which the demon god did but came with an idea the creation of another. But this new creation will have madness and it's very power into the creation's core and he'll see what will blossom. The demon god created the demon from the pits of hell the monster was spawned from the fire as a demon was born. The creation drew breath as he was the 2,281st demon that the demon god created from his raw power. However, Touketsu quickly chained and imprisoned the demon with a black vortex known to very few as the "Black Nexus". A place of extreme darkness where a demon could see or hear anything a dark evil place where madness can blossom. The demon lost everything it meant to be a demon within that place as the madness power started to rise to lose one's sense of place and desire. Allowing such madness to take shape for twenty long decades the demon was imprisoned in that place not allowed eat, breath or even talk. However, Touketsu's plan was working a new form of zoa koa was forming corrupting the demon's mind. Anything like Humanity know to demons was gone at the point losing everything upon creation was being burned and erased. It was like demons were eating his brain and replacing it with something as his blood began bleeding from everywhere. The demon's personality was the first thing that was changed then his body forming into a berserker monster. What it meant to have friends and family it was all being erased from the demon's mind. In it place madness the living power rage and personality of a demonic brute. He wanted to scream from the internal and external pain this new power but the demon could only cry until their was nothing left. During the 3rd Decade the crazed structure started nourishing his brain producing rage, wrath and destruction those three evil products kept him going. During the 6th Decade; Creation was producing dreams on chaos and bloodshed as his mind kept repeating this over and over to no end. His mad power was stabilizing itself into his heart even within the bloodstream keeping it madness fresh and limitless to the point of no return. The 15th Decade, Enemies would meant nothing to cause one's destruction and ridding them from existence began becoming his desires.....Family and friends were meaningless. In his mind the thought of friends was "Garbage only good for consuming resources" The Black Nexus was changing him into something worse from demon with something more that a brute but madness power was overflowing with him and progressing. Finally, Creation accepted the fate given to him on the 20th decade as the demon was ascended to madness everlasting become the first and relentless mad demon. He emerged from the Black Nexus with the demon god looking at him wanting to know his creation's name "Zamiel Bloodriver" is what the mad demon answered.

Dark Reign
With hard trainings, Zamiel prove himself upon the battlefield attacking the demon god's enemies without the slightest hint of regret or doubts becoming a killer machine. Every war or battle was another chance for the mad demon to prove his madness was superior to all demons and demon soldiers. However, Zamiel didn't really care about his goals or ideals only the demon's god will was what matter to him and completing his mission. Other demons wondered why this special demon nerve converse or even talk to the others, Zamiel never thought of it only his mission matters. Once Touketsu's objectives were met and enemy was dead the mad demon would just disappear without a word being said. Back to his only home which was darkness itself waiting for the next mission hoping his master would bring a stronger enemy and he'll enjoy watching his enemy die. One of his greatest battles was once against a unique human within the demon world that surprising killed demons upon his path. A warrior named M.D. Geist a super bio-human created to become a tool of war that was killed many years ago however the human was proving his worth. Touketsu didn't like it one bit thus the ruthless kill order was given and the mad demon was summoned from his seclusion place hoping for blood and death. With his known victories, Touketsu granted Zamiel a personal demon army however they were only told to keep watch nothing more. Their general was given direct orders to takedown and destroy the human abomination and leave nothing in the wake. He fought against this M.D. Geist surprisingly enough prove to be the most difficult and extreme battle the mad demon ever face. This Geist was a monster a well known urban legend when the human was alive "A God of Death" known to a select few so the stories were true. The super soldier to this battle to the extreme which peak the mad demon's interest as the two fought they discovered much about themselves. Each attack and every wound they realized they were both alike almost like brothers seeing themselves. Zamiel enjoyed it the ruthlessness from the human was unbelievable the madness and pure rage this human brought. He wanted to devour this legendary human with the intense rage and the desire for pure battle was breakfast, lunch and dinner to a mad demon. Geist attacked ferocious and with developed rage; Zamiel loved every moment of it this person must be devoured and consumed body and soul.

This war battle lasted for days until finally the mad demon used his relentless power to destroy the human's bones into a thick paste. The berserker took the human's flesh making it his own which the demon started his own research take something of a human form with demonic features. Something that he could use later but the mission was complete

Mad Uprisings
Among victories, Zamiel started the creation of a mad legacy which led to the creation of an unique virus that would transform anyone into a mad demon in mere months. Through experimenting on demons the virus started proving some good results the corrupting virus would grow to become the "Mad Alice" strain. It doesn't attack the mind completely at first but it works with the person's rage making it grow into more rage effect. In time the crimson virus affect both the body and the mind replacing everything what that person was then the change begins into a mad demon of madness. However, He made the crimson virus special for his armies in wouldn't change in just months but in mere little seconds making his mad army finally complete. At long last, Zamiel had created his mad clan from his own design people of pure madness following the orders of the mad leader which legion took many places within the demon world as their own. Many other demonic clans didn't like the takeover and challenged the mad demon race with full unrelenting force. The other clans didn't these berserkers loved war and battle being something of a way of life to them; Mad Army destroyed leaving nothing in their wake. About fourteen demon clans died in berserker army assault they pillage their town and destroyed what the demon clans held dear. Until nothing was left; Zamiel destroyed many demons the mad uprising had begun the mad demons were superior to the demon race. It was something the mad leader could his society the only thing missing was something of a mad religion. Touketsu was pleased with this at least but something about it made him angry the mad demon was growing in power too quickly. What the demon god didn't understand why Zamiel's power was growing to unknown demon levels of zoa koa energy. The madness zoa koa power was ruthless in nature then the original demon zoa koa which questions began surfacing about this mad uprising. Something needed to be done....

Demonic Downfall
Unknown things started happening with the disappearance with the demon god; Zamiel couldn't find the creator anywhere in the demon world or any dimensional place. This was something of a mystery until a month passed it seemed the deveta fought against forces and lost badly. Someone said people from this "Soul Society" we're the people responsible this led to the Bloodwars between the demons and shinigami. Zamiel and his mad demon army led the first assault many of his many demons died during some surprise bankai attacks but the mad leader waited. He wanted to see the shinigami and while they were distracted attacking the first squad then him and the second squad attack with full force. Members of the Gotei 13 were sent and then some idiots went for a charge and then Zamiel's troops attack. The second squad managed to destroy Squad 2, 5 and 10 during the sneak attack as the mad leader was about to go after the captains and murder the captain commander. But the order was given to stand down the thing it wasn't Touketsu it was someone else who would be stupid enough to give that order after they made some results here. The unknown person telepathically told the mad leader to stand down and return the demon world immediately, Zamiel thought this bullshit. But the demon followed orders and the order to retreat was given as the mad demon returned to demon world to wonder who the fuck gave him that order. Touketsu that was certain but someone else was on his throne in the form of a girl but her power was strange it was that to the deveta himself what was going on. This Asthavon family who had a grand connection to the demon god were somewhat the new demon family within the demon world. One of their strongest members approached Zamiel claiming to be this Heart of the Deveta; Zamiel didn't believed one word. This Khala Asthavon the new Deveta; Zamiel wanted answers what stupid fool gave this child power and mad demon was about to attack the two demons fought a battle. Some fucking this brat was stronger and powerful than him this was impossible even though the mad demon fought with brute force. Khala was unknown creature and managed to gain the upper hand upon the mad demon to the point where the mad one was beaten.

Another Asthavon stopped him and did something to his body the man was fading away and his madness power we're absorbed. Zamiel Bloodriver was presumed dead at that point

Decades later, Someone managed to revive him through a power called death energy which the demon took the name "Engra Deathsword". He bonded with a newer mad demon named Eric Zarathos; The two form something of a union together which lasted for a long while many victories and defeats the two share. Which, Engra found out that his partner was the darkside of the forbidden iramasha the power of the shadows as the mad demon's disposal. That was something that caught his attention; Joshua Iramasha shared many secrets with the berserker. But the shadow iramasha revealed the person responsible for training his shadow powers, Zamiel found out this Hermaeus Mora the daedric king taught the iramasha. Which Joshua arranged a meeting with the shadow master; But that meeting came to an halt when the mad demon challenge a suguiran knight and was defeated completely. Zamiel thought the worse was going to happen but the berserker wanted to see this through to the end. However, Eric thought death was coming so as a failsafe the mad demon allowed the berserker to take the necro people within him. Zamiel was sad a little bit because a friend was going to be lost to him worse like before. Eric Zarathos refused give on and this Power of the Order and the mad demon was destroyed body, power and soul.

However, Zamiel's life didn't end the meeting was made with the daedric king; Hermaeus Mora appeared in the broken berserker. This unique master was something of an entity the thing didn't seem to have a body at all but was a powerful being which seemed something important. It was onto business; Zamiel wanted his body and raw mad power back and Hermaeus Mora was willing to grant him that for a price. The entity wanted to bond completely with to become his new partner and things will flourish between them. Zamiel accepted Mora's terms and the entity began training him to unique demon powers and making the demon stronger.

Then something happen unexpectedly being revived by another mad demon and the raw power from two enemies. The Satanic Pentagram was flowing with many souls and then the first mad demon was being restored and his memories were back. His power base was coming back to him but the mad demon didn't forget his deal as the entity decided to unite with him. Hermaeus Mora was complete combined to the berserker body sleeping inside the demon's ribcage. Zamiel's body was restored all due to a mad demon named Christopher Seiger and his evil plans. Being restored Zamiel will take major steps and trials to ensure his revenge.
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Thu Jan 21, 2016 10:16 pm

Alright, I'm going to personally deny this unless another staff member has an objection. A fair portion of this profile is still being copy pasted along with some things just not making sense, such as how Phantom Tech would be accessible if there isn't really a good reason to have it or explanation as to how it was received in detail.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Thu Jan 21, 2016 10:45 pm

Ma'am I would like to know what was copy and paste.......I would everything completely by hand please tell me what was copy and paste. Please......

What was copy and paste nothing was copy and paste ???? I rewritten everything the stuff from the other bio that was deleted
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Thu Jan 21, 2016 11:07 pm

That's sort of the issue first of all Kade. Everything was deleted. I can't for certain tell you exactly what was copy and pasted other than the fact that I read his profile before and most of it seems extremely similar with little changes as when I first looked over it. I haven't been staff for all too long but I'm fairly certain that you're not supposed to just outright delete a denied app yourself. You can rewrite everything but if it's still 90% like the original, it looks a lot like copy and pasting. Again, I can't say exactly what was copied and pasted since you deleted the original, I can only say it looks -extremely- similar to what I read the first time when the admin team looked over the first version of this profile.

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Thu Jan 21, 2016 11:45 pm

Hold it.......I'll explain everything the first attempted app was copy and paste from different dead people which was denied by Imakuran. So I didn't remake this from the original nothing.
I started a fresh completely different one.

Everything was completely done over nothing was copy and paste from stolen stuff.
Except the quotes and some demon natural abilities.

Personality: Wasn't a copy and paste......I did everything by hand and computer key.

Perhaps some stuff looks like it from Eric Zarathos and Christopher Seiger which were based off the whole thing. But that just the thing......Engra was a demon before the Asthavon turned him into an madness entity. Everything and his power were based from Eric's design and Chris's design.......Zamiel is the super demon lord of mad demons.....not a demon god. Originally, He was Eric's DE......So whatever Eric....Zamiel took and learned from him. Whatever Eric learned...He learned.......some of his powers were based off Eric.......they were both two beings in one body.

This demon was allowed to sleep in his decades of exile.....which explains the god madness........

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Bad Skyrim idea that been deleted.......I wanted some other powers.......like something of Spawn's necroplasm guess I'll work on that.
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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Fri Jan 22, 2016 10:50 pm

I believe Imakuran wanted you to rework this app and basically remake it rather than retype a majority of it by hand. I can see t hat a lot of work has went into this but the fact of the matter is that most of this is still simply taking things without much difference. With Imakuran's original check and option of taking the weakened version with no powers, that was the most acceptable option since it was stated that this application should be denied. I'm going to be moving this to denied, and I won't be giving the option of rewriting it or remaking it to essentially be just as powerful as the original despite being an offshoot of it. If you wish to make this a 5-5 with no powers if you're really set on the idea of having this be a product of him, by all means go ahead. If you aren't going to do that, then I'm personally sorry.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Zamiel Bloodriver [Approved 5-5]   Wed Jan 27, 2016 12:33 am

Wait I'm to take Phantom's advice but it would been nice for Ima to just tell me what needed fixing just like with original and I would have weaken it down or erase it.

I'm going to take advice of Phantom advice and do it.
I'll start off at 5-5. Removing his powers and abilities or make him acceptable

The reason I wanted a powerful and deadly foe.
The incident thread with Kanda....I guess where it started when that dude threaten to kill Eric on purpose.
An incident with Damien...but he faced two 0-tiers
I'm sick of them dying every fucking time even when 1-1 or weaker. I want to up a good fight but when someone uses and unstoppable attack on me and kills my guy or character. Sure, I accept it but when it six or times then I have a with a problem with that when the attack is unblockable even undodgeable. That's all, I just want an evil character to be ruthless like Eric once was.....or restored
But Gamedragon, I want Engra my new evilest guy to have a chance so I'll take the advice given and start at 5-5; No powers
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