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Mirja Eeola
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CHI HUMANS


I. General Information


» Name: Elis Saal
» Titles: Brat
» Age: 18
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Na [Unaffiliated with any group]

» Appearance Description: Elis is a girl that could, in the right light and by the right people, be considered cute. She doesn't have large assets or a stunning face, or anything to make her really stand out in a crowd, but when she is out of the crowd, she is a little better than the average girl. She is of average height, around five foot nine, and has short auburn hair with eyes to match. Nothing about her stands out, and that is how Elis likes it. Standing out is to much of a problem.

Clothing wise, she generally wears a Nun's habit most of the time, considering she spends most of her time in the church being a nun, and even when she is allowed out, it is usually with a Superior and she would never all Elis to wear anything but a Habit. However, there are times when she manages to slip out, and then she wears a much more casual shirt, jacket, and jeans combo.
» Appearance Picture: Elis Saal[APPROVED 5-3] Hana%20Katsuragi-from-The%20Qwaser%20of%20Stigmata-11076-193880677

II. Personality


» Personality: Surprisingly, for a person who was raised by nuns, Elis is a little brat with most things. However, this has only surfaced in the last few years, and so could be her teenage puberty rather than an actual part of her personality. Regardless of weither it is there to stay or not, Elis can be difficult to deal with, due to a stubborn nature and rebellous attitude. This can be suppressed or exasebated depending on the person, but she is a general teenaged girl in most aspects.

When not with people of athourity who like to boss her around and tell her what to do, Elis is a nice enough girl, polite, and helpful when people require aid, and generous with what possessions she has. Elis can nevwr stand to see a person cry, however, and will always try to help them out when she sees it, regardless of how she is feeling at the time, or even what she is doing.

A new, and - to her - very strange feeling has been budding inside her since she started this annoying puberty lark, but she has not the insight to understand it, and only believes that the Nuns would not like to hear about it. They were always going on about the weaknesses of Sin, and so she didn't want to risk it being something like that.

» Likes: Helping people [When not told]: Elis actively enjoys making people happy when she helps them out, but only when she decides to do it herself. if people tell her to do it, then regardless of how much she likes it, she will set her heels in and refuse.

Cooking: There is something about the art of creating edible food, and then sharing it with people, that sparks within Elis' heart and brings about a great enjoyment with each meal cooked. She is unsure why, and is currently not about to try and find out, because that always ruins it.

Something...else: Recently, Elis has been filled with thoughts of something she can't quite put her finger on. She knows that it is something that is intensely enjoyable, if she could just find out what it was, she'd be on to a winner.

Disobidience: A spark from her new puberty, Elis likes refusing the demands of those who claim to be superior to her. The stubborn putting out of those above her is a childish but currently enjoyable pass time.

» Dislikes: Lack of creative freedom: Elis has an intense dislike of being told what to do when she is cooking or drawing, or making some clothes. She prefers to let her whims whisk away to a better, more vibrant place. And so any imposing on this creativity is met with disdain.

Working on her Shiyong: The nuns, regardless of whatever facts they might have heard, refer to Elis' Chi-based powers as God's Blessing, and encourage her to practice when ever she has a spare moment. At first, Elis was happy enough to do so, with childish naivety, but as she has grown up, the encouragement has become more insistance, as the time spent practicing deminished. In response to the insistance, she has dug her heels in and refused, leading to a drop in her skills where she could be in relation to where she currently is.

III. Background Information


» Background: Elis Saal was left by her mother on the steps of a church, and never once introduced or told anything about her family. Any time she asked, the nuns would redirect Elis' inquiery, either with a gentle, or harsh hand, but either way, she never got anything out of them. And so, she grew up inside a Church, as a Nun. She had few friends, as she was not allowed out of the convent often, and there were few novices her age. As a result she grew up without much ability to interact with normal people, but a smart girl, for the tutoring that the Nuns had given her. When she was allowed out, to shop for the convent, she was able to interact and developed a reputation as a polite young girl, but it was slow, and the outings were few and far between, so they did not affect her growing up that much.

Another thing that put her aside from everyone else, was an inate ability to feel her internal Chi, and to understand what needed to be done without anyone having to tutor her in it. Not that her understanding of what to do sped things up at all. She brought it to the attention of the Nuns, and they set a special schedule, full of religious ceremony, for her to pray and become intune with her internal power. It took her several years, and she was in her early teens by the time she had managed to learn to manipulate her Qidong properly. This was the time when her uniqueness took on another turn. With her Qidong open, and her Chi flow moreso than before, people surrounding her could feel a sense of profound peace when in her presence. This led the Nuns to call her power a blessing from God, and that was that, they did not look into it any further.

However, reaching the age of independance and equivilent curiosity, Elis looked further into herself, and the surrounding people when she could manage to get out. it was slow going without anyone to teach her, but it slowly manifested itself as her Chi Ability. With focus and concentration, she could direct her energy towards a person or object, and restore them to a more intact condition. She practiced on broken roof tiles, until she was found by one of the Superiors, and brought before actual people. There, she learned that while it was easy enough to restore tiles, humans were a much more complicated thing. Scuffs, scraps, and bruises were not to difficult to heal, but anything beyond that was a lengthy process, and exhausted her beyond any day of hard chores. Her skill would probably evolve from this point to become easier and less draining, but she was entering a stage of inate rebelliousness, which most children went through in their transformation into an adult. So while the nuns wished for her to focus and practice, she refused and shunned the entire concept, leading to a degration in her skills.

She began to sneak ou tof the convent more at this point, shirk being a Nun and try to find who she was beyond the convent. Her unique Qidong flow, even when stunted with neglect, kept most of the nuns passive and the punishment for being so bratty was limited, allowing her to get away with more of what she wanted to, and giving her the chance to try and spread her wings in the outside world.


» Passive Chi Abilities: Heiwa: A passive ability that Elis has no real control iver. This fills the immidiate three feet in a spherical radius, with a sense of peacefulness, and allows for more conversational interactions, even with people who have a reason to be irritated with her. There is a limit to the power, beings of incredible anger, or those with a reason to be incredibly annoyed or otherwise hostile towards Elis will be able to overcome it. And people with considerable determination to see their less than friendly intent come to fruitition can reject the field of friendship.

V. Shiyong


» Seidou Abilities: Torimodoshimasu: A power of limited application currently, this allows her to heal the wounds of anything tangible, uterlizing Sei's recovery abilities with Dou's projection. Be it tree, wall, or person. However, her skill with it is not in any way great, and so anything outside of a minor wound of small broken object, the healing is lengthy and takes a lot out of Elis to use, making it something that she rarely uses.

VI. Chuxian


» Awakened Appearance: (Please Describe how your character looks when they are in their awakened state)
» Awakened Powers: (Describe what type of powers your character gets from awakening.)


» Perfectly Awakened Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when Fully Awakened)
» Perfectly Awakened Powers: (Describe what powers your human gets in this state)



IX. Skill Sheet


Chi Skills
  • Sei: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Dou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Buzhou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chuxian: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



END OF CHI Template

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[THEFROST] and Lilith



Last edited by Mirja Eeola on Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:44 am; edited 1 time in total
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Sun Oct 09, 2016 7:35 pm
[adm]Just a few things before I continue.[/adm]

Heiwa: A passive ability that Elis has no real control iver. This fills the immidiate area with a sense of peacefulness, and allows for more conversational interactions, even with people who have a reason to be irritated with her. There is a limit to the power, beings of incredible anger, or those with a reason to be incredibly annoyed or otherwise hostile towards Elis will be able to overcome it. And people with considerable determination to see their less than friendly intent come to fruitition can reject the field of friendship.


How large is the immediate area. Just wanna see some specifics, this can potentially change with tier and can be included in your upgrades when you do it. I see no problem in that. If staff questions this statement quote me on it.


Torimodoshimasu: A power of limited application currently, this allows her to heal the wounds of everything, uterlizing Sei's recovery abilities with Dou's projection. Be it tree, wall, or person. However, her skill with it is not in any way great, and so anything outside of a minor wound of small broken object, the healing is lengthy and takes a lot out of Elis to use, making it something that she rarely uses.

Change everything to tangible things and I'd see it more approachable. Good limitation otherwise.

Fix these things and I can carry on with the grade. Send me a DM on discord or post on here when it's done.


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Mirja Eeola
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Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:45 am
Ok, given a set radius for the peace aura, and changed the vauge and badly worded 'everything' to Tangible.
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Mon Oct 10, 2016 11:38 am
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes:
Tier: 5-3


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