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Octara


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» Name: Octara Iltaer
» Titles: None
» Race: Devil Iramasha
» Age: 214
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Rogue

» Appearance Written: Octara's body, for a lack of a better term, is rather small when compared to others. She only stands at a good 5'2'' on a good day, and typically is very light, around [REDACTED, it's rude to ask for a lady's weight!] pounds. Her skin tone is rather pale, remaining that way even if she were to stay out in the sun for a long while. Asides from first glance, she appears to lack any real type of muscle or anything to show that's she's physically strong. The only noticeable part of her physique is her agility; nimble body allowing her to move as quickly as she can and stay well-toned at least, not a single bit of fat seen upon her body that she's perfectly fine with showing off. With a thin frame such as this one, it's easy to mistake Octara for a young teenager, body seemingly showing off that she should be one.

More fine features could easily be seen on her body. The first thing being her hair. Her hair wasn't really hair at all, but rather, tentacles coming forth from her scalp that can be modeled into certain styles. The tentacles on her head are a bright red, sometimes changing so that the tips are orange to add flair. Under underneath her rather odd and extravagant hair is a set of wide eyes that stare out into the world. A bright, vibrant green leaves something pleasant to stare at when gazes meet, as her pupils seem to change depending on her activity. If she is active, it changes from black to a mix between violet and fuchsia, a rather odd combination of colors that matches the appearance of her blood. This change of color can also happen if Octara is being flooded with emotions.

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» Personality:
Hot Headed/Emotional: For a lack of better terms, Ocatara has a temper. She is unable to properly handle the feelings within her, leading to outbursts of rage or bipolar changes from joy to sorrow. If she were to be tripped by someone, instead of silent anger, she would let the entire world that she was pissed off and ready to stomp the foot that got in her way into dust. That is just one example of her inability to cope with her emotions, but it does apply for things such as love, joy, sorrow, excitement, anxiety, etc. Everything with her is taken to extreme's, to the point where people may think that she's simply being a drama Queen over something that is menial and definitely not enough to force her to bring out a tub of ice cream and to put on the Spanish Soap Operas.

Stubborn: With a temper like her own, it's only expected that Octara should be a bit stubborn. She's always plans to stick with her own ideas, often shrugging off help from others to simply have faith in her own abilities to strive as a being, and as an Iramasha.Very rarely will she ever move on a topic she has set her foot down on, and ever rarer will it be that she'll willing do something someone else wants unless it entirely benefits her. Overall, Ocatara is the type to stick with what she wants, and what she knows, even going as far as to either ignore her Ziamichi or just say that it was her plan all along to do what he was saying.

Childish: Despite Octara's age, she acts like a brat. Her actions all show to a lack of real understanding of the situation, and it only leads to her further fueling her antics. Mentally? She processes things similar to a young teenager, leading to a mix-up in ideas and plans of action. She will react poorly to anything stressful on her, and she -will- resort to her tantrums and defense mechanisms of just being a big nuisance if she doesn't get her way. If she does manage to win and get everything the way she wanted, she'll be exceedingly happy, over-joyed, and willing to be much more cooperative with anyone who helped her achieve her girls. Her childish behavior will lead to some awkward moments as a character, ranging from wanting to be babied and having everything go her way to acting like an adult that can do as she pleases with no backlash.

Cruel: As a Devil Iramasha, she strives off of negativity and violence. With these things adding to her very being, it's only fair to assume that her demeanor towards others will be similar to how the Devil Iramasha were treated. She is cruel, wicked, and honestly? A bitch. As long as something benefits her, she will not bat an eye lash at crushing someone under-foot to achieve what she wants. Even if the pereson had ended up being a lover or someone similar, 9/10, she always comes first over everyone else in the world. With this attitude towards life and everyone in existence, it only further motivates her cruelty when others respond negatively to her, which results in her getting all the meaner, which leads to a never-ending process. If someone were to treat her kindly and be the exact of cruel... Then she would be rather confused, and might pull back in terms of how aggressive she might be.

Loud Mouth: Considering how childish and rude Octara acts, it's only right to know that she's also a Loud Mouth. Every word she says just -has- to be heard by everyone in existence, and if they don't, she gets very upset to the point of only screaming and trying to get them to listen. This trait of her leads to awkward moments of attempting to go into monologues, speak about something, and literally do anything to hear her own voice and have someone around to listen.

Attention Whore: Octara. Needs. Attention. If somebody decided to ignore her, it'd absolutely infuriate her to the point of getting violent until they respond. Actions she take will not be shy or hindered in any way, when she does something, she does it as best as she can so everyone can know it was her who did it. Every action she does will lead to attention in some way or another, be it through someone mentioning her in the news for a murder, a group of people aiming to strike her down, or even someone she just met wanting to get to know her more. The list goes on and on, but the more attention she gets, the bigger her ego becomes, and the brattier she gets too.

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» History: (Three paragraph minimum of your characters history. And, if you can, include when and how they became a Ziamichi.)

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• Seishin Buki Name: None

• Seishin Buki Appearance: Octara's Seishin Buki typically looks like a pair of goggles. The shape of it makes it only large enough to cover her eyes, and it's simplistic design leads to it not really weighing much despite being made of metal. Two small, purple lenses allowed Octara to see through them, and these pieces of glass can even glow is desired.

• Seishin Buki Abilities: Resiliant: Octara's Seishin Buki is as tough as her actual being. If it is hit, it will typically absorb the blow in it's entirety and still manage to survive at the cost of essentially taking energy equal to the damage taken. If Octara runs out of energy, the Seishin Buki shatters from any strike meant to kill. The way this ability works is that the Seishin Buki is connected to Octara's energy stores directly and drains an almost invisible amount to remain active. When attacked, energy is drained from her stores instantly to form a shielding around it so that it can survive the blow and prevent shattering. If the Seishin Buki is shattered, Octara will have to reform it, the time needed would be too long to use practically in any combat scenario, meaning that the thread must end before she may have another created for her.

True Sight: When the Seishin Buki is equipped, it allows Octara to see through all obstructions that may be in her way. This means that she can see in the dark, through fog, through a massive storm, through even a condensed sphere of energy in front of her. When using this ability, the world for her looks a bit similar to an animated scene's wireframe, the outlines of all objects being heavily noted along with the surfaces. This also allows her to see through objects with the gaps between lines, but shading of colors allows her to realize that running ahead will lead to hitting a wall. With True Sight, it also allows her to keep track of any being she is facing, tracing their energy signature in bright colors so that they are easily seen for her. The only way to avoid detection is to completely nullify or mask the source of energy so that it can not be sensed.

Eye of the Tiger: The lenses of this piece of equipment have the added effect of tracing a target's weak points. This essentially allows Octara to spot any visible weak-points within a person, or a defense they may have. When Octara strikes against a powerful defense, her power of actually breaking the defense increases to double, though the damage a person may receive will still remain the same if she manages to break through. If a person has a visible weakness, such as a broken limb or open wound, any strikes aimed directly for those locations will deal double damage when they strike accurately. If the strike ends up hitting a normal part of their body, the damage is reverted to normal.

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• Powers: (What type of abilities does your Iramasha have? Can they control fire? Can they fire heat vision? Just what can your character do with their powers? Be sure to list some attacks as well)

• Chaos Moves: (What type of Regular or Custom Chaos Moves does your Iramasha know?)

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•Angelic Release/Demonic Release/Hybrid Stage One Appearance: WIP Sample-09f23bb9f86238a6d2c4ff89dece971c
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• Angelic Release/Demonic Release/Hybrid Stage One Abilities: (What abilities does your character upon activation?)

• Awakened Divinity State/Hell Evolution State/Hybrid Stage Two Appearance: (Same as before. Simply state how they look upon ascending into this form)

• Awakened Divinity State/Hell Evolution State/Hybrid Stage Two Abilities: (Same as before. Simply state what they gain from this form)

• Custom Form Appearance (If you have unlocked at least Angel or Demon Form's or have reached 2-3 tier, your character has the ability to create their own unique form. Be sure to tell us how they look in this form)

• Custom Form Abilities: (List any special abilities, techniques or upgrades they get in this form)
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• Class Title: The Devil of Blood

• Class Traits: Paint The Town... Purple?: First and foremost, Octara is unable to die through bleeding out. Her body manages to replicate blood cells at a rate quick enough that even having a gaping wound wouldn't kill her via. fluids leaking outwards. This doesn't mean that it doesn't cause damage considering a piece of her body is missing, but if she were to just have many cuts, the only thing that would limit her from continuing her fight is either her muscles, amount of body remaining, and how much physical stress she could simply handle. As an added bonus, this also gives her control of her own blood in it's entirety. This means that as long as her own bodily fluids is at least within a distance of influence proportional to her spiritual pressure when releasing her powers fully. If she were a 4-5, she wouldn't have very much pressure and could only use this ability if she was essentially very close to her own blood. If she were a 2-1, she would be able to control any spilled blood far away, even reaching up to 50 yards away. The higher the tier, the further she can control it. If she manages to reach 0 tier, the limit is only as far as she could feel her own energy radiating from her own liquids. The final application of this ability allows her to... Jettison her own blood through any method she wishes. The intensity could be similar to a water hose or just a squirt gun, but if she wishes it, she could shoot her own blood from her pores, mouth, eyes, fingers, nose, ears... Essentially, anything that either has an opening somewhere or flesh that could be parted to easily create an open flow. For Eyes, the folds near the edges of her eyes could work, and for fingers, the flesh underneath her fingernails could be parted for this to work. When considering the rest of the applications to this ability, she could literally paint the town purple with her blood if she isn't stopped, just letting loose a torrent of blood everywhere she steps.

Sanguine Manipulation: Through using her Iramasha Class, Octara can control blood and do many things with it. She may change it's shape, launch it at high speeds to act as a projectile, cover a being with it and solidify it to create armor based on her Chaos Energy Skill. With this ability, she can manipulate blood in any way she wishes, and even transmute it into all three commonly found states of matter (no super heated plasma blood, sorry~). As a liquid... It acts as one would expect. When made into a solid, it can be used for either offense or defense. When made solid, the durability and strength of the solidified blood is dependent on her Chaos Energy Skill, meaning that a beginner in this ability equates to a solid strike being of the same strength as a beginner strike in terms of strength and beginner durability. As a gas, it can be used to infiltrate the lungs of a person who inhales it to let Octara do whatever she likes from within. As a gas, it will appear as a slow-moving, easily seen sphere of purple gas, meaning that she can't just easily make a person breath it in through something sneaky like using a fog as cover. Asides from these three basic uses, this ability has many applications. The first being that she can transmute freely flowing blood into blood she may use. Doing so requires that the crimson fluids has left it's host either through a wound, or is splattered against the ground or something similar. When taken over by Octara, the color of the crimson liquids instead turns to a purple-ish shade similar to her own. Secondly, having this ability means that she has access to a weakened version of an ability only available in Demonic Release. When in battle, those in Demonic Release strive off of battle, and gain a portion of their energy back depending on the damage they have caused. For Octara, if she is to ingest or absorb the blood of another being and bring it into her own body, she may restore 1 - 10% of her total energy stores depending on how much is absorbed. A nice few sips of a cup will lead to 1%, while taking a nice stream of blood that's freely flowing will lead to 10%. This does not heal her wounds, but only restores her energy so that she may continue fighting. The true, final application of this ability is that she can essentially react to blood as how water elementals would react to water. If she were to jump into a puddle of blood, she would be able to fall into it entirely as if it was more than half an inch thick, and become completely invisible within it. While in this state, she is able to move at speeds rivaling those with flash step and the like. If the blood she is hiding in is displaced, she will simply fall out of it unceremoniously before it can lead to her being severely messed up. If she chooses to hide in a puddle of blood, she has the full ability to change it's colors for this purpose of hiding, but if used for combat, it defaults to purple.

Beacon of Dread: If Octara is heavily damaged to the point that it is difficult to move, she may use an extremely defensive move in order to both protect herself, and heal her wounded body. This ability can only be used once per thread, and leaves her unable to attack at all. The other limitation is that she must be surrounded by a large pool of blood, enough that someone could fill a 5 feet deep personal pool with the substance. Through using her Sanguine Manipulation and focusing intently, she draws every drop of blood towards her until it forms a sphere around her body. This sphere becomes completely solid, and sports the durability of her current Chaos Energy Skill tier times 1.5 with the added bonus of regenerating damage done to it at a rate similar to her Focus. Beginner Focus can lead to healing Beginner damage in a single post, though too many hits too quickly followed by a powerful blow can still break through at Beginner damage. Over the course of three posts, Octara is trapped within this sphere as excess blood is transfused into her very being, pumping her full of energy and essentially absorbing the blood in it's entirety so that her body may enter a state of accelerated regeneration through the massive production of platelets and cells of a similar nature. At the end of three posts, if the sphere was not destroyed, Octara will emerge with 100% of her energy restored and with all of her wounds healed. If the sphere is broken within a single post, she only heals 10%. If the sphere is broken in two posts, she only heals 25%. If the sphere is broken in three posts, she only heals 50%.

Bloody Marionette: Octara can create her Familiars through her control over blood. Every familiar made through this method will have the same abilities that Octara currently has thanks to her class. Each familiar will have it's own limited sentience, able to think and act at the cost of always listening to Octara's commands, and only her commands. If one were to disguise themselves as her, it wouldn't work since they would sense the difference in their creator's energy and an imposter's. Each familiar has the same skills as Octara, but only a total of three can be active at a singular time. The Bloody Marionettes can not learn new abilities, can not upgrade independently from Octara, and can not make other Bloody Marionettes. Despite the easy to see strengths, the Bloody Marionettes do have the downside of:
1) Being easily destroyed by a large amount of water.
2) Able to be controlled by someone with control over blood if Octara isn't nearby to contest. (Must be able to surpass Octara's Focus if she is not around.)
3) Being made as a random color for their blood and body, such as being green with what they look like and what they bleed.
4) Only has the base form powers of Octara, meaning the abilities from her Class with no releases empowering it.

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» The Spirit's Name: (What is the name of your Ziamichi's Spirit?)
» The Spirit's Race: (Is it a Shinigami, Human, Demon etc? If it isn't a race at all, just put N/A)
» The Spirit's Gender: (What is the gender of your Ziamichi's Spirit?)
» The Spirit's Age: (What is the age of your Ziamichi's Spirit?)

» The Spirit's Written Appearance: (If you lack a picture or just want to write a look for your spirit, place it here.)

» The Spirit's Pictured Appearance:
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» The Spirit's Personality: (What is your spirit's personality like? Write at least two paragraph's.)

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» The Spirit's History: (Is there a history to your spirit? If so, at least write 2-3 paragraph's about it. Including how it got attached, created or sealed to your Ziamichi.)

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» Ziamichi Spirit Powers: (Put their powers here)
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» Unique Traits: (What kind of special ability's does your host get from you're Ziamichi's powers? For example, if your spirit had a fire ability, it's possible your character's body can pick up on that! Or if the spirit was an animal, they could possibly gain better natural senses.)

» Forms: (How many forms, if any, does it take until the host reaches it's limit, full power and a risk of having the demon, dark side or other entity gain control of their body? If you have a good understanding with your spirit, though, this is typically a good thing)

» Drawbacks: (Is there any side effects to the usage of these combined powers? If so, put them here.)

» Control: (What kind of control does your character have over your Ziamichi? Ranging from zero to ten. When at Zero, you're character has no control over your Ziamichi. When at ten, you're character has perfect control over it's Ziamichi.)

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NOTE: Ziamichi's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

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Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Warp: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Fighting Style: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Gem Creation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Spirit
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Human Skill Sheet
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Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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How's work going on the character? Lemme know that its still being worked on in a few days or I'll have to move it to old wip. I apologize.



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«REQUESTING STATUS UPDATE»

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