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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Tue Feb 14, 2017 10:20 pm

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I. Basic Information


» Name: Tyrael Vulgrim
» Titles: The last mad demon of madness has had a long regime taken many names and different titles during his violent and dark mad years. Throughout time, Tyrael had known such titles has given him such happiness and yet with the madness such pain still to him just labels of a demon. Here are such but a few of those titles: The Mad One, The Demon of Madness, The Innovator of Destruction, Master of Pain, The Last Mad Demon, Last of the Mad Ones, Lord Tyrael, Madness Revenger, Diablo
» Age: Tyrael's age is COMPLETELY unknown for many years or decades the mad one has spent within that dimensional prison. As time passed, Tyrael forgot many things even his personal memories while within that dimensional plane of existence. It's so bad not only has the mad demon forgot his age the demon doesn't even remember the date or place of where he was born. The dimensional cage complete memory loss to point of those three things (His Age, His Birth Place, Date of Birth) and nothing but shadows of smoke and ghosts within his mind. He doesn't even known how old he'd became after his whole mad race was completely annihilated while being hyper caged. Nobody would know and really no one should even care how old the last mad demon is anyway it should even matter to anyone and everybody. He doesn't even care about his age or his for that matter one the reasons why the guy wears a mask to hid his face leaving it a fading memory. In short, Tyrael Vulgrim is the last mad demon of the forgotten race caring about one's self and decades spent in darkness. The oldest and last a whole lost generation now falls on his shoulders. Age to him is like a memory of pain and regrets...Something Tyrael locked away in his mind forever.

Tyrael thinks of age of being a stepping stone that holds a person down so they can't even reach their full potential anymore. As, He believes it makes you weaker and not worthy for any mad demon for hunting or destroying people.
» Gender: Male
» Race: Demon
» Affiliation/Rank: Many Affiliations the Mad One has had over the years is seemingly endless having so many ties and ranks within the demon world but here are a selected few: Mad Demons(Last One), Mad Ravagers/Former Mad Commander)

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» True Appearance Written: Tyrael's appearance maybe that of a hellbent mad demon that has a fully packaged muscular tone yet looks kinda slim but really strong. Although no one has ever seen his face, He looks caucasian but really looks more of a demonic strongman even though his mad body is ripped. Tyrael has a muscular demon body because of all the training and hardships that the adult warrior had to take from fighting enemies that were even stronger then him. The last mad demon has a number of scars and few wounds upon his body from the battles/wars they're constant reminders to become better in battle next time. Tyrael has a medium height of (5'11") weighing in at (250lbs)pounds becoming more of a heavyweight also thanks to his extreme training and his strict diet. A diet that consist of of blackberries, vegetables, chinese ramen, vegetable medley soups and water to keep him strong but healthy. Never shows his face because it looks kinda disfigured having pure demonic red eyes representing his mad origins. He has brown hair which was once long and flowing until it was decided to cut it short with one of his famous swords. The last mad demon has a symbolic (tribal combined samoa like) tattoo which tells his friends or enemies that this demon is the last of the mad fallen race.

Tyrael's clothing perhaps some humans, The mad demon wears underwear which consists of black underwear and black socks. For his attire, He wears baggy demonic jeans and demonic boots of an unique style to bring somewhat fear in his enemy's hearts. Tyrael wears his typical open finger gloves which are black, he'll wear cloth bands on his hands for something of human fighting style. Yet he'll wear closed finger gloves sometimes when the guy is serious about a fight putting his full potential. The attire is that of legendary war nomad seen wearing upon his legs is a unique pair of baggy battleclad pants, armor belt and armor war boots. On his left arm the mad demon wears and armor gauntlet and right arm some cloth bands hiding his burns and wounds.

Finally, Tyrael is seen wearing and white mask that would seem stitch up with one eye hole hiding his face completely. His jewelry is that of a dark necklace created from an ancient ember the final gift the deveta ever gave him after that he's the banished one. The claw necklace is from the bear and great sharks that the mad demon killed during his hunts really made claws of bears and sharp teeth of sharks.

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I. Personality Traits


» Personality: Becoming a mad demon He's believed in an mad prophecy that all demons like him should have a very destructive attitude. The only things which concerns him the most are how much destruction and carnage can he cause by his actions and tactics. Other one being how many people will suffer, bleed and die from his evil wrath when having his sights set on something of great and upmost importance to him. What he considers his enemies? Tyrael thinks that is just another word describing his prey or his targets which motivates him to become stronger and overpower them for victory. He loves fighting really believing it's a part of everyday life finding new challenges to test his very limits and working with his strength alone. When his enemies are defeated, Ideas come in the dozens finding torturing ways of hurt his enemies because ending them won't be much fun but prolonging their suffering is better. This way the mad demon can extract vital informations such as enemy tactics, addresses and names of his next prey before dealing the final blow. Knowing to be a ruthless, hell-bent demon having a violent dark streak of destruction within his heart releasing his anger in dangerous ways. Tyrael doesn't believe in mercy in his human past maybe but now it waste of good suffering another sign of weakness of his enemy. It really makes him sick thinking of giving up and backing off is the only thing that might save his life and not putting his full potential into the fight. Under Zadkiel's orders, Tyrael would execute or hunt down people with extreme chaos and precision not matter how difficult and extreme the task may be. From battles, Tyrael had grown a vast desire of fighting stronger opponents giving him an unique thrill of pushing him to be better than any other demon or hell demon. Really it anger, greed and malevolence drives his very dark emotions bringing forth this madness, warpath and cruelty in his mad system. Among friends, Tyrael keeps his feeling of trust to himself the mad demon wouldn't talk to any of his friends thinking they're just useful tools to his advantage nothing more. The other things such as love and relationships; Tyrael believes are fucking building blocks of nonsense and pain just to hold a person down to nothing.

Through trainings, Tyrael would focus upon his weaknesses breaking them down and yet making them into his very strengths. He becomes focus on one important goal clearing his very mind of feelings, wants and desires and focus upon that goal until it has been achieved. Placing a pure desire of hatred into him instructing his mind to workout and find every choice, every option and every plan to improve the mad demon's body and power. The demon doesn't feel pity, remorse not even fear and a mad demon like him will not stop even death wouldn't be a factor. Until his enemy or problem are dead gone; Greed is something of destruction, utter chaos and power to grow even to push themselves to be better. Wrath follows under the category of what vengeance is being a power-hungry warmonger with the cravings of death upon his mind. This never stops within a mad causing carnage, genocide and utter destruction with raining with the blood of his enemies sin itself would be become a mad demon's soul if it could. Gluttony won't be just food at the power of everything would best describe to have it all the power of life and death.

Causing an unholy anarchy and making his enemies bleed or die is the mad demon's way of life to some. Tyrael being the last mad demon this is something of an mandate which the mad one take very seriously. In battle, He takes his opponents and their fighting styles seriously because the mad demon wants to win and achieve victory. He calmly thinks and studies what his opponent's weaknesses are before destroying the enemy body and soul.

No Friendship: The heart of the madness never changes this mad demon had never care about anything besides family and friends mean nothing to him. In his mind, Tyrael believes such things to demons shouldn't even exist and that such things like, relationships will ruin your dreams and goals. Really Friends....Really "Garbage only good for consuming resources" the demon doesn't want someone that can stab you in the back later. That would be a inconvenience to him and his goals someone that would hold him down for the rest of his life without the hint of help. But friends are like a chess game if you don't protect completely a person a hurt you even control your lifestyle if you're not careful. In short, Friends are unpredictable trash to him. Something you can't forget because it what defines you and your origin. Personally, He wishes to have his own family but to his ruthlessness, unrelenting, hellbent and unforgiving anger that can never ever be a possibility to him. This would be just a soft memory or dream to look back find whatever mistakes that we're made and Tyrael moves on with his objectives.

Anger: The mad one has an intense fury burning inside which he'll get angry at a moment's notice to be at the ready. Activating large amounts of rage in his mind, Tyrael will act upon this rage-built vengeance and start attacking randomly or destroying stuff without a thought. Only by fighting can allow this anger to dissipate and from the mad demon allowing him to be calm yet the anger combined with rage never ever goes away. It something that grew in the past that was dormant then being released producing this rage based attitude in times of combat or training. Having this rage which will sometimes makes him impatient yet the demon will attack right away without worrying about his allies or friends for that matter. In this rage state, He doesn't care about anything at that moment just focus and determine to complete his goal or mission nothing else is important. Tyrael won't even care about his own well being just feeling this everlasting rage flow inside of him making the demon unpredictable and relentless in his very actions. He's a raging powerhouse wanting to inflict damage, chaos and genocide in the purpose of people knowing him as a major threat or more of a dark tyrant wanting destruction of all life. He believes that one of the seven deadly sins known to world as "Wrath"; Completely bonded with the mad demon is fulfilling the evil sin's desires of chaos. "Crush your enemies and See them driven before you". Tyrael's well being is that of an hellbent demon with revenge and destruction always being on his mind and power base. In truth, He's a chaos rule-breaker always finding new ways and new levels of the destruction and chaos for his mad passions to grow and thrive.

Alone: "I stand alone" The path of nothingness is what it's called to some warriors; Zadkiel had imprisoned him into a dimensional Nexus for decades. Enough to drive craziness and madness into one's mind it killed a human in mere seconds; Tyrael survived it all. The first part is dealing with fear for months long and finally disconnecting it from your body is impossible. This allowing madness to seek into one's brain the final part is realizing nobody is going to help you. Accepting the path to nothingness learning no one will help you with one's goals. He's the last mad demon knowing to be dark nomadic in nature for being locked away for so fucking long. Some like a human hitchhiker traveling to demonic place to place finding enemies to defeat or butcher but no place to call home. His madness took him to whole new level once a fight was over and his enemy defeated the demon will disappear into a dark dimension. To be one with shadows and quiet as a mad demon could be to be purely isolated from everyone allowing pure madness to grow once more.

Vengeful: He has always been a ruthless demon killing enemies without a mere thought really attack now and ask questions later. Slaughter those before they kill a mad demon; Tyrael's search and destroy attitude had been his lifetime achievement. At his very core the demon's vicious side will take over showing no mercy to an enemy until death approaches. He doesn't care if the enemy is sick or dying the mad demon wants war and he'll never stop attacking until the person is unconscious or dead. Sometimes; Tyrael will methods of dark humor ONLY when the demon is sure of winning a battle or finding a unique way of destroying his target. Methods of chaotic brutality are always on his mind the fuel and brain food for a mad demon it what keeps people like them going. Respect to them is earned when you do something for a mad demon then that mad demon will honorbound that and do something for you. However; Tyrael calls this fate the demon may respect that person but if should some mutiny or betrayal happens all bets are off and the killing starts. Mad Demons like him don't have to follow this to the letter the weak die and strong survive you respect him the demon leaves you alone. If you harm/betray him then goodbye respect and hello death. The chaos within a mad demon will take over and all other things will be cast aside until the person that betray him gets what's coming. As for hatred the mad demon hates a lot of stuff even beings calling themselves "Death Gods.' These Soul reapers which the mad demon thinks that an utter disgrace which the demon has a deep seeded hatred for them.

» Likes: Fighting for something a mad demon believes in the love of fighting and defeating his enemies like the sacred vow of mad demons. Really trying to rebuild his own race knowing full well it can't be done. Gaining Power,

» Dislikes: Death; Friends turning their backs on him, Betrayal, Somebody or some people who think their better when they know they aren't

I. Character History


» History: The last of a fallen race of demons that had been exterminated years ago which they have been completely forgotten and left a distant memory in the demon world. Tyrael Vulgrim the last demon of madness was sitting upon an active volcano trying to remember the past and what he needs for the future. He remembers being human; Tyrael only remembers someone very powerful blackmailing him for an incident that never happen. He agreed to paid the amount but the person kept on tricking him into thinking the situation was very worse and more money was needed. The worst part was the blackmailer's son actually made Tyrael's girlfriend cheat on him and then she broke it off hurting him the most. It got worse before it even began people started beating the human was targeted by a gang paid off by the blackmailer every day the same. Thus, A rage of ungodly violence grew inside knowing was wrong about the whole thing being blackmailed for money every fucking day. He hated it...At the time, Tyrael just ignored it.Only one option remained killing himself before that goal was set in stone a ritual of hell was set into motion instantly sending him to hell. To this very day, Tyrael hates the human race all of them wanting to destroy them all before they can corrupt or break someone else. The rest of his human origins are just nothing but smoke to him now something which was permanently locked away in his mind but leaves a blood tear now and then. Tyrael's descent into hell was very unpleasant with his flesh burning and most importantly his soul being torn apart. There was absolutely nothing for him now but anger it was pure and unrelenting inside of him, A demon felt and saw this rage in the human which gave the evil guy an idea.

The demonic Zadkiel made dark bargain with the human if he serves the demon then he'll make him the most powerful demon ever. Tyrael had nothing else to lose feeling betrayed by the human race also the guy wanted the pain to stop as well the past was finished for him. He didn't see anything wrong with the deal and the human started bowing accepting the demon terms sealing it in blood. Zadkiel started the demon anti-purification process destroying the demon's body and remaking it into a full fledge demonic body. Tyrael felt everything human about being removed and rip out of the new body the human cease to exist as the new demon appeared smoking in a spawning pit. Zadkiel ordered this new demon to rise no longer a human the new demon started standing up proud and honor his new master. The new demon chose the name "Tyrael Vulgrim" wanting to experience everything here in hell and hopefully create chaos and serve the master anyway he can. Zadkiel forgot to mention that this demon wasn't just any ordinary demon but an so called "mad demon". Tyrael's master took many violent experiments into evolving a demon recreating them into a demon of pure anger and the purest rage. The process would have been possible if that subject had an rage growing inside of him during some events of pain, sorrow or regrets. Zadkiel believed this demon would become his finest but work needed to be done improving his rage letting evil strengthen him and fighting to expand the mad demon's power.

Zadkiel quickly betrayed Tyrael after a few missions sending him to some demon slave master named Zanku. Tyrael shocked began life as a slave that day his rage kept growing but knowing these places in hell it was all about survival here and no one was your friend here.

Tyrael was sent to the prison mines and started which seemed a lifetime of hard labor still the slave beaters always on their daily rounds beating people to work. Tyrael was no exception everyday the demon was put through the most grueling torture, pain and whips to save the other demons from suffering. He took it all even at times of near death the demon survived it was either work or die and the demon was fit on dying and kept trying to do his best. Still, Tyrae even though doing hard work was still receiving punishments and unfair ones it seemed the higher demonic bastards enjoyed toying with him. An eternal of beatings & tortures, Slave masters noticed it didn't have much effectiveness on him they saw him bleeding the leather whips didn't hurt him. There Tyrael gave his dark evil secret to pain "Do you want to know the secret of pain? If you just stop feeling it, you can start to use it." He watch that slave master shit in his pants after hearing that which they didn't want to deal with the demon anymore...a sigh of relief to the demon. Zanku's clan of necro demons began experimenting on some demons as the demon slaves were taking into demon camps. Tyrael was experimented on as drugs, injections and enhancements were done to him in the end, He felt an unknown rage growing. He didn't even know what was going on why these demon scientists were experimenting he hated the fact demons were using others like that. The gruesome act when an escapee try to escape the camp and he was killed viciously and it set off this rage again. Tyrael didn't know what it was but the doctors told him they wanted to change him from demons into a demon of pure rage the experiment of the "mad virus". At times, Tyrael didn't care the demon was losing it......

After countless years, Tyrael had enough wanted something better which the demon broke his shackles and attacked the scientists and started freeing the other slaves. The group of mad demons waged war against the necromongers. Tyrael was leading the charge as every necromonger was hunted down and defeated this was the first time the demon felt in charge of something. Tyrael thought these slaves were afraid but they could change their existence to become something more than just demons. This mad demon group started attacking other demon clans the goal their only for food and supplies at time. But due of their mad nature it began to become more violence and to create endless suffering to their enemies. It began a much more ruthless streak as the mad demons attack fiercely and worried about the losses after they won.

These mad demons started taking over certain parts of the demon world yet the most important thing was they function as a group. Tyrael was their leader most of the other didn't like them but they did respect his decisions and combat war tactics. For years, The mad demon clan had a many regions under their control but things got very difficult someone from the clan wanted a peace deal. Relius, Another mad demon wanted the clan to join forces with royal clan of demons yet Tyrael thought it was a slap in the face. He refused Relius chose poorly and helped the royal demon clan execute an heinous plan which Tyrael was captured. As the mad demon clan was completely annihilated, Relius was told they wouldn't be but that was a certain nature in demons at the time they lie. Relius was murdered as a result and yet again Tobias was imprisoned within an unknown dimensional bunker they told him the whole necro clan would have to die.

Being trapped in a dimensional nexus wasn't all bad it was all the other stuff and people in this place just disturbing. A paradox world that was filled with monsters, zombies, werewolves, vampires and large anacondas to this mad demon this place was paradise and bloodshed just waiting to happen. Just enough things here for the mad one to help him discover his demon powers and abilities and make new powers for himself this place was perfect. Most of the monsters started attacking, Tyrael went into a violent rage killing many monsters the number of dead started piling up. Even though, He killed about four hundred thousand demon monsters the mad demon was massively overpowered and finally defeated. One of the vampires was about to kill the unknown mad demon but someone stopped him as Tyrael was wounded but ready to fight again. She explained that her vampire clan were one of the rulers here and this mad demon was trespassing on sacred demonic ground and many civilians have died here by the trespasser's hands. He didn't care the demon of madness just the word revenge was repeating over and over in his head putting back a dark resolve to get up and fight again this wasn't over. Tyrael painfully got back to his feet ready to start fighting again but she saw that this mad demon wasn't going to listen to reason and gave the order to kill the mad trespasser. A massive horde attacked, Tyrael charged in a massive fury attacking many monsters and other beings the demon of madness was slaughtering them all. After five long hours, He manage to defeat the massive horde of monsters not knowing how he'd be trapped within this dimensional nexus living through one day at a time. Tyrael made a new city for himself from some abandoned buildings and homes living here and killing monsters every time until he could find a way back home. After killing some werewolves, He started learning more and lots more about his demon abilities every time the demon fought and then finally started learning new powers for personal gain. These people were his prey and perhaps his experimental guinea pigs still every time when a person got close to his new city he'd fucking brutalize really bad.

Tyrael's power continued to grow from his mad violence waging wars to intensify his rage and madness making him feeling better. He waged a one demon war against the people here and then the mad one started getting crafty attacking for food and supplies to aid him in conquest. The people here didn't know how to handle this demon never encountering such a beast tyrant which lead to a final resolution a last war. Tyrael was waiting for the armies to attack and then mad demon attacked with full force this last war lasted for long decades until all of them were dead. This wasn't enough not enough blood for the demon for be sated more violence was needed here but now the demon of madness was all alone just mere silence. Something happen within the demon world the necro demons we're all wiped out as the mad demon felt it them all dying someone was busy. A chance of freedom from this place happened when the last of the necro demons died; Tyrael was finally free as a portal opened and he was sent to the demon world.

Some gruesome murders started happening around the demon world. A pain in the ass that was would best describe, Persha Iramasha an vengeful woman killing demons that tried leaving the demon world. In her angelic way of thinking the iramasha believed all demons either good or evil should remain in the demon world where they belong but she was crossing the line. Sadly enough it was crossed when the angel iramasha killed and dedicated demon werewolf during a birthday party. The demons was in a uproar they wanted to send the iramasha clan a message,Tobias wanted to kill this murderer once and for all. Which the mad demon started a full investigation which the trial of blood and tracking skills led him to the iramasha clan. He attacked the guards and the search for the killer..Tyrael started yelling the murderer to come out and fight.

The mad demon was demanded to person responsible to come out and face him yelling the words "PARASITE.....COME OUT HERE AND FACE ME. FACE JUDGMENT WITH HONOR AND FIGHT ME TO THE DEATH" Tyrael didn't know Persha was a high ranking iramasha the woman had a family and kids they were worried but she accepted the challenge. Persha demanded if she dies that he leaves her and her clan alone which the mad demon nodded agreeing with her terms. He wanted revenge and the mad one had some vermin to kill. They two of them fought a harsh battle which the angel iramasha kept on using holy attacks burning the mad demon to death it seemed one sided. He waited for the right moment as the mad one kept getting blasted with holy attacks then she went for jumping move. Tyrael was bleeding badly as the mad one was falling down to one knee but his eyes were completely set on her waiting for her to fail. He stopped and waited doing a vicious slash upon the angel iramasha cutting her head clean off the angel was dead as the mad demon dragged her corpse back into the demon world.

This unknown world was different to him not many demon clans within the realm of demons except one demon clan. From other demons, Tyrael found out this Asthavon clan had reign supreme and gain superiority here among the remaining demon clans here. What has happened???? Zadkiel had him imprisoned in that nexus for so long so much has changed the mad demon wanted to make his former master pay hoping to find him and kill him for what he did. However, He didn't believe that a full scale attack would be good for him the demon of madness would have to wait and build up his power. He joined up with the Asthavon clan as one of their soldiers sort of like a demonic army the demon followed orders but never said a word at all. The goal here to the mad demon was to be trained and worked hard enough to the point of where the mad demon was strong enough to hunt down Zadkiel. He follow the orders of his superiors and completed missions along with demons and other beings that the mad one hadn't seen before but his goal wasn't reached yet at all. A few missions and bounties; The soldiers meet some members of the Asthavon family as their were pleased of the soldiers serving them. Someone was reading his mind it was painful but the mad demon blocked out whoever was doing it someone powerful of the family was searching for something. A woman....Looked at him, Tyrael didn't say a word but she was powerful then any members of this Asthavon family what kind of demon had that power. The soldiers we're dismissed but Tyrael was disgusted yet angry the mad demon needed to become stronger like that but something really caught his attention. He overheard the name Zadkiel Asthavon, Tyrael was furious his enemy was in his grasp but a major problem was the enemy was a part of a powerful family that would be stupid to kill them all. After gaining strength, Tyrael waited during a few completed missions the mad demon managed to confront Zadkiel and started viciously strangling him the master was shocked to see him alive and breathing thinking he'd died. Zadkiel pleaded for his life for a certain power that was given from members of the family the mad demon didn't care but it was interesting to hear this. Something called the "Death Energy" a power honored from an high ranking Asthavon yet, Zadkiel Asthavon wasn't one of those beings and Tyrael finally killed his former master. Tyrael Vulgrim left the clan shortly after his revenge was finally complete and now the mad demon had a more powerful goal to get stronger than ever.

The demon may know the truth but the mad demon wants to rebuild the fallen race back from the ashes still, He tries to find ways to increase his deadly powers. Tyrael Vulgrim wants to put the fear into everybody that the mad demons even though they are danava demons filled with pure and unrelenting rage. To fear the very sight of him and hopefully to be a threat to everyone...

I. Natural Abilities & Skills


» Natural Abilities: Demonic Hell Mad Power: The last member of a fallen race of demons hell-bent on one thing which is the destruction. After his death sentence, Tyrael's very power was completely sealed off by his master Zadkiel making him like a normal demon being yet felt betrayed. After, He was restored by mad souls of fallen mad demons infusing their power into the mad demon restoring his full demonic power back to normal it took many months to get it to normal. The mad one received a massive boost when Zadkiel Asthavon died the fallen necro demon's energies went into Tyrael. It made him purely stronger than ever from the 1,800 souls and Zadkiel's power boosted this last mad one to immense proportions. When unleashed it feels like somebody getting hit with a tremendous mountain avalanche borrowing down on his enemy or enemies. Under the service of the Asthavon clan they managed to train him to control his mad power to enhance even augment abilities making them strong. Like his fallen race, Tyrael fights at full power showing his enemies the mad one is ready to start a holocaust of blood and death. As the last mad demon, Tyrael wants to be feared once more like in the past but this time to become a mad yet dangerous threat to everyone.

Ravenous Mad Strength: As a mad demon, Tyrael has considerable and frightening strength from his years being a slave and from the battles he had been in. From every battle, Tyrael gain amounts of bulk strength from his mad power which throughout time began augmented to a greater level than other demon. The key goal of every mad demon is to push themselves harder and harder for this training is needed to to push himself to brink and never stop until a certain goal is met of higher strength. The mad demon's strength is so strong that he could actually slap an attack with very little or hard effort but his hand might bleed a little. While imprisoned, He kept training with giant boulders, rocks, bricks and even cinder blocks breaking them apart strengthen his striking power. Over the long years, The demon's physical was that of a demonic powerhouse. The mad demon maybe purely stronger than a regular demon but maybe able to hold his own transformed demons for very long periods of time. He fought and won many battles within the Demon world too. The last mad demon trained and keeps fighting constantly to keep his deadly strength to an superior high level the only thing that he thinks about while training is getting revenge.The demon can break bones with one or many even a whole mess of punches. Another factor of his strength the madness inside of him now the can fuel not only his rage & slowly increases his strength without him knowing about it.

He wants to prove the mad demons can and will not be forgotten.....Tyrael will not let his enemies forget ever.

Strong Powerful Endurance: Obtaining a very high resistant to damage from the beatings, high levels of torture, ungodly violence and pain being done to his very body. Due to the fact that a mad demon loves for fighting they know to take damage and just enduring the pain from it and moving forward. He learned a violent method to deal with pain over the decades learning a mad secret "If you just stop feeling it. You can start using it". To mad demons pain is nothing a stepping stone that a demon needs to overcome and gain strength from it. A pain endurance level will activate telling him to get the fuck back up and fight then the mad demon rise enduring the pain and the demon ready fight again. In his long years, Tyrael's endurance levels are very high and deadly strong a mad demon such as himself isn't invincible he would love to be it but no. He has shown to have scars, cuts, injuries, burns and painful wounds upon his mad body even missing limbs but the mad demon proves his pride of a warrior.

Kage Chōkyō-shi: Kage Chōkyō-shi is the ability for most demons with adept Za Koa users to travel through different dimensions, travel throughout the battlefield or even use it for defense. By channeling Za Koa's energy in addition to the various seals throughout their body in addition to their Shadow Movement, they are able to create many different dimensional holes in the area's around them; each of them being able to range from a small vicinity such as a few inches, to the size of a city block depending on their Za Koa skill. These can lead to other realms; while there is also the possibility it can be used to shield against attacks if they are not more powerful than the demon and be used on the offensive by attempting to slash the opponents attack in half by creating one of those opening in the center of their assault. Although, it's also worth noting that this is mostly a passive skill to allow demon's to travel through different areas on the site; such as moving back and forth through the Soul Society, Living Realm and so forth. Those with advanced and Master in Za Koa Skill will begin to see ways to utilize it in battle; such as creating waves of blackness meant to consume limited attacks. Even more than that, the few of these people who do manage to master it will only be able to use it a limited amount of times in battle in association with their energy. So if one were to try and use it more than two or three times per post, they'd tire themselves out.

Demonic Self-Trained Combatant: In his teenage years, Tyrael was always proving himself being a lethal striker using his fists to hard and strike making his enemies feel pain through his violence. Over the years, He'd trained his combat knowledge through reading different fighting style books which have help improve his combat proficiency. Taking months of training to learn and produce unique striking techniques which the mad one can use upon the battlefield. With full contact, Tyrael can read into his enemy's movements by tracking their very speed and figuring out a way of defeating a enemy's combat style. Also the mad one can also use this to counter attacks allowing the mad demon to do something strong to defeat an enemy's technique. The last mad demon, Tyrael has knowledge of submission moves used for subduing, interrogation, choking them so they won't move at all. The submissive moves can actually break bones if enough force is placed. He also learned many wrestling moves but only striking wrestling moves like superman punches, spears and other different styles of uppercuts. Tyrael is known to be deadly and supreme force to be reckon with using his very skills yo show an enemy his vengeance.

Akuma Kyodo: Thanks to the full body seal most demon's have on their bodies from birth, Akuma Kyodo gives most Demon's a layer of defensive skin that is similar to an Arrancar's Hierro. This will be general defense, though if have a high Za Koa Skill, you can temporarily double your defense. Masters can do it for ten post, Advanced for seven, adept for four and beginners for two. All come with a three post cooldown. But that's where the similarities end, and the differences begin. What makes a demon's Akuma Kyodo: so different? Well, for instance, this layer of skin is not just applied physically like Arrancar's are or any other races natural defense. What makes a demon's defense stands out is that it applies to magic, spiritual attacks, their environments, how resistant they are to poisons or toxins and even how much their mental state improves. You see, thanks to having so much magic being pumped into their bodies, their defense is MUCH more wide spread then any Shinigami, Arrancar or even Iramasha. Basically, the higher your defense is, the most attacks, barriers or ANYTHING in general; the more resilient you are to anything offensive being thrown at you. So a demon's Akuma Kyodo: is not something to scoff at, ignore or consider the same.

Shadow Movement: This is what some MIGHT call the Demon's Answer to flash step: Shadow Movement. It allows them to move at quick burst of speeds on most occasions to allow them to travel very far distances in short amount of times, that is for certain. Though, this is where some similarities come to an end. Unlike most other races, Demon's get many nifty benefits then just Super Speed. Take this for example: from the seals on a demon's legs and feet that generate insane amounts of energy from all of the sources of power they collect; it will be able to give yourself temporary boost of intense speed called "Shadow Burst". Shadow Burst is a period of time where your demon will double their speed on average if they are at least adept. It will transition into how fast their attacks are created or launched, the demon's reaction time to increase the odds of evading, countering or noticing a person, object or anything else within a vicinity that has a prense in order to do something about it, it increases their mental awareness to more alert levels and it even goes into their natural powers.

The Art Of Demon Magic: What exactly IS the Arts of Demon Magic? In a sense, you COULD call it the Demon's Kidō, but you'd be wrong as well. Why? Well, Demon Magic actually works like real MAGIC is suppose to. Of course, Kidō like spells, summons and barriers can be created with Demon Magic. That's a given. However, it can be taken MUCH further then that application. For instance, an advanced user in Demon Magic could use this in order to gain Telekinesis on a more light level. Even combat standards, if he were to look at an attack and see it coming, the Telekinesis would kick in and attempt to change it course if enough was generated from The Demon to negate it. Other example would be gaining Gyrokinesis in some cases in order to actual make it seem like they are toying with gravity itself; which in fact they are. Within a contained area, this demon could remove the gravity of some things, make it heavier in other places or even apply it to more focused objects like their attacks to cause more impact force. Not only that, but an even higher example of that is that some demon's with a Master in this would be able to even create things out of thin-air with no explanation what so ever. For example, a Master in The Art Of Demon magic could defy the laws of physic's by actually making energy cease in something and remove it. This may not seem like much, but it's actually an amazing feat as the laws of physic's clearly states energy can never be erased. However, in terms of combat, in order to do this they would need to overpower it. Another situation in which you could get a taste of Demon Magic would be them turning your energy attack into a batch of living snakes, them creating fields of anti-spiritual barriers around them or just making themselves plain invisible. Now, performing magic is vastly possible thanks in part to connection most Demon's have to Za Koa. However, thanks to the varying seals scattered throughout a demon's body at birth by Touketsu's DNA, it is possible for them to even use the Magic without Za Koa's connection. You see, these seals are constantly gathering energy from their surroundings. From every attack, from every environment, from every power increase; these seals gather and store power for a demon to use. There is even an ascended state to unleash all of this collective energy, but that is not in this section. Instead, this is about how demon magic works in general. As stated previously, Demon's can perform magic with or without Za Koa.

I. Unique Abilities


» Unique Abilities: Hellraiser Flash: He raises his hand as the madness energy is generated then it forms into a energized dark red ball. Suddenly, Energy ball disappears into his hand and the energy is concentrated and focus almost like putting a bullet into a magnum. Tyrael will start to yell out his anger clenching his fists getting the energy charged and opens the palm of hand as the energy ball is released like a gun shot. Also the same 15% stronger than an arrancar cero or a shinigami Hadō #33. When it hits the attack leave can medium amount of damage almost feels like a flamethrower was just used on an enemy. [He can use the deadly technique about 3 or 4 times anymore would completely drain him]

Genocide Ravager: A dark augmentation of the Hellraiser Flash; Tyrael will start to raise his hand as the madness energy is generated into a large red energy ball. Which will start to disappear into the palm of his hands as the dark energy is concentrated focusing it into a stronger attack. This summons a energized chaos ring is formed around his arm producing zoa koa energy placing more power into the attack. When Tyrael opens his hand it doesn't release an energy ball anymore this time but that of a strong energy beam. Because of the madness energy and zoa koa energy into it has 40% more strength of that of an arrancar's gran rey cero or a shinigami's hyoga seiran. He seen some major weaknesses of the attack if the mad one is weakened or hurt badly then the attack is weaken by half. The other would be if the enemy can hit his hand when creating the technique it will cause the energy to grow unstable and explode on impact. [He can use the technique about 3 to 5 times.]

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Hell Magma: Because Tyrael is the last of the mad demons as prophecy as child the destruction had this power at rebirth The magma master has been given unique ability from his magma powers which he can enhance even augment attacks with magma energy giving much more powerful & deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancing it by some training. Tyrael can mostly control this great magma power creating powerful attacks and powerful defenses from his powers for demon attacks and defenses with his controlled magma or magma flame powers. He can also teleport with this power combining both zoa koa and the magma flame power creating a red portal and leave into another dimension/place of his choosing when creating the portal. The mad demon can create wings for himself giving him the ability to fly but his red wings can be damaged quite easily from other energy and elemental attacks. This can be also used some healing which can be combined with other power for much of an greater healing effect that can heal faster then regular healing powers. Using the magma flame power, Tyrael can fire red energy weapons or complete magma energy blasts/beams firing at twice of normal speed of an demon technique. For defenses, Tyrael can create an magma red flame shield or an energy blockade barrier from his power. Also Tyrael's controlled magma flame attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Tyrael's defensive powers can be weaken if his controlled red magma flame defenses are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by his opponents depending on their attack strength. He managed to create a few magma abilities from this power:
Hell Magma Unique Abilities
Magma Reaper: By charging the magma energy within the palm of his hand until it ready for an attack. Tyrael will force the magma energy condensing it into a energized magma ball sphere which the danava uses for attack an opponent. When it hits it will feel a hot fire bomb with a major blast radius of about a 30 feet. It has a flaw if the energized magma sphere is destroyed then the attack is no more. This inflict some damage upon his opponent having the strength of seven grenades combined. Tyrael can use this technique about 4-5 times.
Hellzone Magma Killer: By taking one hellzone burner and breaking it down into many energized magma spheres about twenty-eight of them to be used on his enemy. It starts with creating the hellzone burner and taking breakdown ability to break down the attack making it into many energized magma spheres. Tracking an enemy for just one post like a bloodhound seeking it prey. As each energized magma sphere will feel like an energized bullets that actually followed the opponent's movements and attack at a very high speed. Each energy sphere has the strength of 6 grenades combined, Tyrael can use this technique about three times.
Magma Spawn Cannon: The demon technique is a strong spiral magma laser beam to hurt her enemies. The demon move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the demon energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, and two thin magma laser beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight magma beam. The resulting hot beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked or dodged easy enough if the enemy had faster speed/defense. It has the same strength and weakness as cero burning flame sort of way.
Magma Extremis: Which the mad demon can transform the very power of hellzone burner and turning it into a better magma weapon then before. The magma will start boiling as the demon makes the hellzone burner stronger putting more zoa koa into it. Then by squeezing on it, Tyrael started chain reaction which the demon attacks shooting out with an raw magma energized wave feeling like a hot wave in butter. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, with just one arm. It has a big flaw, Tyrael is too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble, It has the same strength and weakness as Gran Rey Cero in a burning flame sort of way.

Blitzkrieg Buster: The hellraiser burning fists; Tyrael will create two energy balls from his hands with each hand holding a energy ball beginning to squeeze it. Once it energy is squeezed it will transfer the madness energy beginning to engulf both his hands and wrists into a energized flame power. The energy from his fists and wrist will of combination of orange and yellow color which can leave a major burning sensation. From trainings, Tyrael has manage to make combination techniques by combining demon abilities into new attacks from the blitzkrieg buster. Each strike feels like the enemy being smacked with a double C4 blast known to deliver strong damage upon an opponent strong enough to leave burns or deadlier inquiries to enemies.
Blitzkrieg Combinations
Burn Rush: (Blitzkrieg Buster +Shadow Movement)This combo turns the Blitzkrieg Buster into a speeding move as shadow energy begins to erupt from the buster power. Then when going for an attack the Blitzkrieg will feel like a tank bullet being shot when the mad demon attacks with it. [Use: 3 Times with a Cooldown of 4 Posts each time it's used]
Final Knuckler: (Blitzkrieg Buster + Akuma Kyodo) The Blitzkrieg Buster is encased within and black armor placing black spikes on his knuckles and and small mini piercing nails on his finger. This provides something of a defensive power to the attack so if the enemy's attack is stronger he'll have some defense capability to his attack. [Use: 6 Times; with a Cooldown of 3 Posts each time it's used]

Body Manipulation: This is a natural ability that all demon's possess if they wish to activate it or perform it. Most Demon's have full control over every aspect of his physical make-up, able to stretch themselves to obtain insane heights such as being thirty foot tall, being able to change their skin color, having the ability to shape-shift into different people that they are able to remember and, on much more powerful levels, being able to even detach, generate or fuse body parts together in order to increase odds of surviving. Though, this does not occur until at least one tier, and even then it's weak compared to the 0 tier version. Additionally, it can even be used for offensive or defensive purposes. For example, a demon can use Body Manipulation in order to generate a layer of steel-like skin around their body in order to increase their defense and block out outside sources from entering their body by clogging every pore on it. Or, for another instance, they could use it on the offensive side by hurling body parts at their opponent that are extremely hot and turn into acid blood, using their increased height to smash down on most opponents and the same may even apply for some more powerful demon's attacks; or finally, in an avoidance way, more powerful demon's could even control their body in order to be broken down into a liquid, wind or fire type form in order to gain more ways to escape or evade attacks.

Reaitsu Drain: This ability goes hand and hand with Za Koa's Influence. With this technique, our two tier can constrain the flow of reishi and reiatsu within an area in order to make opponents somewhat weaker as reiatsu is energy in use, this can also lead to canceling out attack on some levels, overpowering attacks if there is a major gap in power and for advanced users and up being able to control the reiatsu they constrain. However, please note, reaitsu drain does NOT mean you will simply go around consuming energy until you level up. With all of that stated, the main benefits of this Reaitsu is that it is used to increase anything on a demon that deals with power. For instance, a demon could have FAR faster attacks then before if reaitsu drain was performed successful, their attacks would have much more stopping force and it may even have additional benefits. Another example would be their spells being further increased with all of the extra energy being generated within them from the drain. One final example is that it can also be broken down into energy for strength to increase their physical offensive power, increase their defense and advance their durability. So, with that said, these are examples of how reaitsu drained is used.

I. Skill Sheet


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Thu Feb 16, 2017 6:42 pm

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I. Adjustable Demon State(s)


» Dark Mad Demon State Appearance:
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» Dark Mad Demon State Benefits: Enhanced Strength: In his Dark Mad state, Tyrael's physical strength is enhanced because of all the demon saiyans that were devoured/absorbed inside of him. All of his body enhancing himself making him weaker than his normal mad demon state. Veins will around his body will start to grow but just a little making him look kind of a super demon then his normal demon state. As a result, Tyrael's punches & kicks are strong enough to strike an opponent with enough force to have them sent flying with enough force to destroy building. Yet this is first form he maybe able to attack hollows and shinigami while in this form but it a lot weaker against stronger opponents with medium based attacks. Yet some attack maybe be able to kill him while in this dark form since it doesn't have any defensive strength.

Enhanced Speed: Not only did he inherit more strength in his Dark state but also the speed to help him attack or dodge enemies. Tyrael's enhanced speed is above about a average normal demon's speed. His speed is used mostly for rushing up to an opponent or trying to counter attack when the opponent is too close. The shocking part of this ability, Tyrael can actually keep up with a shinigami's shunpo speed or arrancar's sonido speed. Still he isn't a match a captain's shunpo or espada's sonido speed then he'll be easily defeated by any of those two.

Flight: Because of his newfound form, Tyrael has the ability to fly. It's really how he controls the zoa koa within his body creating something of an gravity level upon his body to manipulate the air. Allowing the demon to levitate up into the air. A new mad demon needs to fly or super jump and with his new power can travel anywhere he wants. He can use the affinity for hell with his flying to fly faster.

Affinity of Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether

Energy Blast: He is able to fire a red energy blast from his hand.However the attack is have medium strength which can dodged or counter. Tyrael can charged up the energy blast which take (1 post) for stronger damage. [Use: 9 Times; with a Cooldown of 3 Posts, Charge: Instantly]

Eye Lasers: These are precise laser-like beams shot from both eyes. The potency of the Eye Laser technique varies, but most of them are very fast and able to nullify weak attacks and small projectiles, as well as cripple opponents when they are greatly damage and damage other objects. This can blocked or dodged easily. [Use: 8 Times; with a Cooldown of 4 Posts each time it's used, Charge: Instantly]

Enhanced Energy Blast: An enhanced version of his energy blast turns a spiral color of black & red. Which can be fired from one or both hands. Tyrael can use his energy blast also like machine gun like attack in this form. This attack can be defeated by very strong ice/water based abilities. If he was to it like a machine gun like attack then he feels some signs of fatigue.
[Use: 5 Times; with a Cooldown of 4 Posts, Charge: Instantly]

Enhanced Energy Beam: The attack is almost the same to stronger cero being shot from the mouth. The attack starts off which his eyes changing color as he starts growling gathering large amounts of energy. Flame and Energy particles started forming a dark red ball, Tyrael started yelling and the very dark red ball unleashing a enhanced yet powerful blast of concentrated stronger burning flame energy at the target. However, the technique itself has a flaw the ball if it destroyed then the attack weakens with 50% strength. Making it little hard to dodge, block or destroy it. [Use: 3 Times; with a Cooldown of 6 Posts, Charge: 2 Posts]

» True Hell Mad Demon State Appearance:
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» True Hell Mad Demon State Benefits: Unbelievable Mad Energy Boost: Unlocking this form, Tyrael can access of the powerful energies of an powerful demon making his new form stronger than his normal state. The demon never knew how to unleash a high level of power until he started to tear apart his zoa koa power and split it his powers. When unleashing his full demonic power. Tyrael's zoa koa energies shot up like a million of rockets and explosions. Being the final mad demon, He has an very high amounts of spiritual pressure. From the trainings and torture, Tyrael learned how control & restraints giving his opponents a fighting chance or not when the demon chooses to. The pure mad demon can place vast immense power into his attack making them stronger then in his previous states.

Intensified Pure Demon Strength: The strength of a True Demon. Tyrael's physical strength is really shocking and immensely superior fierce of such an unbelievable level that even his actions cause greater destruction and deadly damage. Very strong/powerful attacks may be able to greatly hurt his body but mostly the mad demon will be able to survive or counter it. Too many powerful attacks can damage his body like bankai it would a take a fucking vast amount of damage and attacks from a shinigami's bankai to dish punishment to him. Other very powerful attacks from iramashas, Arrancar even sugiuras might be able to greater punishment but who knows he'll might survive it and heal. Tyrael can block even weaken some attacks but really depending on the enemy's power or strength. He's able to overpower an person's gran rey cero and some powerful attacks with his one punch/hand slap yet it hurts leaving a burning sensation. With mad brute force behind it, he's able to break or destroy through the walls to destroy buildings and structures with his true demonic rage.

Pure Mad Speed Abilities: Tyrael's speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented to the point where the mad one can move greatly faster. Yet his agility and reflexes to dodge many oncoming attacks that have do him harm. Tyrael is shown to used his faster speeds along with his quick reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. He can actually match a captain's shunpo or espada's sonido speed by putting shadow burst energy into his speed catching up to and enemy's speed power. This has one disadvantage, Tyrael is a little weak against holy attacks if an enemy and fire an holy attack against the pure mad demon his speed will get weaker. Yet the mad demon isn't that fast against vizards and ziamichis this being his only disadvantage unless the guy uses his other speed powers along with his speed.

Augmented Demon Durability: The last mad demon had very high resistant to damage due to his hell-born demon skin newly created making him able to withstand attacks. Zadkiel actually infused magic from the sacrifice of demons improving the durability of Tyrael's demonic skin making it stronger than the regular demon or giant demon yet it has been know to faulter. Strong enemy attacks like bankai or stronger shikai have been known to damage him even higher Kidō can hurt too. But the lower case stuff like low level kido or cero wouldn't even penetrate his body anymore.

Deadly Mad Combatant: Trained by the Asthavon soldiers to become a very strong hand to hand combatant from instructor teachings. Improving his striking abilities everyday to become a powerhouse striker among his former family. From self training, Tyrael learned various fighting techniques such as (wrestling, boxing, kickboxing, karate, kenjutsu, judo and jijitsu) discovering and training in these arts. From circus acrobats, He learned some agility styles like leaping, jumping, flipping, and somersaulting. Which Tyrael can dodge enemy's attacks even getting away in the nick of time hoping for no more surprises coming his way. Like all mad demons, Tyrael has the sheer love of fully fighting at full 100% strength in great combat. He's skilled enough of fighting stronger opponents embracing in the sin of wrath of fighting enemies for short or even long amounts of time. Throughout training, Tyrael has become a well-trained demon warrior always pushing himself forward to become a great demon warrior because he has a dream to fulfill wanting to achieve it.

Ascension of Wrath: A relentless rage power by embracing one of the seven sins which is obvious "Wrath" drawing out it's very power only using it as a backup power. Whenever Tyrael gets angry, battle harden, rage-set or desperate the mad demon will draw out the wrath power as rage tribal incantations will form on his very wrists. The tribal incantations will bring out the berserk power of the sin turning it into a mad blue power. The dark mad power will brew inside him as his cravings of destruction and chaos will become stronger than before. This mad rage power can be used into ways: One which is the power can be used to boost two of his stats by one for just only two posts because after that the mad rage power will need to cool down for eight posts. The other is the power can be used to boost up the power of the technique to very high level placing the wrath power becoming a madness move.

Overdrive Knuckle Buster: A burning overdrive which gives the mad demon burning-lava enhanced punches which can burning effects to an opponent. Tyrael relies entirely on a enhance flame brawler style of fighting. Whether he possesses any skill in swordsmanship is unknown as he never uses his sword in combat. His skill in hand-to-hand combat combined with his unbelievable strength makes him quite a dangerous opponent. Tyrael is able to fight barehanded, using swift movements to land blows on his opponents before they can even. [The technique power only lasts for 5 posts]
Flame Based Attacks
Flame Buster: This is an Demon-exclusive technique that hardens the user's zoa koa and releases it in a swift yet potent flame blast within the fist. While similar in function to an arrancar's Cero, the technique is not nearly as powerful, though thanks to its composition its speed is 10 times faster and allows for it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Flame Cero does. [The technique power only lasts for 10 posts; Cooldown: 9 Posts]
Devilman Fist: An elemental spiked fist punch attack with the destructive power of the combination of elemental magics. The combination containing (darkness & fire). The elemental magics formed into small diamond crystal balls each ball talking on a dark demon color the crystal ball merge with the demon's arm turning it into spiked armored fist. Electricity starts forming from the hand. When deliver a punch the attack small nuke like explosion which can damage the enemy pretty badly most of his enemy skin will be burned if it blocked. The blast radius of the Devilman fist is one mile. However, Tyrael can use the attack three times if the fourth time then his right arm of which he used the Devilman fist will take some damage and become numb. [He can combine this attack with Shadow Movement making it into the Shadow Devilman Fist.]
Final Devilman Fist: The unholy & augmented power of the Exodus Fist. The original power has seven elemental magics this augmented version give the two elements the force of 200 small ones, they will infuse themselves in the demon's right hand making ti stronger almost into a burning metal fist. Tyrael rushes at the enemy attacking when the punch is deliver the impact actually the elemental magics themselves attack the enemy's pressure points in the arms and chest. At first nothing happens. Then a large bomb explosion erupts inside the enemy's body greatly weakening some vital organs and some bones. This can be blocked if it is the enemy will feel 65% of the attack and something inside the enemy will be burning. If it dodge the enemy will feel 45% of the attack almost like a shockwave hitting him. [Use: 3 Times, Cooldown for 10 posts]

Super Magma Hell Burner: A great augmentation of the normal magma powers with newer and higher quantities of magma build directly inside of it. Within the plasma seal lies a small red magma circle which is a magma upgrader inside the seal. The magma upgrader breaks down the magma making it into a hotter substance as the plasma is completely changed into volcanic magma eradicating the plasma. The magma seal is changed into a hexagon with the red circle becoming a satanic circle within the hexagon magma seal which allows him to produce magma abilities. From his burning magma, Tyrael has created a few techniques of the magma power from the magma seal creating different attack and defensive abilities.
Magma Burner Abilities
Hell Blitzer: By charging his magma energy within his hand until the attack is charged up ready for an attack. This happens when his hand with the magma is glowing both red and yellow emitting from his hand. Tyrael will force the magma into a flaming red magma ball used for attack or distraction purposes. When it hits, The attack feel like a volcano just hit a person's face of a radius of 20 feet. Much stronger than the plasma hell blast because it feels like magma and molten rock working differently. One flaw of the attack if his hand holding magma is attacked then the magma is disintegrates slowly and then disappears. This can inflict major damage upon his opponent having the strength of eight grenades combined into one. Because of the deadly power, Tyrael can use this about three times. [Cooldown: 7 Posts]
Final Hell Solution: Transforming the raw power of the magma making it into a deadly magma beam of pure destruction. Tyrael will feel the magma erupting and placing zoa koa energy and art of magic(Flame+Lightning) energy directing into the heart of the attack. By squeezing it, he'll start a chain reaction in his hand then releasing the attack changing it into a supreme magma flame wave feeling like a deadly giant volcano had a hot magma spill. The super magma flame beam can be fired from one or both hands. It has a big flaw, Tyrael is too weak/hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble, It has the same strength of an stronger Gran Rey Cero with the affinity of hell and art of magic into it in a burning red flame sort of way. [Use: 5 Times, Cooldown: 9 Posts Each time it used]
Devilman Hell Armageddon: By taking the death energy into his body first until the mad on emits a pitch black aura. From willpower, Tyrael focusing both the black inferno blast and the art of magic into his hand the mad one creates the magma genocider. The magma ball will turn completely black but the mad demon will the attack into the sky, starting a chain reaction as burning fireballs will start raining from the sky. The flame magic will started building producing fireballs from the air granting more energy into the attack causing the magma ball to expand bigger and bigger. The skies will turn dark red and white lightning will started building up as then something will emerge from the very sky. Producing a gigantic very big molten meteor from the sky, Tyrael will raise up his right hand as black lightning will erupt from it encasing the meteor in lightning. This will heats the meteor to a highest temperature of about 1,500-2,100 degrees fahrenheit. Then the mad demon will point at the target with shadow movement and encase lightning magic the gigantic burning meteor will come crashing down on a opponent. This creates a big massive explosion with blast radius of 30 miles, capable of destroying a city or two because of it destructive high power. What the mad demon calls the ultimate purification from the demon race and bring ultimate death to Tyrael's enemies. [Use: 2 Times with a explosion time of 5 Posts, Cooldown 12-17 Posts]

War-Devil Reaper Eye Powers: The mad one was able to create an unique power from the blood eyes they manipulated the power of wrath and vengeance. He had to experiment with his blood eyes through tests to unlock this power. This works as the same as a higher Bloodeye technique but this version is completely demonic in nature. Very same but demonic abilities like the Devil BloodEyes the mad demon had to his eyes replaced and blindfold for weeks to gain each of demonic abilities of the devil reaper eyes. Through this, Tyrael's blood eyes went through an unique transformation taking the eyes of a demon war-hunter a demon war devil eyes. Unlike other blood eyes, Tyrael's Reaper eyes can actually track an enemy movements perfectly. He can somehow keep track with an enemy's speed power such as an shinigami's flash step, iramasha's chaos warp or an arrancar's sonido. When an enemy attacks, Tyrael can track their movements and attack patterns to time his attacks accordingly. Through experimentation, Tyrael has been able to cancel illusion/mental-like abilities based completely on the enemy's mental deduction level if his is greater than the enemy. Also given a chance of dodge attacks when he combines it with his shadow movement & affinity of hell to give himself a much faster dodge speed. With this Reaper eyes, Tyrael can actually have an advantage in a fight using this for counter attacks, countering magic, performing defensive powers and blowing up energy attacks.
War-Devil Reaper Abilities
Black Hell: The ultimate flames of death; A warlock demon would never touch this power it said that the black hell technique burns an enemy.. The black flames burn like acid itself burning anything that comes within burning the place or hurting the targeted victim. However, Black Hell doesn't last forever perhaps (2-3 posts) then the black flames disappear put a strain on the reaper eye that spawn the black flames. These are dark flames of the souls of the dead the blackness of the flames. It an example of their pain and hatred towards the world. These jet-black hell flames can be ignited only by the user's devil reaper eyes vision focusing directly at an opponent or target. The black flames really places a major strain on a demon eyes causing a demon's eye causing it bleed and crack up completely. It takes a lot of concentration and magic the summon these flames summoning them them a high magic level. The deadly attack had a blind spot the demon has to look at an enemy for the black hell flames to cover or burn an attack. [It can be defeated by some barriers and magic but not for long because the hell flame will start eating at the attack or defense. The move can be dodged if the Reaper eye is blocked or the enemy is able to dodge the black flames with their speed abilities. Black Hell puts a strain on Tyrael's eyes depending how power he places into the hell flames even blinding him(4 Posts) in the eye that summoned it. (Used: 5 Times which he can summoned 12-20 Flames which can spread. Having a cooldown of 10 Posts)]
Final Izanagi: Because of his demon heritage, The War-Devil Reaper eyes couldn't copy the actually same power as the original Izanagi. Through experimentation, Tyrael came with an answer from a bunch load of deadly experiments combining certain demon abilities and make them close to Izanagi. The War-Devil Reaper eyes actually creates the demonic version of Izanagi; By combining (shadow movement + kage chokyo-shi) Tyrael can actually escape injury or death by teleporting his whole body into an unknown reality. The process leaves a dead body making the enemy believed that Tyrael is dead a near perfect illusion. When Tyrael decides it the demon can return back to the reality perfectly healed and unharmed. However, This doesn't take a lot of the demon but puts a major fucking strain upon the eye using the technique. Once the technique is completed, Tyrael's eye must be closed or healed because if not it can lead temporary or major blindness with one eye or both eyes. Because of the combination of deadly power the deadly technique can be only used once per thread. Yet it can be used twice but the demon's vision will be blurred plus he won't be able to use the reaper eye techniques. [The technique itself is dangerous to use unless the mad demon is really ready. Use: Once, Cooldown: One week in real time after the completed thread. EVENT/NEAR DEATH ONLY]
Demon Shadow Nemesis: The shadow demon guard technique; Because of the mad demon's connection with the dead able to harness the dark energy. From placing the shadow energy into the war-devil reaper the eye magic was able to create a giant spiritual guardian humanoid being. Like Lucifer Sinn, The Shadow Nemesis acts like a guardian deity at the same time it takes the user's life energy making them quite weaker. Unless the demon has more power; Tyrael can only hold the guardian monster shadow for a while depending on the shape of the shadow guardian. Shadow Nemesis has a height of 30 feet, having many weapons in it arsenal which can be used effectively in battle. The shadow guardian is a creation of [akuma kyodo + demon magic + zoa koa] all together. Shadow Nemesis is known to have many strong flame attacks and flame defenses because the dark flame magic it has embedded within. Yet there is a problem because it one it can be done once or twice and plus; Tyrael will have to choose what he wants to use for shadow guardian. [The Demonic Shadow Nemesis can be used or summoned in different styles: Tyrael can summon different forms of the Shadow Nemesis. From the mad history, Shadow Nemesis is known to have four forms: Rib Cage, Incomplete and Complete, Final And Shogun Mad Deveta.]
----Shadow Nemesis Forms----

Rib cage Shadow Nemesis: The first level of the guardian deity the insides of the deadly beast. By manipulating his zoa koa energy, Tyrael's can summon the demonic rib cage of the Shadow Nemesis which cover his body. Made of both demon akuma kyodo and zoa energy which creates dark purple energy which can create the deity's ribs. The Shadow Nemesis's ribs are made of 10 ribs which are combined to the deity's spinal cord acting like an temporary defense grid. It only takes little energy for the user to create the deity's ribs it would take a lot to damage them. From Shadow Nemesis's manipulation the mad demon can create one of the deity's bone arm to put a squeeze on an enemy. Making it into a demonic defense for the mad demon but very limited However, Eric can only use the technique only once per thread from his power lasting for seven posts any longer will put his body into a major violent shock.
Incomplete Demon Shadow Nemesis: The second level of the guardian deity the half skeletor the deadly beast the awakening of the deity. From his energy, Tyrael can create the incomplete form of the demon deity giving it skin taking much of an human like appearance looking somewhat muscular. From his zoa koa, magic & body manipulation, Tyrael's Shadow Nemesis has a four arms mostly the mad demon can create the upper body of the deity but in an incomplete sort of way. Because of the body manipulation of a deity, Tyrael can actually walk with the deity allowing it to attack his enemies by using it arms and fists. The incomplete deity can actually block attacks coming at the user but if it a powerful based attack like shikai, ress attacks and iramasha attacks if the affinity of hell isn't used. The arm or the hand can be destroyed which will take some time to re-heal the damage. [The Incomplete form can only last for 5 posts any longer can drain the demon. TWO TIER Only]
Complete Shadow Nemesis: The third level of the guardian deity the true form the deadly beast the grand awakening of the demon deity. The complete version of the Demonic Shadow Nemesis. From his energy, Tyrael can create the complete form of the demon deity giving it demi-human like appearance looking somewhat muscular. From his zoa koa, magic & body manipulation, Tyrael's Shadow Nemesis looks like a giant energy based warrior covered in armor. Ty can actually walk with the deity allowing it to attack his enemies by using it arms and fists. However, Tyrael can use the Shadow Nemesis's purple flame energy to create an flame like sword which even close to a giant flaming broad sword having great power to use it. It much stronger than it incomplete having a high resistant to damage but it doesn't last long. The complete deity can actually block attacks coming at the user but if it a powerful based attack such some stronger based shikai and some ress attacks. The arm or the hand can be destroyed which will take some time to re-heal the damage. [The complete form can only last for 2-8 posts any longer can drain the demon; ONE TIER Only]
Final Shadow Nemesis: The final level of the guardian deity the final form the shadow beast the of the demon deity. The final level of the Demonic Shadow Nemesis; From his energy, Tyrael can create the complete form of the demon deity giving it demi-shogun human like appearance looking somewhat muscular & stronger. From his zoa koa, magic & body manipulation, Tyrael's Final Shadow Nemesis looks like a giant samurai shogun energy based warrior covered in skin-like armor. Unlike the Complete form; Final Shadow Nemesis has secondary arms which the master of the guardian for fighting or creating the arms into wings for flight. Tyrael is within the forehead of the shogun deity allowing the shadow guardian to attack his enemies by using it arms, legs, fists or it whole body. However, Tyrael can use the Shadow Nemesis's purple flame energy to create an flame like broadsword which even close to a giant flaming broad sword having great power to use it. It much stronger than it incomplete having a high resistant to damage but it doesn't last long. The complete deity can actually block attacks coming at the user but if it a powerful based attack like stronger based attacks like bankai, segunda etapa attacks and other powerful racial attacks. If the affinity of hell or powerful enhancements aren't used. The arms, legs, or the hands can be destroyed which will take some time to re-heal the damage. [The complete form can only last for 4-14 posts any longer can drain the demon. ZERO TIER Only.]
Shadow Nemesis Techniques
Energy Wings Flying: The Shadow Nemesis had a very unique way of flying which the guardian creates the energy wings upon his back giving the shadow guardian. These wings give the shadow guardian the unique ability to fly even glide around to different place which the guardian or his master chooses to. The energy wings can create air current allowing them much faster then normal demons and transformed demons. The demon can actually travel almost like a bullet depending if he used the affinity of hell with the energy wings depending on the wing durability. The wings can damaged but it might take a while before destroying the wings. [It might take to 2-3posts then the energy wigs can be destroyed]
Flame Katana Manipulation: Shadow Nemesis can manipulate something of a shadow flame from it own body and then recreating the power of the flame into a long energy katana. The flame molded the energy katana making it nearly the same as a shinigami's Zanpakutō in a sealed state making somewhat pure and strong. Through experimentation, Tyrael actually sacrifice lower based demon weapons in order to stabilize the energy of the large flame katana which the shadow guardian. The flame katana blade won't fade out because of 2,000 souls used to create it but the shadow guardian can use the large weapon for one or three posts then he'll have to place it back in a sheathe. Then the flame katana disappears after all. The weapon itself had it own zoa koa which fire energy attacks or slashes with same strength as an arrancar's cero. Yet the flame sword maybe long and giant-like but it can be dodged and defeated by barriers.
Shadow Hell Bomb: Through hardships; Tyrael started teaching the power of the hell bomb technique into the mind of the shadow guardian creating a shadow energy bomb. Shadow Nemesis creates the Shadow Bomb something of an black shadow-like energy sphere within the palm of the hand. Nemesis waves his hand forward and fires the attack at the opponent, inflicting a large amount of damage. The power of the Shadow Hell Bomb seems to vary with Nemesis's energy; depending on how much power he uses for the attack. It be charged into stronger Shadow Hell Bomb attack but the demon will have to wait for post to charge to make the shadow bomb stronger. Then wait to fire. But,Shadow Hell Bomb it can dodged or blocked however, and it has the strength of a stronger Cero. Yet it has the speed of normal demon's shadow moment or a shinigami's flash step because the red energy combining with the air. The width of the Shadow Hell Bomb; It almost the same of a giant beach ball depending the energy the demon places into it. The blast radius is only about 5 feet.
Shadow Block: An odd shadow-like defense move used by various other mad demons in the past. Nemesis's master must be severely hurt when using his move and one hand must be on the ground. If attacked by an enemy by some sort energy blast, cursed, sword attack, almost getting impaled, etc. Nemesis's own shadow will appear on the ground stopping the technique/attack immediately however it can be only used three times if used a fourth time the shadow guardian will vanish.


Black Inferno Blast: Black Inferno is a massive burst of destructive energy a demon can unleash if they have Adept or higher on Za Koa. It starts by gathering energy from Za Koa along with the Demon's Blood and any type of darkness. From there, it will form into a ball of darkness that can be used to unleash serious damage upon anything it hits; resulting in a black explosion that is similar to a cero in destruction and can be broken down like a bala as well. Though, unlike a cero or bala, The Black Inferno Blast does a lot more then just simply explode. When it explodes, if trapped within the blast, the opponent will begin to feel extreme amounts of heat generating from their skin; so hot, in fact, some believe they are actually on fire from the strain on a person's will. However, this does more than that. That's simply the sign of a dangerous demon parasite entering a person's body. If a direct contact is made or even partial contact, there will be a strong rush of parasites, demon magic and Za Koa's force entering a person's body. From that point, over the course of five post if there was a direct hit or three for a indirect, this will begin to heavily tax an opponent. It will force them to drain extreme amounts of energy until they are somewhat weakened, slowed or damaged if they are unable to extract it from there bodies

I. Equipment


» Equipment: None

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Fri Feb 17, 2017 6:13 am

[adm]Moving to unchecked for now.[/adm]
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Fri Feb 17, 2017 10:04 am

[adm]Ohhhh boy, this is going to be a doozy.

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Race

No, Kade. Mad Demons do not exist as a race. This is either to be removed, or changed to show his ACTUAL race.

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Mad Demon Code

Did...you just copy and paste the Sith Code from Star Wars, and change a few things about it...?

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Spoiler:
 

There's nothing really wrong with this, but...really?

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He can be cut, burned, frozen, poisoned, having limbs gone, bleeding to death, torn apart, impaled blown to bits

Yeah, no. There is not a whole lot of people on PH that can survive bleeding to death, being torn apart, or being BLOWN TO BITS. You want to emphasize endurance, ok. But don't make his natural endurance on ridiculous levels. This character isn't going to be a 1 tier or 0 tier right off the bat, so you'll have to lower the endurance on this to more..reasonable levels.

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Hellraiser Flash

Yeahhh, I'm not okay with the limits you've set on that. Change this to 3-4 times per post, with a four post cooldown.

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Genocide Ravager

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40% stronger than a Cero Oscuras? Are...you being serious? The Cero Oscuras is the most powerful Cero the Espada/Arrancar can use. No, he is not having something equal, or even more than something of that power. A Gran Rey Cero at best.

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Magma Reaper

Lower this from 6-10 to 4-5.

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Armageddon Hell Buster

Remove this entirely, or rework it to the where it's not a Event/Near Death move. This character will not have the power or energy level to do something like this.

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Burn Rush
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Final Knuckler

Both of these need cooldowns, and a post limit.

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Devilman Barrier

Just...no. Remove this. Tyrael already has a lot of moves and such as is.

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Death Matter

So, still outright taking Lio's stuff. Yeah, no. Denied. This is something that Lio made, and is NOT widely available.


After these are fixed, we'll work on the rest of the app.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Fri Feb 17, 2017 3:24 pm

Alright it's fixed
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Mon Feb 20, 2017 7:46 am

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Energy Blast

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Eye Lasers

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Enhanced Energy Blast

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Enhanced Energy Beam

All of these need cooldowns, a post limit, and a charge time.

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Ascension of Wrath

Yeah, I'm going to have to ask you to nerf either the two stats part down to one, or change the post time from four to two.

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Overdrive Knuckle Buster

Cut the post limit for this in half, from 10 to 5.

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Flame Buster

Needs a post limit, and a cooldown.

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Devilman Fist

Yeah, that's not going to end up having a blast radius of three miles. Not even close. One mile at maximum.

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Final Devilman Fist

This needs a HEAVY cooldown and post limit, most likely ten posts or so, and a one per about...seven posts -- As well as a MAJOR toning down. A nuclear explosion inside the enemies body wouldn't just destroy body parts, it would completely annihilate them and Tyrael with that close of range. Tone this down MAJORLY.

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Hell Blitzer

Change this from 37 feet to 20, change the fact that it's fourteen grenades combined...eight at max, change the usage limit from five to three, and this needs a cooldown.

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Final Hell Solution

Yet again, this character is not going to produce power on level of a Cero Oscuras. Gran Rey Cero at max. This needs a post limit and cooldown.

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Devilman Hell Armageddon

Yeah, I'm not okay with him generating heat at 5,000 - 6,000 Fahrenheit, or with the fact that it goes 100 miles...or that it destroys four to six city blocks. Lower all of what was mentioned, and give this a post limit and cooldown time.

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"...Tyrael has been able to cancel illusion/mental-like abilities from the tier level that he's on."


Sorry, but that's not going to fly. This needs either needs to be based on Mental Deduction, or removed entirely, since most illusions are based off the Mental Deduction skill level, and him just being able to ignore that is not okay.

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Black Hell

Wew boy, Amaterasu. This is gonna be a doozy. Alright, I need to know how many flames he can summon at a time, a post limit for long this can be used, and a cooldown before this happens. Also, you'll want to add on to the effects that you've listed from the strain. I'd recommend if he pushes this limit, it will make him go blind for a certain amount of posts.

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Final Izanagi

The main qualms I have with this is combining four major demon abilities. Take out Affinity of Hell, and Demon Magic, and that part will be good. Also, while this can only be use once per thread, I would prefer if this was Event/Near Death only. I'll grant you a pass for this one, since it's meant to avoid those kinds of attacks. This will be his only Event/Near Death ability. Also, with that I would like to see a slightly larger cooldown for this, rather than just once per thread.

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Shadow Nemesis

We'll tackle this one stage at a time. Let's start out with something that will be about everything of the Shadow Nemesis. For this, I would like it only able to be use for once per thread, and the rib-cage lasting seven posts. As he goes up the chain, this post limit would increase, with the Final Shadow Nemesis Stage lasting about...15 posts? Now, something else that I would like to see would be that everything but the rib-cage be struck out for now. This is because this character won't have enough power to be able to use all of these forms, and will most likely only be able to perform the basic rib-cage. Incomplete will be available at 2 tier, Complete will be available at 1 tier, and Final will be available at 0 tier. So, now that we've taken care of that, let's jump into the other things that need changed.

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The shadow guardian is a creation of [akuma kyodo + shadow magic + zoa koa + body manipulation] all together.

Yeahhh, I'm not okay with this. Change "Shadow Magic" to Demon Magic, and remove Body Manipulation, since that usually is only for the character itself, not a summons or NPC for them, etc.

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Rib-Cage Shadow Nemesis

For this, I'd like to see this be changed to only being able to defend, and not being able to regenerate. This will probably have an Advanced level of Durability.

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Incomplete Shadow Nemesis

Need to know what level of Strength could destroy this thing.

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Complete Shadow Nemesis

Same thing as above.

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Final Shadow Nemesis

Same as above.
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After those are fixed, this should be ready for approval.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Mon Feb 20, 2017 8:34 pm

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Wed Feb 22, 2017 6:13 am

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You didn't do what I asked of you. 14-15 posts are not longer than just one thread, and I said he could only use it once. Change the 14-15 posts cooldown to one week in real time after the thread is over, and make it so that he can only use it once.

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Wed Feb 22, 2017 11:03 am

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Tyrael Vulgrim (REDO} [APPROVED, 3-2]   Wed Feb 22, 2017 2:09 pm

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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: Alright, since things have been changed, this character is currently ready to be approved. If anyone has any problems or concerns, contact me. Otherwise, this is APPROVED.
Tier: 3-2
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