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 Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Thu Feb 02, 2017 10:17 pm

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Fri Feb 03, 2017 10:49 pm

This is finished and ready to be reviewed! I think ;-;
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Sun Feb 05, 2017 12:54 am

[mod]Moving to unchecked, a review will come your way asap.[/mod]

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Sun Feb 05, 2017 11:58 am


«DOING THIS CHECK RIGHT NOW»

Just have a few concerns, lassy.

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Chiheisen has the ability to merge the wielder with one other thing or merge that thing with the wielder, whether it be organic or inorganic, or even abstract, or to separate two or more inanimate things.

Generally, this ability is used to fuse or merge with physical substances, such as becoming one with a wall in order to quickly pass to the other side, or sink into rock in order to avoid a hail of bullets. But it could also be used to separate substances into their bases parts, if allowed enough time. The more complicated an object is or the stronger it is spiritually, the more time and effort it takes to merge with or separate.

If allowed the proper time to focus and channel her energy, Narumi can project these spiritual waves with greater strength and allow herself to fuse with more abstract things, such as allowing her sense of hearing to fuse with the surrounding area in order to overhear anything said within a reasonable distance.

When using either aspect of this ability, Narumi's aura distorts and ripples in strange fractal and geometric patterns.

In this form, it is impossible to fuse or merge two living spiritual beings together.

How many times can she use this ability per post? Is there any sort of drawback to this ability, however minor? What is the area of effect based on tier?

http://www.platinumhearts.net/t17108-the-powerscale-of-the-ph-verseprone-to-edits-at-any-time#110573

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» Bankai Abilities: The 'fusion' of her Shikai deepens into far more broad territory, although use of these techniques quickly depletes her focus and her energy reserves. For example, Narumi can (once, twice at most at current level) briefly merge with the surrounding air allowing her to totally avoid one attack, reforming shortly thereafter in some nearby place.

Additionally, her 'separation' facet of this power also advances, allowing her to render more complex objects into all of their baser parts at once, rather than pulling them out slowly, one by one.

The few who have observed this effect have likened it to spacetime manipulation, as she appears to also be able to cover vast distances in a manner similar to a teleport.

The ultimate attack of this release is to briefly, partially, merge with a single, target opponent. This act is extremely violent to both bodies, as spiritually aware beings are too complex to merge, and inflicts the same level of grievous wound onto both Narumi and her target. Generally, wounds from this effect can appear grotesque or extreme and do not follow any typical pattern of characteristic, such as slashing wounds from a sword or burns from a Cero.

Same questions here.

How many times can she use this ability per post? Is there any sort of drawback to this ability, however minor? What is the area of effect based on tier?




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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Sun Feb 05, 2017 12:47 pm

Thanks for your time! All the concerns more than valid; Here's my attempt to answer.


Shikai use: Ability can used once per post.
Shikai drawbacks: It's not a true fusion, where a 'new thing' is created. The thing being subsumed takes on the properties of the other thing. So, if Narumi were to merge with a wall, she would briefly have the hardness and other properties of whatever the wall were made of. In this way, she can be highly vulnerable if she stays within a material for very long.
Shikai Area of Effect: All targets must be within 50m per tier; and for 'abstract' applications, this Shikai is limited to a range of 50m per tier. (I have no concept of whether or not this is a reasonable range)

Bankai use: The broad uses of this, such as the teleport, or totally breaking down a complex object all at once, is limited to once per thread, per rank of ability. The 'ultimate attack' of this Bankai has no hard limits to the number of times it can be used, however, Narumi suffers the same severity of wound that she inflicts, so there is a soft limit based on the damage that she inflicts on herself.
Bankai drawbacks: The 'ultimate attack' inflicts equivalent wounds on Narumi
Area of Effect: double that of Shikai


I'll edit this in pending your feedback/further correction
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Sun Feb 05, 2017 11:05 pm



«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept

  • Comments/Notes: N/A

  • Tier: 4-3

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:09 pm

[mod]Well... Nari, we need you to keep that profile information in this profile; otherwise this is going to be moved to WIP for the time being due to you not having any character information on an approved character.[/mod]

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Nari Hirashi [APPROVED 4-3][WIP due to missing profile]   Mon Jul 10, 2017 12:47 am

[mod]This has been moved to inactive. If you'd like to see this moved out, please message a staff member.[/mod]

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