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I. Basic Information


» Name: Divaas Alamgir
» Titles: Divine Conqueror, Ala, Dee, Dave
» Appearance Age: 21
» True Age: 421
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Gotei 13 (Division: n/a)

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» Appearance Description: Divaas, a browned skinned African American male, standing at five feet and seven inches. His physique being in prime peak condition, as if he went to the gym everyday. Not being muscular, but having a fine toned athletic body. His weight coming in at one hundred thirty-five. His hair colored black, styled to be eighteen inch dreads with gold medallions, scattred and entwined with his hair. His brow being narrow and his amber colored eyes being sharp. An obvious scar is apparent on his face, being a burn over his right eye. His attire being the traditional gear of the “Gotei Thirteen”.

Although his attire maybe the same as the majority, he wears it in a fashion so that he stands out. He only wears the half of the kimono that covers his legs and rips off the upper torso, revealing his chest and many tribal tattoos. He uses the upper half as a uopen jacket, much like the captains, additionally he ripped off the left sleeve, revealing his arm to be wrapped in bandages. Another difference being he wears pants under the kimono and his shoes are thin steel toed boots.


I. Personality


» Personality: Divaas, If his appearance does not scream “I don't give a fuck.” That his demeanor and any attempt at conversation with him would definitely bring you to that conclusion. He is what the modern world of today would consider a “Chiraq Savage”. They type to run in your house with a mask on and rob you broke. Than the next day come over and act like everything is all buddy, buddy. He believes nothing is long term and lives for the moment. Although considering his reckless behavior he is not very talkative. In facts he hates talking to people and rather avoid and form of communication, unless necessary.

Even with these being a facts and him acting in a very ignorant manner, Divaas if far from stupid. In his earlier years he hardly ever showed up for school, often skipped class to stay at home and plot. When he did intend school he effortlessly scored in the top three in his graduating class. He enjoyed reading and even writing on his free time. May it be rhyes in his note pad or short stories about his life. He was definitely organized and never forgot anything. Some might say his awareness was super natural, his perception was definitely impressive. He was very physical, with the potential of being a allstar if he tried to. If it wasn’t for his behavior and simply him lacking the ability to give a damn, he could have been the poster boy for his school. Divaas hated school, he found it repetitive and hated doing the same thing day after day. School was a lie to him, distracting him from what he could be doing in the real world.

He hated being apart if the system designed by society and to him, it was only a hinderance, holding him back from what he was meant to be. Divaas always saw himself as a ruler, a conqueror of sorts. He ran his streets with an iron fist. He was far from merciful and rather spiteful in his ways. Disobedience, disloyalty and weakness would not be tolerated in his gang. He had the mind of a brilliant tyrant, if he could place his eyes on it and if he liked it, by the next morning he would make it his. May it be women or materialistic possession. He took and never gave because he deemed it just.

He definitely had a superiority complex, which explained why he hated to talk to people, because they were not worth his time. Divaas was far from religious, too much bad had happened in his life for him to believe in a God. If anything, he thought man was God, they create and destroy. This all made sense to him, he was a logical thinker and not someone who had faith in the unseen or hope in the unknown. He often depicted himself as a demon because he could see unknown creatures gathering around him. He thought maybe this was just the weed because he only seen them when he was high.

He hates to act against his own will and following authority. His life meant allot to him, so he lived it how he want to. As far as he was concerned he was all that mattered, he had a family, but he really felt nothing towards them. He would not hesitate to kill blood if he needed to. Divaas is not someone who likes to work in groups, even when he and his gang would rob, he often did the house next door alone or plan on his own and take the reward for himself. All in all...the world is so much better without him.

» Likes: Women/ Money/ Weed/ Books/ Writing/ Fighting/ Killing/ Stealing/ Being in position of authority

» Dislikes: Authority/ Men/ School/ Punks/ Liars/ Traitors/ Bums/ Religion/ Being out smarted/ Being wrong/ Losing

I. History


» History: Divaas, born on the west-side of Chicago in the year 1996. An era which gang violence was on the rise in urban residential areas. Some might say he was born in hell, seeming as his hood could not escape the fact that a shooting was bound to happen each day. Some calling it the city of demons or even a war zone. The are earned the name “Chiraq” comparing the violence to be the equivalent of Iraq. Poverty and low income families were common amongst his area, so he was no stranger to struggling.

At birth, his mere appearance set him apart from the majority, his eyes being amber. It was very uncommon for black males to have this eye color or really any african american. Him and his dad shared this resemblance. His father being a Muslim African American. Divaas shared the same last name as his father , “Alamgir”; meaning conqueror of the world. His first name coming from his mother, “ Divaas”; meaning divine. His mother being the same as his father in terms of ethnicity, but his name came from Hindi.

Both of his parents expected big things from him, they praised him as the jewel of the family. He would finally be the one to bring the family to the top. The father knew this because of his son’s eyes. They were special, the eyes of something even greater lying dormant within. His father being very knowledgeable on what this might be. For he shared the same genetic, his father being a common street thug so it would appear, but he did what was necessary to provide for his family and he intended to teach his son the same lessons.

On the other hand his mother was a professor at the local community college. She was more ideal with the way she wanted to raise Divaas. She wanted him to be much like herself, a professor to help the youth in the community advance. Although she too knew what those eyes stood for, she was no amature to the spiritual realm. It's quite odd how two completely different people would come together to create one child. Anyone could see that his father and his mother shared no liking to each other. There had to be something more to this, a relationship that almost seemed fixed. Maybe because it was.

To young to realize his parents was an arranged marriage by a higher authority, Divaas lived his childhood much like any unordinary kid. Unordinary because he just did not play well with others. He often hurt his classmates while going through elementary. He often sat in the back of the class by the window drifting off as if he was locking eyes with someone standing on the other side. When asked what was he was staring at by his teacher he replied “ Myself”, leaving her quite confused. Although his family understood, they knew what this was, his father was quite happy to see this, although his mother showed disgust. She seen him as a demon and could barely stand the sight of him, but it being her own son she did what any mother would do. She lied, cared and nurtured him.

Divaas matured faster then most kids and definitely showed an extraordinary amount of physical prowess. The majority just found it best to stay away from him. He preferred things to be that way, he felt he had a enough friends, that being the boy in the mirror who looked exactly like him. The boy who followed him around and whispered in his ear. He never seemed to be alone and never a moment of peace, the constant negativity forcing the child into solitude. Talking to others just seemed pointless, they just thought him to be crazy.

The older he got, the worse it got it got. At the age of sixteen Divass had an outstanding police record. Getting caught with possesion of drugs, fighting and stealing. He had been through the youth correctional program three times and it never seemed to stick. The deadpan look on his face seemed permanent. Around this time this is when he got tied in with his father's gang “Almighty Vice Lord Nation” . Leaving his life with only two paths at this point, death or jail. His father thought this was a step in the right direction, he thought it was feeding his inner Hollow. His father was sick in the head. His true identity being a member of the Yuudeshi Clan, much like his mother, but she was no psycho. Before Divaas was old enough to remember they had already passed their shinigami powers into him, they go was to insure the longevity of the clan and for him to become the next head. Although his father was more about slaughtering the other branches to not contest them.

His mother truly having no room to act dude to her status in the clan, his father took charge, taking his son down a rather ruthless path. It was at the age of twenty when Divass met his demise in a fatal home invasion. Although his physical body was gone, he was still alive in spirit. He found himself standing in a pool of blood, his own to be exact. His father and mother both death beside him and his killers body's falling to the ground as he watched what looked to be like their inner souls emerge from their body. He had no idea what was happening, but he had a good grip on his emotions and did not act out of character. The group explained to him that his mother and father were traitors against the clan and were planning to use him as a weapon. They went on to explain why he was disconnected from his body and just what he was.

Divaas was not crazy, all the spirits he had seen over the years were real in the demon in the mirror was his inner self. A Hollow, but they explained to him that he was more than that, a Vizard. Being born with both Shinigami and Hollow genetics. Although only one parent needed to posses each gene, his parents had both. He would definitely have greater potential than the average Vizard. He already had the powers of a shinigami dormant withen him, his parents only acted as the trigger. Divaas found this all to be laughable, he thought religion was horse shit and the spiritual realm, but he could not deny what was inront of him, he was a little happy that he was not in hell. They only asked one thing of him, to serve the cla and not tarnish its reputation. The insisted that he joined the Gotei, but he did not like the idea of being some form of police between the world of the living and dead, but he had little to no choice since it was his only option.

He enrolled in the academy to become a Shinigami, although being a special case, his classes required a little more supervision, considering he was a Vizard. His Hollow was rather aggressive constantly attempting to take over, but for some reason could not make it very far due to Divaas zanpakuto spirit. The spirit wasn't very fond of lawless behavior, so he kept the Hollow occupied. The two seemingly entwined in battle with the more negative component being Divaas Hollow, having the edge due to Divaas actions in the living world. The take over was not complete but it definitely showed in his personality in his action.

The plan was to suppress the Zanpakuto for good, but after entering the academy Divaas became aware of this. It was time for empty to enter the trail to master both Zanpakuto and Hollow. Upon entering his inner sanction he appeared to be in a run down jail. Within the jail a battle would be taken place between a being that looked much like himself and another crowned with a ring of light. He question that his Zanpakuto represented justice and purity because he was far from this. He was more of a reckless, wise and violent tyrant. He was definitely rooting for his Hollow in this fight, but the idea of losing himself was rather uninviting

This was an internal struggle, his will to be in control and just his Hollow looking for a good time. Taking notice to him, they battle came to a halt as boths sides attempted to plead a case and why the other should be suppressed. Both sharing admirable cases; the Zanpakuto being for justice saying how the law needed to be forced evil should be purified. He explained why the inner sanctum was a jail, the realm could be changed with ease, but Divas and his Hollow both were criminals and all criminals should be punished and rectified. He promised absolute power that wasn't meant to destroy but protect, removing anything from the realm and sending them to a prison.

His Hollow found this laughable and so did Divaas. He explained that Divaas was born to conquer and take what was his. He was the law he needn't to follow anything that wasn't him. He didn't need power because he already had it and it was serving him well already. He promised him the ability to to take anything he wanted, the ability to conquer and make the world his. Both gave good arguments, but what Divas promised them was equilibrium, he explained too much good is bad and too much evil just simply get boring. His hollow was all about the thrill of terrorizing and his Zanpakuto soily existed to ensure the safety of the realm. Without one or the other, neither of them would be able to exist. He convince the two to live in a cohesive and harmonic relation, allowing for himself to be shared by both entities. With this he donned his masked for the first time and effortlessly removing it passing the trail. Which he already knew he would do, he didn't like losing. Failing was not something he knew how to do. Sure he was a piece of shit, but he was far smarter than the majority.

Although he may had created a balance within himself and insured that he was the king of the realm, he still had other things to do. Like train to be efficient using his Vizard abilities, although his Zanpakuto came with many rules. He even had to spend one hundred years in the soul society jail just so that he could use his Zanpakuto, this was a way of repentance for his crimes in his past life allowing for him to start of on a new path free of burdens and sin. Divaas considered this all to be horse shit, but seeing as what his Zanpakuto could do, it was worth it. He wasn't fond of its stipulations, but it had to be done.

Now mastering both, he needed to rise in the ranks of the Gotei, the idea of being a foot soldier was not pleasing, he hated taking orders.

I. Natural Abilities


» Natural Abilities: Awareness/ Intelligence/ Wisdom/ Physical Prowess/ Boxing/ Swordsmanship/

I. Racial Abilities


» Racial Abilities:


I. Sealed Zanpakutō


» Zanpakutō Name: Kami No Keimusho (Divine Jailer)

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» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Kami is rather intellectual and wise, he enjoys good conversations and helping others. He is truly kind of heart and cares for everything good. He is the prime image of being righteous and pure. His sole purpose being the security of the realm and insuring the longevity of the king. He lives to serve his master and insures he is on a righteous and just path. Kami is so pure that he refused to be drawn if his master has hostile intent against someone who has done nothing wrong, which often causes them to argue. If Divaas was some how able to overpower him and successfully drawn the sword with hostile intent, as of the pact made between the two. Divaas would automatically be jailed (sealed) in his own Zanpakuto for eternity.

Kami strongly stands by his job to ensure that the King is not a tyrant, so he holds a great amount of hate towards Divaas inner Hollow. Their ideals conflict, so Kami often finds himself disciplining the Hollow. Kami may be pure, but he holds an extreme amount of hate against injustice. To the point where removing darkness and anything that threatens the King becomes a priority. Justice by any means, and showing no mercy to the undeserving.

» Inner World:Divaas inner world is divided into three levels. The first being the King’s Realm, a holy kingdom. Protected by holy knights with Kami being the most trusted. A towering city that effortlessly soars above the clouds. This is a representation of how Divaas sees himself. He is a conqueror, but he is also divine. His arrogance holds no bounds. He sees himself as a king and no one is above him. His word is law, but Kami ensures that his word is just and not that of a madman. The kingdome covered in riches as far as the eye could see and its people happy and free of poverty. It made Divaas sick.

He spent most of his time in the palace when coming into the inner world, this was the second layer. Preferably his safe place of peace where he can get away and simply clear his mind. An area where he is unbothered. Chandeliers made of diamond and floors of gold. Women ready to supply him with his needs and even a endless supply of weed. In his palace he was free of everyone, but Kami. He could never escape his personal guard, no matter what he did, Kami just seemed to know everything and be everywhere.

The third layer being the jail which held his inner Hollow and all the other convicts who looked just like his Inner Hollow. Divaas would go down here from time to simply hang out with himself. He was a lot more fond of his inner Hollow and not Kami. Although when going down here Kami had no choice, but to accompany him to ensure the Hollow would not try to influence the King’s mind.

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» Sealed Zanpakutô Powers: Kami No Keimusho, the protector of the realm and all that is just. The one of holy stature which locks away evil. Although in its sealed state it may not due so, but it may gather Reishi from the surrounding area effortlessly (One charge per post). When exposed to light the charge processed is doubled. These charges are converted into a holy energy, Divaas may release these charges for destructive range based attacks or even improving his own physical capabilities.

I. Shikai


» Shikai Release Phrase: Rectify, Kami No Keimusho

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» Type Of Katana: Nodachi

» Shikai Abilities:
-Holy Empowerment: Just like in it’s base form the sword can store light and spiritual pressures from the surrounding area to improve Divaas own power.

-Holy Physiology: Kami increases Divaas all around shinigami abilities. Improving his spiritual pressure, strength, speed, durability and awareness.


- Heaven's Gale: Divaas release a crescent wave of blinding/cutting energy. The potency of the ability can be increased by using charges. The strikes damage is relative to his strength and requires two charges per strength increase. This attack has a three post cooldown.


-Heaven’s Creation: Divaas can effortlessly create objects of holy energy. May it be another sword, barrier or clone. Each creation can be moved telepathically and have destructive capabilities. (Able to be charged by Holy Empowerment)


-Heaven’s Dream: Kami can produce a light from his blade that send disruptive energy to the mind and one's own Reishi. Causeings one perception of reality to become flawed. When trapped in this illusion the opponent can fall deeper, the effects becoming more realistic. The further they fall the more permanent the effect, falling three times invokes the opponent to be locked in this false reality. While under this trans, the body is left defenceless. To avoid this, just don’t look at the light. Heaven’s Creation can also produce objects that give off this light. This technique only works on those with Willpower lower than Divaas’s Mental Deduction.


I. Bankai


» Bankai Name: Kami No O (Divine King)

» Bankai Release Phrase: “Everything the light touches, is my kingdom.”

» Bankai Appearance: Divaas shares the attire of his Zanpakuto spirit, gaining a crown made of light that hovers above his head much like a halo and six white angelic wings along his back. His blade is still the same as his Shikai, but he has three of them.

» Bankai Abilities:

-General Information: This stage of the sword shares all the abilities as the previous stage. Abilities such as Holy Empowerment is gifted to each sword and Holy Physiology is improved upon even furthering his capabilities.


-Heaven’s Seal: The true nature of Kami is to lock away those who are lawless, those who intend to cause harm to Divaas and disrupt the peace of the realm. Anything the blade cuts is sealed away, locked in a jail within the Zanpakuto. Although it is not that easy, a number of attack must be landed, three in counting and all must be from the blade. When cutting limbs -like the arm- it becomes petrified and white. The oppnet losses the ability to move this particular limb, due to it being jailed. If Kami is able to strike the heart it results in an automatic seal. This person body is fully petrified, before turning into an old jailer key. He can also seal attacks by burning charges, although these attacks must come in contact with his blade.

For this technique to be Divaas has to charges that vary in numbers. For example, If he uses six charges to activate this attack than he only gets six post to use it. If he is unable to strike the opponent three times within those six post, the effects of Heaven’s Seal is removed. He would have to start the process over after a duration of time. If he uses six charges than he has to wait twelve post. Divaas can relase enemes from his seal at will and if he dies all those who have been sealed will be released. This mainly being used for NPC’S. When used on PC'S the seal duration is equal to the amount of charges used to activate the technique. (Ex. 6 charges = 6 post seal) Once released, the opponent can not be sealed again until the tie of there sentence has passed. (EX. Sealed for 6 post, after release, they cant be sealed for another 6 post.) [[Must have PC permission]]

Sealing an attack requires less steps, but there has to be a difference in power. Divaas must maintain his Focus. When his blade comes in contact with the attack, his zanpakuto attempts to understand the construction of one's Reishi. If the opponent has a lower Focus than, he can bend their attack forcibly sealing it. The attacks are only sealed for a max of three post.


-Heaven’s Jail: Divaas can spend six charges to warp the surrounding area to be a jail, much like in his inner world. This ability, works hand and hand with Heaven's Seal, allow for the prisoners to be opponents he has sealed. These prisoners aid in in combat and still possess their abilities. This attack only last for five post and has a six post cool down.


-Heaven’s Ring: Spending one charge, Divaas can create portals/mirrors out of his halo. It is possible to create multiple portals/mirrors at once , but he must spend a charge for each one. These portals are all chained together by visible links of spiritual energy, allowing for Divaas to travel through them. Spending an additional charge on these portals activate its second ability, turning them into a mirror. Each mirror being able to deflect one attack before shattering. Additionally, If Divaas was to send his own attack into a mirror, it would duplicate, shooting the same attack out of the reaming mirrors. Using the duplication causes all mirrors to shatter. These mirrors are only present for a max of five post and require a six post cooldown.

-Heaven Light: Spending x amount of charges equivalent to the damage received , Divaas can heal all his or an allied wounds and restore their stamina. This can also be used under any form of hypnosis, acting as a cleansing light for the body and mind. Removing hypnosis on the mind and even removing toxics . Small cuts requiring 2 charges, large cuts 5, broken bones 8, severed limb 12. Mental Hypnosis requiring 6 and poison also being 6. Each form of healing can only be used once per battle. Attempting to use the same form of healing twice on one being will result in only increasing the damage and pain.


I. Inner Hollow/Mask


» Inner Hollow Name: Vincere (Latin for Conquer)

» Inner Hollow Description: Same as Divaas, just pale in color.

» Inner Hollow Personality: Vincere essential all the negative parts of Divaas, multiplied by ten. He is extremely hostile and only can respond with force. He shows no compassion for the weak and will take any opportunity inherit Divaas body. If Kami is everything that is right, Vincere is everything that is wrong. Only enjoying chaos and terrifying the weak. He is extremely childish and even more conceited. His arrogance shows no bounds and has a extreme superiority complex. He lacks compassion for anyone even willing to put himself on the line just to get a laugh.

He fights with the idea of not coming back and has no shame in using dirty tactics. Showing he is a man without honor and clearly isn't one to trust. If he respects anything it's power, if he is beaten he will definitely take a liking to the person, but constantly challenge them, weather it be in games of intellect or physical altercation. He is extremely competitive and does not take losing well, but would rather face the person again then set some trap for them to fall in.

» Inner Hollow Powers:

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» Vizard Powers:
Power Of The Conqueror: When putting on the mask Divas gains really no abilities, although it enhances his own control over the abilities he already have. Reducing charge cost on his abilities by 2. Additionally his physical capabilities are increased substantially (one rank). A side not being, when putting on the mask, his personality becomes much like his inner hollow

I. Resurrección


» Resurrección Appearance: (What does your character look like when they transform into their Resurrección state?)

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» Resurrección Abilities:

In The Presence Of The KIng: In this form Divaas awareness and sensory skills hold no bounds. The closer you get to him, he becomes increasingly aware of your presence, allowing for him to act instinctively. With the multiple eyes around his body, he sees all things within a 360. Although this can be a double edge sword, each eye being connected, anything that happens to one eye happens to the other. Meaning destroying one eye destroys them all. Only leaving him with his original pair of eyes.


100 Heavenly Archers: Divaas takes in a tremendous amount of energy and fires thin laser like ceros through each of his eyes, but not from his original pair. His main set of eyes act as a guiding systems allowing for him to guide his ceros . He fires a total of five , each moving at and moderate adept speeds. This attack can only be used every 5 post.

I. Equipment/Other Resources


» Equipment: (If your character has any equipment, then you should put it in this section. Otherwise, if they don't, do not fill in this section and you can leave it blank.)

I. PhantomTech


» PhantomTech: (Does your character have a PhantomTech brain installed? If so, you'll be able to qualify for upgrade at the Cybermind or add other Cybernetic parts to your character to make them stronger. Click here for more information about Phantom Tech)

» Phantom Tech Abilities: (What can your character do with his or her's add-ons? This applies to any upgrades your character has gotten from places like The Cybermind as well.)

» Phantom Tech Powers: (This refers to things outside of Add-ons unlike Abilities. What Phantom Tech Powers are, in a sense, is basically what kind of power did your character gain from having a Cyberbrain? For example, Shadin Yuudeshi gained Imaginary Computation with his Cybernetic upgrades and has the ability to bring tangible things into existence with his computers Quantum Calculations.)

I. Skill Sheet


[SKILL SHEETS ARE NOT TO BE FILLED OUT UNTIL AFTER A TIER IS GIVEN! WILL SKILLS WILL BE GIVEN BY THE STAFF MEMBER THAT GRADES YOUR APP! FOR MORE INFORMATION, LOOK AT THIS THREAD]

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Shinigami Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Vizard Skills
  • Power Augmentation Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mask Protection:: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hollow Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Hollow Skills
  • Acid Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Garganta : Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


I. Roleplay Sample


» Role Play Sample:
A forever illuminating full moon lingered over the body of Hueco Mundo, howling winds accompanied the banshee like screams of tainted souls which prowled its sands. A pale black and white coloring as far as the eye could see and soaring pillars that ascended from the sands as if it was reaching for the black skies above. This was the home of the hollows and today it had an unexpected guest who intended to add some color to its bland setting. This being was titled as Divaas Alamgir, someone who found joy in the process of exterminating hollows. Truth be told Divaas found happiness in simply fighting, but it wasnt often that he got to use his blade.

Garnered in the Goteis standard squad member clothing, he tread his way through the vast sands. His purpose to slaughter and to advance in strength. “Sir, this is pointless!” A voice resonated from his Zanpakuto, one filled with virtue and righteousness. This was Kami, Divaas’s Zanpakuto’s Spirit. Someone who fought for justice and ensured the king -Divaas- walked a path of holiness and divinity. Although this may only add to Divaas’s arrogance and ego. He already considered himself to be the best or at least he was on a journey to be the best. It was hard to do this with so many restrictions, his Zanpakuto being the biggest issue for him. They often disagreed on things making their relation faulty at times, but they still had a complete understanding of one another, along with a mutual respect.

Divaas sighed before rolling his eyes, he took a moment to take a puff of the herb he had rolled up in some papers specifically meant for smoking. He inhaled than exhaled slowly “Shut up Kami, you seem to not understand I run shit in this relationship.” His demeanor being cool, calm and collected. His voice relaxed as he gave his rebuttal. “ That is true Sir, but we had an agre-.” Kami’s words were cut short by Divaa’s groaning. “I’m not breaking the agreement, i'm doing my job. Hollows are bad, yes? According to your ideology they should be wiped out. This is the only place I can tran as much as I like and not worry about hurting someone, so do as you're told, Kami.”

Divaas was a ruler, someone who did not tolerate disobedience. He understood the restrictions placed on him by his Zanpakuto and he followed them, but he still found a way to find his enjoyment. “ AGHHH AHA A, what a fuckig clown! How do you deal with this punk?!” Divaas sighed once more, if it was not one then it's the other. Vincere, the inner hollow within Divaas. This being representing everything negative in his soul and he wanted the best for Divaas in his own way. Full hollowfication being his gold and to conquer all things in site, pure greed. Divaas definitely someone who wanted more than the average person, uy his inner hollow was even for mor hungry for riches than he.

“Sometimes I think about dying again, just to get of you both.” He spoke with honesty, he wasn't very fond of either of them, bt if he had to decide who he rather hang out with, most likely it would be Vincere. “That really hurts Sir!” Kami replied. “Yea I know, what a dick! Can you believe this guy?! All the things we've done and he is just so ungrateful.” Vincere followed. “Oh my fuck, shut u-” Divaas would have loved to finish his sentence, but the presence of something threatening was nearing his vicinity. It’s approach quick and suddenly halting about ten meters from where Divaas stood.

His joint sat loosely on his lip as his brow narrowed. The hollow before him carried some grace, it being an Arrancar. It lifted its finger slowly as it began to smile. “Divaas?” It questioned turning his head on its side. “What?” Divass replied, showing no interest into why the hollow knew his name. “You are Divaas and you seem to carry a mighty big stick. Your name is digging into claws into here. Allot of us Arrancar wanna see you dead and I think i'm the one for the job. “ Divaas was earning a reputation, he did come here often. The sheer presence of this Arrancar was powerful, but it would definitely serve as his training for today.

He took one last and final pull of his joint, once more he exhaled slowly. “Kami?” He gently called his Zanpakuto. “ Yes my king?” Kami replied with a swiftness. “ Permission to draw and dispose of this pest in my presence?” His joint would fall from his mouth as the last word escaped his lips. Kami would sigh, Divaas was wrong for coming her solely to kill hallows, but he was exterminating evil. This left Kami in a bind, but now was not the time to leave his king defenceless. “ ..Permission..” Divaas let his right hand drift down to grasp the hilt of his Zanpakuto that rested on his left hip. “Granted.” Seemingly no time had passed since the join had fell from his lip like the leaves in autumn. Ripping his blade from the sheathe a white light illuminated the surroundings as crescent wave of spiritual energy split his joint in half before grinded along the Hueco Mundo surface. The wave parting the sands like the red seas and soaring upwards once hitting the target. A large explosion would follow, causing ripples in the sand much like the tides in the ocean. Ferocious wind formed short lived tornadoes, lifting the sand to be smoke, clouding his view.

He could hear the laughter of the Arrancar piercing through the thick. “That wasn't unexpected...I like you! I thought you would atleast make this more formal...your more hollow than I! “ As the smoke cleared he could see a small amount of damage had been done, but nothing major. He lowered his stance and narrowed his visioned to the target that stood in front of him. His blade's edge facing the ground and its point facing his own rear. This stance being known as the Rear Stance, very similar with the Draw Stance. “You talk too much..let’s get this over with.”

END OF THE VIZARD APPLICATION



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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Divaas Alamgir    Divaas Alamgir  EmptyWed Oct 25, 2017 10:47 am

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I'm very iffy on approving this, as illusions are very heavily watched so they aren't being abused. I would like to have more limits being placed on this, along with it scaling with Mental Deduction -- the Will Skill that is usually taken into factor with illusions.

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Heaven's Seal

Like with Heaven's Dream, I'm very concerned with this ability. For now, I'd like it moved to Bankai and have a post limit and cooldown for this, along with this mainly being used for NPCs.

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Heaven's Gate

This is going to need a lot more limits on it, since it won't be able to just break down any kind of spiritual energy, with the level that this character will be at.

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Heaven's Jail

Needs a post limit and cooldown.

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Heaven's Ring

I'm going to need more clarification on this, as I don't really understand what this is. If they're portals, then why do they act like mirrors? How many attacks, or how much of one attack, can it reflect? How long do these mirrors remain active for?

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Heaven Light

This is going to need heavy expansion if this is to be passable. I need to know how long it takes to heal the target(s), physically and mentally.

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In the Presence of the King

This needs a lot of drawbacks, even if this is a Ress. Having the ability of 360 vision, and being able to continuously sense someone in a large vicinity needs some sort of drawback to compliment the vastness of this ability.

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100 Heavenly Archers

How many Ceros is he firing, and how quickly? This also needs a post limit and a cooldown.

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Greedy King

This needs more drawbacks, and does this only work on physical attacks? Does this work on spiritual attacks as well?

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RP Sample

You need a roleplay sample for your first app if you want this to be approved. It doesn't have to be much but has to be ten sentences at minimal.[/adm]
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Divaas Alamgir    Divaas Alamgir  EmptyWed Oct 25, 2017 3:55 pm

I believe I made all the changes. Check out the techs and see how I rewrote them. Also added a rp sample
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Power Of The Conqueror

I didn't bring this up in the last check, but this needs a bit of work as well. While I don't mind the static amounts that you've put down, I don't feel comfortable with the number being 25%. I would recommend this be reworded in a way that doesn't boost stats directly since I don't feel comfortable with percentages used in this context, and used with this kind of power.

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Heaven’s Seal

I still need a limit to how long this lasts, and there is still no note on this mainly working on NPCs. Along with that, this needs more expansion on the entire aspect of sealing other's attacks.

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Heaven's Gale

Needs a post limit and cooldown, and more info on exactly how much stronger this gets with each charge.

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Greedy King

This still needs more drawbacks, as I don't see anything that's changed.

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Heaven's Jail

Lower the post limit to five posts, and the cooldown to six.

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Heaven's Ring

Still, needs a post limit and cooldown.

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Holy Empowerment

"Although he no longer needs to spend charges to perform his ranged attack."

Remove this.

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Holy Physiology

"(Able to be charged with Holy Empowerment)"

Remove this as well.

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100 Heavenly Archers

Ok, for this, I'm gonna need specifics. Is this moving at his peak speed? If so, I'm going to need that to be toned down heavily, as speeds can get really crazy on here, especially around Master and Grand Master range.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Divaas Alamgir    Divaas Alamgir  EmptySun Oct 29, 2017 11:28 am



Power Of The Conqueror
I made its reduce cost by 2

Heaven’s Seal
So this was gonna be my only ability, That why I had it go hand and hand with Heaven's Jail. As you can see, people who are sealed by this become prisoners. Once I uses Heaven's Jail these prisoners act like my slaves to fight my enemy. So I cant really put a post limit on how long a opponent is sealed for because than that would nullify Heaven's jail. I did put a limit on how long attacks are sealed for. Making it 3 post. Now if this is just an overall problem than I can drop it, because if it cant work the way I envision it than its cool.

Heaven's Gale
Slightly changed up this attack. This is basically just Getsuga Tenshou.


Greedy King
Dropped this because this is really just a suicide attack and eh, I never liked it , so I'm not gonna try to get it approved.


Heaven's Jail
Done

Heaven's Ring
5 post duration/ 6 cool down


Holy Empowerment
Done


Holy Physiology
Done

100 Heavenly Archers
Peek at Advance Speed
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Heaven’s Seal: So this was gonna be my only ability, That why I had it go hand and hand with Heaven's Jail. As you can see, people who are sealed by this become prisoners. Once I use Heaven's Jail these prisoners act like my slaves to fight my enemy. So I can't really put a post limit on how long an opponent is sealed for because then that would nullify Heaven's jail. I did put a limit on how long attacks are sealed for. Making it 3 posts. Now if this is just an overall problem than I can drop it, because if it cant work the way I envision it then its cool.

The reason I say that there needs to be a post limit is that this basically allows the user (before the NPC usage addition) to seal other characters, something I will not approve unless either given PC permission prior to usage, and/or with characters having a post limit to how long they can be sealed, and a cooldown before they can attempt to seal said character again.

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Lower it to the minimum speed of Adept.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Divaas Alamgir    Divaas Alamgir  EmptyWed Nov 15, 2017 5:39 pm

Fixed

Heavens Seal :::: When used on PC'S the seal duration is equal to the amount of charges used to activate the technique. (Ex. 6 charges = 6 post seal) Once released, the opponent can not be sealed again until the tie of there sentence has passed. (EX. Sealed for 6 post, after release, they cant be sealed for another 6 post.)

Heavens Archer:::: changed the speed
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[adm]Make it so that Heaven's Seal must have PC permission to use on other players.[/adm]
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«- PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED -»


« Application Checklist »
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •


  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


  • Comments/Notes: Everything is up to par.
  • Tier: 4-1
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