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Mu Long The Arrancar
ムーロン


I. Basic Information


"From the birth of flames I was reborn, and with the same flames I will watch the world burn."
-ムーロン


» Name: Mu Dragon
» Age: 5, 169
» Gender:Male
» Allias:黒龍 Kokuryū{ Black Dragon}

» Association:Unaffiliated

» Appearance Written:
Mu is a muscular Arrancar with a well built body that gives off athlete tone built. He have blue irises with white sclerae and black bushy sharp eye brows. Oddly enough he have white long hair which flows to the top of his back. He is a very tall Arrancar standing 10 feet, and 9 inches tall, and weighing 550 Ibs. To addition to his odd appearance is matching gray skin tone. Which varies from either gray to dark grey color. Mu usually wearing his black hakama, and a white sash tie around his waist his hakama have seen better days as it have several cut along the end of hakama. Along his body he have six red tattoo stripes which went from his chest, above his shoulder to the back; there were 3 tattoos on his left pecs and 3 on his right that appearance when he is in battle or in rage.

Like most other Arrancar, Mu possesses remnants of his former life as a Hollow in his appearance. His Hollow hole is located at the center of his chest . The remainder of his Hollow mask lies on the bottom of the head other wise known as the chin, forming a weird goatee mustache mistaken as dragon fangs. His signature traits are the two dark, symbiotic dragons{hollows} that are attached to his back: these dragons have ebony dark scales and spikes jutting out of their backs and they have light blue eyes, and jagged sharp teeth. Each of these dragon are about 3 meter long each.



» Appearance Image:Mu Long [Approved 3-4; Arrancar] 1Dheku9
II. Personality


» Personality:
Mu: Can be a ruthless, bloodthirsty and violent Arrancar to fit his dragon like impulsive. Mu at some time portrayed as entirely self-serving, self-absorbed, and selfish; that does whatever he likes as long as it pleases him in some way. He can be very cold, callous, and dispassionate figure, and indifferent, willing to harm both his comrades and enemies should they get in his way. He usually stay to himself, and his loyal reside in his own personal beliefs whatever that may be.

Mu is a very calculative individual in nearly every situation. Always looking for ways to expand his mind, and influence Mu is a mastermind of strategy. Mu is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of .

On the plus side Mu is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.


Mu acts in an aristocratic manner. He always seems serene and apathetic towards other people, even while actually deeply conflicted. He is some what calm, even in battle. He generally acts indifferent, bordering on arrogance, to most situations he is faced with, and rarely views his opponent as being worth his time.

Sometime Mu's pride and calm demeanor made him believe that never cared about others and constantly looking down to people who doesn't share the same status as him. But that isn't true he just don't go around making his allies as they would have prove themselves Mu otherwise he will consider them expendable.

For example he believes that if you aren't on his level then you are beneath him, and should be treat as his personal foot stool. His status as a Arrancar cause him to look down on majority of the people. He consider himself the cream of the crop, and anyone who doesn't agree is consider expendable.

"Hollows are evil? The Shingami are righteous? These terms have always changed throughout the course of history! Kids who have never seen peace and kids who have never seen war have different values! Those who stand at the top determine what's wrong and what's right! This very place is neutral ground! Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will! Whoever wins this war becomes justice!"

Mu Long [Approved 3-4; Arrancar] GdGdTmv

Mu believe in law, and order though his personality conflict with the type of justice he demonstrate . Due to being a Arrancar he believe nothing he does can be consider against the law so in other words he is above the law. The type of justice he demonstrate is called "Absolute Justice", when it comes to prosecuting those who violate the his's laws. He carried out the order like a emotionless man.



As a Arrancar Mu tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty or superiors. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition.

Mu is patient individual due to his dragon characteristics . He seeks to knowledge majority of anything he find vaulable or sparks his interest. He believe everyone should be a man of there word otherwise they are just liars, and he doesn't like them.

Mu has always been, and will probably always will be open to new ideas. He takes into consideration everything that someone says, and will often try - or try to try new things. Furthermore he always attempts to view things from different points of view.


Mu is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. As he usually not the talkative one, Mu spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

Mu is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.




III. History


» History:
As Human Life:
 


A Hollow Story:
 


IV. Equipment


» Equipment:-Skip-

V. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


» Racial Abilities:
RA:
 

VI. Sealed Powers


» Zanpakutô Name:Doragon

» Zanpakutô Appearance:
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Doragon is Halberd which is a large double sided spear{gray in color} with the height of 13 feet long. One end resembles a harpoon, while the opposite end is shaped like an Axe Blade. This spear is entirely made up special material. To addition the spear is said to have retractable function which allow the spear to extend, and be pull back together for up to 10 meters as 10 meters worth of chain attach to the head of the Halberd.

» Unique Power:
Mu Long Powers:
 

VII. Resurrección


» Resurrección Name:Doragon

» Resereccion Release Phrase: Roar Doragon, and burn them to the floor![/i

» Release Actions:[i] There is no specific action, but once the release phrase had been spoken his body split into flames, and new from appeared.


» Resurrección Appearance:
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In Mu Resurrección state he take upon the appearance of black dragon. This dragon is about 10 meter long, and 6 meter wide. His tail is 8 meters long, and have a spear like tail that is about 3 meters long. He weigh several tons, and have massives wings which grant him flight.

» Resurrección Abilities:

  • Aoi honō:Aoi honō is special blue flames produces from the release of user Resurrección or Resurrección attacks . This technique in most situations, is nearly impossible to avoid. However, if the target can move fast enough to avoid being hit by, Aoi honō then the user will miss them when it's cast. Once created, it can continue burning for 3 post. The flames cannot be extinguished with water or any other normal methods. Only the user can extinguished the blue flames but it takes considerable amount of energy to do so. The temperature of the flames is on the level of lava which is a easy 2,200 F. He can generate massive amounts from his body kinda like logia users but he is limited the more Aoi honō he release the more energy he expends. This move at twice the speed of the user.

  • Aoi honō Manipulation:Aoi honō is a technique which applies shape transformation to the blue flames of Aoi honō, allowing the user to manipulate them at will. The range of this is no more then 50 meters.



  • Enhanced Hierro: His Hierro has vastly increased in strength, to the point where it more powerful to the point that it increase the durability of his skin like armor.


  • Enhanced Spiritual Power: Though already possessing immense spiritual power, in his Resurrección, his blue flames spiritual energy permeates the area. It is intense enough to create a profound effect on others and coalesce into fire which falls in the surrounding area when he release.

  • Enhance Flight: Due to Mu Resurrección appearance he is grant the ability to fly. But not just any flight enhance flight Mu is able to fly at greater speed which is double his normal speed. This boost like for 3 post but have a cool down of 3 posts. While the cool down is in effect he can fly his normal speed.

  • Aoi honō Blast Sphere:Aoi honō leaves the Arrancar's body and fills the nearby sky in few hundred feet radius and constant rain of Balas start to fall down, causing small explosions everywhere for the next post. This can be used once per 5 posts.


    Aoi honō Beam:Mu shot out a blue flames from his mouth in cone like fashion similar to a flame thrower or shot gun blast. For up to 50 meters in lenght, and width , and it stronger then normal cero. Mu can only shoot this beam every 2-3 post depending on energy expenditure.

    Aoi honō Wave:Mu can generate a 30 meter radius sphere from his body of Aoi honō flames which force back his target from him giving him space acting as a shield, and offensives ability at the same time.



I. Skill Sheet


[SKILL SHEETS ARE NOT TO BE FILLED OUT UNTIL AFTER A TIER IS GIVEN! WILL SKILLS WILL BE GIVEN BY THE STAFF MEMBER THAT GRADES YOUR APP! FOR MORE INFORMATION, LOOK AT THIS THREAD]

Additional Note: The skill sheets, as of Saturday, February 10, 2018, have had small additions. There are new skills, and Master has been renamed to "Elite". Furthermore, Master is now the bridge in-between Elite and Grand Master. For more information, and the rest of the skill sheets, READ THIS THREAD

Spoiler:
 

General Skills
  • Durability:Adept
  • General Speed:Beginner
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Perquisa: Beginner
  • Sonido: Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Adept
  • Hierro:Adept



Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


IX. Role Play Sample


» Roleplay Sample: [Please show us how you role play by either posting a previous post from another site or creating a new one. We do this so we know your RP skill. If you already have an accepted, you need not do another RP sample]

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Mu Long [Approved 3-4; Arrancar]   Mu Long [Approved 3-4; Arrancar] EmptyWed May 30, 2018 11:32 pm

Twin Dragon Hollows: You don't have to change anything here, I just want to let you know that while regenerating up to four times in a single thread is fine, make note that the speed of their regeneration is dependent on Mu Long's "Regeneration Skill" in the Arrancar Skill Sheet. That said, the full racial skill sheet should actually include regeneration on it.

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    These Hollow like dragon can regenerate upon being cut in half up to 4 times in one topic.They can also shot cero, and bala from there mouth just as the user can.

Small Arms Generation: Considering Aoi Hono is only mentioned in the Ress state, I can only assume that its accessible solely in the Ress state. That said, though it's fine to mention that Mu Long can form weapons and shields from it, I just want to clarify that as it is now this will only apply in Ress state.

Aoi Hono: For this ability, can you clarify the general speed of it? It's fine if you just reference a Bala or Cero for frame of reference, e.g "twice the speed of an average cero" or something along those lines.

    He can generate small weapons or shields made of Aoi honō that holds the same abilities of Aoi honō.

Make note that an attribute like only being able to be dispelled by the user means that it also takes considerable amounts of energy, more than another fire user displaying the same output of quantity and temperature who doesn't have the "can't be put out by anyone but the user" stipulation. Also, so that you're aware, other characters would be capable of defending from it using their own energy so that it'll just burn their energy constructs or output as opposed to their physical bodies (assuming they couldn't dodge it or something). Likewise with materials that are explicitly resistant to energy-based abilities, or have some sort of energy imbuement themselves.

    Only the user can extinguished the blue flames.

Also add in that the more Aoi Hono he generates, the more energy he expends as a result. Since just saying "generate massive amounts" doesn't offer much to understand as far as limitations or use in threads for your RP partners to understand (from an OOC perspective, at least).

    He can generate massive amounts from his body .

Enhanced Flight: Wewlad, that's a bit much. It's better to just equate his speed boosts to saying "# times faster than his normal flight speed" since ultimately his speed will depend on the General Skills in his skill sheets. By the way, Mach 4 is Master in skill sheets, and Masters can't be obtained straight off the bat, not even for 0-tiers. Also, add a 2 post cooldown after those three turns are elapsed. He can continue to fly at his normal speed during those two posts until he boosts up again.

    But not just any flight enhance flight Mu is able to fly at great speed mach 4 { for period of 3 turns}

Aoi Hono Beam: Add that he can only use this beam every two to three posts depending on energy expenditure. He can still use the usual cero in between that cooldown period.

    Mu shot out a blue flames from his mouth in cone like fashion similar to a flame thrower or shot gun blast. For up to 50 meters in lenght, and width , and it stronger then normal cero. ]


« Application Checklist »
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination:
  • Mental Deduction:
  • Pain Endurance:
  • Focus:


Code:
[b][u]Will Skills[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b]
[*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b]
[*][b]Pain Endurance:[/b]
[*][b]Focus:[/b]
[/list]


  • Comments/Notes: Good usage of spoilers, especially for the racial specs that were mostly copypastas with the small inserts of personalisation like Mu's Cero colour, or his personal variation of Hierro. All in all, not a bad first app, tbh. I liked his history, it was a refreshingly normal backstory and teen life, and respectable transition into adult life. It was more like the history of a person than a character.
  • Tier: TBD


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All the changes above have been made, and I put everything you ask. I did also state that in unique power that limited version of Aoi honō for base.

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« Application Checklist »
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


Code:
[b][u]Will Skills[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Adept
[*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Advanced
[*][b]Pain Endurance:[/b] Beginner
[*][b]Focus:[/b] Beginner
[/list]


  • Comments/Notes: Looks good to me, thanks for the cooperation.
  • Tier: 3-4


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[mod]Due to member inactivity, this character is being moved to the archives. If the member becomes active again in the future, they may be reinstated.[/mod]

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