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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Angel Phase Upgrade   Angel Phase Upgrade EmptySat Jul 07, 2018 10:54 am

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Returning an Angel's Wings

The creation of Angel was sort of an uphill battle that was never supposed to work as well as it did, but that those present IC wish it had done better. Either way, shortly after being made, her two creators sort of vanished. Tsubasa took a leave shortly after Mirja's demise, and Crystal, the former Captain who though unknown to Angel is actually her, is obviously unreachable. The process of the soul transplantation was indeed a delicate matter as expected, and it had its laundry list of consequences. When she came to however, the Doll lacked the necessary parts to access her release state. However, during the thread linked above, Tatsuya, Tsubasa's mentor, was instructed with delivering the Doll Mainframe as a parting gift to Angel. The Mainframe was icly fitted into a port on her body, in a compartment by her back. The process isn't that much different from plugging in a flash drive, or inserting a memory card into a slot. It went in, and Angel automatically was able to run the file, read its contents, and be able to use the programs available in it at a moment's notice. However, to keep up with site regulations, Phase 3 of the Shinigami Doll transformation (which is a shikokai level release) is unavailable in a powerfully encrypted file that cannot be opened until she has sufficient power (at least 0-3). Besides that, on that same thread above, Angel is currently engaging in a spar against Tatsuya, both to put merit to his fame with the blade, but mostly in part to check the benefits and capabilities of her Phase 1 transformation.

The Forsaken Past

In the thread linked above, Magnolia and Angel meet up to discuss matters of mutual interest. The existence of Black World, and Magnolia's inability to return just yet are pressing concerns. Angel's curiosity about the world and its resources, as well as any beneficial influence it could have on her world are imperative too. But of great importance and pertinence to this update is the spar that just began. In an effort to make the Shinigami's combat file accurate, and use the opportunity to brush up on her own skills, the spar began. As her training partner is significantly more powerful than she is, without a doubt, Angel will be accessing the Phase 2 transformation she already possesses, and testing its capabilities and limits against Magnolia, since she'd be able to handle it well.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Angel Phase Upgrade   Angel Phase Upgrade EmptySat Jul 07, 2018 10:58 am

[mod]the abilities are fine, however the forms in question are pending until the completion of the aforementioned threads. [/mod]

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Angel Phase Upgrade   Angel Phase Upgrade EmptySat Jul 07, 2018 11:44 am

[adm]Phase 2 Release Actions: Nothing's wrong here, I just wanted to note that considering the activation sequence involves a large amount of dense spiritual energy, it's fine for it to also have actual physical repercussions to the surroundings, in and of itself acting as some sort of blast or energy deterrent. That said, if you do use it like this, considering the only parametre defined is that it rises up to the clouds, that's potentially a very large blast, and I'd ask that you consider Angel's tier in relation to this release action, for whenever Angel does utilise Phase 2 at whatever tier she is at that time.

Cherub's Retribution: This ability is fine, but specify that it won't so liberally apply a + upwards of 0-3- tier. In fact, I'd be fine if this ability gave her ++ throughout 1-tier, a single + from 0-5 to 0-4+, but beyond that it wouldn't give an outright minor sub-tier. Naturally it'd be fine to state that she gains a boost in personal energy, just not to the explicit extent of going up to something beyond 0-3.

Seraph's Judgement: Likewise with Cherub's Retribution, I'm fine with the boost up to a certain point. I'd say it's fine if she could even gain an entire minor tier (1-5 to 1-4) in these circumstances for 1-tier, and once she hits 0-tier, down to ++ upgrades, naturally capping at 0-3. Reason being, likewise with Cherub's Retribution, the energy difference between 0-3 and 0-3+ is much larger than other sub-tiers by a large degree, and it's also the threshold for a character's "final racial form". She'd still receive a large boost in accessible energy even if she were 0-3, just not to the extent of explicitly gaining 0-3+.

Castiel: With what's written, there's no mention of what occurs if Castiel is unsuccessful in receiving the full brunt force of an attack. So offer some details on how much abuse Castiel can endure, or just the general durability of the item beyond referencing that it's one of Angel's best defensive items. Also specify whether the ability--if it successfully blocks--blocks an attack entirely before activating the clap-back reishi blast, or if it just takes a percentage of how much it successfully endured, or if it doesn't successfully endure the entirety of the attack that it doesn't return any damage whatsoever--so on and so forth. In its current state, I have no idea what actually happens in practice when the shield is utilised other than a generalised description of its ability.

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Other than the listed items, everything in this upgrade looks good to go. That aside, I would think it fine for Angel to potentially access these forms within the threads instead of thereafter, considering these two threads contribute to her gaining the form, the one with Tatsuya being where she actually physically obtains the means to achieve these forms, and the fight with Magnolia providing the extra push necessary for it. That said, it would make sense for her to be able to access these abilities and activate these forms--though probably without much mastery or adjustment to them just yet--while fighting Tatsuya and Magnolia to achieve Phase 1 and Phase 2 respectively.[/adm]

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Angel Phase Upgrade   Angel Phase Upgrade EmptySat Jul 07, 2018 12:23 pm

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Angel Phase Upgrade   Angel Phase Upgrade EmptySat Jul 07, 2018 1:03 pm

[mod]Looks good, I'll go ahead and approve it, and it looks fine to unlock and utilise these forms in their respective threads.[/mod]

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