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Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:12 am

THE ARTIFICIAL RAKSHASA



Nakha Vespara



» Name: Nakha Vespara. Her name is derived her name from the name of Ravana's sister from Hindu myth, being a cloning attempt of the Demon King. The last name was adopted due to Ravan technically being the only genetic relative she possesses in the world.

» Gender: Female.

» Alias': "Lanka Rebirth". The name of the project that spearheaded her creation. Otherwise she has none.

» Age: A few days, if that.

» Species Rakshasa.

» Affiliation & Residence: Nakha is affiliated with K-World as their little science experiement, due to her rather new look of the world and the fact she is not trusted she holds no rank or position in the K-World other than being an experiment of the Scientists. She also resides in China, a rather out of the way facility where she spends most of her time going through various procedures or stuck in her bare room.

Nakha also has a strong tie to the 664th Layer of Hell, whether she knows it or not she is bound to this layer of Hell which is the source of her power. Although uninhabited and with people being - for the most part - unaware of who actually controls it, the environment is a swirling mass of darkness. A constant storm which makes it hard to navigate and hard to be inside without being driven crazy from the constant turmoil.

Written Appearance

» Body: Nakha's body has clearly been altered, the body being grown rapidly over the course of a few weeks before finally coming to the desired age of her late teens and stopping. Nakha's body is slender, she doesn't have much in the way of muscle or fat on her. Nevertheless she has an athletic frame to her body and has a good cardio and stamina in that less than impressive body in her. She is quite average in height, standing around the height of 5 feet 9 inches, not having much in terms of weight at a light 67 kilograms. Her skin is a pale shade, attributed to the fact she is mainly confined in a facility and has never seen the light of day in her life. Her skin is unblemished with the exception for certain markers that suggest a variety of surgeries done to her and medical scars.

» Face, Hair, Eyes: Nakha has fine features, very feminine in essence with a small nose and full lips with her cheeks not possessing any creasing suggesting she doesn't smile much. Nakha's hair frames her face, being dark purple in shade it is kept short and doesn't pass her shoulders with part of it swept over to hide one of her eyes. Her eyes are a rich shade of lavender, although tend to be filled with negativity and rarely show happiness or any form of joy although only one is usually shown.

» Attire: With regards to her attire, Nakha is prone to wear tomboyish style clothes, not really a fan of dresses if she can get away with it. She likes to wear clothes that are practical instead of those that are decorative since there is absolutely no purpose to them other than to look nice.


PERSONALITY


x [Strangers]
When one first encounters Nakha they are greeted by a mystery, a puzzle who is very hard to unravel or understand. She does things her own way and is constantly moving in and out of what people would define as understandable. For some they might simply give up on their quest to understand the Rakshasa but for some she is a challenge. Nakha is unintentionally enigmatic and mysterious, a trait that comes with being possibly one of the hardest things to understand.

Nakha is incredibly pessimistic, in her eyes everything is bad. She finds something negative in everything, it is surprising and incredibly painful to deal with when it comes to associating with her. She is a constant negative force on people's morale, if it come down to her having to fight a hard fight she will voice the thoughts of the fact they are all going to die. She has no filter with such things. With her negative nature comes the problem of her cynical ideas of people, she believes that everyone has a driving force and are only interesting in self-benefit and preservation of what matters to them. In her eyes K-World are monsters for bringing her into existence for their own gain.

She suffers from depression, her short life being nothing but a disgusting creation of K-World attempting to play God. She hates her life. Spending the only days she has been in existence in a confined space with no interaction with the outside world, she wants to die and goes out of her way to try although can never fully reach the end of her death before she is brought back by the medical staff of K-World. Naturally this makes her hostile, she makes it known she doesn't like people and is prone to outrage and tempers towards total strangers who try and interact with her. Her suicidal self brings out a sense of recklessness where she doesn't think about her safety or health, or anyone else's.


x [Subordinate, Superior, Comrades.]

x As Subordinate
When it is made clear she is a subordinate and she is submissive towards a higher power she is quiet and passive, her rage and temper numbing until she reaches a gloomy state where she is constantly worried about what will happen to her if she fails. It doesn't help that this depression makes her give up easily and not strive for success.

x As Comrade
For those that have her as a comrade and partner she is reclusive, she doesn't like to spend time and get to know the people she works with. You'll never find her the one to be out-going and go out with her workmates for an evening drink down by the pub. She is unreliable with her work and doesn't care for the people she works with that adds to her social ineptitude.

x As Superior
It is suggested that she is not put in the position of a superior, authority is her weakest suit and she cannot muster the courage to try and lead someone or a group. She will quickly break down and crack under the pressure, avoiding the reponsability at all costs and willingly would let her entire group die just to never be put in the position again. She hates this role and will do anything to avoid it.

x [Friends, Lovers]
To be considered her friend is nigh-impossible, they simply do not exist when it comes to her many walls, her constant lying and willingness to throw away someone's trust without a care for the person she hurts. The pushy people that try and get close to her piss her off, she hates when people try to get close to her and when she feels herself begin to get attached to someone she tries to push them away. She is afraid to commit, in both friends and relationships, to anything. Her orientation of being Asexual doesn't help with those that want to get closer to her in a romantic sense. A lot of the time Nakha will not sleep, being a person who suffers from insomnia and restlessness makes her irritable and pained. She will usually need to be drugged to sleep which when given the option she would take up drugs and self-medicate in the hopes of sleeping.

x [Enemies]
The area of being an enemy is not something you want to be in. She is merciless and ruthless. She has a complete disregard for people's lives of any side. Her tendencies of self-hatred are reflected on people, as she hates them and wants to do anything she can to kill them. She will make it last as long as possible, sadistically taking pleasure in hurting them and enjoying it too.


NATURAL AND RACIAL TRAITS


» Enhanced Physical Condition: Nakha's body is created using Ravan Vespara's own as a template. In an attempt to unlock the secrets of the original Rakshasa, learning about the race and the Demon God who created him in the process. Therefore this body is much more capable than what meets the eye. She is faster, stronger and more durable than a normal demon, with her body being specifically designed as the apex predator.

Effectively Nakha's body is able to take extensive amounts of damage and recover very quickly, she is unfazed by quite a lot of damage. Her body is able to adjust itself very quickly, using body manipulation as a subconscious application of her psyche. What this means is that without consciously manipulating her body Nakha's always warping her body like one would work out a muscle. It is second nature to her, being able to increase her strength for a moment is like someone flexing their bicep.

Nakha's application of body manipulation is so advanced compared to most demons that she can generate new limbs from her body if she were to require them and incorporate a variety of features from different species such as the ability to spit web or climb walls, she could sprout wings from her body or a tail if she so desired, really the possibilities come down to her imagination and her energy.

She is able to survive in conditions that shouldn't be survivable, while this isn't absolute it is more of a resistance. For example in an area of immense heat she could handle it better than most other people could and the same with cold environments. This also goes for harmful effects such as radiation, poisons and having a lack of oxygen. Nakha is designed to adapt and handle, to survive against the harsh world and come out on top.

The final aspect is her high-speed regeneration, she has the ability to regenerate lost limbs, even organs and damage to the brain if she energy was available to her. As a result however she has no form of protection around her body - she cannot generate an Akuma Kyodo above Beginner basically - despite the fact she is semi-immortal with the only way to fully kill her is to completely destroy her brain.

» Immense Energy: Her body is rich in za koa energy, the amount of energy that she has inside her is quite significant compared to other demons due to her connection to Ravan and his connection to Deveta. As a Rakshasa she can also draw quite a lot of energy from her own Layer in Hell even though she has never been there or set foot in it. She still has a spiritual link to it which she can passively draw upon, she can also summon portions of her own layer into the plane of reality allowing for her to gain more potential in the battlefield.

With her immense energy it opens up many areas for high-level magic, the ability to access advance levels of Demon skills and abilities if she were to have the proper exposure that is. Being newly made she has little understanding of the full scope that the demon energy can give people and so she is somewhat limited in comparison to normal demons as well. Her za koa however is very useful, being able to have her necrotic aura applied to it and used as a medium for her unique powers.

» High Aptitude: From the moment she awoke she had a natural talent, the ability to pick up skills rather quickly. Both due to natural selection and artificial engineering. Nakha was designed to be able to adapt, this requires a level of aptitude to be able to adapt and learn quickly. It's survival of the fittest, simple principle. She can pick up an item and quickly analyse how to use it, it is a little difficult when it comes to technology but you give her a sword or weapon and she'll quickly figure out sword styles and skills or develop a sword style suited for her.

The same can be said with skills such as her Rakshasa heritage, no one told her or even artificially imported knowledge into her brain. She woke up knowing skills and how to fight, she woke up with high-level abilities of the demons which is hard to comprehend although has something to do with her being a clone of Ravan, her body linked to his in someway that she cannot understand.

DE Control: As she is connected to Hell and Ravan she is able to use Death energy, the issue is that she cannot consciously activate it and nor does she understand it enough to use it. This skill will be explored and expanded upon as she develops.


HISTORY


Lanka Rebirth. It all began with an idea suggested by a K-World scientist, one that is now dead of course. It was suggested that if K-World could obtain and analyse Ravan Vespara. A construct of Deveta and the original Rakshasa. Then they could develop weapons specifically designed to destroy the Rakshasa and the Demon God should the Shadow Fall truce ever fall through. Despite this, K-World wasn't going to make their plans known and a dark operation was taken up by a team that was able to obtain some of Ravan's genetic material.

In their haste to clone the Demon King the scientist team made a small mistake, the chromosomes were accidentally altered among other mistakes but these mistakes were made clear when the body grew and developed into teenage girl. Still performing the research they intended too the scientists decided that she was a mistake and that Nakha would never be of use to them. When they attempted to disassemble her the Rakshasa awoke - the method of which is unknown - and brutally massacred the entire team. Only to be stopped before she could do much more.

The woman known as Nakha was locked up, tests being done on her and attempting to understand more about her body and mind, she showed many traits that are similar to the original Ravan although possessed much more volatile and spite towards the scientists. She was ultimately locked up in a cell, when she wasn't required for testing the cell being compromised of Holy energy which dulled the potency of her Rakshasa Powers.


TAINTED SKIN


» Dāgī Tvacā Name: Sankraman [संक्रमण | Infection]

» Dāgī Tvacā Appearance: Sankraman manifests in the form of her eyes as it does for Ravan. The difference is that she still possesses her pupils despite the whites of her eyes turning pitch black and her rich lavender shade becoming a glowing red. A menacing glare that is confronting since the eyes of Nakha cannot show any positive emotion, being incapable actually. When her powers are not in use then her eyes remain as the usual lavender shade that she possesses.

» Dāgī Tvacā Powers: Nakha as a being who is derived from another possesses traits that are reminiscent of her original base. Due to a mistake though in her creation her body became its own form, not entirely Ravan Vespara and not entirely a new form. A hybrid would be the best way to describe her powers actually since she is both a hybrid of originality and a clone. Therefore she has diluted themes from her base.

Distortion: Nakha possesses powers akin to Ravan but not exact, she possesses a single power from his blood which has been coined "Distortion" as that is exactly what it is realistically. It works with Nakha being able to apply her energy onto something and alter it in some way that is not its original form. Applying this to her body she can see an enhanced alteration of her body manipulation; although in reference to Ravan's own complete disaster manifestation Nakha lacks the same capability. Unable to warp her body at will into different disasters she is limited to her back, a strange twist and something still unknown to her as to why she can only warp her back. Nakha possesses the ability to distort her back into a variety of manifestations, being able to conjur up wings or a gaping mouth to take someone by surprise. She can create extra appendages and really has complete control of her body from her shoulders to her waist.

Nakha's true use of this externally is also limited, being limited to causing negative effects to occur on a chemical level. This limits her to poisoning the area with her energy to try and cause a distortion. Take for example a building, using her energy to cause a "sickness" or "poison effect" on the structure will weaken it and cause it to collapse. The external process is much harder than her internal and bodily functions which truly makes it hard for her to use it on the external form since it causes a great deal of pain whenever she uses it since every time she tries to distort something her own mind is distorted and causes a great deal of psychological trauma which if she uses the ability on a massive scale can cripple her or leave her passed out. Ultimately meaning this ability is not one she likes to use much since it warps her as well as if knowing that she is not the person who should he using it.

Infection: The true origin of Nakha Vespara lies in her power with disease. The ability to enforce a sickness or infection on something. Being a Rakshasa that derives from Death she is able to cause harm through sickening something with her energies for instance say someone was to fire a cero at her, the strength being around that of advanced, Nakha could infect that cero with a sickness that weakened it so that it felt more like an adept strength. Weakening something is much easier for her corruption than actually trying to kill it although it is not impossible for her to kill something as she can do with the environment through infecting the plants and organic material.

This sickness that she inflicts can be an actual disease or a metaphysical one. To expand on what those mean well an actual disease would be like a common cold while a metaphysical disease means one that either is created without reality applied or it is applied to something in an unconventional means. Infecting people can cause a wide variety of possibilities such as monstrous growths forming or causing nausea. She can achieve many different effects through her power although one thing she cannot do is heal, infecting herself and then tricking a person into being exposed to her sickness throughout a fight is not recommended since she can actually become susceptible to her own power as a result, not only that but even her infection powers cause her a great deal of exertion due to inexperience so while all these cases are possible her power is diluted at the moment to lack the potency of affecting people with hard to cure issues or the like.


PIECE OF THE DEVIL


[NOTE: Sealed until she meets her Hell Beast IC.]
» Tukaṛā Saitāna Name: (Does your Tukaṛā Saitāna have a name?)

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Appearance: (what does their appearance look like? For Rakshasa not storing power in their Hell Beast, their appearance usually remains far more humanoid shaped. For those with power in their Hell Beasts, once merged, the appearance is usually much more demonic and frightening)

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Powers: (Depending on your birth method, this may also influence their powers in this final form. What sort of powers do they gain by accessing this ascended state?)


SKILL SHEETS


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Rakshasa Skills
  • Dāgī Tvacā Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Naraka Jānavara Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Astitva Ki Barhata: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Reality Warping: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Demon Skills [Rakshasa]
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


DE Control [Rakshasa]
  • Semi-Immortal Capacity: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Breakdown Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Necromancy Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • DE Barrier: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner




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Tue Aug 08, 2017 12:09 am

NIGHTBLOOD SYMBIOTE



Toxin


» Name: Toxin. A name adopted due to its nature of being a blood-based Hell Beast that inhabits the bloodstream and is symbiotic with their host.

» Gender: This is entirely impossible to actually answer, being a mass that is fluid and not bound by gender. Toxin actually inhabits Nakha's bloodstream and has its genetic make-up woven into Nakha's own. For the sake of this application he will be labelled as male.

» Alias': Nightblood. A name that Toxin is referred to due to making the host's blood black as night.

» Age: Unknown.

» Species Hell Beast.

» Affiliation & Residence:

Written Appearance

» Body:

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PERSONALITY



NATURAL AND RACIAL TRAITS



HISTORY



PIECE OF THE DEVIL



SKILL SHEETS


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Wed Aug 09, 2017 5:42 am
Going to put this up as complete now. Ignore the Hell Beast portion as that will be done later since realistically he doesn't exist right now and there is yet to be a connection to Nakha. This Hell Beast will become active once she enters her layer of Hell for the first time.


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Sat Sep 23, 2017 7:40 pm

«- PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED -»


« Application Checklist »
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •


  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


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