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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Tsui Yazaki [Finished]   Sun May 07, 2017 12:47 pm

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DANAVA OF CANCEROUS SMOKE



TSUI YAZAKI





BASICS









» Name:
Tsui Yazaki
» Titles:
The Danava of Cancerous Smoke
» Age:
?
» Gender:
Male
» Affiliation/Rank:
Has shown a major interest in the Vanguard as of late.

» Shifter Appearance:
Can you imagine a man standing ignoring your very presence as he only seems to care for the smoke in his lips, his hands and the massive lance dripping with blood and an unbelievably tired yet reassuring look on their face? If so you may have already met Tsui. The man isn't what one would call a titan, but he does stand fairly built, scrawny yet healthy as he'd say. which makes him quite un-intimidating, A trait which he seems to use quite well after all disarming an enemy with pure looks? great way not to get killed. Another very key feature to the man seems to be his quite devil may care look,the man doesn't care much for being the most defined person his long untamed hair and the odd blue suit he wears within battle being the only really defining pieces about him. Besides these however it seems the man cares vary little for being remotely caring the truth is he just doesn't care about his appearance. The man isn't very true to the idea of some lackey wearing a suit or a uniform outside of battle, after all of his years roaming freely he has taken the approach of wearing whatever he likes, perhaps that's why the blue leotard and a cool fur cape would be his go to ... after all if you cared what people thought that wouldn't be your first go to. A distinguishing feature of the mans is defiantly his hair, he has long let his hair be his only sign of pride in his altogether appearance. Long hair stretching down passed his shoulders tinged an odd blue, this seemed to be a real change considering the man once wore his long red hair with pride maybe a joke by that which brought him back ... but then a blue flame burns brighter than a red.


» True Appearance Written:
truly this state still remains a mystery as none has truly seen what Tsui could become what he is deep down is interesting not simply being just another demon using this form to scare away the riff raff. even he himself has truly forgotten what this form looks like or hell maybe he never even knew, but the truth is he prefers to stay within the body of something much more ... mortal.



PERSONALITY


Idiotic
Tsui is quite dumb, he can quite easily be fooled and due to his happy go lucky lifestyle he usually enjoys doing stupid things which adds to the idea of the mans foolishness. Though hes seen as a mastermind within battle it seems outside of it hes nothing more than a plain old fool, preferring a laugh over the serious nature of everything. Though the man may truly be dumb, he is actually quite up to date and informed on most events and has quite the knowledge of many subject. his attitude tends to leave people believing that he may truly be idiotic yet some believe its actually a ruse for the man tends to have an incredible intelligence that he doesn't tend to show.

Idle
Tsui has always had the tendency to not really have that much interest in topics. he has never really taken anything serious and usually tends to act quite aloof. Thanks to this he is often quite Lacking when it comes down to actually doing things. He prefers to let others do his jobs usually saying hes helping them get over the learning curve of things, in truth he is just being laid back and palming his duty on to someone else.

Friendly

Tsuis made it his life mission to appear as tame and happy as possible. hes never really found a way to truly be happy but he has tried to never let that sadness inside out, this is probably because after his wife's death she made him promise he'd never be upset again. He usually has a smile on his face and a song in his heart, though both tend to be a lie he tries to play off. If anything he just loves making others happy and seeing them have fun thus he should appear happy so they don't have to worry. Tsui doesn't really hold much in his heart apart from a deep depression, but he would never allow that to define him as a man and decides instead to show nothing but happiness.

Funny
Tsui seems to be a bit of a fool. He is often caught joking around and getting into trouble for it. He usually tries to hide this with some idiotic even just plain old dumb excuse. he is seen as the life of the party always sharing a laugh and messing around. It seems Tsui can be very serious at times but he prefers to have fun and just have a laugh rather than understand the situation hes in. He has often been seen as a bit of a menace for his jokes and all round idea of more play and less work.

Brave
Tsui is nothing less than brave, he believes in protecting others no matter the cost. this has cost him a lot of his missions but he refuses to sit by and watch others suffer. He is quite reckless if he feels others need his help. Willing to put his life on the line to help those he feels are innocent and punish those who are guilty. though he isn't one for resolving problems with violence he would destroy any that threaten those who cannot protect themselves.

Lazy
Tsui has always believed in the "ill do it later" approach, he quite often takes naps and finds excuses not to do things. He is a very active person but when it comes down to doing boring things hes usually given up on it all and just finds a nice tree to sit and sunbathe. Tsui idea of a good day is usually seen as one were he doesn't have to do any work, earning him a reputation as the sloth swordsman among the hiru clan.

Modest
Tsui has never been a person to fall into the lines of, "I wanna be the very best, like no one ever was. To catch them is my real test, to train them is my cause" ............... sorry got carried away there. Tsui is a person who admires the strength in others praising their capabilities and even saying the truth about their strength. he believes no one is weak ... well except himself, and feels all do have a purpose.

Impatient

Tsui doesn't like to wait for things. He is very impatient to the point of doing anything (besides actually doing the task) to enable that it is done fast. He usually relies on others to speed the process along even trying to the point of making others try and prove they can go faster. This is also quite associated to battles, Tsui really dislikes the idea of fighting believing it would be much nicer to go have a good nap.

Demonic
Certain things can really push Tsui over the edge, at this point the man becomes a monster. Throwing all of his laziness and such for the pure aggressive hateful rage. Whilst like this he will rip everything within site to tiny shreds before he is satisfied. When he gets like this the best idea is to remain well clear for he would not only kill you but torture you until you bleed dry finally fulfilling his sadistic side. Whilst like this he takes no pleasure just a anger, something completely contradictory to the mans beliefs and his years of happiness.

Hurt
tsui over the years has faced things that pushed him to the brink, hes completely shut down falling into a sort of depression that he tries to hide away and put on a brave face. But deep in the mans heart he is still hurting trying to deal with everything he feels that a smile and a laugh can conceal all the pain and that hopefully one day he may actually smile for real once again.



NATURAL ABILITIES



Indomitable Defense
Tsui has always been a master of the simplistic art of defence. The man is just how he looks, a wall, he can take numerous hits and insurmountable damage and not give a care in the world. This is because those that aren't on his level would have a difficult time even getting past his first layer of skin much less could they come to really harm the man. The beast is reliant on an old strategy of taking upon the strikes as they come, and that is just what he will do, how he does this is simple an elite form of akuma kyodo and demonic energy manipulation. The man although he is quite a master at stopping these strikes dead in their tracks and leaving the other man in more pain than himself he has also come to take pain with an indescribable indifference. The man truly doesn't seem to care what happens to his body as long as it is capable of protecting anything and everything it stands for. In truth Tsui is a man that could take a variable beating and stand there brushing it off like nothing really happened, no matter how many hits someone throws he wouldn't back down, this has always been the way with the man and it truly brings to question just where did monster come from?


Superior Immune System:
Tsui's immunity system is unlike many others, the man for long periods has been subjected to high doses of many different diseases and even radioactivity, even contracting terminal lung cancer. Due to these massive subjection to internal attacks his white blood cells now react to a supernatural level being fuelled by his very core demonic energy. This allows the man to go for extended periods without even worrying about the idea of infecting the man with an ailment isn't that likely. the man has been able to adapt to most things he is faced with and thus his immune system has flourished and grown with each parting. the immune system of the man also allows another function, the formation of a higher level of cell regrowth and regeneration making wounds heal much quicker than they normally would. Though this isn't up to the levels of high speed regeneration it allows for the primary cells in his bodies to instead of focusing on the defence from disease and such be used to replace cells until they can regenerate and heal him much faster ie. instead of months only a few days, or for days hours.


Enhanced Skeletal Structure:
The mans skeleton unlike most has always been incredible thick his bones like rocks in some respect. some say this ability wasn't anything to do with the outer shell of the man but more of a adaptive method to handle the environment he lived within before he died. The thick skeleton has a much more circumstantial approach to other skeletons becoming large enough for bones to actual form a sort of wall for his internal organs, though their is a gap between still allowing full unrestricted movement, this gap is probably his biggest weak point and any who could break through the outer layers and be precise enough to strike into it would more than likely kill the man. though this isn't saying that it is impossible to break through these bones, with a solid enough strike one could still shatter the bones, after all they are still just bones despite their thickness. This heavy skeleton also allows for the mans own strength to be increased, due to the heaviness of the skeleton each punch he throws is enhanced within strength due to the extra force. Any other who would have this little skeleton behind them would almost be left immobile but with extreme training and living with it for most of his life the man now sees it as pretty much the normal thing.


Energy Reflection:
This is a move that solely advances the level of defence the monster has. the move works of the principal of meeting the opposing force with a barrier of pure demonic energy bound to Tsui's very being, as the energy attack hits him the energy surrounding his own body acts as a sort of wall for it and thus sends it back in the same direction it came from. The move comprises that Tsui's own energy acts as a sort of armor for most types of energy. This move however is by no means permanently within effect and has no weaknesses, the move itself is switched on and off by the monster of a man and may only remain in effect while he isn't within motion. It also isn't all powerful and can be broken through with a strong enough blast, which though in terms of strength would equal out to a monstrous hit, but it is still capable of being broken through non the less. In essence this move is more of an addition to his original armor and thus protects him even further in essence and makes it not even necessary to attack a sole energy based user. Energy is also including attacks centered around things like the elements, with an exception of earth.


Incredibly Dense Skin:
Some say that it is near impossible to even breach the top layer of this mans skin. Well in essence this is a very solid truth, the pure skin of the man is like a casing of the most pure of iron. this is because the mans external layers of skin are thicker than even that of diamonds to a point and the pure strength of the man backing including the muscular growth that acts as a support to it makes breaching his Armour like outsides incredibly difficult. The mans Armour like defense is enough to allow him to take a strike the size of a small building and come out with only moderate damage. Against those who are not truly skilled in strength he would seem like a friking unbreakable wall, though there are was to by pass his defenses. One such of these ways is the soft and squishy insides of the man, they are largely under strengthened compared to his thick outside layer, if someone was able to get an attack inside of him it would be easy to simply rip him open. But in essence with enough circumstantial damage to a single spot eventual someone may be able to minorly pierce his skin, though this would take relentless amounts of attacks to achieve. The mans skin however is incomprehensible hard and on occasion with enough force from the enemy would hurt them more than it would ever hurt him.



ORIGIN POWERS


» Origin Name:
Cancerous Smoke

» Origin Power:
The Danava of smoke but to be more specific that of a smoke that comes from something that tears away the insides of those who inhale it. the cancerous tobacco smoke. What caused Tsui's control over this is something beyond his definition some tend to look deeper into him believing he deep down something much more expansive and deadly but the man knows not of how he came to be or what he truly is just that he was sentenced to be the carer of the origin of this plague. The ideal of smoke is one that encompasses the very ideals of what we allow ourselves to intake and what we allow it do do, base desire and wish come from this but more importantly everything associated with it is Tsui's dominion from lighting that first cigarette till you die of lung cancer he is the ever essential light that lets you indulge in your desire, but you best enjoy that smoke... it may be your last.

» Origin Abilities:

Smoke Generation -
this is a simplistic but incredibly odd technique for Tsui to use. The details of this is quite different to what most would expect. By generating and inhaling smoke within seconds of inhaling and holding his breath smoke starts to expel from his skin. This smoke encases the man and not only advancing his strength to a whole new level but also enables his to contort the smoke to his will changing the composition of it and generating it out of his own being. This smoke is manipulated and generate via Tsui using his ability to generate certain composition of elements that relay to that of tobacco and smokes the 2 taking effect here and using his body as a catalyst to form is the minor level of fire and water mixing together to form smoke, this smoke has the added ability of solidification and via changing the composition of the smoke also allowing him to change the general density to levels that could match even his pure strength. this however isn't capable of phasing through or entering through living tissue, unless there is a massive gaping wound that would allow the smoke to infect an opponents body and cut away at them. The biggest advantage of this move is its extremely long range being able to reach over a mile with his smoke and even block out the sky with it by expanding the smokes molecular bonds and changing it so that it expands outwards, though this lowers its integrity and makes it much easier to rip apart with regular attacks when it is solidified, and it can be expelled by using oxygen to purify the smoke when intangible a factor that comes into affect as well during this techniques special ability. By controlling the genetic makeup of his own body to match that of his smoke Tsui an in theory force a sort of intangibility, though this form is very dependent on the mixture of his own body with the smoke and his control over their composition, in this form Tsui could by theory phase through most base attacks however he cannot attack whilst phasing and due to the common structure of his natural body and that of another physical body he is unable to go through living tissue at risk of becoming nothing but steam as his composition must change completely to not confuse molecules and this dissipates everything that was Tsui. But the biggest disadvantage is the downfall of his own breath. This move shall remain in effect until Tsui exhales a thing that must be done to stay alive, though Tsui himself is able to hold his breath for an extraordinary time (2 posts with a 3 post recharge due to his lungs needing to retake in air) whilst unobstructed, if someone where to say break past his defenses and force him to exhale or attack him with pure oxygen it would force him to tangibility and the move would be rendered useless.

Ash generation -
Another technique his powers allow in the convergence of his ability to control to a small level parts of elements. This ability deals much like his smoke generation by using his own body as a catalyst for his ability to take in compositions from the elements and combine them together, this one being a composition of fire and air unlike his smoke however this is activated through a different means. Tsui is capable of simply from his very fingertips pools worth of ash falls from it which like its counterpart in the form of his smoke generation can travel up to a massive distance of a mile and in that area, though unlike his smoke he can not expand the current amount of ash as it has already been expanded by changing its molecular bonds when first created. The ash however is constantly converging and moving to where Tsui points it, the ash itself being like the steam able to be changed in density and and controlled at will by the man. But the key difference about these two substances is that though his ash can not become intangible or even merge with his being It has an ability that makes up for this. For the tiny embers within the ash's temperature can be controlled and risen to the point that this ash could melt through even metal or cause some serious burns. The coating of the ash can also cover over his skin giving him an extra dermal armor making it so that any physical attack on his person could be perceived as a double edged sword as upon contact it would burn away at them, this also allows Tsui to enhance his own physical attacks making it so that it burns away at enemies with each hit. Another thing to note that like his steam his ash too has a major downfall in the form of its opposing element, this one however being water, due to the flammability and bonds being disintegrated upon touching water and making Tsui lose all control over it making his ash useless. The man however doesn't tend to resort to this power very often due to it's limits, The ash whilst incredibly useful can only be used whilst standing still therefore he couldn't go in and brawl with it covering him and not worry, it requires concentration for control and thus he has a major downfall by being unable to react whilst using it.

Vapor Generation -
The final form of his normal abilities this one like the two others converges two separate elements with each other in order to generate a brand new compound. This ability invokes the combination of merging both air and water molecules in order to make a vaporous gas, this technique is activated when Tsui simply exhales this vapor from his very lungs causing a massive spurt of vapor encompassing Tsui himself in a sort of haze. This mist like substances expands outwards encompassing an area of up to a hundred meters and can be manipulated and used like the others up to a mile area. this fog covers over the area and within this zone is a sort of area of danger for Rule can in fact change the density and such things of the vapor and control the patterns in which it flows enabling it to act like thousands of bullets shooting forth at its target. This however isn't the only capability of this technique as it may also be used to in turn collect all these water droplets and converge all of the vapor to sling onto something before expanding it out causing huge water spurts capable of ripping skin from flesh with their intensity, and drowning opponent by collecting vapor into their lungs which requires them to stay within the mists zone for a 2 post period which will then begin to fill their lungs with water that expands out causing them to vomit up water and choke unless they can get out of the area as it would continue to fill their lungs. This technique like the others can be attached to Tsui's body and used as a more physical sense, however unlike the other 2 this is done by creating a sort of mist that can form into blades of water and air mixture allowing a cutting force to his punches ect. This too like its fellow techniques has a downfall in the face of fire being capable of dissipating the water and making it so that he cant control this vapor because of the bonds destruction.

Oxygen manipulation -
The oxygen affect is a principal that allows the man whilst simply having a smoke to draw in, expel and even control all oxygen in the air around him. Tsui is capable of through his energy creating a small vacuum to form thus allowing him the capability of drawing all external oxygen within the area. this is done by his very energy forming a small pocket of demonic energy inside Tsui's lungs this allows when inhaling and exhaling oxygen for it to form protective barrier around his lungs that breaks down and reforms oxygen particles on a whim allowing him to hold more oxygen within his lungs than any person alive due to it legitimately being stored within retrospectively its own small broken down molecular prison within the confines of these energy pockets. The man himself is simply acting as a catalyst of usage for this as when he expels oxygen it is infected with the same energy that line his lungs allowing him a control over it, this control is subconsciously linked to his smoking habits thus allowing through his simple act of smoking Tsui can quite literally control the oxygen within the air around him constantly creating more and more oxygen within his control capability over the time he uses this meaning the longer he smokes the more o2 he has absolute reign over. the power is however limited by distance and the amount of energy it exerts, this is due to the fact that he can only send it up to distances of fifty meter's in radius around him. This accompanied with the energy expenditure being so high he could only maintain it for three post at a time without requiring a two post cool down makes it very harsh of an ability to use

Temperature manipulation -
Via the flickering flame of this mans creation, his energy literally coming a light, it gives Tsui's true control over the temperature itself, heat cold its all just a simple whim to the man. Through this method the spark of his flame is fueled with energy much like the oxygen principle, this allows the man raise the base temperature of his flame through simple focus, doing this allows the man to quite literally change the internal temp of that flame to the core of the sun or that of absolute zero. and through his exhalation method it takes this effect to an outward audience, by expelling the energy within the flame it spreads through the air but something very intriguing to note about this demonic energy is that it whilst incapable of actually causing physical harm to people it carries the same surface temperature of the flame originally created by tsui the original spark of energy. this doesn't mean he can cause an unyielding freeze over mass areas in seconds, much like the oxygen affect this affect spreads over time building up concentration and surface area the more he smokes, meaning that if he were left to his accords to just simply smoke he could cause a small radioactive fallout zone within a large city given an extremely large amount of time, a fact that rarely happens as due to the vast expulsion of energy this technique acts like a beacon to every person around drawing hollows, shinigami, other demons and everything of the sort right out of the wood works.

euphoria manipulation -
this is an interesting piece of Tsui's abilities the ideals of all of most of the mans abilities relates around the ideals of his crux and the cancer that comes from smoking and the substances associated with it, this however is directly associated with the substance in which smoking is based around. This technique is far from the run of the mill simple control, this is the act of using dopamine and endorphin's to create an unbelievable sense of euphoria. by infecting the very substance with his energy and com-busting it Tsui is able to like oxygen spread and breed this newly formed smoke outwards spreading and merging it into the air itself, the basic idea with this is spreading these and causing a chemical reaction, how you ask? by infecting those around him through contact of this smoke with the skin. the energy forces itself as an outwards seal that allows these chemicals to enter the very bloodstream and force their way to nerve endings before creating an extremely heightened sense of euphoria by engaging the nerve endings and sending signals straight to ones brain, over time this allows vast amounts of unrelenting waves of pleasure, short spans within this area cause simple base feelings of goodness and joy but as time expands so to does the effect. Over the course of time the opponents will power comes into play and forces them to try and resist this unbelievable surge of pleasure to the point that if left on long enough would send even the most depressed and unhappy person into a trembling sack of pure brokenness by giving constant unbelievable pressure however this too has the same effects as his other techniques that draw like a beacon due to the vast quantity of energy truly used.



ETERNAL PARTNER


» Conceptual World:
A world of dark encompassing smoke that seems to make even the most experienced smoker choke upon the toxins, this world is dark covered in a pitch blackness everything leading for miles with no end. bones litter the floor and the smoke hides the beasts within this place the monsters created from it something darker than any reality, this place is an extension of a hell one dare not enter if one does truly they are looking to die.

» Rilīja Attributes:

Habius Corpsus:
this ability allows the dark demonic things that plague that place to rip into our wold literally calling the souls of the damned and cursed the bones that litter the floors form, some still freshly peeled from flesh bits still hanging as these grievous souls are formed, the darkness of monsters from within this place creeping out as the plagued individuals come forth all being coated in the black smoke as they are controlled and moved by it they act as the will of the smoke commands they essentially become the mindless servants of Tsui to die and be rip to pieces from him the dark terrifying presence still rippling from them as the foul dark smell coats them ... they truly are the dead risen to serve the smoke, for there will be corpses. they do however have a massive drawback once again because of the essence of this power it cannot be held for long mainly due to the sheer upkeep being to large meaning he could only hold it for four posts before these corpses became inanimate again

The Black Mist:
The darkness expands from his very skin much like his own smoke however this stuff is much different as he continues to expel it the black smoke infects the lungs of those who inhale it breeding nothing but the harmful choke of its toxins. Over time those who remain within its harmful area will slowly become the beast that inhabit it as the smoke has 2 very potent and vulnerable effects, one is infecting the core of ones body through inhalation, by doing this it infects their very system slowly spreading from their lungs to their very brain the effects are differing in the way that it eats away at ones insides causing mass fatigue causing hallucinations and even dysphagia to the point they begin chocking on their own spit the longer one stays within the field the more and more it effects them its essentially a terrible harassment to ones systems. the second ability is one much more noticeable, an acidic effect after large amounts of time remaining activated this ability begins to rot skin break down molecular matter act almost like a cancerous acid truly staying around this fog is a dangerous idea, however the biggest issue with it is that simply Tsui is not immune to his own smoke. Theres also a massive flaw in the smokes interaction with oxygen it seems whilst it initially can fight away the outside elements the particles of this gas slowly corrode and leave the smoke deteriorating and eventually disappearing making it only capable of lasting for three posts, it also has a big disadvantage in the way of not being able to reenter the environment after it already has or it will immediately degrade mean one would have to wait two posts before they could use it again.


» Eternal Partner Name:
The Behemoth

» Eternal Partner Appearance:
Some question the form of a beast asking just what defines them the simple ideal is that maybe just maybe the beast is defined not by what it is or the name it bears ... but the past it suffers. Behemoth is the monster dyed in a shade of bloody red, the beast that sifts beneath the surface, it sits towering all men and shaded by its darkness the only thing it truly shows are those demonic eyes, the gripping smoke that comes with each of its words and its grizzled fangs. The beast sits as the king of its domain and it knows it the beast rarely takes true form or offers insight into what it truly is but shows the blessing of something beyond a simple spirit. The monster is calloused in nature never revealing to much of itself simply the bones of those that lie before it this beast is not a creature dwelling with monsters ... its the monster that even they should fear.

» Eternal Partner Personality:
The beast that dwells within is something odd, its not your run of the mill spirit who works alongside their master, it truly makes the task that is presented before it harder. Often it taunts Tsui with the idea that he has no spirit and that it liked his eternal partner and thus ate the spirit so he could inhabit it. despite this however the beast took a shine to the man allowing him to hold the beast as its "master." though not even he would know the monsters true intentions. the beast is lazy and resides within its dwelling believing it beyond all others and capable of more than trifling games of battle, for the king of all beasts needs take no challengers for they should know their place or die regretting ever stepping foot into his den.

» Eternal Partner Powers:
None truly know the capabilities of the beast simply that it states that soon enough it will devour Tsui whole, it shows a key ability to almost mockingly copy his own powers but has yet to show the true extent of its capabilities, it hides its true power until Tsui is truly ready for it to "feast."



ATMA VATOU



» Atma Vatou Name:
The Arbelist

» Atma Vatou Appearance:
His Atma Vatou takes upon the form of a large crimson colored spear, this spear has a name engraved upon it but it looks like it has be carved beyond recognition. the Spear itself has over 80 scratch notches that are said to be the amount of kills originally attributed to this weapon running all over it from blunt end to the tip of the spear. the truth about this pole arm is not truly known, according to Tsui it was the property of a monster who stalked the world butchering those he could, killing any in his path with a lance of blood. A piece that the monster died holding when he chocked on blood due to the cancer in his lungs causing a violent reaction within him. Tsui sees this little piece of history as a cherished prize that tears apart all in its wake truly the man who controls this massive lance is someone beyond normal stature.

» Atma Vatou Abilities:
This weapons abilities exceed beyond that of just a simplistic spear though it functions as a sort of polearm with an extraordinary effect, being fully capable of firing bursts of the mans energy supplies creating waves or blasts from the spear itself. He is even capable of imbuing his smoke upon this massive red spear enhancing its strength and also adding the effects of his smoke so that upon impact they slowly attack and deteriorate cells of their target. On top of this it is often said that this lance is beyond any normal criteria of a simple weapon, the pure strength and sharpness of it is unbelievable turning most things in its path to butter before it. but it comes with a very specific ability on top of all this.


The Deadmans Wonderland:
a technique that brings his cancerous life back to him drawing from his own energy the being tears away at his very core to do something monstrous. The premise of this ability is quite simple by pouring his energy into his bullet he makes it a ticking time bomb. Now some may believe this just means the spears strike is explosive the truth is this Strike is nothing more than a catalyst for energy that infects what it touches. This method extends to the idea that when this bullet hits a target it will attempt to infect their system fighting against their own internal energy, those of higher energy have a much higher resistance, and then change the composition of whatever it hit. This means that when this energy infects either a person or an object it changes the actual structure of said target, making it so that say a brick wall where that strike landed he could manipulate the compounds within and make it explosive. This essentially means that he is changing the target from one thing to a complete other making that wall into explosives, making escape or getting outside the blast radius extremely difficult. The spear when using this ability however must be within the mans grasp, due to it being the literal catalyst that pours his energy forth, thus every time he uses this the mans energy tends to become quite overexerted and thus wouldn't be capable of being utilized again till after a 1 post cool down.

Though their are many ways to counteract this ability such as avoiding its strike or the level of ones durability affecting the energies ability to manipulate cells the major downfall comes in the idea that the spear itself may be physical but the energy pouring from the strike itself is not physical and cant be knocked away, they aren't completely irresistible those who are hit with this energy are capable of forcing it from their body and having their own immune systems counteract it, even stopping it completely this is all determined by the users will power and the capability they have to force their body to deal with this, those of high levels may be completely resistant where as those of low level may not stand a chance.

However a key factor of this power comes in the form of what this energy can do once implanted. It is capable of detonating all that it has enveloped and changed, creating a mass explosion that varies in strength dependent on two factors, the amount of energy he pours in and the substance he changes. This also has a key ability that allows the energy to literally simmer within allowing him to constantly cause mass reactions that don't cease until he stops pouring his energy within it. of course to this extent the man must make physical contact with the host of the energy to pour more in this is also a double edged sword due to the fact that in this instance his ability does have a cool down of 1 post before he can activate another detonation and in that time he is literally gifting his enemy with more power to allow him to activate it again.



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EQUIPMENT


Hyrule, the flame kings Lance -

the ultimate gift from the great weapon smith of a time long ago. Hyrule has been passed down through the ages to the clan head of the Hiru clans, each man who have wielded its power have been known throughout the ages as legends. The ancient red polearm has long been a symbol of power as a swordsman. One such wielder of this polearm once tipped the world on its head using the spears might. Using it to end the era of kings and tyrants the only way it knew how ..... through blood. Hyrule is a unique weapon, be it the rumors of any who face the activated "red spear" have never lived to speak of it. Or the fact of those who touch the blade would burn at an unholy level, the pole and tip even in its natural state alone capable of burning flesh from bone.

The spears power is specifically heat, this works truly in the favor of Tsui being almost linked together through that power. The spear itself burns at incredibly high temperatures and is capable of not only cutting into a person but upon its touch leaving at least some bad burns even against more serious opponents. When this blade is able to merge with ones energy and is then allowed to react with air this degree of heat increases to drastic levels, capable of upon touching someone causing immense burns. though this phenomenon doesn't happen often as it is seen as a last resort to unleash this spear, and any unworthy to see the weapons true form must die.



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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner




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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Tsui Yazaki [Finished]   Tue Jan 30, 2018 9:16 am

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DANAVA OF CANCEROUS SMOKE



TSUI YAZAKI





HISTORY




» History:
Tsuis history is one that is fiulled with the stuff of memories that could shatter a man, or make him truly great. Born within a small house hold Tsui became the first child born of the 3rd generation of yazakis, though this feat was only accomplished by about 2 minutes, his fraternal twin Yakitsuki born 2 minutes after Tsu. He grew up as a quite funny child, he always loved to play outside and run around, it usually got him into trouble. As he grew Tsui took on the role of a leader at the mere age of 4 to stop a bunch of bullies from taking his playground and bullying his "little" sister by making an uprising. It was needless to say tsui was popular among others, even from a young age. As Tsui grew, so did his family, his most precious sibling at the time though was truly his twin sister. It was needless to say he treated her with the utmost care, though he did treat all his other young sisters the same. When the birth of both his sister sherri and miaka, twins just like he and Yakitsuki. all of his sisters quickly became precious family member and he wasn't going to let anything happen to them especially his twin Yaki, he made sure that no harm would come to her feeling a special bond being her twin and all. Yep it was pretty easy to say tsui had a good life.

a new child being born into the Yazaki name, Tsuis father and mother were ecstatic. As was Tsui and his other rabble of girls, for moths they prepared their lives about to change from this new en-devour. But as the time came close it seemed the more destined this family was to drift apart. Tsui never really learned what happened that day, but as he came home from soccer practice the day after his little brother was born he found his father sitting outside on the doorstep crying, but always smiling ... why was he so damn happy? As the weeks progressed Tsu and his father started becoming dependent on each other, when one got into to trouble with tsuis mother the other would defend them. These boys were as thick as thieves..... but that too came crashing down. A divorce ... tsuis mother and father had soon drifted apart, Tsui never really knew what happened with these 2 he just knew that in the final settlement his mother was given custody of all the children. By this time Tsui was 6, he of course didn't want to leave his brothers and sisters but when the time came he made his decision.

choosing to stay with his father Tsui soon grew into a great young man. The boy and his dad relocated to the big city. Tsui had attended karakura high school during his youth, though he never really learnt much. Tsui had a tenancy not to really listen and was quite lazy when it came down to doing something he didn't want to. Though this never stopped him from making friends, the boys natural charisma and likability ended him up both respected and liked by any he met. Soon enough Tsui was well know all around, his old man however had earned the title the smiling drunk.

Tsuis father was a man who was always happy and tried to be everyone's friend. Needless to say though, he was a bit of a idiot like his son. So the day that a small gang raided their house, instead of doing the sensible thing and running the man stayed. For weeks the gang terrorized them, breaking into their house, stealing things even destroying Tsuis fathers business. But still the man seemed to do nothing, That was until one day, Tsui had come home from school early that day. He had gotten sick of all the lectures and taken off, as he walked towards his house he saw it. 8 bodies of some small time thugs lying unconscious, some may have even been dead. All of these scattered around his doorstep and standing their smiling was Tsuis father.

The man had been shot though somehow it was just a minor graze, it seemed as though he had beaten these men in self defense, though the man suffered a long list of wounds in return. When Tsui took him to the hospital they rushed him to an emergency ward. The man wasn't hurt to severely ... but scans revealed that his father through all his years had succumb to one of his vices ... smoking ... he was diagnosed with lung cancer. And not a year later the man died from this disease, not taking chemo as an option for the sake of Tsui. As Tsui sat in the emergency wing of the hospital he knew 1 thing ...... he was alone. Tsuis father passed on may 5th 13 years after he had left his wife. Tsui hated himself, if he had tried to help his father stop him from falling into this web of depression ... maybe he could've saved him. It ate at his soul, and as he stood across the way, flowers in his hand he couldn't even bring himself to attend his fathers funeral. As the proceedings died down and everyone had left, Tsui placed the flowers on his fathers grave. knowing he wouldn't see the man again.

In that moment though, there was something else that tsui saw, a child not 6 years younger than him. a family that he knew to well, his family. But as he looked to them the smile of his father inherited by the son his future went a separate path to them. Tsui spent the next few years of his life travelling. He saw the world and gained a new perspective on life. Tsui worked for a living, trying to fend for himself in the world. Soon the man took a job as a freelancing Mercenary "security work" Tsui found himself in many occasions hired purely as an assassin, but the man persevered. He worked with the skill he was gifted with. He was soon Teamed with a brick of a man though this never stopped tsui numerous times the man he was paired with was put in danger as Tsui couldn't simply stand back and let things take its course, he was angry ... he was stupid, and he had a limited time to get ahead.

Tsui lived his life as a monster doing horrible things just to live, but one day it all came back to bite him. His partner decided that he wasn't worth all the trouble, noting Tsui as to self sacrificing for the goals like the man wanted to die. Someone had orchestrated an ambush, hiring tsuis own partner to turn on him and assist in tying Tsui up and dragging him to the roof of a building. The man's partner asked him for his last words, an assassin treating another assassin a final courtesy he guessed.... the words that followed seemed so clear "better this than the cancer." From their they tied the noose around the mans neck. He would fall 20 stories before that rope whipped back killing him, he died at the age of 27.

weeks had passed by until finally Tsui was taken from this world. He was lead to a place he never knew by a man clad in black. Tsuis life became more of a struggle than anything for awhile. He ended up within one of the lower districts with killers and criminals. Tsui soon found a life working under a blacksmith, the man had for a long time been forced into making makeshift weaponry for a local group of thugs. Without a wince of hesitation Tsui broke into their main hang out and picking up the leader of these men by the scruff of his neck let him know his place. The man stood slightly off the ground as a rage driven tsui yelled at him, his neck being crushed under his strength. Without hesitation the men conformed begging his apologies...... within a week he was their new boss.

After this instant Tsui set out to make a more luxurious life for the people of district 75, driving away any who dare threaten its settlers. But it was soon to change, one day an elderly man came to see tsui. As they walked through the woods the man spoke of his family, and his intention to reunite the yazakis. Tsui of course didn't pay much heed to the man, casually just zoning out. But as they arrived back at his town something was wrong. Tsui could see the fires, the path paved with blood and the bodies of not only citizens but all of his friends.

A rage burnt inside the man like no other, He raced forth to find the one who had caused this ... and sure enough he did. Before him stood a Aduchas class hollow, this beast had seemingly ripped through his entire district killing all as it went. The Onmitsukidō had already arrived on the scene, but even they were having some difficulty. The girl who stood at the front of the line yelled her commands, the long beautiful black hair flowing in the wind as she tried to save her men. Something was odd though, these men they were fresh unable to even save themselves from this beast. And as the beast impaled one of the girls men it was obvious that this wasn't the reaction of the gotei but probably a training session gone wrong ...... these kids were all going to die.

The blade fell to the ground as the kid had been impaled with its hand, the beast had now cornered the girl and the rest of her men? some sat crying for their mothers other ran for the hills, this girl wouldn't survive if someone didn't intervene. Tsui ran clasping the blade in his hand he had never really wielded a sword but his main idea on how to use it was aim and cut. The girl had been forced against a wall and as the arm rose about to fall down upon her a blade sliced through, Tsui had come to the rescue.

The man stood holding the now re sheathed sword with one hand starring into this beasts eyes. It lunged forward its strikes being caught by tsuis counters. A man who had never used a sword taking to it so well. As the beast came in for a high powered punch, tsui lunged underneath releasing hi blade from its sheath slightly as he let it cross its stomach. The Aducha fell holding its gut trying to run, but it was intercepted. A small force of armed men stood behind this man all of them standing in awe of this ragged young man. Without an instant passing the leader of this group stepped forth slicing the beasts head in two. As the battle had finished the men ran forth to check on the girl in front of him, for some reason they all stared at him in awe. But his eyes never left 1 thing ... this girl, she was so beautiful, her flowing black hair all the way to her deep gray eyes, it was needless to say Tsui was smitten.

The men escorted Tsui back to their small village on the outskirts of the rukongai. He had heard simply a name from them ... hiru. They all seemed to be capable swordsman and from the looks ex members of the shinigami taking residence here. As he was taken to a room he couldn't help but look back to this girl from the shinigami and at that moment their eyes met for the first time. He was dragged and thrown into a small room, an elderly man sitting in the middle inviting him to have some tea. Tsui accepted the invitation sitting and drinking with the man, he soon explained the situations of why he was here. The sense he had displayed on the battlefield the moves he used and the way he handled that sword were that of a man who had seen battle with a blade before.

The man soon asked Tsui to stay with the clan, and train under his tutelage. Tsui of course refused, believing that he would gain nothing by sitting around. the man agreed to let him leave but asked him for a small duel, within an instant the man had tsui pinned to the ground the man unable to even read what this man had done. Tsui reflected on this decision accepting the offer of the man. So for moths he trained become a master with the blade, Tsui had learnt the capabilities of his blade growing to become almost one with it. This blade was odd, incredibly long in size it made learning the hiru way of sheathing and unsheathing difficult ... but not impossible. The man advanced to become their top fighter greater than even those who had wielded a blade since birth. But it wasn't just the blade that kept him their it was something .... more.

Everyday he watched the girl from that day walk through the courtyard to her garden, he had learnt over his time here that she was in fact, the clan heads daughter Mira. she was a member of the Onmitsukidō, being a woman who was capable of passing her entrance exams into the academy without a single worry. She was bright beautiful young woman and her strength outmatched many of the clan. She was capable of bringing down 3 of the finest warriors of the clan without even unsheathing her blade. But there was something caught in the middle of this love story.... a marriage. Mira was the promised of young man from one of the noble houses within the rukongai. IT was not truly an act of love but more a act to solidify the bond between them and the Hiru clan.

Before long Tsui had been inducted into the Hiru clan as one of the top warrior classes, becoming the vanguard of his group. But even with his rising through the ranks he still couldn't get this woman out of his mind. In this time a young member of his group had been injured , coming to his friend for aid he ask Tsui to retrieve a small flower within the princess garden to heal his wound. And so it went that one night he broke into the Clans main complex, making his way to the garden in order to find this flower. But what he found there was the girl he had sought after crying in the middle of the garden. Tsui immediately went to her kneeling beside her he spoke softly a few words of comfort. As she looked up she saw the face of this smiling man trying to console her. Her words were something that Tsui would never forget, she kissed him embracing him in that moment things were real for tsui.

The guards poured into the sanctuary to find these 2, the clan head himself stood before Tsui. But his judgment? freedom. He allowed Mira and Tsui to see each other, saying love conquered any other bond. From that moment forth Tsui and Mira being to be together, both of these 2 in love. Eventually more time had passed, and Tsui asked Mira to marry him. It was a celebration like no other, the clans strongest warrior and their princess, it was a match unlike any other. The 2 were bonded underneath the sakura tree in Miras garden, the place where they first met. Their love was one that shone brightly, but so bright it would soon become a beacon for darkness.

At this time the clans head was dying, he had never had a male heir and thus asked Tsui to take the title of leadership. He entrusted to him the secrets of the hyura sword style and of course the most trusted possession of the Hiru clan. Hyrule, a blade that had seen no use in over 500 years, a blade that for some reason burned the hands of any who touched it, a blade so powerful it was protected by these men until those who were great enough to wield it came along. When Tsui receive such an object he felt an odd connection to it almost a kinship. For over 15 years the blade and the people of the Hiru were protected by the strength and watchful eye of Tsui and his beloved. But that was all about to change.

in the spring of 2402 Tsui and Mira had been shocked by the devastation of Miras inability to have children, the miscarriage of their child leading to a cut that would never fade. As she sat on the step of their home Tsui sat beside her holding her tight in his arm, trying to let her know everything was going to be alright. The 2 slowly began to drift Mira almost seeming as though she had lost a part of herself. It killed Tsui on the inside to know this had happened to his wife. He would sit their watching over her day after day, neglecting his duties as a head just to comfort her despite her coldness to him never even looking at the man after this point. This however lead to another situation to arise. The man who had been the prospect to be Miras wife years ago came searching and demanded her. The clan held no regard for this man he waved his title around like it was nothing, and thus tsui showed him just what he would do to the man who try lay claim to those he loved.

The sword had cut through his arm within an instant, this was the message he intended to send. The man was dragged back to his home screaming all the way, the fear of the Hiru taught, but tsui was not finished he would unleash his rage beating this man as he lay on the ground screaming for him to try and take her. The next night Tsui sat within his house watching his wife sleep, she seemed so peaceful, but that night wasn't to be one of peace. Assassins, men stormed the Hirus clans stronghold, killing any and everyone in sight. As they reached Tsuis house they dragged him and mira out of the house, setting it ablaze. They took Tsui to the side beating him to a living pulp... how it reminded him of his own death. They forced him to watch as they pillaged his town and killed any who remained. As they were weeding out the final few the man he had maimed before stepped forward, driving Tsuis own sword into his wifes chest letting her fall to the ground and bleed out.

Tsui crawled forward holding her hand as she died, this time it was he who was in tears. As she lay there he could only smile to her hoping she could hear him as he repeated the words she once said to him"you have such a lovely smile"As she died Tsui lay in shambles holding her watching all that he had burn to the ground. as the sun rose only the smoke remained of the town. Tsui buried Mira under the burnt down sakura tree, tears in his eyes. As he walked through the ash he saw something of a sign to continue on.... the blade. Even through this fire Hyrule had survived without a scratch. As Tsui lay his hand on the hilt of the blade the heat poured over him. Within an instant it had subsided but something was odd...... the blade had accepted him.

Tsui walked from that place never looking back, its said the man who had burnt his village to the ground was soon found dead 2 days later, covered in burn marks over his body and a sword wound through his chest. From that point Tsui remained continuing to show that berated smile despite all the hardship making him what he is today, he ventured out learning to master his abilities, especially those of his blade in solitude. but even that would soon be interrupted.

The old man from that day so many years ago had found him again. He asked Tsui to assist him in his search. He took Tsui for a walk, asking him to help recreate the yazaki clan, recruit his family and find some piece in the world. Tsui accepted, his life now in limbo the man had nothing better to do. The old man helped train Tsui in using his Zanpakutō, even contacting the spirit of the blade, a spirit that he couldn't shake from his mind. Over the years the old man left after teaching Tsui everything he could, At this point Tsui set out to help his grandfather upon his search becoming a key recruiter for the Yazaki clan.

his granfather was a bit of an ass of the man constantly giving Tsui another taste at second hand smoke, a trait he very much disliked but when it came to things he was smart. Both he and his twin were recruited and began to rebuild their entire clan from the ground up they had established a holding and become much more relevant. However they needed allies, Tsui suggested the crow clan but Yatsuki recommended the unabara. She had grown quite fond of one of the brothers of the unabara ... pestilence. Tsui never liked the man but agreed to her requests of an alliance offering them peace through marriage, giving his twin what she wanted. Little did he know it wouldn't last.

a few years past and things seemed reasonable their clans bother growing in size ... until one night tsui had heard sounds in the compound he went to investigate and found his brother in law nailing the members of his clan to crosses. He attempted to stop him but pestilence easily destroyed the man.. even playing a game of name the disease ... he altered the affects of the smoke his grandfather had stained him with .. and turned it cancerous. A tumor was placed into Tsui's brain ... cancer that would eventually take him yet again. Tsui did the only thing he could, he ran ... the butcher letting him leave, maybe he was tired of killing family or maybe he knew what the mans eventual end would be

Through his time after this he encountered many trials eventually even finding and bringing his family together, however his demons kept lurking. The man fell into a depression, even having heart attacks due to lack of sleep and stress. The man eventually died from this succumbing to his own demons he burnt himself alive wanting the pain to end. Though the truth was the tumor in his brain had caused hallucinations that drove him to madness ... it was the cancer taking him in a whole new way. Because of this however the concept of his torturous life constantly being plagued by this one simple concept that smoke that brought about his death ... nidahana chose him. She re birthed him creating him in a new image giving him a body befit for him and powers that would allow him to strive forward and not be taken by his natural curse. He was an amalgamation of the pure cancerous effect ... and thus he crawled from the place she incubated him in, the wastes that he walked for weeks until he found a place to gain his bearings, he was now back from the dead ... maybe life wasn't done with him just yet.



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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Tsui Yazaki [Finished]   Tue Jan 30, 2018 9:29 am




Okay so for knowledge i fixed up everything Henrex had stated was problematic added shit he wanted, i will hold of in depth explanation of the whole inhale effect and deadman wonderland as that's something Hen requested but i feel i should wait depending on if he or someone else takes over the check. But this guys now finished fairly changed may need a slight check over again but not much has changed besides of course appearance and personality and history, apart from adding a few sword techniques a piece of equipment fixing the powers hen told me to and completely erasing energy crest.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Tsui Yazaki [Finished]   Tue Feb 06, 2018 5:41 pm

[adm]As I'm still the one who's checking this, I would like the expansion of Deadman's Wonderland and The Inhale Effect to be made. After that, I'll move on to any other issues that I have with the app.[/adm]
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