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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Henrex
Henrex
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Tue Jan 24, 2017 7:59 am
[mod]Moving to unchecked for the time being.[/mod]
Henrex
Henrex
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Fri Jan 27, 2017 3:03 pm
From the Death energy; Eric found out through it power it can restore the mad persona and mad power back his body and mind again. Revitalizing the madness, He can become the ruthless mad killing machine of pure anger all over again even though it's a limited power. This time around the demon of madness can fight without restraints or problems of the past holding him down because with the new madness. Madness Eric believes "the past is the past" allowing him to become violent, dark hearted, refiring the flames of hell with his appetite of destruction being a hell bent fighter of rage. Without the thoughts of family or friends holding him down, Eric doesn't feel pity or fear while in this state of violence not stopping for no reason at all. Until enough carnage and destruction are happening from his hands and fallen enemies and victims are lying dead at his feet.

No. This is not possible. While this is an anime world, memories and former personality traits are not able to be regenerated from Death Energy. And, alongside that, Eric is NOT permitted to have Death Energy. He didn't get it from his family, and he has NO connection to Death. Remove it.

Demonic Power: Because of his shadow dark birthright, Eric had gained tremendous amounts of demon power into his dark body. From his creation of blood sacrifices, rituals, imprisonment spells and enchantments which were to stabilize the fallen iramasha blood creating a demon from it. Also, He's the child of poison which regulates his demonic energies keeping it a very high yet considerable level for fighting. From training, Eric can unleash it almost like a bunch of F5 tornadoes attacking at a large city at once. Formerly known as the demon of destruction after his restoration the shadow iramasha within him granted him shadow power to reinforce into demon energies. The hell-bent demon warrior has the same power to that of a shinigami's vice captain, arrancar, and other strong warriors. The thing that hasn't changed is the former demon of madness loves of fighting stronger opponents for short or long amounts of time. In the past, He once believe that"the only thing to defeat power is more power."

No. Eric is not going to have anywhere CLOSE to that amount of power. From the power level he'll be at, he won't be anywhere close to destroying a city with power level alone. What that means, is that he would have enough power of a 1-3 - 1-5 character. That is not happening. Take a look at THIS thread for more information.

Hiroshima Combat Proficiency: Even though his mother trained him and his brother about only the basic skills of combat. Illyria wanted her sons the both of them to be fighters. The Hiroshima clan trained him further every day until the noble demon stated learning advanced skills gaining much an brawler's style. Through research, Eric started learning various skills such as boxing, kickboxing, taijutsu and other striking abilities improving his strikes. From boxing training, He knew how to empowering his fists with zoa koa energy making them into strong strikes which feeling like small battering rams. The demon hoping his strikes becoming accurate even enough to hit hard and fast to hit his target. Eric Zarathos fights like a former championship boxer and karate fighter wrapped into one warrior of a fallen and lost clan. Still, He known to have his demonic share of victories and failures from enemies which people have been known to defeat him pretty well.

None of this makes sense. Boxing and karate two polar opposite styles entirely, and trying to fuse them together is just going to make you equivalent to that of a puddle of gelatin. Either fix this to make sense, or remove it. And this time, open up Google...

Pure Blast: The demon is able to fire a blast of white energy from his hand. By absorbing molecules from the atmosphere as the demon starts harnessing those molecules making them into energy. Then fired the blast which has only medium strength to it which can be dodged or counter. This can be charged up into a much stronger attack that will take a post to gather energy for it power.

Pure Beam: The attack is almost the same power and weakness to stronger cero being shot from the mouth or hands. The attack starts off as he starts growling gathering large amounts of energy. Bigger Energy particles started forming a white ball, Eric started yelling and the white ball releasing a powerful blast of concentrated white energy at the target. However, the technique itself has a flaw the ball if it destroyed then the attack weakens with 50% strength. Making it little hard to dodge, block or destroy it.

Eye Lasers: These are precise laser-like beams shot from both eyes. The potency of the Eye Laser technique varies, but most of them are very fast and able to nullify weak attacks and small projectiles, as well as cripple opponents when they are greatly damage and damage other objects. This can blocked or dodged easily.

Devil Spiral Beam: The technique is a strong spiral laser beam to hurt her enemies.The move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the demon energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, the attacker shouts the name of the attack and two thin energy beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight beam. The resulting beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked to dodge easy enough if the enemy had faster speed or great defense.

All of these need an actual cooldown, and more specifics. And also, you need to describe how the hell he's able to manipulate the molecules in the atmosphere. Since, molecules are a group of ATOMS. Atoms are considered the smallest unit of matter. Devil Spiral Beam, I need to know how long it takes to charge, what level of defenses it can break through, and, like the above, a cooldown.

Blood-Reaper's Eyes: A last resort to restore the blood eyes technique through research by one of his remaining minions. This works as the same as a higher Blood Eye technique but this version is completely demonic in nature. Very same but demonic abilities like the Blood Eyes the demon had to his eyes replaced and blindfold for weeks to gain each of demonic abilities of the devil reaper eyes. Through this, Eric's blood eyes went through an unique transformation taking the eyes of a demon war-hunter a demon war eyes. Unlike his other blood eyes, Eric's Reaper eyes can actually track an enemy movements perfectly. He can perfectly keep track with an enemy's speed power such as an shinigami's flash step, iramasha's chaos warp or an arrancar's sonido. When an enemy is attacking, Eric can track their movements & attack patterns to perfectly time his attacks accordingly. Through experimentation, Eric has been able to cancel illusion/mental-like abilities from the tier level that he's on. Also given a chance of dodge attacks when he combines it with his shadow movement & affinity of hell to give himself a much faster dodge speed. With this Reaper eyes, Eric can actually have an advantage in a fight using this for counter attacks, countering magic, performing defensive powers and blowing up energy attacks.

There is no technique that will ever be able to PERFECTLY track enemies' movement skills. Especially perfectly tracking attack patterns. No. Change this.

Black Hell: The ultimate flames of death; A warlock demon would never touch this power it said that the black hell technique burns an enemy.. The black flames burn like the sun itself burning anything that comes within burning the place or hurting the targeted victim. However, Black Hell doesn't last forever perhaps (2-3 posts) then the black flames disappear put a strain on the reaper eye that spawn the black flames. These are dark flames of the souls of the dead the blackness of the flames. It an example of their pain and hatred towards the world. These jet-black hell flames can be ignited only by the user's devil reaper eyes vision focusing directly at an opponent or target. The black flames really places a major strain on a demon eyes causing a demon's eye causing it bleed and crack up completely. It takes a lot of concentration and magic the summon these flames summoning them them a high magic level . The deadly attack had a blind spot the demon has to look at an enemy for the black hell flames to cover or burn an attack. [It can be defeated by water attacks, barriers and magic. Yet it can be dodged because the Black Hell isn't fast like a wildfire the first attack maybe fast but additional attacks will take time. It can be dodged if the Reaper eye is blocked or the enemy is able to dodge the black flames with their speed or racial speed ability. Black Hell puts a strain on Eric's eyes meaning he'll have to wait. Meaning the Black Hell flames speed will weaken and will be able to dodge]

Only thing I have to say about this is tone down the "burns like the sun" part. He's not going to have the power to have something burn with equal power to the sun.

Fix these, and we'll work on the rest of the app.

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Henrex
Henrex
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Sun Jan 29, 2017 5:16 pm
[mod]This is not to be argued, Kade. Embracing the philosophy of death is not something that warrants someone to gain Death Energy. But, on the only other term that this could be, if he embraced the embodiment of Death itself, that wouldn't be allowed either way. Since he would something like Khala, in terms of her being the Heart of Deveta. Remove all of his Death Energy, and his DE references.[/mod]

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Sun Jan 29, 2017 7:13 pm
[mod]My Two Cents on this Matter: Alright Kade. Lemme just come right out and say this: IF Eric does not have a legitimate connection to death, like lineage, a seal of sorts; in general you MUST have a connection to Death; you can't just give yourself DE either. If you want Eric to have DE you need to find a way to do so in thread AFTER approval. Until then, his DE will continue to not exist on his app. Henrex is right, this point is not to be argued at all. Unless you have something that actually merits having DE, then it will be considered. However, if you are unsure about DE rules and properties, please go to this page: DE and I will say this one last thing; embracing death is just accepting that you will die. This does not mean you will get DE either; that is how DE works.[/mod]
Henrex
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Tue Jan 31, 2017 12:47 pm
[mod]Moving to denied because of an action that outright spits in the face of the rules that have been put in place for a reason. This is not to be argued. This decision is final.[/mod]
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