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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]   Fri Sep 02, 2016 9:26 pm

THE SACA DILA TEMPLATE

Enter The Saca Dila Character
非再生可能


I. Basic Information


» Name: Sølv Rosa
» Age: 0 [recently spawned from the incursion of the Black World into the Seretei]
» Gender: Female
» Race: Shinigami Saca Dlia

» Association: Mirja Eeola

» Appearance:
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» Purpose: This Saca Dila, having been made very recently through Mirja's actions against the Black World's arrival in parts of the Seretei, has not got a grand scheme being fight the invaders in her realm - the realm of taint - and then survive long enough to gain a reason to exist beyond protecting the realm.

II. Personality


» Personality: Having been a very recent construct, there is little in the way of mentality in this Saca Dila. It protects the land it was born from, and even as young as it is, desires something more from it's existance than simply fighting. However, beyond this, it has no persona. However, this is not as much a fault as some people would believe, seeing her as she is. This is instead, quite the boon to her. For she has nothing to tell her what to do, or how to do it, she is, much like the Asuchi that the Shinigami are given when they first enter their roles in life and so imprint the nature of their very souls onto it and craft something that has yet to exist in the world, something unique and at times quite terrifying to behold depending on the person that is in question at the moment of creation, an empty piece of paper, for all who wish to draw upon her, and create a beautiful picture, or a harrowing nightmare, however the dice may fall.

III. History


» History: Nothingness. This was Solv's existance for time immemorable. But then, after aeons of this lack of being, the Black World's foothold on the Soul Society was hurt by powerful heat beams, carving into it, slicing her breathen into pieces. It was this, that gave Solv what she needed to actually be, to exist.

Crawling from the muck, the dank, dark, abyss that was her home for so long, she moved from Nothing, to Something. And this Something was Protect her Lands. Still, even with this in her mind, she wanted something else. She didn't know why she wanted something else, she just...did. She did not even know what she wanted from her life, which was a point that would have annoyed her, had she the emotional maturiaty to understand how emotions worked. It was as if she wanted the dream, rather than what the dream was about. She wanted the ability to go and make something of herself, more than she actually knew what she was going to do to make something of herself.

IV. Powers


» Powers: Aside from the Zanpaktou, Solv has the same powers as Mirja, from her super-dense body and momentous strength, to her surprisingly considerable skill in Hakuda.

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The Zanpaktou, is a different thing. It looks reletively the same, same size, same general shape and lack of embelishment, but it releases differently. The Shikai is a basic affair, but unique. It's release phrase is 'Fade, Grendel' and it's form coats her entire body in a very thin layer of the Zanpaktou's reiatsu. This obviously lights her up on all Reiatsu sensors, but also allows her body to increase it's strength and durability in relation to how dark the surrounding area is. The Sahara in the middle of the day would provide practically no power boost at all, but underground with no light source would triple her power and durability. The shikai also grants her perfect night vision, allowing her to hunt her prey even when there is no light to see by.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]   Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:28 am


«REVIEWING YOUR STUFF NOW»

Even though this is an NPC of sorts, I'd make this character's personality at least ten sentences. Add three more sentences to her history as well.

I'd also still paste the abilities she has from her other app into the profile and put them in a spoiler or make them viewable. That's up to you.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]   Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:30 am

I...can't make the personality any longer. She doesn't have one yet. Same goes for the History, really. That is the sum total of her existance so far.

Any insight you want to give would be helpful, but, I can't do anything myself.
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]   Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:35 am


«REVIEWING YOUR STUFF NOW»

"Having been a very recent construct, there is little in the way of mentality in this Saca Dila. Most can think of this has a blank slate. Since she is a newborn creature, there has not been much time for a personality to develop and grow. Therefore, there is a lot of room for development for this entity to eventually evolve into. For the time being, however, there seems to be some faint ambitions within the creature. Within it's conscious lays a need to want to protects the land it was born from.

And, even as young as it is, desires something more from it's existence than simply fighting. It isn't quite sure what it wants, but it believes there is something more to life than simply combat and bloodshed. It can't be all that she was born into and she wants to discover just what this worlds offer. Thus, even if she has no personality of her, she wishes to craft one and discover it in this new world she was born into. "

I made one. Does this not fit and sound better?

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]   Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:48 am

Personality buffed, history increased, and spoiler added for her full compolation of powers.
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]   Tue Sep 13, 2016 1:29 pm


«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


  • Comments/Notes: Everything is up to par!

  • Tier: 4-1

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