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 Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]

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Subject Post 11PostSubject: Re: Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]   Wed 12 Jun 2013 - 9:24



Mkayski i don't see a problem with this you manage to display an aptitude for his personality and are able to use him well, thus i will be giving the lio seal of approval. If any other staff have a problem with this just talk to me bout it cause right now im giving it to JJ 

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Subject Post 12PostSubject: Re: Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]   Sun 18 May 2014 - 5:34


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« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Willpower/Determination: Master
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced

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    Just giving this it's will shit and boosting tier. If there is a problem let me know

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Subject Post 13PostSubject: Re: Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]   Tue 7 Apr 2015 - 20:29



This is being moved out of active.

Thank you very much for your service over the years.

If you are ever needed again, you shall be re-summoned once more and as a Canon will be used.

Until then, sleep well, my dear friend. Thank you for the good times and for having put up with me for so very, very long.

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Subject Post 14PostSubject: Re: Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]   Wed 8 Jun 2016 - 21:37

The self-proclaimed "King" walked through the sands of Hueco Mundo, with his hand on his sword. The grin he always wore grew wider. He looked towards the black sky of the Realm of the Hollows, before it redirected to the deserted land in front of him. No Hollow nor Arrancar had proven to him a challenge yet! How annoying! But...the spiritual pressure he felt in this area could quite possibly change that! The spiritual pressure he felt had grown stronger as he continued to grow closer. The classic grin of Grimmjow Jaegarjaquez was almost psychotic at this point. This stranger could be a challenge!

His running soon slowed to a stop, as dust from the sands kicked up. His smile faded. One of his hands slowly moved back to his blue hair, and he carefully smoothed out a small tuft of hair that stood up. Grimmjow's eyes would close, before his grin would return, and his eyes would gaze upon his opponent. A very...odd Hollow. It seemed to be...another Arrancar. Grimmjow grinned wider as his left hand would begin to drift over the handle of his sword. His fingers would interlace the handle of the katana that was the Former Sexta Espada's Zanpakutō. His mouth would open, before saying one thing. "We going to fight or what?" He yelled out, mildly annoyed.

The opponent would then slowly turn. It was, in fact, an Arrancar. His opponent would growl, before launching itself at Grimmjow, aiming one of it's arms for his head. However, based on the aura he had felt from this Arrancar, Grimmjow was expecting such an attack. All he could sense from this Arrancar....was rage. Grimjow lifted one of his arms, with the opponent's colliding with his own. However, this did not pierce the Former Sexta Espada's skin. It would simply bounce off it. Hierro. That was what stopped the attack. If it were not for that, the attack would have most likely taken his arm.

His arm would then move so that it pointed straight at his opponent, before opening his hand. A small sphere of red spiritual energy sparked on the center of the palm of his hand. The sphere would grow larger, almost to the size of a small bouncing ball. This sphere would then burst off his palm in the form of a crimson red wave of energy. A Cero. The red blast of energy would zoom towards his enemy. But his enemy...only yelled in the form of a growl. A low screech, to some. The Arrancar's arm would draw to it's chest, with it's hand hovering mere inches over it's shoulder. The Arrancar's arm would then strike outwards, slamming it's arm into the Cero, and batting it away. The Cero would fly away from the now safe Arrancar, and explode in the distance, sending sand everywhere.

Grimmjow was surprised, but yet his face showed only his trademark grin. His jaws would open, and his throat would emit a large bout of laughter. "HAHAHAHA! You think that would scare ME? I AM THE KING!" He shouted and declared, before ripping the sword that had remained at his side out. His hand covered the flat of the blade at the base, and the blade began to glow blue. He moved his hand up the blade very fast, raking his fingers on it. Sparks that were spiritual energy flew from the blade, and Grimmjow was surrounded in a vortex of pure power. As this happened, Grimmjow would speak one phrase. The only thing he would need to win.

"GRIND, PANTERA!!!"


That would be all he needed. To beat this thing down. To WIN. His grin grew wider as the spiritual energy he had grew immensely when he activated this next form of power for an Arrancar. Resurrección. As he grinned, his teeth became sharper and jagged. His hands turned into black cat paws with large, fearsome claws at the tips of them. He then grew a tail, which was very sharp, slender, and cat-like. His hair now was long and flowing. The Hollow mask was now gone as well, with a headgear on his forehead replacing it. His clothing was the last to change. It changed into a white, form-fitting armor. Grimmjow had performed Resurrección. He laughed more, which escalated into a roar. This would cause a sonic wave that would kick up the sands of Hueco Mundo, before Grimmjow would crouch down. His tail would swipe back and forth, before the Former Sexta Espada leaped forward.

As he did, he would move his arm so that his elbow was facing his enemy. The moment he did, five bombs would shoot from his elbow, before impacting with his enemy, and explode. When the smoke cleared, the enemy was missing it's arm. It seemed to have blocked it. "HAHAHAHA! Did you really think you could block that?!" He yelled, before he crouched down. As he did, two massive claws appeared on his hands, glowing blue. These claws were composed of Reishi, and were Grimmjow's strongest attack. His grin grew wider as he slashed down, sending the claws flying towards the target. As he did, his maniacal laughter could be heard.


"HAHAHAHA! I AM THE KING!!! DESGARRON!!!!"



The claws would impact his target, and an explosion of Reishi would be seen. Grimmjow's grin grew evermore wider as he saw the explosion of Reishi from the claws of his attack. Did he try and block it? The smoke cleared to reveal...a corpse. The corpse of the Arrancar he had faced. "Well...that little shit wasn't even much a challenge. Just some dumbass throwing around his spiritual pressure to make people fear him...." Grimmjow's grin soon faded, before his form slowly faded. He had exited Resurrección. He slowly turned, sheathing his Zanpakutō, before walking away. The Former Sexta Espada was disappointed. Was there no one in Hueco Mundo who could even CHALLENGE him?....
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Subject Post 15PostSubject: Re: Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]   Wed 8 Jun 2016 - 21:48


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Alright, weighing in here, my notes on this are as follows.

The fighting is alright, but RP samples for Canons, especially canons who are so powerful and have been worked up to be even stronger than they previously were in the anime, have to show a complete understanding of who the character is and how it is they act.

I see a lot of overuse of the written out laughter, as well as phrases that show a bragging nature that Grimmjow just doesn't have toward opponents who don't truly challenge him. Yes, we have seen him like that in the anime, but it took Ichigo repeatedly cockblocking him for that to happen. It wasn't an immediate "because we're fighting, I have this berserker rage" thing. If you recall, Grimmjow was a lot more collected when he stepped to Rukia, simply putting a hand through her chest without much ceremony.

Also, with canons such as this, a lot of it is based on what we feel we can trust you with as a roleplayer. This sample, as well as what I've seen from you in the past, doesn't quite exemplify what we look for in a 0-tier just yet. Keep working on it, and feel free to try again once you've built up some more confidence and trust with us on the site over the course of your tenure here.

This is my decision, to deny this on the grounds that it isn't an RP sample that befits a 0-tier of this calibre and previous story importance/site importance. If anyone takes issue with this decision, feel free to contact me directly in Xat or through PM.





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Subject Post 16PostSubject: Re: Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez [APPROVED, 0-2+]   Mon 19 Jun 2017 - 21:12

If anyone thought I wasn't going to look at reclaiming the character that made it clear I knew what I was doing on this site, you need to share whatever you're smoking because you've had too much. Like Zaraki, it may take me a bit but I'll get to this one.

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