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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Raven (wip)   Wed Feb 17, 2016 12:29 am

Basic Information


Name: Raven Schatz
Appearance Age: 25
True Age: 2,369
Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Soul Society, Kidoushu

» Appearance Written: Raven stands at five feet and eleven inches tall. She has a thick and muscled but lithe Scandinavian build,that she has over the years forged into a very athletic body. She has long ebony hair, that stops at her shoulders. The sclera of her eyes are purple, the irises are a light pink and her pupils are silver.Her teeth are serrated and dagger like. Her skin is silver- white, and her fingernails are always black, as are her toenails. She has a thin scar running across her shoulder down her chest and stopping at her navel.There is another scar running from the middle of her neck down to her left buttock.

Her right arm is completely prosthetic, from the shoulder down. Her left fore-arm is also a full prosthetic. She has modified the offical shinigami uniform, to suit her own tastes. She has westernized it to instead look like a fusion od plate and scale mail, fused with a dress. She wears a purple sash instead of the standard obi. She wears a necklace that belonged to her mother, that has a pentacle witha piece of amethys int he center, a snake's fang, and a red, black tipped, gold trimmed dragon scale shaped into a heart. She has since added a raven's feather and a wolf fang to this necklace. On her left hand she wears a signet ring, that is all one piece of metal that is designed to imprint a crescent moon into wax or other materials. On her right hand, she wears a wedding ring with a pentacle on it that int he middle has the kanji for love etched in.


Personality Section

» Personality: She is sharp witted, calm, and level headed at most times, and she is very highly intelligent. Raven is, if anything else, an experienced strategist and a very open minded person. Though she is a very skilled combatant, she prefers to try diplomacy, deception, and any other means necessary to resolve issues before using violence. She is kind and gentle to those close enough to her to be allowed inside her very closed sphere of acquaintances. Anyone outside that sphere, regardless of their position to her, receives a cold, ice queen treatment, and until they prove themselves to her, that will continue to receive said treatment. This however does not mean she disobeys orders, it is actually to the contrary. She acts this way so there is very little attachment, so that she can complete whatever task is given to her. She is straightforward and to the point most often when it comes to dealing with others, and is brutally, and often times inappropriately and cynically honest.
She has earned herself a reputation because of her ability to craft items and such, and only requiring (icly) odd forms of payment from others. mostly, it's odd jobs, or strange objects, most of them demonic or hollow in essence. The one thing she treasures most, is information on demons, and their powers, or blood and energy samples. The reasons for this, are unknown, but she seems to especially covet blood samples and energy samples and information on demons that can manipulate organic material or modify the dna of others.

If she were to have a stated goal, it would be to find her sister, taken by a danava, and spread that danava's blood, organs and corpse across the earth and sky, and mount his head on her wall, and then take her sister home. If anyone gets in her way of accomplishing this goal, she will not hesitate to try and remove them from her path. This has led to some strain within her relationship to the Soul Society, as she has had conflict with others because of this directive. She wishes ot stay in the Soul Society, mostly because it allows her to learn more kido uninhibited and without persecution as long as she follows the rules.

Background Section

» History: Raven's history begins as her life ended after her birth in 45 A.D. at the talons of the hollow that killed her entire family. After the death of her mother Verzerte, and her father Crow, she and Crow were both konsod and taken into the Soul Society. Crow raised his daughter in the rukongai until she was old enough to join the Shinigami academy, which they did together. As the years went on, Raven and her father both flourished in the Academy, and did very well. After graduating the academy,Raven and her father were split up to different squads. He was placed into the 10th squad, and she was placed into the 2nd squad. For the longest time, they dealt with the events that came their way very well, until the Winter War, and the Quincy Blood War. During these two conflicts, Raven's life changed drastically.
During the Winter War and the other Arrancar based conflicts, Raven and Crow discovered that her mother Verzerte was in fact alive, but fighting on the side of the arrancar. Several times they both fought against her and both of them were never able to overcome her madness or her great power when she was in ressureccion. At one time, Verzerte almost killed Raven, had it not been for the interference of her father, Raven would have died. She was removed from the remainder of the conflicts involving Arrancar until her very extensive injuries healed. It was during this time it was found that she was slowly hollowfying. After her recovery she began to try and conquer this hollow infection. Eventually, she did conquer her inner hollow and became a Vizard. She subjected herself to personal exile, in order to learn how to cope with this new existence and in large part, seek out her mother.
And that she did. She eventually found an on the run Verzerte, hiding away from the Quincy that had invaded Hueco Mundo at the onset of the Quincy Blood War. The two had a large conflict which brought them both close the brink of death, resulting in Raven's Inner Hollow Cazadora taking over and trying to finish off Verzerte, but was unable to do so, because Verzerte played a very sly mind game against her, stating that it was from her that Cazadora was created, and that from her Cazadora could earn greater power, from her "mother". The ploy forced the hollow to pause for a few moments, and within those moments, Raven was able to regain control, and realize that the conflict between the two was a pointless endeavor.
It was during this short time that Verzerte and Raven exchanged stories and Raven was surprised to find that her previous 5th seat Neya was Verzerte's lover. This upset Raven because she had always secretly had the hope, the child's hope that her parents may get back together. But that hope was not only injured by her mother's revelations, but by the attack on the Soul Society by the Quincy. After that conflict, Raven and Verzerte learned that Crow had been killed by the quincy. This destroyed Raven, in more emotional ways then one, and she left the face of the world, vanishing and going into hiding, but only after seeking out and killing many quincy.
It wasnt until the third world war she came back into the light, and she fought for herself, protecting only her own interests and for the most part, killing arrancar, quincy, demons, and anything else that decided she wasnt on their side, even a few shinigami who didnt recognize her and only saw her using her mask. During this conflict is when Raven and her Inner Hollow Cazadora forged their deal. They would work in concert as one being to survive, to adapt, and to find their mother, and they would amke good with her, and learn to control their powers and learn new ones, so that they could become an even more dangeorus predator of the war.

Eventually, they did find Verzerte, but it was well after the war, and in fact was rather recently, after her capture and torture at the hands of a danava, and the birth of her sister and her kidnapping. After reuniting with her and learning of things transpired, Raven returned to the Soul Society, the prodigal daughter. She re took her place in the kidoushu and re adapted herself to the life style. She did this because she needed the resources of the SOul Society, and so she could keep an eye on Verzerte's love interest, Neya. Eventually, she and Neya discovered the lcoation of the kidnapper and her sister, and she, Neya, and Verzerte assaulted his compound, and made it to him. However, the three were no match for him, as he trapped Neya in stasis, and put Verzerte and Raven on the edge of death, even defeating Raven's Inner Hollow. As the two lay dying, Verzerte used the last of her power to meld herself to Raven, after they had one last exchange of words. This is how Mother and daughter became a Ziamichi. After this, Raven released NEya fromt he stasis, and then passed out. When she awoke, she found she had a prosthetic arm, and spine, and that her mother's Cyber Brain Had been implanted as a part of an emergency surgery done to save her life.
Currently the Ziamichi Vizard mother daughter team are doing all they can to master as many combat arts they can, and are doing extensive research on demons in order to better understand their personal rival.

The Host's Powers


ZanpuktoName: Serene War Goddess

ZanpakutoSpirit Appearance: The spirit is an armored woman, dressed in a full suit of articulated plate male without a helm, that has dragon and angel wings on her back, and has a serpent's tail.

ZanpuktoSpirit Personality: The spirit of her Zan is a cold individual, calculating and fairly un-apologetic. She has very little tolerance for brash un-planned action and scolds Raven often when she does not act on a plan and strategy. She is very abrasive and gritty, especially towards Raven's inner hollow, Cazadora, although the two have forged an uneasy co-existance for the greater good of their host/weilder. She herself above all else treasures a decisive, clean victory in which she knows that her power and Raven's strategms were the cause of the victory. She can oft times be boistrous and arrogant, an seems to carry this capacity because it is something Raven surpresses.

Inner World: a battlefield, where several hundreds upon thousands of weapons are stabbed into the ground. It is a grassy plain, with the moon adn sun shining on opposite ends of it. The south end has the sun, the north has the moon. where the two meet in the center, is an altar engraved with a ten pointed star.

Sealed ZanpakutAppearance: a Flammenschwert with a white blade, a cross-guard designed to look like a crow in flight, and a serpent devouring the world is etched into the hilt, with a hexagonal pommel ended with a five inch spike.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:

Release Phrase: Bring forth Peace


Shikai Information

Shikai Appearance: A white staff, decorated with gold and silver inlays of ravens, snakes, dragons, sparrows and wolves.

Shikai Abilities:
War's Serenade: Raven's Shikai allows her to form energy, blades, and chains from the weapon itself, which can break down into a large amount of miniscule shards or stay assembled, or reassemble itself into any shape she so desires. From any point on the weapon, or the shards, she can create chains and blades of either solid material or energy, or jettison or launch blades or chains or energy from any shard or point on the weapon. The blades and energy can be shaped in any way shape or form she desires. The energy can be charged in a way similiar to a cero, for more drastic effect and power, and can be detonated or released on command. The blades can be charged with the energy and can release it over time, on contact, or on command. The effectiveness, damage and size of the explosion is dependant upon how much energy she puts into the detonation, combining the amount of energy already stored with an extra amount to detonate it. The longer the distance, the more energy that must be used ot detonate, however and at extreme distances, a huge amount of energy could result ina very large but not very damaging explosion. The chains are used in the same way as the blades and energy and can actually be linked between many blades or points on the staff or shards. The chains can be manipulated in size and design from spiked and serrated wth a blade on each ink to a regular chain, etc.

Inner Hollow & Mask

Inner Hollow Description: Her inner hollow looks like a semi- anthropomorphic female quetzalcoatl (feathered and winged serpent) that is also a kind of twisted anti version of Raven. Her feathers are the opposite color of Raven's Hair and her Scales are the inverse of Raven's skin, where her eyes are an inverse of raven's as well. All in all, this creature is an inversion of Raven, in more ways than just looks.

Inner Hollow Personality: The hollow is Raven's polar opposite. Where Raven is forgiving and willing to compromise with her foes before having to kill them, Cazadora is merciless, pitiless and unwilling to make any compromise. She is willing to kill any obstacle standing in her way, and sacrifice anything to do so. This however, instead of bothering Raven, has instead taught her the value of ferocity, and the willingness to do anything in her power, including taking a life.

Cazadora, aside from being Raven's opposite though is also like her host in many ways. She values strategy over brash action, and enjoys working in concert with Raven to destroy their enemies. She loves the stoic quietness that is Raven in battle, and finds that she only knows peace when Raven is in the heat of battle. This does often lead her to nagging Raven to find combat, so that she can experience the high of combat alongside her.

Inner Hollow Powers:

Hollow Mask Appearance: Raven's mask has many defining traits and properties. The first is that it looks like a victorian era ballroom masqurade mask, designed after a Quetzalcoatl, being more snake like than avian. The eye holes make her eyes look like shimmering pit viper eyes. The mouth is stuck in a closed lip smile, with two snake fangs protruding ever so slightly. The nose is designed like a snake's snout. the entirety of the mask is designed to look as if it is composed of scales and feathers. The scales and feather designs are black, and detailed with a light purple and gold, wth silver inlays.


Vizard Powers

Vizard Powers: (What benefits does your character get from transforming into their mask state?)



Resurrección Appearance:

Resurrección Abilities:

PhatomTech: (Does your character have a PhatomTech brain installed? If so, you'll be able to qualify for upgrade at the Cybermind or add other Cybernetic parts to your character to make them stronger)

Phantom Tech Abilities: (What can your character do with his or her's add-ons? This applies to any upgrades your character has gotten from places like The Cybermind as well.

Phantom Tech Powers: (This refers to things outside of Add-ons unlike Abilities. What Phantom Tech Powers are, in a sense, is basically what kind of power did your character gain from having a Cyberbrain? For example, Shadin Yuudeshi gained Imaginary Computation with his Cybernetic upgrades and has the ability to bring tangible things into existence with his computers Quantum Calculations.)

The Spirit's Basic Information

» Name: Verzerte Schatz
» Titles: Queen of Schism
» Race: Arrancar
» Age: 33(looks ) 2402(age)
» Gender: Female

» The Spirit's Written Appearance: The eyes, windows to the soul, the beholders of all truths. Her windows are the color of the kings, deep, violet purple. Like daggers, sharpened and tempered with diamond hammers, and flames hotter than the sun, her eyes, pierce the hearts and souls of those who meet her icy gaze.

Her mask remnant is in her long, flowing and silken black hair, appearing as a piece of a hair clip shaped like a shard of crystal. In her hair, she has streaks of silver, white, and auburn. She wears a small wreathe of woven black roses in her hair. When she is visible, she stands at roughy 6'2", and is of the same build as raven.[/spoiler]

The Spirit's Personality Section

» The Spirit's Personality:

The Spirit's Background Section

» The Spirit's History:

The Spirit's Powers

» Ziamichi Spirit Powers:

Sealed Zanpakutô: A Viking sword.

Racial Abilities:
Unique Abilities:

Vibora Abilities



Ziamichi Powers

» Unique Traits: (What kind of special ability's does your host get from you're Ziamichi's powers? For example, if your spirit had a fire ability, it's possible your character's body can pick up on that! Or if the spirit was an animal, they could possibly gain better natural senses.)

» Forms: (How many forms, if any, does it take until the host reaches it's limit, full power and a risk of having the demon, dark side or other entity gain control of their body? If you have a good understanding with your spirit, though, this is typically a good thing)

» Drawbacks: (Is there any side effects to the usage of these combined powers? If so, put them here.)

» Control: (What kind of control does your character have over your Ziamichi? Ranging from zero to ten. When at Zero, you're character has no control over your Ziamichi. When at ten, you're character has perfect control over it's Ziamichi.)

The Host's Skills

NOTE: Ziamichi's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

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Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

The Spirit's Skills

General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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"And before the darkness and shadow of death i stood, and stepped from the threshold of fear, into the doorway of eternity."
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Raven (wip)   Tue Jun 14, 2016 6:57 am

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Raven (wip)   Thu Jun 16, 2016 10:53 am

[adm]Archiving due to member inactivity exceeding two months. If you'd like this app moved back into active WIPs, please ask us here.[/adm]

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I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.

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