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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Thu Jul 07, 2016 6:06 pm






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» Name: Amon Asthavon
» Original Name: Revan "KillSaw" Asthavon
» Titles: Dark Amon, Killjoy, KillSaw, Crimson Blood the Slasher, Lord Revan
» Age: 213,700 Years Old
» Gender: Male(Male Demon)
» Affiliation/Rank: Former Blood-Demon

» Shifter Appearance Written: Amon lost the ability to turn Blood Warmonger even again so because of his surviving witch powers the demon managed to create a new shifter state. His Deviloid form is a slightly-larger-than-human-sized, vaguely insectoid demon with clawed hands, a scaly hide, a pair of downward facing ram horns, chiropteran wings with beetle-like wings underneath, hooves for feet, and reptilian spines protruding from his back. Parts of his body appeared to be made of grey scales with accents of red and purple. He also had gold veins on his hands and arms, chest, shoulders and back, a red diamond eye shaped gem in the center of his forehead, and skull-shaped gold knees and elbow guards with small horns. His most notable feature were his slit-like eyes, which glowed red and did not have pupils. He is often shown wreathed in fire, although it is uncertain if he was simply impervious to it or if he summoned it.

» Shifter Appearance Picture:
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» True Appearance Written: Amon stands at around six feet and with a more rounded face, a small scar going across his right eyebrow and cheek, and wider jaw. The evil demon's eye color seems to be grey-red. His hair is white, with the sides of his head shaved, forming a mohawk out of the hair at the top of his head, tapering off into a point at the nape of his neck. He also sports a strange glowing tattoo on his back between his shoulder blades. In one trailer, this tattoo glows briefly and heals scars he has on his back. His attire consists of a black, 3/4-length, hooded leather jacket with red interior linings and the Demon America flag sewn on the left arm, a gray tanktop, black fingerless gloves, black faded jeans, black military boots, and a necklace reminiscent of half of the Superb Demonic Amulet. His sword is slung over his back favoring his left hand, and his pistols are placed in holsters at the back of his waist, under his coat. Amon also seems to be ambidextrous, favoring either hand for melee attacks with his weapons.

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» Personality: His Dark nature will kick in sometimes making the former legendary hunter into something called "The Beast Incarnate". Something more than a super beast and less of the danava then he is to hunt his enemies and see them driven and beaten before him. A typical pureblood nature which he'll started hunting for more becoming more a powermonger having the desire for pure battle pulsating within his well being. Because of his origin powers, Amon craves more power and stop everything of his personal life and social life to claim that one thing to becomes the best at what he does. He wants to crush his enemies on a higher scale and to him his goals to make his enemies dust will be something like a certain lifetime goal to him. The Danava of Power craves immense violence to cause enough pain and destruction in the hopes of seeing his blood or his enemy's blood it doesn't matter to him at all as long as it happens. Sometimes the danava will not say a complete word or compliments to his enemies allowing his actions speak for him because his best motto " Actions speak Louder than Words". When back into a corner, He'll show a degree of respect to his enemy or enemies upon the battlefield really has no reason to lie that his enemy is better than him meaning he'll need to get better.

If he wins, Amon will either do two things depending on the situation: He'll either kill the enemy or allow him to live walking away demanding that they get better to become stronger then they are. At times, His reactions and calm actions will be the same as low-class demons within the demon world changing his dark methods time to time. Sometimes, Being laid-back but having still a fearful personality of rage and carnage from his danava evil nature having his origin produce a certain rage within him. When the situation calls for it, Amon can become cocky and having an unique style of hunting-fighting anyone who gets in his way. He even holds back in an effort to make any fight last longer. He also claims that injury and death are nothing but the price one pays for a good long ass fight. Amon hates the word to the fullest but it can takes you places and help you gain things along the way. Despite his thoughts, Amon can be a loyal person to the right cause or organization the demon can show respect a person or organization who has great power. Trust is another factor, Amon will be neutral or dark hearted. Betrayal....Then he'll stop at nothing to kill the betrayer then search and destroy everything they had. Really It a two way street when it comes to loyalty.


Ruthlessness: The danava will become an uncontrollable rage berserker filled within growing omni rage within his heart with continues to grow to higher proportions. Becoming berserk hoping for a long good fight from anybody that dares to cross his path which his game time to him. Dark hearted as he's but in extreme bloodlust, Amon will have little or no damn regard for the well being of any of his allies. He's also extremely arrogant, always looking for the strongest opponent. However, his personality trait proves to be detrimental to his plans as Amon can easily underestimate his opponents and results to taunting them.

» Likes: Instincts the Mean to Survive, Powerful Attacks that do Immense Damage, Helping Family & Others when the situation calls for it. Earning trust of his Shadowfall members and making sure they stay in-line.

» Dislikes: People stabbing them in the back. Ruthless actions being done to one's family. Heroes making a name as his expense.
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» History: No One talks about the tragedy of the blood demons because nobody knows the full story of what happen. Ya want to why legendary blood-demons were stronger than the original demons??? Because some of them made a secret deal with a bunch of wizards in the demon worlds. When the deals were completely done the wizards making the demon to deadly stronger powerhouses. Thus the other demon gave them the title of legendary blood demons making them higher on the demon chain.

Amon was the last of that group of powerhouses which were known to be deadly in power because of their awesome might. Some demons began to fear the blood demons because they seemed unstoppable to an degree then a sick plans came into play. Which also led to their extinction from orders handed down and carried by the War Hell Army under Lord Fen-Myer's command. The only reason Amon wasn't executed because some other saiyans convinced both king and prince that he was actually low class which was a good argument. The legendary saiyan was spared, Myer Damon in a shocking move actually killed Amon's parents in the execution chambers which was carried out on his order. Amon wanted to kill Damon on the spot but something stopped from doing that the dude needed to leave the lesser demos. During, A celebration the legendary warrior disappeared within the undergrounds of the demon world never to seen again.

Years later, The entire saiyan race was exterminated....Amon survived.

Living in the Demon Underworld was a struggle dealing with viruses curse magics and even many demons living here escaping Asthavon rule. He started training his body it was ten years before the demon started learning his origin power and started building himself to become a better fighter than he was before. Local Demons started teaching him about demon abilities which he didn't know about proving to be a major asset to him. It was pretty good the demon and settling down within his new environment, Amon felt a little at peace understanding things. Peace does not last though demons would always fight of supremacy of the underworld. Danava of Power put himself into some major battle wars within the underworld feeling both sweet victory and utter failure at times. But really in those times it was demon's way to survive....Fight and Win or Die and Be Disgrace.

Over the long years, Amon was increasing in power his origin was making him stronger with it came a unknown rage which e couldn't explain at the time. During a battle, Amon felt the demon finally going to become the Bloodhunter on legend the guy had the gold aura erupting from his body. Something horrible happened, Amon became a Super Bloodhunter but an unknown virus was destroying the transformation. His danava powers were too strong changing him completely his super transformation was destroyed and then danava of pain was coming a demon into fruition. Everything was completely changed his body and still the demon had new powers but his saiyan features and abilities were gone. Amon was freaking out wondering what happen but on his back the demon sees a weird satanic tattoo. He was wondering if staying in the demon underworld being cursed and plagued for so long may have had an effect on him. This was fucking horrible, A saiyan no more his mind was in shambles but a measure of revenge came into his heart....Myer Damon survived too being a new part of this Asthavon clan.

The opportunity came, Shadowfall was looking for new recruits to aid the Asthavon family and Shadowfall organization. Amon was tested and surpassed the major superior's standards to become a member of the organization learning the rules and regulations. During a seminar, Amon and the new members heard and inspirational speech from the Demon Queen known as Mana Asthavon one of the greater superiors of Shadowfall. Myer Damon was with her among higher rank members, Amon's rage was boiling to get his hands around that bastard's throat. After the speech, Both Mana, Damon and higher rank members started leaving and Amon quietly followed them hoping to catch Demon to drop his guard. He was about to take a knife and kill him but someone very powerful stopped him, Amon actually managed to fight the unknown person. She managed to pull him and eternal sleep spell, Amon couldn't keep awake but the demon managed to see who done it but he went to an eternal slumber.......


The spell was removed, Amon started waking up wondering what happen the danava but that certain piece of paper was stapled on his chest it said "Whoever you are? You have three choices. Join Shadowfall, Become my personal servant or Die" Two and Three went not an option but the danava was teleported back in the demon world still something new was on him. A curse mark on his neck.....Someone puts this on him and Amon wanted to know who.
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» Natural Demon Traits: Shadow Movement: This is what some MIGHT call the Demon's Answer to flash step: Shadow Movement. It allows them to move at quick burst of speeds on most occasions to allow them to travel very far distances in short amount of times, that is for certain. Though, this is where some similarities come to an end. Unlike most other races, Demon's get many nifty benefits then just Super Speed. Take this for example: from the seals on a demon's legs and feet that generate insane amounts of energy from all of the sources of power they collect; it will be able to give yourself temporary boost of intense speed called "Shadow Burst". Shadow Burst is a period of time where your demon will double their speed on average if they are at least adept. It will transition into how fast their attacks are created or launched, the demon's reaction time to increase the odds of evading, countering or noticing a person, object or anything else within a vicinity that has a prense in order to do something about it, it increases their mental awareness to more alert levels and it even goes into their natural powers.


Akuma Kyodo: Thanks to the full body seal most demon's have on their bodies from birth, Akuma Kyodo gives most Demon's a layer of defensive skin that is similar to an Arrancar's Hierro. This will be general defense, though if have a high Za Koa Skill, you can temporarily double your defense. Masters can do it for ten post, Advanced for seven, adept for four and beginners for two. All come with a three post cooldown. But that's where the similarities end, and the differences begin. What makes a demon's Akuma Kyodo: so different? Well, for instance, this layer of skin is not just applied physically like Arrancar's are or any other races natural defense. What makes a demon's defense stands out is that it applies to magic, spiritual attacks, their environments, how resistant they are to poisons or toxins and even how much their mental state improves.

You see, thanks to having so much magic being pumped into their bodies, their defense is MUCH more wide spread then any Shinigami, Arrancar or even Iramasha. Basically, the higher your defense is, the most attacks, barriers or ANYTHING in general; the more resilient you are to anything offensive being thrown at you. So a demon's Akuma Kyodo: is not something to scoff at, ignore or consider the same.

Body Manipulation: This is a natural ability that all demon's possess if they wish to activate it or perform it. Most Demon's have full control over every aspect of his physical make-up, able to stretch themselves to obtain insane heights such as being thirty foot tall, being able to change their skin color, having the ability to shape-shift into different people that they are able to remember and, on much more powerful levels, being able to even detach, generate or fuse body parts together in order to increase odds of surviving. Though, this does not occur until at least one tier, and even then it's weak compared to the 0 tier version. Additionally, it can even be used for offensive or defensive purposes. For example, a demon can use Body Manipulation in order to generate a layer of steel-like skin around their body in order to increase their defense and block out outside sources from entering their body by clogging every pore on it. Or, for another instance, they could use it on the offensive side by hurling body parts at their opponent that are extremely hot and turn into acid blood, using their increased height to smash down on most opponents and the same may even apply for some more powerful demon's attacks; or finally, in an avoidance way, more powerful demon's could even control their body in order to be broken down into a liquid, wind or fire type form in order to gain more ways to escape or evade attacks.

Kage Chōkyō-shi: Kage Chōkyō-shi is the ability for most demons with adept Za Koa users to travel through different dimensions, travel throughout the battlefield or even use it for defense. By channeling Za Koa's energy in addition to the various seals throughout their body in addition to their Shadow Movement, they are able to create many different dimensional holes in the area's around them; each of them being able to range from a small vicinity such as a few inches, to the size of a city block depending on their Za Koa skill. These can lead to other realms; while there is also the possibility it can be used to shield against attacks if they are not more powerful than the demon and be used on the offensive by attempting to slash the opponents attack in half by creating one of those opening in the center of their assault.

Although, it's also worth noting that this is mostly a passive skill to allow demon's to travel through different areas on the site; such as moving back and forth through the Soul Society, Living Realm and so forth. Those with advanced and Master in Za Koa Skill will begin to see ways to utilize it in battle; such as creating waves of blackness meant to consume limited attacks. Even more than that, the few of these people who do manage to master it will only be able to use it a limited amount of times in battle in association with their energy. So if one were to try and use it more than two or three times per post, they'd tire themselves out.

Za Koa Skill: Za Koa skill is how much skill your character possess to manipulate the energy from the core. Typically, this should be your strongest asset when it comes to the skill sheet. The higher your mastery of this ability, the more techniques you are able to create, use and share. However, this has many more uses then that.

Za Koa's Influence: For example, an advanced Za Koa Skill user at two tier is capable of spreading this technique across an average battlefield in order to taint the surrounding vicinity around them in order to gain the upper hand in combat. These advantages include that all of their stats are typically doubled if the influence is not sealed away or fought with magic. So, going back to our two tier demon, he would be able to obtain a doubled increased in his abilities, powers, speed, endurance, reaction time, mental thinking, knowledge and so on and so forth. Users whom are Master in this skill can usually get triple benefits, and Grand Masters quadruple.

Along with those enhancement boosters, another advantage of Za Koa's Influence is that it can also alter the area around a demon in order to give them the upper hand. For example, our two tier demon will be able to dim the area around him into darkness in order to make himself even more formidable as demon's are naturally inclined to become more useful in the shadow's, being able to generate various toxins in the air in order to gradually wear someone down, create harsh acid rains, for the terrain they are on, turn an ocean-type battlefield into pure fire and things of this nature.

Knowledge Of Environment: Another trait gained from spreading Za Koa's influence throughout any given area is that typically most demon's are given knowledge of their surrounding vicinity. For example, if our two tier demon had performed this within Karakura Central, it would be able to detect various hidden sources in the immediate fighting area such as hidden barriers, seals , spirit beings within the area and things of this nature. On a master level, this would allow some demon's to even detect various elements within in a being. This can be from a persons Zanpukto Spirit, to scanning JUST how much energy they have in total left in them, searching for any unusual traits about their body such as abnormal defense or offense and things of this nature that CAN be detected. This knowledge ability, however, only gives you the knowledge to beat something. Actually beating it, however, is another story.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

The Art Of Demon Magic: What exactly IS the Arts of Demon Magic? In a sense, you COULD call it the Demon's Kidō, but you'd be wrong as well. Why? Well, Demon Magic actually works like real MAGIC is suppose to. Of course, Kidō like spells, summons and barriers can be created with Demon Magic. That's a given. However, it can be taken MUCH further then that application. For instance, an advanced user in Demon Magic could use this in order to gain Telekinesis on a more light level. Even combat standards, if he were to look at an attack and see it coming, the Telekinesis would kick in and attempt to change it course if enough was generated from The Demon to negate it. Other example would be gaining Gyrokinesis in some cases in order to actual make it seem like they are toying with gravity itself; which in fact they are. Within a contained area, this demon could remove the gravity of some things, make it heavier in other places or even apply it to more focused objects like their attacks to cause more impact force.
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» Origin Name: Chaotic Energy

» Origin Power: This is what every blood demon is born from having an energy power growing into their body making their existence by drawing on that crimson energy element. When a Blood-Demon is born a chaos energy is born with taking the shape of an energy orb inside their being. In Amon's case the energy orb inside him is named "Elysium that produces and crimson red energy source that emits for the danava demon. Through concentration, Amon can produce some amounts of chaos energy drawing on the power the elysium. Amon can use Elysium in the form of multiple boosts of three different ways controlling it however. If the demon wanted to use it for strength the energy would shoot out boosting his muscles and sparking some crimson lightning from his body. For Speed, Amon would only need to blink his eyes and then the power would change completely and energy sparking would be a dark blue color which the demon can leave blue speed trails. For attack/defense purposes, A Chaos seal will be formed upon his hands drawing the crimson energy power from the chaos seal. This energy can build up giving it shape into generating it into attacks and perhaps defenses. Taking the color of black energized attacks and many energized defenses. Elysium power is limited maybe using the power leading to creation and attacks even defenses from his very willpower. Elysium's power doesn't last long because of energy drawn from the very crimson orb will need a cooling down period. Amon can use this for about 10 posts before the power of the Elysium will burn down and goes into a state of silence meaning it cooling down for about three posts.

» Origin Abilities: Increased Physical Strength: By drawing on the power of the chaos energy which started to energize his body. The most important this chaos energy when it fully mature into his body, Amon's physical strength started becoming increased. He can actually slap some.not many attacks away with very hard effort but his hand might bleed/get numb. The danava demon maybe strong then a regular demon but maybe able to hold his own transformed demons for a brief period

Increased Speed/Reflexes: Amon's speed and reflexes have been increased. Yet his demonic agility and reflexes to dodge some attacks but not all of them. He is shown to use quick speeds/reflexes to fight stronger opponents for brief periods of time but not forever. This has one disadvantage, He is a little weak against holy attacks if an enemy and fire an holy attack against the demon, speed will get weaker.

Full Demon Buster: To actually fire an energy blast of controlled energy at an opponent. Amon started by controlling the origin and draws out the power producing an strong energy wave demon technique. By concentration, Amon will start drawing from the origin generating and energy sphere starting to manipulate it within his hand. He'll start by drawing out his and the target firing that sphere recreating it into a energy wave which can used damage enemies hurting them inflicting damage depending on the strength on the blast. [It has the same strength as cero. But can be blocked by any medium/high bakudo kido, some barriers, armor or shields]

Through recreation the danava demon managed to remodel the energy wave power creating it into different energy abilities:
Charged Hell Energy Buster: The Charged Blast is created from charging the demon buster and cupping the attack in both hands. Drawing power from the element allowing the energy to build up some more being concentrated for a much attack to be hit at the enemy or target when needed. The hands are then thrust forward to shoot out a streaming, red powerful beam of demonic energy. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, even with just one arm. However the attack has a big flaw if the user too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble. Enemies can block or dodge the attack completely
[Having the strength of a stronger cero or Hadō#66 blast. But still only can be block medium/high bakudo kido and barriers]
Supreme Hell Energy Buster: Creating a super version of a charged hell energy buster by putting both zoa koa energy and the origin power mixing them both combining them drawing more energy into the attack. The hands are then thrust forward to shoot out a streaming, super powerful beam of energy. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, with just one arm. However the attack has a big flaw if the user too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble. Stronger enemies can block or dodge the attack completely
[Having the strength of a Gran Rey Cero blast. But still only can be block high ranked bakudo kido and barriers]

» Origin Name: Crimson Flame

» Origin Power: Another power that started flowing through his body the moment his family was executed by that monster. A burning power that started growing along with his very rage, Amon discovered another power brewing inside of him. A fire type manipulation power which which is flame power burning of crimson hellfire. The red flame power called "Witchfire", Amon draws power through the origin from rag itself as the origin works with his emotional state. It starts with the danava demon getting angry as the Witchfire is activated creating the flame seals allowing the demon allowing the demon to use attack purposes. It starts by Amon getting angry or getting pissed that is when "Witchfire" begins to burn an hotter energy ready to be used. Whenever it used to create certain attacks like crimson flame blasts & beams, flame bombs, fireballs and nova bombs those flame seals help generate the firepower needed to create such attacks. These can burn up 1,700 degrees fahrenheit [But Witchfire isn't unlimited it has it limits meaning the danava demon can use it for creating attacks for 9 posts. One weakness to his power is water on ice depending if the affinity of hell or magic isn't used to boost the power]

» Origin Abilities: Flame Manipulation: Drawing on the origin with sheer willpower alone the danava can generate fire through his hands, fingers or his very eyes. It starts by focusing the flame within his mind first taking a deep breath as started manipulating through his hands started to build up the flame. Through flame sphere forming within his hands the demon can form the fire into long fire streams, burning knuckle punches or flaming spheres. Amon's flame powers can burn for only 2 minutes but it will feel a bomb when the enemy gets blasted. From experimentation the hot level of his flame powers can burn up to 700 degrees fahrenheit almost enough to easy peel or burn skin to death.


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» Atma Vatou Name: Shadowhawk

» Atma Vatou Appearance: This weapon was forged from pure energy and molded completely down into a longsword weapon which he named "Shadowhawk". From blacksmith training, Amon sharpen it into long and double-edged, with the forward-facing edge curving outward to form the guard. When it is used to attack, it leaves a white streak behind in its wake. The handguard is heavily designed with rings slanting down it and reversing at the center of the handguard. The pommel carries a round piece that almost resembles a face. Near the pointed out part of the handguard, there's also teeth biting into it.

» Atma Vatou Abilities: Crimson Blaze: Amon uses his energy power creating something of a energy conductor creating a heaving electric charge. Producing an lightning based energy as Shadowhawk will start glowing as little electricity will start sparking off. By using his zoa koa energy to control the lightning energy produced so it won't hurt him as well. From the controlled lightning energy, Amon can created a strong lightning super slash in the shaped energized crescent slash.
Crimson Blaze Damage
5-5 to 2-1 Tier/Damage: The power of the blast can completely damage to an enemy even completely destroying body parts, weaken attacks, breaking things on impact. The power can be able to greatly hurt and enemy depending on the situation it can kill.
1-5 to 1-1 Tier/Damage: It can blocked but enemies will still feel 50% percent but they would feel nearly half of the damaging effects of the attack wounding/hurting some organs even some body parts maybe broken or disfunctional.
0-5 to 0-1 Tier/Damage: The attack can be blocked completely or an enemy can feel 30% percent of the attack wounding a organ or poisoned half a body part. Depending on a enemy's speed power the attack can dodged completely.
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DEATH ENERGY

» DE Class: ???

» DE Powers: Semi Immortal: He didn't like at first while fully understanding the death energy and it immense power watching people get older and remaining the same. The danava demon actually grow some unknown form of resilient to viruses and poisons. Actually it's an bio-degeneration system which can handle certain harmful effects but not all on them Some won't degrade and be harmful hurting him but not killing him. Finding out he doesn't have to breath anymore in harmful/deadly environments which his body lacks anything except his blood. Example of this: He doesn't need to breathe in water anymore. He can heal a extremely fast but their a downside to this. The fast healing is very painful which the demon's blood restructures the damaged tissue or lost limbs by completely destroying it. This process fucking hurts but it uses both DE and zoa koa to completely regenerate back up which causing some blood that hurts the demon causing him to scream. [Cuts and Bruises can heal instantly. Limbs and Damaged tissue can be healed about 3-4 times depending on how DE is used within his dark power. Deadly Damaged Tissue and Destroyed/Broken can be healed only about 3-4 times because the power is very limited. Rehealing his full body the demon can heal himself completely but it will take 6-7 posts to full heal again depending if something bad doesn't happen.]
Until, Finally the regeneration is complete and and pain from it gone but the demon still feels because replacing blood cells and inner parts will hurt restoring them.

DE Barrier: Amon's Barrier can create something an grid double-layer barrier which will protect him from any harm coming to him. The DE Barrier is able to withstand many attacks like Kido, Cero, Iramasha Techniques and Magic and some angel iramasha abilities. Example: If Hadō Kido were to hit by the barrier it would die the moment it was touched exploding on impact without damaging him at all. The DE Barrier starts off when it comes into contact with the barrier the death energy will make the enemy's attack is unstable. Causing the chain reaction within the attack power causing the explosion of that attack. If Amon attacked by an enemy it maybe overwhelm the enemy's defenses or put them out of commision. If the enemy's near the same level as him it would weaken the enemy's defenses the Judas Effect will be activated when the enemy defenses at 82%. Stronger Opponents would be only weaken only by 45%. Zero Tier Opponents will would be only weaken only by 34%.

DE Breakdown: It took him years finally controlling the power of the breakdown ability reshaping the technique into decaying system one that can be very useful to the danava demon. From this, Amon can use the DE to generate the reishi particles within his very hands. As particles of reishi start circling around his hand starting a chain reaction as the reishi breaks down into an acid substance. This black goo acid is actually not harmful at first until the goo is transformed into a black energy. Amon can fire it like a energy blast is somewhat the same to cero. Once fire if the energy connects it turns back into at goo acid which will start burning becoming very hot. This can burn people, burn weapons, decay attacks burning holy attacks, destroy barriers, ripping apart seals, break curses apart and even redirect attacks. Still, Amon can use the attack for about 7-8 times. As for the acid itself burns instantly it hurts which will burn and in the next 2 posts become deadly dissolving agent.

DEATH ENERGY MERGE

» DE Merge Appearance: Amon's DE Merge was in some ways to honor but really to also honor the demon queen of the demon world Mana Asthavon. Amon used his DE Merge to actually take the form of the Black Susano'o which was something of an Demon Knight. He wears semi-heavy black/green lining armor and a muscular body suit with a large collar and the traditional hakama present, ballooning pants common in samurai. His long black hair is tied at the mane. All armored sections feature fully-functional green eyes with slit pupils. These eyes are not as much of an intimidation as much as the mask he wears; a completely black/green, two horned helmet with demonic features.

» DE Merge Powers: Blood Sword Breakdown: Within DE Merge, Amon can reforming the breakdown ability this time in his new form a black sword which can be formed from just blood drop. It starts off with the danava demon cutting his wrist a little and through the DE, Amon generates the black sword with some green tint. It shadowy version of a broad sword when the demon forces the sword down slashing a person or object it gives off medium amounts of that burning acid. The devil burning slash from the black sword can people sending violent burn damage upon them from one of two slashes of the blade. With some concentration, Amon can cut down an attack with the acid will slowly burn through the some certain attacks depending on the enemy strength either it destroy them or weaken them. As for curses, holy/light powers & magic is weaken the effective of the curse or holy power. Still, Amon can use the weapon about 8 times a thread but the sword returns back into becoming a little drop of blood. As for the acid itself burns instantly it hurts which will burn and in the next post become deadly dissolving agent. In truth, Amon's sword slash is a way to honor the Asthavon clan in beliefs in a dark sort of way.

» Death Matter:

BERSERK STATE

» Berserk State Appearance: Amon's Berserk state takes the form of the legendary monster known as "The Ripper" which was once known as a brute warmonger. Amon managed from magic to restore this beast form which was once forgotten. It basically both dragon and bull being fused together in a form of brute demon man. The Ripper is made of dragonian green skin with some brute muscle and some spiky skin making him a brute devil powerhouse. He had some dragonian spike knuckles and strong dragon teeth which are used biting and chomping down on things even people.

» Berserk State Enhancements: Dragonian Berserk Strength: From training, Amon found was this berserker strength was actually the combination for many stronger dragon fused together into the Ripper's well-being. It very consciousness, Ripper is something assassin almost more a hunter seeking it prey to rip apart. Amon can actually block some or withstand attacks depending on the enemy attack's strength and power. Example: Berserk Amon can block a bankai/strong attack swatting it away but start bleeding from the process. He'd be able to handle stronger attacks but too many at once would kill him the berserker. He trained constantly to keep his deadly strength very high from attacking people, hunting down animals and training in hot volcanoes to keep his strength very strong. The Dragonian beast is known to break bones and some hard attacks from his very power. Amon is capable of lifting stuff up to 10-15 tons and throw it at the enemy or target. The Devil Beast can break a mere wall with one hard hitting punch enough even to breakdown an entire house or building.

Dragonian Berserk Speed: The dragonoid demon has been granted on a higher running speed which will help hunt or track his enemy whenever the beast is ready to do something. Unlocking this power, Amon realized that his speed in this state has been greatly augmented to the point of where the devil beast run fast. Amon Berserk base speed is 90MPH.
To be honest, He has the same max speed as a police car which is currently 200MPH the devil ran through lava in bare feet to get that fast. Amon can probably match to shunpo/sonido speed by putting demon energy into it catching up to an enemy. One flaw, He's a little weak against holy attacks if an enemy and fire an holy attack against the danava demon and his speed will get weaker.

Necro Hellfire Breakdown: A green flame augmented version of his original breakdown technique which can truly burn his enemy or objects to death in green necro hellfire. The reishi particles are actually formed and then consumed by the devil beast as the breakdown ability activates breaking down the particles into a burning flame energy. Amon can release this from his mouth, eyes or his very hands releasing a green energy blasts or even energy bombs once they explode. The energy explodes or his it releases a necro acid which will burning the green fire starting to break apart enemy's tissue, enemy's bones even burn-down buildings, items and objects. Still, Amon can use the attack for about 7-8 times. As for the acid itself burns instantly it hurts which will burn and in the next post become deadly dissolving agent.


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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Adept
  • Demon Magic:Adept
  • Shadow Movement: Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Beginner


DE Control
  • Semi-Immortal Capacity: Adept
  • Breakdown Skill: Adept
  • Necromancy Strength: Beginner
  • DE Barrier: Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept

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» Conceptual World: Something really close to the demon world that the danava created to keep his eternal partner calmed and relaxed but then again his partner. Loves seeing the whole place in burning flames. But most of the realm isn't completely burned. A close of hell as most of city is burned by the demons and monsters but everywhere is burning except the heart of the city called "Hellsing City". The place looks almost the same of New York City but in a demon sort of way having many places to keep the eternal partner at ease. It is a well-developed city filled with skyscrapers and burroughs, and includes the Funland amusement park on Bellview Pier. Sites of interest include the Silver Sacks Tower, the Raptor News Tower, the Virility factory, St. Agares's Church, Devil's Dalliance, and Paradise. Many places and demon buildings to make the partner or himself feel like a little close to home.

» Rilīja Attributes: This former ancient structure known as the Demon King's Temple, or sometimes the Temple of the Demon King, is located in dark mind of Rilija. This temple is part of a huge complex that is connected to an inner pyramid called the Lost Tomb. This arena has two dragon-like statues by the entrance and a six-pointed star located on the floor, each point connecting to a claw-like pedestal holding a Kamidogu around the edge of the fighting area. An ideal place of where the partner of Amon wants to train but the greatest demonic place to have well deserving battle without complications. One place stands out next to the Temple, This location is a bleak and ruined landscape which is forever dominated by the night. The roadsides have and continue to serve as a battlefield, which gives a lingering feeling of spontaneous conflict. A catapult resided nearby which was the source of many deaths.

This arena returned as a stone fortress within the wasteland at war with another nearby tower.

Zenon Alastor

» Eternal Partner Name: Zenon Alastor

» Eternal Partner Appearance: A grotesque form is really a dark combination of demon reptilian and dark slayer samurai really mostly of a demon assassin. Zenon looks reptilian for his face the demon has some white demon horns and green glowing eyes and sharp teeth for chomping purposes and biting down. He looks a bit slim but muscular with his blue reptilian skin covering most of his body but really the demon has claws on his hands and feet. Combined with his reptilian skin is a sort of thin dark blue armor covering up the reptilian skin his chest, arms and legs. Zenon's demonic form is quite humanoid, though its exact features, generally its facial structure, cranial crest and the fins on its back. But the demon has a unique armored reptilian coat with special item fused upon it which is a burned bug scabbard. This bug scabbard holds his demon weapon placing zoa koa energy into make his demonic katana blade strong.

Certain times, Zenon takes another form when the demon is calm and more collective about things. His appearance becomes much more sinister; his skin takes on a sickly, almost grey pallor with blue, pulsating veins running across his face. His eyes become a deep red, with black pupils. He is shown to have worn a purple Victorian outfit with a white cravat, a large red jewel around his neck.

» Eternal Partner Personality: The dark demon considers himself more of an assassin-demon samurai who and sole objective in the safety of his new friend Amon Asthavon. Whenever in trouble, A certain mind set becomes active taking the very methods of dark demon samurai being very cunning and serious in his moves, choosing his weaponry and doing assassination attempts. During this mind set, Zenon is very quiet not saying a single word to his enemies or targets unless the target was someone that he cared or wanted to talk to. Even though the demon assassin may have a calm demeanor but the guy can be really demon ruthless when the situation calls for it. Zenon will unleash a ruthless demon warmonger more of a demon hunter taking on a dark persona rendering his enemies completely dead and silent. He was created from the dark and raw evil from Amon's mind making the new-breed demon something into a neutral-evil one. Obtaining an affinity of evil once this mood swings into fruition but nothing truly evil of an berserker or anything else just an assassin.

However, vestiges of Amon's life's kinder nature are prone to seep through. Even in the middle of his bloody vengeance, Zenon rarely shows compassion toward others, honoring last requests and offering a chance to say any last words before dying. He is reasonably wise and a skilled demon iramasha warrior, though his misguided thirst for vengeance clouds his greater judgment and leads his arguments in his mind. Enja also has a remarkably tenacious will that allows him to overcome virtually insurmountable obstacles and accept inhuman burdens for the sake of his ultimate goal. Zenon has considerable pride that will not stand for having his demon hood insulted or condemned by his enemies, but he is also capable of shelving his pride if it becomes something that will stand in the way of his objective.

All the time, Zenon is consider to be an instructor always wanting to train his friend making him stronger. Every time being ruthless, Zenon believes in his major belief if Amon get stronger then it would only lead to him getting stronger.

Despite his normally calm, brooding, calculating personality, he is shown to be extremely excited when his plans finally come together, showing a wicked, gleefully evil side to his personality. Zenon is also scornful of the idea of fealty or sacrificing one's life for others, believing only that the strong should survive and that the loss of one life can only be balanced by the loss of another.

» Eternal Partner Powers: Immense Demonic Strength: The strength of demon assassin; Zenon actually feasted upon his partner Caṛhā Saṅgalita transformation that were locked away in Amon's mind completely. It started merging with his flesh making the demon stronger in body and power. By devouring it, Zenon recollected it power making it one with his body improving his very strength making the demon stronger. The demon's physical strength is greatly boost to such an unbelievable great level that the demon can attack enemies hurting them doing some greater damage upon them. Very strong attacks might hurt but they might not have power of weakening him, Zenon can actually block attacks depending on their strength. He's able to overpower/withstand some stronger attacks for brief/long periods of time thanks to his newfound demon strength.

Immense Demon Speed: Unlike his friend, Zenon's speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented to the point where the fast demon assassin can move faster. Using his demonic agility and reflexes to dodge oncoming attacks that have do his harm. Zenon Alastor is shown to used his quick speeds along with his reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. Zenon has become fast enough to outrun his own energy attacks, allowing her to strike and enhance them or launch simultaneous attacks. Zenon can keep up with a shinigami's shunpo speed, iramasha's speed or arrancar's sonido speed yet the mad one gets a quadruple increase in speed within this state. He can actually match a captain's shunpo or espada's sonido speed depending on the enemy's speed.

Shadow Movement: This is what some MIGHT call the Demon's Answer to flash step: Shadow Movement. It allows them to move at quick burst of speeds on most occasions to allow them to travel very far distances in short amount of times, that is for certain. Though, this is where some similarities come to an end. Unlike most other races, Demon's get many nifty benefits then just Super Speed. Take this for example: from the seals on a demon's legs and feet that generate insane amounts of energy from all of the sources of power they collect; it will be able to give yourself temporary boost of intense speed called "Shadow Burst". Shadow Burst is a period of time where your demon will double their speed on average if they are at least adept. It will transition into how fast their attacks are created or launched, the demon's reaction time to increase the odds of evading, countering or noticing a person, object or anything else within a vicinity that has a prense in order to do something about it, it increases their mental awareness to more alert levels and it even goes into their natural powers.

Body Manipulation: This is a natural ability that all demon's possess if they wish to activate it or perform it. Most Demon's have full control over every aspect of his physical make-up, able to stretch themselves to obtain insane heights such as being thirty foot tall, being able to change their skin color, having the ability to shape-shift into different people that they are able to remember and, on much more powerful levels, being able to even detach, generate or fuse body parts together in order to increase odds of surviving. Though, this does not occur until at least one tier, and even then it's weak compared to the 0 tier version. Additionally, it can even be used for offensive or defensive purposes. For example, a demon can use Body Manipulation in order to generate a layer of steel-like skin around their body in order to increase their defense and block out outside sources from entering their body by clogging every pore on it. Or, for another instance, they could use it on the offensive side by hurling body parts at their opponent that are extremely hot and turn into acid blood, using their increased height to smash down on most opponents and the same may even apply for some more powerful demon's attacks; or finally, in an avoidance way, more powerful demon's could even control their body in order to be broken down into a liquid, wind or fire type form in order to gain more ways to escape or evade attacks.

Reptilian Pure Durability: Zenon had very high resistant to damage due to the fact he had both reptilian skin and demon bug skin combined making him able to withstand attacks at a very high rate. Amon actually infused magic from the sacrifice of demons improving the durability of Zenon's reptilian skin making it stronger than the regular reptilian yet it has been know to break apart/wounded. Strong enemy attacks like bankai or stronger shikai have been known to damage him even higher Kidō can hurt too. But the lower case stuff wouldn't even penetrate anymore.

Trained Demon Combatant: Zenon was trained to be a strong hand to hand fighter by his master & Asthavon instructors. He was taught the skills of a wrestler, boxer and kickboxer at very mid-demon age. Zenon Alastor is deadly lethal using punches and kicks being highly unpredictable in a fight using speed and reflexes to take on or kill his opponents. He has an unique ability that also very trapeze artists and trained acrobats used in the circus. His enhanced leaping, jumping and flipping abilities can dodge enemy's attacks or get away in the nick of time being more enemies come his way. The demon does using his full strength into his punches to let his enemies know who their dealing with. Zenon is skilled enough to even hold his own against stronger fighters for short/long amounts of time.

Katana/Sword Trained Specialist: He was actually born with the knowledge of using any kind of sword weapons handling them in battle. Zenon gained knowledge of shinigami and basic/mastered skills of how trained demons used their katanas/swords. Passing the ten trials, his overall skill has been shown to be a same as a demon specialist of perhaps maybe a slasher's skills. Zenon is master swordsmen specialist but still looking to an be an expert at this ability. Still a stronger person can defeat him at battle which can be really troublesome. Zenon learned many techniques of a swordsmen which can be used in a fight which can be useful using any katana/sword during a fight. He's right handed fighter when using blade

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

The Art Of Demon Magic: What exactly IS the Arts of Demon Magic? In a sense, you COULD call it the Demon's Kidō, but you'd be wrong as well. Why? Well, Demon Magic actually works like real MAGIC is suppose to. Of course, Kidō like spells, summons and barriers can be created with Demon Magic. That's a given. However, it can be taken MUCH further then that application. For instance, an advanced user in Demon Magic could use this in order to gain Telekinesis on a more light level. Even combat standards, if he were to look at an attack and see it coming, the Telekinesis would kick in and attempt to change it course if enough was generated from The Demon to negate it. Other example would be gaining Gyrokinesis in some cases in order to actual make it seem like they are toying with gravity itself; which in fact they are. Within a contained area, this demon could remove the gravity of some things, make it heavier in other places or even apply it to more focused objects like their attacks to cause more impact force.

Lightning Manipulation Powers: From master training, Zenon started generating unique lightning powers from the lightning element developing from his very body controlling the power. He has been given unique ability from her lightning dark class powers which she can enhance even augment attacks with lightning dark energy giving much more deadly effect. With willpower, Zenon can create lightning energy attacks such as lightning energy blasts in the form of lightning balls and even creating lightning energy bombs. The bombs can make a blast radius of about one mile when a lightning bomb explodes on impact. Also Zenon's lightning dark attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy.
Lightning Based Damage
5-5 to 2-1 Tier/Damage: The power of the blast can completely damage to an enemy even completely destroying body parts, weaken attacks, breaking things on impact. The power can be able to greatly hurt and enemy depending on the situation it can kill.
1-5 to 1-1 Tier/Damage: It can blocked but enemies will still feel 50% percent but they would feel nearly half of the damaging effects of the attack wounding/hurting some organs even some body parts maybe broken or disfunctional.
0-5 to 0-1 Tier/Damage: The attack can be blocked completely or an enemy can feel 30% percent of the attack wounding a organ or poisoned half a body part. Depending on an enemy's speed power the attack can dodged completely.

Yamato Demon Blade: After many years, Zenon used powers from the metal element to reforged the sword back together again. The revival of the legendary demon sword that was lost along with four other legendary demon weapons so many years ago in the demon world. Zenon managed to reconstruct it very dark power back into the reforged weapon by killing a shinigami/Shinigami and their Zanpakutō spirit. Torturing their very spirits to mold them into the demon katana weapon magic, dark incantations and many curse barriers to make the weapon stronger. Yamato Demon blade created from his bare demon hands an katana with an ornate guard. It needed two elements of power to hold it power completely together which was air and energy to make some demon purification to the demon blade.

Yamato Techniques
Super Combo:
Mega Combo:
Judgment Blaze
Perfect Judgment Blaze:
Spectral Swords:
Rising Star:
Blitzkrieg Slayer:
Augmented Blitzkrieg Slayer:
Aerial Raze:
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» Aliṅgana State Appearance:
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» Aliṅgana State Powers: Volcanic Power: This power came when the danava demon combined his placing the full force of his flame magic into his origin. A massive chain reaction combining the two properties until a certain magma was developing at the heart of both them. From his very transformation, Amon created as hot element from both his origin and with his pyrokinesis magic. Volcanic Power of his dragonoid from has been augmented pushing his tier up by one level along his volcanic power, strength and durability. Which led to the creation of this magma power brewing as the danava demon found it hard to control at first making it very painful. After some magma controlling, Amon found it hard to control the magma power using his very magic to keep it stable. The danava demon found this power can control to a hotter level of 1,800 degrees fahrenheit enough to burn to some level.

» Aliṅgana State Abilities: Dragonoid Burn Strength: From controlling this power finding out his dragonoid abilities drawing strength making them stronger. Physical strength of his dragonoid from has been augmented pushing his tier up by one level along his strength, power and durability. Being his first transformation, Amon showed the pure strength of burning hell-dragon in a pure demonic rage.The dragon beast has shown to handle against stronger opponents for brief periods of time. From his strength, Amon is capable of lifting up to about 2,400 to 5,500pounds and throwing with some minor problems in the muscle department.

Dragon Pure Durability: From dragonoid armor, Amon created the molten rock from the magma power as a demonic hardening agent reshaping it into an burning dragon armor. He has augmented high resistant to damage all due to the newly created armor building his defense. Physical durability of his dragonoid from has been augmented pushing his tier up by one level along his durability, strength and power. Most of the defensive powers of demon dragon come from the very skin providing a strong durability making that dragon strong. Making him able to withstand attacks at a very high rate. Strong enemy attacks like bankai, powerful attacks or stronger shikai have been known to damage him even higher based Kidō can hurt/break it too. But the low/medium based attacks wouldn't even penetrate the magma armor at all. Too many attacks can greatly hurt/damage his dragon armor maybe even kill even wound him greatly if he isn't careful. The armorized skin can be destroyed leaving the demon can be really open to damage even major damage.

Body Manipulation: This is a natural ability that all demon's possess if they wish to activate it or perform it. Most Demon's have full control over every aspect of his physical make-up, able to stretch themselves to obtain insane heights such as being thirty foot tall, being able to change their skin color, having the ability to shape-shift into different people that they are able to remember and, on much more powerful levels, being able to even detach, generate or fuse body parts together in order to increase odds of surviving. Though, this does not occur until at least one tier, and even then it's weak compared to the 0 tier version. Additionally, it can even be used for offensive or defensive purposes. For example, a demon can use Body Manipulation in order to generate a layer of steel-like skin around their body in order to increase their defense and block out outside sources from entering their body by clogging every pore on it. Or, for another instance, they could use it on the offensive side by hurling body parts at their opponent that are extremely hot and turn into acid blood, using their increased height to smash down on most opponents and the same may even apply for some more powerful demon's attacks; or finally, in an avoidance way, more powerful demon's could even control their body in order to be broken down into a liquid, wind or fire type form in order to gain more ways to escape or evade attacks.

Black Inferno Blast: Black Inferno is a massive burst of destructive energy a demon can unleash if they have Adept or higher on Za Koa. It starts by gathering energy from Za Koa along with the Demon's Blood and any type of darkness. From there, it will form into a ball of darkness that can be used to unleash serious damage upon anything it hits; resulting in a black explosion that is similar to a cero in destruction and can be broken down like a bala as well. Though, unlike a cero or bala, The Black Inferno Blast does alot more then just simply explode. When it explodes, if trapped within the blast, the opponent will begin to feel extreme amounts of heat generating from their skin; so hot, in fact, some believe they are actually on fire from the strain on a person's will. However, this does more then that. That's simply the sign of a dangerous demon parasite entering a person's body. If a direct contact is made or even partial contact, there will be a strong rush of parasites, demon magic and Za Koa's force entering a person's body. From that point, over the course of five post if there was a direct hit or three for a indirect, this will begin to heavily tax an opponent. It will force them to drain extreme amounts of energy until they are somewhat weakened, slowed or damaged if they are unable to extract it from there bodies.

Demonic Burn Flying: The dragonoid demon has the major ability of flying with burning flame particles of his dragon wings. With these, Amon can travel of different or many places whenever the wings take him traveling to places at a faster pace. The wings has the same strengths and weaknesses of an shinigami shunpo ability to speed like a shinigami warrior. However, If these are used in combat they be destroyed very easily but it would take 3 days for them to regenerate completely.

Dragonoid Claws: He has some strong dragon claws on his hand which can be used for slashing, destroying rocks, cutting animals and gutting people. When he gets angry, hungry and even for attacking, and defensive properties. He can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around. He can use the affinity of hell to empower his claws with energy to do certain augmented claw slashing attacks as well.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Telekinetic Powers: From his new power, Amon has some telekinetic powers to moving objects from one place to another without using physical contact. Moving objects like cars, boulders and trucks even tearing apart buildings or cement within his very mind. Using the small objects like knives, thorns and other small things their no limits because they don't weigh so much not being much strain on his mind power. Medium stuff like cars and trees using the mind power something like that the danava demon can only use this about 4-6 times. Larger stuff like cement grounds and buildings using the mind power something like that the danava demon can only use this about 1-3 times. Shielding himself from attacks takes a lot on concentration and willpower blocking a certain attacks with a few objects. To stop a stronger based attack cause him to use a lot of mind telekinetic powers causing his very brain to shut down for one post he'll be vulnerable.

Magma HellBurner: An magma mutation of his magma powers transforming it into a magma burner allowing him to control this pure magma power. As a dark magma red crystal burns inside the very core of the magma hellburner. The hellburner creation upon his right arm allowing him create some magma abilities to use of his advantage. From magma creation, Amon has managed to create a few techniques from this power which can be for unique attack purposes.
Magma Special Techniques
Hellzone Burner: By charging the magma energy within the palm of his hand until it ready for an attack. Amon will force the magma energy condensing it into a energized magma ball sphere which the danava uses for attack an opponent. When it hits it will feel a hot fire bomb with a major blast radius of about a 30 feet. It has a flaw if the energized magma sphere is destroyed then the attack is no more. This inflict some damage upon his opponent having the strength of seven grenades combined. Amon can use this technique about 6-10 times.
Hellzone Magma Killer: By taking one hellzone burner and breaking it down into many energized magma spheres about twenty-eight of them to be used on his enemy. It starts with creating the hellzone burner and taking breakdown ability to break down the attack making it into many energized magma spheres. Tracking an enemy for just one post like a bloodhound seeking it prey. As each energized magma sphere will feel like an energized bullets that actually followed the opponent's movements and attack at a very high speed. Each energy sphere has the strength of 3 grenades combined, Amon can use this technique about three times.
Burning Devil Cannon: The demon technique is a strong spiral magma laser beam to hurt her enemies. The demon move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the demon energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, and two thin magma laser beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight magma beam. The resulting hot beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked or dodged easy enough if the enemy had faster speed/defense. It has the same strength and weakness as cero burning flame sort of way.
Magma Final Hell Buster: Which the danava demon can transform the very power of hellzone burner and turning it into a better magma weapon then before. The magma will start boiling as the demon makes the hellzone burner stronger putting more zoa koa into it. Then by squeezing on it, Amon started chain reaction which the demon attacks shooting out with an raw magma energized wave feeling like a hot wave in butter. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, with just one arm. It has a big flaw, Amon is too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble, It has the same strength and weakness as Gran Rey Cero in a burning flame sort of way.
Apocalypse Burnwaver: By combining the magma and death energy together the danava demon found out that he created an deadly power from it but very destructive. Getting angry, Amon will start growling in rage and then focusing the magma power with immense proportions. The magma power all of it will be forced within the palm of hand, Amon will release it throwing at his enemy creating a gigantic energized magma bomb at a immense magma and zoa koa power. Typically, this attack is used to destroy many buildings or a small city or as a last-ditch effort to severely/greatly wound an opponent. Maybe super stronger than Cero Oscuras producing more zoa koa power & DE into it but it not weaker like Grimmjow Gran Rey Cero.When it hits something it almost like an big and massive explosion but it can be destroyed if it blasted in right in the center depending enemy's attack power or by a much stronger energy attack. [FOR EVENT/NEAR DEATH ONLY; ONE TIME THIS CAN BE USED.]

» Unnata Release Appearance:
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» Unnata Release Powers: Blackheart Plasma: The creation of magma, Amon's origin took another elemental base this time the magma transformed itself into plasma. It starts by placing an ionized gas into the magma reconstructing it into a new elemental source becoming a hotter substance. The magma power has been augmented by the gas and the demon magic recreating into an plasma energy power.

» Unnata Release Abilities: Pure Demonized Strength:

Demonized Speed/Reflexes:

Pure Demonic Endurance:
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A/N: Didn't see the Eternal Partner stuff the first time around. Will review that upon the re-check.

H'okay Kade. I'm gonna keep this as productive as I can, but know in advance that this is a doozy. There's a lot that has to change before this character can ever hope to actually RP, so I'm not gonna beat around the bush here.

To start, having a fuckton of titles is one thing, but the affiliations/ranks you have on your character don't exist. That space is for organizations or entities that PH actually has that your character might find themselves allied with. It isn't to rip off a bunch of syndicated TV crap to try and make your character seem like a badass or fulfill some kind of manchild power fantasy.

Secondly, I need literally every reference to Dragonball Z taken out of this application. No ifs, ands, or buts. If I re-check this and I see so much as a senzu bean I will deny it outright on principle. This copypasta ripping straight from the source stuff isn't gonna cut it. So, again. EVERY reference. Everything from titles and ranks to appearance, down through powers.

“Likes” and “Dislikes” need to be changed for this same reason. There is no Prince Vegeta here and he didn't murder Amon's family. Make up some random figure to have done it, or ask around to see if anyone would like their character to have been the one to do it, but don't just rip off characters from other sources, man.

Needless to say this applies to History as well. ALL the saiyan stuff needs to go.

Now.. to powers.

Chaotic Energy Origin

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Discovering his power, Amon can produce a energy system almost the same to demon zoa koa but of an unlimited supply because of his dark birthright. Allowing the danava to generate, produce and even create deadly amounts of chaotic energies into his well being. Because of it from the raw energy that comes from it, Amon's physical abilities can become stronger perhaps even faster in his demon skills. Special Trait: Chaos energy can something more of a power booster allowing the danava to reach new levels of energy power. Allowing Amon to ascend to become something greater than he already was as a normal danava reaching a new plateau of power. By drawing on the chaos energy from the chaos magic the danava produce energies that can help both physically and mentally. 

Alright, so the first problem I have with this is that absolutely NO source of energy he could generate on his own would be unlimited. Not gonna happen. He already has access to za koa, so you want to give him “similar, but just doesn't run out?” Also not really an origin since to me this ENTIRE section can be covered as a couple of custom demon spells.

Secondly, you can't just say “this boosts him”. I need to know by how much of a factor, for how long, and how many times it can boost him in the areas that it can. I also need to know if he can have on multiple boosts at once, or if it needs to be in only one area at a time. These are details vital to powers having balance.

All in all, the way this is worded as far as what this energy actually is and what it actually does is incredibly vague and poorly worded. It helps him mentally as well? How? Is it like Prozac or Marijuana? Why even include that detail if you weren't going to elaborate?

Chaotic Energy Origin Abilities:

The enhanced strength and reflexes both need to be tuned down a lot. Basically what you're telling me is that he can not only get stronger than his opponents, but faster AND smarter too? This is seriously venturing into Gary Stu territory and needs to be corrected.

Devil Trigger:

This needs to be toned down, made like.. his ONLY form, or more preferably removed entirely. What I'm seeing is that this is a boost to ALL of his skills on TOP of the boosts he's already receiving. I expect literally this entire ability to be reworked since you can't have a form WITHIN your origin abilities anyway especially not one that's supposed to function like a normal form progression???

Full Demon Buster:

For BOTH of the sub-abilities of this I need some sort of idea of how strong they are in comparison to another kind of attack. Cero, a high-level kido, whatever, but I need to know how strong these are exactly. On top of that, I need to know how many times he can use these per post AND per thread.

Origins p. II

YOU NEED TO CHOOSE BETWEEN CRIMSON FLAME AND RED HELL LIGHTNING FOR THE SECOND ORIGIN. YOU CAN HAVE UP TO TWO BUT DANAVA CANNOT HAVE THREE ORIGINS. DID YOU EVEN READ THE RACIAL INFORMATION?

I will grade both of them but you have to PICK one you can't have all three.

Crimson Flame:

I read the Origin Power description three times and still don't know what the fuck this ability does. You need to get a lot more specific as far as the individual things he can do with it. On top of everything else he can do, he can control fire that honestly won't even hurt anyone strong enough to stand “in his way” or whatever. WITH that fire, he can hit targets and make defenses? Or hit defenses that are made of flames? That doesn't make sense. On top of this, you weren't even consistent with how hot the flames get. Origin power says 320 degrees, but abilities says up to 400 degrees?

Red Hell Lightning:

If he can generate lightning, I need to know the voltage. I also need to know if while he's channeling the energy if he will shock people that touch him. On top of that, I need more specifics on ALL of these origin abilities since none of them give me even a rough estimate of their strength.

I need to know how many times he can use Maverick Lightning per thread, and how many posts it lasts for.

I need to know how many enemies Overload Burst can chain through before it stops, how much weaker it gets for each opponent hit, how many times it can be used per thread, and how many times it can be used per post.

Hellshock Grenade's blast radius needs to be tuned WAY down. A mile is way too huge of a radius to just pass off casually like that. On top of this, I need to know how long it takes him to charge one and how many he can use per post/thread.


Atma Vatou Abilities:

I need your Getsuga Tensho ability to be specified as to how many times it can be used per post, per thread, and also how strong each individual blast is. On top of that, I need to know how strong the sub-abilities are, as well as if using them lessens the amount he can use the sword's abilities overall.

DE Powers:

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(He can actually drink poisons???) 

Remove this.

On top of this, his semi-immortality has no specifics as to how fast or strong his regeneration is. Even with the pain it causes him, I need a limit on how much damage he can heal and how many times he can heal himself. On top of this, I need the bio-degeneration toned down to specify that he can resist toxins/poisons but not degrade ANY harmful thing that enters him. That's a bit too OP as far as how vague.

DE Barrier:

This also needs to be toned down. The complete negation of holy energy is not gonna happen since holy energy on site specifies how effective it is against demonic energy. On top of this, you don't at any point specify how strong the barrier is. It also needs to be said that there has to be a way to break the barrier for everyone. I need to know how much it would take to break the barrier for those above, at, and below his tier level. Those at his tier level would not only be able to weaken it by 80%. There has to be a way for them to break it. For those lower than him as well.

DE Breakdown:

I need to know how strong this acid is as far as what it can break down. Also, I need to know how many times this can be used per post/thread, as well as for how long the acid will burn once its made contact with something.

DE Merge Powers:

Same note as above. I need to know how strong the acid is, and how many times he can use it per post/thread, as well as if opponents can negate the burn, and how long the burn lasts for.

Berserk State Enhancements:

For “things of immense proportions” within the Dragonian Berserk Strength, I need to know an approximate maximum of how much he can lift. Otherwise, this is also worded very vaguely and I need to know the kind of durability we're looking at here since being able to block “some or many attacks” doesn't tell me a hell of a lot.

For the Berserk Speed, I need to know what his base speed could be compared to. Either in a MPH readout of some kind or comparable to a high speed movement technique.

Necro Hellfire Breakdown:

Once again, I need to know details about the acid he uses. Also, I need to know the strength of the fire and the blasts themselves if used in blasts, as well as the bombs. I need to know how many times the blasts and/or bombs can be used per thread/post.

Volcanic Power:

Need a note here that he can't dissolve Player Characters from head to toe without permission from the controller. Also, I need the molten rocks, underground lava explosions, and earthquakes removed since all of these are way too vague as just things he can say he can do at “some level” since it's not specified how or what he can do with any of these things.

Dragonoid Burn Strength:

At this point I think we need to cool it with the strength buffs. This is the third or fourth one that doesn't specify how much it boosts him and it doesn't even seem necessary since it says he has muscle problems from throwing “medium/large things”. There needs to be some sense of progression through the app that things start weak and will gradually get stronger but Amon is all over the place. Some abilities in his base form are stronger than his final form which makes no sense.

Dragon Pure Durability:

Aside from the fact that this ability repeats itself about five times without saying anything, I need to know how strong the armor is, how much damage it can take, etc. But this is also to the point where I'm shaking my head at seeing another durability buff because it seems all this guy can do is get stronger and harder to hit and then throw getsuga clones.

Demonic Burn Flying:

Need a note about whether or not the speed boost this gives him can be used in combat or not. If so, same note as above as far as why keep repeating the same thing over and over?

Dragonoid Claws:

These aren't going to be able to penetrate literally anything so I need the 45% note changed since its likely that stronger opponents could probably block him completely.

Telekinetic Mind Powers:

Aside from the title being redundant, this ability is too powerful. If he's gonna have telekinesis, it needs to not be able to affect other people's techniques/attacks. He could lift inanimate objects with this, but he cannot stop stuff like kido or “shikai/bankai” attacks. Even with the vulnerabilities this is still too overpowered. Also, I need the part about him being able to talk to people mentally removed as that is telepathy and not telekinesis. Beyond that, it is also OP since from your description he could do it to anyone without their consent and that my friend is Godmodding.

Magma HellBurner:

Any and all of the things that are mentioned in the description I need specifics on. You can't just list a bunch of random shit he can do with a power without giving any specifics as we do not trust you not to abuse that vagueness in a way that would cause you to have the upper hand in a combat situation. This entire description needs to be rewritten to either omit the random-ass abilities and just keep the ones under “Techniques”, or to specify the ENTIRETY of what he can do with this ability.

Hellzone Burner:

Again, need the blast radius toned down. A mile is too far. Also, need to know how strong it is and how many times it can be used per thread/post. Same as the others.

Hellzone Magma Killer:

Same note as above. Also, I need to know how long they can “track” the enemy for before they disappear, as the enemy will obviously have chances to dodge away.

Apocalypse Burnwave:

I need a comparison as to how strong this blast is. Gran Rey Cero strength? Oscuras strength? If it's strong enough to destroy “a small city”, I need a note that this can only be used one time per thread, and make it Event Only as well please.

Burning Devil Cannon:

Once again, need limits on strength and usage just like with the rest.

Magma Final Hell Buster:

I need actual details on this blast since from what I'm seeing its just ANOTHER energy wave attack. Is it stronger at all than his normal ones? If so, how much? And how much stronger is the “Super Magma Hell Buster”? Because you just mentioned that without giving any details about it at all.

Overall Kade this app isn't bad so much as it just feels kinda rushed. Take your time making corrections and make sure everything is balanced and fair. Once all these issues are taken care of, I'll sweep through the app again, pick out any more small details that need changing, and try and get you an approval.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Tue Jul 12, 2016 1:17 am

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Tue Jul 12, 2016 10:14 am

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Zanpakutō/Katana Trained Specialist: He was actually born with the knowledge of using any kind of sword weapons handling them in battle. Zenon gained knowledge of shinigami and basic/mastered skills of how shinigami used their zanpakutos. Passing the ten trials, his overall skill has been shown to be a same as a shinigami's captain of perhaps maybe a vizard's skills. Zenon is master swordsmen but still looking to an be an expert at this ability. Still a stronger person can defeat him at battle which can be really troublesome. Zenon learned many techniques of a swordsmen which can be used in a fight which can be useful using any katana/sword during a fight. He's right handed fighter when using blade

Change this to swordsmanship. He can be skilled with blades, but not with shinigami Zanpakutō as he is a demon. Once this is changed, I believe the app will be ready for approval.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:33 am

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:39 am

Application Checklist
  • Name [-]
  • Appropriate Age [-]
  • Gender [-]
  • Appearance Present [-]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [-]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
  • 10 sentences for personality [-]
  • History is of appropriate length [-]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [-]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [-]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [-]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[-]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [-]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: Thank you for the cooperation, Kade. Approved.

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Sun Jan 15, 2017 7:37 pm

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Amon Asthavon [Approved; 3-2--]   Sun Jan 15, 2017 8:13 pm

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